Comments on community poems by orchidee
- THEY (Dulcinea91)
This should be ticked \'For over 18\'s I think\' (a check box appears when...
August 2nd, 2017 05:23 - My Motorcycle (FredPeyer)
That you on that bike there?! You about to ride off on it?! A fine write...
August 2nd, 2017 05:21 - Thank you for raping me (NikkiiADTR)
Will need to tick the \'For over 18s\' box with this (it appears when you...
August 2nd, 2017 05:19 - More Than. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay. Did you write it at 186,000 miles per second? The speed of...
August 2nd, 2017 03:33 - Falling into the Night. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. Help! We\'ll wish Summer away, what with:
* oh the...
August 2nd, 2017 03:30 - MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write and song Brian.
August 2nd, 2017 03:27 - 3 ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes M.
August 2nd, 2017 01:32 - Seasons of Life (TiffanyR)
A fine write Tiffany.
August 1st, 2017 14:01 - On the Bus (FredPeyer)
Now, now - surely you\'re not THAT old! Erm, I was gonna write a similar...
August 1st, 2017 12:52 - I can\'t wait to be an old man (Quemis)
A couple of lines in your poem seem to maybe hint at the difficulties of...
August 1st, 2017 12:50 - I can\'t wait to be an old man (Quemis)
A fine write - should be ticked as 18+, I think. Even though the...
August 1st, 2017 08:39 - A Most Peculiar Feeling (PassionedPerspective)
Yep, you\'re in love, seems to me! But how would I know? I swoon at the...
August 1st, 2017 08:15 - On the Bus (FredPeyer)
Sensitive write Fred.
August 1st, 2017 08:12 - Today. (Fay Slimm.)
All that to start the day - and more during the day! I shall be worn out...
August 1st, 2017 08:09 - THREE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards)
A fine write Michael.
August 1st, 2017 01:50 - MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian.
August 1st, 2017 01:45 - A Soldier of the Great War. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write and tribute Gold.
August 1st, 2017 01:44 - foolish heart (Heather T)
In a Psalm somewhere is: \'Fearfulness has surprised the hypocrite\'. It...
July 31st, 2017 13:04 - Early Morning Troubles. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. Yes, by the time we\'ve commented on one poem, then on...
July 31st, 2017 08:16 - YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Crash! Me swooning and falling over! Erm, she\'s in my bedroom. Mona Lisa...
July 31st, 2017 01:50 - WORDS WRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael. Well , I use sherry bottle label if I can\'t...
July 31st, 2017 01:31 - YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Phew! Thought I would have to swoon, opening the title of this poem! Good...
July 31st, 2017 01:30 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
Never knew so much happened in the twilight! A fine write Fay. heehee.
July 30th, 2017 08:40 - THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I\'m not wishing to be flippant - but, erm, yes, if you say so Outback. I...
July 30th, 2017 08:35 - THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Simple, and yet profound too? Easy, and yet difficult too? Three-leaved...
July 30th, 2017 08:33 - Procrastination (FredPeyer)
A fine write Fred. I was gonna write on the same theme. My thoughts...
July 30th, 2017 01:22 - LATE JULY (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. Me own version goes: \'And fleecy dark...
July 30th, 2017 01:19 - Fear (FredPeyer)
I fear that I\'m not following all this Outback! heehee. I\'ve not stopped...
July 29th, 2017 14:21 - Fear (FredPeyer)
I fear this is a good write Fred. lol.
July 29th, 2017 11:09 - Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.)
Another fine write Fay.
July 29th, 2017 08:50 - L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian. But oh no, not animal experiments surely?!
July 29th, 2017 08:20 - SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards)
And yet in my hymn-poems, I may use \'spiritual\' or \'religious\' words...
July 29th, 2017 01:46 - SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards)
Yep, I understand this completely! Mind you, I\'ve just had a sherry or...
July 29th, 2017 01:41 - Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60)
Do they call for me too in times of battle - to sing to the enemy? I sing...
July 29th, 2017 01:34 - FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs)
Erm, yes - like Outback says. Erm, maybe. I\'m bamboozled by it! I blow a...
