Comments on community poems by Neville
- make believe its your first time (Dusk arising)
what a wonderful way to while away an evening.. or any time of day for...
June 15th, 2019 11:53 - Dear Children. (Kevin browne)
I pity the poor children too... there is so much pain and suffering ...
June 15th, 2019 09:01 - MILE OVEN DYE (Michael Edwards)
splendid.. I like everything about this little pearl of a poem.... nowt...
June 15th, 2019 08:39 - Living Life As Fast As I Can. (Kevin browne)
life is a delicately balanced predicament....
some live on the...
June 15th, 2019 04:28 - Imagination Managing. (Goldfinch60)
ouch... in trying to read this out loud, you just shredded my tongue... or...
June 15th, 2019 04:21 - Look... I\'m in your heart (Andrew Charles Forrest)
not only are your words both great and truly memorable.. you chose a...
June 14th, 2019 12:59 - Forces of Creation......5 (Suresh)
and nothing \'s changed.. it still is
June 14th, 2019 11:38 - prevail (Dusk arising)
I decided to re-visit these fine words for three reasons
1) Because they...
June 14th, 2019 11:29 - SEDUCTION. (Fay Slimm.)
ah\' the lure and the grip of a satin boa....... intoxicating.. in a fun...
June 14th, 2019 05:15 - That Wonderful Place. (Goldfinch60)
I am so glad you feel able to share these moments... they are very moving...
June 14th, 2019 04:06 - If Ever I Get A Girl Again. (Kevin browne)
Cor Blimey it sounds like ya had a whole flock of them there gulls...
June 13th, 2019 17:30 - Zeal For Zion (Orchidee)
It seems he\'s had an eye on Zion for a long time.....
June 13th, 2019 16:41 - regret (Dusk arising)
there now.. that\'s more like it.. keep em coming..... N
June 13th, 2019 13:08 - WE. (Fay Slimm.)
I double dare anyone to deny these words failed to put a smile on their...
June 13th, 2019 08:01 - Rain & Coffee (SerenWise)
welcome to the real world....
June 12th, 2019 17:37 - Anxiety (Kasia Kevan)
what a delightful helping hand you offer to those who are gripped by...
June 12th, 2019 10:54 - Shadows (Suresh)
I have no doubt at all .. the answer is right in front of me....
June 12th, 2019 03:00 - beautiful pastime (Dusk arising)
I will not be the only one I\'m sure that is glad you had a pen to hand...
June 12th, 2019 02:53 - Faith Proves Itself By Works - James Series (3) (Orchidee)
I know that faith can move mountains.. but I never knew that there were...
June 12th, 2019 02:48 - Who Am I - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
you are a diamond geezer... just like your poem is today..... Neville
June 12th, 2019 02:38 - I am.... (Poetic Dan)
Good to hear... how wonderful is that...
June 12th, 2019 02:37 - ESTEEM. (Fay Slimm.)
filled like a bloomin garden... full of beautiful truisms one only need...
June 12th, 2019 02:34 - Michael\'s Artistic World (Goldfinch60)
the painting in question is indeed kinda mesmerizing.. I certainly enjoyed...
June 12th, 2019 01:33 - Outrageous (Suresh)
the master of deception.. no longer believes himself...
(concept copy...
June 11th, 2019 17:21 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards)
Twixt or tween if ya know what I mean...
Ah\' our Arabella was...
June 11th, 2019 17:17 - WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF --------- II (Suresh)
you raise a very interesting question Suresh... I am sure many have...
June 11th, 2019 11:33 - Sending it somewhere (Poetic Dan)
insight is a double edged sword, but when that sword is shared between a...
June 11th, 2019 06:23 - therapoetic (Dusk arising)
a clever message here contained within a message, wrapped within a poem......
June 11th, 2019 05:28 - SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
without the eyes of a poet and all associated skills, such wonders would...
June 11th, 2019 05:22 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
been there, done that & still got the scars.....
a cracking little...
June 10th, 2019 10:39 - Watch Butterflies Float. (Kevin browne)
you have a a very versatile approach to poetry sir and aint half bad at it...
June 10th, 2019 10:33 - Spirit Shine (Orchidee)
I prefer my spirits in a shot glass.. neat...
Nevertheless, I suspect...
June 10th, 2019 04:23 - GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Kernow is calling..... no two ways about it absolutely brilliant...
