Comments on community poems by Neville
- Blessings Benefits (Orchidee)
I thought I read this a day or two back.... but when I checked it seems I...
August 2nd, 2019 03:54 - HUMAN DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
I got such a soft spot for these Michael.. maybe we should all have one...
August 2nd, 2019 03:18 - Tended. (Fay Slimm.)
Your words read more atmospheric and even prettier than the image you have...
August 2nd, 2019 03:13 - Adrenaline shot (Chris Yellow)
You got it dont\'cha... well poemed... N
August 2nd, 2019 02:39 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
So good to hear sir... and a delight to read... I am so glad you managed...
August 2nd, 2019 02:14 - ()
this is so cool... what else could it possibly be...
Your diamond...
August 1st, 2019 16:53 - Mental Health (Demi.T)
I wish more folk would write about their experience of mental health.....
August 1st, 2019 13:23 - Standing Alone (+6) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Bravo sir.. each one of these a little gem in its own write... and...
August 1st, 2019 12:15 - Jam (Jabberwocky)
what a nice little rhyming whimsey we have here.. nicely penned from start...
August 1st, 2019 12:10 - Knowledges. (Goldfinch60)
aint it amazing what we dont forget
How times have changed eh my...
August 1st, 2019 11:50 - Love you more (Poetic Dan)
Happy Birthday Rainbow Ninja.. can ya see that ya Dad loves ya...
Coz...
August 1st, 2019 11:46 - futures past (Purged-soul whispered-sin)
I so hope that you are wrong ... any chance of just running away...
A...
August 1st, 2019 11:42 - Black (Purged-soul whispered-sin)
Reads like a first class business trip on lysergic acid...
August 1st, 2019 06:45 - UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
brevity in motion....
nicely done sir.... N
August 1st, 2019 05:52 - Unwrapped. (Fay Slimm.)
Hey Fay.. this is one hell of a love poem for sure... darn near perfect,...
August 1st, 2019 03:04 - Light Of Life (Orchidee)
for those who live in shadows blindly... light may shine and set them...
August 1st, 2019 02:43 - SATAN (FineB)
I am inclined to agree that evil does exist in many forms...many of them...
August 1st, 2019 02:04 - the love of birdsong (Dusk arising)
I was not expecting that at all, I dunno what I was expecting
not sure...
August 1st, 2019 01:51 - Pest Control (Ronald Watson)
Most chuckleworthy if I may be so bold....
Neville
July 31st, 2019 11:01 - Silhouette (Baddaytobealive)
Much liked by me... and welcome to my poetic side...
Neville
July 31st, 2019 10:58 - Fear of anticipation (Chris Yellow)
Well written and with more than a ring of truth to it.. anticipatory...
July 31st, 2019 10:56 - Shard of a shard (Poetic Dan)
I think these words should be read as they are writ or laid down... and...
July 31st, 2019 07:02 - her weakness (Dusk arising)
This is one of them great little sad reads I like so much .. clever, well...
July 31st, 2019 06:55 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
smashing my dear.. a super distraction from the hum drum of the moment......
July 31st, 2019 03:25 - Confetti (Smallblackflowers)
I enjoyed these words...
oh\' and welcome to my poetic side...
July 31st, 2019 02:45 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
I am English and certainly enjoy my cup of tea.. I\'m taking my first one...
July 31st, 2019 02:42 - ANOTHER SHORTIE (Michael Edwards)
you have a habit of making me smile sir.. and today is no exception.......
July 31st, 2019 02:24 - Creative Considerings (Orchidee)
one has to consider all things, weigh them up and make choices based on...
July 31st, 2019 02:23 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
This is quite literally a marriage of poetry and philosophy at its...
July 31st, 2019 01:50 - Conned to the End. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant sir.. a wheely good punchline if I may say so... and...
July 31st, 2019 01:46 - From Dirt (John McChord)
interesting an very much enjoyed... Neville
July 30th, 2019 11:39 - With You--Pt.2 (Christina8)
another little cracker if ever there was... some one some where is a very...
July 30th, 2019 10:45 - With You (Christina8)
this is a fine example of a love song penned by one who doubts them self...
July 30th, 2019 10:43 - Shards of Knowledge (Suresh)
tis true... as soon as I saw the title.. I was hooked ... having thought...
