Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards) Great limerick, Michael! Here we have Hawaiian Time, always half an hour...
  September 17th, 2017 03:13
• Harvest Humblings (Orchidee) Harvest....the best time of the year. Love your poem!
  September 16th, 2017 21:41
• Regrets (Rrodriguez) Roberto, you express beautifully what so many of us go through sometimes...
  September 16th, 2017 21:37
• life is life (Tanvir H) So true, our lives are like moments in time. Do we want them to be moments...
  September 16th, 2017 21:34
• BBC news from the cruse to Nordic Fjords (Avigail) Nice to hear from you again, Avigail! Hope you are enjoying your trip. I...
  September 16th, 2017 21:30
• a love letter to my mustache (Queer-with-a-pen) Boaz, great write about your mustache. I understand that in your case it...
  September 16th, 2017 20:23
• Languages In Paradise. (Kevin browne) Kevin, in my unprofessional and not very important opinion, this one is...
  September 16th, 2017 13:05
• Embrace the remembering (Poetic Dan) PD, this is truly an amazing poem. I love the way you refer to the...
  September 16th, 2017 12:54
• Fake Love (Chloe Rachel Flisher) Chloe, no matter how hard it seems when a love breaks, remember, when one...
  September 16th, 2017 12:42
• Blinkers (Chloe Rachel Flisher) Chloe, I like your writing style. Straight to the point! Good rhyming as...
  September 16th, 2017 12:37
• tower (Dusk arising) This poem is awesome, and so is the picture!
  September 16th, 2017 05:11
• Chance Changes. (Fay Slimm.) Great poem, Faye, and a great quote too.
  September 16th, 2017 05:03
• C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) As long as the jobs are in the big cities, people will flock there. Then,...
  September 16th, 2017 04:59
• I\'ll Be Seeing You. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, you nailed it. We look, but we don\'t see. We hear, but we...
  September 16th, 2017 04:20
• HIS PICTURE GONE (Michael Edwards) Michael, I really like the first stanza the best. It tells a whole story...
  September 16th, 2017 04:17
• Goodnight (Dannie_51715) Dannie, you wrote a heart warming and tender poem about young love. Very...
  September 15th, 2017 23:13
• Ruins (Mary73223) Ari, I am not sure what you want to say with this poem. Maybe I am a...
  September 15th, 2017 23:09
• Wedding vow (Disrespectfully nice) DN, this is a beautifully written vow. And as far as love is concerned, I...
  September 15th, 2017 23:05
• I Look At Her (Peter Balkus) Peter, this is a very tender and romantic declaration of love. Well...
  September 15th, 2017 23:01
• Somebody (Lanaevans) Lana, we hear you loud and clear! Your writing says it all. The main...
  September 15th, 2017 22:57
• Passion (Malubotelho) Passion knows no borders, no restrictions, no rules. Beautifully written,...
  September 15th, 2017 22:44
• You are (Myself and me) M&M, that\'s exactly what she tells me every night! :-) Seriously, I love...
  September 15th, 2017 22:41
• Changing Times (Mugsdaddy) Mugsdaddy, when you are right you are right!!!!!
  September 15th, 2017 12:59
• Residency Restoration (Orchidee) Don\'t know how you manage to write that much, that good, day after day!
  September 15th, 2017 12:43
• A friend (Tony36) Friendship is precious, and you expressed it well!
  September 15th, 2017 12:36
• Turtles on a log (WL Schuett) WL, I don\'t see anything \'silly\' in this poem. On the contrary, it is...
  September 15th, 2017 12:15
• My Poetic Side (Lasergraph) Thank you for a great poem and such a nice and appropriate description of...
  September 15th, 2017 12:10
• Follow Thy Elsewhere (Seek) Awesome rhyming, great choice of words. I do like it, Seek!
  September 15th, 2017 12:03
• Lull (Baylee) Nicole, this extraordinary poem describes exactly and beautifully how I...
  September 15th, 2017 11:59
• Undressed. (Fay Slimm.) And such a beautiful thing is your writing, Fay!
  September 15th, 2017 11:54
• Brothers sing, complements of the chef (Poetic Dan) Great writing to a great quote, PD! From my vibe to yours.
  September 15th, 2017 11:37
• Dear God (Its Raskolnikov) This is a beautifully written poem, Ras. So much emotion, a cry for help....
  September 15th, 2017 11:34
• FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, nice work. Can you do this for ice fishing too? If yes, don\'t...
  September 15th, 2017 03:31
• Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, are you sleep walking to that barrel? Wouldn\'t surprise me!
