Comments on community poems by Neville
- Forgiveness (Sylviasearcher)
I really do think this is good.. it kind of reaches out and gives the...
December 28th, 2018 05:40 - The Very first Time (Neville)
Maybe I could add a verse or two... cheers orchidee.. appreciate the visit...
December 28th, 2018 05:31 - The Dreamer - Part 2 (Sylviasearcher)
Part two is better... in all respects....
December 27th, 2018 12:37 - The Dreamer (Sylviasearcher)
I read this a couple of days ago and was impressed by the wording and very...
December 27th, 2018 12:31 - Fountains Abbey (Sue.evans)
A well crafted atmospheric and otherwise visually appealing dedication to...
December 27th, 2018 10:22 - The Knowledge of Words. (Goldfinch60)
the poets lament...
December 27th, 2018 09:22 - Living Out Love (Orchidee)
they say actions speak louder than words dont they....
December 27th, 2018 03:15 - Secrets of the Field (Neville)
always carry a few sugar cubes with ya when out and keep taking the...
December 27th, 2018 03:14 - Not Sobriety. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ll have what the birds having but a double in a dirty glass...
many...
December 27th, 2018 02:17 - The Sum of Us (Stan Rodriguez)
you kind of said it all.. in effect summed it up very well indeed dear...
December 27th, 2018 01:47 - Home (Sylviasearcher)
I like your words..
December 27th, 2018 00:19 - Autumn Leaves (Viv Wade)
ah\' yes.. the perils of falling leaves.. a dangerous time of year.. I\'m...
December 27th, 2018 00:15 - The Trap (Kurt Philip Behm)
now that\'s ya super ego getting a ticking off from ya id... nice one sir
December 27th, 2018 00:09 - Homeless (Sue.evans)
yes indeed, ragged and real.. just like it is in real time...
December 26th, 2018 23:55 - Love Letter to My Body (IndisClaire)
brilliant..
love the skin your in... oh\' I so wish I had penned those...
December 26th, 2018 17:08 - Wrong (‘Lyss)
the more I bend my mental muscle around these words, the more I like...
December 26th, 2018 11:51 - Forever Marked (Kurt Philip Behm)
two for the price of one.. good thinking .... you are obviously a survivor...
December 26th, 2018 11:46 - Still In The Zone (LIGHT WARRIOR)
this felt like an out of body experience... like being dragged along the...
December 26th, 2018 11:35 - Battiness and Barminess - 1066 (Orchidee)
I reckon you have either got your ajin court, or have been on the bottle...
December 26th, 2018 11:27 - Frozen (Joanna Garrido)
as cool as perma frost... an enjoyable poem to warm ya cockles on a...
December 26th, 2018 08:49 - The Victoria Line (FineB)
Thanks for the ride my friend... took me back a bit so ya did... I would...
December 26th, 2018 08:18 - A Year Ago Today (The Retired Bloke)
congratulations.. that is one hell of an achievement my friend.. write on...
December 26th, 2018 07:26 - WINTER-CLAD. (Fay Slimm.)
here we have winter personified my friend.. made me shiver just thinking...
December 26th, 2018 07:01 - Inflatable Irene (Viv Wade)
that\'s my gall..... made me laugh out loud.... cheers
December 26th, 2018 04:50 - Feelings (Ron parrish aka wordman)
unfelt feelings.. such a waste, you just gotta share em
December 26th, 2018 04:46 - Into the New Year. (Goldfinch60)
you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a bit of harmony can ya..
December 26th, 2018 04:41 - No Father Christmas (Poeticpayne)
I miss mine too...
easy to relate to words & sentiments that will no...
December 25th, 2018 13:00 - The 12th Day of Christmas (Viv Wade)
blame the sprouts.. go on, I dare ya...
a witty little ditty if ever...
December 25th, 2018 11:52 - Shepherds Sightings (Orchidee)
a festive Christmas write and true... seasonal best orchidee..
December 25th, 2018 08:35 - SOOT FREE SANTA (Michael Edwards)
I reckon you got him sussed.. just wondering how long it took ya......
December 25th, 2018 08:32 - E-MAIL TO GOD. (Fay Slimm.)
what an absolutely splendid poem Fay.. you have captured a little girls...
December 24th, 2018 12:17 - Christmas Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Seasonal Greetings,
Peace & All Good Things, to You and Yours, Neville
December 24th, 2018 12:05 - MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL (Michael Edwards)
Peace & calm are not too much to ask for, are they...
Seasonal Best &...