July 28th, 2017 08:30 - MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I recall putting \'tapestry\' into one or two of my poems. Not thrown them...
July 28th, 2017 08:27 - Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write and tribute G.
July 28th, 2017 01:55 - The Voice of God (GeraldineTaylor)
A fine hymn-poem G.
July 28th, 2017 01:42 - AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL (Michael Edwards)
Fine write and pic M.
July 28th, 2017 01:41 - Why all the hatred (Tony36)
A fine write T. You had too much sherry or gin? - sounds like it -...
July 27th, 2017 13:23 - What on Earth am I Here For? (GeraldineTaylor)
A fine write G.
July 27th, 2017 10:42 - Remember Me (UniquelyMel48)
A fine write Mel. Erm, nope, sorry I forgot ya. Who are ya?! And...
July 27th, 2017 09:33 - S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write B.
July 27th, 2017 09:25 - Enough (Charlesbarrett)
I don\'t include a quote with every one of my comments, but this made me...
July 27th, 2017 09:22 - Gracious Grantings (Orchidee)
I don\'t know if \'unwhole\' is a word, but I thought it up to rhyme with...
July 27th, 2017 08:51 - #HumanRights (Niallprideaux)
A fine write N.
July 27th, 2017 08:37 - Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write G/F. I suppose we could say - there goes my life, good or bad...
July 27th, 2017 01:52 - A FEW BITS AND PIECES (Michael Edwards)
Fine writes and pic M.
July 27th, 2017 01:24 - SATAN CAN\'T HOLD ME (Tony36)
\'Old Nick\', a quaint name for the devil - in UK anyway, maybe not in...
July 26th, 2017 14:09 - Bondage (Malubotelho)
I didn\'t \'see\' anything - cos I swooned at this! heehee.
July 26th, 2017 10:17 - Day By Day (Tony36)
Good write there T. Carry on through that clay with Him. Suppose we all...
July 26th, 2017 10:16 - Hot Girls Wanted (Noquarter4)
They only falls to pieces later on in life, if they\'ve had botox, etc....
July 26th, 2017 09:08 - A Bad Combination (HAIKU) (Niallprideaux)
I\'m the old sherry-tippler - so I say! heehee. A fine write N.
July 26th, 2017 08:41 - F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write B.
July 26th, 2017 03:47 - Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60)
A fine 1973 song too. Sometime after then I lost contact with Top of the...
July 26th, 2017 01:39 - Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write G/F. That\'s a lot of moments for a day. They do seem to go...
July 26th, 2017 01:37 - ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards)
A fine write. Never knew so much could happen on just one day!
July 26th, 2017 01:26 - SATAN CAN\'T HOLD ME (Tony36)
I did think of \'chain\' before I read Candlewitch\'s comment. Some...
July 25th, 2017 13:28 - SATAN CAN\'T HOLD ME (Tony36)
Why is he Old Nick too? We\'ll have to apologise to everyone named...
July 25th, 2017 13:25 - HAROLDS LAMENT (Michael Edwards)
Well, let\'s all stay out of prison then, or don\'t drop soap if we\'re...
July 25th, 2017 11:06 - Empowering Presence (IRonnie)
A fine write Ronnie. But I dunno - who is this Karma chappie (or...
July 25th, 2017 11:01 - Thalassophobia (HAIKU) (Niallprideaux)
I would drown before I learnt the word. I would need to yell out - Help, I...
July 25th, 2017 10:58 - Praise Parade (Orchidee)
Erm, apologies if this looks like some mathematical equation with the x2...
July 25th, 2017 08:52 - JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write B.
July 25th, 2017 08:33 - HAROLDS LAMENT (Michael Edwards)
Also - well, I\'ve heard of eyes in the back of ya head, but not an eye at...
July 25th, 2017 01:44 - HAROLDS LAMENT (Michael Edwards)
Yes, swoon! Erm, maybe the story has more than one fabled version? Did I...
July 25th, 2017 01:42 - Marriage to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
What more could they want, than something like this?! :)
July 25th, 2017 01:39 - New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write F.
