Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Gospel-Givers (Orchidee)
Come on Orchi, we wanna hear you sing this one. Post a recording. (my...
August 18th, 2021 02:45 - Their Last Day. (Goldfinch60)
Shows what a great and appreciative watcher of people you are sir.
August 18th, 2021 01:53 - Through your eyes (Thusa)
quote \"you can\'t hide your lying eyes and your smile is a thin...
August 17th, 2021 13:47 - Blue Moons (SheWasTheSun)
Gave me a big smile. Nice one.
August 17th, 2021 13:37 - Heart beat (MMadrid)
And life is shared by all living things. So easily we overlook how...
August 17th, 2021 13:36 - Praise Prominence (Orchidee)
Yer only supposed to blow the bluddy doors off!
August 17th, 2021 13:33 - from this angle (Rebmasters)
Well expressed, the abstract of those quiet shared moments when love is...
August 17th, 2021 13:32 - I Just Want Someone (Jo)
Yes rebmasters is right, that first stanza is very powerful and could be a...
August 17th, 2021 13:27 - Nonsense to Help Me Sleep (Coyote)
I would have cheated and tried to convince everyone that turquoise rhymes...
August 17th, 2021 11:17 - You were too pure, so they sent you me. (Kozamu)
Beautiful wisdom.
The most touching poem I have read in a very long time...
August 17th, 2021 10:04 - Us (Fay Slimm.)
That \'within loves halo\' feeling brings forth our wonderment about our...
August 17th, 2021 09:54 - Low is still a flow (Poetic Dan)
You ain\'t doing so bad are you old son? Another excellent video, what a...
August 17th, 2021 09:45 - Elusive Blues (Neville)
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic...
August 17th, 2021 09:36 - Lonely People. (Goldfinch60)
So right you wise old bean. I live a lone life but, happy with my own...
August 17th, 2021 09:29 - Temptation. (Prettygirl412)
That\'s the way it should be when electricity flows between two people....
August 16th, 2021 19:38 - the glass cages (Cosmacpan)
As big a lie as \'up there someone knows everything?\' Because someone...
August 16th, 2021 19:35 - Life changing experience (Mitchi)
Many life moulding events can form from the events which shake us to the...
August 16th, 2021 19:29 - I’m ok (Corn on the macabre)
Usually i find rhyming poetry quite \'iffy\' but today your piece has...
August 16th, 2021 16:11 - Untitled 1 (Coyote)
Untitled huh? I\'d venture a title for this fine piece of yours today :-...
August 16th, 2021 12:47 - Green Fingers (Claudia)
A caged bird or tiger is no longer that wonderful wild spirit but rather a...
August 16th, 2021 12:04 - I Am Not Lying – 2 (Nafis Light)
Your heart has been smiling through a mist of good humour penned by you...
August 16th, 2021 11:57 - You\'ll be her and i\'ll be him (Blue Poet)
Got to admit that I don\'t know half of the characters you named in your...
August 16th, 2021 10:58 - Balancing act (Poetic Dan)
Whatever it is, be it a shape, a mood a tear, a joke or joy, yes, whatever...
August 16th, 2021 08:33 - Words (Jayasree)
Where would we be without those fine words. Fine phrases we stitch and...
August 16th, 2021 07:39 - Soggy slugs (BusyB)
I\'ve never considered that a slug might smell. Maybe i\'m immune to the...
August 16th, 2021 07:08 - Alt. End #6 (aka The Truth of it all) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Humpty TRUMPTY promised a wall.
But humpty trumpty took a great...
August 16th, 2021 07:05 - Incomputable (Jo)
Beguiling, but my thoughts turned to the environment. Beauty of the...
August 16th, 2021 06:08 - Sunday Shivers (Lorna)
The eerie knowledge that one, alone, is heading passively toward the end...
August 16th, 2021 05:34 - Yellows (Fay Slimm.)
That yellow hue proves the sun is shining somewhere. I remember one...
August 16th, 2021 05:24 - Thanks to Covid (Neville)
I blame that washing machine I bought in 2018 for being secretly made in...
August 16th, 2021 05:18 - Live it: your way! (L. B. Mek)
Cor blimey LBM you took me on a journet here, from pillar to post. I dont...
August 16th, 2021 05:14 - the air was warm (Rebmasters)
There\'s a lot of love and contentment within those lines today.
