Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Christmas (2781) There with you on this one mate. Still, as a committed Christian (as...
  December 4th, 2023 04:22
• THE SEA COALERS CONVOY (Nephilim56) I\'ll judge you just as harshly as I feel necessary: I enjoyed the...
  December 4th, 2023 00:49
• Les Crushes Hétéros: La Farce de la Nature (GeekSusie) I think it lost something during the journey via Google Translate.....
  December 3rd, 2023 18:41
• Twisted History the Rape of the Plains People   (Neville) Much too late (wasn\'t present when you penned this). 1788 saw the start...
  December 2nd, 2023 20:05
• Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60) All together now....... I wanna retire..... aah - sorry, I already
  December 2nd, 2023 19:30
• Ghost of a dream (Sorenbarrett) Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the ...
  December 2nd, 2023 19:19
• Clarity (Gary Edward Geraci) Gary, you know I like to engage with you when I\'ve got something to say....
  December 2nd, 2023 18:59
• Boots Which Helped Me To Walk (Summersounds68) Then comments you shall receive: True, autobiographical? Point of tale?...
  December 2nd, 2023 18:40
• Be Set Free (Angelia Lamar) I\'d be interested to know why all of your contributions here require, in...
  December 2nd, 2023 00:44
• How long (2781) A bright light of recognition shines on your words, mate. Don\'t let...
  December 1st, 2023 05:48
• Ask a writer (Tom Dylan) 😂Go forth young man, be certain of your cause, your message. Be not...
  December 1st, 2023 05:41
• All I Need Is A Pew Pew! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Are you taking the Wee Wee??? LOL
  November 30th, 2023 07:07
• IN THE BELFRY (Nephilim56) Had a funny feeling its got something to do with bats..........😂 Fun...
  November 30th, 2023 07:04
• My Barber. (Goldfinch60) A lot of truth in your depiction of the relationship between hairdresser...
  November 29th, 2023 18:47
• My Own Shadow (Shahla Latifi) 😀 Although the title was a give-away, your last line came as a...
  November 29th, 2023 18:35
• Waiting for a saviour - A response. (Saxon Crow) Gotta put the blame somewhere......... This God of yours sounds like a...
  November 29th, 2023 08:10
• Day By Day (Orchidee) Good write orchi............... Dear Lord and father............forgive...
  November 28th, 2023 21:31
• Arise In The Darkness. (Goldfinch60) Get serious now - If nothing gets switched on \'til you get downstairs,...
  November 28th, 2023 17:40
• Poet. (Lunarchloedip) Why attempt to claim the title ‘poet’? What or who is a poet anyway?...
  November 28th, 2023 05:48
• Everything (Bella Shepard) Nice end of year closure piece., Bella. I hope \'family commitments\'...
  November 27th, 2023 17:18
• They call me lucky (Hzugman) Stay with the first two lines - the penultimate and final should nicely...
  November 27th, 2023 17:10
• Waiting For A Saviour. (Goldfinch60) If this is an attempt to put fire into some poetic souls, I\'d observe...
  November 27th, 2023 06:38
• Some (Peto) Well put. This is why there should be no generalised use of the word...
  November 26th, 2023 23:16
• Different Masks. (Goldfinch60) The spirit (Laphroaig?) running through your life.......Go have another...
  November 26th, 2023 17:55
• pitcher plant (Arqios) Never thought of it quite like that...... Deserved its presentation.
  November 25th, 2023 18:57
• Chopin\'s Nocturne. (Goldfinch60) I like the way you are open about your change in taste, Andy. Maturity or...
  November 25th, 2023 07:13
• Computing Starts. (Goldfinch60) Get back into it Mate - emigrate and sort out the housing situation in...
  November 24th, 2023 18:41
• So what it’s chaos (EvenwheniLie) I almost end up with PTSD just reading your stuff.....
  November 24th, 2023 18:33
• Nuggets - Brainwashed (Michael Edwards) Great to hear from you, Michael, thought you were lost and gone forever...
  November 24th, 2023 18:30
• Surfing (Syd) The loss - it still tickles the edge of the memory, though in no coherent...
  November 24th, 2023 18:14
• Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men (Thomas W Case) Yeh I\'d buy a collection of rewritten nursery rhymes - so bring your...
  November 24th, 2023 17:48
• Eye of a madman (Sorenbarrett) First two lines, I woz with you, Soren - I won\'t be forgetting this idea...
  November 24th, 2023 17:40
• Thank You! (Bella Shepard) Many Thank-yous in return, Bella - even if (my culture) Thanksgiving...
