Comments on community poems by orchidee

• Fun Bags (WriteBeLight) A fine fun write WBL.
  August 21st, 2017 14:12
• MY FATHER’S HANDS (Lasergraph) A fine write Laser. But arrgghh, you opened a can of worms, cos it...
  August 21st, 2017 08:14
• As I was writing out checks, i realized... (Avigail) A fine write A. Is mine in the post?! Was you writing one to me, for...
  August 21st, 2017 08:12
• Chance. (Fay Slimm.) A good write Fay. The layout gives pauses after each line. I don\'t pause...
  August 21st, 2017 08:09
• FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Swoon! Not cos of a \'hot\' poem, but *staggers back in amazement at how...
  August 21st, 2017 08:07
• Panic Over. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. It\'s good if we can nurse back an injured bird. Hmm, I...
  August 21st, 2017 08:05
• JOURNEY\'S END (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M. He\'s ending his journey as the (UK) day is...
  August 21st, 2017 01:24
• Ugh (Sara Storkson) A fine write S.
  August 20th, 2017 13:53
• A Summer Afternoon (Myself and me) Well, so was I hoping or such an afternoon. Sunny morning - then it...
  August 20th, 2017 13:50
• Are you there? (Surucipe) A fine write S. I say sometimes - Ain\'t nobody here but us mice. Maybe...
  August 20th, 2017 13:48
• Blunt (Steve H) A fine blunt poem, S. I wish other things were blunt too, so as not to...
  August 20th, 2017 13:45
• Thirsty Trustings (Orchidee) Thanks M. I shall raise a sherry each time to your fine poems and pics....
  August 20th, 2017 13:39
• Together. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay.
  August 20th, 2017 10:45
• THE HOLY SPIRIT ~ Poem for Sunday (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write Brian. I suppose we don\'t always have to link the Holy...
  August 20th, 2017 10:40
• New Times. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. Wanting the moon to go to a full moon (from crescent to...
  August 20th, 2017 01:52
• ALONE (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic again M.
  August 20th, 2017 01:28
• Life (Steve H) Well, I dunno. It will take the remaining 90% of me brain-box power to...
  August 19th, 2017 11:20
• Communion Capturings (Orchidee) I have taken some words and phrases here and there from the Communion...
  August 19th, 2017 11:01
• Electric Youth (Lourdes) A fine write L.
  August 19th, 2017 10:47
• Who Dares. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write again Fay.
  August 19th, 2017 10:45
• Life (Steve H) Hmm, how can we go about using more than 10% of our brain-box then?!
  August 19th, 2017 10:44
• Make Them Stand (Its Raskolnikov) Good write R.
  August 19th, 2017 10:38
• DESTINATION MARS ~ THE RED PLANET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write Brian. It\'s a yummy galaxy - with the galaxy itself, mars...
  August 19th, 2017 03:30
• God, Our Heavenly Creator (JohnESwedlund) Oohh I might have to swoon at the last verse, if there is anything saucy...
  August 19th, 2017 01:50
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) Oh lol, a fine write G. I thought I heard a variant on this, where the...
  August 19th, 2017 01:48
• BENEATH A WANING MOON (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. No wonder you was a bit late (2 minutes)...
  August 19th, 2017 01:46
• A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards) You had that lunch by now?! Ccooeeee M. lol. (put that sherry down, Orchi,...
  August 18th, 2017 11:32
• Losing You. (Fay Slimm.) Yes, a fine tree-shaped poem, Fay!
  August 18th, 2017 10:52
• A Scholar\'s Colloquy (Nicholas Browning) In me dafter moments - sherry-drinking, pork-pie eating moments that is -...
  August 18th, 2017 10:46
• A Scholar\'s Colloquy (Nicholas Browning) Meanwhile - \'Dang it\', said the uneducated man. \'A colloquy, Sire\'? I...
  August 18th, 2017 10:36
• A Scholar\'s Colloquy (Nicholas Browning) I doubt the uneducated man (if it\'s me, or whoever it is. lol) will be...
