Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- These Words (Neville)
Words should be exposed to the world as yours are on this site.
September 25th, 2019 02:43 - Prayer Perseverings (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi
September 25th, 2019 01:07 - Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Mabin)
Dinner for one can be so sad.
September 24th, 2019 01:24 - Morpho (SerenWise)
Must be love.
September 24th, 2019 00:51 - The Greatest Love (Vvnrose)
Beautiful loving write, your child (children?) will be forever blessed...
September 24th, 2019 00:50 - Clueless (FredPeyer)
Your destiny is calling and that happiness is there.
September 24th, 2019 00:48 - Demented (Vanessa wallace)
For one so young these words show how the horror in this world is reaching...
September 24th, 2019 00:43 - Stashed (Neville)
May your memories
Forever be there for you,
To eternity.
Andy
September 24th, 2019 00:38 - Healing (Meg)
You are so right to have the balance now, that balance will give you...
September 24th, 2019 00:24 - Placed in your hand (Poetic Dan)
Your words show the wonder that is in your life and that wonder will be...
September 24th, 2019 00:22 - Changing. (Fay Slimm.)
Your colourful words take me to that place. I like Stilton as well. LOL.
September 23rd, 2019 02:08 - M I C H I G A N ~ I N ~ F A L L 𧑠ANGELA & BRIAN π An ~ 8 2 4 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Autumn is my favourite time of the year and I am sure it is marvellous in...
September 23rd, 2019 02:07 - Meditative Missive (Orchidee)
May that teaching lead you well on your path of righteousness.
September 23rd, 2019 02:04 - Waiting (Alta H Mabin)
Superb Haiku.
September 23rd, 2019 02:03 - Christina (Mr H)
Such a sad time for you but she will forever be within you.
Welcome to...
September 23rd, 2019 02:02 - i read you (Dusk arising)
Beautiful emotive write d a, if it wasn\'t for poetry where would we be,...
September 23rd, 2019 01:56 - Lo que siento (Vanessa wallace)
That love will continue forever as will your wonderful words.
September 23rd, 2019 00:08 - the wall around your heart (Jon Nakapalau)
Those shattered dreams WERE there, but they will dull and finding the...
September 23rd, 2019 00:07 - Rock House of light you can call home (Poetic Dan)
You have come a long way Dan, keep going forward in the joy you have found...
September 22nd, 2019 13:46 - While Days Dawn (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi
September 22nd, 2019 13:45 - I made a vow (Alta H Mabin)
I hope that closeness never fails.
September 22nd, 2019 13:42 - Beginnings. (Goldfinch60)
Your new beginnings will be there soon, great month October, the month I...
September 22nd, 2019 13:40 - Inner child be free (Poetic Dan)
Having kids is so wonderful and so inspiring.
September 22nd, 2019 13:38 - Splitting Hairs (Neville)
May that moon by ours forever.
September 22nd, 2019 13:37 - escape (Dusk arising)
That alternative world is wonderful.
September 22nd, 2019 13:36 - Celestial City - New Jerusalem (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi, we will all be there at the end.
September 22nd, 2019 13:35 - LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2 (Michael Edwards)
So true Michael, never pass a loo!
September 22nd, 2019 13:33 - Boundless Admiration. (Goldfinch60)
Yes the do a wonderful job and I have no worries about Joyce being there.
September 22nd, 2019 13:28 - A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville)
That space will be filled with your Spirit for the rest of us to honour...
September 21st, 2019 01:13 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write in these days of increasing fires in nature.
September 21st, 2019 00:28 - May I Kindly (Hidden)
Good write that sounds like a proposal, do you have the ring.
September 21st, 2019 00:26 - River of love, that\'s now joined all of us! (Poetic Dan)
What a wonderful feeling, new life in your world is beautiful. Your life...
September 21st, 2019 00:13 - BORROWING & LENDING 𧑠A SONNET π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It is often the that you never see things again. There are trustworthy...
September 21st, 2019 00:07 - Presenting Praises (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 20th, 2019 23:59 - PEGGITY PEG (Michael Edwards)
Good fun write Peggity - oops Michael.
