Comments on community poems by dusk arising at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by dusk arising

Just Waiting For Me. (Goldfinch60) There\'s something about a river, probably it\'s steady permanent...
September 11th, 2021 01:30
People Always Prefer Rainbows (Saxon Crow) Oh most definitely, I mean if it\'s raining there\'s a chance Orchi will...
September 11th, 2021 00:41
Hearts (The Loving Poet) Please ask your god (thats the one who you state doesn\'t make any...
September 10th, 2021 21:05
Narcissist (Neville) LOL we used to call it \'lead guitarist syndrome\' in the group musicians...
September 10th, 2021 12:03
Autumn Comes Running. (Fay Slimm.) Heralded by amber leaf-fall the shudder of winters proximity taints these...
September 10th, 2021 02:54
Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60) LOL a really good laugh ... thank you.
September 10th, 2021 00:37
The Darkest Place (Saxon Crow) An honest friend is a sweet place to go.
September 10th, 2021 00:36
The moon and her wolf (HannahElisabeth) Death is so personal. Your piece is full of personal and beautifully...
September 9th, 2021 13:57
I Don\'t Wanna Talk About It (GiraffineUploads) The storm will pass and you will look out from the tree and see things you...
September 9th, 2021 13:50
maybe (Dusk arising) You know what Teddy, You are just so refreshing and always so supportive...
September 9th, 2021 07:05
Finding (Fay Slimm.) That fairly describes how inspiration falls and mists clear as one\'s...
September 9th, 2021 04:46
Lets Sing Again! (Goldfinch60) Youngest of four i remember us all watching chubby and doing his dance...
September 9th, 2021 04:34
Oh, Georgia (HannahElisabeth) Never been but so many films have brough us Georgia both sweltering and...
September 9th, 2021 04:31
A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry (Saxon Crow) A definite odour of a late parrot pervades the whole post saxon. Bluddy...
September 9th, 2021 04:27
𝒜𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓏𝒶𝑔𝑜𝓇𝒶𝓅𝒽𝑜𝒷𝒾𝒶 (Dove) Will your poetry live on after you Dove. There are ways to ensure it will...
September 8th, 2021 10:19
Fused (Fay Slimm.) OMG put that cover back on the fusebox... the sparks flying in your...
September 8th, 2021 06:00
My Lotus and Me (Neville) The wheel came off mine on a nasty bend....... on another occasion i...
September 8th, 2021 05:57
Prayer Pointers (Orchidee) What prayer would you suggest for a child to utter in the hope that the...
September 8th, 2021 02:37
Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60) Yes I agree but to be fair... look what unforseen covid has done to...
September 8th, 2021 01:28
O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave) LOL so many of us will know the thoughts expressed here having seen...
September 8th, 2021 00:40
Decisions (Goldfinch60) So true Andy. I think it goes hand in hand with \"let us not judge a...
September 7th, 2021 00:59
Murderers Lament (Saxon Crow) Yea forsooth though thee doth walk thine deathly path through woodland\'s...
September 7th, 2021 00:48
Metamorphosis (HannahElisabeth) To truly know ourselves we have to realise, to see and accept our...
September 6th, 2021 19:51
Slow Train. (Goldfinch60) Evesham of course sits on the OWW railway. Oxford, Worcester and...
September 6th, 2021 01:35
Familiar. (Fay Slimm.) All those old familiar places. AS a kid I was shunted all over the...
September 5th, 2021 02:47
यारियां (Rahul verma (Rv)) (à¿á) what are you hiding?
September 5th, 2021 02:37
Restful Relationship (Orchidee) Is this about all the peadophiles in the churches? Why don\'t churches...
September 5th, 2021 02:35
The Stars are Jellyfish (Saxon Crow) Mushrooms mate, thats wot they are and the moons a huge toad\'s tool. I...
September 5th, 2021 02:32
Wasted Day - Almost. (Goldfinch60) Back in the 70\'s i was a rep and knew every plumber in Evesham.... there...
September 5th, 2021 02:20
Elsewhere (Fay Slimm.) A candlelit dinner for two has such romance. Captured here undoubtedly....
September 4th, 2021 14:26
Look At The Moon (Goldfinch60) And a beautiful piece of music to play as you let your lunar thoughts go...
September 4th, 2021 14:21
Stained Glass (HannahElisabeth) You phrased that so well. Many of us beyond a certain age and each with...