  August 18th, 2017 10:33
• THE ULTIMATE SCHEME (Louis Gibbs) Well, it\'s a good write as a poem. But I don\'t go along with all the...
  August 18th, 2017 10:30
• BARCELONA ~ WE WEEP WITH YOU TODAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Sensitive write Brian.
  August 18th, 2017 08:26
• A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic, at one minute into the UK day!
  August 18th, 2017 01:57
• Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and...
  August 18th, 2017 01:55
• Haiku #2 (Simple-Man87) Oh, not a failure. I\'m just stunned by words used that are, say, 4...
  August 17th, 2017 11:26
• Haiku #2 (Simple-Man87) A fine Haiku S-M. That\'s all the 5 syllables of the first line used up in...
  August 17th, 2017 09:26
• Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60) I wrote a poem like this too. It started: \"I lay in a darkened room /...
  August 17th, 2017 08:47
• Ill (Nicholas Browning) You better now?! (heehee). I seem to get longer! doh! Well, I should not...
  August 17th, 2017 08:42
• IT BREAKS MY HEART (Louis Gibbs) Sounds like me on a sherry day?! Does it?! heehee.
  August 17th, 2017 08:25
• I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oohh, you knowing Confucius too?! heehee.
  August 17th, 2017 08:23
• I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write Brian. Middleman \'Sherry Steve\' here! Just as long as...
  August 17th, 2017 08:23
• Tinnitus (FredPeyer) It\'s not really voices in the head, is it? That\'s something else....
  August 17th, 2017 01:47
• Ill (Nicholas Browning) Hope it don\'t mean you\'re questioning every line of poetry that you...
  August 17th, 2017 01:43
• Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  August 17th, 2017 01:42
• LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. lol.
  August 17th, 2017 01:41
• CARIBBEAN MAMMY ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine ol\' poem, Brian!
  August 16th, 2017 10:07
• Sheep Shepherding (Orchidee) Thanks for comment N. I\'m not seeking to paraphrase the Bible. I have to...
  August 16th, 2017 08:52
• Finally, Less Stress (Edward Charles McDevitt) Good write.
  August 16th, 2017 08:49
• Nithing (Nicholas Browning) Well, I feel it does take skill, courage, and whatever else, to write...
  August 16th, 2017 08:47
• Farting Around (WriteBeLight) Oh lol, swoon! Will it affect the greenhouse effect, or whatever it is?!
  August 16th, 2017 08:32
• DEAFENING SILENCE (Louis Gibbs) Good write L. Sometimes, or often, just \'being there\' helps. But...
  August 16th, 2017 08:25
• THE OLD MAN (Lasergraph) A fine write L.
  August 16th, 2017 08:22
• Little Drummer Boy (LIGHT WARRIOR) Ohh, I swooned! I read those Pah-Rumpah\'s as \'Rumpy Pumpy!\' And what...
  August 16th, 2017 02:03
• THE DESTITUTE (Michael Edwards) I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine,...
  August 16th, 2017 02:01
• Quiet City. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  August 16th, 2017 01:58
• () To make things complicated (!) I believe that the mind is part of the...
  August 15th, 2017 13:53
• Itinerary (WriteBeLight) A fine write WBL.
  August 15th, 2017 10:37
• \"Nowhere Locomotive\" (Nicholas Browning) I got as far as: Something \'persists\' (verse 1). It will take me about 3...
  August 15th, 2017 10:36
• THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY (Louis Gibbs) I was about to post a poem including \'a time for everything\'. It...
  August 15th, 2017 08:39
• THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY (Louis Gibbs) Good write. Let\'s hope and pray it will be frustrated. In the past it\'s...
  August 15th, 2017 08:37
• ANARCHY IN VIRGINIA ~ A Wordless Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) I did a wordless poem too - it\'s got 3,647 verses - or something like...
  August 15th, 2017 08:30
• ANARCHY IN VIRGINIA ~ A Wordless Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write Brian.
  August 15th, 2017 08:28
• ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
  August 15th, 2017 01:45
• Do You Take Sugar? (Goldfinch60) Thinking of you both. Yes, those words from a programme - radio I think:...
