Comments on community poems by Neville

• 1066 and all that rubbish! (Orchidee) are you referring to an actual re-enactment event here.. I have several...
  December 13th, 2018 14:25
• SHORTIE FOUR (Michael Edwards) a philosophical little rhyming whimsy, if ever there was
  December 13th, 2018 12:11
• Sanddune Solitude (Sylviasearcher) precariously balanced on the very edge between romantic dream and erotica...
  December 12th, 2018 08:32
• My age (Heather Harrisson) My word, the nib of your pen must be near molten.. you are of course quite...
  December 12th, 2018 07:50
• Rainbow Revealings (Orchidee) Who can see a rainbow without smiling... go ask Bungle, Zippy & George..
  December 12th, 2018 07:03
• Love Hate. (Goldfinch60) nicely penned, but sadly, the Beatles as good as they are did not get it...
  December 12th, 2018 07:00
• BREXIT - A WILFUL BETRAYAL? (Michael Edwards) you have certainly captured a lot of peoples frustrations.. I certainly...
  December 12th, 2018 06:56
• SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards) a very much enjoyed x4 lines of universal law..
  December 12th, 2018 06:06
• SHORTIE TWO (Michael Edwards) the seal of approval guarantees depravity... I wonder how many have...
  December 11th, 2018 17:45
• The Letter (Lorna) be proud of these words my friend, I am for you.. N
  December 11th, 2018 09:08
• A Lane (Yasu Na) I thought perhaps there was a rainbow in the making.. maybe there was but...
  December 11th, 2018 09:06
• WIND BLOWN TREE (Culshaw) A thoroughly enjoyed poem indeed
  December 11th, 2018 09:02
• Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60) The concluding line is a universal truth and a universal shame.. N
  December 11th, 2018 07:23
• FAST and FURIOUS (Haiku #1) (Laura🌻) Having seen it on TV and heard it on the news, these words were simply...
  December 11th, 2018 07:02
• Peace Petitions (Orchidee) any & all attempts to promote peace in the world today are good in my...
  December 10th, 2018 08:46
• Fine (Sylviasearcher) I get your message sylviasearcher, how could I not.... fine is okay when...
  December 10th, 2018 08:16
• The Last Night (Lorna) A great little war poem my fine literary friend, and posted on the...
  December 10th, 2018 07:56
• Winter escape (Heather Harrisson) as I scroll down the page to read each line in turn, these words seem to...
  December 9th, 2018 09:24
• GROWTH.. (Fay Slimm.) sadly we live in an increasingly risk adverse society and where...
  December 9th, 2018 04:25
• Infinity (LIGHT WARRIOR) I sincerely hope you found the penning of this epic, more than just a...
  December 9th, 2018 04:06
• Artwork or Photography (Goldfinch60) an interesting series of observations that will no doubt give rise to many...
  December 9th, 2018 03:13
• Autumn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) an autumn dedication & true..
  December 9th, 2018 03:05
• OILS DIFFUSED (Michael Edwards) a very impressive collection of senryu sir and of course could also be a...
  December 8th, 2018 12:05
• Don\'t Alter The Red Cape (Satishverma) I was drawn by the title and held to the very end.. there is something I...
  December 8th, 2018 11:07
• She And Her Love Poet (Corey) a delightfully understated piece of erotica, leaving just enough to the...
  December 8th, 2018 10:50
• I\'m Loving It (JasmineUK) I don\'t suppose your talking McDonald\'s are ya.. very entertaining,...
  December 8th, 2018 10:19
• Triumphant Testimony (Orchidee) clearly a winner... although I rather choose to read it as a poem than as...
  December 8th, 2018 08:51
• Tactile Values (AJ) An impressive little poem & does precisely what it say\'s on the label.. I...
  December 8th, 2018 08:44
• Neediness (Sylviasearcher) Everyone has their very own critical point, beyond which it is a good idea...
  December 7th, 2018 13:02
• You, me (Heather Harrisson) Life is filled with regrets, I imagine most of those who write, touch upon...
  December 7th, 2018 10:53
• Melancholy (Sylviasearcher) emotionally charged & moribund...a moment captured in time.. I hope the...
  December 7th, 2018 08:25
• The Other Side of Fear. (Goldfinch60) well said.. we have nothing to fear but the unknown and of course, fear...
  December 7th, 2018 04:32
• KEEPING WATCH. (Fay Slimm.) How perfectly put... tis what we do isn\'t it... Neville :)
  December 7th, 2018 04:28
• December Sky (Fay Slimm.) this little gem is so multi-faceted, it sparkles in its very own write.....
