Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Heroin (Thomas W Case)
Confession or imaginative creation?
Either way well executed. Some can...
April 29th, 2024 23:29 - Forsaken (Neville)
The other pussy is a little mysterious, is she not?
April 29th, 2024 07:42 - Himalayas (NafisaSB)
So long as you don\'t specify Everest, which would appear to be quite...
April 29th, 2024 07:38 - Gospel Givers (Orchidee)
Bit of a bossy boots, aren\'t you when you speak to the geezer...
April 29th, 2024 07:34 - People (Sorenbarrett)
Nihilistic in the extreme, Soren. I both liked it and felt repelled by it....
April 29th, 2024 07:31 - Rocking Worlds (Teddy.15)
Sounds as reasonable a travel brochure advertising the after life as any...
April 29th, 2024 07:14 - L\' Chaim! (To Life!) (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Good for you man - go for it.
April 28th, 2024 17:50 - Random Outbursts And Microaggressions (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You make a lot of change in so few lines - if you can, do it; I think you...
April 28th, 2024 06:58 - The Cruelest of All Bed Partners (Neville)
Rich and complex with progress and change conveyed by strong...
April 28th, 2024 06:52 - Time to Call Time (Neville)
Patchouli over there is, given the distances involved, no substitute for a...
April 27th, 2024 19:10 - Skid Marks and Secrets: An Underwear Odyssey (GeekSusie)
Always taken my own underwear very much for granted; have varying levels...
April 27th, 2024 18:06 - Locket (Cassie58)
Not keen on romantic poetry, but this is a good \'un, Cassie.
April 27th, 2024 06:03 - My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, your river - I\'m really happy it gave you what you needed,...
April 27th, 2024 05:50 - Wild Garlic (Neville)
Gets the good old digestive juices flowing nicely Neville.
April 26th, 2024 06:17 - Raven\'s Encore (Teddy.15)
Glad you are spreading the joy, Teddy.
Now go spread it some where else,...
April 26th, 2024 06:11 - Raising water (Sorenbarrett)
Do you really believe there\'s relief from that kind of extreme psychic...
April 25th, 2024 07:04 - A Prayer of King Nebuchadnezzar (Orchidee)
Know this geezer from Sunday school - though I could never spell it, his...
April 25th, 2024 06:57 - Sixty Poems (Tom Dylan)
You are not even in second gear yet...Go for the ton, Tom - I\'m sure the...
April 25th, 2024 06:40 - My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters (Neville)
Salutations Neville. Don\'t know how to phrase this tactfully (definitely...
April 25th, 2024 06:34 - Life In 2024 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You don\'t have to listen/watch/engage with social media, you know. I\'d...
April 25th, 2024 01:47 - Religion: Verse II (Kinsey Peterson)
Once upon a time I thought that all my parents passed to me were their...
April 24th, 2024 08:37 - Off the Beach (Tom Dylan)
There\'s more than enough resonance there for me in that rich but simple...
April 24th, 2024 07:16 - Sort of Struck Down (Orchidee)
I do hope you are getting better, orchi - I do like having a good sport to...
April 24th, 2024 07:03 - She Loved Him Because .. (Neville)
Too much, Neville. I think I\'m loved for approx. a quarter of those...
April 24th, 2024 06:47 - Awakening (Teddy.15)
A worthwhile example many should heed, Teddy.
I will always come down on...
April 24th, 2024 02:12 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
Sydney has Rookwood Cemetery, very large with chapels etc relating to the...
April 24th, 2024 01:33 - Just to Hear your Laughter (Teddy.15)
A gem about which I have no comment because it just is - a gem.
April 23rd, 2024 20:38 - Safe inside (Sorenbarrett)
I\'d be offended if it wasn\'t so close to the truth, Soren. Conclusion...
April 23rd, 2024 20:31 - At Seventeen or Thereabouts (Neville)
Can\'t suppress the cough - three skins yes...five? Gotta share with too...
April 23rd, 2024 06:50 - First Day Back Syndrome (Tom Dylan)
This sounds like \'gotta go to work to eat, but is there not more to life...
April 23rd, 2024 06:37 - Nature\'s Blanket. (Goldfinch60)
Rarely happens these days, but i got a sudden rush of something like...
April 23rd, 2024 00:41 - Random Kindness (Cassie58)
Will try - I promise......
A simple straight from the heart gem,
April 22nd, 2024 19:52 - The old ones (Lorenz)
Ignored by many Seniors, it seems.
