Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- my (Jon Nakapalau)
May
those
wishes
still
come
true
in
our
wonderful
lives.
September 14th, 2019 00:25 - La Rêverie (SerenWise)
What a wonderful poem SerenWise, your words show the strength that love...
September 14th, 2019 00:23 - Teardrops From My Eyes. (Kevin browne)
Great words Kevin. Love is wonderful.
September 14th, 2019 00:21 - Head to toe (Jeffrey Roy)
Beautiful loving write, may your lives go on forever.
September 14th, 2019 00:20 - Defeated (Poem Goals)
Strong emotive write. Do not be afraid to cry as it shows the love that...
September 14th, 2019 00:19 - Welcome yourself in (Poetic Dan)
Very true Dan, all are welcome at my home.
September 13th, 2019 14:53 - MyLife (Purdy61)
A very emotive write well written.
September 13th, 2019 14:52 - Solo. (Fay Slimm.)
Being on your own, as I virtually am now you need not feel lonely, there...
September 13th, 2019 14:50 - PARADISE 🧡 ANGELA 💙 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 6 4 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It will not take much for you both to live in New Zealand will it.
September 13th, 2019 14:47 - Jerusalem Joys (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 13th, 2019 14:45 - swollen breakers (Dusk arising)
Amazing words d a.
September 13th, 2019 01:17 - Disinterested (Neville)
Yes you can have a moment, but not a moment more.
September 13th, 2019 01:16 - Downtown Girl (Laura🌻)
Such an emotive write. A very sad day and strange. In my office the...
September 13th, 2019 01:15 - Reclaimed (Christina K)
Belief can be a rocky road which you seem to be coping with.
My belief...
September 13th, 2019 01:10 - Hurt (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Those paths in our lives can be so diverse but the path we eventually find...
September 13th, 2019 01:07 - Life is not a race (Crystal Hope)
life certainly is not a race, we all take our own time but be sure to...
September 13th, 2019 01:04 - Heartbreak (Vanessa wallace)
Such a heartfelt write Rose, lost loves can be hard to deal with but be...
September 13th, 2019 01:00 - big old moon (love) (Dusk arising)
Superb loving write d a.
September 13th, 2019 00:58 - Wanted and needed are not the same (Poetic Dan)
Great last stanza Dan, you know where you are going in your life gained...
September 13th, 2019 00:57 - THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards)
Such a sad emotive write Michael.
Still like that artwork (see your...
September 12th, 2019 01:47 - FOOD FOR THOUGHT ~ A 3 4 7 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Similar to Michael I cook all my own food and use everything, if there is...
September 12th, 2019 01:42 - Correction (Neville)
If you are wrong take 100 lines and write:
\"In my life I am more often...
September 12th, 2019 01:23 - Heretic (SerenWise)
Wonderful write, may those demons soon be dismissed.
September 12th, 2019 01:21 - Un Chien Andalou (Jon Nakapalau)
There is so much out there that people look at but never see.
September 12th, 2019 01:14 - The end of it all (Vanessa wallace)
Your words are so strong, yes our life on earth will end but before that...
September 12th, 2019 01:12 - opposites (Dusk arising)
Yes opposites do attract, I have some friends who are like that, you just...
September 12th, 2019 00:56 - Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.)
If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me...
September 12th, 2019 00:52 - IN LABORATORIES ~ A 2 12 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Having worked as an analytical chemist I know the dangers but I survived...
September 11th, 2019 13:55 - I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan)
What a powerful write Dan. I do hope that your daughter is OK. I also hope...
September 11th, 2019 02:25 - Never Not Once (Neville)
Such an emotive write Neville. Sometimes we just cannot see into the real...
September 11th, 2019 02:15 - Luminous Light - 3 (Orchidee)
May that light always show us the right way in our lives.
September 11th, 2019 02:12 - mine (Justanotherdumblonde)
May that love be seen in you and their control releases their love for
September 11th, 2019 00:33 - To the heavens (Alta H Mabin)
That belief is strong in you so you WILL love again.
