Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- My Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
Love, honour and respect. What greater aspects of one\'s personality could...
October 22nd, 2021 01:21 - In God’s Court (Thekkinkkattil)
God? Most religions load you with guilt while you are a child, so you\'re...
October 22nd, 2021 00:14 - Why? (The BlackShakespeare)
Life is full of questions. The unanswered ones find resolution in the...
October 21st, 2021 19:12 - TOGETHER (Seo Eun Hae)
Nicely put together piece.
October 21st, 2021 16:12 - All the Right Notes (HangingbyaHalo)
The honesty within this piece is outstanding. Excellent poetry. Should be...
October 21st, 2021 12:38 - When Autumn Breathed Her Silence (ADarkerMind)
Stunning dark poetry beautifully composed.
October 21st, 2021 10:27 - Mutation (Fay Slimm.)
And what a bow this flourish of autumnal beauty presents to our eye before...
October 21st, 2021 06:37 - Lamb-like (Orchidee)
Who\'s side was he on in 1066 at hastings? shouldda been king fido u know.
October 21st, 2021 06:32 - I\'ve Been A Good Boy Today. (Goldfinch60)
Pah!... you\'re just saving up for a bad day.
October 21st, 2021 06:29 - Two Days into Autumn (Neville)
I came home from a stay in hospital to a wonderful autumnal display on my...
October 21st, 2021 06:27 - Plucked Strings. (Goldfinch60)
I think you plucked the strings of all readers hearts with your words ...
October 20th, 2021 09:35 - My Cat (The BlackShakespeare)
LOL i love this story.
September 24th, 2021 11:43 - And So, The Battle Begins (Jo)
it\'s the christian way of things, ever since the crusades of the middle...
September 24th, 2021 09:26 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
Nature\'s tale. It\'s a cruel world of strange beauty on a certain level...
September 24th, 2021 03:40 - Nothing to Lose (Neville)
OOh I\'ve had mornings like that. Nervousness pervades the atmosphere.... ...
September 24th, 2021 03:20 - Favourable Farewell (Orchidee)
We are so lucky to have Tesco\'s in every town now. Poor paul had to...
September 24th, 2021 02:07 - Our One God. (Goldfinch60)
As you know, I stand alongside your appreciation of what is god and the...
September 24th, 2021 01:39 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards)
Flora don\'t stand too much study, it melts.
September 23rd, 2021 10:43 - Matins. (Beano)
Pure poetry, wonderful wordsmithry.
September 23rd, 2021 03:19 - Cold Showers (Mariel Ilagan)
Dunno quite how to respond to the chill of your piece today... ...
September 23rd, 2021 03:12 - La Traviata. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m envious of your enjoyment and appreciation of a musical place I have...
September 23rd, 2021 03:07 - Without Closure (Neville)
Well some old trinkets are just baggage after the lust has gone, the...
September 22nd, 2021 13:54 - First Day Of Autumn (Jerry Reynolds)
And long may that window show you the changes of season.
September 22nd, 2021 09:53 - This Heart (Fay Slimm.)
Stunning! Beautiful! Fay you have created a magnificent work of art here....
September 22nd, 2021 05:54 - Natures Gymnopodie. (Goldfinch60)
Satie\'s work is so simple yet so beautiful. Written for ease of play for...
September 22nd, 2021 05:27 - Generational Trauma (Mariel Ilagan)
There is so much of this around in society. In many ways we are lucky...
September 22nd, 2021 05:23 - The Untitled (Advaitha)
Oh it\'s great so see arrogance displayed so blatantly. Nice expose.
September 21st, 2021 12:15 - Fall Tanka (Jerry Reynolds)
Succinct poetry of the beautiful season of the fall. Or autumn as we call...
September 21st, 2021 07:39 - Reminders (Fay Slimm.)
Oh i lazily walked that lane from low tide through the afternoon drinking...
September 21st, 2021 05:30 - A Taste Well Shared (Neville)
For the essence of love\'s spirit has twinned them into harmonic intimacy...
September 21st, 2021 05:23 - Welcome (Jennifer Martin)
Oh my Jennifer Martin. This is the second of your poems i have read and I...
September 21st, 2021 03:55 - Ever Flowing (Jennifer Martin)
I\'m so pleased i found this. It is quite quite beautiful poetry beyond...
September 21st, 2021 03:51 - O My Hopeful Soul! (IAli)
These words become so meaningful when an older person like me thinks of...
September 21st, 2021 03:20 - ADHD (Mariel Ilagan)
In a word... Brilliant. Loved this to bits. Straight into my favourites.