April 22nd, 2024 09:08 - Lemon Lined Streets (Neville)
Pneumatic tyres then, Neville? 😂
April 22nd, 2024 06:47 - Omnipotent Observations (Orchidee)
Gothic.
April 22nd, 2024 06:41 - Our Skies Are Red With Blood (Teddy.15)
Hey Teddy – you’ve cracked it for me inasmuch as I experienced what...
April 22nd, 2024 06:38 - The Great War Of Ignorance (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You\'ve slogged away to tell the story, but no one seems to take you...
April 22nd, 2024 06:02 - Cosmic Contemplations (GeekSusie)
Your word picture of the universe, I really recognized and felt its...
April 21st, 2024 20:07 - Uncommon Good Scents (Neville)
You would have more than a passing knowledge, Neville of the way the...
April 21st, 2024 06:48 - Colonoscopy (Bella Shepard)
Apologies, Bella – I’ve just had a flash back – memory safely buried...
April 21st, 2024 00:30 - The Angry Society (Katy_20)
Not a short story at all - It\'s a smart piece of poetry which engages...
April 20th, 2024 20:53 - Colonoscopy (Bella Shepard)
Nah - can\'t claim that, but rotate me180 degrees and a TURP was the order...
April 19th, 2024 19:03 - Blind Date (Teddy.15)
😅😂🤣 Take the Gin bottle, forget the T and do a bolt for home,...
April 19th, 2024 06:18 - A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer (Neville)
So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or...
April 19th, 2024 06:06 - The Mountain Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
You take your path and I\'\'ll take mine, Andy. Pretty sure it will lead...
April 19th, 2024 05:55 - They Came To The Door. (Goldfinch60)
Yo spent an awful amount of energy being nice - you are never that...
April 18th, 2024 19:34 - Discrimination (Sorenbarrett)
I have one of Pollocks\' (as repro of course) on my door. It\'s Blue...
April 18th, 2024 06:34 - Angels Encore (Teddy.15)
Each for their own when it comes to bedtime, Teddy.
For you, peace and...
April 18th, 2024 06:24 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
With care and discretion - is there nothing which would get you riled up,...
April 17th, 2024 21:12 - Before it All Began to Go Wrong (Neville)
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing...
April 17th, 2024 21:04 - The end (Sorenbarrett)
So you are beginning to poeticize your CV, Soren. Let\'s have more and...
April 17th, 2024 08:51 - Rort (2781)
Like to name names (whisper them if you are worried!)? lol
April 16th, 2024 18:40 - Do-over (Teddy.15)
Be careful Teddy - you feel like a right dodgy number there...😊
April 16th, 2024 18:37 - Gospel Given (Orchidee)
There\'s buggers round my neck of the woods who are telling far too much...
April 16th, 2024 07:12 - Stone cold (Sorenbarrett)
I\'d prefer to think of this as a simple case of being in the shit,...
April 16th, 2024 06:57 - Gratitude (Cassie58)
Missed in slow motion. You make me feel lucky, Cassie that while both my...
April 16th, 2024 06:47 - The Pursuit of Concord in a Fractured Age (GeekSusie)
Hard work there to \"See the \'other\' not as foe, But as a flower yet to...
April 15th, 2024 18:28 - From Shakespeare with Love (Teddy.15)
You always manage to get \'em in with your romance, Teddy.
I\'m...
April 15th, 2024 08:31 - Argh! Pain (Orchidee)
This King Parrot you talk about constantly orchi - You would oblige me if...
April 15th, 2024 03:06 - Yesterday I Met a Monster (Neville)
Somehow this one slipped past me -time zones defeat me sometimes - Welcome...
April 15th, 2024 02:43 - Advice on Avoiding Pedestals (Neville)
You\'ve turned up!! Left without a \'by your leave\' or anything.
I was...
April 15th, 2024 02:28 - Birthday Wishes (Tom Dylan)
Belated Happy Birthday, Tom (been away). And happy roll call...
April 14th, 2024 00:03 - My Darling London (Teddy.15)
“Maybe it’s because I’m a Londoner…” I do mention it when it...
April 13th, 2024 22:43 - Bring another round (Sorenbarrett)
Gave me a headache to begin with, Soren, but I got there in the...
April 13th, 2024 20:55 - Custer. (Goldfinch60)
Well if you wrote this some time ago, I do hope you utilised your spare...
April 13th, 2024 20:40 - The Day I Hit The Bear (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a deviation for you Kurt, but not an unwelcome one. Enjoyed the...
April 13th, 2024 20:28 - A Poet’s Death or Encore? (Teddy.15)
Rrrrich versifickation there, Teddy 😂😇
April 12th, 2024 10:40 - CRAZY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Summed up nicely - the way the system works (or rather doesn\'t) for...
