Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Don\'t say anymore (Sandra) This is a heartfelt cry for help. I hope you the author can hear that cry...
  June 29th, 2021 14:44
• What’s going on? (Hoopie) Thats more or less what they said after world war one.... all those wars...
  June 29th, 2021 14:38
• WILL BE OKAY (TheBalladofMebo) Wouldn\'t life be bliss if it worked out that way?
  June 29th, 2021 14:37
• WHY PUT OUR DREAMS ON HOLD (Andy Hunter) As time goes by...... Who knows where we will be taken by life? But it...
  June 29th, 2021 14:35
• Traffic to Gifts (M.E.M.) Brought to mind the reality behind the romance of the Chris Rea song...
  June 29th, 2021 14:28
• The Card From The Yard (Jerry Reynolds) Jerry you\'ve tied me in knots with this one LOL. I have read it four...
  June 29th, 2021 14:17
• CRAZY... CRAZY... LAZY, CRAZY... (Jaimeleigh) Reads perfectly sane to me. But i\'m crazy too.
  June 29th, 2021 14:13
• Lessons learned (Victorialynn) Getting burned, and burned again is one of the routes to becoming a poet I...
  June 29th, 2021 14:11
• Empty Harbours (Neville) Not so easy to tear up and build houses upon as those old railway lines,...
  June 29th, 2021 13:38
• Patterns (Fay Slimm.) Blimey, I\'m afraid to look in the fridge after reading that! Each time I...
  June 29th, 2021 13:30
• Shepherd of the Sheep (Orchidee) Baaaaa! Many have been led over the hill with that story. I do believe...
  June 29th, 2021 13:21
• This Light. (Goldfinch60) That song reborn on our TVs these days in the LLoyds bank advert always...
  June 29th, 2021 13:15
• The Love Story of Mrs Duckers and Mr Von Sneppick (Saxon Crow) Dear Saxon Crow, excellence comes along rarely but when it does it is...
  June 29th, 2021 13:08
• Untitled - XLVI (SureshG) Ah yes the much misused and abused comma..... .....every other breath...
  June 29th, 2021 12:58
• a day in the life of Gabezech (Rrodriguez) Transported me to another reality so well.
  June 27th, 2021 15:02
• Squirrel (M.E.M.) Delightful.
  June 27th, 2021 15:00
• Safe harbor (Blue Poet) Yep, I know ladies in this way too. But it does require discipline.
  June 27th, 2021 14:59
• Rejection (Jerry Reynolds) SElf chastisement eh?
  June 27th, 2021 14:57
• Along the Mineral Line (Neville) I am a devotee of the romance of steam locomotion and the whole aura...
  June 27th, 2021 14:56
• Ponderings (Fay Slimm.) I have pondered these things and more. All are seen from our sentient...
  June 27th, 2021 14:50
• But Is It Poetry? (Goldfinch60) So true, the average person has no interest beyond the obvious in art or...
  June 27th, 2021 01:28
• PC Porpoodle (Saxon Crow) Now that was entertaining. Brought out the child in me LOL
  June 27th, 2021 01:04
• Lost In Artwork. (Goldfinch60) He is indeed a most accomplished artist and your piece today is a fine...
  June 26th, 2021 07:53
• In the Name of Freedom (Saxon Crow) The art of 21st century life is finding your own personal freedom within...
  June 26th, 2021 07:50
• Surrendering to the moments (Poetic Dan) You\'ve come a long way to find that now you too can float and probably...
  June 26th, 2021 07:47
• Digit slipped.... (Orchidee) Gosh! You\'re fallible too. Will you be posting this mystery...
  June 25th, 2021 17:09
• THE LIFE ARTIST (Michael Edwards) When the artist said it was rude he was considered to be quite a...
  June 25th, 2021 17:06
• Random Thoughts- (Jerry Reynolds) Reads well but I have too little knowledge to make sensible comments about...
  June 25th, 2021 07:47
• Losing You (Fay Slimm.) A mature love beautifully described and such a sad loss. And all so...
  June 25th, 2021 02:28
• Red Dress. (Goldfinch60) I bet she loved that, or did she go all coy, that well known feminine...
  June 25th, 2021 02:14
• Freedom? (Saxon Crow) At least you\'re guaranteed three square meals a day that way.
  June 25th, 2021 02:12
• Random Thought (Jerry Reynolds) Reassuring it is not LOL. I was trying to think of something compareably...
  June 24th, 2021 09:19
• Caught (Fay Slimm.) I shudder at the thought and daydream of my asbestos pyjamas should fire...
