Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- No More.. (Fay Slimm.)
Your beautiful poem made me think of how this world would look like if war...
September 23rd, 2017 18:06 - SAY IT WITH FLOWERS ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great collaboration poem, I like it!
September 23rd, 2017 18:04 - The Man at the Door. (Goldfinch60)
I guess there is no shortage of fun subjects to write about. Very funny...
September 23rd, 2017 18:01 - Marching Band (W c)
Don\'t we all love these marching bands? Very nicely written, w c!
September 23rd, 2017 17:34 - FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards)
Beautifully written poem, Michael. Made me remember my first time!
September 23rd, 2017 17:33 - colours (Dusk arising)
Amen! From a 69 year old!
Love your poem.
September 22nd, 2017 04:31 - Guardian of Innocence (Accidental Poet)
Are you talking about the internet? Don\'t trust anybody there, except of...
September 22nd, 2017 04:30 - TEN OXYMORONS ~ Seriously Funny (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You forgot \'Military Intelligence\'!
Great writing, loved it!
September 22nd, 2017 04:28 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Absolutely gorgeous, Fay! You depicted first love in a beautiful and...
September 22nd, 2017 04:21 - Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, your great poem serves as a reminder to all of us to do exactly...
September 22nd, 2017 01:40 - Falling Bodies (A__pott)
Alex, you said it very well...love is timeless!
September 22nd, 2017 01:29 - Cloudbusting Love (Niallprideaux)
A lot of emotion and hope in this well written poem. I am sure something...
September 22nd, 2017 01:27 - Warm Stormy Rain (WL Schuett)
WL, I salute you! Stunningly written!
September 22nd, 2017 01:25 - The Wisp (Mugsdaddy)
Your imagination is incredible and so is your writing. Like PD, I do lover...
September 22nd, 2017 01:21 - FAIR WARNING (Louis Gibbs)
I think it is nearly impossible to change one\'s character without help....
September 22nd, 2017 01:18 - ()
Santi, tender, emotional, you caught the essence of a loving kiss...
September 22nd, 2017 01:14 - RING RING (Michael Edwards)
I just love unintentional funny stories and this one had me smiling all...
September 22nd, 2017 01:07 - who should i be? (Jane-Doe)
Welcome to MPS, J-D!
I don\'t know if your poem is aimed at a father or a...
September 21st, 2017 17:12 - The sad thing about this interaction (Avigail)
Well written and to the point, Avigail! When we meet somebody, at first it...
September 21st, 2017 17:01 - Taming of the Beast (Mugsdaddy)
This one really gripped me, M, and I would never have guessed the ending....
September 21st, 2017 14:57 - Prayer Protection (Orchidee)
Ach Du lieber mein Gott und Vater!
Have to repeat Goldfinch\'s comment:...
September 21st, 2017 14:51 - COMING CHANGE (Lasergraph)
Lasergraph you perfectly captured the mood and painted an accurate picture...
September 21st, 2017 14:30 - For those who love ❤️ (Malubotelho)
Great writing, Malu. I just love the last line. It perfectly sums up all...
September 21st, 2017 14:23 - Beauty Queen (Christina8)
Christina, you wrote a beautifully erotic, yet tender and loving poem....
September 21st, 2017 14:16 - Muse (Baylee)
And now, Nicole, you are officially a philosopher!
Love that bounding...
September 21st, 2017 14:03 - Stress (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Edward, this site seems to help quite a few people in different ways. And...
September 21st, 2017 03:24 - Viewpoint (Accidental Poet)
Genius AP, and so true! Just like we need surround sound to hear good...
September 21st, 2017 03:20 - I am woman (Pr3ttyshad0ws)
Sadie, I really like this poem. Strong writing, a logical conclusion and a...
September 21st, 2017 03:18 - Illusions and time (Poetic Dan)
Good poem, PD! The mind is a curious thing. You are right, you do have to...
September 21st, 2017 03:14 - VENUS ~ MARS ~ SUN & MOON ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice collaboration, Christina and Brian. And the photo is not too bad...
September 21st, 2017 03:09 - Seize Now. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, perfect! All I can say is \'carpe diem\'
September 21st, 2017 03:06 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
You two guys are a riot! The Laurel and Hardy of MPS! Great write, enjoyed...
September 21st, 2017 03:04 - My Rich Girl (Thoff1)
Nice writing, Tomo, rich girls do have a different way about them. But...