June 10th, 2019 04:18 - New Definitions (SerenWise)
and each a defining moment that shapes a brand new you..... sounds like...
June 10th, 2019 02:59 - Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60)
tis crazy innit.. you write about what I have been thinking for years......
June 10th, 2019 02:54 - Snippet - Realization (Suresh)
it is almost always the case that an addiction is unlikely to be broken,...
June 9th, 2019 16:53 - Beyond Ahead. (Fay Slimm.)
I could read this over and over again... and would certainly encourage...
June 9th, 2019 11:49 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
By Jove I think he\'s got it...
no, he\'s definitely got it.... Neville
June 9th, 2019 11:45 - Pentecost Pourings (Orchidee)
my word.. is it that time already....
June 9th, 2019 11:38 - Singing On. (Fay Slimm.)
the source of this ache is clearly in the waiting time....
poetically...
June 9th, 2019 05:50 - Untitled - XVIII (Suresh)
still feels like a long time coming.... both true.. maybe but certainly...
June 9th, 2019 05:46 - Of those we lose (Andrew Charles Forrest)
your opening two lines are incredible as is the entire poem, but it is...
June 9th, 2019 05:17 - worth repeating (Dusk arising)
How amazingly ragged and bloody and real these words are... and how they...
June 9th, 2019 05:13 - An Omen. (Fay Slimm.)
more than just an omen... I sense a moral too
a very atmospheric write...
June 9th, 2019 05:07 - Untitled (Suresh)
Now there is indeed a question... I have asked time and time over......
June 9th, 2019 05:00 - In Search Of (Suresh)
I am quite convinced that regardless of how strongly one might deny it......
June 9th, 2019 04:55 - Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan)
I can see no reason why you should ever put yourself down again Dan... you...
June 9th, 2019 04:32 - I Wonder. (Fay Slimm.)
there is a sense of profound loss here... I share that loss today.. as you...
June 8th, 2019 02:49 - Voluminous Voice (Orchidee)
I think a whisper is far more alluring than a raised voice... but I do so...
June 8th, 2019 02:45 - Fold & keep (Poetic Dan)
your writing goes from strength to strength.. nuff said...
Neville
June 8th, 2019 02:42 - Arm and a leg (Poetic Dan)
you need to keep all these together for the kids.. there are good lessons...
June 8th, 2019 01:10 - The Joy of Old Age (Goldfinch60)
You are indeed blessed my friend.. and I am delighted to be telling you...
June 8th, 2019 01:02 - Coffee Sir? (Goldfinch60)
I guess we all get asked this same question every now and again......
June 8th, 2019 00:56 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (9) (Michael Edwards)
I wonder what gave her the hump.....
my first chuckle of the day......
June 8th, 2019 00:52 - Without you (Rebeccasr5)
Say it like it is and stay both proud and true.... very much enjoyed on...
June 7th, 2019 23:27 - The SPY (FineB)
welcome to my world... sounds right up my street.... damn good book...
June 7th, 2019 12:59 - Contrariety (Suresh)
even on the toughest of days opposites often attract.. even if they only...
June 7th, 2019 12:46 - resurrect (Suresh)
an interesting and maybe for some a controversial statement, perspective,...
June 7th, 2019 11:50 - A COLLECTION (8) (Michael Edwards)
an intriguing little poem that had me thinking .... and only when I...
June 7th, 2019 11:44 - Willing Way (Orchidee)
there are indeed many ways.. it would be nice to think we all have an...
June 7th, 2019 10:18 - Home is me (Poetic Dan)
I bet there aint a single one of us who aint happy for ya... keep...
June 7th, 2019 10:13 - prevail (Dusk arising)
A fine, timely and fitting poem without a question of a...
June 7th, 2019 04:01 - CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.)
Life is full of them.. and of course risks too since every choice carries...
June 7th, 2019 03:58 - Jane Fonda (FineB)
An impressive CV for sure... I certainly had a crush on her way back... a...
June 7th, 2019 03:05 - Memory Lost. (Goldfinch60)
sometimes I will read something, or hear something that sends a shiver...
June 7th, 2019 02:57 - SHORE LINE (Michael Edwards)
extremely well crafted Michael this could be x5 individual haiku type...
June 6th, 2019 16:00 - My Muse (SerenWise)
someone somewhere is gonna be tickled pink & blushing scarlet...
I...
June 6th, 2019 13:10 - I Trust Not In Me (Orchidee)
Hey Orchidee, my little Guinea Pig, you should ad lib more often.......