  June 24th, 2021 09:16
• A Little Point of Fact Maybe (Neville) LOL I suppose that means i love the highway more than does the...
  June 24th, 2021 09:10
• One Step At A Time. (Goldfinch60) Even though I stumble, I wholeheartedly agree with your fine words.
  June 24th, 2021 09:08
• Black December (Saxon Crow) Oh yes, a delicious spook. That was a really enjoyable read. You kept the...
  June 24th, 2021 09:06
• Damaged (M.E.M.) Beautiful.
  June 23rd, 2021 13:08
• You (Fay Slimm.) Those who live and feel the changes also feel the rawness of nature\'s...
  June 23rd, 2021 13:05
• A Taste of Hunger (Neville) Nothing is straight and linear when you are hurt and hungry for...
  June 23rd, 2021 12:58
• Our Perpetual Priest (Orchidee) I\'m starting a collection to pay Orchi not to sing. If this fails I\'m...
  June 23rd, 2021 02:18
• Picture of Love. (Goldfinch60) What a lovely surprise.
  June 23rd, 2021 02:16
• Look Around (Saxon Crow) Wonderful piece. Some people just don\'t see do they. Into my...
  June 23rd, 2021 02:12
• Graveyard of Thoughts (Mary73223) Sad tale of a soul destroyed by mistreatment wondering if they can repair...
  June 23rd, 2021 02:09
• Hope Chest (Dove) That\'s one really sweet tale. So much truth contained and would be so...
  June 22nd, 2021 18:13
• Toward Normal (Jerry Reynolds) Long may you endure many summers days.
  June 22nd, 2021 07:40
• Himawari - Sunflower (Neville) Though no longer at the peak of his glorious self, he stood out from the...
  June 22nd, 2021 07:39
• Conversion (Fay Slimm.) Here\'s one dusk aint c#gonna sink in despair yet. Recent bad news hung...
  June 22nd, 2021 07:36
• Another Year Gone; (Goldfinch60) Happy birthday Golie\'s friend. I shall think of this on my 70th too.
  June 22nd, 2021 07:30
• Purpose (Saxon Crow) yes.
  June 22nd, 2021 07:27
• Insistence (Fay Slimm.) Wakey - wakey ! As the world awakens. Another pearl of poetry from our...
  June 21st, 2021 11:40
• Brokenness (M.E.M.) Broken souls need time and find their own readyness. Perseverence often...
  June 21st, 2021 10:17
• Seeking Surety (Orchidee) Who\'s this David geezer. The only David I know still owes me £400 do you...
  June 21st, 2021 02:08
• Pandemia (Neville) That\'s how the night sky makes you feel isn\'t it. Especially on those...
  June 21st, 2021 02:07
• A Message (SorrowfullyHappy) Just keep writing and you\'ll find plenty of people will want to read your...
  June 21st, 2021 01:54
• I Arise. (Goldfinch60) Nil illigitimus carborundum. Don\'t let the b\'tards wear you down. Yep, I...
  June 21st, 2021 01:22
• The Friendship Tree (Jayasree) Wonderful analogy, Such warmth of friendship throughout.
  June 21st, 2021 01:19
• Lines (Saxon Crow) I like it. Into my favs
  June 21st, 2021 01:04
• I don’t want to die (Opefolorunsho) You just aint ready yet lol.
  June 20th, 2021 10:13
• Writing it out... (Sylviasearcher) A poets dilemma when the muse is asleep and the mind turns in on itself...
  June 20th, 2021 09:55
• Cleansing The Mind (Jayasree) Dark days help the sun shine brighter.
  June 20th, 2021 09:48
• Fathers Day (Jerry Reynolds) That is a great tribute Jerry. Very masculine.
  June 20th, 2021 07:52
• You’re Always Hurting Me! (LittlePea) I\'m glad to read these times are behind you. Your piece speaks of the...
  June 20th, 2021 07:51
• Back in the Day (Neville) Reminiscences are the reward for having lived a fruitful younger...
  June 20th, 2021 07:49
• The New Day Ahead. (Goldfinch60) So true. I wish I was making better use of my days, too many going to...
  June 20th, 2021 07:46
• A Special Greeting to All Fathers and Father Figures (Laura🌻) Yessiree! And those lil critters the grandchildren too.
  June 20th, 2021 07:44
• Blues My Companion (Saxon Crow) Amen. Blues is the roots of all my playing.
  June 20th, 2021 07:43
• Thoughts (The Struggler) One spirit dwells within me, the spirit of life. It needs not any revered...
