Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Do I Qualify? (Goldfinch60)
Will your back and legs allow you to get in and out of a low down sports...
August 25th, 2021 08:10 - Perpetual Insanity (Coyote)
Beginning with the romance of a tapestry and musketeer you deftly...
August 24th, 2021 13:21 - Perception (Fay Slimm.)
Even the greatest shall know temporary relevance in their everyday...
August 24th, 2021 13:06 - When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville)
Was it a WW2 shell?
Some hear only their own thoughts and plans falling...
August 24th, 2021 03:49 - Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60)
OMG dont make poetry a chore sir!
In my world poetry has a tide beyond...
August 24th, 2021 03:45 - Superman (Anthony Esposito)
LOL It sounds like how USA would like to think it is regarded in places...
August 23rd, 2021 09:55 - Attention to de shell (Poetic Dan)
Yep, plenty more to say about the world around you i.e. away from self.
August 23rd, 2021 07:49 - Impatient (Fay Slimm.)
Well rip my nets on rocks if this aint a saucy missive. She cant wait till...
August 23rd, 2021 07:44 - The Fullest of Moons (Neville)
having brought him to the edge of despair she now saw something of beauty,...
August 23rd, 2021 07:25 - Unworldly Wisdom (Orchidee)
I think we all find a wisdom as age takes us onward. The glory of creation...
August 23rd, 2021 03:31 - Kiss Away the Tears (Cygnus X-1)
I had the pleasure of spending a couple of hours with my granddaughters (3...
August 23rd, 2021 03:29 - Worry (Lorna)
Fine poetry which bridges the void.
August 23rd, 2021 02:44 - Harold\'s Lament (Michael Edwards)
CoR! what a shot, right in the chuffer!
Dont think of it as yer...
August 22nd, 2021 14:29 - Mime (Coyote)
One man\'s tragedy, another man\'s mirth.
August 22nd, 2021 14:20 - A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville)
When we hear figures like six million (forgive my ignorance for...
August 22nd, 2021 14:14 - A Dream (Dove)
Oh yes, those dreams are like that, leaving you wishing they could...
August 22nd, 2021 14:07 - Old Clock (Lorna)
Or ask, how much more can i fit into every minute, every hour, day, week...
August 22nd, 2021 13:55 - Differences (BusyB)
Ying and yang. Acceptance.
August 22nd, 2021 13:52 - Looking Around. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m singing now.... and I think to myself.... what a wonderful world ...
August 22nd, 2021 04:11 - The Stars (SheWasTheSun)
Well there was a time when i knew that feeling and its radiant reflection....
August 22nd, 2021 04:01 - Until Day (Fay Slimm.)
After writing my post of today then I feel your words here deep within for...
August 22nd, 2021 03:49 - A Night At The Opera. (Goldfinch60)
As a child, the house rang to the sounds of opera on sundays when father...
August 22nd, 2021 03:34 - Caught (Fay Slimm.)
Looking past the surface, to the torn child within. Very moving and sad....
August 22nd, 2021 03:28 - Single Handed (Fay Slimm.)
Aww - lovely. Really a fine example of your wonderful creative mind...
August 20th, 2021 06:26 - Untitled #2 (Neville)
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few...
August 20th, 2021 06:19 - Road Works God. (Goldfinch60)
Oh those day-glo vested angels are everywhere. They even have cherubs...
August 20th, 2021 06:12 - Switch Off (Coyote)
Love the format, the idea, and the excellence of the whole.
Really good...
August 19th, 2021 13:19 - Droplets (Poetic Dan)
I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it...
August 19th, 2021 13:16 - The Angle of Her Lay (Neville)
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy...
August 19th, 2021 13:10 - Fury (Lorna)
I had to put my rubber boots on to read your poem. Well theres sure plenty...
August 19th, 2021 13:02 - Walking in the dark of night.... (BusyB)
Those slippery homeless slugs are the ones to worry about, u can end up...
August 19th, 2021 03:21 - River Spirit Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
We\'ll make a poetic narrowboat of ya yet.
August 19th, 2021 03:02 - Awakend? or Decived? (Prettygirl412)
Interesting, I think you are questioning the faith one of the organised...
August 18th, 2021 15:05 - For Break it May: A Triolet (Dove)
Dove, I can\'t read that font I\'m sorry.
