Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Opinion (Baylee)
Nicole, you keep on coming up with these incredible shorties! I am sure...
September 11th, 2017 12:04 - Frequencies match (Poetic Dan)
PD, I just read Hood\'s \"Besotted\", and now yours! Man, have no choice...
September 11th, 2017 12:00 - Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.)
Faye, this is one of the finest descriptions of winter I ever read!
September 11th, 2017 11:52 - Another Day Gone (FredPeyer)
Thanks Martina,
can\'t wait to read your poem!
Now it is time to catch...
September 11th, 2017 04:15 - Santa Claus (Ruby.e)
You should be proud of this one, ruby! It is a great poem!
September 11th, 2017 04:13 - Notebook (Aa Harvey)
Well written, Aa! But it is not always easy to put the right words in the...
September 11th, 2017 03:21 - GOD\'S PROMISES & PROVISION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thank you Brian, for this timely well written reminder!
September 11th, 2017 03:19 - SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY (Michael Edwards)
Michael, I absolutely love that first stanza! Great poem.
September 11th, 2017 03:17 - Fading Substance (Seek)
\'Filling life with hunks of meaning\'
You filled this poem with \'hunks...
September 11th, 2017 03:14 - ()
Santita, your poem is such a beautiful and heart felt description of a...
September 11th, 2017 03:12 - TICK TOCK (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, I love it! Who knows, maybe our time already expired, we just...
September 11th, 2017 03:08 - Star Trek Now. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks a lot Goldfinch, for a very timely, well-written poem. I think the...
September 8th, 2017 02:01 - HOW WAS YOUR DAY ~ HAVE OR HAVE~NOT ? ~ A Lament Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, I think it is important to see these numbers. It is one thing to...
September 8th, 2017 01:58 - The Feeling (Unseengirl)
That feeling, my dear unseengirl, is called LOVE! Am happy for you!
September 8th, 2017 01:35 - Diamond of a Woman (Hidden)
Whoever said women are the weaker gender had it all wrong!
September 8th, 2017 01:28 - Life’s Cycle (GeraldineTaylor)
Very fine poem depicting life as it is. Like it very much!
September 8th, 2017 01:27 - After.Words (Bella cortez)
Beautiful poem, Bella! Words can do that to us. They can hurt, but they...
September 8th, 2017 01:00 - THE BROKEN (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you, thank you, thank you, Louis, you just put some duct tape on me!
September 8th, 2017 00:59 - DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Like it or not, I have to agree with Santita! #1 is my favorite also. But...
September 8th, 2017 00:58 - clawing (Graceuna)
Welcome to MPS, graceuna!
Sounds like a nightmare, a lot of emotion...
September 7th, 2017 22:48 - What Do You Believe In? (Shiloh)
I believe in you! You are a good writer!
September 7th, 2017 22:46 - Your Secret (B-LAH-que)
Very intriguing and well written!
I do like it a lot!
September 7th, 2017 22:44 - You didn\'t understand (Tanvir H)
Well said. Love is simply accepted, while hate is not.
September 7th, 2017 20:46 - Kat and Santita all at sea (Dusk arising)
Humor of the first degree!!!!!!!!!!!!
d a, I salute you!
September 7th, 2017 20:01 - Hymns of Previous Souls (WL Schuett)
Great painting, you captured the light beautifully! And the poem is...
September 7th, 2017 19:55 - Well hello (Renzi)
Welcome back Renzi! You may not believe this, but we did miss you and your...
September 7th, 2017 19:50 - Coffee House (ShannonXx)
Your excellent poem made something so clear: Too many people, especially...
September 7th, 2017 19:45 - Early Hours (Baylee)
Very well written, Nicole. Even though these times are far, far back in...
September 7th, 2017 19:40 - WRITING (Lasergraph)
lasergraph, I truly like this poem, or as you say \'description of...
September 7th, 2017 19:37 - A collection of acrostics! (Sue.evans)
Very cleverly written, sue! I like them a lot!
September 7th, 2017 19:33 - Back Then. (Fay Slimm.)
Faye, only you could write about memories that beautifully!
Great poem!
September 7th, 2017 19:16 - Long Night-Sedoka (Myself and me)
M&m, you just moved into the top echelon of writers here. Or maybe you...
September 7th, 2017 16:49 - Find (Nicholas Browning)
Great poem, made me think. Then realized you are talking about an inside...
September 7th, 2017 16:44 - Seren (BlueDays)
You captured pet love perfectly!
Very well written, great rhymes.
