Comments on community poems by Neville

• Snippet - Empty Quiver (Suresh) this may or may not have been meant to be funny or philosophical... either...
  April 28th, 2019 03:23
• Loss of the Very Young - 1 (Suresh) a tragedy for sure..
  April 28th, 2019 03:21
• Seasons (Suresh) Here you have captured the essence of each of the four seasons..
  April 28th, 2019 03:18
• Daughter of creation (Poetic Dan) its what makes the world go round..... nicely penned, my friend...
  April 27th, 2019 11:36
• On the Cusp of ..... (Suresh) a poem that can be interpreted in several ways and certainly one that...
  April 27th, 2019 10:54
• Communion Charis (Orchidee) just as I was getting into the rhythm, you go and hit me for six with a...
  April 27th, 2019 10:28
• Asking. (Fay Slimm.) so very dad & more than.. N
  April 27th, 2019 06:16
• BEAUTIFUL QUEENSTOWN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Nice sonnet.. I plan to visit in November.. N
  April 27th, 2019 04:56
• LUSTY TIMES. (Fay Slimm.) when less say\'s more, this has got the lot and it shouts it out.......
  April 27th, 2019 03:40
• How many times (re-write) (Dusk arising) One mans sweet is another mans poison.....or summat... enjoyed and...
  April 27th, 2019 03:35
• Curry Goldiku. (Goldfinch60) its behind you....
  April 27th, 2019 03:11
• Petrichor (SerenWise) you nailed it with these words so fine.. I just love the scent you so...
  April 26th, 2019 11:48
• BACK THEN. (Fay Slimm.) what can I say other than thank you my friend for taking me on a trip back...
  April 26th, 2019 11:44
• evil (Dusk arising) these words sadden me.. they read so well meant... Neville
  April 26th, 2019 11:39
• Rise Up (SerenWise) this is very sweet and very touching.. N
  April 26th, 2019 11:36
• Overcoming Overwhelmings (Orchidee) oh what it must be.. to be overwhelmingly overcome ...
  April 26th, 2019 11:34
• four and counting (Dusk arising) a delight to read a real treasure sir.... N
  April 26th, 2019 08:53
• When It’s Time For Me To Sleep (Frederick Samson) I must say that I found this rather difficult to read/follow but that...
  April 26th, 2019 08:51
• Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time (Poetic Dan) I think you did good.. very good N
  April 26th, 2019 08:46
• Effaced. (Fay Slimm.) yes indeed, a thoroughly enjoyable read, thank you again Fay... N
  April 26th, 2019 08:44
• Let\'s take a walk (Suresh) an interesting poem that is crying out to be considered.... the ken zen ...
  April 26th, 2019 08:33
• Redemption Reassurance (Orchidee) redemption and resurrection.. this has got the bloomin lot....
  April 24th, 2019 02:18
• BEING. (Fay Slimm.) every now and then. all one needs to have a really good day is to find the...
  April 24th, 2019 02:15
• Life in Art. (Goldfinch60) You are a credit to ya pen sir and ya pen has done more than justice to...
  April 24th, 2019 01:45
• Two Faces of Joy (Goldfinch60) great movie, great poem but if you aint got an entry pass, you just aint...
  April 23rd, 2019 10:32
• when? (Dusk arising) it\'s gonna happen... just you mark my words.... shit sir, well writ...
  April 23rd, 2019 07:39
• EVENTS. (Fay Slimm.) you could probably hear my deep sigh from where you are Fay... tis lovely...
  April 23rd, 2019 03:59
• Exiting right (Poetic Dan) another one very much enjoyed.... I particularly like the first very brief...
  April 23rd, 2019 03:30
• Praise - Halal (Orchidee) rare or well done that is the question there is much at stake...
  April 23rd, 2019 02:35
• Finally (SerenWise) I sincerely hope everything goes according to plan..... a nicely...
  April 22nd, 2019 12:45
• Untitled - V (Suresh) interesting .....
  April 22nd, 2019 11:19
• Mouth Full of Words. (Goldfinch60) Hey GF60, this is probably my new favourite of your poems so far ... and...
  April 22nd, 2019 11:16
• BELLS (Michael Edwards) so very appealing & on so many levels..... Neville
  April 22nd, 2019 11:06
• Thank you for triggering my train (Poetic Dan) forgiving is one of the most precious gifts one can give.. this is a...
