Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Unattainable (Lorna)
The journey which brings each of us to where we will be is filled with the...
September 2nd, 2021 01:36 - Music Revelation. (Goldfinch60)
My laptop\'s speakers have recently stopped working so i cant enjoy your...
September 2nd, 2021 01:19 - Behind Green Eyes (Saxon Crow)
Reads like a dream of fulfillment any romantic, especially this one, could...
September 2nd, 2021 00:30 - Worry. (Goldfinch60)
Mother was a worrier, I vowed never to become so. Lately with much time on...
September 1st, 2021 01:34 - Child Within Reunion (Flyingfish)
This immediately took me to thoughts of the pleasure of my grandchildrens...
September 1st, 2021 01:30 - Depth (The Incomplete Metaphor)
There\'s a lot of truth there my friend. Somuch gets lost in converting...
August 31st, 2021 17:00 - Abyss (Coyote)
Makes sense in todays world too though doesn\'t it.
August 31st, 2021 16:59 - The Cross (Matthew jay)
Set you free from what?
August 31st, 2021 07:20 - An Arm Around Me Sends Its Farewells (Jo)
A time to move on, well expressed.
August 31st, 2021 04:55 - Wreckage (HannahElisabeth)
Sadness and loss will always leave us with the pain of unanswered...
August 31st, 2021 04:54 - Mission Complete (Michael J. Schaeffer)
A simple living design that leaves death and destruction and a bad...
August 31st, 2021 04:47 - Hidden (Fay Slimm.)
indeed, we are fed by the wild for too cossetted we can become.
Lovely...
August 31st, 2021 04:41 - To Be Continued Maybe (Neville)
now there\'s an opening scene for a true life romance with a twist in...
August 31st, 2021 03:38 - Starwatch. (Goldfinch60)
And through your words seen each day here on MPS we can feel the love...
August 31st, 2021 03:30 - Dream Street (Flyingfish)
Took me into a vision of someone elses dreams here. Mine are nothing like...
August 30th, 2021 08:10 - Dancing in the snow (HannahElisabeth)
Many comforts and crutches come our way and the biggest life ruiners are...
August 30th, 2021 07:54 - Edible Enemy (Jo)
Comfort when all around is discomfort.
August 30th, 2021 07:48 - Dumbness (Fay Slimm.)
The power of words unsaid. More especially when certain words need to be...
August 30th, 2021 07:47 - Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J)
You took me through this with feeling and emotion shared. Arriving at,...
August 30th, 2021 07:40 - August Garden (Lorna)
Natures cycle on mother earth. So good to witness in these days of fear...
August 30th, 2021 07:33 - Troubles, Trials, Trusting (Orchidee)
The word of god you refer to here. Regurgitated by man or made up by...
August 30th, 2021 07:31 - It\'s Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60)
I was brought up under the influence of parents who had to keep up...
August 30th, 2021 07:27 - Wanderlust (Lorna)
Reminded me of a feeling which comes over me in waves now and again. Parts...
August 29th, 2021 12:59 - Please be Gentle (Saxon Crow)
Kind and honest words. To often I feel people skip these feelings and they...
August 29th, 2021 11:01 - FIFTY YEARS FROM NOW (PETERHARRISON)
LOL can you see the middle east living this way? Africa? Indian sub...
August 29th, 2021 06:38 - The Dove (Dove)
Lovely tale you tell. Birds do seem so remote from us humans, ever wary....
August 29th, 2021 04:55 - A Permanent Embrace (Neville)
Reads as a tale of forbidden love. A fairy tale of old which still haunts...
August 29th, 2021 04:47 - Then Maybe (Jo)
Oh, I\'ve had a lifetime of being as you describe. But it wasn\'t me, it...
August 29th, 2021 04:43 - Pleasures (Fay Slimm.)
Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are...
August 29th, 2021 04:39 - Thankfulness. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, coming to terms with life and its glories... mostly the simple day...
August 29th, 2021 04:31 - Ticket, Please (DesertWords)
Nice to read but your opening line states you searched.... then there\'s...
August 28th, 2021 18:32 - Summer heat (HannahElisabeth)
LOL at sin and repent. Man made concepts. Those sinning motivators of love...
August 28th, 2021 08:32 - An Old Promise Well Kept (Neville)
A haunting tale well written in a beguiling way where your readers mind...
