Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- her weakness (Dusk arising)
You’ll find me by the cheese counter!
July 31st, 2019 04:59 - FORGOT TO PACK ~ YOUR PLASTIC MAC ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Lament ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good fun write but as I haven’t been out of the country, unless you...
July 31st, 2019 04:58 - Shard of a shard (Poetic Dan)
Those shards can be formed together which is what you are doing and the...
July 31st, 2019 04:55 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
WOW!
I was totally mesmerised by this,
May that song go on forever.
July 31st, 2019 04:52 - Mirror Envy (Neville)
Strong write Neville, those images seen from afar are so important to us...
July 31st, 2019 04:49 - Creative Considerings (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 31st, 2019 04:45 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
So true Suresh.
July 31st, 2019 01:14 - ANOTHER SHORTIE (Michael Edwards)
I can see the sense in that but each moment that you are in should be...
July 31st, 2019 01:14 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
We drink both tea and coffee. The tea we have is proper tea, none of this...
July 31st, 2019 01:13 - Thirst. (Fay Slimm.)
That hope is within us may it soon be beyond hope and become proof in our...
July 31st, 2019 00:41 - On finding Truth (Neville)
Those truths must always be seen by those in the future.
July 31st, 2019 00:38 - A speck (Poetic Dan)
In this time those who have the power to enable the peoples of the world...
July 30th, 2019 02:38 - Peace With God (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. But you know my current feelings about Christianity are...
July 30th, 2019 02:33 - Missing you (Jessicaendingxo)
Emotive write.
Welcome to MPS.
July 30th, 2019 00:52 - My Daily Joker Workout (Nafis Light)
I once thought about going to the gym but I went and lay down in a...
July 30th, 2019 00:49 - I Met Aphrodite (PoeticBiscuit)
Don\'t upset Hephaestus, Medusa may only turn you to stone, he will cut...
July 30th, 2019 00:47 - FIT AS A FIDDLE (Michael Edwards)
They are probably as fit as I am Michael.
July 30th, 2019 00:41 - Shards of Knowledge (Suresh)
Those shards of knowledge will eventually come together into a meaningful...
July 30th, 2019 00:38 - Crab Apples (Gerry_gardendick)
Salty as it would have to be in the sea.
Welcome to MPS.
July 30th, 2019 00:24 - LADY IN RED ~ BRIAN ~ 4 QUATRAINS plus line one repeat ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That lady in red will be your colourful lover for ever Brian.
July 29th, 2019 15:16 - Mom (British tea)
In this day and age the acceptance of gender changing it must be accepted...
July 29th, 2019 15:15 - Learnt Curves. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful love lorn write Fay.
July 29th, 2019 15:13 - Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain (Poetic Dan)
Our brains hold the thoughts and differences between us all.
July 29th, 2019 15:12 - Guiding Grace (Orchidee)
Good one once more Orchi.
July 29th, 2019 02:09 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
Wonderful write Neville. Those times past with the lady of your life are...
July 29th, 2019 02:08 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
May those interpretations always bring the joy that is shown in your...
July 29th, 2019 02:06 - The Fall (Christina8)
Your new experimentations with words all seem to working Christina.
July 29th, 2019 02:05 - The Scales Don\'t Lie (DesertWords)
My first laugh of the day - thank you.
Where is that chocolate pie?
July 29th, 2019 02:02 - sorrow (Jon Nakapalau)
That sorrow can be deflected by the light.
July 29th, 2019 02:00 - Essence of Love (Renu)
May that love be forever with us.
July 29th, 2019 02:00 - Beyond Me (Keonna)
The stillness we can create within ourselves can help us comprehend our...
July 29th, 2019 01:59 - Escape (Khadija Ajaoud)
May that beauty be alwasy with you as it is in your words.
Welcome to
July 29th, 2019 01:57 - Society (British tea)
Very good write, many people are too self centred to help others, it is a...
July 28th, 2019 15:25 - Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
That love shines through your words and it will go on for eternity.
