Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- At The Top Of The Hill. (Goldfinch60)
Moved me to tears.
A must for my favourites.
July 10th, 2021 12:48 - Way Too Late (Neville)
I once had an unplanned goodbye,... she fell off the cliff.
July 7th, 2021 03:40 - Telephone Trepidation. (Goldfinch60)
I have had phone calls at ridiculous oclock from gents with strong...
July 7th, 2021 01:49 - Hurts Just A Little (A Boy With Roses)
Well written expression of the pain of an ending.
Life will get better as...
July 7th, 2021 01:34 - meditative - II (SureshG)
Oh so true. Until the message is \"I love you\" LOL
July 6th, 2021 14:55 - The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove)
Initially this appears quite simple in it\'s beauty but it\'s very...
July 6th, 2021 12:55 - Stone Sensibilities (Orchidee)
It was man who dictated that fine places should be built to worship god....
July 6th, 2021 07:38 - No Mean Feet (Neville)
So how are your feet now Neville? LOL
The maintenance of a good lady\'s...
July 6th, 2021 07:08 - Myself (Fay Slimm.)
Oh this can so easily be transposed into ones own life having grown up in...
July 6th, 2021 06:47 - Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60)
I like it. Those kind of thoughts tickle my mind as and when I come across...
July 6th, 2021 06:42 - Dear George (Rebeccaclara)
There would have been so much more from him.
July 5th, 2021 10:10 - Lost and Found (Jerry Reynolds)
Such a very good point comes across in your post today..... things move on...
July 5th, 2021 07:54 - Back Then (Fay Slimm.)
Not half! I\'ll have some of that again please!
This getting older...
July 5th, 2021 04:10 - Maybe One of Us Should Leave (Neville)
Deja vu. Those words mean it\'s all over mate. She\'s saying one of us...
July 5th, 2021 02:53 - Testimony Of Tabitha (Orchidee)
Why did the christian churches cease to believe in reincarnation
July 5th, 2021 02:03 - Across the Kitchen Floor. (Goldfinch60)
Minor appliance tension in your domestic arrangements sir? Maybe it\'s...
July 5th, 2021 01:41 - Happy Birthday (Jerry Reynolds)
Happy birthday young america. Fireworks all round and a slice of cake.
July 4th, 2021 15:46 - Wished For (Fay Slimm.)
Warm words of encouragement welcoming in good news which bodes well for...
July 4th, 2021 15:37 - Geraldine (Neville)
To physically mark the paasing of an aniversay with the action as you did...
July 4th, 2021 15:34 - The Last Words of the Night (Goldfinch60)
Hope your are well Andy and recovered from whatever took you into hossie....
July 4th, 2021 15:28 - Three T’s (Neville)
Been there... T-shirt etc.
Short and punchy, just as the best always...
July 3rd, 2021 04:37 - Book Time. (Goldfinch60)
I too like to lose myself in a good novel. LeeChild books I find hard to...
July 3rd, 2021 02:43 - You Liking? (Orchidee)
I like it.
July 3rd, 2021 02:33 - Why Flies should Die! (Saxon Crow)
Nasty critters aint they. And someone will tell ya, but theyre all god\'s...
July 3rd, 2021 00:06 - Economics (Jerry Reynolds)
I wouldnt be without mine.
July 1st, 2021 09:00 - Remembering (Rebeccaclara)
Thats quite beautiful.
Into my favourites.
July 1st, 2021 07:36 - Discovery (Fay Slimm.)
Everything was so new and exciting for us as young lovers. The world...
July 1st, 2021 04:19 - Comforts, Commands, Communing (Orchidee)
Are you putting words into the mouth of jesus with that opening?
July 1st, 2021 02:53 - Six Million Candles (Neville)
Each and every one of those candles should burn into our soul, our...
July 1st, 2021 02:50 - My Little Boy. (Goldfinch60)
I know what it is to love a son who i am so very proud of. You tell the...
July 1st, 2021 01:03 - Another Year (Saxon Crow)
Honest reflection of human nature. Oh how we wish to improve all about...
July 1st, 2021 00:58 - memento mori (Siranswerer)
All so true. But what we leave behind is oh so important.
June 30th, 2021 21:46 - Encouragement (Victorialynn)
A wonderful feeling. Nuture it and the causes of it.
Always lovely to...
June 30th, 2021 21:45 - Curbed (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s always struck me as obscene to capture and \'train\' a wild animal....
