Comments on community poems by orchidee

• Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60) Good write G/F. A bit different angle - it\'s said that the fear of doing...
  July 19th, 2017 03:21
• IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M.
  July 19th, 2017 01:34
• Trusting Times (Orchidee) I\'ll change a bit of British history. Do ya know, Richard III, I think it...
  July 18th, 2017 12:30
• Ammunition (Niallprideaux) A fine write N. Though I prefer a bit of \'calming summer\' while it\'s...
  July 18th, 2017 08:41
• HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ahh we have to be \'modern I suppose - drums included in worship bands on...
  July 18th, 2017 01:57
• Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. Makes sense. I suppose if all was perfect what would we...
  July 18th, 2017 01:56
• A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) fine writes and pic there M. The pic looks like a house next door to a...
  July 18th, 2017 01:31
• \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans) A fine write Sue. SOS - Save Our Snails. I hurry some on their way on damp...
  July 17th, 2017 14:04
• I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.) No \'hot desires\' now though! lol. I\'m Chairperson of the:...
  July 17th, 2017 08:47
• I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay. Let\'s desire to write poems, and more will surely flow...
  July 17th, 2017 08:45
• Pepsi Cola (Niallprideaux) A fine write N. Oh, I\'m fussy. Apart from the sugar, I can\'t have cola...
  July 17th, 2017 08:26
• Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi) Ohhh, hope\'s it\'s a good Tuesday, Wednesday, etc for ya too!
  July 17th, 2017 08:25
• SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST ? A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B. Who\'s this Gaia chap? Do I know him? (Me jokes get worse!...
  July 17th, 2017 08:23
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) You were surely touching heaven. Oh, I would get emotionally attached....
  July 17th, 2017 08:20
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) Sensitive write L. On a lighter theme, a true tale - now look, in me...
  July 17th, 2017 08:18
• Coffee First! (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. In my case - sherry first?! Then me poems take on a tone...
  July 17th, 2017 08:13
• OPHELIA (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. Did Shakespeare say anything about 1066? heehee.
  July 17th, 2017 01:29
• *Warning: Explicit Content* (Hannabal) I should mark this up as \'for 18 and over\' - the tick box when you write...
  July 17th, 2017 01:24
• Paw prints in my life (Clairie840) Sensitive write Clairie. It happened to a neighbour of ours, the...
  July 16th, 2017 11:10
• Motley. (Fay Slimm.) \'All things bright and beautiful\' there Fay. But we leave out that...
  July 16th, 2017 10:42
• LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) It\'s naughty really - I dunno about \'praying without ceasing\' but I...
  July 16th, 2017 06:59
• LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B. Well, I know no princes - but I understand what the verse...
  July 16th, 2017 06:57
• I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer) A fine write Fred. Ah yes, the left hand was seen as bad, and the right...
  July 16th, 2017 01:41
• Wall of Power. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. I may not have heard that comment though, on account I...
  July 16th, 2017 01:38
• WORK IN PROGRESS (2) (Michael Edwards) Ooohh it\'s good enough now, in my view. heehee. I didn\'t mean: \'Oh...
  July 16th, 2017 01:34
• Rice Wine (Nicholas Browning) Erm, I expect I shall enjoy it - after couple of hours translation by...
  July 16th, 2017 01:31
• Alone (FredPeyer) A fine write FP. Aww, I nipped in to comment, as this poem looked...
  July 15th, 2017 04:24
• Movement. (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  July 15th, 2017 04:22
• WORK IN PROGRESS (1) (Michael Edwards) For me, I hardly seem to re-work much of my stuff! Erm, not cos it\'s...
  July 15th, 2017 02:13
• Ghost of Atlantis (Nicholas Browning) A fine write N. I know I often say that, and it can sound a bit bland at...
  July 15th, 2017 02:10
• Parallel Universes. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. Not to discredit the theme altogether by being flippant,...
  July 15th, 2017 02:01
• WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write again B.
  July 15th, 2017 01:58
• HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B. Let\'s save gas and use the hot air of........ [insert...