July 28th, 2019 15:22 - And They Called Her Iris (Neville)
That beauty matches the words in your poem Neville.
July 28th, 2019 15:19 - Slip (Vanessa wallace)
Certainly a dark write Rose, but you have survived so that we can see more...
July 28th, 2019 15:16 - To Know Christ Is To Know God (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi but as you know I am at odds with the Christian Faith at...
July 28th, 2019 01:51 - Break Your Heart (Christina8)
In our lives there are breakages within us but they can be insignificant...
July 28th, 2019 01:11 - one day the granularity of life whispers to you (Jon Nakapalau)
We are so insignificant in our Universe that we must let ourselves go and...
July 28th, 2019 01:10 - Sometimes (Renu)
Sometimes life is wonderful as it is reading your words.
Welcome to MPS.
July 28th, 2019 01:04 - Heat (FineB)
Good write and so true. I just don\'t like the heat as I never fell cold,...
July 28th, 2019 01:01 - Talk With The Reaper (PoeticBiscuit)
I hope he does not come back too soon otherwise we would be deprived of...
July 28th, 2019 00:55 - Themes to explore, lives to live (Voicesecho88)
We each have a story in our lives, mine has become a library with age.
July 28th, 2019 00:53 - without drinking (Dusk arising)
Powerful write d a, I am sure all will be well, perhaps you should pick up...
July 27th, 2019 14:54 - It doesn\'t matter any more (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful write Dan, your life is now in a magic place, it is home, home...
July 27th, 2019 14:52 - The Right People Will Come to Us (Nafis Light)
So true Joker, we must always do things we love as we will always have the...
July 27th, 2019 02:52 - What Happened? (Vanessa wallace)
Good emotive write, I do hope that gap between you closes and you are...
July 27th, 2019 02:51 - Family Focus (Orchidee)
\"Tis vain for you to rise
Early, and your eyes
Restrain from sleep, and...
July 27th, 2019 02:49 - Bring it On (Neville)
Every moment is special, enjoy them all as they will not come...
July 27th, 2019 00:44 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
Our special places in nature are so wonderful.
July 27th, 2019 00:36 - Ode to You (SerenWise)
In true love, as this is, every part of your lover is so wonderful, as are...
July 27th, 2019 00:34 - the summer moon is a cruel marionettist (Jon Nakapalau)
That bait pulls so many of us in.
July 27th, 2019 00:33 - Always & Forever (Neville)
So few words used but the complexity comes through showing how the...
July 27th, 2019 00:30 - Fear of love & criticism (Poetic Dan)
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will...
July 26th, 2019 14:15 - Penitent Prayer (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 26th, 2019 14:12 - Waking Gently (Christina8)
Wonderful write Christina, I do hope it is not your last free verse.
July 26th, 2019 01:06 - dusk arises (Dusk arising)
I was there, a wonderful time was had.
July 26th, 2019 01:04 - today (Jon Nakapalau)
Sounds like a great idea.
July 26th, 2019 01:03 - BE A JITTERBUGGA NOT A LITTERBUGGA ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DITTY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I so thoroughly agree with you, there is a sign that I have seen in some...
July 26th, 2019 01:02 - Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.)
Brilliant write Fay, the anguish flows through your words.
July 26th, 2019 00:57 - for one another (Dusk arising)
So very true d a.
July 26th, 2019 00:53 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 26th, 2019 00:52 - A Silent Refrain (Neville)
Good emotive write Neville, to go forward in love or to refrain is a...
July 26th, 2019 00:52 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Orchi.
July 25th, 2019 01:49 - That\'s What Made The Food So Good (Nafis Light)
All food should be made with love.
July 25th, 2019 01:07 - Untarnished (Christina8)
This works very well Christina, you took me to that beautiful place.
July 25th, 2019 01:06 - money (Jon Nakapalau)
So true.
July 25th, 2019 01:05 - What a WOMAN can do (Justagirl)
I agree with dusk arising, in my long life I have always treated women...
