Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Back Then (Fay Slimm.)
Not going there - sorry Fay. Couldn\'t cope with the sweat (sorry -...
July 5th, 2021 04:27 - Across the Kitchen Floor. (Goldfinch60)
Intervene - counselling - dispute resolution, conditional upon the...
July 5th, 2021 04:04 - Ode to Mother Nature (Goddess of the Mist)
Your changing relationship with Nature and the freedom it gives you, is...
July 4th, 2021 20:29 - Pretty Penny (Catgotthecream)
Another unspeakable issue which MUST be spoken about, Cat.
A skilled...
July 4th, 2021 20:20 - Phoenix Reborn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Book burning? No acceptance, please, Kurt. However song existed before...
July 4th, 2021 20:04 - Geraldine (Neville)
A swim past to balance your tribute – even I have to admit that...
July 4th, 2021 06:22 - Good To Me (Pacifique Niyitanga)
I really enjoyed the way you explored the complexities of your attraction...
July 4th, 2021 02:07 - Please me (Florence J)
Crap sex.
Welcome to MPS Please feel free to respond to commentary -MPS...
July 4th, 2021 01:00 - The Relaxing Pitter-Patter on the Conservatory Roof (AuburnScribbler)
All these bleeders wiv conservatories.... Wait \'til I get their...
July 3rd, 2021 21:36 - Seeds in the Sand (Cheka)
Cheka now? well hello anyway...
Your work is again clearly and cleanly...
July 3rd, 2021 21:20 - Hide and Seek (Catgotthecream)
I do hope that your piece is just an imaginative construction rather than...
July 3rd, 2021 21:00 - Three T’s (Neville)
I’m not about to wait Neville - I’ve seen.
What I’m about now is...
July 3rd, 2021 08:25 - You Liking? (Orchidee)
You\'ve been around, ain\'t you orchi? Your penultimate stanza - wow the...
July 3rd, 2021 04:44 - Why Flies should Die! (Saxon Crow)
Dear Sir,
You are reliably informed that those small beasts do sterling...
July 3rd, 2021 01:19 - The Old Churchyard Wall (Langton)
It’s the same feeling I get when I look at any well crafted old...
July 2nd, 2021 19:45 - The Time in Between (Cheka)
Hello CB…I really relate to your first two stanzas, where I feel that...
July 2nd, 2021 19:34 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Michael, for me this evoked very visual images, as the first line gave me...
July 2nd, 2021 18:41 - Solitary (Fay Slimm.)
Not, as you point out Neville, typical, your Brian.
Where I live, when...
July 2nd, 2021 07:59 - All the Best Words (Neville)
Plagiarism and aggressive misinterpretation rampant, Neville?
Time to...
July 2nd, 2021 04:46 - Song, Heartache, Heartbreak. (AwHec8)
I\'m not very musical, and can\'t normally keep a tune, Don - but this...
July 1st, 2021 17:56 - Breaking News (MyMindInRhyme)
Dunno where you\'ve come from, but feel you are an old hand.
A great...
July 1st, 2021 17:45 - Discovery (Fay Slimm.)
Simple and pleasing, Fay.
\'Such a summer as this had buttons undone as...
July 1st, 2021 05:11 - Six Million Candles (Neville)
Once more, a great piece, Neville. Another topic I cannot deal with...
July 1st, 2021 04:36 - Another Year (Saxon Crow)
That’s a hard one neatly put, Sax.
I like to think I’ve matured,...
July 1st, 2021 01:09 - Haunted (Lily_)
You got out but obsessive thoughts and dreams plague you?
They more then...
July 1st, 2021 00:44 - PUZZLED POET (Andy Hunter)
Yeeeees....I knoooooow...... whaaaat .......yooooou ......meaaaaan....mind...
June 30th, 2021 21:05 - Under The Hammer. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m sure they will get the odd tickle of interest at that auction, Andy -...
June 30th, 2021 19:08 - Curbed (Fay Slimm.)
Dedicated to birds in cages also? A silly question: (\'all...
June 30th, 2021 08:56 - Cold Shoulder (Neville)
Victimisation and prejudice - a portrait too painful - wonder you could...
June 30th, 2021 04:40 - Dominus Propitiari (Laura🌻)
I\'m just a poor weak man.....
Also uncultivated, so if it would not be...
June 30th, 2021 00:43 - The Crescent Alter (Germanamericanchurch)
I somehow feel that an attempt at author commentary would have been...
June 29th, 2021 18:31 - Colliers Way (_naturally_curious_)
Takes me back to my country cycling days in the UK- the best of...
June 29th, 2021 18:28 - Don\'t say anymore (Sandra)
This is partner abuse. Get out.
