Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- please don\'t tell her (HannahElisabeth)
Wonderful to have friends who you both enjoy and admire.
A very personal...
September 20th, 2021 08:25 - Bridges (Fay Slimm.)
Quite amazing how rifts can be bridged by the love on either side of a...
September 20th, 2021 07:59 - 40 of me 2 of her (Poetic Dan)
Happy birthdays to ya both. Beauty and the beast. May your next decade...
September 20th, 2021 07:54 - For Reference Purposes Only (Neville)
Such words of import would surely be filed in readily available scrolls of...
September 20th, 2021 07:39 - Woodpigeon And Me. (Goldfinch60)
It ain\'t over till the fat lady sings m8. There\'s plenty life left in...
September 20th, 2021 03:31 - Attachment Theory (HannahElisabeth)
How frightening the outside world can appear when the intimacy of our home...
September 19th, 2021 18:12 - Wind Powered Submarines. (Doggerel Dave)
Now Aussies can take our (brit) well practiced archery two fingered salute...
September 19th, 2021 07:06 - bliss (Basiclly)
Cor blimey, your profile page shows you don\'t read other peoples poetry...
September 19th, 2021 06:56 - Crown (Jo)
Till some f*kker knocks it off lol.
September 19th, 2021 06:54 - Favours (Fay Slimm.)
That gal on that there horse is beyond the need for wooing.... She\'s...
September 19th, 2021 05:00 - Someone More Golden (Neville)
Hmm i think i begin to know all these moods Neville. For my personna...
September 19th, 2021 04:12 - Hopeful Harvest (Orchidee)
Your god also visits earth with death through floods, famine, birth...
September 19th, 2021 03:14 - CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards)
Taint a permanent boundary though is it. Looking around the perimeters of...
September 19th, 2021 03:13 - Who Dunnit? (Goldfinch60)
Oh that no good Fifi..... she was a pooey poodle when i encountered her....
September 19th, 2021 01:15 - Control (Mariel Ilagan)
We all need periods like you describe so well.
For some it\'s a recovery...
September 19th, 2021 01:10 - You are Beautiful! (IAli)
Lovely meaningful words. How sad it is that there are so many among us who...
September 19th, 2021 00:53 - This Moment is Already as Lost as the Past (Jeff Andrew)
Interesting to read your words, your questions posed. of course I have no...
September 19th, 2021 00:49 - Heidi, I\'d choose you. (PaulG6)
To find someone so special in maturity is a gift to treasure. And clearly,...
September 19th, 2021 00:38 - Pauline (Randyjohnson71)
Should make a story like that into a country (or similar) song.
September 18th, 2021 11:22 - Her (The Anonymous Poet)
Love is a two-way entity. One-way it is only desire or infatuation.
September 18th, 2021 09:14 - Up Up Away (1uhleeuh)
What god are you praying to?
September 18th, 2021 09:09 - An Empty Facade (Simone01)
What would you rather be, the facade or you.
Let the world see the real...
September 18th, 2021 09:08 - Who Knows ? (Fay Slimm.)
England declares war on Germany. How different could it have been had we...
September 18th, 2021 06:24 - Scarper (Neville)
Wham Bam thank you ma\'am.
OMG let me outta here before she says i love...
September 18th, 2021 04:46 - Blighty (Neville)
Cannon fodder for old boy generals who\'d still have had \"the lads\"...
September 18th, 2021 03:51 - The Gravyard. (Goldfinch60)
Nobody writes \'em like you do though Andy.
Have you decided on an...
September 18th, 2021 01:25 - Better as a daydream (HannahElisabeth)
Isn\'t that how love is though, initial attraction etc fades and we...
September 18th, 2021 01:19 - Side Piece Chronicle J.H. 2 (Jauntypoet93)
Hmm good job i read the comment from the author otherwise..... I\'d be...
September 17th, 2021 15:02 - Everybody\'s sorry lately (IamAperson)
Very delicate but i know how the word sorry could never be enough. it...
September 17th, 2021 14:53 - Drive (Rebmasters)
That eternal search for other-ness which we feel when we want to reach out...
September 17th, 2021 14:49 - Don\'t let the buggers beat you... (BusyB)
The wonders of what poetry can do for us with its cathartic ways. More...
September 17th, 2021 14:43 - Hard To Read (Jo)
Nicely composed. Some people are hard to read because what you see is a...
September 17th, 2021 14:39 - Meant to be? (The Anonymous Poet)
Romantic love is prescious beautiful but often cruel way to learn about...
September 17th, 2021 14:34 - The Country Sighed (Cygnus X-1)
Lovely poetry and strong with a timely question cleverly posed.