July 30th, 2019 05:57 - FIT AS A FIDDLE (Michael Edwards)
Hey diddle diddle.. I do believe the origen of this phrase has evolved...
July 30th, 2019 05:54 - Missing you (Jessicaendingxo)
A nice little sad one to kick off with jessicaendingxo..... and welcome to...
July 30th, 2019 05:46 - How Are You Today? (Goldfinch60)
if only more folk could see the world through such optimistic eyes,...
July 30th, 2019 05:43 - A speck (Poetic Dan)
your first two lines are filled with truth.. if more folk opened their...
July 30th, 2019 05:41 - Peace With God (Orchidee)
I do so hope all those who have a spiritual figurehead find the peace...
July 30th, 2019 03:45 - Thirst. (Fay Slimm.)
there can be no mistaking where the inspiration for today\'s poetic gift...
July 30th, 2019 03:36 - Mom (British tea)
this is so good & on so many different levels ... and timely too in an age...
July 29th, 2019 08:07 - Candles (Sylviasearcher)
These words seem to tell an almost complete story... the bit that is...
July 29th, 2019 08:06 - Learnt Curves. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the title and the rest warms the cockles of this reader\'s heart...
July 29th, 2019 07:03 - Victim (Jabberwocky)
a good un and that\'s for sure .. thoroughly enjoyed sir... Neville
July 29th, 2019 03:33 - Unraveling...... (Suresh)
This is one of those that once started must be seen through to the end, no...
July 29th, 2019 03:32 - The Fall (Christina8)
the strictest of rules should apply only to Catholic priests & the like......
July 29th, 2019 03:26 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
and you sir .. have a way with words too ....
July 29th, 2019 03:21 - Guiding Grace (Orchidee)
I dunno why but I Like the term Grenoble... and shall investigate in due...
July 29th, 2019 02:31 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
Ah... people feeling.. my fave pastime.. that and trying to make people...
July 29th, 2019 02:27 - Hunfriths Head (SerenWise)
In my view, I think may be among your best yet... almost certain of it..
July 29th, 2019 01:40 - Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
this is an absolute delight.. nuff said,
except I dont mind admitting...
July 28th, 2019 12:52 - Heat (FineB)
welcome to an unusually warm summer... you sound like my kinda...
July 28th, 2019 04:28 - Break Your Heart (Christina8)
But ya never forget, do ya....
this is a little peach of a poem well...
July 28th, 2019 04:25 - Conclusions. (Goldfinch60)
Its the differences that make the world go round.. well that\'s my...
July 28th, 2019 04:24 - To Know Christ Is To Know God (Orchidee)
you got a lot of 7\'s here today orchidee......... N
July 28th, 2019 04:21 - It doesn\'t matter any more (Poetic Dan)
Read several times now and I think this page is privy to some of your...
July 27th, 2019 17:20 - Twice Stirred. (Fay Slimm.)
Damn good in its own write
Calliope is all these things and more... ...
July 27th, 2019 11:00 - THE WHO (FineB)
This is a great tribute to a great band... I saw them three times.. the...
July 27th, 2019 10:29 - without drinking (Dusk arising)
this is such a good poem,.. regardless of the inspiration behind it and...
July 27th, 2019 08:35 - Family Focus (Orchidee)
I think it is important to focus on the family...
Focus is certainly...
July 27th, 2019 04:55 - Fishing Again. (Goldfinch60)
Not quite like riding a bike but hey.. you still got it fella and I am...
July 27th, 2019 01:44 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
well worth the wait .. it seems you did have a delightful afternoon..
I...
July 27th, 2019 00:19 - Thoughts on love (Christina8)
a very impressive and original analysis/poem.. much liked by me.... N
July 26th, 2019 23:47 - Ode to You (SerenWise)
told ya before.. it has just got to be love... a smashing ode to someone...
July 26th, 2019 23:44 - Love Is........ (Suresh)
this is a veritable treatise to love my friend.....
it hurts when its...
July 26th, 2019 10:04 - dusk arises (Dusk arising)
your muse is nocturnal then...
lucky you and all those of us who find...
July 26th, 2019 06:20 - Penitent Prayer (Orchidee)
only if one is truly sorry might they be allowed to forgive themselves......