  December 6th, 2018 14:51
• POST OP COMPLICATIONS (Michael Edwards) I really enjoyed this bit of self disclosure... am glad to hear you are on...
  December 6th, 2018 14:17
• 9:20 (Arazimus) what a nice little series of personal recollections, you have kindly left...
  December 6th, 2018 12:14
• Angel Announcement (Orchidee) reads well and looks good on the page.. what more could you ask except to...
  December 6th, 2018 12:03
• The rise and fall of life\'s notes (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) an undulating journey of ups and maybe not so downs... reminds me a little...
  December 6th, 2018 10:27
• love me (MSA-19) It can\'t be that bad, surely.. so much self directed negativity ain\'t...
  December 6th, 2018 05:33
• Awake (Sylviasearcher) Move me like your poetry Until I\'m weak with breathless ecstasy I...
  December 6th, 2018 05:18
• Simply Difficult. (Goldfinch60) a precisely penned poetical musical paradox captured and true...if ever...
  December 6th, 2018 03:12
• Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song (Sylviasearcher) I can appreciate just how cathartic it must have felt having got these...
  December 6th, 2018 02:41
• ANOTHER BATCH OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards) I think each of these four little gems more than adequately make up the...
  December 5th, 2018 05:29
• CHAINS. (Fay Slimm.) this is, without any doubt an excellent poem.. melancholic maybe, but...
  December 5th, 2018 05:21
• Speakeasy (Sylviasearcher) Very good indeed.. there is certainly more here than immediately meets the...
  December 5th, 2018 05:06
• Worthy (Sylviasearcher) I consider myself lucky to have stumbled upon these thirteen words.. I...
  December 5th, 2018 04:31
• Scattered Song (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet) reads like a road trip across the US, with wondrous stop offs along the...
  December 4th, 2018 18:13
• THIRST. (Fay Slimm.) a thirst quenched, a sorrow drowned... a most welcome read to contemplate...
  December 4th, 2018 16:49
• One Day (Sylviasearcher) I am mightily impressed with the way the story both grows and flows...
  December 4th, 2018 12:44
• A Little Indiscretion (Neville) thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I...
  December 4th, 2018 02:32
• Maybe...... (Orchidee) who needs meter, or a tune for that matter... this is good medicine...
  December 4th, 2018 02:17
• The Fairy on the Tree. (Goldfinch60) festive fun for sure.. now there just has to be a moral in there...
  December 4th, 2018 02:05
• One Tear Removed (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet) a smashing poem indeed, from one end to the very other.. and much...
  December 3rd, 2018 18:04
• WITH YOU. (Fay Slimm.) I would be hard pushed to say it any better than many of my reviewing...
  December 3rd, 2018 14:37
• I died again today (Sylviasearcher) interesting... very interesting.. I was immediately hooked by the title...
  December 3rd, 2018 14:31
• Wonderful Days Ahead. (Goldfinch60) yes indeed a fine write.. I particularly like the way you describe her...
  December 3rd, 2018 14:23
• Long Shadows (Neville) cheers..
  December 3rd, 2018 08:42
• Autumn (Neville) indeed, I am a very good listener.. and thank you so much for your...
  December 3rd, 2018 04:51
• YIELDING. (Fay Slimm.) I sense you have a particularly harmonious and otherwise joyous...
  December 2nd, 2018 15:12
• Mind Meditation (Orchidee) You really are a master of this particular genre my literary friend.....
  December 2nd, 2018 13:30
• BOBBLES ON SWEATERS (Michael Edwards) what an amusing conundrum you have posed for us here in your bobbly...
  December 2nd, 2018 12:55
• Take Me Away (MissileOfUncertainty) a most original little gem in my humble opinion, certainly very much...
  December 2nd, 2018 12:36
• Prologue (Sylviasearcher) we all dream, dont we... and we all wait..........I traced back through...
  December 2nd, 2018 08:07
• The Delivery Man. (Goldfinch60) From the drawing of our first breath we are conditioned and shaped by the...
  December 2nd, 2018 07:10
• Woof! (Orchidee) Is this the final version or just a woof draft... I am afraid a lot of my...
  December 1st, 2018 07:50
• Shadow Dance (Pantoum) (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet) No two ways about it, I am mightily impressed.. how come I never...
  November 30th, 2018 18:28
• Bad Desire (Sylviasearcher) To be honest, and I always try to be honest, the only bad thing here is...