August 18th, 2021 14:22 - 15 years of delight (Poetic Dan)
Lovely isn\'t it Dan to see the young ones growing up and smiles on their...
August 18th, 2021 07:48 - Let It Sink In (Jo)
Very clever.
August 18th, 2021 04:29 - Love yourself (BusyB)
Very true. Sometimes a failed love can leave one hating ones self and even...
August 18th, 2021 03:01 - Chance (Fay Slimm.)
Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot...
August 18th, 2021 02:58 - I’m trying not to be so bad (Kira Zubal)
No, do not ever hide your shade. I like this expression of the enigma you...
August 18th, 2021 02:51 - Gospel-Givers (Orchidee)
Come on Orchi, we wanna hear you sing this one. Post a recording. (my...
August 18th, 2021 02:45 - Their Last Day. (Goldfinch60)
Shows what a great and appreciative watcher of people you are sir.
August 18th, 2021 01:53 - Through your eyes (Thusa)
quote \"you can\'t hide your lying eyes and your smile is a thin...
August 17th, 2021 13:47 - Blue Moons (SheWasTheSun)
Gave me a big smile. Nice one.
August 17th, 2021 13:37 - Heart beat (MMadrid)
And life is shared by all living things. So easily we overlook how...
August 17th, 2021 13:36 - Praise Prominence (Orchidee)
Yer only supposed to blow the bluddy doors off!
August 17th, 2021 13:33 - from this angle (Rebmasters)
Well expressed, the abstract of those quiet shared moments when love is...
August 17th, 2021 13:32 - I Just Want Someone (Jo)
Yes rebmasters is right, that first stanza is very powerful and could be a...
August 17th, 2021 13:27 - Nonsense to Help Me Sleep (Coyote)
I would have cheated and tried to convince everyone that turquoise rhymes...
August 17th, 2021 11:17 - You were too pure, so they sent you me. (Kozamu)
Beautiful wisdom.
The most touching poem I have read in a very long time...
August 17th, 2021 10:04 - Us (Fay Slimm.)
That \'within loves halo\' feeling brings forth our wonderment about our...
August 17th, 2021 09:54 - Low is still a flow (Poetic Dan)
You ain\'t doing so bad are you old son? Another excellent video, what a...
August 17th, 2021 09:45 - Elusive Blues (Neville)
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic...
August 17th, 2021 09:36 - Lonely People. (Goldfinch60)
So right you wise old bean. I live a lone life but, happy with my own...
August 17th, 2021 09:29 - Temptation. (Prettygirl412)
That\'s the way it should be when electricity flows between two people....
August 16th, 2021 19:38 - the glass cages (Cosmacpan)
As big a lie as \'up there someone knows everything?\' Because someone...
August 16th, 2021 19:35 - Life changing experience (Mitchi)
Many life moulding events can form from the events which shake us to the...
August 16th, 2021 19:29 - I’m ok (Corn on the macabre)
Usually i find rhyming poetry quite \'iffy\' but today your piece has...
August 16th, 2021 16:11 - Untitled 1 (Coyote)
Untitled huh? I\'d venture a title for this fine piece of yours today :-...
August 16th, 2021 12:47 - Green Fingers (Claudia)
A caged bird or tiger is no longer that wonderful wild spirit but rather a...
August 16th, 2021 12:04 - I Am Not Lying – 2 (Nafis Light)
Your heart has been smiling through a mist of good humour penned by you...
August 16th, 2021 11:57 - You\'ll be her and i\'ll be him (Blue Poet)
Got to admit that I don\'t know half of the characters you named in your...
August 16th, 2021 10:58 - Balancing act (Poetic Dan)
Whatever it is, be it a shape, a mood a tear, a joke or joy, yes, whatever...
August 16th, 2021 08:33 - Words (Jayasree)
Where would we be without those fine words. Fine phrases we stitch and...
August 16th, 2021 07:39 - Soggy slugs (BusyB)
I\'ve never considered that a slug might smell. Maybe i\'m immune to the...
August 16th, 2021 07:08 - Alt. End #6 (aka The Truth of it all) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Humpty TRUMPTY promised a wall.
But humpty trumpty took a great...
August 16th, 2021 07:05 - Incomputable (Jo)
Beguiling, but my thoughts turned to the environment. Beauty of the...
August 16th, 2021 06:08 - Sunday Shivers (Lorna)
The eerie knowledge that one, alone, is heading passively toward the end...