September 11th, 2019 00:32 - Gotta be strong (A passing lyric)
Stay strong and proud.
September 11th, 2019 00:29 - Never really knew (Jeffrey Roy)
True love never fades away it only gets stronger.
September 11th, 2019 00:28 - Finding Moments (Christina8)
Beautiful loving write.
September 10th, 2019 14:55 - Get out of my head (Vanessa wallace)
Sorry but your words compel me to be there.
September 10th, 2019 14:52 - Best Friends (Neville)
A best friend is someone who is always there for you in both the goo and...
September 10th, 2019 14:52 - LESOTHOHTOSEL ~ A REFLECTION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good work A and B, have never Ben outside Europe so have not been to...
September 10th, 2019 14:49 - Constant. (Fay Slimm.)
That courage can always be seen on their faces. Good write Fay.
September 10th, 2019 14:45 - No fear (Poetic Dan)
As you know as I do My Spirit will go on for eternity, see you there Dan.
September 10th, 2019 14:43 - Dandelion wishes (Alta H Mabin)
May your wishes come true Alta.
September 10th, 2019 02:11 - Search Me, See Me (Orchidee)
May that e\'erlasting day last fore\'er.
September 10th, 2019 02:10 - last dance (Dusk arising)
Clever!
https://youtu.be/n-XQ26KePUQ
September 10th, 2019 02:08 - RECEIVED FROM MARKS AND SPENCER (Michael Edwards)
Well, are you?
First laugh of the day Michael - thank you.
September 10th, 2019 00:48 - TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes the seasons are so distinctive by the look of the trees, we are just...
September 10th, 2019 00:36 - Empty hallways (Dakota)
That life may be dark but if you look in that mirror there will be a...
September 10th, 2019 00:29 - End of her time (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful loving write. She will always be with you and will be there with...
September 10th, 2019 00:24 - look back (Dusk arising)
Another wonderful write d a.
Linger on.
September 10th, 2019 00:21 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
Your words transported me to the beauty and wonder of that place Fay. ...
September 10th, 2019 00:19 - Lion heart meets its match (Chris Yellow)
Bravery is not always having to fight somebody. Good write.
September 10th, 2019 00:18 - Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville)
Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.
September 10th, 2019 00:16 - Words Of Worship (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 9th, 2019 01:35 - May I? (Mr Taylar)
Wonderful love lorn words.
September 9th, 2019 01:08 - I’ll stay quiet (A passing lyric)
I am quite happy to walk beside you and listen.
September 9th, 2019 01:07 - embers falling on frost (Jon Nakapalau)
But that embrace will be remembered for eternity.
September 9th, 2019 01:05 - Ageing (Jeremy Leach)
Super write - that is me to a t. Thank you for sharing your words.
September 9th, 2019 01:04 - confidence (Dusk arising)
This is so deep, I too needed to read it several times in different ways,...
September 9th, 2019 00:50 - Birdie Dan (Poetic Dan)
The view from above is so wondrous that is why when I come back I want to...
September 9th, 2019 00:44 - Rainbows Over You. (Kevin browne)
Brilliant Kevin.
September 9th, 2019 00:41 - Elation to Desolation (Clara)
That balance in life can be difficult to achieve in some circumstances but...
September 9th, 2019 00:40 - Hopeful Harvest (Orchidee)
We have just started rehearsing the Harvest Anthem that we, the Church...
September 8th, 2019 02:25 - Infinite beauty (Alta H Mabin)
Good Haiku Alta.
September 8th, 2019 01:16 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Such truth in those words Neville.
September 8th, 2019 01:15 - IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards)
Yes it is what you do Michael and what you have shown this morning is...
September 8th, 2019 00:55 - My Shadow Work ;) (Vvnrose)
To see what is there we must look deeply within ourselves to see the real...
September 8th, 2019 00:50 - Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Tick.