December 24th, 2018 12:02 - Meadow (Simon Bromley)
what a pleasant meander through your beautiful meadow I have just had ... ...
December 24th, 2018 07:21 - SPACES. (Fay Slimm.)
Blessed be those spaces.. the bigger the better, but not always,...
December 23rd, 2018 14:07 - Nature Notes (Orchidee)
the joys of nature are indeed something to behold...
and you have done...
December 23rd, 2018 14:00 - The Ocean (Simon Bromley)
a magnificent subject sir and you have certainly done credit to it here.....
December 23rd, 2018 06:57 - INCERTITUDE (Michael Edwards)
indubitably.. you rock me right through to my squamous epithelium ......
December 23rd, 2018 05:41 - Home for Christmas (Sylviasearcher)
and the story continues.. as indeed it should and must.. you appear to...
December 23rd, 2018 04:34 - The Christmas Angel (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
Christmas just would not be the same without her, would it... what a...
December 23rd, 2018 04:18 - THE PICNIC (Laura🌻)
absolutely delicious.. so good I\'m gonna go and fix myself another...
December 23rd, 2018 04:14 - Chet\'s Sound. (Goldfinch60)
a delightful and most apt dedication on this special anniversary and what...
December 23rd, 2018 03:59 - Slippery Seperation (Jabberwocky)
now aint that just the way...
enjoyed.. but maybe not as much as you...
December 22nd, 2018 13:37 - My Souls Asylum (Kurt Philip Behm)
pinned to the page
a proper poem and true
deserves to be read.... N
December 22nd, 2018 11:35 - Gelida (Quemis)
these fine words deserve much praise indeed.. here.. accept mine......
December 22nd, 2018 08:07 - Savage (John Prophet)
I hope you dont mind me being the first to visit these words and leave a...
December 22nd, 2018 08:04 - Goldfinch (Joanna Garrido)
thoroughly enjoyed my friend...
am sure it won\'t be too long before...
December 22nd, 2018 07:31 - Don\'t invite us....! (Orchidee)
made me chuckle sir but if you dont mind, I will hang on to my own bottle...
December 22nd, 2018 07:06 - HAIKU OR SENRYU _ WHO CARES? (Michael Edwards)
without doubt, you have displayed a fine collection here.. a few purists...
December 22nd, 2018 05:50 - Why? (JillianA)
In the real world, folk are often too busy or wrapped up in themselves to...
December 21st, 2018 18:32 - What happened to Jack? (JillianA)
I am glad I read your other Jack post first... kind of back to front...
December 21st, 2018 18:28 - Sighting of Jack (Part 2) (JillianA)
this has the feel of an old penny dreadful...
December 21st, 2018 18:26 - ONIONS AND BEANS (Michael Edwards)
keep your friends close.. but keep your enemies closer...
December 21st, 2018 18:24 - CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
thoroughly enjoyed from beginning to end.. the pair of ya
December 21st, 2018 09:02 - SUCHNESS (Fay Slimm.)
Perfectly formed and rings true to my ear... N
December 21st, 2018 08:29 - Palms Perusings (Orchidee)
got to hand it to you on a palm Sunday..
December 21st, 2018 04:34 - Yes I Exist. (Goldfinch60)
we only have your word for that tho
December 21st, 2018 04:32 - Storm (Debsspot)
a moment captured
forever here to enjoy...
December 21st, 2018 04:01 - IN FRAMES OF ANTIQUE GOLD (Michael Edwards)
My immediate reaction is that you may be writing about your own art.. and...
December 20th, 2018 11:18 - a gospel of tenderness (Queer-with-a-pen)
This is really quite special, at least in my book it is.. original and...
December 20th, 2018 10:00 - Scaffold (Jabberwocky)
my interpretation leaves little to the imagination.. tis all down hill...
December 20th, 2018 09:55 - A Blue Toothbrush (Neville)
are saying you think these words do not warrant the 18+ label I gave them...
December 20th, 2018 09:04 - floorboards (Abora)
kinda creepy but I guess it is meant to be.. there are certainly some very...
December 19th, 2018 06:37 - The Wood Mouse (Classicmister)
a delightful bit of poetry to be sure..
here in the middle of rural...
December 19th, 2018 05:36 - Sad Sounds (Sylviasearcher)
one of the best haiku\'s I have read for some time.. domo arigato
December 19th, 2018 04:04 - Halloween Horror! (Orchidee)
I made a point of being the first to read your Halloween Horror for...
December 19th, 2018 03:16 - STONES (Michael Edwards)
as stones placed on scales
tis those kilograms that tell tales
oh\'...