September 17th, 2021 14:29 - We are all Jack (Poetic Dan)
The second line throws me completely, or is there a typo in there?
Yep,...
September 17th, 2021 09:07 - Drifter (Jerry Reynolds)
Home is a many faceted concept for me, maybe because i had so many homes...
September 17th, 2021 08:59 - Loving, Doing Good, Lending (Orchidee)
Wow... christian moneylenders AGAIN! didnt jesus have some moneylenders...
September 17th, 2021 04:11 - Shark Cloud. (Goldfinch60)
On a blue sky day with cotton wool clouds, where do the clouds...
September 17th, 2021 03:03 - Technology Passed. (Goldfinch60)
Electric cars bug me at the moment Andy. It\'s so fkkn middle class. You...
September 16th, 2021 14:30 - What you see is not all of me (Poetic Dan)
Know what mate, reading your piece today has just made me realise...
September 16th, 2021 14:16 - Question (Jerry Reynolds)
Cor blimey Jerry, love\'s asked a load more than that from me m8..... ...
September 16th, 2021 14:06 - Adorning (Fay Slimm.)
Pixels my dear pixels. LOL (sorry bout the sexist part of that).
Hey,...
September 16th, 2021 14:04 - Love (Hemenasansol)
Love is teaching you something good. It is a long and often difficult...
September 15th, 2021 17:52 - Yesterday, Tomorrow, Today. (Goldfinch60)
I guess that is just what love teaches us. And I agree wholeheartedly.
A...
September 15th, 2021 02:27 - Freedom Found. (Goldfinch60)
I trust you too enjoyed that place, company and found freedom therein.
September 14th, 2021 21:39 - Path (Jerry Reynolds)
Now i have retired and time on my hands i know the truth of this piece,...
September 14th, 2021 21:36 - Good at or Good for poetry is at the core (Poetic Dan)
The purest gift must surely be to be happy and content. Those who make...
September 14th, 2021 08:25 - Serene Security (Orchidee)
Oh goodness, So your lord now lives in a house does he hmmmm does he pay...
September 14th, 2021 02:47 - Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond)
jun gibbl da fok weeg
September 14th, 2021 01:01 - You Are Always There... (Maira)
THis lovely. We all need that voice.
September 14th, 2021 00:30 - Dowlish Wake (Goldfinch60)
Our own wonderful land. It\'s the reason why i go for my drives, to be out...
September 13th, 2021 01:18 - Universal Truth #1 (Saxon Crow)
Such universal truths are self evident. I would like to start a movement...
September 12th, 2021 00:15 - A September Afternoon (Jayasree)
Lovely picture you paint here in both your poem and your author\'s...
September 11th, 2021 23:46 - Today, Tomorrow , Forever (Cygnus X-1)
Yes you capture here how love does keep us young inside. Enjoyed reading...
September 11th, 2021 20:14 - Fateful Morn (Jennifer Martin)
WEll done for posting this.
With our final armed withdrawl from the...
September 11th, 2021 20:10 - Heavy handed (HannahElisabeth)
One reason I never had a tattoo on my body not so beautiful..... i have...
September 11th, 2021 19:10 - May I (Myself and me)
REminded me of the rewards of talking with people of many years life who...
September 11th, 2021 19:03 - DOWNTOWN GIRL…09/11/2001 (Laura🌻)
I felt your words as if it were a friend of mine. In this we, the small...
September 11th, 2021 18:59 - From Darkness To Light (Orchidee)
I saw the title and thought.... oh good Orchi\'s found the light...
September 11th, 2021 03:23 - Unsaid. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh wow! I really like this little gem.
It\'s favourites time !! lol
September 11th, 2021 02:55 - Fablon (Neville)
Great analogy Neville. Fablon, she looks great at first take but the...
September 11th, 2021 02:54 - Just Waiting For Me. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s something about a river, probably it\'s steady permanent...
September 11th, 2021 01:30 - People Always Prefer Rainbows (Saxon Crow)
Oh most definitely, I mean if it\'s raining there\'s a chance Orchi will...
September 11th, 2021 00:41 - Hearts (The Loving Poet)
Please ask your god (thats the one who you state doesn\'t make any...
September 10th, 2021 21:05 - Narcissist (Neville)
LOL we used to call it \'lead guitarist syndrome\' in the group musicians...
September 10th, 2021 12:03 - Autumn Comes Running. (Fay Slimm.)
Heralded by amber leaf-fall the shudder of winters proximity taints these...
September 10th, 2021 02:54 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
LOL a really good laugh ... thank you.
