Comments on community poems by Neville
- Evening of Our Great Content (Lorna)
reads perfect... I wanna be there
Neville
April 18th, 2019 05:49 - Gethsemane Garden (Orchidee)
the Garden of Gethsemane is never out of step with time... nice one ...
April 18th, 2019 03:16 - Play. (Goldfinch60)
It would be almost inconceivable to think one might have any more fun than...
April 18th, 2019 01:23 - LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.)
Extremely moving, heartfelt and true
Perfectly poemed say\'s I who for...
April 18th, 2019 00:49 - LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
a sight for sore eyes indeed.. I feel a smile coming on... nice one...
April 18th, 2019 00:18 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards)
If I said these were collectively anything short of great, I would be...
April 17th, 2019 13:19 - I Am Enough (SerenWise)
when you put it like that, I aint gonna argue.. would anyone...
but...
April 17th, 2019 12:58 - Untitled - IV - cont. (Suresh)
Your first stanza is visually exquisite if one imagines it to have been...
April 17th, 2019 11:30 - dawns delight (re-written) (Dusk arising)
I have had a few dreams that were so dreamy I would happily have not...
April 17th, 2019 07:15 - Aromatic Anointing (Orchidee)
I like the idea of aromatic anointing and can understand the reasons for...
April 17th, 2019 04:53 - WRAITHS (Fay Slimm.)
what images these words do conjour...
so much nature captured in a...
April 17th, 2019 04:24 - Lemon Rind (SerenWise)
Oh\' sweet thing, you aint bitter by any chance are ya....
told as is...
April 17th, 2019 02:18 - For What More Could I Ask? (Goldfinch60)
You got the lot my friend and you capture it here so well.... N
April 17th, 2019 02:13 - All Over You. (Kevin browne)
not only does this read well.. it sits near perfect upon the page......
April 16th, 2019 14:16 - Beholden (Suresh)
inspiring, confounding, compelling
interesting whichever way ya look at...
April 16th, 2019 10:22 - The Voyage (SerenWise)
another love poem, that dances like a song on this readers tongue.......
April 16th, 2019 10:19 - THE EGOTIST (Michael Edwards)
Very good indeed sir... N
April 16th, 2019 10:16 - Never Again. (Fay Slimm.)
You got it nailed down and wrapped in a poem Fay... When its gone, its...
April 16th, 2019 10:14 - SOLUTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
an interesting quote indeed...
and a fine bedfellow to accompany your...
April 16th, 2019 08:51 - Emotions (Poetic Dan)
I like this.. One of your earliest it seems and I\'m sure since originally...
April 16th, 2019 08:43 - Of Cathedrals And Dragons (Orchidee)
Yes, a powerful and timely poem if ever there was..... just goes to show...
April 16th, 2019 08:28 - know JB (Dusk arising)
A great and fitting tribute methinks.. Neville
April 16th, 2019 08:22 - UNSATED. (Fay Slimm.)
You surely must have been there to write something so emotive... One can...
April 16th, 2019 03:14 - Genesis (SerenWise)
When it bites, it bites hard and boy, when it does, dont it just feel...
April 16th, 2019 03:10 - A Word with the Creator (Suresh)
You dare to ask questions that many dare only think ..... N
April 16th, 2019 03:08 - Punctuality Spurned. (Goldfinch60)
I feel for you sir... nothing quite so frustrating as waiting for someone...
April 16th, 2019 02:35 - I Day. (Fay Slimm.)
It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know...
April 15th, 2019 05:40 - Two day break (ish) (Poetic Dan)
The sense in ya heart dont have to tally with the sense in ya head.....
April 15th, 2019 05:11 - Serving Serenity (Orchidee)
I certainly agree with the principle of helping the poor and needy ... N
April 15th, 2019 03:50 - MAGICAL. (Fay Slimm.)
a magical image to accompany your most magical of \'Magical\'..
I...
April 15th, 2019 03:31 - MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards)
An excellent vintage sir very chuckle worthy say\'s I... ewe are a card...
April 15th, 2019 03:28 - The Foggy, Foggy Dew. (Goldfinch60)
there are certain songs, or tunes that have a very special meaning and...
April 15th, 2019 01:58 - what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising)
a most moving little miniature my friend and true..... Neville
April 15th, 2019 01:52 - NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards)
Now ya got me thinking again.. Cant be a bad thing that.... Nice...