August 16th, 2021 05:09 - HOW MANY! (Goldfinch60)
And how is the wrist holding up to this punishment. Now let me see, at one...
August 16th, 2021 05:07 - Surely... (Lonelyraccoon)
Defeat.No,... there is triumph in your words and the more you write then...
August 14th, 2021 05:27 - Waste Not. (Fay Slimm.)
Hmm I\'m lacking all those things at the moment but I know how well you...
August 14th, 2021 04:49 - Covertly Covid (Neville)
There are many survivors of terrible episodes in their lives. All too...
August 14th, 2021 03:34 - Clouds Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
\"I\'ve looked at clouds from both sides now, from up and down and still...
August 14th, 2021 03:29 - Love Hiccups (Saxon Crow)
Now you\'ve given me an excuse to write about my emotional...
August 14th, 2021 03:24 - Joy Awaits (Dove)
It is indeed a great place to visit. I\'m seen there regularly for my...
August 14th, 2021 03:19 - Father Hood (PoeticBiscuit)
May you grow together, learning of life together and remain best of...
August 13th, 2021 15:17 - Soli - (A Trio of Limericks) (AuburnScribbler)
I replied to dear old soli
digging his poetic quarry
upon my bended...
August 13th, 2021 15:15 - In the Beginning... (Coyote)
LOL, my fears that this was going to be some religious bullshit were soon...
August 13th, 2021 15:09 - IT\'S A SMALL WORLD. (The elder poet)
Dunno where such a suggestion that these aren\'t shared celestial bodies...
August 13th, 2021 15:00 - Alt. End #3 (aka It doesn\'t happen to me) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Here in the UK \'to spend a penny\' is to urinate. (you used to have to...
August 13th, 2021 14:54 - Business of Life (Jerry Reynolds)
If music be the....... then dance on and on and on.
August 13th, 2021 14:49 - The Lady In White. (Goldfinch60)
Spellbinding aren\'t they when seen like that. One cannot help but admire.
August 13th, 2021 07:03 - Jigsaw (Saxon Crow)
A really excellent composition Saxon. I enjoyed reading this very much and...
August 13th, 2021 07:01 - Last Call (Coyote)
A well constructed story throughout. One night of heartache.
August 12th, 2021 14:09 - Purrfectly Batman (Dove)
Come into the barn dear pussy cat and let us hang upside down together.
August 12th, 2021 14:04 - You can (Sandra)
Here here, plse have a peep at my post \'easy\' on here today which really...
August 12th, 2021 13:52 - Brave (For Laura) (Lorna)
Faith sees us through.
August 12th, 2021 04:52 - Brooding (Fay Slimm.)
Cor streuth gal.... I\'m not going out if it\'s going to be like that all...
August 12th, 2021 04:49 - To Like Or Not To Like (Orchidee)
That like button is a bit contravertial. It has been applied to every poem...
August 12th, 2021 04:40 - Laughter All Around. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like you have a ball after a ball of ball bashing. You life is a...
August 12th, 2021 04:35 - Yearning (Saxon Crow)
A dilemma indeed but I learned the hard way to just move on. The what...
August 12th, 2021 04:30 - Time (Jerry Reynolds)
A delightful contradiction which forces one to spend time to think about...
August 11th, 2021 09:49 - Otherness (Fay Slimm.)
There is so much in your post today and reaches the core of this solo.
So...
August 11th, 2021 09:44 - LOVE (Nadine)
Love is a silken thread with which we embroider magnificence upon the...
August 11th, 2021 09:33 - Perfectly Hued (Neville)
An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but........
August 11th, 2021 09:28 - Words Left Unsaid (Saxon Crow)
A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.
August 11th, 2021 09:06 - That Music. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful music, beautiful thoughts.
August 11th, 2021 07:39 - Gone (Lelae)
Really depicts how sadness recalls so much when someone so loved is no...
August 10th, 2021 11:23 - Shadows (Lorna)
Love it.
August 10th, 2021 09:35 - Upon a Time Once (Neville)
Simple but full of reverie. You\'ve caught the true magic of writing few...
August 10th, 2021 09:32 - Such Lavish (Fay Slimm.)
Feel the love of approaching autumn in your words today country girl. How...
August 10th, 2021 09:29 - Disposable People. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, cannon fodder as they say. It seems one cannot defend against the...
August 10th, 2021 02:47 - Lovesight (Fay Slimm.)
