Comments on community poems by dusk arising



  • Do I Qualify? (Goldfinch60) Will your back and legs allow you to get in and out of a low down sports...
    August 25th, 2021 08:10
  • Perpetual Insanity (Coyote) Beginning with the romance of a tapestry and musketeer you deftly...
    August 24th, 2021 13:21
  • Perception (Fay Slimm.) Even the greatest shall know temporary relevance in their everyday...
    August 24th, 2021 13:06
  • When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville) Was it a WW2 shell? Some hear only their own thoughts and plans falling...
    August 24th, 2021 03:49
  • Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60) OMG dont make poetry a chore sir! In my world poetry has a tide beyond...
    August 24th, 2021 03:45
  • Superman (Anthony Esposito) LOL It sounds like how USA would like to think it is regarded in places...
    August 23rd, 2021 09:55
  • Attention to de shell (Poetic Dan) Yep, plenty more to say about the world around you i.e. away from self.
    August 23rd, 2021 07:49
  • Impatient (Fay Slimm.) Well rip my nets on rocks if this aint a saucy missive. She cant wait till...
    August 23rd, 2021 07:44
  • The Fullest of Moons (Neville) having brought him to the edge of despair she now saw something of beauty,...
    August 23rd, 2021 07:25
  • Unworldly Wisdom (Orchidee) I think we all find a wisdom as age takes us onward. The glory of creation...
    August 23rd, 2021 03:31
  • Kiss Away the Tears (Cygnus X-1) I had the pleasure of spending a couple of hours with my granddaughters (3...
    August 23rd, 2021 03:29
  • Worry (Lorna) Fine poetry which bridges the void.
    August 23rd, 2021 02:44
  • Harold\'s Lament (Michael Edwards) CoR! what a shot, right in the chuffer! Dont think of it as yer...
    August 22nd, 2021 14:29
  • Mime (Coyote) One man\'s tragedy, another man\'s mirth.
    August 22nd, 2021 14:20
  • A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville) When we hear figures like six million (forgive my ignorance for...
    August 22nd, 2021 14:14
  • A Dream (Dove) Oh yes, those dreams are like that, leaving you wishing they could...
    August 22nd, 2021 14:07
  • Old Clock (Lorna) Or ask, how much more can i fit into every minute, every hour, day, week...
    August 22nd, 2021 13:55
  • Differences (BusyB) Ying and yang. Acceptance.
    August 22nd, 2021 13:52
  • Looking Around. (Goldfinch60) I\'m singing now.... and I think to myself.... what a wonderful world ...
    August 22nd, 2021 04:11
  • The Stars (SheWasTheSun) Well there was a time when i knew that feeling and its radiant reflection....
    August 22nd, 2021 04:01
  • Until Day (Fay Slimm.) After writing my post of today then I feel your words here deep within for...
    August 22nd, 2021 03:49
  • A Night At The Opera. (Goldfinch60) As a child, the house rang to the sounds of opera on sundays when father...
    August 22nd, 2021 03:34
  • Caught (Fay Slimm.) Looking past the surface, to the torn child within. Very moving and sad....
    August 22nd, 2021 03:28
  • Single Handed (Fay Slimm.) Aww - lovely. Really a fine example of your wonderful creative mind...
    August 20th, 2021 06:26
  • Untitled #2 (Neville) Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few...
    August 20th, 2021 06:19
  • Road Works God. (Goldfinch60) Oh those day-glo vested angels are everywhere. They even have cherubs...
    August 20th, 2021 06:12
  • Switch Off (Coyote) Love the format, the idea, and the excellence of the whole. Really good...
    August 19th, 2021 13:19
  • Droplets (Poetic Dan) I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it...
    August 19th, 2021 13:16
  • The Angle of Her Lay (Neville) Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy...
    August 19th, 2021 13:10
  • Fury (Lorna) I had to put my rubber boots on to read your poem. Well theres sure plenty...
    August 19th, 2021 13:02
  • Walking in the dark of night.... (BusyB) Those slippery homeless slugs are the ones to worry about, u can end up...
    August 19th, 2021 03:21
  • River Spirit Senryu. (Goldfinch60) We\'ll make a poetic narrowboat of ya yet.
    August 19th, 2021 03:02
  • Awakend? or Decived? (Prettygirl412) Interesting, I think you are questioning the faith one of the organised...
    August 18th, 2021 15:05
  • For Break it May: A Triolet (Dove) Dove, I can\'t read that font I\'m sorry.