  April 22nd, 2019 08:19
• by the window (Dusk arising) how could anyone possibly not remember these fine words... a great...
  April 22nd, 2019 07:50
• Portion Pleasantries (Orchidee) resurrections have always fascinated me... N
  April 22nd, 2019 05:56
• SWEETNESS. (Fay Slimm.) sinfully sweet & then some...
  April 22nd, 2019 04:51
• Nominal Amnesia. (Goldfinch60) a fun read, indeed.... it happens all the time dunnit......... N
  April 21st, 2019 03:37
• Laughter in our plight (Poetic Dan) you just cant beat it can ya.. laughter that is... happy day friend...
  April 21st, 2019 03:36
• AS FORETOLD. (Fay Slimm.) a spiritual tale told timely and true..... N
  April 21st, 2019 03:34
• Humility Hymning (Orchidee) you can beat an Easter egg and you can beat a prayer mat, but ya cant beat...
  April 21st, 2019 03:32
• STILL LAMENTING (Michael Edwards) sacre bleu Mon St Michael....
  April 21st, 2019 03:31
• New Dawn (SerenWise) what a lovely little sentiment...
  April 20th, 2019 16:08
• Easter Exaltings (Orchidee) I quite like Easter N
  April 20th, 2019 11:39
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) magical & true...
  April 20th, 2019 11:31
• A Lonely Cog (Suresh) where would we be without cogs eh\'................... an interesting...
  April 20th, 2019 11:15
• STUFF! (Goldfinch60) you are quite write.. it gets everywhere... nice one sir..
  April 20th, 2019 10:36
• now ready to depart (Dusk arising) everything about this poem is near perfect.. everything...N
  April 20th, 2019 10:31
• Hey! come here (Poetic Dan) a world through the eyes of a child, is indeed a world of...
  April 19th, 2019 13:01
• WHO AND WHAT ....... (Suresh) aint that a fact.... Neville
  April 19th, 2019 12:56
• move along (Dusk arising) maybe you are write maybe she was just wrong for ya......
  April 19th, 2019 04:53
• December Sky (Fay Slimm.) what a delightful dedication to my most favourite time of day.. N
  April 19th, 2019 03:21
• Rock Reassurances (Orchidee) just thought I would remind you that you are still stuck between a rock...
  April 19th, 2019 02:07
• Beware of Mirrors (Neville) and there are plenty... cheers Michael.. have a great weekend.. N
  April 19th, 2019 01:58
• goodbye (Jon Nakapalau) sweet
  April 19th, 2019 01:53
• BOOK OF DESTINY (Michael Edwards) smashing I got a signed second edition Neville
  April 19th, 2019 01:50
• Faithless. (Goldfinch60) They say faith can move a mountain, these words near moved me to...
  April 19th, 2019 01:46
• Soulmating (SerenWise) when you got it that bad,, dont it just feel so damned good ..... stanza...
  April 18th, 2019 15:16
• Snippet - Prisoner of Emotions (Suresh) I always keep a bucket of lithium carbonate by the coffee machine just in...
  April 18th, 2019 13:20
• Another Love Note. (Kevin browne) Love notes make the world go round with a smile...... N
  April 18th, 2019 13:17
• Thoughts (Demi.T) Where would we be without them.. Thoughts that is... Now there\'s a...
  April 18th, 2019 08:32
• Evening of Our Great Content (Lorna) reads perfect... I wanna be there Neville
  April 18th, 2019 05:49
• Gethsemane Garden (Orchidee) the Garden of Gethsemane is never out of step with time... nice one ...
  April 18th, 2019 03:16
• Play. (Goldfinch60) It would be almost inconceivable to think one might have any more fun than...
  April 18th, 2019 01:23
• LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.) Extremely moving, heartfelt and true Perfectly poemed say\'s I who for...
  April 18th, 2019 00:49
• LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards) a sight for sore eyes indeed.. I feel a smile coming on... nice one...
  April 18th, 2019 00:18
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards) If I said these were collectively anything short of great, I would be...
  April 17th, 2019 13:19
• I Am Enough (SerenWise) when you put it like that, I aint gonna argue.. would anyone... but...