  November 23rd, 2023 18:04
• Enough IS enough (Hzugman) Nice work if you can get it, H.
  November 23rd, 2023 17:46
• Look To Infinity. (Goldfinch60) A bit of perspective here...needed is active commitment to our own little...
  November 23rd, 2023 03:49
• The Poetry Champion (Tom Dylan) My feelings precisely - enjoyed a well poemed piece.. Thanks.
  November 22nd, 2023 18:22
• Acid Days (Neville) Enjoy. Could still continue to contribute - on Ipad or summat...(just a...
  November 22nd, 2023 18:18
• When the Balance Wheel is Broken (Neville) The central question I ask myself from time to time: do I want to go fast...
  November 22nd, 2023 00:37
• Amen (Neville) After the zombies came the S.I. Lobotomies whose guiding principle would...
  November 21st, 2023 15:31
• Love Of A Woman. (Goldfinch60) I think conceivably you might just have something there, Andy.
  November 21st, 2023 07:57
• Amen (Neville) This is giving me a bit of a headache....but.... I\'ll definitely forgo my...
  November 21st, 2023 07:53
• November Leaves Me in Gray (Summersounds68) Depends where you live.......
  November 21st, 2023 07:31
• Frosty, the Bicycle (Summersounds68) Often thought I should found SPCB - Society for the Prevention of Cruelty...
  November 21st, 2023 07:29
• Chatterton’s Redress (Arqios) As a refutation of suicide as a solution to ones problems I couldn\'t...
  November 20th, 2023 07:36
• In Her Little Room. (Goldfinch60) There\'s a large truth there, Andy. But why \'\'She\"? Can\'t I be...
  November 20th, 2023 04:44
• County Jail, A Writer\'s Retreat (Thomas W Case) Bad case of recidivism there..... But while you can hold a pen (however...
  November 20th, 2023 00:29
• The Wife of a Dead Russian Diplomat (Neville) This is too much with too little, Neville. Needs a book or at least an...
  November 18th, 2023 02:01
• Conscience (Bella Shepard) I once worked with a grumpy old bugger (I were young then), whose...
  November 17th, 2023 21:11
• An Uncertain Kind of Aloneness (Neville) Best not the open beach, sadly . Lock the door, draw the curtains...oh,...
  November 17th, 2023 17:39
• Rights that are left (Sorenbarrett) Up to your usual neat puzzle poem standard Soren. Not sure man has the...
  November 16th, 2023 15:07
• They lie beneath (Tallisman) Definitely worth it\'s place in War Poetry - Owen and Sassoon would...
  November 16th, 2023 06:42
• Bad poetry (Tallisman) You deserve a response here, Tallisman. Thanks for the prompt. A moral...
  November 16th, 2023 06:29
• Old Dick and the Swearmonger’s Daughter (Neville) What a textured environment you grew up in Neville, rich in verbal colour....
  November 16th, 2023 06:09
• Promises (Arqios) From data storage to artificial lawns via AI, I got it alright - sums up...
  November 16th, 2023 05:53
• Is It Me! (Goldfinch60) Yes!!!! 😂
  November 16th, 2023 05:29
• Gaza in tears (NafisaSB) And so it goes with all wars.... of which there appear to be a never...
  November 16th, 2023 01:21
• Now Looking Back With Anticipation (Neville) With the sole exception of the tea choice, I cannot but feel myself in...
  November 16th, 2023 01:12
• Self-Pity (Kayla Jackson) There\'s a confession for you - shows plenty of self awareness.
  September 28th, 2023 20:12
• Blind poet (Sorenbarrett) You like the challenges (done in different schemes before) None the worse...
  September 27th, 2023 18:06
• Do Shut Up Sometimes... (Orchidee) You stay exactly where you are, and I think I will manage. Met too many...
  September 27th, 2023 02:26
• CRADLE (Nephilim56) On one level I like the simplicity and your usual polish. But please,...
  September 27th, 2023 02:19
• Bitter old man (EvenwheniLie) Not... quite... sure... about... this...one ...at... all................
  September 27th, 2023 02:05
• My Global Panorama (Joseph C Ogbonna) National Geographic cover….” fantasize” ….. “dream” –...
  September 26th, 2023 18:41
• In the Wake of a Wish (Neville) Much depended on the hand I was delt - not a good \'un, but I played it to...
  September 26th, 2023 04:57
• sixteen (Whispersaroundyou) Keep us informed - month by month. You\'ll outlast me, that\'s for...
  September 26th, 2023 04:35
• Late Kate (Cynthiavkelly) Fun to read also, not just because of the rhyme, to which I\'m addicted,...