  July 14th, 2017 08:44
• Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60) It may pass quicker if we have something else on at he same time - telly...
  July 14th, 2017 02:08
• A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Fine writes and pic M.
  July 14th, 2017 02:06
• Memory\'s Pearl. (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay. Will I need to swoon at this?! heehee.
  July 13th, 2017 08:08
• THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B.
  July 13th, 2017 08:04
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. But, crash! It\'s me swooning and falling over....
  July 13th, 2017 01:57
• Why Her, Why? (Goldfinch60) I think of you both, and pray for you both, hoping I don\'t \'spiritualise...
  July 13th, 2017 01:54
• Why Her, Why? (Goldfinch60) How far can we go, with things in hymns, such as \'Sight, riches, healing...
  July 13th, 2017 01:51
• Heaven-Held. (Fay Slimm.) Dunno why I thought of that question again, while reading this poem. I\'ve...
  July 12th, 2017 08:58
• Heaven-Held. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay. I heard, maybe related in some way: If a tree falls in a...
  July 12th, 2017 08:56
• Worship Worthies (Orchidee) A \'dusty\' reference again! heehee. Who you calling dust, Orchi?! Yet we...
  July 12th, 2017 08:50
• MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B.
  July 12th, 2017 03:44
• Words on a Page. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. Of course, when on the sherry, every word of mine is...
  July 12th, 2017 03:43
• THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M.
  July 12th, 2017 01:40
• DEJA VU 2 ~ MON CLAIR DE LUNE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B. Bit of French there - Deja Vu?!
  July 11th, 2017 02:04
• A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M. I may swoon over that washing one-liner! heehee.
  July 11th, 2017 02:02
• PEACE? - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F.
  July 11th, 2017 01:58
• An Artists Prayer (Kurt Philip Behm) I don\'t expect you is TOO aged a man! heehee. A short and sweet, and true...
  July 10th, 2017 12:02
• Good Bye Geoffrey (Augustus) Sensitive write Aug. I \'ve not experienced suicide \'close-up\'...
  July 10th, 2017 11:52
• Glisten (Nicholas Browning) Ohh, if it\'s too complicated we (well, me anyway) won\'t understand it! A...
  July 10th, 2017 11:49
• Ear (Aa Harvey) A fine write Aa.
  July 10th, 2017 08:43
• Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60) Music don\'t mend any souls. Well, music does, but not my singing! it...
  July 10th, 2017 08:42
• Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. I heard \'happy-clappy\' style, if in old church...
  July 10th, 2017 08:41
• FUSIONS ARE SEXY ! ~ An Acrostic Blank Verse 7 3 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I shall add a bit about Bognor - or Clacton - or Walford (EastEnders) -...
  July 10th, 2017 08:38
• FUSIONS ARE SEXY ! ~ An Acrostic Blank Verse 7 3 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ooohh, I would never complete a \'sexy\' fusion! I would swoon before I...
  July 10th, 2017 08:37
• Couplet (1) (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. Time for some nutty 1066 stuff?! heehee.
  July 10th, 2017 01:17
• Memories Tender (Augustus) A fine write Aug.
  July 9th, 2017 09:25
• COMMUNICATING WITH GOD ~ A Blank Verse 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Yes, if I spent them moments on the sherry in prayer instead.... why, I...
  July 9th, 2017 07:38
• MEMORIES AND DREAMS (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. Erm, some are not that serious on Sundays. They...
  July 9th, 2017 01:25
• Lamb Life (Orchidee) AWW, I was not actually at that service, Candlewitch. I heard about that...
  July 9th, 2017 01:21
• CULINARY HERBS ~ SEASONINGS ~ SPICES An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) What - or who - is Epazote, among some others I don\'t know?! heehee.
  July 8th, 2017 11:24
• CULINARY HERBS ~ SEASONINGS ~ SPICES An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) I was at a part-foodie show. I was on fire sampling a samosa! I have to...
  July 8th, 2017 11:23
• Unreal. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write F.
  July 8th, 2017 11:21
• Lamb Life (Orchidee) In the original I know, it\'s \'Lone and dreary, faint and weary / Through...
