Comments on community poems by malubotelho
- Sleazy lover (Malubotelho)
No, thank you.
Yes, I wrote this when at the beach on a lazy day.
July 17th, 2017 09:37 - LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks Brian for this beauty. Politics are the last thing I want to think...
July 16th, 2017 21:29 - Body dysmorphic me (Renzi)
You wrote about ugly but in such a beautiful way. I laughed when you say...
July 16th, 2017 21:12 - mourning light (Heather T)
Each day I come here and read the poems I always wonder if people are...
July 16th, 2017 17:15 - WORK IN PROGRESS (2) (Michael Edwards)
I love those paints. Very beautiful.
July 16th, 2017 16:43 - WORK IN PROGRESS (2) (Michael Edwards)
I like both but need to admit that this one is susceptible better. Will...
July 16th, 2017 16:42 - I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer)
Cute your poem. You are left but right when you say left has some...
July 16th, 2017 16:36 - good (Onepauly)
This is the best one ever. You are shining your light throughout your...
July 16th, 2017 15:59 - When it was gone (Emile Dubois)
I love your poem. Beautiful arrangement, and I love the end of it. Clever....
July 16th, 2017 07:34 - Sleazy lover (Malubotelho)
Thanks Domi. It is a fun write indeed. Thanks for your comment
July 15th, 2017 17:02 - Sleazy lover (Malubotelho)
I\'m happy you\'ve got inspired by my simple words. Yes, hey, it is...
July 15th, 2017 15:11 - WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I live in Florida and we are surrounded by water. We have ponds and canals...
July 15th, 2017 11:49 - WORK IN PROGRESS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for sharing your work process. I always wonder how people writes...
July 15th, 2017 11:32 - Alone (FredPeyer)
You went deep with this one. Love it. Describes so well our imagination. I...
July 15th, 2017 11:16 - Slap my wrist (Renzi)
Cute poem Renzi. Vacay time is like that. Have a good one. Happy birthday...
July 15th, 2017 09:28 - Love (Jinx)
I like your short write. Awesome put together.
July 15th, 2017 00:15 - Just A Job (Short Story) (FredPeyer)
I could catch back on this one. Short stories are so good. Fast...
July 14th, 2017 23:34 - HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful poem and picture. I never
had the opportunity to go on a trip...
July 14th, 2017 22:24 - A Dream Is Lost. (Kevin browne)
I\'ve read this only once and liked many words and parts of it. I think I...
July 14th, 2017 20:05 - Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer)
Awesome nice, smart one. It is like we are being precisely economic today....
July 14th, 2017 19:43 - recess (Onepauly)
A nice one Pauly. I prefer to dare than care for the change but I don\'t...
July 14th, 2017 19:31 - Epiphany (Malubotelho)
Thanks a bunch. Yes, just a quick lovely one.
July 14th, 2017 18:14 - Holiday Season (Renzi)
Very happy poem Renzi. Nice to be on holly days. I know the feeling of the...
July 14th, 2017 18:13 - Epiphany (Malubotelho)
Thank you Brian. I\'m a little late on feedbacks today. Did not even read...
July 14th, 2017 18:04 - Asleep under the bed (ShannonXx)
Wow Shanon. Great. What an awesome write. I call them ego. What it. They...
July 14th, 2017 13:17 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
I like the couplets so much. I have more but don\'t publish them here but...
July 14th, 2017 11:54 - Epiphany (Malubotelho)
Thank you. It also refers to the MPS site. It vibrates with thoughts and...
July 14th, 2017 10:58 - A Suicide (Mbird72)
It is a pouring of emotions. Nicely written.
July 14th, 2017 09:47 - Searching Through Stillness (Augustus)
Awesome write Augustus. I see you like to write about love and fantasy...
July 14th, 2017 07:47 - THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA)
One of the most beautiful I\'ve got from you. It speaks to me the way you...
July 13th, 2017 09:08 - MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh! I\'m almost feeling like an outsider. It is like all the sober and...
July 12th, 2017 22:07 - Lamplight (Nicholas Browning)
It is such a great writing I was amazed you could write this so easy....
July 12th, 2017 21:36 - Grandfather\'s Story (Cyprian Van Dyke)
For me the moral of the story here is that you have to stop being...
July 12th, 2017 20:47 - The Violin (the personification) (Cyprian Van Dyke)
Her hair is,
Soft as the wind,
Straight as the strings
Of a...