June 29th, 2021 18:11 - WHY PUT OUR DREAMS ON HOLD (Andy Hunter)
I\'ve never been a parent (thankfully) but from observation I believe many...
June 29th, 2021 18:03 - Bonsai (Thekkinkkattil)
You have something there which only rarely troubles me a little: I very...
June 29th, 2021 05:13 - Empty Harbours (Neville)
Fished out - \'sorry to make this reductionist and personal Neville, but...
June 29th, 2021 05:01 - The Love Story of Mrs Duckers and Mr Von Sneppick (Saxon Crow)
Boffington Town sounds a very interesting place full of ....colorful...
June 29th, 2021 04:34 - No Joke Jo... (Jaimeleigh)
and with your child hood it will remain my dear - eyestrain
June 28th, 2021 20:12 - Twitarus (Neville)
Definitely a twit - so far so good. Should also be nominated for a Darwin...
June 28th, 2021 08:55 - Middle aged (Sandra)
Oh - and I wuz starting to get up.... a perspiration....
Never mind - ...
June 28th, 2021 04:32 - Infinite Universe. (Goldfinch60)
Infinite universes are more than likely, I feel; however, I cannot buy the...
June 28th, 2021 02:15 - Ipsy Mcskiggins\' Secret (Saxon Crow)
Great stuff - another colorful communique from Boffington. What is the...
June 28th, 2021 02:06 - Along the Mineral Line (Neville)
Got to smell the steam the coal dust smoke and midnight once more, Neville...
June 27th, 2021 07:57 - Ponderings (Fay Slimm.)
Ponderings, on the evidence of what you present here have certainly...
June 27th, 2021 07:51 - I (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Yeh - I could tick a goodly number of those as being applicable to me in...
June 27th, 2021 07:38 - Wonders of Nature (Thekkinkkattil)
I\'m not into Nature poetry much myself, but the assurance that there may...
June 27th, 2021 07:12 - But Is It Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Yes, Andy. Just because I prefer rhyme and the rest doesn\'t mean I don\'t...
June 27th, 2021 01:52 - PC Porpoodle (Saxon Crow)
A gastronomic delight from old trollsie\'s point of view - pity about the...
June 27th, 2021 01:40 - karmic eventuality - II (SureshG)
Hi Suresh
Typo? seize = cease? If right , let me know and I\'ll delete....
June 27th, 2021 01:19 - I (accompanied by my shadow)... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I could relate to large swathes of that (housing - relations with...
June 26th, 2021 20:37 - Understanding (Gary Edward Geraci)
Yes,Gary - I recognise that feeling too. Thanks .
Since we have that...
June 26th, 2021 20:28 - Untitled - XLV (SureshG)
The way you present it, you apparently have not got much choice, Suresh....
June 26th, 2021 19:52 - In the Name of Freedom (Saxon Crow)
The last thing you should do is apologise for that, Sax.
Come up with...
June 26th, 2021 08:46 - THE LIFE ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
Life was much simpler then - or maybe still is for all I know...
Nice...
June 26th, 2021 08:26 - Digit slipped.... (Orchidee)
Who knows the capacities of you, the operating system or the hound,...
June 25th, 2021 19:40 - Tree of Souls (Neville)
Far too deep for my extremely literal mind, Neville....except is it not...
June 25th, 2021 19:14 - Losing You (Fay Slimm.)
To me this is less about the kind of mystical thing that gets called love...
June 25th, 2021 06:49 - Freedom? (Saxon Crow)
Too much freedom (depending on what is out here) is not freedom at all -...
June 25th, 2021 02:39 - Caught (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks Fay. A richly worded piece.
I live in the middle of a heavily...
June 24th, 2021 20:18 - One Step At A Time. (Goldfinch60)
Yes - I can relate to that, Andy. It is the way my life transpired,...
June 24th, 2021 03:50 - Black December (Saxon Crow)
Had a bit of a difficult time there, old chap? Hope it all turns out...
June 24th, 2021 02:14 - The Interment (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Not much into funerals Alan, not even my own - I hope I\'ve made that...
June 23rd, 2021 20:41 - Untitled - XLIV (SureshG)
Inability to perceive it even..... Must stop otherwise I might...
June 23rd, 2021 20:29 - A Taste of Hunger (Neville)
Hurt because you bust your head on the door lintel (them old houses) and...
June 23rd, 2021 20:13 - beautiful pastime (Dusk arising)
Understood, dusk
June 23rd, 2021 04:35 - Free Exchange (Doggerel Dave)
A bet each way, Neville?
June 22nd, 2021 19:13 - Toward Normal (Jerry Reynolds)
Slowly does it - gradual warm up and hope for a long summer, Jerry.
All...