I had to put that in as it seemed to be missing Andrew.
Andy.
September 8th, 2019 00:42 - Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional) (Poetic Dan)
Such an emotive write and so true of music, it can bring all emotions to...
September 8th, 2019 00:41 - God Paradox (Chris Yellow)
As many on this site know I have recently gone through a transformation in...
September 8th, 2019 00:31 - Victory Vindication (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
September 8th, 2019 00:26 - smouldered (Dusk arising)
So much said in so few emotive lines d a.
September 8th, 2019 00:26 - An Autumn Harvest (Neville)
I was there as will and had a wheel barrow in which I gently laid the...
September 7th, 2019 01:21 - AS NIGHT DISPLACES (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful- both the words and the artwork.
September 7th, 2019 01:08 - Lonely poets (Alta H Mabin)
Emotive write and so true, but at least we poets have words as our
September 7th, 2019 00:58 - Denial (Vanessa wallace)
In our lives I believe we all aim for perfection to progress in life. We...
September 7th, 2019 00:56 - Winters kitten and the autumn (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Yes Autumn is close to us and the beauty of natures palette will soon be...
September 7th, 2019 00:50 - Just a man in natures plan (Poetic Dan)
Mother Nature is so wonderful, she knows what she is doing, your lady will...
September 7th, 2019 00:37 - conjeal (Dusk arising)
Intriguing write, had to read it several times in different ways. Good...
September 6th, 2019 01:53 - Salvation Sure (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
God (My God/Spirit) knows me but as you know I have...
September 6th, 2019 01:50 - DROLL COUPLETS (14) (Michael Edwards)
Comment comes there none
Too scared to upset the ladies
As they drive...
September 6th, 2019 01:48 - Affinity. (Fay Slimm.)
Yet another wonderful write Fay again showing the wonder and beauty that...
September 6th, 2019 01:43 - You (Clara)
That light is within you, just let it out to shine from you to the world...
September 6th, 2019 01:42 - Infinity (Neville)
\"And we will remember them.\"
September 6th, 2019 01:25 - Shutter (Vanessa wallace)
That shutter can bring many wonderful images of your life all it needs is...
September 6th, 2019 01:25 - Lover\'s Game (Clara)
That love is there between you, may your souls combine into one.
September 6th, 2019 01:20 - Lost love (Jeffrey Roy)
Such an emotive write, passed loves can be so hard to forget.
September 6th, 2019 01:09 - Suave. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words Fay, those browns and golds will soon change to reds and...
September 5th, 2019 03:05 - MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your love shines through your words Angela. Not long to go before Brian...
September 5th, 2019 03:04 - My hero (Poetic Dan)
Happy Birthday young man, the world is your to explore and enjoy - move...
September 5th, 2019 02:21 - Banners Blessed (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
September 5th, 2019 02:19 - Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville)
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them...
September 5th, 2019 00:48 - DROLL COUPLETS (13) (Michael Edwards)
Where\'s the artwork!
No. 5s are always good.
September 5th, 2019 00:47 - What if LOVE was enough? (Bragee)
One of the prime questions in life is \"what if..?\" - what if love...
September 5th, 2019 00:19 - Imperfection (Vanessa wallace)
That canvas is filled with wonder and glory but the imperfection you...
September 5th, 2019 00:15 - Ink-Bitten. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah, Calliope has been in your mind and you have scribed these wonderful...
September 4th, 2019 04:55 - Thoughts+Feelings=Never healing (812Uknow)
You are always there, that person inside knows different as without that...
September 4th, 2019 04:53 - Disturbed? (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi,.
I thought your Faith was strong, mine is, I know...
September 4th, 2019 04:50 - Flipping Gods (Poetic Dan)
In your life’s renewal you have found that special place where love and...
September 4th, 2019 04:47 - Our Crescendo (Clara)
Wonderful sensual write Clara.
September 4th, 2019 01:44 - A Ladies Man (Neville)
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \'...
September 4th, 2019 01:43
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