Comments on community poems by Neville
- KEEPING WATCH. (Fay Slimm.)
How perfectly put... tis what we do isn\'t it... Neville :)
December 7th, 2018 04:28 - December Sky (Fay Slimm.)
this little gem is so multi-faceted, it sparkles in its very own write.....
December 6th, 2018 14:51 - POST OP COMPLICATIONS (Michael Edwards)
I really enjoyed this bit of self disclosure... am glad to hear you are on...
December 6th, 2018 14:17 - 9:20 (Arazimus)
what a nice little series of personal recollections, you have kindly left...
December 6th, 2018 12:14 - Angel Announcement (Orchidee)
reads well and looks good on the page.. what more could you ask except to...
December 6th, 2018 12:03 - The rise and fall of life\'s notes (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
an undulating journey of ups and maybe not so downs... reminds me a little...
December 6th, 2018 10:27 - love me (MSA-19)
It can\'t be that bad, surely.. so much self directed negativity ain\'t...
December 6th, 2018 05:33 - Awake (Sylviasearcher)
Move me like your poetry
Until I\'m weak with breathless ecstasy
I...
December 6th, 2018 05:18 - Simply Difficult. (Goldfinch60)
a precisely penned poetical musical paradox captured and true...if ever...
December 6th, 2018 03:12 - Just Another Mad Girl\'s Love Song (Sylviasearcher)
I can appreciate just how cathartic it must have felt having got these...
December 6th, 2018 02:41 - ANOTHER BATCH OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
I think each of these four little gems more than adequately make up the...
December 5th, 2018 05:29 - CHAINS. (Fay Slimm.)
this is, without any doubt an excellent poem.. melancholic maybe, but...
December 5th, 2018 05:21 - Speakeasy (Sylviasearcher)
Very good indeed.. there is certainly more here than immediately meets the...
December 5th, 2018 05:06 - Worthy (Sylviasearcher)
I consider myself lucky to have stumbled upon these thirteen words..
I...
December 5th, 2018 04:31 - Scattered Song (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
reads like a road trip across the US, with wondrous stop offs along the...
December 4th, 2018 18:13 - THIRST. (Fay Slimm.)
a thirst quenched, a sorrow drowned... a most welcome read to contemplate...
December 4th, 2018 16:49 - One Day (Sylviasearcher)
I am mightily impressed with the way the story both grows and flows...
December 4th, 2018 12:44 - A Little Indiscretion (Neville)
thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I...
December 4th, 2018 02:32 - Maybe...... (Orchidee)
who needs meter, or a tune for that matter... this is good medicine...
December 4th, 2018 02:17 - The Fairy on the Tree. (Goldfinch60)
festive fun for sure.. now there just has to be a moral in there...
December 4th, 2018 02:05 - One Tear Removed (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
a smashing poem indeed, from one end to the very other.. and much...
December 3rd, 2018 18:04 - WITH YOU. (Fay Slimm.)
I would be hard pushed to say it any better than many of my reviewing...
December 3rd, 2018 14:37 - I died again today (Sylviasearcher)
interesting... very interesting.. I was immediately hooked by the title...
December 3rd, 2018 14:31 - Wonderful Days Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
yes indeed a fine write.. I particularly like the way you describe her...
December 3rd, 2018 14:23 - Long Shadows (Neville)
cheers..
December 3rd, 2018 08:42 - Autumn (Neville)
indeed, I am a very good listener.. and thank you so much for your...
December 3rd, 2018 04:51 - YIELDING. (Fay Slimm.)
I sense you have a particularly harmonious and otherwise joyous...
December 2nd, 2018 15:12 - Mind Meditation (Orchidee)
You really are a master of this particular genre my literary friend.....
December 2nd, 2018 13:30 - BOBBLES ON SWEATERS (Michael Edwards)
what an amusing conundrum you have posed for us here in your bobbly...
December 2nd, 2018 12:55 - Take Me Away (MissileOfUncertainty)
a most original little gem in my humble opinion, certainly very much...
December 2nd, 2018 12:36 - Prologue (Sylviasearcher)
we all dream, dont we... and we all wait..........I traced back through...
December 2nd, 2018 08:07 - The Delivery Man. (Goldfinch60)
From the drawing of our first breath we are conditioned and shaped by the...
December 2nd, 2018 07:10 - Woof! (Orchidee)
Is this the final version or just a woof draft... I am afraid a lot of my...
December 1st, 2018 07:50 - Shadow Dance (Pantoum) (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
No two ways about it, I am mightily impressed.. how come I never...