    August 18th, 2021 14:22
  • 15 years of delight (Poetic Dan) Lovely isn\'t it Dan to see the young ones growing up and smiles on their...
    August 18th, 2021 07:48
  • Let It Sink In (Jo) Very clever.
    August 18th, 2021 04:29
  • Love yourself (BusyB) Very true. Sometimes a failed love can leave one hating ones self and even...
    August 18th, 2021 03:01
  • Chance (Fay Slimm.) Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot...
    August 18th, 2021 02:58
  • I’m trying not to be so bad (Kira Zubal) No, do not ever hide your shade. I like this expression of the enigma you...
    August 18th, 2021 02:51
  • Gospel-Givers (Orchidee) Come on Orchi, we wanna hear you sing this one. Post a recording. (my...
    August 18th, 2021 02:45
  • Their Last Day. (Goldfinch60) Shows what a great and appreciative watcher of people you are sir.
    August 18th, 2021 01:53
  • Through your eyes (Thusa) quote \"you can\'t hide your lying eyes and your smile is a thin...
    August 17th, 2021 13:47
  • Blue Moons (SheWasTheSun) Gave me a big smile. Nice one.
    August 17th, 2021 13:37
  • Heart beat (MMadrid) And life is shared by all living things. So easily we overlook how...
    August 17th, 2021 13:36
  • Praise Prominence (Orchidee) Yer only supposed to blow the bluddy doors off!
    August 17th, 2021 13:33
  • from this angle (Rebmasters) Well expressed, the abstract of those quiet shared moments when love is...
    August 17th, 2021 13:32
  • I Just Want Someone (Jo) Yes rebmasters is right, that first stanza is very powerful and could be a...
    August 17th, 2021 13:27
  • Nonsense to Help Me Sleep (Coyote) I would have cheated and tried to convince everyone that turquoise rhymes...
    August 17th, 2021 11:17
  • You were too pure, so they sent you me. (Kozamu) Beautiful wisdom. The most touching poem I have read in a very long time...
    August 17th, 2021 10:04
  • Us (Fay Slimm.) That \'within loves halo\' feeling brings forth our wonderment about our...
    August 17th, 2021 09:54
  • Low is still a flow (Poetic Dan) You ain\'t doing so bad are you old son? Another excellent video, what a...
    August 17th, 2021 09:45
  • Elusive Blues (Neville) Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic...
    August 17th, 2021 09:36
  • Lonely People. (Goldfinch60) So right you wise old bean. I live a lone life but, happy with my own...
    August 17th, 2021 09:29
  • Temptation. (Prettygirl412) That\'s the way it should be when electricity flows between two people....
    August 16th, 2021 19:38
  • the glass cages (Cosmacpan) As big a lie as \'up there someone knows everything?\' Because someone...
    August 16th, 2021 19:35
  • Life changing experience (Mitchi) Many life moulding events can form from the events which shake us to the...
    August 16th, 2021 19:29
  • I’m ok (Corn on the macabre) Usually i find rhyming poetry quite \'iffy\' but today your piece has...
    August 16th, 2021 16:11
  • Untitled 1 (Coyote) Untitled huh? I\'d venture a title for this fine piece of yours today :-...
    August 16th, 2021 12:47
  • Green Fingers (Claudia) A caged bird or tiger is no longer that wonderful wild spirit but rather a...
    August 16th, 2021 12:04
  • I Am Not Lying – 2 (Nafis Light) Your heart has been smiling through a mist of good humour penned by you...
    August 16th, 2021 11:57
  • You\'ll be her and i\'ll be him (Blue Poet) Got to admit that I don\'t know half of the characters you named in your...
    August 16th, 2021 10:58
  • Balancing act (Poetic Dan) Whatever it is, be it a shape, a mood a tear, a joke or joy, yes, whatever...
    August 16th, 2021 08:33
  • Words (Jayasree) Where would we be without those fine words. Fine phrases we stitch and...
    August 16th, 2021 07:39
  • Soggy slugs (BusyB) I\'ve never considered that a slug might smell. Maybe i\'m immune to the...
    August 16th, 2021 07:08
  • Alt. End #6 (aka The Truth of it all) (Andrew Charles Forrest) Humpty TRUMPTY promised a wall. But humpty trumpty took a great...
    August 16th, 2021 07:05
  • Incomputable (Jo) Beguiling, but my thoughts turned to the environment. Beauty of the...
    August 16th, 2021 06:08
  • Sunday Shivers (Lorna) The eerie knowledge that one, alone, is heading passively toward the end...
