Comments on community poems by Neville
- Smoke Filled Days. (Goldfinch60)
a trip down memory lane indeed... twas a different world wasn\'t it......
February 18th, 2019 10:45 - Unfeeling (Sylviasearcher)
it is hard to describe how these words made me feel.. other than empty, or...
February 18th, 2019 10:39 - 4 word poem #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
made me smile mate...
February 17th, 2019 15:43 - I AM, I WILL BE (Michael Edwards)
who could ask for anything more than to be contented with his lot ...
February 17th, 2019 13:41 - Shadows to Light. (Goldfinch60)
no one is going to argue with you, and that\'s for sure.. enjoy all...
February 17th, 2019 13:39 - Raft of reeds (Dusk arising)
I am with you on this one.. a good reed...... N
February 17th, 2019 13:34 - Prophesied Preparation (Orchidee)
I learnt something today.. cheers..
February 17th, 2019 13:31 - Bohemia (SerenWise)
Oh\' how I would like a slice of that... and a large slice too if you...
February 16th, 2019 12:38 - Pebble (Sylviasearcher)
sometimes, maybe once in every while or every now and then, without so...
February 16th, 2019 12:07 - The Sands (SerenWise)
what a sad, almost mournful page I have stumbled upon... nicely penned...
February 16th, 2019 12:00 - lustfully, greedily (Dusk arising)
Delicious DA.. I would almost certainly take 6 bottles and bin 69....you...
February 16th, 2019 09:57 - Praise - Towdah (Orchidee)
the only other time I have ever seen or heard the word Yadah yadah was in...
February 16th, 2019 09:42 - Blurry Face (Sylviasearcher)
Great title, great poem which brings out the artist in ya and a final...
February 16th, 2019 09:30 - Newspaper Chatting. (Goldfinch60)
a delightful little poem focusing upon what appears to be a universally...
February 16th, 2019 05:38 - Escaping Midnight Solitude (Sylviasearcher)
These words may well have been written many years ago, or even today.....
February 15th, 2019 08:23 - Desert Rain (DesertWords)
You just did justice to some of the most barren places on the planet ......
February 15th, 2019 07:45 - The empty cage... (Jon Nakapalau)
How sad is that.. you just gave me a lump in my throat, and I can\'t get...
February 15th, 2019 07:36 - SECRET SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards)
you just made me sully me incontinence pad, so ya did.... N
February 15th, 2019 05:09 - Birthday Valentine. (Goldfinch60)
a smashing gift my friend... and a clever fella , saved on postage too I...
February 15th, 2019 05:05 - every now and again (Dusk arising)
wonderful & simply so... that\'s the best kind of wonderful, I reckon....
February 15th, 2019 05:02 - RECOLLECTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
what recall, what a gift ...innocence & beauty personified, in word .... N
February 15th, 2019 04:36 - Dynamic Deacons (Orchidee)
wow.. now there are a few blasts from the past.. went out with a gall...
February 15th, 2019 04:29 - ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic) (Laura🌻)
Although not an expert, and maybe way too late.. I just wanna say Elijah...
February 14th, 2019 17:52 - A Special Shout-Out To Dads (Laura🌻)
I just want to say.. the inherent message contained within.. is more than...
February 14th, 2019 17:35 - Love Limitless (Orchidee)
Maybe because its Valentine\'s Day, you should pen a her poem, just to...
February 14th, 2019 14:29 - Saint Valentines Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
splendid... and so say all of us...
February 14th, 2019 13:58 - right back at me (Dusk arising)
I dare anyone to say they did not smile while reading these words......
February 14th, 2019 09:12 - SUGGESTIVELY STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
upon my very word, how eloquently put & other positive expletives to...
February 14th, 2019 07:23 - RELIANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
As far as I\'m concerned dear Fay, you just nailed two of my very...
February 14th, 2019 06:30 - The School Bully (Sylviasearcher)
this was simply crying out to be said.. well said
February 14th, 2019 05:33 - pictures (Dusk arising)
Blimey..
you got quite a few strings to that bow of yours aint\'cha ......
February 13th, 2019 14:45 - YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW. (Michael Edwards)
I was gonna say you were two tense, but that would have been an...
February 13th, 2019 12:11 - JOINED. (Fay Slimm.)
so deceptively deep and beautiful.. this poet could drown here and most...