July 12th, 2017 20:29 - Starry Night (Rita_ehn)
Very nice poem Rita. Welcome. Talking about stars I just posted my poem...
July 12th, 2017 14:32 - A kiss (Malubotelho)
Yes Fred. Is\'ant this beautiful? Who ever invented it deserves an award....
July 12th, 2017 13:51 - As sweet as ever (Malubotelho)
Yes, I think to write imagination is primordial. With a good imagination...
July 12th, 2017 13:42 - The Kiss (FredPeyer)
You covered the subject so well. A beautiful work that of yours. I myself...
July 12th, 2017 12:09 - They call me ego (Malubotelho)
Thanks dear. I appreciate your comments
July 12th, 2017 11:43 - A cry for opinion (Malubotelho)
Thanks
July 12th, 2017 11:42 - As sweet as ever (Malubotelho)
Yes, I like that smoothie. Make me feel delicious. Soft and cream.
I\'m a...
July 12th, 2017 09:54 - candle light (Onepauly)
For sure it is a cute one. And I like the simplicity too. Simplicity...
July 12th, 2017 08:45 - For The Master (Whisperingquill)
A very nice tribute. I liked Bruce very much. Very well put together your...
July 12th, 2017 08:40 - Destined to fly (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Awesome poem. Very strong like you are getting to be. Keep yourself high.
July 11th, 2017 23:01 - Slut (Just a girl.)
I know what you mean. It is good that you pointed this out. People get...
July 11th, 2017 21:16 - Our Love was the Forest (Baylee)
Sooner than you think your forest will have flourished again. It is so...
July 11th, 2017 21:07 - Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose)
Thanks for your great poem. Loved to read it.
July 11th, 2017 20:57 - Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose)
I was reading your poem and came to my mind something I wrote and posted...
July 11th, 2017 20:56 - Counting Sheep (Nicholas Browning)
Hi Nicholas, great write. Night is a good time for me to write and I could...
July 11th, 2017 20:47 - people never change (Mocuisle)
Nice writing and thoughts.
July 11th, 2017 20:06 - DEJA VU 2 ~ MON CLAIR DE LUNE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another great write. Just a little spook. Thanks for sharing always the...
July 11th, 2017 20:00 - daughter (Heather T)
Very deep poem. Awesome writing. Thanks for sharing.
July 11th, 2017 19:50 - They call me ego (Malubotelho)
Well, like our friend Pauly said before; the world is not prepared to know...
July 11th, 2017 18:22 - They call me ego (Malubotelho)
We think we do and this is why it win us but we have a deeper source of...
July 11th, 2017 15:58 - Splashing Waves In Rainbows. (Kevin browne)
Great write Kevin. Another one to make us think. Thanks for it. If we...
July 11th, 2017 15:36 - Splashing Waves In Rainbows. (Kevin browne)
I wonder all the time.
July 11th, 2017 15:25 - Our Thirsty Hearts (ShannonXx)
What a beautiful to read. I fall in love myself with your poem. I felt...
July 11th, 2017 15:16 - mutual (Onepauly)
I understood that it is a travel between you and your soul. It seems a...
July 11th, 2017 15:12 - A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
I felt like looking at a paint of a woman hanging the clothes on those...
July 11th, 2017 12:56 - A cry for opinion (Malubotelho)
Thanks my friend for your opinion. Later I will write something as an...
July 11th, 2017 09:46 - Fuck this Live (FredPeyer)
By the way now that you brought this up I don\'t see much of them in the...
July 11th, 2017 08:52 - Fuck this Live (FredPeyer)
Fred, you hit the vein here. How sad it is to see people at the street...
July 11th, 2017 08:50 - Hoping (FredPeyer)
Yes Fred, me too.
July 11th, 2017 08:27 - solar system (Onepauly)
Awesome Pauly. I like to think that God is playfull but I believe God is...
July 11th, 2017 00:05 - Hoping (FredPeyer)
We have here more than hope because we can write and send messages. To...
July 10th, 2017 23:57 - Good Bye Geoffrey (Augustus)
This is very sad and at the teenage we are very confused about our...
July 10th, 2017 23:42 - A cry for opinion (Malubotelho)
Well, the news should be announced as bad news because it is all it is. I...
July 10th, 2017 23:23 - I Have The Poets Will. (Kevin browne)
For who knows what a thought is doing even if it is mine or yours.
Wow! I...
