Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Gone (Lelae) Really depicts how sadness recalls so much when someone so loved is no...
  August 10th, 2021 11:23
• Shadows (Lorna) Love it.
  August 10th, 2021 09:35
• Upon a Time Once (Neville) Simple but full of reverie. You\'ve caught the true magic of writing few...
  August 10th, 2021 09:32
• Such Lavish (Fay Slimm.) Feel the love of approaching autumn in your words today country girl. How...
  August 10th, 2021 09:29
• Disposable People. (Goldfinch60) Yes, cannon fodder as they say. It seems one cannot defend against the...
  August 10th, 2021 02:47
• Lovesight (Fay Slimm.) The shudder of recognition as a soulmate from previous life crosses our...
  August 9th, 2021 06:34
• An Unfinished Summer (Neville) ... till time and life\'s love moved us on and along into the unknown,...
  August 9th, 2021 06:28
• For the love of clouds (Saxon Crow) May a cloudburst only bring you springtimes dance of growth and good...
  August 9th, 2021 06:20
• Life With Nature. (Goldfinch60) Natures golden reward, autumn, a reminder that seasons of life are...
  August 9th, 2021 06:18
• And Now (Fay Slimm.) Such a concise poetic passing of the seasons. Exquisite. One for my
  August 8th, 2021 10:11
• Collusion (Fay Slimm.) oooh and ouch Fay. A bit contravertial in this weird global july/august...
  August 4th, 2021 13:34
• What is a Woman (M.E.M.) I offer a wish that such freedom were there for every woman. Sadly, in our...
  August 4th, 2021 08:44
• Love Is There. (Goldfinch60) Your way of being is a lesson to us all Andy. A lesson worth taking home...
  August 4th, 2021 07:56
• Ferment (Fay Slimm.) The rare commodity of forgiving oft finds its achilles heel in the...
  July 30th, 2021 12:19
• Croquet At Broadwas. (Goldfinch60) Its marvellous what a bit of socialising can do.
  July 30th, 2021 12:03
• Perspectives (Saxon Crow) Describes the cycle of a womans thoughts rather well, but theyre not often...
  July 30th, 2021 12:01
• The meadow (BusyB) Good job you werent having a touch of the udder.
  July 29th, 2021 05:55
• Possessing Possessions (Orchidee) Hmm if this is full of christian spirit then why are christian churches so...
  July 29th, 2021 05:52
• Sisters (Fay Slimm.) Made me think of my two granddaughters and how different they are yet how...
  July 29th, 2021 05:49
• Almost a Very Nearly (Neville) Waves tickling at the bow, she\'ll have her way, making way when that...
  July 29th, 2021 05:45
• The Light Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Did you wear a spacesuit? Im still shielding.
  July 29th, 2021 05:42
• Sounds of the Sixties (Saxon Crow) I\'m enjoying \'summer in the city\'
  July 29th, 2021 05:38
• A Haibun Odyssey (Jerry Reynolds) Initially i read this enthralling piece not knowing what a haibun or a...
  July 28th, 2021 08:28
• Relax (Pacifique Niyitanga) Yep, yurn these days of enforced home stay into something positive. A...
  July 28th, 2021 07:34
• Seeing more Deeply, Seems Pointless (Flyingfish) When you consider all the money being spent to research the questions...
  July 28th, 2021 05:57
• Penitent Prose (Orchidee) What have you been up to sinner?
  July 28th, 2021 05:52
• Being together, always (BusyB) Beautiful. Only a dream for me but a daily reality for the lucky. You say...
  July 28th, 2021 05:51
• No Sweat (Neville) I wore my sisters dress as a nine year old for a school project. It was...
  July 28th, 2021 05:03
• A Fork in the Road (Saxon Crow) You describe well the torment of being torn in two directions when the...
  July 28th, 2021 04:57
• Sit In The Garden. (Goldfinch60) Your romantic soul shines from your poetry and I know from where comes...
  July 28th, 2021 04:53
• Weight (Fay Slimm.) So true. The purposefulness of life falls away when ones love affair ends...
  July 28th, 2021 04:47
• Blackrock (Fay Slimm.) One imagines that with satelite navigation fears of blackrock are...
  July 27th, 2021 08:51
• RIP Boffington Town (Saxon Crow) Hopefully tales of Boffington will continue to be heard along with its...
  July 27th, 2021 08:24
• Just Conversing. (Goldfinch60) Chats have become rare since shielding/lockdown, thnk good ness for the...