  August 15th, 2017 01:44
• SUMMER IDYL (Michael Edwards) A fine eloquent write, \'13 minutes into the UK day\' poet! heehee.
  August 14th, 2017 09:01
• Time to Leave (FredPeyer) It\'s the alcohol that does it - affects the mind. Causes people to act...
  August 14th, 2017 08:56
• I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) You had some sherry too, as well as me?! heehee.
  August 14th, 2017 08:53
• CRAYON ON THE WALL (Lasergraph) A fine write L.
  August 14th, 2017 08:51
• Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight) A fine write WBL. Ya can have endless hours of me singing - it\'s no...
  August 14th, 2017 08:34
• Test of Faith? (Goldfinch60) Ohh heehee, a good fun write G/F.
  August 14th, 2017 01:35
• Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee) Thanks Cat.
  August 13th, 2017 10:41
• Redefining. (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  August 13th, 2017 10:40
• cory (ACS) A fine write ACS.
  August 13th, 2017 10:06
• Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt) Oops, I do use them. Saves times if there are queues. But I see what you...
  August 13th, 2017 07:00
• decrucify (Draculazy) Ooh I say, what\'s going on there?! Swoon! Hee hee. And on your birthday...
  August 13th, 2017 06:58
• PRAISE THE LORD ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great write Brian. Those \'praise-y\' Psalms section, around 95 - 100!...
  August 13th, 2017 06:57
• counting by even numbers (Queer-with-a-pen) Well, it\'s ironic maybe, that 40 is an EVEN number, if even numbers are...
  August 13th, 2017 02:19
• Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer) A fine write Fred. Dandelion leaves for our pet piggies! The ones in my...
  August 13th, 2017 01:52
• Gone, Not Forgotten (ACS) Good write ACS. Gone? Where ya going? But you has only just got here!...
  August 13th, 2017 01:50
• () I got to the end of this ,then swooned, in me sheltered life! heehee. I...
  August 13th, 2017 01:47
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at...
  August 13th, 2017 01:45
• New Generations. (Goldfinch60) A fine write G/F. This sherry\'s stunting my growth! heehee.
  August 13th, 2017 01:43
• Living (FredPeyer) A fine write Fred. But I don\'t go along with Erich\'s quote myself. yet...
  August 12th, 2017 14:55
• Resurrection Raptures (Orchidee) I\'ve adjusted it slightly, hopefully to be a bit easier, and added a few...
  August 12th, 2017 11:13
• Resurrection Raptures (Orchidee) Thanks Santita. Yes, it\'s based on a passage by St Paul. He gets very...
  August 12th, 2017 11:09
• Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight) Ahh, so this is someone with bags packed, sitting on the fence, nose in...
  August 12th, 2017 10:09
• () You tried Haikus? 5,7,5 syllables.
  August 12th, 2017 10:07
• () Ahh, I see - 1,2,3,4,1 syllable layout for Lanturnes *looked it up*. Fine...
  August 12th, 2017 10:06
• CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write Brian.
  August 12th, 2017 04:11
• LANTURNE 2 (Michael Edwards) Cccoooeeee one-minute into the day UK poet!
  August 12th, 2017 02:10
• LANTURNE 2 (Michael Edwards) A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
  August 12th, 2017 02:10
• Loose Stools (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Erm, I had a feeling you weren\'t gonna talk about chairs in this poem,...
  August 12th, 2017 02:06
• Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) A fine write, and good FIBS G/F. meanwhile I\'m bothering about metres, if...
  August 12th, 2017 02:03
• A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee) The terrifying thing about this, is that the \'P.S.\' bit is true! Yes?!
  August 12th, 2017 02:01
• A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee) The terrifying thing about this, is that the \'P.S.\' bit is true! Yes?!
  August 12th, 2017 02:01
• IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs) A fine write Louis.
  August 11th, 2017 10:24
• Interference. (Fay Slimm.) A fine fishy write Fay.
  August 11th, 2017 10:23
• A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee) Hi Outback. This probably took no thinking at all! lol.
  August 11th, 2017 10:21
• Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight) A fine write and pic WBL. lol.
  August 11th, 2017 10:05