June 6th, 2019 07:30 - Untitled - XI (Suresh)
Tis like the sword of Damocles caressing ya neck... very sharp and very...
June 6th, 2019 05:46 - A Living Scarecrow (Suresh)
what a delectable exchange between the scarecrow and his Maker.. nice bit...
June 6th, 2019 05:40 - BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.)
just you mark my words.. we have all been there .... even when my sweet...
June 6th, 2019 04:57 - Just Like An Angel. (Kevin browne)
an interesting poem filled to the point of overflowing with ideas and...
June 6th, 2019 03:01 - in the dark (Dusk arising)
dont\'cha just love dreams like that.. sometimes they are just so good......
June 5th, 2019 13:46 - Troubles (Lorna)
we all have them, but ya gotta keep on smilin...
I was only playing...
June 5th, 2019 07:48 - THE MISSING \'E\' (Michael Edwards)
xc ll nt Micha l sir, and that painting aint half bad ith r
N vill
June 5th, 2019 04:49 - Fairytale (Sylviasearcher)
I think your recent sabbatical did you & your muse the world of good....
June 5th, 2019 04:47 - Faith Removes Discrimination - James Series (2) (Orchidee)
discrimination and prejudice are almost always based on nothing but...
June 5th, 2019 03:55 - NO LIMITS. (Fay Slimm.)
dont just say it and risk being misheard or forgot.. scribe it and take a...
June 5th, 2019 03:49 - Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60)
when ya put it like that, we are all so very lucky, but it is so nice to...
June 5th, 2019 03:26 - Ode to the Artist (Sylviasearcher)
Take it from me, there is nothing wrong with the first verse..
and in my...
June 4th, 2019 17:18 - Continuing Life. (Goldfinch60)
a most uplifting view of what it is all about.. despite everything, you...
June 4th, 2019 16:45 - Untitled (Suresh)
A great question to ask if you are interviewing some one for a job... but...
June 4th, 2019 13:38 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
it was a real treat to meander slow through your beautiful words this...
June 4th, 2019 13:33 - Storm (Dusk arising)
a tantalizing tale and a half, with a bit of a surprise at tother end......
June 4th, 2019 08:10 - Here An Hilastrion (Orchidee)
an easy on the eye read... a new word for me too... Neville
June 4th, 2019 08:04 - The Evening Ball (Lorna)
and they moved like tigers on Vaseline.... yes indeed, a sight to...
June 4th, 2019 07:07 - LILY. (Fay Slimm.)
the world needs more of these fancies ... poor Lily .. but what about the...
June 4th, 2019 05:03 - One Day (SerenWise)
as a general rule, it would not seem too much to ask, but then again.. it...
June 3rd, 2019 23:08 - OBSEQUIES (Laura🌻)
whether lost, or otherwise unobtainable & for whatever reason, it is...
June 3rd, 2019 17:13 - A Moment in Time - III (Suresh)
an interesting poem, naturally... and with so many intriguing...
June 3rd, 2019 17:04 - A Time for Everything (Lorna)
there certainly is an optimum time for everything, and if ya miss it the...
June 3rd, 2019 12:47 - Building Bridges (Keshsi)
filled with optimism & truth.. oh\' and well penned too... I hope these...
June 3rd, 2019 06:12 - Hardly a sound (Poetic Dan)
Ha.. I am grinning so hard my cheeks ache.. and that is the bloomin...
June 3rd, 2019 06:10 - Stay (CindyB)
yes indeed, a fine poem and much enjoyed... just crying out to be read it...
June 3rd, 2019 06:07 - A Letter to You (Sillygirl)
these words could just as easily be written for my weighing scales.. thank...
June 3rd, 2019 06:04 - disjointed memories of north britain (Dusk arising)
almost a magnificent poem my friend and true... these words bring a lump...
June 3rd, 2019 04:30 - The Senses For This Site. (Goldfinch60)
because ya worth it..... and thank you sir...... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 04:26 - Me ears are burning! (Orchidee)
it may not be a lot of things, but it made me smile and clearly...
June 3rd, 2019 04:25 - HAUTEUR.. (Fay Slimm.)
it would be selling this magnificent creature short to suggest it was a...
June 3rd, 2019 04:23 - LIMPET LUCY (Michael Edwards)
sounds like my kinda woman.....another chuckle here Michael... thank...
June 3rd, 2019 04:18
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