September 21st, 2021 03:14 - The Further Down, The Less You Can See (Jo)
Hmmm if this is for real - a part of your life ... then...
When you\'re...
September 21st, 2021 03:03 - Shiver (Rebmasters)
Great imagery.
September 21st, 2021 03:01 - Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
The light IS with you Andy. And you share it with us all. You bring a zest...
September 21st, 2021 02:19 - Crystal (Methmi Mandara)
Methmi, you\'ve posted ten poems on here but your profile page reveals you...
September 21st, 2021 00:25 - That Green Ring (Flyingfish)
Great mystery in this, thrilling, suspenseful, well composed.
September 21st, 2021 00:23 - please don\'t tell her (HannahElisabeth)
Wonderful to have friends who you both enjoy and admire.
A very personal...
September 20th, 2021 08:25 - Bridges (Fay Slimm.)
Quite amazing how rifts can be bridged by the love on either side of a...
September 20th, 2021 07:59 - 40 of me 2 of her (Poetic Dan)
Happy birthdays to ya both. Beauty and the beast. May your next decade...
September 20th, 2021 07:54 - For Reference Purposes Only (Neville)
Such words of import would surely be filed in readily available scrolls of...
September 20th, 2021 07:39 - Woodpigeon And Me. (Goldfinch60)
It ain\'t over till the fat lady sings m8. There\'s plenty life left in...
September 20th, 2021 03:31 - Attachment Theory (HannahElisabeth)
How frightening the outside world can appear when the intimacy of our home...
September 19th, 2021 18:12 - Wind Powered Submarines. (Doggerel Dave)
Now Aussies can take our (brit) well practiced archery two fingered salute...
September 19th, 2021 07:06 - bliss (Basiclly)
Cor blimey, your profile page shows you don\'t read other peoples poetry...
September 19th, 2021 06:56 - Crown (Jo)
Till some f*kker knocks it off lol.
September 19th, 2021 06:54 - Favours (Fay Slimm.)
That gal on that there horse is beyond the need for wooing.... She\'s...
September 19th, 2021 05:00 - Someone More Golden (Neville)
Hmm i think i begin to know all these moods Neville. For my personna...
September 19th, 2021 04:12 - Hopeful Harvest (Orchidee)
Your god also visits earth with death through floods, famine, birth...
September 19th, 2021 03:14 - CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards)
Taint a permanent boundary though is it. Looking around the perimeters of...
September 19th, 2021 03:13 - Who Dunnit? (Goldfinch60)
Oh that no good Fifi..... she was a pooey poodle when i encountered her....
September 19th, 2021 01:15 - Control (Mariel Ilagan)
We all need periods like you describe so well.
For some it\'s a recovery...
September 19th, 2021 01:10 - You are Beautiful! (IAli)
Lovely meaningful words. How sad it is that there are so many among us who...
September 19th, 2021 00:53 - This Moment is Already as Lost as the Past (Jeff Andrew)
Interesting to read your words, your questions posed. of course I have no...
September 19th, 2021 00:49 - Heidi, I\'d choose you. (PaulG6)
To find someone so special in maturity is a gift to treasure. And clearly,...
September 19th, 2021 00:38 - Pauline (Randyjohnson71)
Should make a story like that into a country (or similar) song.
September 18th, 2021 11:22 - Her (The Anonymous Poet)
Love is a two-way entity. One-way it is only desire or infatuation.
September 18th, 2021 09:14 - Up Up Away (1uhleeuh)
What god are you praying to?
September 18th, 2021 09:09 - An Empty Facade (Simone01)
What would you rather be, the facade or you.
Let the world see the real...
September 18th, 2021 09:08 - Who Knows ? (Fay Slimm.)
England declares war on Germany. How different could it have been had we...
September 18th, 2021 06:24 - Scarper (Neville)
Wham Bam thank you ma\'am.
OMG let me outta here before she says i love...
September 18th, 2021 04:46 - Blighty (Neville)
Cannon fodder for old boy generals who\'d still have had \"the lads\"...
September 18th, 2021 03:51 - The Gravyard. (Goldfinch60)
Nobody writes \'em like you do though Andy.
Have you decided on an...
September 18th, 2021 01:25 - Better as a daydream (HannahElisabeth)
Isn\'t that how love is though, initial attraction etc fades and we...
September 18th, 2021 01:19 - Side Piece Chronicle J.H. 2 (Jauntypoet93)
Hmm good job i read the comment from the author otherwise..... I\'d be...