April 12th, 2024 10:34 - Sustenance (Bella Shepard)
Good little thought, Bella. But I don\'t burst - It goes like this:...
April 12th, 2024 00:31 - This Morning (Bella Shepard)
Gut wrenching, Bella. But I feel if I comment further (and I very much...
April 12th, 2024 00:21 - The Line (Tom Dylan)
Whoa - What I like about your work Tom, is that it deals with stuff out...
April 3rd, 2024 19:25 - My phobias (Hey!)
A catalogue of phobias - thank you for enhancing my clinical vocabulary.
April 3rd, 2024 07:17 - the apologetic generation (NafisaSB)
Well written - a smooth read. I don\'t bother with the niceties, actually...
April 3rd, 2024 07:13 - The New Season. (Goldfinch60)
When I find that croquet club I\'m looking for, I won\'t need many lessons...
April 3rd, 2024 07:05 - Enlightened (Teddy.15)
To know that grief is as much a part of life as happiness, Teddy and be...
April 3rd, 2024 06:57 - A one way street (Sorenbarrett)
\"To give more than all that you find\" Is, I feel a good starting point...
April 2nd, 2024 18:33 - A Day Of Natures Symphony. (Goldfinch60)
Symphony is right, Andy. I cannot find just the correct word to describe...
April 2nd, 2024 01:31 - A Perfect Madness (Teddy.15)
There\'s nothing perfect about madness; unless you can come back using all...
April 2nd, 2024 01:03 - Failing to die is not succeeding to live, and vice versa. (Eclisse)
I know it is extremely late now as you seem to have found your own way,...
March 31st, 2024 17:31 - Building pressure....ready to implode (Eclisse)
Phew....
March 31st, 2024 17:22 - MANKIND (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
In a nutshell.
\"They\" never ask me or you. But \"We\'\" don\'t travel...
March 31st, 2024 16:47 - The Flight (Angel) (Teddy.15)
A flight without fight and you were there...
I couldn\'t write anything...
March 31st, 2024 16:28 - Dog Walking. (Goldfinch60)
A dog walking exercise even I could manage.
That picture in word-paint...
March 30th, 2024 18:30 - Taught Me This (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Interesting picture choice - sent me down the rabbit hole...
Great...
March 30th, 2024 18:25 - The castaway (Lorenz)
Rich in imagery I sometimes don\'t understand, but taken with the energy...
March 30th, 2024 05:42 - Words Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Dawn? Dawn? You have nothing but my fullest admiration, Sir. Wot I means...
March 29th, 2024 17:47 - the happy blind (NafisaSB)
Are you really blind?
March 28th, 2024 18:00 - Nightingale and I (Teddy.15)
It\'s the transition you\'ve made (as narrator) within yourself which...
March 28th, 2024 17:51 - Fuel For The Poet\'s Firepit (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You go for it, Man - let all of life\'s experiences fuel that fire...
March 28th, 2024 17:34 - The Surprise Gifts (Tom Dylan)
Ah Tom - family dynamics and your own internal ambivalence thrown together...
March 27th, 2024 17:41 - My Beautiful Lady. (Goldfinch60)
Looks like you have a couple of competitors above, Andy...too much...
March 27th, 2024 06:09 - Ramadan is Here (Sheryffat)
Just a little mystified re this: I can see the point (fasting), I think,...
March 27th, 2024 05:59 - Please Achieve Peace. (Goldfinch60)
A plea impossible to refute, Andy.
March 26th, 2024 19:20 - Everywhere (2781)
Sounds like a phenomenon I\'ve heard about somewhere......
March 25th, 2024 06:56 - Confirming Cockerel (Orchidee)
I remember that one (the yarn) from Sunday School, orchi.
Pushed there by...
March 25th, 2024 06:16 - MY FATHERS PLACE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
\'Was he here at all ?\' Yes - I know. All I have is some very conflicting...
March 25th, 2024 06:09 - London rush hour (Swarovski20)
Memories!! A quite (very) long time ago...... Remains very familiar....
March 24th, 2024 16:23 - Echoes of Injustice: The Zionist Entity\'s Shadow (Malek Mohamed)
Two elements:
1. History.
2. Innocent people die in war.
March 23rd, 2024 18:38 - Vestiges (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great write as usual. I have moments like that - the irritation builds and...
March 23rd, 2024 18:30 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
I know as how you don\'t like to boast Andy, but on this occasion I\'ll...
March 23rd, 2024 18:11
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