September 7th, 2017 16:33 - Writer\'s Block (Ruby.e)
Just a day at the office for a writer!
Love it!
September 7th, 2017 16:31 - The Dream (FredPeyer)
Thanks m&m, could have used that spinach dip to cool down!
September 7th, 2017 16:29 - My therapy (Poetic Dan)
While I don\'t have the problems you do, as a father your poem touched me...
September 7th, 2017 04:03 - LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ! YIN & YANG DOUBLE ETHEREE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A great collaboration! Hope you got your man, Santita, and just too bad...
September 7th, 2017 04:01 - Home is where the start is. (Aa Harvey)
Hope you will find her soon!
September 7th, 2017 03:57 - View of God. (Goldfinch60)
And the girl had painted a woman!
Love your poem, Goldfinch!
September 7th, 2017 03:55 - The Crossing (Mugsdaddy)
Mugsdaddy, one heck of a story and so well presented! Could become a...
September 7th, 2017 01:01 - SHE CONFIRMS (Michael Edwards)
And the master shows us again how it\'s done! Beautiful drawing too!
And...
September 7th, 2017 00:15 - Drop Dead (Lanaevans)
\'Worthless poetry written for nobody but for you to read and provide your...
September 6th, 2017 23:32 - Adult Relationship (Ruby.e)
I do like the way you write, ruby, straight forward and honest.
And your...
September 6th, 2017 19:46 - Sleepy Dreams Fade (WL Schuett)
Beautiful writing, WL. What comes to my mind with the poem and the...
September 6th, 2017 19:38 - Emotion. (Myleealollar1945)
A very beautiful first poem here, m.
Well written, well crafted. I do...
September 6th, 2017 16:12 - Ennobling Entrance (Orchidee)
Beautifully written, Orchidee!
September 6th, 2017 15:26 - lustfully, greedily (Dusk arising)
Got me all going here, d a, but then that unexpected, yet great last line!
September 6th, 2017 15:21 - A Trilogy of Edone Poems (BlueDays)
Very well done, BlueDays!
September 6th, 2017 15:18 - I am the Alpha-wolf (Tony36)
Nicely penned, Tony!
September 6th, 2017 15:17 - Dreams Now Free (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very, very beautiful, Kurt!
September 6th, 2017 15:15 - Preparing for Irma (Malubotelho)
Hope you make it through in one piece! Good luck, be safe!
September 6th, 2017 11:37 - ODE\' TO COFFEE (Lasergraph)
LG, something else we have in common! My eyes are not really open, my mind...
September 6th, 2017 11:34 - Her Surface (Baylee)
Nicole, I love this one. What you see isn\'t necessarily what you get!
September 6th, 2017 11:31 - Riverbanks And Daffodils. (Kevin browne)
\'Mother maid cow sucked milked when Mary had another lamb\'
Kevin, it...
September 6th, 2017 11:28 - THE GREAT DECEPTION (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, this poem speaks to me, not yesterday, not tomorrow, but right now,...
September 6th, 2017 11:25 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, not only do you write beautifully, the meaning in this poem goes much...
September 6th, 2017 11:15 - Look away (Aa Harvey)
Aa, it\'s never too late to find a bride!
Well penned, I like it!
September 6th, 2017 11:12 - On repeat for it to set deep (Poetic Dan)
.....and the more I read from you,
the more I admire your creativity!
September 6th, 2017 11:08 - REDUCE ~ REUSE ~ REPAIR ~ Save the Planet ~ An 822 Production ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well said Brian, if everybody would do it, our world would be a much nicer...
September 6th, 2017 10:57 - My Tomorrows. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, your poem made my day! We take so much for granted, including...
September 6th, 2017 10:50 - Awakening (Sue.evans)
Sue, you tried to capture that early morning stillness...well, you...
September 6th, 2017 10:45 - WISHING (Lasergraph)
Love your great, well written poem very much lasergraph. At 69 I know from...
September 5th, 2017 21:39 - Joy Of Aging (John Prophet)
JG, you just very beautifully described my life! Except for the last...
September 5th, 2017 21:33 - Up and Out (A__pott)
Alex, you are living higher physics here, containing space/time.
Great...
September 5th, 2017 21:30 - Vows of Peace (WL Schuett)
WL, I am very impressed by both the painting and the poem. Love \'to the...
September 5th, 2017 21:27 - The side of darkness (Tanvir H)
You are right, some people just don\'t see it or don\'t get it. So, do you...
September 5th, 2017 21:24 - Perfect (Ruby.e)
Great, great poem, well written and what a good subject matter!