June 30th, 2021 21:43 - Memorial (Jerry Reynolds)
into the vast unknown.... beyond us
a resting place for all the...
June 30th, 2021 21:37 - Under The Hammer. (Goldfinch60)
I was five and uncle cedric took me to this pub where the music was loud...
June 30th, 2021 01:12 - Walking By (Saxon Crow)
Sweet. Multi tasking for me is dangerous, walking and looking at the sky,...
June 30th, 2021 00:33 - Colliers Way (_naturally_curious_)
A yes those summers cycle rides along country lanes.... memories, oh to...
June 29th, 2021 15:15 - Tomb of the living dead (Bernard Gabriel Okurut)
Nice to read such an encouraging piece. May peace find it\'s way into your...
June 29th, 2021 14:53 - Don\'t say anymore (Sandra)
This is a heartfelt cry for help. I hope you the author can hear that cry...
June 29th, 2021 14:44 - What’s going on? (Hoopie)
Thats more or less what they said after world war one.... all those wars...
June 29th, 2021 14:38 - WILL BE OKAY (TheBalladofMebo)
Wouldn\'t life be bliss if it worked out that way?
June 29th, 2021 14:37 - WHY PUT OUR DREAMS ON HOLD (Andy Hunter)
As time goes by......
Who knows where we will be taken by life? But it...
June 29th, 2021 14:35 - Traffic to Gifts (M.E.M.)
Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song...
June 29th, 2021 14:28 - The Card From The Yard (Jerry Reynolds)
Jerry you\'ve tied me in knots with this one LOL. I have read it four...
June 29th, 2021 14:17 - CRAZY... CRAZY... LAZY, CRAZY... (Jaimeleigh)
Reads perfectly sane to me. But i\'m crazy too.
June 29th, 2021 14:13 - Lessons learned (Victorialynn)
Getting burned, and burned again is one of the routes to becoming a poet I...
June 29th, 2021 14:11 - Empty Harbours (Neville)
Not so easy to tear up and build houses upon as those old railway lines,...
June 29th, 2021 13:38 - Patterns (Fay Slimm.)
Blimey, I\'m afraid to look in the fridge after reading that! Each time I...
June 29th, 2021 13:30 - Shepherd of the Sheep (Orchidee)
Baaaaa! Many have been led over the hill with that story. I do believe...
June 29th, 2021 13:21 - This Light. (Goldfinch60)
That song reborn on our TVs these days in the LLoyds bank advert always...
June 29th, 2021 13:15 - The Love Story of Mrs Duckers and Mr Von Sneppick (Saxon Crow)
Dear Saxon Crow, excellence comes along rarely but when it does it is...
June 29th, 2021 13:08 - Untitled - XLVI (SureshG)
Ah yes the much misused and abused comma.....
.....every other breath...
June 29th, 2021 12:58 - a day in the life of Gabezech (Rrodriguez)
Transported me to another reality so well.
June 27th, 2021 15:02 - Squirrel (M.E.M.)
Delightful.
June 27th, 2021 15:00 - Safe harbor (Blue Poet)
Yep, I know ladies in this way too. But it does require discipline.
June 27th, 2021 14:59 - Rejection (Jerry Reynolds)
SElf chastisement eh?
June 27th, 2021 14:57 - Along the Mineral Line (Neville)
I am a devotee of the romance of steam locomotion and the whole aura...
June 27th, 2021 14:56 - Ponderings (Fay Slimm.)
I have pondered these things and more. All are seen from our sentient...
June 27th, 2021 14:50 - But Is It Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
So true, the average person has no interest beyond the obvious in art or...
June 27th, 2021 01:28 - PC Porpoodle (Saxon Crow)
Now that was entertaining. Brought out the child in me LOL
June 27th, 2021 01:04 - Lost In Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
He is indeed a most accomplished artist and your piece today is a fine...
June 26th, 2021 07:53 - In the Name of Freedom (Saxon Crow)
The art of 21st century life is finding your own personal freedom within...
June 26th, 2021 07:50 - Surrendering to the moments (Poetic Dan)
You\'ve come a long way to find that now you too can float and probably...
June 26th, 2021 07:47 - Digit slipped.... (Orchidee)
Gosh! You\'re fallible too.
Will you be posting this mystery...
June 25th, 2021 17:09 - THE LIFE ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
When the artist said it was rude
he was considered to be quite a...
June 25th, 2021 17:06 - Random Thoughts- (Jerry Reynolds)
Reads well but I have too little knowledge to make sensible comments about...
