Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- The Friday Boys. (Goldfinch60)
Wot no rain, quietly and unobtrusively living your life.. good for you,...
February 25th, 2024 05:38 - Song of a siren (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, if you keep on like this , I\'m going to have to have my GP...
February 25th, 2024 05:24 - It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15)
As Soren so rightly points out, You are up there with, I\'ll say, the bard...
February 25th, 2024 05:09 - 575 (Neville)
Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time...
February 25th, 2024 04:57 - Je Reviens (Cassie58)
With you on love poetry. A sudden scent, fragrance can evoke (and has) a...
February 24th, 2024 18:34 - Party Animal (Teddy.15)
I do believe you may have made a typo here, Teddy.
I\'m pretty sure it\'s...
February 24th, 2024 18:17 - Have you heard of the crooked man? (Hey!)
Makes a change from your previous stuff - keep up the good work!
February 24th, 2024 05:30 - Father And Son. (Goldfinch60)
Of all that Neville stated, all of which feel true, the honesty shines...
February 24th, 2024 05:21 - Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee)
\'My tongue a pen it be\' - Are you spitting on one of those old indelible...
February 24th, 2024 05:15 - Three Summers (Neville)
Them\'s the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb...
February 24th, 2024 05:11 - Have you heard of the crooked man? (Hey!)
Great fun - enjoyed. Quite a lot of \'some stuff\' added?
February 24th, 2024 00:27 - SOLDIER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The guilt, I believe should be shared - although in some instances, for...
February 23rd, 2024 20:29 - What Day Is It? (Goldfinch60)
Happily retired, I presume....?
February 23rd, 2024 09:14 - Desirous Dwelling (Orchidee)
Is that estate agent going to sell me a decent dwelling at a knock down...
February 23rd, 2024 09:12 - Sundial (Sorenbarrett)
\"time and tide wait for no man\" - yours a much richer explanation,...
February 23rd, 2024 09:04 - Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply (Neville)
You\'ve ex-seeded yourself there, Neville...
February 23rd, 2024 08:51 - The power of alone (EvenwheniLie)
Aloneness is fine most of the time....at least I can hear myself...
February 23rd, 2024 08:47 - God is an Artist (Thomas W Case)
I\'ve writ it before; I\'ll writ it again:
Man made God in his own...
February 22nd, 2024 23:07 - Maniac (Teddy.15)
Pass. I\'ve never been fond of a pretzel as the last one was followed by...
February 22nd, 2024 07:53 - Painting, Poetry, Music, Silence. (Goldfinch60)
A little polished gem, Andy (and I don\'t say that often).
February 22nd, 2024 07:42 - From where the wild roses grow (Teddy.15)
A wee bit enigmatic, this one if I may say so, Teddy.
If there\'s a call,...
February 21st, 2024 23:16 - Aliens (Doggerel Dave)
Not funny - ridiculous.
Thanks for the call.
February 21st, 2024 18:21 - I\'m that kind of tired (Tom Dylan)
You\'ve gotta make an appointment with a Career Advisor, Tom - is it...
February 21st, 2024 06:30 - Almost Famous Last Words (Neville)
So you embark on an odyssey - the quest for the perfect black....just rev...
February 21st, 2024 06:23 - Watch Out (Thomas W Case)
I think I\'ll give this one a big miss....
February 21st, 2024 06:14 - Santa Muerte (Lorenz)
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general...
February 20th, 2024 18:34 - Tea WithThe Tree (Bella Shepard)
More used to gum trees after all this time. They have their own charm -...
February 20th, 2024 18:07 - Monday, I can\'t do this (Tom Dylan)
\'Sorry I\'m late, Tom, Monday was hell. I attended a class on a bunch of...
February 20th, 2024 17:42 - And The Winner Is? (Teddy.15)
No shame is the key - should be more widely practiced. Stay the course,...
February 20th, 2024 05:56 - Amasser of All Dark Things (Neville)
Scurry? Scurry? It\'s me dark secrets you\'re after, not me. And you\'ve...
February 20th, 2024 05:50 - Enchanted Dreams (Dove)
A lyrical tribute to your freedom, Dove. Please let me know what you do...
February 20th, 2024 04:55 - What Ghost! (Goldfinch60)
Where do you go to practice the woo..woo? Is your place a...
February 20th, 2024 04:51 - And The Winner Is? (Teddy.15)
Yep - one (read \'me\') needs a certain amount of egotistical self pride...
February 20th, 2024 04:45 - What you think? (Orchidee)
Sir Orchi NS: How did you guess there might be just a teensy, a soupcon...
February 20th, 2024 04:37 - Between the Lines: The Truth of Power (GeekSusie)
A great disappointment this: I like a debate, and there is nothing to...