September 20th, 2019 01:40 - Very memorable occasion (Dusk arising)
Your Faith is your own as mine now is go the way that it leads you and all...
September 20th, 2019 01:37 - Interlude (FredPeyer)
Wonderful loving write Fred, may it go on forever.
September 20th, 2019 01:36 - Scars of Hope (WL Schuett)
Those scars may be there but they show the healing of your body and Your...
September 20th, 2019 01:35 - Kintsugi (ιηΆγ) (SerenWise)
That jigsaw is now complete.
September 20th, 2019 01:33 - Help (Vanessa wallace)
You will never be alone as the people on this site care for you as they...
September 20th, 2019 01:27 - Pillar in my world (Poetic Dan)
Such a wonderful poem full of love and happiness. Your home is wonderful...
September 20th, 2019 01:25 - There Are Those (Neville)
... that write in rhyme
and verse
There are those where...
September 20th, 2019 01:23 - JOY OF WOODLAND SOUNDS 𧑠A 6 8 SONNET π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Natures vision and sounds are just wonderful.
September 20th, 2019 01:13 - Naked Heart. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay, like Unsub and others I think that first line is...
September 20th, 2019 00:59 - Revival Request (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi and a wonderful tune, good to see you chose the Cat Stevens...
September 19th, 2019 02:44 - CYPRUS (Michael Edwards)
One of my friends has just came back from Cyprus, had a wonderful time. ...
September 19th, 2019 00:44 - ridiculous organism (Dusk arising)
There is a fineness in us all but many are too self indulgent to see it...
September 19th, 2019 00:42 - Perky pyramids (Alta H Mabin)
Yes love is beautiful, more so if you can avoid the beautiful pyramids and...
September 19th, 2019 00:40 - Need (SerenWise)
That love is so strong and will go on to eternity.
September 19th, 2019 00:35 - Waiting Game (FredPeyer)
Yes that could be me, that last stanza is so true.
September 19th, 2019 00:32 - Beauty (Vanessa wallace)
You will never be alone when you can write words like this.
You are...
September 19th, 2019 00:30 - je t\'aime (Alta H Mabin)
Merci Mademoiselle.
September 18th, 2019 04:48 - CONTENTMENT & HAPPINESS 𧑠ANGELA & BRIAN π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My blessings are always there when I awake every day. Each moment is...
September 18th, 2019 04:46 - Outs. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful words about a fabulous time of the day, you may not have been...
September 18th, 2019 04:44 - Good Time Girl (Neville)
Sometimes we do not real people inside, it is unfortunate that she had to...
September 18th, 2019 04:43 - Light After The Darkness (Meg)
That lightness will always there for you Meg.
September 18th, 2019 04:37 - Prosperous Praises (Orchidee)
I am still waiting. Good write though Orchi.
September 18th, 2019 04:35 - there was a boy (Dusk arising)
Very telling write d a, it may be that I was fortunate in my childhood as...
September 18th, 2019 04:34 - I respect but don\'t trust (Poetic Dan)
Trust is so wonderful when it is there but once it is broken it is so hard...
September 18th, 2019 00:41 - What is boring? (Canticle)
With your thoughts written in words like these there is no way that you...
September 18th, 2019 00:36 - Twice tomorrow (Jeffrey Roy)
That love flows from your words and will go on for eternity,
September 18th, 2019 00:34 - Happiness (Vanessa wallace)
Happiness is within you Rose, you said it yourself when you said you think...
September 18th, 2019 00:18 - Fondly and Truly (Neville)
Beautiful words Neville, those thoughts of love from the past are always...
September 17th, 2019 13:19 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
I see beauty and wonder in your words Fay.
September 17th, 2019 13:17 - BAREFOOT IN ANDALUCIA 𧑠ANGELA 𧑠BLANK VERSE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOvely write and memories Angela.
September 17th, 2019 13:17 - evening descends (Dusk arising)
Sonata is fine the nocturne is sung by the robin. It is so wonderful to...
September 17th, 2019 13:15 - REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards)
I have just burst out laughing - I wonder if the neighbours heard...