July 25th, 2019 00:44 - The firefly and the glow-worm (Fearlessstars)
May those lights of love be forever bright.
July 24th, 2019 05:07 - DEFENCES. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write Fay, I would like to think that the traits of the wise men...
July 24th, 2019 05:05 - The \"who\" I shall retain (Poetic Dan)
May that clean shelf become full of words that carry you into a wonderful...
July 24th, 2019 05:03 - Perseveringly Progressing (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi, and a great tune.
July 24th, 2019 04:58 - A Thimbleful of Seeds (Neville)
My faith in My Spirit is unchanging and death has no mysteries as if I...
July 24th, 2019 04:57 - Boris (Dusk arising)
oh boris - oh dear!
July 24th, 2019 01:17 - the dog days of summer (Jon Nakapalau)
Those autumn stars show that we are going to make it to winter.
July 24th, 2019 01:14 - Let go (Lawrence 1970)
May your broken heart soon be fixed and love comes back into your life. ...
July 24th, 2019 01:12 - Sweet Rendezvous (Christina8)
That love with the true one in your life is so wonderful, as are your...
July 24th, 2019 01:09 - YOU ARE. (Fay Slimm.)
Great message Fay, those moments of stillness and peace are so important...
July 24th, 2019 01:06 - Dead (Sylviasearcher)
Such emotion displayed in so few words - wonderful.
July 24th, 2019 00:59 - A Poem-A-Day #22 - nothing suggested (Frank Prem)
That nothing that you see leaves your mind to fill the spaces.
July 24th, 2019 00:57 - Male Participation in the Creation of Life (Screamingmeemies)
Such an emotive write. It is obvious that your father (father not dad as...
July 24th, 2019 00:46 - Crimson Swathe (Neville)
That field of poppies is so powerful in our lives. One hopes that that...
July 24th, 2019 00:41 - To much positive, kiss my negative (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful write Dan, your Universe is expanding in joy and wonder.
July 24th, 2019 00:35 - Glory Gladness (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 23rd, 2019 02:09 - when i need (Dusk arising)
May that dream of peace be pieced together into reality.
July 23rd, 2019 01:11 - I feel lucky to have met you - a message for my best friend (Ocean)
May that being together be there forever.
July 23rd, 2019 01:07 - the thorn queen of bitter kisses (Jon Nakapalau)
That poison honey can affect many peoples hearts - politicians?
July 23rd, 2019 01:06 - I could never of made it alone (Poetic Dan)
Your path has been rocky but now all is clear and your life can now move...
July 23rd, 2019 00:58 - Weak and alone (Gogeta)
That loneliness can be helped by writing words as it does for many of us....
July 23rd, 2019 00:53 - dont ask me why (Dusk arising)
Very emotive write d a, maybe those questions cannot be answered but at...
July 23rd, 2019 00:50 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Bridges can be found throughout our lives and many are built between the...
July 23rd, 2019 00:34 - UNTELLABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write Fay, love can be a fraud but true love is sublime and...
July 23rd, 2019 00:29 - Lightology (Fearlessstars)
Superb write colours of the Universe are a wonder to behold.
July 22nd, 2019 04:45 - Silent Recorder (Chani)
That silent record should be no longer silent, if that person knows how...
July 22nd, 2019 04:43 - She Sparkles (Neville)
The danger that can be in the beauty of life. Good one Neville.
July 22nd, 2019 03:27 - Unbearable! (Orchidee)
Sing away young man -Fido will soon stop you.
July 22nd, 2019 03:26 - Manic Monday (Christina8)
Such true words, I too have this problem sometimes. It is amazing that...
July 22nd, 2019 03:24 - ART (Michael Edwards)
Very true Michael. We have had this discussion before and I think that we...
July 22nd, 2019 03:22 - Mona Lisa (Chani)
Wonderful enigmatic picture the Mona Lisa is.
Welcome to MPS.
July 22nd, 2019 00:15 - One Day Maybe (Neville)
Those broken hearts can sometimes be mended.
July 21st, 2019 15:48
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