February 19th, 2024 16:25 - Inconsistencies (Sorenbarrett)
A hypothetical to end all hypotheticals, Soren.
February 19th, 2024 16:17 - Always Respect. (Goldfinch60)
A credit to ya? - you just haven\'t been disrespected enough, you ratbag...
February 19th, 2024 04:38 - Sitting With A Harem. (Goldfinch60)
\'He\'s always so quiet\', they said - \'still waters run deep\'....
February 18th, 2024 07:51 - Paddy McGee (Teddy.15)
The twists and turns of this rumbunctious tale had me giddy by the end - a...
February 18th, 2024 07:37 - Discarded (Sorenbarrett)
Can\'t reach in there for the metaphor, but can vividly remember the...
February 18th, 2024 07:13 - A Million Miles Apart (Neville)
Lust or caring, empathy and a deep abiding love that I\'ve tried to define...
February 18th, 2024 07:01 - Identity (Doggerel Dave)
But are you proud to be Andy, a British gentleman....?
February 18th, 2024 06:53 - long distance for now (Arqios)
Three, three - it is everywhere in literature, et al.
Any insights while...
February 18th, 2024 01:48 - Identity (Doggerel Dave)
And orchi, are you proud of your identity....or not...and how have you...
February 18th, 2024 00:07 - A Very Fine Romance (Teddy.15)
So he didn\'t get a boner after all? No further comment - empathy only...
February 17th, 2024 23:57 - Identity (Doggerel Dave)
They are having troubles, I read somewhere, with random numbers in the...
February 17th, 2024 19:17 - Emo: Journey of Resilience (Kholland1988)
Notice of absence? Sorry one poem here reduced you to exhaustion....
February 17th, 2024 19:07 - Most Blessed Cursing (Gary Edward Geraci)
I always look at your stuff with interest, Gary, but I believe here the...
February 17th, 2024 18:44 - NO LONGER SCARLET (Twizzle48)
See my entry to your first piece - Add \'engage\'.
February 17th, 2024 18:34 - We didn\'t build these streets for crazy people (Jaxxie)
Such a picture of some streets I\'ve walked down in my time....
February 17th, 2024 05:44 - Identity (Doggerel Dave)
You\'ve exceeded yourself, Sir Orchi Non Sequitur here to totally confuse...
February 17th, 2024 04:01 - Answer Phone. (Goldfinch60)
Perhaps someone is having a ball,
But they may not be your kids at all...
February 17th, 2024 03:38 - All the Wrong Buttons (Neville)
Come on Doc - is this a diagnosis?
February 17th, 2024 03:25 - Why Not Just Call it a Day (Neville)
Not fading away there, are you Neville?
February 16th, 2024 20:55 - Winter Snow (Jerry Reynolds)
How the hell in four short picturesque lines do you manage to throw in...
February 16th, 2024 19:27 - Choices (Sorenbarrett)
Solid build there, Soren. capped with the last four lines of which the...
February 16th, 2024 19:21 - A Bizarre Naked Dance (Aloo Denish Obiero)
If you delete all the embarrassment, then great fun for the punch...
February 16th, 2024 19:08 - I AM AFRICA (Aloo Denish Obiero)
As Parisab above, plus the hope that Africa is not beset by fresh...
February 16th, 2024 18:59 - Fresh Coffee? (Goldfinch60)
😂🤣😂🤣
Well that finally settles that then Dr Crippen. I\'ve...
February 15th, 2024 21:10 - Apathy Rules Okay (Neville)
If life was once ‘nasty, brutish and short’ - today we can thank...
February 15th, 2024 07:17 - Insurance (2781)
Bushrangers came and went.... but their spirit lives on.....
February 15th, 2024 07:03 - Prevarication (Sorenbarrett)
I\'d give both an equal rating, Soren. Circumstances dictate...
February 15th, 2024 00:34 - Rapture of my Heart (Teddy.15)
Quite possibly a good enough excuse, Teddy...... 😇!!!
February 14th, 2024 07:23 - No Comment (Neville)
To hell with it - there\'s too much of this about - economic conditions...
February 14th, 2024 07:17 - You know Val? (Orchidee)
Yeh - I got the thought,, wrapped it up ready to send, but then what about...
February 14th, 2024 07:10 - Pyracantha Battle. (Goldfinch60)
This hasn\'t impinged upon my current knowledge base, Andy (can\'t you...
February 13th, 2024 07:30 - Dante and I (Teddy.15)
I feel I should know Dante\'s work (which I don\'t) in order to fully...