  June 19th, 2021 12:01
• A SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS (Andy Hunter) So very true. We can never really know how that smile can change anothers...
  June 19th, 2021 11:58
• A SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS (Andy Hunter)
  June 19th, 2021 11:57
• Where Do I Belong? (LittlePea) Welcome to the friendly fold which is MPS. Great opening poem with a...
  June 19th, 2021 09:44
• The Party In The Forest (Jayasree) I like it. I\'ve had dreams like this.
  June 19th, 2021 08:50
• Another night alone (Sandra) The sadness of desiring more than is available.
  June 19th, 2021 08:01
• June Vibrations (Fay Slimm.) Drenched in your words I am determined to take a drive into the...
  June 19th, 2021 06:44
• Memory To Come. (Goldfinch60) Lets hope there are plenty of good ones around the corner
  June 19th, 2021 06:41
• Good people in chains (Bernard Gabriel Okurut) Show me why the unthinking footsoldier does this to his fellow man. Why...
  June 18th, 2021 10:39
• The Bed Under the Ground (IAli) An amazing piece of writing about peace after death. Welcome to MPS....
  June 18th, 2021 10:34
• Neighbor Taken (Jerry Reynolds) Death. The end of a journey or a prize of selection for the next phase of...
  June 18th, 2021 10:30
• The Final Breath (The Struggler) Accepting a final breath will come as we transit is a signal of your own...
  June 18th, 2021 10:26
• Live And Let Live (Jayasree) Now wouldn\'t it be wonderful to follow your wise words and emerge post...
  June 18th, 2021 07:45
• Griddly Smethelton of Boffington Town (Saxon Crow) This is not to be sniffed at. More excellence from your story telling...
  June 18th, 2021 07:42
• Wisdom\'s Way - Wisdom Series (7) (Orchidee) Reminds me of Norman Wisdom. I didn\'t mean it Mr Grimsdale.
  June 18th, 2021 07:40
• What Is Life? (Goldfinch60) Life too is appreciating all the wonders around us, there for our...
  June 18th, 2021 06:34
• The Frangipani Tree (Jayasree) That\'s quite beautiful. I sight I would like to see. One for my...
  June 17th, 2021 01:55
• Music of my Heart (Dove) Wow! What it must be to have a piece like this written about you. I\'m so...
  June 17th, 2021 01:53
• Match Mask. (Goldfinch60) I\'ve met parking wardens like you. I\'m sure they must be human before...
  June 17th, 2021 01:50
• Bella (Saxon Crow) Such a loving poem about your loyal friend. I could picture her though i...
  June 17th, 2021 01:46
• Compare to her, Compare to me (Robbie GJ) Sad that there has been \'promoted\' a physical ideal. Beauty truly is in...
  June 16th, 2021 13:11
• DEATH (Advaitha) Ahem cool last line - stating the bleedin obvious - we are all gonna die...
  June 16th, 2021 08:55
• Wake Up Call (Advaitha) What a shame you forgot to give any hint of who \"THEY\" are in your piece...
  June 16th, 2021 08:52
• Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”) (AuburnScribbler) Live and let live.
  June 16th, 2021 06:44
• My Published Work on Amazon (Abu Aeesh) Are any of them readable? What are the sales figures like? Haven\'t seen...
  June 16th, 2021 06:43
• Not Meant (Fay Slimm.) A brief encounter, over the counter perhaps? A shiver or a wriggle, maybe...
  June 16th, 2021 05:54
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (2) (Michael Edwards) Great picture. Well guessing that your poetry is your sport, it\'s recent...
  June 16th, 2021 02:50
• Inside out (Sandra) You really touched me with this piece. I like to think I am an open book...
  June 16th, 2021 02:39
• Heart Hearing - Wisdom Series (5) (Orchidee) Nice one Orchi. I am a true follower of my heart
  June 16th, 2021 02:26
• Calmness Abounds (Goldfinch60) It is indeed a very relaxing piece. And now he played it just for me too.
  June 16th, 2021 01:13
• Blessings (Jayasree) You sit still and take stock of your blessings but still there is...
  June 16th, 2021 01:05
• Griddly Smetheltons Great Big Sneeze (Saxon Crow) At least on the bright side - he didn\'t follow through! A good laugh...
  June 16th, 2021 00:59
• Medieval self discovery (Blue Poet) Join the club. That\'s exactly what most of us are doing. But I\'m sure...
  June 16th, 2021 00:40
• Smile for the “camera” (Robbie GJ) Ouch! Good job not all men function as described.
  June 15th, 2021 18:07