September 17th, 2019 01:43 - Walk your path well (Poetic Dan)
Super write, we should each walk our path with respect to others.
September 17th, 2019 01:41 - The hope of a sunflower (Alta H Mabin)
Superb Haiku Alta.
September 17th, 2019 00:52 - The Vow (SerenWise)
Beautiful.
September 17th, 2019 00:51 - Slowly (TheLonelyPoet90)
From those ashes new life will come and the wonder of that life is yours...
September 17th, 2019 00:49 - Flowing forward while going back (Poetic Dan)
Each of those blocked paths in our lives do get opened and as we go...
September 17th, 2019 00:47 - Technology (Rohan)
By the way, Welcome to MPS.
September 17th, 2019 00:45 - Technology (Rohan)
Well written and so true, technology has taken over many peoples lives, we...
September 17th, 2019 00:42 - Out (Vanessa wallace)
Be true to yourself, your Mother loves you, she will accept it.
September 17th, 2019 00:38 - What women need 101 (Alta H Mabin)
May your needs be fulfilled with love (and good coffee of course).
September 17th, 2019 00:30 - the milk bar (Dusk arising)
Super write, of course he would recognise her.
September 17th, 2019 00:29 - Client (Neville)
Captivating write Neville, it needs several reads as so much can be seen...
September 17th, 2019 00:27 - Blackrock. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write of a sad tale Fay.
September 17th, 2019 00:24 - In Whaley Bridge (Kevin Michael Bloor)
It is obviously your wondrous place, your heaven on earth.
September 16th, 2019 15:33 - Protective Power (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 16th, 2019 01:51 - WORDLESS (Michael Edwards)
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September 16th, 2019 01:51 - Ready-Made Muse (SerenWise)
An artwork so personal to you Serenwise.
September 16th, 2019 01:21 - navigating past the horizon (Jon Nakapalau)
Those memories are so fulfilling Jon.
When you get to the horizon never...
September 16th, 2019 01:19 - London to Brighton 100k (FineB)
May the strength in your mind that helped you complete the walk always be...
September 16th, 2019 01:17 - Misty Waters (Ron parrish aka wordman)
That freedom of Your Spirit is always with you - freedom is yours.
September 16th, 2019 01:13 - I\'ve Come Too Far To Quit Now (AndrewsPoetry)
You have come through those bumpy and rocky roads and the road ahead may...
September 16th, 2019 00:55 - Strange September Sunset (Kevin Michael Bloor)
May that wonder fill us with glory.
September 16th, 2019 00:50 - It\'s in the art (Poetic Dan)
Art seen by one may not be that seen by others.
September 16th, 2019 00:35 - Reminders. (Fay Slimm.)
Those times were so hard that we have no real idea except through what we...
September 16th, 2019 00:33 - Inside Her Pants (Neville)
Has romance left your world Neville,
Perhaps you never gave it a...
September 16th, 2019 00:27 - IT IS NO SECRET - WHAT GOD CAN DO π BRIAN ANGELA𧑠(ANGELA & BRIAN)
It\'s a pity your god doesn\'t look my way!!
September 15th, 2019 02:21 - Nature Nurturings (Orchidee)
Good write but that last stanza appears to not mean much to many in our...
September 15th, 2019 02:20 - never (Jon Nakapalau)
So true.
September 15th, 2019 01:45 - Reverie. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful Fay, that liveliness is just the place to be between after a...
September 15th, 2019 01:43 - Guineas And Other Friends (Orchidee)
You and your guinea pigs are great friends almost as friendly as you were...
September 15th, 2019 01:28 - Food for Thought (Neville)
Ah breakfast!
September 15th, 2019 01:17 - She found me in the grass (Poetic Dan)
Our life within us is the one we have and your life has become so good...
September 15th, 2019 01:08 - AS AUTUMN TURNS (Michael Edwards)
I can see your words in my mind, wonderful.
Wonderful painting,...
September 14th, 2019 00:44 - My son, Jaden (Alta H Mabin)
\" I love you
......
September 14th, 2019 00:28
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