August 28th, 2021 08:28 - Treasured (Fay Slimm.)
You capture how alive we are at such times. When such awareness and...
August 28th, 2021 08:25 - Free To Be (Jo)
Just be you, know yourself. Google a piece called Desiderata by Max...
August 28th, 2021 08:21 - Original (Rebmasters)
But the diversity of human intelligence flies in the face of this. Some...
August 28th, 2021 08:19 - Missed You (Saxon Crow)
This is a wonderful piece celebrating the return of a true friend... ...
August 28th, 2021 08:09 - Guilt Is There. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, what is love where is love? Love gave you the affection and caring...
August 28th, 2021 07:55 - Bus Folk (AuburnScribbler)
As a child and young man I used various bus services a lot and found them...
August 27th, 2021 10:55 - Umpteenth heat wave since onset of summer... sizzles Delaware Valley today August 25th, 2021 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Will you be supporting measures to reduce and repair global warming at...
August 27th, 2021 10:48 - Why? (Blue Violet)
Oh yes, I have known it well, love\'s dilemma. Expressed by you so...
August 27th, 2021 09:33 - Word Salad (Jerry Reynolds)
Send me back to tomorrow Doppler!
August 27th, 2021 09:30 - On Things Now Lost. (Beano)
Such vision and image are our dreams made upon.
August 27th, 2021 08:17 - Perfectly stitched (Myself and me)
Thank goodness stitches heal. After healing, the brain plays a larger part...
August 27th, 2021 08:16 - My Talk – 3 (Nafis Light)
But Joker you so rarely join in here on MPS. The way this place really...
August 27th, 2021 08:14 - You Are My Heart (Floreann)
It\'s just a pump, but i can\'t give my central heating pump any of those...
August 27th, 2021 07:03 - How Do You Begin? (Jo)
Accept is indeed a very strange word if you cannot accept yourself for...
August 27th, 2021 05:25 - Shut Up Shutting Up? (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi. Keep on doing what you do, we all have the right to be who...
August 27th, 2021 05:09 - Into The New Light. (Goldfinch60)
A really thoughtful gift. Something which will remind them of a really...
August 27th, 2021 05:06 - She Calls Them Tears (Neville)
What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in...
August 27th, 2021 05:03 - I Made A New Friend This Summer (Jo)
It always surprises me to hear some folk do not like their own company. i...
August 26th, 2021 17:52 - EIEIO (Coyote)
Well I could not agree more heartily with you Coyote. I cast off...
August 26th, 2021 17:46 - I have little talent for friendship (Trenz Pruca)
I have been very much a loner without much need for being included in........
August 26th, 2021 17:43 - Holding On (Jerry Reynolds)
Oh yes, it would do that alright. Such truth crammed into three lines.
August 26th, 2021 17:41 - Invasive (Fay Slimm.)
Yep, love beats us into submission and once we have succumbed it imprisons...
August 26th, 2021 17:30 - That Ideal Place. (Goldfinch60)
That place is often where i dream.It can be todays world, my yesteryears...
August 26th, 2021 17:19 - Flag of My Fathers (Coyote)
I can feel this though I\'m a Brit miles away, only a passive observer of...
August 25th, 2021 12:16 - ᴇᴘʜᴇᴍᴇʀᴀʟ ᴀs ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ (Dove)
What point in visiting the ocean and not getting wet?
Soak it up and...
August 25th, 2021 09:55 - THE BUFFET (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah, those stories in the squeek of old hinges. Tales told in flakes of...
August 25th, 2021 08:30 - An Unexpected Chaos (Neville)
Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27 - Cloistered (Fay Slimm.)
The sea in all her changing guises with all her treacherous guilt, as...
August 25th, 2021 08:19 - Do I Qualify? (Goldfinch60)
Will your back and legs allow you to get in and out of a low down sports...
August 25th, 2021 08:10 - Perpetual Insanity (Coyote)
Beginning with the romance of a tapestry and musketeer you deftly...
August 24th, 2021 13:21 - Perception (Fay Slimm.)
Even the greatest shall know temporary relevance in their everyday...
August 24th, 2021 13:06 - When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville)
Was it a WW2 shell?
Some hear only their own thoughts and plans falling...
August 24th, 2021 03:49 - Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60)
OMG dont make poetry a chore sir!
In my world poetry has a tide beyond...