  April 17th, 2019 12:58
• Untitled - IV - cont. (Suresh) Your first stanza is visually exquisite if one imagines it to have been...
  April 17th, 2019 11:30
• dawns delight (re-written) (Dusk arising) I have had a few dreams that were so dreamy I would happily have not...
  April 17th, 2019 07:15
• Aromatic Anointing (Orchidee) I like the idea of aromatic anointing and can understand the reasons for...
  April 17th, 2019 04:53
• WRAITHS (Fay Slimm.) what images these words do conjour... so much nature captured in a...
  April 17th, 2019 04:24
• Lemon Rind (SerenWise) Oh\' sweet thing, you aint bitter by any chance are ya.... told as is...
  April 17th, 2019 02:18
• For What More Could I Ask? (Goldfinch60) You got the lot my friend and you capture it here so well.... N
  April 17th, 2019 02:13
• All Over You. (Kevin browne) not only does this read well.. it sits near perfect upon the page......
  April 16th, 2019 14:16
• Beholden (Suresh) inspiring, confounding, compelling interesting whichever way ya look at...
  April 16th, 2019 10:22
• The Voyage (SerenWise) another love poem, that dances like a song on this readers tongue.......
  April 16th, 2019 10:19
• THE EGOTIST (Michael Edwards) Very good indeed sir... N
  April 16th, 2019 10:16
• Never Again. (Fay Slimm.) You got it nailed down and wrapped in a poem Fay... When its gone, its...
  April 16th, 2019 10:14
• SOLUTIONS. (Fay Slimm.) an interesting quote indeed... and a fine bedfellow to accompany your...
  April 16th, 2019 08:51
• Emotions (Poetic Dan) I like this.. One of your earliest it seems and I\'m sure since originally...
  April 16th, 2019 08:43
• Of Cathedrals And Dragons (Orchidee) Yes, a powerful and timely poem if ever there was..... just goes to show...
  April 16th, 2019 08:28
• know JB (Dusk arising) A great and fitting tribute methinks.. Neville
  April 16th, 2019 08:22
• UNSATED. (Fay Slimm.) You surely must have been there to write something so emotive... One can...
  April 16th, 2019 03:14
• Genesis (SerenWise) When it bites, it bites hard and boy, when it does, dont it just feel...
  April 16th, 2019 03:10
• A Word with the Creator (Suresh) You dare to ask questions that many dare only think ..... N
  April 16th, 2019 03:08
• Punctuality Spurned. (Goldfinch60) I feel for you sir... nothing quite so frustrating as waiting for someone...
  April 16th, 2019 02:35
• I Day. (Fay Slimm.) It was only a matter of time before I found these words, but then you know...
  April 15th, 2019 05:40
• Two day break (ish) (Poetic Dan) The sense in ya heart dont have to tally with the sense in ya head.....
  April 15th, 2019 05:11
• Serving Serenity (Orchidee) I certainly agree with the principle of helping the poor and needy ... N
  April 15th, 2019 03:50
• MAGICAL. (Fay Slimm.) a magical image to accompany your most magical of \'Magical\'.. I...
  April 15th, 2019 03:31
• MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards) An excellent vintage sir very chuckle worthy say\'s I... ewe are a card...
  April 15th, 2019 03:28
• The Foggy, Foggy Dew. (Goldfinch60) there are certain songs, or tunes that have a very special meaning and...
  April 15th, 2019 01:58
• what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising) a most moving little miniature my friend and true..... Neville
  April 15th, 2019 01:52
• NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards) Now ya got me thinking again.. Cant be a bad thing that.... Nice...
  April 14th, 2019 12:40
• Just a little one (Poetic Dan) Love it.. love green eggs n ham too.... specially on Fundays..... N
  April 14th, 2019 05:21
• My Comeback (Nafis Light) reads like a revived rock opera.. a good one at that.... Neville
  April 14th, 2019 05:13
• Restored And Returned (Orchidee) when read the second time.. this would appear more symbolic than at first...
  April 14th, 2019 04:55
• MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.) a most marvelous and fuzz free poem of great and unadulterated clarity.. N
  April 14th, 2019 04:23
• Tethered (Suresh) these words demand to be read .. Neville
  April 14th, 2019 03:33