September 21st, 2017 02:58 - HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET (Michael Edwards)
Very well written, Michael, and I do like the subject matter, a subject...
September 21st, 2017 02:55 - A day (Myself and me)
What a nice poem, M&M! We all get so caught up in the daily grind, we tend...
September 20th, 2017 15:32 - Burn the Stars (Baylee)
How old are you, Nicole? NO, don\'t answer!!! All I want to say with this...
September 20th, 2017 13:22 - A Time For All (Orchidee)
....and then there is a time to read your poems!
September 20th, 2017 09:53 - A Poem For All (Christina8)
Thank you Christine. I just got up and you made my day!
September 20th, 2017 09:48 - Inner debate (Malubotelho)
I do hope, Malu, that this wonderfully written poem exists only in your...
September 20th, 2017 09:45 - Birthday blues, what a tune! (Poetic Dan)
Happy Birthday Dan! May the light of the birthday cake candles light your...
September 20th, 2017 09:37 - Let the Bells Sing (Accidental Poet)
Thank you AP, for a thoughtful, interesting poem and a much needed history...
September 20th, 2017 03:36 - Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks Fay for a very insightful poem on a subject not too many of us...
September 20th, 2017 03:35 - Throat Cutting. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, this is soooo good! Reminds me of the terrorist who burned his...
September 20th, 2017 03:33 - AUTUMNS COLOURS ~ USA ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great poem. You should see the autumn colors in Quebec! All the maple...
September 20th, 2017 03:32 - Empty (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Awesome writing! You are really good. Am glad you are doing better! Please...
September 20th, 2017 00:17 - MORE MONOSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
Agree with Santi! The last one is the best. But I also like the other...
September 20th, 2017 00:10 - Dad (Faithlovekitty101)
Well written, from the heart. I can only agree with lost-but-not-broken. I...
September 20th, 2017 00:01 - The Morning Sky (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Edward, thank you! I think I am going to look at my mornings differently...
September 19th, 2017 22:07 - Phantom (A__pott)
I love this poem, Alex! Did not expect the end, but it is perfect.
September 19th, 2017 20:54 - I Remember... (Anaphora Poem) (Rrodriguez)
Great poem Roberto, well done!
September 19th, 2017 20:53 - Treasure Trove (Orchidee)
Well, your words are acceptable in my sight, Orchidee!
September 19th, 2017 18:14 - I Am Free (Christina8)
Beautifully written, straight from the heart. As they say, you\'ve made
September 19th, 2017 18:10 - Thinking of you (Myself and me)
Very tender, very nice, very loving, M&M! But in that last stanza, I can...
September 19th, 2017 16:08 - You\'re Worse Than Cigarettes (Niallprideaux)
...when you\'re hooked, you\'re hooked! Be it cigarettes, drugs, or ...
September 19th, 2017 16:06 - Existential Crisis (Adrianna Kjeld)
What happened to your happiness from the last poem, Adrianna?
Maybe you...
September 19th, 2017 16:03 - QUESTIONS (Lasergraph)
Edward, you speak from my heart! As a fellow grand-father I know exactly...
September 19th, 2017 12:48 - A HARD LESSON (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, while I am one of the lucky ones with no ghosts in my closet, I can...
September 19th, 2017 12:41 - Raindrops on Cherries (WL Schuett)
WL, this is one of the most beautifully written poems I ever read about a...
September 19th, 2017 12:34 - Lesser (Baylee)
Nicole, you are posting one great poem after another! Who are we to decide...
September 19th, 2017 12:28 - Always know just enough (Poetic Dan)
PD, this is a very tender and loving poem about a subject that many of us...
September 19th, 2017 12:15 - Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum (Accidental Poet)
Thanks AP, you know how to lighten up the start of my day!
September 19th, 2017 12:13 - Stalled. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes Fay, it shall!! Beautiful lead up to these last two lines!
September 19th, 2017 12:05 - For Those Who Struggle. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, honestly, I did read everything, but it is the last two lines that...
September 19th, 2017 11:58 - Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Goldfinch for this beautiful poem. It touched me not only...
September 19th, 2017 11:45 - THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards)
Great Haikus Michael! And thanks for the history lesson. One never stops...
September 19th, 2017 11:40 - RICE PEAS \'N CHICK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Eh brah, tis recipe brok da mout. Dat is ono!
September 19th, 2017 11:33 - Yesterday (Myself and me)
Sometimes a piece of music, or something on the TV, or something we see,...