  November 30th, 2018 11:39
• Restless (Sylviasearcher) it would seem you have just woven a picture in word format of that one...
  November 30th, 2018 08:53
• Writing not Tapping. (Goldfinch60) it is the acuteness of observations such as these, that take the P from...
  November 30th, 2018 02:34
• At 62 (Kevin Michael Bloor) 62 aint bad when ya 97... a thoroughly entertaining and likewise enjoyed...
  November 29th, 2018 15:21
• KAZIMIR MALEVICH WHITE ON WHITE (Michael Edwards) in any of its many forms, art.. at least in my opinion, is in general, ...
  November 29th, 2018 13:39
• HOOD (Laura🌻) he must either be, or have been good to have such words dedicated thus.....
  November 28th, 2018 19:35
• Appetite for Words (Neville) In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N
  November 28th, 2018 18:14
• Success in Failure. (Goldfinch60) the capacity to learn, does not make us uniquely human but the capacity to...
  November 28th, 2018 06:16
• Schizophrenia (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet) Whence is this monstrous thing, why & how to treat it...(St Augustine Book...
  November 28th, 2018 06:07
• The Moonbeam Man (Classicmister) who aint gonna love this.. no one aint that\'s who.. I\'m sure this epic...
  November 27th, 2018 07:08
• A Song Of Saints (Orchidee) Before I read your authors note, it dawned on me that these fine words...
  November 27th, 2018 05:02
• When You Were Perfect (Neville) much appreciated and true...
  November 27th, 2018 04:36
• We Two Ships (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet) a well crafted poem without a shadow of a doubt & held me fast from stem...
  November 26th, 2018 18:10
• Zen Hunting (Neville) thanks for the tip... N
  November 26th, 2018 05:01
• Zen Hunting (Neville) What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts...
  November 25th, 2018 15:41
• Old Fashioned? Moi? (Goldfinch60) it seems you have captured here for all eternity something of an...
  November 25th, 2018 05:28
• The Pyramid of Longing (Neville) That love to which these words refer, was a very long time ago now my...
  November 25th, 2018 04:30
• The Pyramid of Longing (Neville) Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging gift of words.. They are...
  November 24th, 2018 12:37
• WAR CRY. (Fay Slimm.) a very timely post indeed, emotionally charged and ragged and real...
  November 24th, 2018 04:17
• Enlightened Way. (Goldfinch60) There is, without any doubt, something very special about that silvery...
  November 24th, 2018 04:11
• CHAINS. (Fay Slimm.) Not only do these fine words read well, they also look good on the page...
  November 23rd, 2018 07:23
• Why Do I Love Thee (Neville) I am truly grateful to you Fay.. many thank you\'s for such a kind &...
  November 23rd, 2018 07:19
• Before We Die (Neville) Many thanks Goldfinch60, the \'Book of Longing\' was written by the late...
  November 23rd, 2018 04:46
• Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ? (Frederick Samson) I am sure many of us here will be able to empathise with you, and these...
  November 22nd, 2018 08:47
• The Leaves. (Goldfinch60) and all around was golden.. a smashing autumnal observation & true.....
  November 22nd, 2018 08:31
• No Greater Love Than Mine (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet) True love is certainly special but other than in a poem, it is hard to...
  November 21st, 2018 14:15
• BETWEEN WORLDS. (Fay Slimm.) What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for...
  November 21st, 2018 12:21
• Autumn Is With Us - HAIKU. (Goldfinch60) I adore these.. when I stumble upon a good one, they epitomise the concept...
  November 21st, 2018 08:25
• WHEN WE FELL IN LOVE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A PANTOUM (BRIAN & ANGELA) You are very brave, the last time I tried a pantoum, it sank ... a fine...
  November 21st, 2018 08:16
• A CHINESE LOVE STORY~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Goon but not forgotten.. a delightful little whimsy, if ever there was and...
  November 21st, 2018 08:13
• A Taste of Nothing (Neville) It seems my cigar, coconut & goldfish are all still safe, at least for...
  November 20th, 2018 14:23
• Pumped Up (The Retired Bloke) a good lungful of the stuff makes ya realise your alive , dunnit... a...
  November 20th, 2018 05:16
• What is the Time? (Goldfinch60) What a little cracker.. tis the way ya write em , innit... All Good...
  November 20th, 2018 04:32
• Never Born (John Prophet) a relevant question & one that has been asked throughout time, and ever...
  November 19th, 2018 10:49