February 13th, 2019 09:33 - Khuda Gawah (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Bollywood or not, this reads like a feature length movie.. a love story of...
February 13th, 2019 08:48 - graft (Dusk arising)
Tis a hard life..
tho only short.. I bet this took a lotta thought.. ...
February 13th, 2019 06:34 - Supper Scenes - Mark\'s Gospel (18) (Orchidee)
these supper scenes are super
February 13th, 2019 05:35 - Cusp (Neville)
thank you orchidee.. everything should be just fine, cheers .... N
February 13th, 2019 05:32 - Secret Imitations (JaydeVictoria)
My word, you paint a pretty picture darkly.. write on my friend.......
February 13th, 2019 05:24 - Aging Crime. (Goldfinch60)
I understand where you are coming from.. it aint easy.... N
February 13th, 2019 02:38 - The Moon of Love - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
you have just crafted a little gem sir.. a diamond no less..... Neville
February 13th, 2019 02:34 - Secret Imitations (JaydeVictoria)
whatever else you might be... dont forget, you are a poet... x
February 12th, 2019 19:04 - Mary, Queen of Scots (FineB)
A delightful potted history, perfectly penned pertaining to Her Majesty...
February 12th, 2019 12:29 - Self Harm (Neville)
Thank you C.. you are very kind ....
February 12th, 2019 10:15 - You... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
what a terrifically touching and tender reminder of what true love can be...
February 12th, 2019 07:45 - PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards)
well there ya go.. I was not expecting this little beauty, if ya get my...
February 12th, 2019 07:24 - Sunset Hair (Lee Renard Caspian)
sounds like my kind of girl... a delight to read my friend..Neville
February 12th, 2019 07:01 - INVITING. (Fay Slimm.)
this is without a shadow of doubt.. one of THE most beautiful...
February 12th, 2019 05:52 - More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\' (Dusk arising)
I\'m with Michael on this, or should I say these.....
February 12th, 2019 04:51 - Ready For His Return - Mark\'s Gospel (17) (Orchidee)
we should be able to make a rough guess though if he managed to catch the...
February 12th, 2019 04:27 - Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest)
a fine write sir, a very fine write indeed
and one that makes one wonder,...
February 11th, 2019 14:00 - The Sixties, was I There? (Goldfinch60)
As Mary Hopkin once sang.. Those were the days my friend.. Although I was...
February 11th, 2019 10:27 - A few words for my lady (Poetic Dan)
I have never found it easy reciting any of my work in public.. to attempt...
February 11th, 2019 09:48 - A few \\\\\\\'Mary hads\\\\\\\' (Dusk arising)
Dream on squire ... and keep em coming.. ta to Michael too, for providing...
February 11th, 2019 09:40 - The State of Things... (Orchidee)
a delightful deviation from your oft daily delivery of hymn poem.. filled...
February 11th, 2019 06:17 - VEILS. (Fay Slimm.)
You just sent a shiver down my spine Fay.. although of course, my...
February 11th, 2019 05:55 - Psychedelia (Joanna Garrido)
a little trip down memory lane.. thanks for the ride Joanna, much...
February 10th, 2019 14:06 - Propitiation Plenitude (Orchidee)
I am not much cop at propitiation I\'m afraid , tis hard enough just...
February 10th, 2019 12:23 - ANDY HAD... (Michael Edwards)
sweet.. nuff said.. N
February 10th, 2019 12:11 - scars (Dusk arising)
I dunno what\'s going on my friend.. would you believe it, I almost posted...
February 10th, 2019 06:00 - Come give a cheer! (Poetic Dan)
how wonderful a read was that.. you just filled a grey day with a...
February 10th, 2019 05:56 - My Granddaughter. (Goldfinch60)
this super little dedication demonstrates the pure love and pride that...
February 10th, 2019 04:14 - TALK TO ME! (Seek)
It can certainly help, talking that is... this epic poem was thoroughly...
February 9th, 2019 18:21 - Why I Write (Echo Seeker)
a good enough reason to keep writing my friend... I hope you feel better...
February 9th, 2019 11:31 - MARY HAD (2) (Michael Edwards)
that sure tickled her fancy & then some I bet\'cha....got me laughing ...
February 9th, 2019 11:27 - Today Not Tomorrow. (Goldfinch60)
never a truer word neither said nor ever writ..... Neville
February 9th, 2019 11:25 - tower (Dusk arising)
A very impressive poem here I must say.. Five grand stanza\'s each...