February 13th, 2024 07:12 - Snow Ghost (Bella Shepard)
Already has been highlighted that final stanza Bella, so all I can do is...
February 12th, 2024 07:46 - Two Sisters (Neville)
🤣Too much Neville - reminded me of the old \"Where\'s the soap?\" joke...
February 12th, 2024 07:24 - Prophets and Losses (Tom Dylan)
You\'ve lightened up my evening with your whimsy, Tom. Ready for a sound...
February 12th, 2024 07:17 - Dragonfly (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m enraptured by a dragonfly when I rarely see them, Soren. And...
February 12th, 2024 07:14 - Comforting Creator - Ye Olde Prayers series (18) (Orchidee)
Same with hymns? Do you reach maturity at 18, or must you wait \'til 21?
February 9th, 2024 08:00 - Senryu to Opera (Teddy.15)
For some reason this reminds me of Milan - such a contradiction....
February 9th, 2024 07:56 - The Late Great Hieronymus Bosch (Neville)
So the CV of Hieronymus is free public knowledge, Neville, images of his...
February 9th, 2024 07:51 - And It Rained. (Goldfinch60)
Didn\'t know you lived on the east coast of Australia, Andy......You are...
February 9th, 2024 07:13 - Altered Images (Neville)
😇The brain (and I\'m fully aware that I\'m trying to teach grannie to...
February 8th, 2024 03:53 - Lighten Our Darkness - Ye Olde Prayers series (17) (Orchidee)
\'17\' ??? - never ending is it: on to eternity via the scenic route?
February 8th, 2024 03:40 - Chinese (2781)
Defamed they are - constantly.
A self fulfilling prophesy on the...
February 8th, 2024 00:07 - The Friday Boys. (Goldfinch60)
This makes me laugh in the best possible way, Andy. It is so complete -...
February 7th, 2024 22:01 - A Boy from another Gaza (Keith Jeffries)
Born 1941 East End of London - the Anderson shelter - I slept there....
February 7th, 2024 21:39 - Ouroboros (Neville)
Oh you mean
...
February 7th, 2024 08:03 - Hope Of Help 3 (Orchidee)
Three times? Ain\'t no one listening? 😇!!!
February 7th, 2024 07:40 - KNOWING AND WAITING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Deeply felt I feel, but deeply relevant to us all. A universal experience...
February 7th, 2024 07:29 - The Clear-Out (Tom Dylan)
Wish I had your courage, Tom, but do heed the salutary warning however...
February 7th, 2024 07:19 - Tares (Sorenbarrett)
As Teddy above - even I managed the imagery and metaphor - you pinned the...
February 7th, 2024 07:07 - Butterflies are rare (Teddy.15)
Upstairs somewhere you said you were a \'doomsday writer\', Teddy, I...
February 7th, 2024 07:03 - The View from Coal Country (JBentley)
Bumped into you on the poetic parade today.
And despite my misgivings...
February 6th, 2024 19:45 - Everything has a price (Sorenbarrett)
That soul, Soren - it\'s a tribute to your poetic skill that you almost...
February 6th, 2024 08:56 - The One Dreams are Made of (Teddy.15)
You tell a good yarn, Teddy. As I read with one side of my brain (never...
February 6th, 2024 08:51 - Days of Wine And...... (Orchidee)
Don\'t get which you are humouring....KP or Fido..........
February 6th, 2024 08:40 - At The End of The Line (Neville)
You are only causing confusion here Neville; the end of the line is a full...
February 6th, 2024 08:33 - Initially Speaking (Tom Dylan)
Yeh -same deal here, only in reverse, if you get my drift...
February 6th, 2024 08:24 - The mozzie (2781)
Empathised with every line.... My old mate was the huntsman, although both...
February 5th, 2024 07:14 - Crowned Creator (Orchidee)
When you own the real estate, you\'ve got the power......
February 5th, 2024 07:09 - Bigger Picture (Teddy.15)
You tell us it was a bus, but i believe it might have been a carriage for...
February 5th, 2024 06:57 - Monday morning office... (Tom Dylan)
All things pass, my friend...all things pass. One day in the distant...
February 5th, 2024 06:43 - Spillage (Neville)
Difficult to determine precisely just what is the situation...
February 5th, 2024 06:32 - Against all we want to believe (Sorenbarrett)
An odd process, but you\'ve got its essence, I believe Soren. After its...
February 5th, 2024 06:26 - Michael Jordan’s Boots (Doggerel Dave)
Tool:
\"An often disliked person who screws people over instead of using...
February 4th, 2024 17:28 - Going Green. (Chris Duffy)
PS: Last line coulda been \'greens\' - just remember to munch up your...
February 4th, 2024 04:44
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