September 3rd, 2021 16:26
Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond) Booscht mkit takki gibborn sa yun.
September 3rd, 2021 11:57
STONES KNOW (Fay Slimm.) Ye tickled my roots with this fine ditty my deario. The family name is...
September 3rd, 2021 10:46
Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60) Funnily enough farmer Giles was just saying how his little coq managed to...
September 3rd, 2021 10:41
I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville) Blimey, If they aint got saxes in heaven I\'ve got 5 of the damned things...
September 3rd, 2021 10:37
Autumnal Leaves (Saxon Crow) Copper crested crowns adorn natures statues heralding triumphant entry...
September 3rd, 2021 10:33
Grown (Rebmasters) Filled with life and unconditional love, this is the poetry of your heart....
September 2nd, 2021 03:15
Blighted (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully composed Fay. Sorrow and regret pace throughout, mocking each...
September 2nd, 2021 02:33
Unattainable (Lorna) The journey which brings each of us to where we will be is filled with the...
September 2nd, 2021 01:36
Music Revelation. (Goldfinch60) My laptop\'s speakers have recently stopped working so i cant enjoy your...
September 2nd, 2021 01:19
Behind Green Eyes (Saxon Crow) Reads like a dream of fulfillment any romantic, especially this one, could...
September 2nd, 2021 00:30
Worry. (Goldfinch60) Mother was a worrier, I vowed never to become so. Lately with much time on...
September 1st, 2021 01:34
Child Within Reunion (Flyingfish) This immediately took me to thoughts of the pleasure of my grandchildrens...
September 1st, 2021 01:30
Depth (The Incomplete Metaphor) There\'s a lot of truth there my friend. Somuch gets lost in converting...
August 31st, 2021 17:00
Abyss (Coyote) Makes sense in todays world too though doesn\'t it.
August 31st, 2021 16:59
The Cross (Matthew jay) Set you free from what?
August 31st, 2021 07:20
An Arm Around Me Sends Its Farewells (Jo) A time to move on, well expressed.
August 31st, 2021 04:55
Wreckage (HannahElisabeth) Sadness and loss will always leave us with the pain of unanswered...
August 31st, 2021 04:54
Mission Complete (Michael J. Schaeffer) A simple living design that leaves death and destruction and a bad...
August 31st, 2021 04:47
Hidden (Fay Slimm.) indeed, we are fed by the wild for too cossetted we can become. Lovely...
August 31st, 2021 04:41
To Be Continued Maybe (Neville) now there\'s an opening scene for a true life romance with a twist in...
August 31st, 2021 03:38
Starwatch. (Goldfinch60) And through your words seen each day here on MPS we can feel the love...
August 31st, 2021 03:30
Dream Street (Flyingfish) Took me into a vision of someone elses dreams here. Mine are nothing like...
August 30th, 2021 08:10
Dancing in the snow (HannahElisabeth) Many comforts and crutches come our way and the biggest life ruiners are...
August 30th, 2021 07:54
Edible Enemy (Jo) Comfort when all around is discomfort.
August 30th, 2021 07:48
Dumbness (Fay Slimm.) The power of words unsaid. More especially when certain words need to be...
August 30th, 2021 07:47
Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J) You took me through this with feeling and emotion shared. Arriving at,...
August 30th, 2021 07:40
August Garden (Lorna) Natures cycle on mother earth. So good to witness in these days of fear...
August 30th, 2021 07:33
Troubles, Trials, Trusting (Orchidee) The word of god you refer to here. Regurgitated by man or made up by...
August 30th, 2021 07:31
It\'s Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60) I was brought up under the influence of parents who had to keep up...
August 30th, 2021 07:27
Wanderlust (Lorna) Reminded me of a feeling which comes over me in waves now and again. Parts...
August 29th, 2021 12:59
Please be Gentle (Saxon Crow) Kind and honest words. To often I feel people skip these feelings and they...
August 29th, 2021 11:01
FIFTY YEARS FROM NOW (PETERHARRISON) LOL can you see the middle east living this way? Africa? Indian sub...
August 29th, 2021 06:38
The Dove (Dove) Lovely tale you tell. Birds do seem so remote from us humans, ever wary....
August 29th, 2021 04:55
A Permanent Embrace (Neville) Reads as a tale of forbidden love. A fairy tale of old which still haunts...
August 29th, 2021 04:47
Then Maybe (Jo) Oh, I\'ve had a lifetime of being as you describe. But it wasn\'t me, it...