September 19th, 2017 03:15 - Set Free (Ruby.e)
Ruby, this poem is so tender, written from the heart, full of love,...
September 19th, 2017 03:10 - Coma (Simple-Man87)
SM, your poem is awesome. Even though we do not know what is going on...
September 18th, 2017 18:05 - Another Day (Chloe Rachel Flisher)
Chloe, a straight to the point and heart-felt poem, well penned! Am glad...
September 18th, 2017 18:01 - I Circle Back to Thee (GeraldineTaylor)
Geraldine, an incredible poem. Took me forever to read and must have taken...
September 18th, 2017 17:57 - Church Continuances (Orchidee)
\'Open to all of every nation\' and your excellent work is open to all of...
September 18th, 2017 15:05 - WHAT\'S YOUR FAVORITE CAR ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Is this one over and done with?
Wanted to add the first car I ever owned,...
September 18th, 2017 15:02 - THE WINDMILL (Lasergraph)
Very nicely written and so accurate, reminding us of the past and where we...
September 18th, 2017 14:57 - Love for love (Malubotelho)
Great poem, Malu! Only after we empty our hearts and minds, get rid of all...
September 18th, 2017 14:55 - SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
No 3 is definitely the best, but no 2 is good too, leaves a lot to the...
September 18th, 2017 14:45 - Bee-for (Aa Harvey)
You better hurry up and get Humble a companion!
September 18th, 2017 14:40 - Followed in the Night. (Goldfinch60)
This is a great poem, Goldfinch, no wonder it was published....
September 18th, 2017 13:18 - LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Two showers in only four stanzas! Am all for it, as long as the showers...
September 18th, 2017 13:09 - Thinnest Divide. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully written, Fay, and as far as I read it, a great metaphor of us...
September 18th, 2017 13:04 - Plan B (Accidental Poet)
AP, I actually did lol when I came to the end of your poem. It is so true,...
September 18th, 2017 12:53 - Take it and return it (Poetic Dan)
Beautifully said, PD! Even though we are supposed to be wordsmiths, there...
September 18th, 2017 12:49 - Unparalleled (Baylee)
This is simply beautiful, Nicole.
No other words needed!
September 18th, 2017 12:32 - The orchid in my garden knows… (Avigail)
Beautiful poem, Avigail. Over here we say the same thing of Bamboo.
September 18th, 2017 12:29 - Huckleberry Stone (WL Schuett)
WL, I love the painting and the poem is simply superb!
Now where did I...
September 18th, 2017 12:14 - Spain (Renzi)
What is it with these Irish? Do they party all the time?
Anyway, Renzi,...
September 18th, 2017 12:06 - Passengers (A__pott)
Great, great write, Alex. There comes a time when we just have to let go,...
September 18th, 2017 12:04 - Opaque (Baylee)
But he could in the future!
Very intriguing write, Nicole. I do like it....
September 17th, 2017 15:45 - Walking mediation after Irma (Avigail)
Well written, Avigail. While it is sad to see an uprooted tree, it is all...
September 17th, 2017 15:36 - Life of love (Poetic Dan)
Love the poem, love the picture! Brings back memories of the 60\'s.
Am...
September 17th, 2017 15:33 - A Traditional Man (Accidental Poet)
I really think you should present these lyrics to Bruce...
September 17th, 2017 15:28 - HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very fine writing again, Brian!
September 17th, 2017 15:11 - DayDreaming ❤ (Karla)
Great poem, Karla! You make me want to daydream again!!!!
September 17th, 2017 03:24 - Singing. (Goldfinch60)
Nice poem Goldfinch! And you look a lot better than I thought you would!...
September 17th, 2017 03:20 - LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards)
Great limerick, Michael! Here we have Hawaiian Time, always half an hour...
September 17th, 2017 03:13 - Harvest Humblings (Orchidee)
Harvest....the best time of the year. Love your poem!
September 16th, 2017 21:41 - Regrets (Rrodriguez)
Roberto, you express beautifully what so many of us go through sometimes...
September 16th, 2017 21:37 - life is life (Tanvir H)
So true, our lives are like moments in time. Do we want them to be moments...
September 16th, 2017 21:34 - BBC news from the cruse to Nordic Fjords (Avigail)
Nice to hear from you again, Avigail! Hope you are enjoying your trip.
I...
September 16th, 2017 21:30 - a love letter to my mustache (Queer-with-a-pen)
Boaz, great write about your mustache. I understand that in your case it...
September 16th, 2017 20:23
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