  July 8th, 2017 11:18
• Swamp (Augustus) A fine write Aug. Then along comes someone to muck it up - to muck up a...
  July 8th, 2017 10:59
• WAKENING (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M.
  July 8th, 2017 01:35
• That Sound. (Goldfinch60) Good write G/F. Shall I do that too? Shall I sing it too, and scare them...
  July 8th, 2017 01:34
• Respectful Reverence (Orchidee) Thanks L for the \'favourite\'!
  July 7th, 2017 10:52
• Shame Revealed (+3) (Augustus) Good write Aug.
  July 7th, 2017 10:31
• Gods are Human, too (Andetl04) Good write A.
  July 7th, 2017 03:30
• EMPTY SOUL (HEIDIKINS) A fine write H.
  July 7th, 2017 03:28
• Regeneration. (Fay Slimm.) A fine eloquent write Fay.
  July 7th, 2017 03:26
• LIVING IN A BUBBLE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Goldie and I was alive in 2100 million BC. We\'re both millions of years...
  July 7th, 2017 03:24
• THE COW IN THE WIND (Michael Edwards) Heehee good write and pic M.
  July 7th, 2017 01:50
• Clairvoyancy. (Goldfinch60) I was there in 1066, saying \'cooeee\'. Everyone wishes I was not there,...
  July 7th, 2017 01:49
• Clairvoyancy. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. I will believe in prophecy, but not clairvoyancy. It...
  July 7th, 2017 01:48
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) Thanks Aug, G/F.
  July 7th, 2017 01:46
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) Thanks all.
  July 6th, 2017 14:09
• My poetic side (Renzi) A fine write R.
  July 6th, 2017 10:25
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) I\'ve not some \'false humility\' wish, with \'we are dust\' cropping up...
  July 6th, 2017 10:23
• Scented Solutions. (Fay Slimm.) Another fine write Fay.
  July 6th, 2017 09:01
• MOTHER\'S ENGLISH COUNTRY GARDEN (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B.
  July 6th, 2017 01:38
• Better Days. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. But too late in my case? I mean - for one day in 1066...
  July 6th, 2017 01:36
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (2) (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M. I shall swoon with this. lol.
  July 6th, 2017 01:34
• The Fear Within. (Stephen.Sapaugh) Oh, I would not have used \'dog\'. I\'m not thinking particularly...
  July 5th, 2017 13:20
• Oh Why, Oh Why Can\'t I? (Dent Moses) Oh dear! It may not be wise to give ratings \'out of 10\' to poems. I...
  July 5th, 2017 13:16
• I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.) You is a fine cloud, Fay! heehee.
  July 5th, 2017 13:10
• Life And Light (Orchidee) Critiques, yes. As long as not like someone elsewhere, not on this site,...
  July 5th, 2017 13:02
• Life And Light (Orchidee) Thanks S. Well, I can\'t write music! A tune may come to me, and then I...
  July 5th, 2017 12:59
• The Truth that I Love You (GeraldineTaylor) Good write G.
  July 5th, 2017 10:48
• The Fear Within. (Stephen.Sapaugh) A fine write S.
  July 5th, 2017 10:45
• US INDEPENDENCE ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write B. We had an American boss, and 4th July was an \'event\' at...
  July 5th, 2017 02:00
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. Yep, a good symbi-wotsit! Oh, I must learn some...
  July 5th, 2017 01:57
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) Oh lol, good write G/F. I did summat equally daft in 1066!
  July 5th, 2017 01:56
• What is Death? (Goldfinch60) And for my next poem - What is..... a pork pie?! I wish I would shut up!...
  July 4th, 2017 13:29
• The Other Side of the Road (GeraldineTaylor) Good write G.
  July 4th, 2017 09:55
• Keeping Up With The Reality (Niallprideaux) Of course, EastEnders, Corrie, Neighbours, and all that rubbish is true,...
  July 4th, 2017 09:53
• THE WIND BLOWS (Michael Edwards) Toot? That\'s more to do with a car horn in the UK, I think! I shall have...
  July 4th, 2017 09:50