April 14th, 2019 12:40 - Just a little one (Poetic Dan)
Love it.. love green eggs n ham too.... specially on Fundays..... N
April 14th, 2019 05:21 - My Comeback (Nafis Light)
reads like a revived rock opera.. a good one at that.... Neville
April 14th, 2019 05:13 - Restored And Returned (Orchidee)
when read the second time.. this would appear more symbolic than at first...
April 14th, 2019 04:55 - MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.)
a most marvelous and fuzz free poem of great and unadulterated clarity.. N
April 14th, 2019 04:23 - Tethered (Suresh)
these words demand to be read .. Neville
April 14th, 2019 03:33 - finale (Dusk arising)
It happens & it hurts like hell, so they tell me...... unforgivable maybe,...
April 13th, 2019 04:29 - SHE CRIED IN VAIN (Michael Edwards)
an unexpected twist, but I get the gist... A lovely image.. what is it...
April 13th, 2019 04:28 - Palms Procession (Orchidee)
when you feel it hurting, the mystery of suffering goes write out the ...
April 13th, 2019 04:24 - Transmitting (Poetic Dan)
Absolutely relateable ... I never liked being called Zenaphon Teazle...
April 13th, 2019 04:22 - F**k It (SerenWise)
there now, dont that make ya feel better... best to get it off ya...
April 13th, 2019 04:17 - Where Are You God? (Goldfinch60)
If I could pop over and give you a man hug, I would do just that my...
April 13th, 2019 03:17 - SADNESS (Michael Edwards)
A souper little post and then some..
How abstract can ya...
April 12th, 2019 13:36 - Fancy a Brew? (SerenWise)
Look closer, there is always something more to see.. always...
teabags...
April 12th, 2019 11:58 - And Satan responds...... (Suresh)
am just bending my mental muscle around this ... again......
April 12th, 2019 11:41 - cookie jar (Dusk arising)
this is beautiful, really quite beautiful
April 12th, 2019 11:19 - Motivated Movements (Orchidee)
I can still prescribe something for those movements if they bother you......
April 12th, 2019 10:59 - Breathe (JB)
I liked this, from beginning to almost the very end... I think maybe you...
April 12th, 2019 10:55 - Yes! You.. (Poetic Dan)
This tho short is packed with good intent and words and meaning could not...
April 12th, 2019 05:35 - DEPARTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
This is so darn good, it makes one want to fly.... very atmospheric and...
April 12th, 2019 05:29 - happened (Dusk arising)
I would keep them too... until maybe one day, they will fit another...
April 11th, 2019 16:57 - Morning Coffee (Neville)
Aye sir, you can beat an egg and you can beat a carpet, but you just...
April 11th, 2019 15:39 - Vortex (Suresh)
This needs more hits folks.. come on down.. you know it makes sense... N
April 11th, 2019 12:51 - Unexpected Perfection (SerenWise)
It must be love.. so very well depicted here, if not.. then adoration...
April 11th, 2019 12:02 - Only a Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Super sir.. I do so hope your dream will be realised one fine day.... N
April 11th, 2019 05:53 - TAPS~24 notes (Lauraš»)
Excellent.. quite unique and clearly needed to be written and posted......
April 11th, 2019 05:16 - Repentance Rejoicings (Orchidee)
I repent.. I surely cant be the only one who feels like this about...
April 11th, 2019 04:32 - ONCE (Michael Edwards)
a delightfully clever play on words.. another smile from me..
April 11th, 2019 04:30 - NEWNESS.. (Fay Slimm.)
Hot off the press and shining like a beacon to guide both lost and...
April 11th, 2019 04:26 - Birds (JB)
these words make nothing less than perfect sense & beautifully so .....
April 10th, 2019 17:49 - NIGHTS OF SOLITUDE (Michael Edwards)
I reckon you just nailed solitude sir... very much enjoyed and true.. and...
April 10th, 2019 11:11 - MUST Escape (Suresh)
Henceforth these must be known as Sureshist , or summat like that... I...
April 10th, 2019 11:03 - Gospel Goings (Orchidee)
there\'s a lot of gospel goings on here that Fido needs to be aware of and...
April 10th, 2019 10:34 - thoughts on time (Dusk arising)
this is very near, in its own write a treatise on time itself.... ....