June 22nd, 2021 08:08 - the jungle final (Dusk arising)
😊 Great yarn there, Dusk. You\'ll find me in the stands too.
June 22nd, 2021 08:03 - My Upstairs Neighbor (Whirlpool)
Methinks you you hope to get much closer....will you continue to write...
June 22nd, 2021 01:01 - Purpose (Saxon Crow)
Except when you\'re hungry.
June 22nd, 2021 00:53 - Now (IAli)
Sage advice, Ali - never too late.
Thanks
June 21st, 2021 05:06 - I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m on me feet mate, an going to stay there for as long as possible -...
June 21st, 2021 04:50 - Lines (Saxon Crow)
Thanks Sax - how did you know?
June 21st, 2021 02:00 - Devil Kisses (Goddess of the Mist)
Even if you were really angry, you still had much control over what you...
June 21st, 2021 01:56 - Back in the Day (Neville)
Memories - they come unbidden more often than not. Better if they are good...
June 21st, 2021 01:48 - charlie (Dusk arising)
😊 No trouble with the accent, Dusk....wouldn\'t mind the rest......
June 21st, 2021 01:40 - The Ignorant Mind (IAli)
You do write attractively of the life of an \'ignorant fool\'.
Now I...
June 20th, 2021 19:49 - You’re Always Hurting Me! (LittlePea)
\"darker times, years ago\" - so why dwell on it?
June 20th, 2021 05:51 - ‘Word of Faith’ Ladies (Gary Edward Geraci)
A difficult subject, Gary and one I have absolutely no intention of making...
June 20th, 2021 01:20 - Cleansing The Mind (Jayasree)
I believe you are right, Jay. Has to be worked at though. Your little...
June 20th, 2021 00:53 - Blues My Companion (Saxon Crow)
You got the blues man, you got life.
June 20th, 2021 00:47 - The Party In The Forest (Jayasree)
Fun funny fantasy which someone approaching his second childhood...
June 20th, 2021 00:35 - O dear passenger! (IAli)
Thanks for this poem, Ali. I liked the metaphor of myself (and presumably...
June 19th, 2021 05:08 - Then, Now, and Then (H.R.Powell)
The past remembered only inasmuch as there were lessons learned; the...
June 18th, 2021 23:57 - The Final Breath (The Struggler)
I agree with every line of that - and have mentioned my impending end on...
June 18th, 2021 18:53 - What Is Life? (Goldfinch60)
Enjoy it to the full, Andy.
Redundant advice \'cos you already do.
Four...
June 18th, 2021 02:00 - Griddly Smethelton of Boffington Town (Saxon Crow)
😃 😄 😁 The characters, sneeze, story 😊 😊 😊 that was again...
June 18th, 2021 01:54 - 100 books you must not read before you die #35 (Jon Nakapalau)
I do not as a general rule take statements of which I have no prior...
June 17th, 2021 19:36 - Ammunition for Insanity(GUN CONTROL NOW PLEASE!) (ShnMchlStoops76)
Absolutely 100% with you there, R.D.
I could rant on about this at great...
June 17th, 2021 19:09 - Match Mask. (Goldfinch60)
Different roles for different occasions, Andy. Its been said of a certain...
June 17th, 2021 02:07 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Picture makes me all nostalgic again. Middle building a pub (lettering...
June 17th, 2021 01:11 - Bella (Saxon Crow)
Beautiful relationship one man and his dog.You have captured it nicely,...
June 17th, 2021 01:03 - THEY CALL IT RAP (Andy Hunter)
Yep - heard once, never voluntarily again.
And If I have your assurance...
June 16th, 2021 19:47 - Compare to her, Compare to me (Robbie GJ)
English would be fine next time, if it\'s not too much trouble.....
June 16th, 2021 19:29 - Wake Up Call (Advaitha)
\"You talkin\' to me?\" Who do you think you are? AND Who do you think I...
June 16th, 2021 19:23 - Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”) (AuburnScribbler)
It was, I suspect AS, a long hard road and it’s great you have now...
June 16th, 2021 07:01 - My Published Work on Amazon (Abu Aeesh)
Sorry mate good try, but I\'m with Saxon here. Had a sales rep attempting...
June 16th, 2021 06:46 - Smile for the “camera” (Robbie GJ)
Goes both ways: Some (many?) men are taught their attitudes to women in...
June 16th, 2021 02:13 - Shoot On Sight (Bernard Gabriel Okurut)
Seen before. I left what I consider to be a positive comment to this....
June 16th, 2021 02:00 - Griddly Smetheltons Great Big Sneeze (Saxon Crow)
😃 😄 😁 The characters, sneeze, story 😊 😊 😊 that was great...
June 16th, 2021 00:54
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