    August 16th, 2021 05:34
  • Yellows (Fay Slimm.) That yellow hue proves the sun is shining somewhere. I remember one...
    August 16th, 2021 05:24
  • Thanks to Covid (Neville) I blame that washing machine I bought in 2018 for being secretly made in...
    August 16th, 2021 05:18
  • Live it: your way! (L. B. Mek) Cor blimey LBM you took me on a journet here, from pillar to post. I dont...
    August 16th, 2021 05:14
  • the air was warm (Rebmasters) There\'s a lot of love and contentment within those lines today.
    August 16th, 2021 05:09
  • HOW MANY! (Goldfinch60) And how is the wrist holding up to this punishment. Now let me see, at one...
    August 16th, 2021 05:07
  • Surely... (Lonelyraccoon) Defeat.No,... there is triumph in your words and the more you write then...
    August 14th, 2021 05:27
  • Waste Not. (Fay Slimm.) Hmm I\'m lacking all those things at the moment but I know how well you...
    August 14th, 2021 04:49
  • Covertly Covid (Neville) There are many survivors of terrible episodes in their lives. All too...
    August 14th, 2021 03:34
  • Clouds Of Life. (Goldfinch60) \"I\'ve looked at clouds from both sides now, from up and down and still...
    August 14th, 2021 03:29
  • Love Hiccups (Saxon Crow) Now you\'ve given me an excuse to write about my emotional...
    August 14th, 2021 03:24
  • Joy Awaits (Dove) It is indeed a great place to visit. I\'m seen there regularly for my...
    August 14th, 2021 03:19
  • Father Hood (PoeticBiscuit) May you grow together, learning of life together and remain best of...
    August 13th, 2021 15:17
  • Soli - (A Trio of Limericks) (AuburnScribbler) I replied to dear old soli digging his poetic quarry upon my bended...
    August 13th, 2021 15:15
  • In the Beginning... (Coyote) LOL, my fears that this was going to be some religious bullshit were soon...
    August 13th, 2021 15:09
  • IT\'S A SMALL WORLD. (The elder poet) Dunno where such a suggestion that these aren\'t shared celestial bodies...
    August 13th, 2021 15:00
  • Alt. End #3 (aka It doesn\'t happen to me) (Andrew Charles Forrest) Here in the UK \'to spend a penny\' is to urinate. (you used to have to...
    August 13th, 2021 14:54
  • Business of Life (Jerry Reynolds) If music be the....... then dance on and on and on.
    August 13th, 2021 14:49
  • The Lady In White. (Goldfinch60) Spellbinding aren\'t they when seen like that. One cannot help but admire.
    August 13th, 2021 07:03
  • Jigsaw (Saxon Crow) A really excellent composition Saxon. I enjoyed reading this very much and...
    August 13th, 2021 07:01
  • Last Call (Coyote) A well constructed story throughout. One night of heartache.
    August 12th, 2021 14:09
  • Purrfectly Batman (Dove) Come into the barn dear pussy cat and let us hang upside down together.
    August 12th, 2021 14:04
  • You can (Sandra) Here here, plse have a peep at my post \'easy\' on here today which really...
    August 12th, 2021 13:52
  • Brave (For Laura) (Lorna) Faith sees us through.
    August 12th, 2021 04:52
  • Brooding (Fay Slimm.) Cor streuth gal.... I\'m not going out if it\'s going to be like that all...
    August 12th, 2021 04:49
  • To Like Or Not To Like (Orchidee) That like button is a bit contravertial. It has been applied to every poem...
    August 12th, 2021 04:40
  • Laughter All Around. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like you have a ball after a ball of ball bashing. You life is a...
    August 12th, 2021 04:35
  • Yearning (Saxon Crow) A dilemma indeed but I learned the hard way to just move on. The what...
    August 12th, 2021 04:30
  • Time (Jerry Reynolds) A delightful contradiction which forces one to spend time to think about...
    August 11th, 2021 09:49
  • Otherness (Fay Slimm.) There is so much in your post today and reaches the core of this solo. So...
    August 11th, 2021 09:44
  • LOVE (Nadine) Love is a silken thread with which we embroider magnificence upon the...
    August 11th, 2021 09:33
  • Perfectly Hued (Neville) An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but........
    August 11th, 2021 09:28
  • Words Left Unsaid (Saxon Crow) A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.
    August 11th, 2021 09:06
  • That Music. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful music, beautiful thoughts.
    August 11th, 2021 07:39


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