I decided...
September 5th, 2017 17:25 - Rabbit-edone (Myself and me)
Another well done Christmas tree, and it is not even Thanksgiving yet!
September 5th, 2017 17:21 - Grateful That ... (WriteBeLight)
And I am grateful too, WBL, that you did find these few excellent...
September 5th, 2017 12:24 - Ageless Abidings (Orchidee)
With you singing on my side, Orchidee, I don\'t have to worry about being...
September 5th, 2017 12:19 - Unknown (Baylee)
Nicole, the cure is NOT to worry! How often do we worry for nothing! You...
September 5th, 2017 12:13 - Breaking Through. (Fay Slimm.)
Another Fay-esque poem, wonderfully written! Love that last line.
September 5th, 2017 12:00 - The time is 10.23 pm (Aa Harvey)
Aa, you captured the story of time very well, but your sadness peeks out...
September 5th, 2017 11:58 - COLORS OF THE RAINBOW ~ Collaboration Poem ~ BRIAN & SANTITA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Santita, no wonder you love the color red, you look gorgeous in that...
September 5th, 2017 11:50 - Summer Dreams (BlueDays)
Blue Days, no matter how they are formatted, your poems are beautiful!
September 5th, 2017 03:26 - She Fever Too. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, dirty mind or not, red wine or not, meats or not, YOU baked a...
September 5th, 2017 03:09 - LIMERICK No 42 (Michael Edwards)
Yeah, Michael, hot air tends to go up!
Love your limericks, they make my...
September 5th, 2017 02:48 - Be Still & Know (Christina K)
Very, very nice, Christina. Sometimes stillness means more than noise.
September 4th, 2017 21:04 - Blonde Hair (Ruby.e)
I do like the way you structured this poem with the repetition of \'his...
September 4th, 2017 21:02 - If you are smiling (Tanvir H)
Tanvir, you nailed it! If only the whole world would follow this...
September 4th, 2017 20:59 - 121 (Alissa)
Alissa, I like this one a lot. It is very subtle, great metaphor, very...
September 4th, 2017 19:29 - renzi (Dusk arising)
Just happened to get a message from her TODAY! Said she will try to write...
September 4th, 2017 18:40 - Poverty of the Soul (WL Schuett)
WL, great poem! And you are SO right! You either believe, or you don\'t....
September 4th, 2017 18:26 - Motion Picture (Nicholas Browning)
Reading your poem made ME feel alive! Very well written!
September 4th, 2017 14:30 - You are what you count (Poetic Dan)
....and we all live happily ever after!!!
Thank you PD for a great poem....
September 4th, 2017 14:28 - Am I A Happy Camper? (Seek)
I think that happiness is a state of mind. All we have to do is decide to...
September 4th, 2017 14:26 - She-Fever. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you describe so beautifully that big ocean I am all surrounded by. We...
September 4th, 2017 14:20 - Limericks (Sue.evans)
Sue, forget the practicing! Just keep on writing, they are GOOOOOD!
September 4th, 2017 14:17 - EL GRECO ~ AN EDONE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Congratulations on the 500 and also on this fine Edone!
September 4th, 2017 14:16 - Jigsaw of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Using a jigsaw puzzle as a metaphor for life is genius! Great writing,...
September 4th, 2017 14:12 - ETERNAL LINKS (Michael Edwards)
Michael, not only are you showing us how to count, you are also teaching...
September 4th, 2017 14:06 - This Sea (Baylee)
Yes, there are those nights, and we must hang on to them! Very well...
September 4th, 2017 14:03 - Guess the Character (TN96)
Wasn\'t sure, but did think of Sherlock Holmes. Brilliantly written, TN!
September 4th, 2017 14:01 - Exit-etheree (Myself and me)
The way out is through the door that opens when another closes!
Great...
September 4th, 2017 13:57 - For-Life-Wife (Aa Harvey)
Seek and you will find! And remember, you cannot just sit there and wait,...
September 4th, 2017 13:55 - Ticking Away. (Fay Slimm.)
I would love to wake up like that every morning! Beautiful, beautiful...
September 4th, 2017 13:29 - No beef (Poetic Dan)
Idiots participate, men walk away! Nicely penned!
September 4th, 2017 13:27 - Loyal Until the End (TN96)
A very nice and moving poem. Well done, TN
September 4th, 2017 13:11 - Acid rain (A__pott)
Alex, this is really well written. I do like the choice of \'acid rain\'...
September 4th, 2017 03:51
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