September 17th, 2021 15:02 - Everybody\'s sorry lately (IamAperson)
Very delicate but i know how the word sorry could never be enough. it...
September 17th, 2021 14:53 - Drive (Rebmasters)
That eternal search for other-ness which we feel when we want to reach out...
September 17th, 2021 14:49 - Don\'t let the buggers beat you... (BusyB)
The wonders of what poetry can do for us with its cathartic ways. More...
September 17th, 2021 14:43 - Hard To Read (Jo)
Nicely composed. Some people are hard to read because what you see is a...
September 17th, 2021 14:39 - Meant to be? (The Anonymous Poet)
Romantic love is prescious beautiful but often cruel way to learn about...
September 17th, 2021 14:34 - The Country Sighed (Cygnus X-1)
Lovely poetry and strong with a timely question cleverly posed.
September 17th, 2021 14:29 - We are all Jack (Poetic Dan)
The second line throws me completely, or is there a typo in there?
Yep,...
September 17th, 2021 09:07 - Drifter (Jerry Reynolds)
Home is a many faceted concept for me, maybe because i had so many homes...
September 17th, 2021 08:59 - Loving, Doing Good, Lending (Orchidee)
Wow... christian moneylenders AGAIN! didnt jesus have some moneylenders...
September 17th, 2021 04:11 - Shark Cloud. (Goldfinch60)
On a blue sky day with cotton wool clouds, where do the clouds...
September 17th, 2021 03:03 - Technology Passed. (Goldfinch60)
Electric cars bug me at the moment Andy. It\'s so fkkn middle class. You...
September 16th, 2021 14:30 - What you see is not all of me (Poetic Dan)
Know what mate, reading your piece today has just made me realise...
September 16th, 2021 14:16 - Question (Jerry Reynolds)
Cor blimey Jerry, love\'s asked a load more than that from me m8..... ...
September 16th, 2021 14:06 - Adorning (Fay Slimm.)
Pixels my dear pixels. LOL (sorry bout the sexist part of that).
Hey,...
September 16th, 2021 14:04 - Love (Hemenasansol)
Love is teaching you something good. It is a long and often difficult...
September 15th, 2021 17:52 - Yesterday, Tomorrow, Today. (Goldfinch60)
I guess that is just what love teaches us. And I agree wholeheartedly.
A...
September 15th, 2021 02:27 - Freedom Found. (Goldfinch60)
I trust you too enjoyed that place, company and found freedom therein.
September 14th, 2021 21:39 - Path (Jerry Reynolds)
Now i have retired and time on my hands i know the truth of this piece,...
September 14th, 2021 21:36 - Good at or Good for poetry is at the core (Poetic Dan)
The purest gift must surely be to be happy and content. Those who make...
September 14th, 2021 08:25 - Serene Security (Orchidee)
Oh goodness, So your lord now lives in a house does he hmmmm does he pay...
September 14th, 2021 02:47 - Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond)
jun gibbl da fok weeg
September 14th, 2021 01:01 - You Are Always There... (Maira)
THis lovely. We all need that voice.
September 14th, 2021 00:30 - Dowlish Wake (Goldfinch60)
Our own wonderful land. It\'s the reason why i go for my drives, to be out...
September 13th, 2021 01:18 - Universal Truth #1 (Saxon Crow)
Such universal truths are self evident. I would like to start a movement...
September 12th, 2021 00:15 - A September Afternoon (Jayasree)
Lovely picture you paint here in both your poem and your author\'s...
September 11th, 2021 23:46 - Today, Tomorrow , Forever (Cygnus X-1)
Yes you capture here how love does keep us young inside. Enjoyed reading...
September 11th, 2021 20:14 - Fateful Morn (Jennifer Martin)
WEll done for posting this.
With our final armed withdrawl from the...
September 11th, 2021 20:10 - Heavy handed (HannahElisabeth)
One reason I never had a tattoo on my body not so beautiful..... i have...
September 11th, 2021 19:10 - May I (Myself and me)
REminded me of the rewards of talking with people of many years life who...
September 11th, 2021 19:03 - DOWNTOWN GIRL…09/11/2001 (Laura🌻)
I felt your words as if it were a friend of mine. In this we, the small...
September 11th, 2021 18:59 - From Darkness To Light (Orchidee)
I saw the title and thought.... oh good Orchi\'s found the light...
September 11th, 2021 03:23 - Unsaid. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh wow! I really like this little gem.
It\'s favourites time !! lol
September 11th, 2021 02:55 - Fablon (Neville)
Great analogy Neville. Fablon, she looks great at first take but the...
September 11th, 2021 02:54
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