Comments on community poems by Neville
- The State of Things... (Orchidee)
a delightful deviation from your oft daily delivery of hymn poem.. filled...
February 11th, 2019 06:17 - VEILS. (Fay Slimm.)
You just sent a shiver down my spine Fay.. although of course, my...
February 11th, 2019 05:55 - Psychedelia (Joanna Garrido)
a little trip down memory lane.. thanks for the ride Joanna, much...
February 10th, 2019 14:06 - Propitiation Plenitude (Orchidee)
I am not much cop at propitiation I\'m afraid , tis hard enough just...
February 10th, 2019 12:23 - ANDY HAD... (Michael Edwards)
sweet.. nuff said.. N
February 10th, 2019 12:11 - scars (Dusk arising)
I dunno what\'s going on my friend.. would you believe it, I almost posted...
February 10th, 2019 06:00 - Come give a cheer! (Poetic Dan)
how wonderful a read was that.. you just filled a grey day with a...
February 10th, 2019 05:56 - My Granddaughter. (Goldfinch60)
this super little dedication demonstrates the pure love and pride that...
February 10th, 2019 04:14 - TALK TO ME! (Seek)
It can certainly help, talking that is... this epic poem was thoroughly...
February 9th, 2019 18:21 - Why I Write (Echo Seeker)
a good enough reason to keep writing my friend... I hope you feel better...
February 9th, 2019 11:31 - MARY HAD (2) (Michael Edwards)
that sure tickled her fancy & then some I bet\'cha....got me laughing ...
February 9th, 2019 11:27 - Today Not Tomorrow. (Goldfinch60)
never a truer word neither said nor ever writ..... Neville
February 9th, 2019 11:25 - tower (Dusk arising)
A very impressive poem here I must say.. Five grand stanza\'s each...
February 9th, 2019 10:08 - quench (Dusk arising)
Now then DA having finally accepted the dare ya set me yesterday, I feel...
February 9th, 2019 09:55 - Delightful Dwelling (Orchidee)
as would be expected from a hymn poem, your words are indeed spiritual my...
February 9th, 2019 09:44 - riddance (Dusk arising)
Okay DA.. here goes.. I Like everything about this little gem, except for...
February 8th, 2019 12:34 - I Wait for You (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Translating such a complex poem into any other language than for which it...
February 8th, 2019 12:24 - ABANDONMENT. (Fay Slimm.)
the perfect title and so befitting of a perfectly penned poem... I close...
February 8th, 2019 09:39 - MARY HAD (1) (Michael Edwards)
yak wicks are notoriously very hard to find these days, but I got a whole...
February 8th, 2019 09:31 - Our Best (Lorna)
You just gone and nailed it Lorna,
they are so good and so true, these...
February 8th, 2019 08:43 - Generous Giving - Mark\'s Gospel (16) (Orchidee)
well worded.. indeed, most scrupulously scriptured and scripted.. I much...
February 8th, 2019 04:46 - Feels (Red)
I thought I would read backwards for a change.. You have left a fine poem...
February 8th, 2019 04:23 - Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60)
so there is some hope for me yet, maybe.. enlightenment is what I seek.....
February 8th, 2019 03:20 - End (Sylviasearcher)
the punctuation in this, set it apart
short, sharp and powerful as any...
February 7th, 2019 12:59 - Clouds On My Shoulders (DesertWords)
I liked the gentleness of these words and I liked the way they appeared to...
February 7th, 2019 12:52 - Your true angel (Joseph M Marion)
You most certainly have got it bad my friend.. again tho, good luck to ya,...
February 7th, 2019 12:50 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
I like vineyards.. I have my own little one in the Starra Planina...
February 7th, 2019 12:34 - Evergreen pastures (Caleb.A)
another intriguing poem.. each stanza consisting of three lines and look...
February 7th, 2019 11:53 - RECALL. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah\' indeed.. tis such recollections that mean so very much .. I find the...
February 7th, 2019 10:08 - The Tall But Hollow Institutions (Mottakeenur Rehman)
an interesting, presumably autobiographical tale told well.. your words...
February 7th, 2019 07:44 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
it can be anything you so desire... sir..
February 7th, 2019 05:18 - snip (Queer-with-a-pen)
I found these words quite by accident while mooching around here this...