June 25th, 2021 07:47 - Losing You (Fay Slimm.)
A mature love beautifully described and such a sad loss.
And all so...
June 25th, 2021 02:28 - Red Dress. (Goldfinch60)
I bet she loved that, or did she go all coy, that well known feminine...
June 25th, 2021 02:14 - Freedom? (Saxon Crow)
At least you\'re guaranteed three square meals a day that way.
June 25th, 2021 02:12 - Random Thought (Jerry Reynolds)
Reassuring it is not LOL. I was trying to think of something compareably...
June 24th, 2021 09:19 - Caught (Fay Slimm.)
I shudder at the thought and daydream of my asbestos pyjamas should fire...
June 24th, 2021 09:16 - A Little Point of Fact Maybe (Neville)
LOL I suppose that means i love the highway more than does the...
June 24th, 2021 09:10 - One Step At A Time. (Goldfinch60)
Even though I stumble, I wholeheartedly agree with your fine words.
June 24th, 2021 09:08 - Black December (Saxon Crow)
Oh yes, a delicious spook. That was a really enjoyable read. You kept the...
June 24th, 2021 09:06 - Damaged (M.E.M.)
Beautiful.
June 23rd, 2021 13:08 - You (Fay Slimm.)
Those who live and feel the changes also feel the rawness of nature\'s...
June 23rd, 2021 13:05 - A Taste of Hunger (Neville)
Nothing is straight and linear when you are hurt and hungry for...
June 23rd, 2021 12:58 - Our Perpetual Priest (Orchidee)
I\'m starting a collection to pay Orchi not to sing. If this fails I\'m...
June 23rd, 2021 02:18 - Picture of Love. (Goldfinch60)
What a lovely surprise.
June 23rd, 2021 02:16 - Look Around (Saxon Crow)
Wonderful piece. Some people just don\'t see do they.
Into my...
June 23rd, 2021 02:12 - Graveyard of Thoughts (Mary73223)
Sad tale of a soul destroyed by mistreatment wondering if they can repair...
June 23rd, 2021 02:09 - Hope Chest (Dove)
That\'s one really sweet tale. So much truth contained and would be so...
June 22nd, 2021 18:13 - Toward Normal (Jerry Reynolds)
Long may you endure many summers days.
June 22nd, 2021 07:40 - Himawari - Sunflower (Neville)
Though no longer at the peak of his glorious self, he stood out from the...
June 22nd, 2021 07:39 - Conversion (Fay Slimm.)
Here\'s one dusk aint c#gonna sink in despair yet.
Recent bad news hung...
June 22nd, 2021 07:36 - Another Year Gone; (Goldfinch60)
Happy birthday Golie\'s friend.
I shall think of this on my 70th too.
June 22nd, 2021 07:30 - Purpose (Saxon Crow)
yes.
June 22nd, 2021 07:27 - Insistence (Fay Slimm.)
Wakey - wakey ! As the world awakens. Another pearl of poetry from our...
June 21st, 2021 11:40 - Brokenness (M.E.M.)
Broken souls need time and find their own readyness. Perseverence often...
June 21st, 2021 10:17 - Seeking Surety (Orchidee)
Who\'s this David geezer. The only David I know still owes me £400 do you...
June 21st, 2021 02:08 - Pandemia (Neville)
That\'s how the night sky makes you feel isn\'t it. Especially on those...
June 21st, 2021 02:07 - A Message (SorrowfullyHappy)
Just keep writing and you\'ll find plenty of people will want to read your...
June 21st, 2021 01:54 - I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
Nil illigitimus carborundum. Don\'t let the b\'tards wear you down. Yep, I...
June 21st, 2021 01:22 - The Friendship Tree (Jayasree)
Wonderful analogy, Such warmth of friendship throughout.
June 21st, 2021 01:19 - Lines (Saxon Crow)
I like it.
Into my favs
June 21st, 2021 01:04 - I don’t want to die (Opefolorunsho)
You just aint ready yet lol.
June 20th, 2021 10:13 - Writing it out... (Sylviasearcher)
A poets dilemma when the muse is asleep and the mind turns in on itself...
June 20th, 2021 09:55 - Cleansing The Mind (Jayasree)
Dark days help the sun shine brighter.
June 20th, 2021 09:48 - Fathers Day (Jerry Reynolds)
That is a great tribute Jerry. Very masculine.
June 20th, 2021 07:52
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