November 30th, 2018 18:28 - Bad Desire (Sylviasearcher)
To be honest, and I always try to be honest, the only bad thing here is...
November 30th, 2018 11:39 - Restless (Sylviasearcher)
it would seem you have just woven a picture in word format of that one...
November 30th, 2018 08:53 - Writing not Tapping. (Goldfinch60)
it is the acuteness of observations such as these, that take the P from...
November 30th, 2018 02:34 - At 62 (Kevin Michael Bloor)
62 aint bad when ya 97... a thoroughly entertaining and likewise enjoyed...
November 29th, 2018 15:21 - KAZIMIR MALEVICH WHITE ON WHITE (Michael Edwards)
in any of its many forms, art.. at least in my opinion, is in general, ...
November 29th, 2018 13:39 - HOOD (Laura🌻)
he must either be, or have been good to have such words dedicated thus.....
November 28th, 2018 19:35 - Appetite for Words (Neville)
In succinct terms, I thank thee, but with a certain passion... N
November 28th, 2018 18:14 - Success in Failure. (Goldfinch60)
the capacity to learn, does not make us uniquely human but the capacity to...
November 28th, 2018 06:16 - Schizophrenia (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
Whence is this monstrous thing, why & how to treat it...(St Augustine Book...
November 28th, 2018 06:07 - The Moonbeam Man (Classicmister)
who aint gonna love this.. no one aint that\'s who.. I\'m sure this epic...
November 27th, 2018 07:08 - A Song Of Saints (Orchidee)
Before I read your authors note, it dawned on me that these fine words...
November 27th, 2018 05:02 - When You Were Perfect (Neville)
much appreciated and true...
November 27th, 2018 04:36 - We Two Ships (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
a well crafted poem without a shadow of a doubt & held me fast from stem...
November 26th, 2018 18:10 - Zen Hunting (Neville)
thanks for the tip... N
November 26th, 2018 05:01 - Zen Hunting (Neville)
What a delightful thing to say, and how very kind too.. nothing lasts...
November 25th, 2018 15:41 - Old Fashioned? Moi? (Goldfinch60)
it seems you have captured here for all eternity something of an...
November 25th, 2018 05:28 - The Pyramid of Longing (Neville)
That love to which these words refer, was a very long time ago now my...
November 25th, 2018 04:30 - The Pyramid of Longing (Neville)
Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging gift of words.. They are...
November 24th, 2018 12:37 - WAR CRY. (Fay Slimm.)
a very timely post indeed, emotionally charged and ragged and real...
November 24th, 2018 04:17 - Enlightened Way. (Goldfinch60)
There is, without any doubt, something very special about that silvery...
November 24th, 2018 04:11 - CHAINS. (Fay Slimm.)
Not only do these fine words read well, they also look good on the page...
November 23rd, 2018 07:23 - Why Do I Love Thee (Neville)
I am truly grateful to you Fay.. many thank you\'s for such a kind &...
November 23rd, 2018 07:19 - Before We Die (Neville)
Many thanks Goldfinch60, the \'Book of Longing\' was written by the late...
November 23rd, 2018 04:46 - Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ? (Frederick Samson)
I am sure many of us here will be able to empathise with you, and these...
November 22nd, 2018 08:47 - The Leaves. (Goldfinch60)
and all around was golden..
a smashing autumnal observation & true.....
November 22nd, 2018 08:31 - No Greater Love Than Mine (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
True love is certainly special but other than in a poem, it is hard to...
November 21st, 2018 14:15 - BETWEEN WORLDS. (Fay Slimm.)
What an absolute delight it was to stumble across this page, not only for...
November 21st, 2018 12:21 - Autumn Is With Us - HAIKU. (Goldfinch60)
I adore these.. when I stumble upon a good one, they epitomise the concept...
November 21st, 2018 08:25 - WHEN WE FELL IN LOVE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A PANTOUM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are very brave, the last time I tried a pantoum, it sank ... a fine...
November 21st, 2018 08:16 - A CHINESE LOVE STORY~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Goon but not forgotten.. a delightful little whimsy, if ever there was and...
November 21st, 2018 08:13 - A Taste of Nothing (Neville)
It seems my cigar, coconut & goldfish are all still safe, at least for...
November 20th, 2018 14:23 - Pumped Up (The Retired Bloke)
a good lungful of the stuff makes ya realise your alive , dunnit... a...
November 20th, 2018 05:16 - What is the Time? (Goldfinch60)
What a little cracker.. tis the way ya write em , innit... All Good...
November 20th, 2018 04:32 - Never Born (John Prophet)
a relevant question & one that has been asked throughout time, and ever...
November 19th, 2018 10:49
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