February 6th, 2019 18:09 - My core (Joseph M Marion)
I sounds like love, from the inside out and the outside in.. guess it must...
February 6th, 2019 14:28 - right back at me (Dusk arising)
and just for the record, I could not read this without smiling.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 12:50 - Letting the darkness out (Poetic Dan)
Hang on to that insight my friend.. yes of course it will pass, it...
February 6th, 2019 11:46 - Lake Walking. (Goldfinch60)
How inconsiderate of the council or whoever is responsible for signs in...
February 6th, 2019 09:15 - The Transom Window (Lorna)
what a delightful view you have tempted us to take a peek at through your...
February 6th, 2019 08:41 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
without doubt, the cruelest of seasons captured and the struggles and...
February 6th, 2019 05:16 - 575s SERIOUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Oh\' .. another three in a row
and while that may sound fine
I meant...
February 6th, 2019 04:47 - Promise In Prayers - Mark\'s Gospel (14) (Orchidee)
very interesting.. I have a fig tree from a cutting taken 40 odd years ago...
February 6th, 2019 04:07 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
thanks for visiting orchidee.. she is somebodies wife, I believe.. not...
February 6th, 2019 04:00 - a year full of reasons (Psychofemale)
your title \'a year full of reasons\' could easily become legendary... the...
February 6th, 2019 00:42 - Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan)
My pleasure and back at you my friend... Neville
February 5th, 2019 12:51 - Bartimaeus\' Blessings - Mark\'s Gospel (13) (Orchidee)
enjoyed working through this one orchidee, once I got the hang of...
February 5th, 2019 11:38 - Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan)
you are clearly most poetically prolific.. I have been tempted to post...
February 5th, 2019 11:07 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
some things just have to be said.. yet it takes a poet to say it this...
February 5th, 2019 08:12 - 575s - SERIOUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
what more is there to say.. orchidee has just about nailed it... muchly...
February 5th, 2019 07:54 - Words (Lorna)
you have crafted a pearl of a poem, one of those special little gems that...
February 5th, 2019 07:42 - Jun Kenshi (Neville)
no holes allowed, just take my word for it my friend... N
February 5th, 2019 07:36 - HEARABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
My word.. you have somehow managed to describe something quite wondrous my...
February 5th, 2019 06:46 - Jun Kenshi (Neville)
Domo arigato my friend & true... I was hoping you might find this little...
February 5th, 2019 06:37 - How Can It Be? (Goldfinch60)
I have absolutely no doubt you mean every word of this quintessential love...
February 5th, 2019 05:54 - The Prairie (Lorna)
you seem to have captured the very essence of the prairie here ... magic...
February 4th, 2019 17:55 - The Letter (Lorna)
I imagine I would rather read about it than receive it..
a poem...
February 4th, 2019 17:50 - he caught her (Dusk arising)
This is clearly the poem you referred to recently.. in your review...
February 4th, 2019 14:14 - New or Old. (Goldfinch60)
absolutely spot on sir...
February 4th, 2019 12:16 - The End (Lorna)
seriously good
February 4th, 2019 08:53 - Riches Restrainings - Mark\'s Gospel (12) (Orchidee)
When I first heard what I believe to be a proverb about a camel and...
February 4th, 2019 05:52 - OUTGROWN (Fay Slimm.)
this is a very special poem you have left here for us to enjoy today Fay...
February 4th, 2019 04:03 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
must have been an ass, or a snake in the grass... pc is a load of...
February 4th, 2019 03:46 - Regrets, No hitting rewind (Angela1711)
How sad is that.. but how well captured too, I might add... N
February 3rd, 2019 14:12 - The Pissed Optimist (Surucipe)
such is life... your round, I think... N
February 3rd, 2019 13:15 - The Artist (SerenWise)
You may be new here, but my word, you are to date enjoyed... Neville
February 3rd, 2019 11:23 - TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
a brilliant poem Fay.. you just raised the bar by quite a bit, I can tell...
February 3rd, 2019 10:59 - Ink Blots (Neville)
yes.. it works okay and can look great.. feel free ...
February 3rd, 2019 08:41 - 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Don\'t ya just love accents.. mind you, I love herrings too, but not in...
February 3rd, 2019 06:50 - Ink Blots (Neville)
I have been around for a while ... I once knew Anne Tique... she was...