  September 15th, 2017 03:28
• WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards) Don\'t want to rain on your parade, Michael, but as far as the painting is...
  September 15th, 2017 03:24
• VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION (Louis Gibbs) Congratulations Louis, on a great poem and an even greater victory! May...
  September 15th, 2017 03:16
• The girl I am (Kat) Welcome to MPS, Kat! Herzlich Willkommen! I like your writing. Straight,...
  September 14th, 2017 21:03
• Leaping Lilies (Rrodriguez) What a nice poem! I can really see and smell the lilies, just by reading...
  September 14th, 2017 20:58
• Friendly Tyrant (Seek) Great way to look at time, and very well written!
  September 14th, 2017 19:51
• Reaping Revealings (Orchidee) no ploughing - no harvest! Another good one, orchidee!
  September 14th, 2017 14:08
• Writting (Tony36) Great write, Tony. We all put our innermost feelings, our lives as you...
  September 14th, 2017 14:02
• Three Bones (Baylee) Nicole, you keep on surprising me with better and better poems. You really...
  September 14th, 2017 13:55
• HARVEY AND IRMA (Lasergraph) You wrote a very poignant and timely poem, lasergraph! Very well written,...
  September 14th, 2017 13:52
• Sweet Nectar (WL Schuett) WL, I love your poem (and the painting) not only because it is so well...
  September 14th, 2017 13:46
• I Love You (Its Raskolnikov) Judging from your well written poem, she must be one heck of a great
  September 14th, 2017 13:40
• The water and the rock (Malubotelho) A beautiful picture and a beautiful poem, Malu! Glad you are coming back...
  September 14th, 2017 13:39
• Lake (Myself and me) Beautifully written, M&M! That picture really inspired you! But why...
  September 14th, 2017 13:33
• Something Greater. (Fay Slimm.) And with this poem, Fay, you stole our admiration!
  September 14th, 2017 03:52
• C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) It IS fun to read your collaboration poems! Maybe one day, when I feel...
  September 14th, 2017 03:51
• My roots (Poetic Dan) PD, this is a very moving and emotional poem. Thank you for sharing it...
  September 14th, 2017 03:48
• almost (Queer-with-a-pen) Boaz, you hit the nail right on the head! Nobody REALLY wants to die. They...
  September 14th, 2017 03:44
• Endless Love. (Goldfinch60) Reading your incredible poem, Goldfinch, made me think of my dad\'s best...
  September 14th, 2017 03:36
• THE ABSTRACT ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Michael, an incredible poem and a beautiful painting. Being married to a...
  September 14th, 2017 01:02
• Just Human (FredPeyer) Thank you Goldfinch! We really do need to accept ourselves, but then...
  September 14th, 2017 00:15
• Living on a 4/6 (Malubotelho) Malu, thank you for a very poignant and touching story. You covered the...
  September 13th, 2017 22:38
• Potato (ReloadTheWorld) Eviemazing, this poem does your name proud. It is amazing. Good writing,...
  September 13th, 2017 22:21
• Happiness (Adrianna Kjeld) And happiness can be found in one of your poems, Adrianna! Love it!
  September 13th, 2017 21:59
• Wars. (Kevin browne) Kevin, a very apt description of the futility of war.
  September 13th, 2017 21:56
• we have one soul (Tanvir H) Rancor, agree with James, otherwise a great poem!
  September 13th, 2017 17:52
• An unexpected Poem (WL Schuett) Great poem, WL! Incredible how you can cram so much into just a few lines,...
  September 13th, 2017 13:59
• Insecure (Baylee) Nicole, your excellent poem touches on a very basic issue. We all wear...
  September 13th, 2017 11:43
• VISIONS OF SLUMBER (Lasergraph) Excellent writing! By the time I finished it I was snoring! (Just kidding)...
  September 13th, 2017 11:40
• Deep in my heart (Myself and me) M&M, deep in my heart I know this is one of your best poems!
  September 13th, 2017 11:37
• How Many. (Fay Slimm.) A wonderful depiction of waiting, longing, and love, but also of heartache...
  September 13th, 2017 11:28
• \"love yourself first\" my foot (Queer-with-a-pen) Boaz, you are right. You CAN give love and not love yourself. Your poem...
  September 13th, 2017 11:18
• More me today than yesterday (Poetic Dan) Being a child of the 50\'s and 60\'s, your poem brought up memories of the...
  September 13th, 2017 11:01
• SEASONS OF LOVE ~ TANKAS ~ COLLABORATION ~ BRIAN & SANTITA (BRIAN & ANGELA) A wonderful collaboration. You changed basic math from 1+1=2 to 1+1=3
  September 13th, 2017 10:41
• What is Time? (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, I think the lines \'Time, that never-ending line of moments\'...