February 9th, 2019 10:08 - quench (Dusk arising)
Now then DA having finally accepted the dare ya set me yesterday, I feel...
February 9th, 2019 09:55 - Delightful Dwelling (Orchidee)
as would be expected from a hymn poem, your words are indeed spiritual my...
February 9th, 2019 09:44 - riddance (Dusk arising)
Okay DA.. here goes.. I Like everything about this little gem, except for...
February 8th, 2019 12:34 - I Wait for You (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Translating such a complex poem into any other language than for which it...
February 8th, 2019 12:24 - ABANDONMENT. (Fay Slimm.)
the perfect title and so befitting of a perfectly penned poem... I close...
February 8th, 2019 09:39 - MARY HAD (1) (Michael Edwards)
yak wicks are notoriously very hard to find these days, but I got a whole...
February 8th, 2019 09:31 - Our Best (Lorna)
You just gone and nailed it Lorna,
they are so good and so true, these...
February 8th, 2019 08:43 - Generous Giving - Mark\'s Gospel (16) (Orchidee)
well worded.. indeed, most scrupulously scriptured and scripted.. I much...
February 8th, 2019 04:46 - Feels (Red)
I thought I would read backwards for a change.. You have left a fine poem...
February 8th, 2019 04:23 - Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60)
so there is some hope for me yet, maybe.. enlightenment is what I seek.....
February 8th, 2019 03:20 - End (Sylviasearcher)
the punctuation in this, set it apart
short, sharp and powerful as any...
February 7th, 2019 12:59 - Clouds On My Shoulders (DesertWords)
I liked the gentleness of these words and I liked the way they appeared to...
February 7th, 2019 12:52 - Your true angel (Joseph M Marion)
You most certainly have got it bad my friend.. again tho, good luck to ya,...
February 7th, 2019 12:50 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
I like vineyards.. I have my own little one in the Starra Planina...
February 7th, 2019 12:34 - Evergreen pastures (Caleb.A)
another intriguing poem.. each stanza consisting of three lines and look...
February 7th, 2019 11:53 - RECALL. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah\' indeed.. tis such recollections that mean so very much .. I find the...
February 7th, 2019 10:08 - The Tall But Hollow Institutions (Mottakeenur Rehman)
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words...
February 7th, 2019 07:44 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
it can be anything you so desire... sir..
February 7th, 2019 05:18 - snip (Queer-with-a-pen)
I found these words quite by accident while mooching around here this...
February 6th, 2019 18:09 - My core (Joseph M Marion)
I sounds like love, from the inside out and the outside in.. guess it must...
February 6th, 2019 14:28 - right back at me (Dusk arising)
and just for the record, I could not read this without smiling.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 12:50 - Letting the darkness out (Poetic Dan)
Hang on to that insight my friend.. yes of course it will pass, it...
February 6th, 2019 11:46 - Lake Walking. (Goldfinch60)
How inconsiderate of the council or whoever is responsible for signs in...
February 6th, 2019 09:15 - The Transom Window (Lorna)
what a delightful view you have tempted us to take a peek at through your...
February 6th, 2019 08:41 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
without doubt, the cruelest of seasons captured and the struggles and...
February 6th, 2019 05:16 - 575s SERIOUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Oh\' .. another three in a row
and while that may sound fine
I meant...
February 6th, 2019 04:47 - Promise In Prayers - Mark\'s Gospel (14) (Orchidee)
very interesting.. I have a fig tree from a cutting taken 40 odd years ago...
February 6th, 2019 04:07 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
thanks for visiting orchidee.. she is somebodies wife, I believe.. not...
February 6th, 2019 04:00 - a year full of reasons (Psychofemale)
your title \'a year full of reasons\' could easily become legendary... the...
February 6th, 2019 00:42 - Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan)
My pleasure and back at you my friend... Neville
February 5th, 2019 12:51 - Bartimaeus\' Blessings - Mark\'s Gospel (13) (Orchidee)
enjoyed working through this one orchidee, once I got the hang of...
February 5th, 2019 11:38 - Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan)
you are clearly most poetically prolific.. I have been tempted to post...
February 5th, 2019 11:07 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
some things just have to be said.. yet it takes a poet to say it this...
February 5th, 2019 08:12 - 575s - SERIOUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
what more is there to say.. orchidee has just about nailed it... muchly...
February 5th, 2019 07:54
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