  July 27th, 2021 08:21
• Walking the dog (Jerry Reynolds) Beware lest the chain becomes a choker.
  July 26th, 2021 10:52
• Beached Whale Blues (Neville) Such an event for many in parts of this wonderous world means a bounty of...
  July 26th, 2021 09:33
• Awesome (Fay Slimm.) Such poetic fruit from your storm tree. Dare i shelter neath such a...
  July 26th, 2021 09:29
• From the Corner (Jack Cohen) Great stuff! Well composed and very entertaining.
  July 26th, 2021 01:30
• Dreams All at Sea (Flyingfish) Enjoyed reading this well written piece.
  July 26th, 2021 01:28
• Something For Yourself. (Goldfinch60) So true. Self healing through poetic outbursts has been my first aid.
  July 26th, 2021 01:26
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5) (Michael Edwards) When flying high, the further to fall. I\'m a fan of your wisdom in...
  July 26th, 2021 01:24
• Mortar (Saxon Crow) A well described feeling i know only too well on occasion.
  July 26th, 2021 01:23
• This Evil (Joseph) But that god created all that is evil too.
  July 25th, 2021 14:18
• Not A Love Poem (Saxon Crow) Well Saxon, this is really an excellent piece and deserving of much...
  July 25th, 2021 11:27
• Guidance Of Governors (Orchidee) I wish your god could give the pope some lessons in apologising for the...
  July 25th, 2021 11:19
• New Bloom Tanka. (Goldfinch60) I did the same, viewed from kitchen window....... a weed.
  July 25th, 2021 11:17
• Upon the Tip of His Tongue (Neville) Many a new taste can reach one\'s tongue tip. Foul tastes are best...
  July 25th, 2021 11:05
• Preparation (Fay Slimm.) Cor blimey missus, that\'s just like the exchage we had behind the youth...
  July 25th, 2021 10:55
• The Sixties, I Was There . (Goldfinch60) Oh my yes, a couple of years younger I turned 15 in the summer of love....
  July 21st, 2021 05:37
• The Craghoppers Calling (Saxon Crow) So I consulted the craghoppers website ans confusion ensued. Theres...
  July 21st, 2021 05:34
• Constraint (Fay Slimm.) If you love someone, set them free.
  July 20th, 2021 05:07
• Coooeee - Oh no! (Orchidee) Good to see you back Orchi.
  July 20th, 2021 04:12
• Singing Once More. (Goldfinch60) What an uplifting release singing is.
  July 20th, 2021 04:11
• Anguish. (Fay Slimm.) To me van gogh\'s work is all about an expression of passion. Captured in...
  July 19th, 2021 06:57
• Pearls of my world (Short & sweet) (Poetic Dan) Let it be and reap the beauty of peace of mind.
  July 19th, 2021 04:30
• No Longer At Home. (Goldfinch60) So sad Andy. I have seen some of dementia\'s evil and respect your first...
  July 19th, 2021 04:27
• Be Like Fox (Saxon Crow) I envy the wind which drifts where it will doing natures bidding. In...
  July 19th, 2021 04:22
• The Main Drag (Rebmasters) Strike your own path whilst being respectful of the wildlife\'s...
  July 18th, 2021 13:02
• Time Versus Love (Fay Slimm.) Frequent undisguised thirst eh?? I\'ll have a pint of that please. Time...
  July 18th, 2021 06:16
• Enough is enough (Poetic Dan) Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up. In your post...
  July 18th, 2021 04:34
• Cathedral Bells (Neville) I\'m probably the wrong one to comment on this being so anti the...
  July 18th, 2021 04:24
• Empty Words (Saxon Crow) The writers dilemma well expressed here.
  July 18th, 2021 04:21
• Love\'s Home. (Goldfinch60) Home is where the heart is beautifully expressed.
  July 18th, 2021 04:19
• Afterglow (Fay Slimm.) aaaaah, twilight and dusk... the magical times as shadows deepen. I...
  July 17th, 2021 11:59
• One More Four Letter Word (Neville) Betrayal by lies is the pits. Marching orders follow.
  July 17th, 2021 11:56
• Never a Dull Moment (Saxon Crow) Its a super write, it\'s just as it is it\'s OK by me It sounds like my...
  July 17th, 2021 07:09
• A SOLDIER\'S DAUGHTER (AzaleaTruth) Although I am one who has come to abhor war, there is such dignity in your...