August 16th, 2021 05:34 - Yellows (Fay Slimm.)
That yellow hue proves the sun is shining somewhere. I remember one...
August 16th, 2021 05:24 - Thanks to Covid (Neville)
I blame that washing machine I bought in 2018 for being secretly made in...
August 16th, 2021 05:18 - Live it: your way! (L. B. Mek)
Cor blimey LBM you took me on a journet here, from pillar to post. I dont...
August 16th, 2021 05:14 - the air was warm (Rebmasters)
There\'s a lot of love and contentment within those lines today.
August 16th, 2021 05:09 - HOW MANY! (Goldfinch60)
And how is the wrist holding up to this punishment. Now let me see, at one...
August 16th, 2021 05:07 - Surely... (Lonelyraccoon)
Defeat.No,... there is triumph in your words and the more you write then...
August 14th, 2021 05:27 - Waste Not. (Fay Slimm.)
Hmm I\'m lacking all those things at the moment but I know how well you...
August 14th, 2021 04:49 - Covertly Covid (Neville)
There are many survivors of terrible episodes in their lives. All too...
August 14th, 2021 03:34 - Clouds Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
\"I\'ve looked at clouds from both sides now, from up and down and still...
August 14th, 2021 03:29 - Love Hiccups (Saxon Crow)
Now you\'ve given me an excuse to write about my emotional...
August 14th, 2021 03:24 - Joy Awaits (Dove)
It is indeed a great place to visit. I\'m seen there regularly for my...
August 14th, 2021 03:19 - Father Hood (PoeticBiscuit)
May you grow together, learning of life together and remain best of...
August 13th, 2021 15:17 - Soli - (A Trio of Limericks) (AuburnScribbler)
I replied to dear old soli
digging his poetic quarry
upon my bended...
August 13th, 2021 15:15 - In the Beginning... (Coyote)
LOL, my fears that this was going to be some religious bullshit were soon...
August 13th, 2021 15:09 - IT\'S A SMALL WORLD. (The elder poet)
Dunno where such a suggestion that these aren\'t shared celestial bodies...
August 13th, 2021 15:00 - Alt. End #3 (aka It doesn\'t happen to me) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Here in the UK \'to spend a penny\' is to urinate. (you used to have to...
August 13th, 2021 14:54 - Business of Life (Jerry Reynolds)
If music be the....... then dance on and on and on.
August 13th, 2021 14:49 - The Lady In White. (Goldfinch60)
Spellbinding aren\'t they when seen like that. One cannot help but admire.
August 13th, 2021 07:03 - Jigsaw (Saxon Crow)
A really excellent composition Saxon. I enjoyed reading this very much and...
August 13th, 2021 07:01 - Last Call (Coyote)
A well constructed story throughout. One night of heartache.
August 12th, 2021 14:09 - Purrfectly Batman (Dove)
Come into the barn dear pussy cat and let us hang upside down together.
August 12th, 2021 14:04 - You can (Sandra)
Here here, plse have a peep at my post \'easy\' on here today which really...
August 12th, 2021 13:52 - Brave (For Laura) (Lorna)
Faith sees us through.
August 12th, 2021 04:52 - Brooding (Fay Slimm.)
Cor streuth gal.... I\'m not going out if it\'s going to be like that all...
August 12th, 2021 04:49 - To Like Or Not To Like (Orchidee)
That like button is a bit contravertial. It has been applied to every poem...
August 12th, 2021 04:40 - Laughter All Around. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like you have a ball after a ball of ball bashing. You life is a...
August 12th, 2021 04:35 - Yearning (Saxon Crow)
A dilemma indeed but I learned the hard way to just move on. The what...
August 12th, 2021 04:30 - Time (Jerry Reynolds)
A delightful contradiction which forces one to spend time to think about...
August 11th, 2021 09:49 - Otherness (Fay Slimm.)
There is so much in your post today and reaches the core of this solo.
So...
August 11th, 2021 09:44 - LOVE (Nadine)
Love is a silken thread with which we embroider magnificence upon the...
August 11th, 2021 09:33 - Perfectly Hued (Neville)
An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but........
August 11th, 2021 09:28 - Words Left Unsaid (Saxon Crow)
A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.
August 11th, 2021 09:06 - That Music. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful music, beautiful thoughts.
August 11th, 2021 07:39
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