  September 13th, 2017 10:30
• A Dream Come True (GeraldineTaylor) Geraldine, now all we need is the music and we have the most beautiful...
  September 13th, 2017 01:08
• THE RECURRING DREAM (Louis Gibbs) So this is a mad and dark, awful and splendid, yet rather curious poem!
  September 13th, 2017 01:04
• A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards) Like both of them. I also sleep very heavily, nothing can wake me. You...
  September 13th, 2017 00:59
• Unforgettable (Mizzjewel) Well written, Mizzjewel! And the line \'Seemingly perfect, it\'s perfectly...
  September 12th, 2017 21:07
• Left Behind (Liberty_Shadows) I like the way you write, Liberty. Straight forward, you tell it how it...
  September 12th, 2017 21:05
• Poison Ivy (Ruby.e) Ruby, go see a doctor! How do you know it is Poison Ivy? Could be...
  September 12th, 2017 20:12
• Watch Me (Joy Fetherolf) Welcome to MPS, Joy! I do like your poem very much. Also like the...
  September 12th, 2017 18:58
• Untitled (SarahLouise) The first line says it all! Any photo is a reflection of that moment, and...
  September 12th, 2017 18:55
• Arms of a Brother (Daisyy) Been a big brother for 68 years and my \'little\' sister still expects me...
  September 12th, 2017 18:52
• Anyone remember me (ReloadTheWorld) You were here before my time, so no, don\'t remember you. But, if you...
  September 12th, 2017 18:50
• Journey Home (Ternic73) Very well written, Ternic! Every one of them deserves this poem. We can...
  September 12th, 2017 18:44
• there\'s hope, there\'s joy (Rrodriguez) Beautiful writing Roberto! This is what our world needs right now! We do...
  September 12th, 2017 18:41
• I need answers (Angee Thomas) Great writing again! There will be the ONE who doesn\'t care about your...
  September 12th, 2017 12:13
• Communion Closeness (Orchidee) Great writing again, and again, and again, orchidee!
  September 12th, 2017 12:05
• BUCKET (Lasergraph) Lasergraph, your excellent poem speaks to my heart. Maybe it has something...
  September 12th, 2017 11:55
• Myself and Me (Myself and me) Myself and me by Myself and me! Now who is talking? Somehow I picture the...
  September 12th, 2017 11:47
• Transparent (Baylee) This is so cool! Goes for \'her\' too!
  September 12th, 2017 11:43
• Attack. (Fay Slimm.) Great writing Fay! Sounds like a peregrine falcon, my favorite bird!
  September 12th, 2017 11:33
• Beat or bit a journey under our feet (Poetic Dan) PD, so often you find what you are looking for when you are NOT looking!...
  September 12th, 2017 11:30
• Judgments Last Call (Leah Sharp) A thought provoking well written poem, Leah!
  September 12th, 2017 11:14
• Maiden (Leah Sharp) Being a parent, your poem broke my heart, wonderfully written, and in the...
  September 12th, 2017 11:11
• Innercore (EDone ) (Mugsdaddy) Hard or not, Mugsdaddy, you made it! And what an apparition it is!
  September 12th, 2017 03:01
• Union of Perfection (Leah Sharp) I am going with a wild guess here! Was taught a long time ago to think...
  September 12th, 2017 02:53
• What is the Time? (Goldfinch60) Great poem! And every time you ask somebody for the time right after they...
  September 12th, 2017 02:47
• F L O R I D A ~ WE ALL LOVE YOU An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nicely done, like all your Acrostic. You do have a feel for it!
  September 12th, 2017 02:40
• Thought (FredPeyer) Thanks Goldfinch! Happens to me more and more!!! :-)
  September 12th, 2017 00:57
• THREE FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards) Michael, all three are great, but number two is my favorite!
  September 12th, 2017 00:39
• Prodigal (Lizzy Renee) Like it a lot, Lizzy! And the only way to find out if these arms are open...
  September 11th, 2017 20:15
• 911 (Lanaevans) You are right, when it is our time we don\'t have much choice but to...
  September 11th, 2017 19:54
• Storm (Ruby.e) These storms show us that no matter how important we think we are, we...
  September 11th, 2017 19:52
• OUR AUTUMN HOME (Lasergraph) A great ode to Fall, lasergraph! Fall used to be my favorite season too.
  September 11th, 2017 19:49
• Broken Days. (Kevin browne) You capture the plight of the homeless and downtrodden so well. Love the...
  September 11th, 2017 19:41