September 10th, 2021 00:37 - The Darkest Place (Saxon Crow)
An honest friend is a sweet place to go.
September 10th, 2021 00:36 - The moon and her wolf (HannahElisabeth)
Death is so personal. Your piece is full of personal and beautifully...
September 9th, 2021 13:57 - I Don\'t Wanna Talk About It (GiraffineUploads)
The storm will pass and you will look out from the tree and see things you...
September 9th, 2021 13:50 - maybe (Dusk arising)
You know what Teddy, You are just so refreshing and always so supportive...
September 9th, 2021 07:05 - Finding (Fay Slimm.)
That fairly describes how inspiration falls and mists clear as one\'s...
September 9th, 2021 04:46 - Lets Sing Again! (Goldfinch60)
Youngest of four i remember us all watching chubby and doing his dance...
September 9th, 2021 04:34 - Oh, Georgia (HannahElisabeth)
Never been but so many films have brough us Georgia both sweltering and...
September 9th, 2021 04:31 - A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry (Saxon Crow)
A definite odour of a late parrot pervades the whole post saxon.
Bluddy...
September 9th, 2021 04:27 - 𝒜𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓏𝒶𝑔𝑜𝓇𝒶𝓅𝒽𝑜𝒷𝒾𝒶 (Dove)
Will your poetry live on after you Dove. There are ways to ensure it will...
September 8th, 2021 10:19 - Fused (Fay Slimm.)
OMG put that cover back on the fusebox... the sparks flying in your...
September 8th, 2021 06:00 - My Lotus and Me (Neville)
The wheel came off mine on a nasty bend....... on another occasion i...
September 8th, 2021 05:57 - Prayer Pointers (Orchidee)
What prayer would you suggest for a child to utter in the hope that the...
September 8th, 2021 02:37 - Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60)
Yes I agree but to be fair... look what unforseen covid has done to...
September 8th, 2021 01:28 - O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave)
LOL so many of us will know the thoughts expressed here having seen...
September 8th, 2021 00:40 - Decisions (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy.
I think it goes hand in hand with \"let us not judge a...
September 7th, 2021 00:59 - Murderers Lament (Saxon Crow)
Yea forsooth though thee doth walk thine deathly path through woodland\'s...
September 7th, 2021 00:48 - Metamorphosis (HannahElisabeth)
To truly know ourselves we have to realise, to see and accept our...
September 6th, 2021 19:51 - Slow Train. (Goldfinch60)
Evesham of course sits on the OWW railway. Oxford, Worcester and...
September 6th, 2021 01:35 - Familiar. (Fay Slimm.)
All those old familiar places.
AS a kid I was shunted all over the...
September 5th, 2021 02:47 - यारियां (Rahul verma (Rv))
(à¿á) what are you hiding?
September 5th, 2021 02:37 - Restful Relationship (Orchidee)
Is this about all the peadophiles in the churches?
Why don\'t churches...
September 5th, 2021 02:35 - The Stars are Jellyfish (Saxon Crow)
Mushrooms mate, thats wot they are and the moons a huge toad\'s tool.
I...
September 5th, 2021 02:32 - Wasted Day - Almost. (Goldfinch60)
Back in the 70\'s i was a rep and knew every plumber in Evesham.... there...
September 5th, 2021 02:20 - Elsewhere (Fay Slimm.)
A candlelit dinner for two has such romance. Captured here undoubtedly....
September 4th, 2021 14:26 - Look At The Moon (Goldfinch60)
And a beautiful piece of music to play as you let your lunar thoughts go...
September 4th, 2021 14:21 - Stained Glass (HannahElisabeth)
You phrased that so well. Many of us beyond a certain age and each with...
September 3rd, 2021 16:26 - Paresaan nahi thik hoon mein (Black_diamond)
Booscht mkit takki gibborn sa yun.
September 3rd, 2021 11:57 - STONES KNOW (Fay Slimm.)
Ye tickled my roots with this fine ditty my deario. The family name is...
September 3rd, 2021 10:46 - Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60)
Funnily enough farmer Giles was just saying how his little coq managed to...
September 3rd, 2021 10:41 - I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville)
Blimey, If they aint got saxes in heaven I\'ve got 5 of the damned things...
September 3rd, 2021 10:37 - Autumnal Leaves (Saxon Crow)
Copper crested crowns adorn natures statues heralding triumphant entry...
September 3rd, 2021 10:33 - Grown (Rebmasters)
Filled with life and unconditional love, this is the poetry of your heart....
September 2nd, 2021 03:15 - Blighted (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully composed Fay. Sorrow and regret pace throughout, mocking each...
September 2nd, 2021 02:33
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