The shudder of recognition as a soulmate from previous life crosses our...
August 9th, 2021 06:34 - An Unfinished Summer (Neville)
... till time and life\'s love moved us on and along into the unknown,...
August 9th, 2021 06:28 - For the love of clouds (Saxon Crow)
May a cloudburst only bring you springtimes dance of growth and good...
August 9th, 2021 06:20 - Life With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Natures golden reward, autumn, a reminder that seasons of life are...
August 9th, 2021 06:18 - And Now (Fay Slimm.)
Such a concise poetic passing of the seasons.
Exquisite. One for my
August 8th, 2021 10:11 - Collusion (Fay Slimm.)
oooh and ouch Fay. A bit contravertial in this weird global july/august...
August 4th, 2021 13:34 - What is a Woman (M.E.M.)
I offer a wish that such freedom were there for every woman. Sadly, in our...
August 4th, 2021 08:44 - Love Is There. (Goldfinch60)
Your way of being is a lesson to us all Andy. A lesson worth taking home...
August 4th, 2021 07:56 - Ferment (Fay Slimm.)
The rare commodity of forgiving oft finds its achilles heel in the...
July 30th, 2021 12:19 - Croquet At Broadwas. (Goldfinch60)
Its marvellous what a bit of socialising can do.
July 30th, 2021 12:03 - Perspectives (Saxon Crow)
Describes the cycle of a womans thoughts rather well, but theyre not often...
July 30th, 2021 12:01 - The meadow (BusyB)
Good job you werent having a touch of the udder.
July 29th, 2021 05:55 - Possessing Possessions (Orchidee)
Hmm if this is full of christian spirit then why are christian churches so...
July 29th, 2021 05:52 - Sisters (Fay Slimm.)
Made me think of my two granddaughters and how different they are yet how...
July 29th, 2021 05:49 - Almost a Very Nearly (Neville)
Waves tickling at the bow, she\'ll have her way, making way when that...
July 29th, 2021 05:45 - The Light Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Did you wear a spacesuit? Im still shielding.
July 29th, 2021 05:42 - Sounds of the Sixties (Saxon Crow)
I\'m enjoying \'summer in the city\'
July 29th, 2021 05:38 - A Haibun Odyssey (Jerry Reynolds)
Initially i read this enthralling piece not knowing what a haibun or a...
July 28th, 2021 08:28 - Relax (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Yep, yurn these days of enforced home stay into something positive. A...
July 28th, 2021 07:34 - Seeing more Deeply, Seems Pointless (Flyingfish)
When you consider all the money being spent to research the questions...
July 28th, 2021 05:57 - Penitent Prose (Orchidee)
What have you been up to sinner?
July 28th, 2021 05:52 - Being together, always (BusyB)
Beautiful. Only a dream for me but a daily reality for the lucky. You say...
July 28th, 2021 05:51 - No Sweat (Neville)
I wore my sisters dress as a nine year old for a school project. It was...
July 28th, 2021 05:03 - A Fork in the Road (Saxon Crow)
You describe well the torment of being torn in two directions when the...
July 28th, 2021 04:57 - Sit In The Garden. (Goldfinch60)
Your romantic soul shines from your poetry and I know from where comes...
July 28th, 2021 04:53 - Weight (Fay Slimm.)
So true. The purposefulness of life falls away when ones love affair ends...
July 28th, 2021 04:47 - Blackrock (Fay Slimm.)
One imagines that with satelite navigation fears of blackrock are...
July 27th, 2021 08:51 - RIP Boffington Town (Saxon Crow)
Hopefully tales of Boffington will continue to be heard along with its...
July 27th, 2021 08:24 - Just Conversing. (Goldfinch60)
Chats have become rare since shielding/lockdown, thnk good ness for the...
July 27th, 2021 08:21 - Walking the dog (Jerry Reynolds)
Beware lest the chain becomes a choker.
July 26th, 2021 10:52 - Beached Whale Blues (Neville)
Such an event for many in parts of this wonderous world means a bounty of...
July 26th, 2021 09:33 - Awesome (Fay Slimm.)
Such poetic fruit from your storm tree. Dare i shelter neath such a...
July 26th, 2021 09:29 - From the Corner (Jack Cohen)
Great stuff! Well composed and very entertaining.
July 26th, 2021 01:30 - Dreams All at Sea (Flyingfish)
Enjoyed reading this well written piece.
July 26th, 2021 01:28
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