July 26th, 2019 06:18 - Waking Gently (Christina8)
I\'m with Goldfinch60 on this & all the way.....
July 26th, 2019 06:13 - HAPPENINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
and they call it evolution.... strange that..... I have long called it...
July 26th, 2019 03:47 - Ignorant People. (Goldfinch60)
there\'s nowt as strange as folk ....
July 26th, 2019 01:52 - The catapult clause (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I\'m sure it does mate.. if it dont there\'s going to be hell to pay.... a...
July 25th, 2019 10:28 - Untarnished (Christina8)
this is very good... it is uncomplicated and has a kind of feel good...
July 25th, 2019 06:05 - Thunder (Poetic Dan)
now that\'s more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long...
July 25th, 2019 06:02 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
another great observation and get this, I never knew that...... cheers...
July 25th, 2019 06:00 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
Do I detect a slight religious flavour herein.........
You have faith...
July 25th, 2019 05:57 - In This Life. (Kevin browne)
Methinks this is more self disclosive than one might at first imagine.......
July 25th, 2019 05:51 - Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.)
On reflection, these well crafted words remind me that war is not for...
July 25th, 2019 04:30 - for one another (Dusk arising)
words to remember
well penned, well shared and true...
July 25th, 2019 04:26 - Nurses--An Acrostic (Christina8)
Well constructed and essentially very true................. Neville
July 24th, 2019 14:29 - The \"who\" I shall retain (Poetic Dan)
You are not there yet, are you.. but you have moved forward, and that is...
July 24th, 2019 09:01 - My senses (Christina8)
it aint like this often, so thanks for reminding me that it can be.......
July 24th, 2019 04:53 - DEFENCES. (Fay Slimm.)
the juxtapositioning of the old tree and wise men/people is done...
July 24th, 2019 04:48 - Perseveringly Progressing (Orchidee)
This is a very well constructed hymn poem Orchidee.... it looks great on...
July 24th, 2019 02:11 - Boris (Dusk arising)
Difficult and otherwise troubled times ahead.. I am sure the buffoon wont...
July 24th, 2019 02:05 - Daddy\'s Gone (Christina8)
some people when they are gone, and for whatever reason gone, leave larger...
July 24th, 2019 01:42 - Nature\'s Anger. (Goldfinch60)
Cor blimey, what happened there..... what an amazing thing and described...
July 24th, 2019 01:37 - Sweet Rendezvous (Christina8)
there is a certain appealing charm to this ... kinda free verse rhyme......
July 23rd, 2019 14:52 - Passions (Christina8)
when you said these words are of an erotic nature.. you were not kidding...
July 23rd, 2019 13:12 - Calla Lily (Christina8)
The Calla Lily is indeed a most beautiful thing to behold.. and when spied...
July 23rd, 2019 13:10 - One Last Tear (Christina8)
Bring on tomorrow and start all over...
No more tears but be sure,...
July 23rd, 2019 12:53 - Living in the Moment (Suresh)
I enjoyed these words and could very easily relate to them.... I once...
July 23rd, 2019 11:45 - Dead (Sylviasearcher)
In trying to avoid platitudes, I am presently struggling to find words...
July 23rd, 2019 04:48 - YOU ARE. (Fay Slimm.)
I bet I\'m not the only one who feels these words are meant for them......
July 23rd, 2019 04:45 - Glory Gladness (Orchidee)
it seems you did well to find that clip.... glory be....
July 23rd, 2019 02:59 - when i need (Dusk arising)
there is an ache that threads throughout this post.... and felt strong as...
July 23rd, 2019 02:57 - Everlasting Snow (Christina8)
what a wintry way with words you have my dear ... and what a wonderful way...
July 23rd, 2019 02:07 - Not Knowing (Suresh)
it seems a storm has blown...... N
July 22nd, 2019 14:31 - Of Loneliness (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Terrific in a very sad kind of way.. this is certainly a great write my...
July 22nd, 2019 14:22 - The Soul Remembers (SerenWise)
A beautiful and intriguing title... then followed by a pretty damn good...
July 22nd, 2019 14:10 - A ballet, by Full Moon (Suresh)
Thoroughly enjoyed & then some....
July 22nd, 2019 09:55
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