  September 25th, 2023 20:23
• Ned’s View (Neville) OK – going to attempt to parse this conundrum. Ned…Ned Kelly? Nah, I...
  September 25th, 2023 04:34
• Washed Away (Teddy.15) I have absolutely no idea how your brain is wired (and, I admit, have been...
  September 25th, 2023 04:15
• Simple Life. (Goldfinch60) Story of my life, my friend....
  September 25th, 2023 04:09
• Acronyms (2781) Can relate to that - the number of times I have to resort to Prof Google...
  September 25th, 2023 04:06
• FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O) Not normally keen on on offerings of advice in poetic form here. But...
  September 24th, 2023 19:39
• Feels Like There’s a Stranger in the House (Neville) \"The end of the affair\"? Subtle and neat. Though I read through twice...
  September 24th, 2023 18:22
• Such A Beautiful Game. (Goldfinch60) Still trying to understand Union. There are utube explanations, which I...
  September 24th, 2023 06:29
• Mockingbird (Sorenbarrett) Liked the tenor of your argument, Soren. Birds, like humans are a pretty...
  September 23rd, 2023 21:33
• Wants and needs (Hzugman) Wot happens to Profits if everyone took your advice,...
  September 23rd, 2023 21:11
• Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab) Thanks for the introduction, Parisab. Decided to find her and what she was...
  September 23rd, 2023 20:52
• Origins of a terrorist (EvenwheniLie) Nihilism personified and versified in your usual get to the root of it all...
  September 23rd, 2023 20:29
• When My Heart Fell in Love (Neville) I\'m leaving this one for those as do this kind of response...
  September 23rd, 2023 02:35
• MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O) Moral tale - powerful piece of advice........ That\'s.. (is.. was).....
  September 23rd, 2023 01:48
• If we are not wise compassion will be our demise (A thought) (Sorenbarrett) I don’t think we have evolved sufficiently to make that kind of choice,...
  September 22nd, 2023 06:15
• NO MUSE (Twizzle48) An accomplished piece, which says plenty about poetic inspiration. Thanks...
  September 22nd, 2023 06:06
• A Very Brief Moment  (Teddy.15) So that\'s how traffic jams occurred in London.....😂
  September 22nd, 2023 05:53
• Accumulations (Neville) History…that’s wot they woz…they’ve been well analyzed above, so...
  September 22nd, 2023 05:45
• Music To Normality. (Goldfinch60) As portrayal of a moment in (your) time, I cannot fault that, Andy.
  September 22nd, 2023 05:25
• I have been waiting for you. (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) You could rework that poem and turn it into a meditation.....🙂 PS Your...
  September 21st, 2023 19:40
• Nothing to Write About (Pop64) Thanks Michael Hzugman for bothering to respond when I didn\'t even...
  September 21st, 2023 17:39
• Nothing to Write About (Pop64) I don\'t even have to empathise - just am in that state most of the time....
  September 21st, 2023 09:08
• Upon Those Words She Chose to Leave Behind (Neville) My goodness golly gosh they must\'ve solved it for you above (if indeed...
  September 21st, 2023 04:55
• Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15) Very deep, Teddy.
  September 21st, 2023 01:43
• Poets Speak Out (Keith Jeffries) Some can be........not sure all are...... Like your style.
  September 20th, 2023 17:30
• Charing Cross Station (Keith Jeffries) Bought back some ancient memories of my homeland and stamping ground...and...
  September 20th, 2023 17:27
• Our Greatest Enemy (Keith Jeffries) Worth a second, third or so read. I must keep this short, otherwise I will...
  September 20th, 2023 17:16
• A Childlike Faith (Orchidee) It may just be that over time you have gathered that I\'m not much into...
  September 20th, 2023 04:53
• Have you ever (Sorenbarrett) Sorry Soren. While I appreciate the richness of your imagery, any mention...
  September 20th, 2023 04:34
• Ladybird (Teddy.15) Nice to know the lashing will be smooth and hygienic.... LOL
  September 20th, 2023 04:24
• Nature\'s Artwork. (Goldfinch60) Speak for yourself, Son....no reason to gloat........ I\'m on my way to...
  September 20th, 2023 04:18
• When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly (Neville) Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in...
  September 20th, 2023 00:33
• Paradise !!! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) Don\'t know much about popular music, so missed that connection...
  September 19th, 2023 19:17
• Russell Brand, It\'s All Planned (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Not quite sure what you are saying here...What about the totally unproven...
  September 19th, 2023 04:42
• Too Many Maybe’s (Neville) Wot\'s this - a confessional? You laying on a couch while another...
  September 19th, 2023 04:35