August 24th, 2021 03:45 - Superman (Anthony Esposito)
LOL It sounds like how USA would like to think it is regarded in places...
August 23rd, 2021 09:55 - Attention to de shell (Poetic Dan)
Yep, plenty more to say about the world around you i.e. away from self.
August 23rd, 2021 07:49 - Impatient (Fay Slimm.)
Well rip my nets on rocks if this aint a saucy missive. She cant wait till...
August 23rd, 2021 07:44 - The Fullest of Moons (Neville)
having brought him to the edge of despair she now saw something of beauty,...
August 23rd, 2021 07:25 - Unworldly Wisdom (Orchidee)
I think we all find a wisdom as age takes us onward. The glory of creation...
August 23rd, 2021 03:31 - Kiss Away the Tears (Cygnus X-1)
I had the pleasure of spending a couple of hours with my granddaughters (3...
August 23rd, 2021 03:29 - Worry (Lorna)
Fine poetry which bridges the void.
August 23rd, 2021 02:44 - Harold\'s Lament (Michael Edwards)
CoR! what a shot, right in the chuffer!
Dont think of it as yer...
August 22nd, 2021 14:29 - Mime (Coyote)
One man\'s tragedy, another man\'s mirth.
August 22nd, 2021 14:20 - A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville)
When we hear figures like six million (forgive my ignorance for...
August 22nd, 2021 14:14 - A Dream (Dove)
Oh yes, those dreams are like that, leaving you wishing they could...
August 22nd, 2021 14:07 - Old Clock (Lorna)
Or ask, how much more can i fit into every minute, every hour, day, week...
August 22nd, 2021 13:55 - Differences (BusyB)
Ying and yang. Acceptance.
August 22nd, 2021 13:52 - Looking Around. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m singing now.... and I think to myself.... what a wonderful world ...
August 22nd, 2021 04:11 - The Stars (SheWasTheSun)
Well there was a time when i knew that feeling and its radiant reflection....
August 22nd, 2021 04:01 - Until Day (Fay Slimm.)
After writing my post of today then I feel your words here deep within for...
August 22nd, 2021 03:49 - A Night At The Opera. (Goldfinch60)
As a child, the house rang to the sounds of opera on sundays when father...
August 22nd, 2021 03:34 - Caught (Fay Slimm.)
Looking past the surface, to the torn child within. Very moving and sad....
August 22nd, 2021 03:28 - Single Handed (Fay Slimm.)
Aww - lovely. Really a fine example of your wonderful creative mind...
August 20th, 2021 06:26 - Untitled #2 (Neville)
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few...
August 20th, 2021 06:19 - Road Works God. (Goldfinch60)
Oh those day-glo vested angels are everywhere. They even have cherubs...
August 20th, 2021 06:12 - Switch Off (Coyote)
Love the format, the idea, and the excellence of the whole.
Really good...
August 19th, 2021 13:19 - Droplets (Poetic Dan)
I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it...
August 19th, 2021 13:16 - The Angle of Her Lay (Neville)
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy...
August 19th, 2021 13:10 - Fury (Lorna)
I had to put my rubber boots on to read your poem. Well theres sure plenty...
August 19th, 2021 13:02 - Walking in the dark of night.... (BusyB)
Those slippery homeless slugs are the ones to worry about, u can end up...
August 19th, 2021 03:21 - River Spirit Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
We\'ll make a poetic narrowboat of ya yet.
August 19th, 2021 03:02 - Awakend? or Decived? (Prettygirl412)
Interesting, I think you are questioning the faith one of the organised...
August 18th, 2021 15:05 - For Break it May: A Triolet (Dove)
Dove, I can\'t read that font I\'m sorry.
August 18th, 2021 14:22 - 15 years of delight (Poetic Dan)
Lovely isn\'t it Dan to see the young ones growing up and smiles on their...
August 18th, 2021 07:48 - Let It Sink In (Jo)
Very clever.
August 18th, 2021 04:29 - Love yourself (BusyB)
Very true. Sometimes a failed love can leave one hating ones self and even...
August 18th, 2021 03:01 - Chance (Fay Slimm.)
Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot...
August 18th, 2021 02:58 - I’m trying not to be so bad (Kira Zubal)
No, do not ever hide your shade. I like this expression of the enigma you...
August 18th, 2021 02:51
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