December 19th, 2018 03:09 - Two Thousand. (Goldfinch60)
you can beat an egg.. and you can beat a carpet.. and you can beat about...
December 19th, 2018 02:45 - Duvet Cover. (Goldfinch60)
Been there, done that and wore the T shirt well and truly out...on one or...
December 19th, 2018 02:13 - Indigo Bird (W c)
an ornithologists delight I would imagine & captured perfectly here for...
December 18th, 2018 13:53 - DOGS AND CATS (Michael Edwards)
I think you pretty much hit the nail on its head
another nice painting...
December 18th, 2018 13:27 - Help For Homeless (Orchidee)
a very apt and timely post my friend.. a subject very dear to my own...
December 18th, 2018 08:22 - THINK (Laura🌻)
reads luverly.. and I could not agree more with your concluding...
December 18th, 2018 08:14 - Will Never Fail. (Goldfinch60)
This is far more than a poem.. it is a devotion.. I truly do feel for you...
December 18th, 2018 08:07 - PACE. (Fay Slimm.)
these words read deliciously.. not only that.. they look good pinned to...
December 18th, 2018 07:42 - Nothing (Sylviasearcher)
sometimes we find something where nothing once was...
there is nothing...
December 18th, 2018 06:30 - Lack of Understanding. (Goldfinch60)
what an intriguing observation, although I guess it is one of those things...
December 18th, 2018 05:12 - Wounded Dove (DesertWords)
it can appear so very cruel at times, but so absolutely necessary.... a...
December 17th, 2018 13:16 - Free From Nothing (Sylviasearcher)
I particularly like the first two stanza\'s rounded off with Faraway from...
December 17th, 2018 12:32 - VICE VERSA (Michael Edwards)
would this be a whimsy... whatever the case, now ya talking.. N
December 17th, 2018 11:58 - Magnificat Musings (Orchidee)
another epic religious poem.. say\'s this here Buddhist
December 17th, 2018 05:55 - Versal Law (Neville)
no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville
December 17th, 2018 05:34 - Travel in Hope. (Goldfinch60)
while there is still tea, there is hope... a fine message here
December 17th, 2018 04:56 - Popping Bubbled Prisms (Whisperingquill)
thoroughly enjoyed by me.. I hope others will visit this page, when I have...
December 16th, 2018 13:17 - You\'re Gone (ExistentialSarah)
I found these words by chance and am now, so very glad I did.. cheers......
December 16th, 2018 11:40 - Centaurs (LIGHT WARRIOR)
an intriguing and otherwise captivating poem.. I am by the way ...
December 16th, 2018 06:35 - MY SPIRIT (Michael Edwards)
I was not expecting the end, but it made me chuckle, no end.. cheers
December 16th, 2018 06:31 - The Glue of Life. (Goldfinch60)
a nice thought.. I presume you\'re sticking to it... Neville
December 15th, 2018 14:09 - Circe/Medusa Tag Team (Jon Nakapalau)
Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
December 14th, 2018 07:09 - Close (Sylviasearcher)
why would I do that, one of the things I quite like about myself is my...
December 14th, 2018 06:57 - Woof! Woof! A Fido Tale (Orchidee)
there you are.. give a dog a phone and they will yap all night.. give a...
December 14th, 2018 06:53 - Close (Sylviasearcher)
my new fave...are you sure you are not Ms Plath reincarnated... I really...
December 14th, 2018 06:35 - WORDS. (Fay Slimm.)
words, or more specifically, language is what sets us most apart from any...
December 14th, 2018 03:13 - Sacrifice (Sylviasearcher)
wickedly ragged and real.. once started, I felt compelled to see it...
December 14th, 2018 02:48 - The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, indeed beauty is very much in the eye of the beholder.. and of...
December 14th, 2018 02:33 - The Day After the Night Before. (Goldfinch60)
lovely just aint good enough, bloomin lovely, is more like it.. made me...
December 14th, 2018 02:28 - A DISARRAY OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
I like this discarded out take idea, great for your carbon footprint......
December 14th, 2018 01:47 - \"Pet Project\" (Nicholas Browning)
a certain melancholia weaves its way throughout this poem... yet it still...
December 13th, 2018 17:39 - Alone (Sylviasearcher)
not gone but merely set aside methinks..
the
ocean is wider than tis ...
December 13th, 2018 15:19 - LOVE BITES. (Fay Slimm.)
are you saying once bitten, forever smitten...
a fun take on the serious...
December 13th, 2018 14:41
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