July 24th, 2017 10:42 - Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get) (FredPeyer)
I might have to swoon at this, if there\'s any \'hot\' double-meaning...
July 24th, 2017 10:41 - OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write B. On a daft note, some are glad of no water, as I\'m known...
July 24th, 2017 10:40 - THE LIFE AHEAD (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M.
July 24th, 2017 01:37 - Unofficially unpleasant satisfied (Lordevol of ydegart)
Erm yes. Well, you say you love humanity but can\'t stand people. Hmm, I...
July 23rd, 2017 11:53 - THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oops, sorry B, I deleted a rather irrelevant comment of mine. Now it\'s...
July 23rd, 2017 11:47 - Ewig. (Goldfinch60)
That woof has scared off my cat-erwauling singing - bet you\'re glad!
July 23rd, 2017 09:14 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
Then again, if I had a last word, it would be \'sherry\' or \'pork pie\'...
July 23rd, 2017 09:13 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. I\'m not always so meditative. If I am, I aim not to be...
July 23rd, 2017 09:12 - THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write and pic Brian. yes, we as \'care-takers\' of His creation. I...
July 23rd, 2017 09:03 - Ewig. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write and song G/F. Am I your worst singer of all time? Remember me...
July 23rd, 2017 01:53 - Today\'s Panic Attack (ThisVivian)
A fine write V.
July 23rd, 2017 01:27 - RAIN IS THE CLOSEST I FEEL TO GOD (AAA)
Good write A. Rain is one symbol of the Holy Spirit, so.....!
July 23rd, 2017 01:26 - Oh Yeah (Whisperingquill)
Oo-er! Swoon! heehee.
July 22nd, 2017 12:36 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60)
There was a cartoon character who popped up all over the place and said...
July 22nd, 2017 11:27 - A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write B. There\'s a terrible waste of hot air, from some folk\'s...
July 22nd, 2017 11:25 - Have You Ever...? (Niallprideaux)
A fine write N.
July 22nd, 2017 11:19 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60)
A fine write G/F..
July 22nd, 2017 01:49 - THE CRIPPLED (Louis Gibbs)
Thoughtful write L. I suppose it\'s because we cannot \'see\' mental...
July 21st, 2017 11:37 - 21 July 2017 (Severus Alexander)
A fine write S.A.
July 21st, 2017 11:28 - Truthtful Trustings (Orchidee)
Now c\'mon - did ya, or anyone ya know, have that hymn at their wedding?...
July 21st, 2017 11:23 - Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write G/F. It was a bit misty recently, when it was thundery and...
July 21st, 2017 01:45 - Tree (Nicholas Ashton)
A fine write N. Them trees should be notieced. We\'ve some fairly local...
July 21st, 2017 01:37 - AGE IS IN THE MIND (Michael Edwards)
A finw write and pic M. Yes, we\'re very old. We was there in person in...
July 21st, 2017 01:34 - TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian. Ohh, I spent too long in vanity - on the sherry!...
July 21st, 2017 01:33 - A Life To Live (Orchidee)
Thanks all.
July 21st, 2017 01:30 - IF (DyingDreams)
A fine write D. I\'m on the same lines. We can\'t pay the fee to heaven,...
July 20th, 2017 12:26 - LADIES & THEIR PETS ! ~ Seven Micro Poems (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write. Oohh you can\'t help that, Brian! You would not be you, if...
July 20th, 2017 08:41 - HE NEVER DINED (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. Was the food of love pork pies? Was it in...
July 20th, 2017 01:49 - When There’s Nothing Else (GeraldineTaylor)
A fine write, with Scriptural verses included, that I recognise, GT.
July 19th, 2017 08:05 - Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
July 19th, 2017 08:03 - Remind Yourself: (Niallprideaux)
A fine write N. Someone said similar: \"a diamond is only a piece of coal...
July 19th, 2017 08:02 - DON\'T LOOK BACK (Louis Gibbs)
A fine write L. Erm, take a step or two forward then!
July 19th, 2017 08:00
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