  July 17th, 2021 02:57
• Lorna (Rpgiii) Ouch! A tale of low self esteem enhanced by selfish kids. There is much of...
  July 17th, 2021 02:52
• Age Of Wisdom. (Goldfinch60) A mold we grow into and accept it\'s limitations with grace. Very well...
  July 17th, 2021 01:17
• The colours of rain (Orison) Rain, the food of life on our blue planet home. Nicely composed poetry.
  July 17th, 2021 00:54
• Homemade scarf (Poetic Dan) Hope you find some respite from your pains Dan.
  July 16th, 2021 05:26
• The Hunter (Fay Slimm.) Oh so many harmless looking beautiful little creations are killers in...
  July 16th, 2021 05:20
• Just a Kiss Goodbye (Neville) That kiss of goodbye is always lurking over us when emotionally coupled to...
  July 16th, 2021 05:12
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (4) (Michael Edwards) You should hear them shouting foul over the parliamentary bill to give...
  July 16th, 2021 05:04
• At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60) I think of woodland as the cathederals of our spirituality. There is such...
  July 16th, 2021 05:02
• War of Contrition (Saxon Crow) A huge con instigated and perpetuated by the christian churches to subtly...
  July 16th, 2021 04:57
• Dark (Fay Slimm.) Much sadness in your words. They brought to mind how, whilst in low mood...
  July 15th, 2021 09:12
• Mark these Words (Neville) Why not indeed, for the oils of hindsight poured across the waters of...
  July 15th, 2021 02:22
• The Freest I\'ve Felt (Chloe Miller) Very enjoyable read. Superb artwork accompanies your piece, so well
  July 15th, 2021 02:15
• Hippie Warning. (Goldfinch60) Oh that it were oh so simple. It\'s simple for some, impossible for
  July 15th, 2021 02:13
• War of Attrition (Saxon Crow) And so it will continue. Mankind in all his foibles will continue,...
  July 15th, 2021 02:10
• Wood-fired Kiln (Flyingfish) You brought this alive in your words today.
  July 15th, 2021 02:05
• One Day (Chloe Miller) Great composition. It\'s all only the nature of things.
  July 14th, 2021 09:23
• Rothko Chapel Painting (M.E.M.) Paintings provided by Dulux colour swashes? There\'s far more depth in...
  July 14th, 2021 09:20
• Blossom Tree (Rebmasters) This is quite beautiful. Although I cannot answer the question posed. It...
  July 14th, 2021 04:47
• Fancy (Fay Slimm.) Tip-toeing between your words are wraith like cheeky smiles, teasing the...
  July 14th, 2021 04:40
• Upon a Small White Feather (Neville) Ah those little white feathers, the tell tale evidence of a missed loved...
  July 14th, 2021 03:34
• Live As You. (Goldfinch60) Here here. Often we learn this when young and impressionable if we are...
  July 14th, 2021 01:27
• Reality #1 (Saxon Crow) Oh yes, I held the impossible in my arms and would have married her until...
  July 14th, 2021 00:25
• Demeaning Meaning (Flyingfish) I do see quite a few posts on MPS where the author wiggles and waggles so...
  July 14th, 2021 00:16
• The Poetry Shop (Jerry Reynolds) Indeed it is, most especially the romantic poetry.
  July 13th, 2021 07:41
• Shall and Because (Fay Slimm.) Questions of the moment indeed. If the heart and mind are ready - why not?
  July 13th, 2021 03:12
• The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60) I keep a file of lost words, unused phrases. When inspiration fades I will...
  July 13th, 2021 02:29
• Magnificently Different (Neville) Memories, full of the pregnancy of \'if onlys\'
  July 13th, 2021 02:26
• That Tap (Fay Slimm.) Oh for those clandestine secret meetings when one has to be pretty nifty...
  July 11th, 2021 03:14
• Field Of Dreams Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Your river Avon, always there with it\'s tranquil reassuring natural flow...
  July 11th, 2021 01:32
• Be Brave (Jerry Reynolds) Oh so true, make hay while the sun shines and through the winter let it be...
  July 10th, 2021 13:09
• Such is Nostalgia (Fay Slimm.) Nostalgia, those glimpses of yesterdays now long passed which bring back...
  July 10th, 2021 13:07
• We all have darkness (Poetic Dan) The negatives from those formative years lurks within me and still...
  July 10th, 2021 13:02
• Banished (Neville) I recall the feeling of having been used and wasted... culminating in...
  July 10th, 2021 12:56