August 29th, 2021 04:43
Pleasures (Fay Slimm.) Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are...
August 29th, 2021 04:39
Thankfulness. (Goldfinch60) Yes, coming to terms with life and its glories... mostly the simple day...
August 29th, 2021 04:31
Ticket, Please (DesertWords) Nice to read but your opening line states you searched.... then there\'s...
August 28th, 2021 18:32
Summer heat (HannahElisabeth) LOL at sin and repent. Man made concepts. Those sinning motivators of love...
August 28th, 2021 08:32
An Old Promise Well Kept (Neville) A haunting tale well written in a beguiling way where your readers mind...
August 28th, 2021 08:28
Treasured (Fay Slimm.) You capture how alive we are at such times. When such awareness and...
August 28th, 2021 08:25
Free To Be (Jo) Just be you, know yourself. Google a piece called Desiderata by Max...
August 28th, 2021 08:21
Original (Rebmasters) But the diversity of human intelligence flies in the face of this. Some...
August 28th, 2021 08:19
Missed You (Saxon Crow) This is a wonderful piece celebrating the return of a true friend... ...
August 28th, 2021 08:09
Guilt Is There. (Goldfinch60) Andy, what is love where is love? Love gave you the affection and caring...
August 28th, 2021 07:55
Bus Folk (AuburnScribbler) As a child and young man I used various bus services a lot and found them...
August 27th, 2021 10:55
Umpteenth heat wave since onset of summer... sizzles Delaware Valley today August 25th, 2021 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Will you be supporting measures to reduce and repair global warming at...
August 27th, 2021 10:48
Why? (Blue Violet) Oh yes, I have known it well, love\'s dilemma. Expressed by you so...
August 27th, 2021 09:33
Word Salad (Jerry Reynolds) Send me back to tomorrow Doppler!
August 27th, 2021 09:30
On Things Now Lost. (Beano) Such vision and image are our dreams made upon.
August 27th, 2021 08:17
Perfectly stitched (Myself and me) Thank goodness stitches heal. After healing, the brain plays a larger part...
August 27th, 2021 08:16
My Talk – 3 (Nafis Light) But Joker you so rarely join in here on MPS. The way this place really...
August 27th, 2021 08:14
You Are My Heart (Floreann) It\'s just a pump, but i can\'t give my central heating pump any of those...
August 27th, 2021 07:03
How Do You Begin? (Jo) Accept is indeed a very strange word if you cannot accept yourself for...
August 27th, 2021 05:25
Shut Up Shutting Up? (Orchidee) Good one Orchi. Keep on doing what you do, we all have the right to be who...
August 27th, 2021 05:09
Into The New Light. (Goldfinch60) A really thoughtful gift. Something which will remind them of a really...
August 27th, 2021 05:06
She Calls Them Tears (Neville) What better divide than an ocean when a divide protects a refuge. Or in...
August 27th, 2021 05:03
I Made A New Friend This Summer (Jo) It always surprises me to hear some folk do not like their own company. i...
August 26th, 2021 17:52
EIEIO (Coyote) Well I could not agree more heartily with you Coyote. I cast off...
August 26th, 2021 17:46
I have little talent for friendship (Trenz Pruca) I have been very much a loner without much need for being included in........
August 26th, 2021 17:43
Holding On (Jerry Reynolds) Oh yes, it would do that alright. Such truth crammed into three lines.
August 26th, 2021 17:41
Invasive (Fay Slimm.) Yep, love beats us into submission and once we have succumbed it imprisons...
August 26th, 2021 17:30
That Ideal Place. (Goldfinch60) That place is often where i dream.It can be todays world, my yesteryears...
August 26th, 2021 17:19
Flag of My Fathers (Coyote) I can feel this though I\'m a Brit miles away, only a passive observer of...
August 25th, 2021 12:16
ᴇᴘʜᴇᴍᴇʀᴀʟ ᴀs ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ (Dove) What point in visiting the ocean and not getting wet? Soak it up and...
August 25th, 2021 09:55
THE BUFFET (Jerry Reynolds) Ah, those stories in the squeek of old hinges. Tales told in flakes of...
August 25th, 2021 08:30
An Unexpected Chaos (Neville) Such are the memories of a tempestuous love.
August 25th, 2021 08:27
Cloistered (Fay Slimm.) The sea in all her changing guises with all her treacherous guilt, as...
August 25th, 2021 08:19

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