February 3rd, 2019 06:03 - Prosperous Praises (Orchidee)
sometimes ya just can\'t see the wood for the psalm keys.... N
February 3rd, 2019 05:43 - promise (Dusk arising)
An emotionally charged poem indeed, made even more so by virtue of the...
February 2nd, 2019 07:13 - No, There Will be no Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for this delightful tho somewhat blustery trip down memory...
February 2nd, 2019 06:16 - 575 Smiles (2) (Michael Edwards)
both good, but the second one is bril.... N :)
February 2nd, 2019 06:14 - Radiant Revealing (Orchidee)
Is St\' Ephraim the Syrian a mate of your\'s by any chance, or was he in...
February 2nd, 2019 05:32 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
we kinda lost touch recently... but if our paths cross, I will point her...
February 2nd, 2019 04:30 - adrift (Delilah)
a nice little poem with a slightly sad taint.... certainly enjoyed.......
February 2nd, 2019 03:25 - Fling (LIGHT WARRIOR)
life\'s a bitch aint it... go on let it all out, I can almost certainly...
February 1st, 2019 12:40 - Searching (Sylviasearcher)
tis where it all began...
should you ever find what it is you are...
February 1st, 2019 08:36 - Chet Baker Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Ah\' something of a classic ... I am glad you posted this poem and...
February 1st, 2019 06:03 - A seat beneath the apple tree (Caleb.A)
an intriguing first post and these words certainly show considerable...
February 1st, 2019 06:01 - ShhhHaiku (Sylviasearcher)
I could gorge on haiku any day of the week.... blink.... feels good.. N
February 1st, 2019 04:40 - Blink (Neville)
Glad you liked it sylviasearcher, that means a lot to me... and one day.....
February 1st, 2019 04:38 - Servant Scenes - Mark\'s Gospel (11) (Orchidee)
All the 7\'s eh.. you crafty thing you.. Mark would be proud of ya.......
February 1st, 2019 04:35 - 575 SMILES (1) (Michael Edwards)
there is a fine line between good and great both on the brush & the pen,...
February 1st, 2019 04:21 - Temple of Moon (CindyB)
Welcome to MPS.. your first post was thoroughly enjoyed, may there be many...
February 1st, 2019 01:03 - Silk (Hpoetry)
a seemingly well crafted bit o erotic poetry.. perfectly poemed in my...
January 31st, 2019 17:24 - peace (Dusk arising)
something I dream about, something I strive for in my own way... nicely...
January 31st, 2019 16:25 - Meeting Lust (Netashi)
unusual and quite intriguing.. once started I was compelled to read all...
January 31st, 2019 13:24 - The Misery of Poor (Mottakeenur Rehman)
thoroughly enjoyed but very sad
January 31st, 2019 13:15 - DREAMS LOST (Michael Edwards)
extraordinarily well stated .. nice painting too..... N
January 31st, 2019 13:07 - Adoration (Sylviasearcher)
what an exquisite bit of erotica, if you dont mind me saying so.. tis...
January 31st, 2019 11:55 - UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.)
I must admit that I was unaware that Roberto Assaglioli had once said...
January 31st, 2019 10:43 - Cantate Cavalcade (Orchidee)
that is one hell of a lot of Alleluia\'s, innit.... N
January 31st, 2019 04:55 - Many Things to Many Men (Neville)
thanks my friend.. will give you a shout if I need ya... Neville
January 31st, 2019 04:53 - The whir of the unsaid (Sylviasearcher)
Great title, some great lines and a whole lot of great insights shared.....
January 31st, 2019 04:33 - Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60)
nowt so strange as folk... maybe it said more about your expectations......
January 31st, 2019 04:26 - she speaks (Psychofemale)
sometimes, there is no other way... that\'s just the way it has to be.......
January 31st, 2019 04:21 - DAVID T. (Laura🌻)
ouch... you have such a way with words Laura, these made me wince for...
January 30th, 2019 15:37 - THE PICNIC (Laura🌻)
absolutely delightful.. not only your poem, but the authors note ... am...
January 30th, 2019 12:38 - IDEAS (Laura🌻)
it seems all the clever comments have already been left by my reviewing...
January 30th, 2019 12:34 - The Lantern (Netashi)
we all need a light of one type or another, to help us along those dark...
January 30th, 2019 11:23 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
intriguing is good enough for me.. many thanks my friend.... Neville
January 30th, 2019 11:20
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