April 10th, 2019 10:31 - LIT. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow indeed,
this is amazing in its own write and made even more so by...
April 10th, 2019 04:19 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (2) (Michael Edwards)
naughty but nice & certainly enjoyed...
April 9th, 2019 17:17 - Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
How wonderful is that, I bet most of us would love to have such a moving...
April 9th, 2019 15:49 - You (SerenWise)
They used to say possession is nine tenths of the law.... I say better...
April 9th, 2019 12:40 - Greatness Glorying (Orchidee)
this is lovely but maybe should have a change of title... I suggest...
April 9th, 2019 08:09 - Kat and Santita all at sea (Dusk arising)
an intriguing, humerous and compelling if not nail biting read with maybe...
April 9th, 2019 08:05 - GEMS. (Fay Slimm.)
As sure as God made little green apples, this must rate among the very top...
April 9th, 2019 04:43 - Woad (SerenWise)
I like this poem, I like it a lot and whilst there may be some who are as...
April 8th, 2019 13:20 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (1) (Michael Edwards)
Well blow me down sidewards... am laughing up my sleeve... N
April 8th, 2019 12:12 - Untitled - III (Suresh)
another profound statement that seeps under the skin...... N
April 8th, 2019 11:48 - Poppies (Neville)
Thank you dear Fay, as always, your reasoned responses, both apt and...
April 8th, 2019 05:58 - ILL-SENT (Fay Slimm.)
Pon my very word, how these words do ring true... Only the other day a...
April 8th, 2019 04:17 - a wish (Dusk arising)
This is a fine write indeed and I for one was not only moved by your...
April 8th, 2019 02:40 - The View from the Window. (Goldfinch60)
an absolutely lovely observation
April 8th, 2019 02:36 - Praise Professions 2 (Orchidee)
a well composed hymn poem for sure.... N
April 8th, 2019 02:32 - stumble (Dusk arising)
a story told well... and a well told story, whichever way ya look at...
April 7th, 2019 14:03 - Brotin Bƶnd (SerenWise)
stings more than a bit... a sharp edged little gem... N
April 7th, 2019 14:01 - 13 SAVEDāMission Accomplished (Lauraš»)
Hero\'s one and all......... N
April 7th, 2019 14:00 - Untitled - IV (Suresh)
Different..... this I suspect is but the tip of an iceberg..... N
April 7th, 2019 11:43 - HITHER. (Fay Slimm.)
This is so fine.. nay tis grande and I feel so flirtesth with and verrily...
April 7th, 2019 06:07 - Praise - Shobach (Orchidee)
Clever and enjoyed... no joke.... N
April 7th, 2019 06:04 - Yours (SerenWise)
another great write.... N
April 7th, 2019 05:00 - Bin Man. (Goldfinch60)
Makes ya wonder dunnit....... Happy Sunday to ya my friend... N
April 7th, 2019 04:51 - You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you (Poetic Dan)
How absolutely delightful... took me way back, so it did..... N
April 7th, 2019 04:48 - Perfect Picture (WildMoonChild)
Truth & a naive innocence.. the perfect combination to commence a much...
April 5th, 2019 03:51 - And Our Laughter Soar Together (Nafis Light)
what a deliriously happy little post this is... N
April 5th, 2019 03:45 - Forgiveness Fullness (Orchidee)
I forgive you, but dont let it happen again.... ya just can\'t beat a...
April 5th, 2019 03:44 - Choices. (Goldfinch60)
You hit the nail squarely on the head with this one sir.... no doubt about...
April 5th, 2019 03:42 - SOUNDS. (Fay Slimm.)
Cor... or should one say hoot, on occasions such as this.... How...
April 5th, 2019 03:39 - I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it! (Poetic Dan)
Exceptionally well strummed he hummed and ah\'ed... then wrote a poem bout...
April 5th, 2019 03:32 - LIMERICK 57 (Michael Edwards)
This is not funny.. this is very serious, seriously funny.... Neville
April 5th, 2019 03:25 - Awaken (SerenWise)
Let me have ya number and I\'m on my way........ sometimes words just fall...
April 4th, 2019 12:55 - The Selkie (SerenWise)
To mer is to be almost human & almost maid in heaven... a deceptively...
April 4th, 2019 12:52
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