July 10th, 2017 23:13 - Flowerless Thorn (Baylee)
Falling in love is as beautiful as it is dangerous. Would be much better...
July 9th, 2017 15:52 - COMMUNICATING WITH GOD ~ A Blank Verse 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for the words about God. I\'m not attached to religion but I\'m...
July 9th, 2017 15:45 - Heart Space (FredPeyer)
You are cute asking those question. I could see a little boy inside you...
July 9th, 2017 15:23 - communication (Onepauly)
Great writing and prayer. Lovely
July 9th, 2017 15:18 - Memories Tender (Augustus)
A great gift from your heart wrapped beautifuly on your feelings.
July 9th, 2017 15:16 - Just say sorry (ShannonXx)
Yes, I agree with Kevin. I like when people come back and apologize but...
July 9th, 2017 14:55 - Loving Patience (Annonymouswonder)
Very nice written. I enjoyed from the start to the end. Thanks for
July 8th, 2017 23:24 - A love Thats Found. (Kevin browne)
So awesome. I think it is one of the best I know from you. I too think...
July 8th, 2017 23:13 - Obnoxious Entrapment (Whisperingquill)
Nicely done. A bold statement. Thank you.
July 8th, 2017 23:01 - Mind (FredPeyer)
Thanks for this beautiful write. I like to think that we are all connected...
July 8th, 2017 15:06 - friends (Onepauly)
Thank you. Another nice one. Is it still raining? I nice and inspiring...
July 8th, 2017 14:50 - CULINARY HERBS ~ SEASONINGS ~ SPICES An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for this beauty. Learned some more today. I love the spices and use...
July 8th, 2017 08:50 - Defiance (FredPeyer)
Lovely to ready about your day. The simple way of life. So sincere. So...
July 7th, 2017 21:46 - LIVING IN A BUBBLE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I can say no. But, I would love to learn more. I appreciate your teaching...
July 7th, 2017 21:43 - Is love selfish? (Malubotelho)
Kevin, by the time passes one learn so much. I\'ve learned a lot. Even the...
July 7th, 2017 21:25 - step to step (Onepauly)
You overcome yourself everyone you write. Each day is getting better. I\'m...
July 7th, 2017 20:52 - Is love selfish? (Malubotelho)
Thanks love. I believe we all long for love but are we prepared to receive...
July 7th, 2017 20:47 - Doubts In The Thought. (Kevin browne)
I would say we live for learning. This is the only reason we live, even...
July 7th, 2017 20:38 - Shame Revealed (+3) (Augustus)
I fine write. I\'m still want to write something about this subject. Could...
July 7th, 2017 14:47 - To Remind (Cyprian Van Dyke)
Very beautiful poem. Very soft the way you wrote it. I felt soft, light...
July 7th, 2017 09:39 - A Whole Lot of Work (FredPeyer)
I got a bit confused with the beginning. I was not sure what you were...
July 6th, 2017 09:43 - Not a lonely bird (Malubotelho)
Thank you, for reading and commenting.
July 6th, 2017 09:31 - On a Bad Thought (Kevin browne)
LOL. I love to read you guys comments. I was waiting till someone would...
July 6th, 2017 00:26 - RECYCLE ~ TO SAVE THE PLANET ~ TANKAS (5~7~5~7~7) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A clever and instructive one. Thanks for sharing.
July 6th, 2017 00:03 - Dead Sara (Edthepoet)
Really fantastic writing. I like to read you. One reason why I searched...
July 5th, 2017 23:40 - The Co-Pilot (FredPeyer)
The movie about God being a black woman is really beautiful. The shack.
July 5th, 2017 23:32 - The Co-Pilot (FredPeyer)
Everytime that guy Stephen.Sapaugh begin to comment his critics on someone...
July 5th, 2017 23:31 - US INDEPENDENCE ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice written and remembrance of our 4th of July. I\'m with my mates. Not...
July 5th, 2017 23:13 - The Sorrows of Summer (AcaciaRose)
Yes, very nice exposed. Nice writing.
July 5th, 2017 22:02 - Rainbow (Meno1972)
Lovely. This forum is getting more cheerful. I like this.
July 5th, 2017 21:54 - outdoors (Onepauly)
I really like your poem. So sweet talking about nature. I today was...
July 5th, 2017 21:52 - The Journey to Loving Myself (Judy Booler)
Wow! I love your poem, specially because it is about loving yourself. To...
July 5th, 2017 20:00
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