Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Brick by brick (Olivia.)
The building blocks of our character are within the bricks of your words...
March 5th, 2021 08:33 - Getting Older. (Goldfinch60)
So right Andy. I lost my older brother some years ago and a part of me...
March 5th, 2021 08:29 - Just Judgement (Orchidee)
Tut at that last verse. Your god of destroying one and saving the other....
March 5th, 2021 08:27 - Love Is Forever. (Goldfinch60)
The loves of my life didn\'t stand the test of time but the love I felt in...
March 1st, 2021 04:13 - Irish Renga on the second day of Purim (Jerry Reynolds)
Is it me or a sign of the times
reading such lyrical rhymes
someone\'s...
February 27th, 2021 11:22 - In Sleep, I Will Trust (AuburnScribbler)
As a reader whose body clock is malfunctioning through lockdown\'s lack of...
February 27th, 2021 11:11 - Snow Moon. (Goldfinch60)
I noticed the big bright moon in the early hours this morning. I paused,...
February 27th, 2021 11:05 - Let’s Talk Scars (Neville)
The scars always show up. Just as you say, some are well concealed and...
February 27th, 2021 10:58 - Mad Dark Humour (Orchidee)
Don\'t put your son on the stage Mrs Worthington.
February 26th, 2021 09:13 - When I Lose (Jerry Reynolds)
Much wisdom in a simple four liner. I wish I were so wise as your words...
February 26th, 2021 09:09 - At The Deepest Center (DesertWords)
Yes, totally agree and the light is within us too.
Wonderful spiritual...
February 26th, 2021 08:58 - Goldie Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
That odd cheesey smell eminating
had provided a rudest awakening
he...
February 26th, 2021 03:04 - Nature\'s Memory (Merissa)
Why do I read a contradiction within your words. Where you talk of fear...
February 26th, 2021 01:48 - Salty River (SunSearcher)
Carry your baggage well lest it become a burden.
February 26th, 2021 01:43 - tired. (Brycycle)
In empty days after empty days we can turn in on ourselves. It\'s
February 26th, 2021 01:38 - What\'s The Point? (Merissa)
So long as you maintain freedom of choice!
February 26th, 2021 01:35 - one day while walking on the beach (Trenz Pruca)
I met a man passing a small damaged octopus to another saying \"Here\'s...
February 26th, 2021 01:32 - Disparate Love (Jerry Reynolds)
You made me chuckle. Such negative thoughts entering the mind at such a...
February 26th, 2021 01:28 - Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Love that Zappa quote. Difficult to remain open minded on some subjects...
February 26th, 2021 01:24 - Gracious Giving (Orchidee)
And when the pastor/father knows he is asking the poor to contribute in...
February 26th, 2021 01:20 - My Children (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Deep within these words is the love of you for your children. It speaks of...
February 23rd, 2021 12:27 - Never Enough (Jerry Reynolds)
Food for thought feedeth not the hungry belly.
February 23rd, 2021 12:24 - Too much water under the bridge (Olivia.)
When troubles have mounted it is good and wholesome to be able to look to...
February 23rd, 2021 12:22 - Bridged (Fay Slimm.)
Some people are so attuned to the natural world that even the birds know...
February 23rd, 2021 12:19 - Lockdown Grey (Neville)
Ah, the mind of the true poet walks where inspiration has filled his soul...
February 23rd, 2021 12:11 - A Good Day. (Goldfinch60)
If you can climb the stairs to bed, then its been a good day, you...
February 23rd, 2021 12:01 - Politics-Policies (Jerry Reynolds)
erm thats baseball terminology I think..... here in U.K. we play...
February 22nd, 2021 09:23 - Testing the Waters (TS)
Blissful poetic words paint a scene any man could relax into.
February 22nd, 2021 06:31 - Funny girl life (A passing lyric)
Wonderful. To read of how you smile through your experience of life...
February 22nd, 2021 05:55 - Sundayness (Fay Slimm.)
Eyyup lass, worra-bout t\'tin bath in front\'a range? Sundee neet \'wo...
February 22nd, 2021 05:12 - Redeemed By The Son (Orchidee)
In your hymn composition life did you ever have a punk period?
(and are...
February 22nd, 2021 04:49 - Mastication (Neville)
Post mastication he devoured her essence feeling the cotton wool thrust of...
February 22nd, 2021 04:47 - Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60)
You manage to post a meaningful poem each day. That\'s beyond my...
February 22nd, 2021 04:40 - I am Creation (Gesenia Burley)
Whereas I don\'t buy the genesis theme written by men, when the world was...
February 22nd, 2021 04:24 - Bad Advise (FredPeyer)
We see this all to often, even here on MPS. I\'m as guilty as any one in...
February 22nd, 2021 04:17 - The Fountain. (Goldfinch60)
In the words of baddiel the comic,\"that\'s your halo, that is\".
February 21st, 2021 02:53 - K-9 OUT OF 10 (Joe Marcello)
Vivisection is criminal.
Treat your dog well and it will do anything...
February 21st, 2021 01:00 - Dove Poison (A Boy With Roses)
The two sides of change. Desire and fear.
February 21st, 2021 00:50 - Just sitting around (FredPeyer)
Drinking is thirsty work Fred. The bottled ale I drink tastes better at...
February 21st, 2021 00:46 - RELATIONSHIP CYCLE (Rhyne)
Your authors comments bears the wisdom of experience. A series of lessons...
February 21st, 2021 00:36 - T-Town (Jerry Reynolds)
Spooky! This reminded my of the author Dean Koontz and his horror stories....
February 20th, 2021 11:16 - Piss-Poor Poems (Kevin Michael Bloor)
This is the dilemma each of us poets will experience on several occasions....
February 20th, 2021 11:12 - Policies In Giving - Giving Series (4) (Orchidee)
This all went \'whoooosh!\' over my head you know orchi.
February 20th, 2021 04:09 - This changed my life (Poetic Dan)
You have a very relaxing tone to your voice this morning and with the...
February 20th, 2021 02:24 - New Door. (Goldfinch60)
Now then, don\'t forget to oil the hinges. The best lubricant you can use...
February 20th, 2021 02:17 - Hypnotic (Goddess of the Mist)
It will all end in tears LOL just kidding.
Well... it\'s all there...
February 20th, 2021 01:24 - Schooldays (Heatherbee)
Formative years. I reflected back to some of my schoolday experiences upon...
February 20th, 2021 00:41 - Is It Art? (Goldfinch60)
Yep. It is your own perception. Art should have NO rules, nor any arbiter...
February 19th, 2021 12:44 - Cheap Soup (FredPeyer)
I\'m in the cheap seats and cheap soup suits me just fine.... I still have...
February 18th, 2021 23:16 - Snow and ice (Jerry Reynolds)
You had a sprinkling of snow then Jerry? LOL
February 18th, 2021 13:16 - Funfair (Heatherbee)
Over tired kiddies with sticky pink candy floss stained faces sob and...
February 18th, 2021 07:13 - Beautiful River. (Goldfinch60)
Nature reaffirms our faith with its vibrant and ongoing seasons. The...
February 18th, 2021 06:40 - My Flowers Were Dying (Vee Mcg)
What a lovely story. It brought tears to my eyes too.
You have a...
February 17th, 2021 15:48 - Emotion (Heatherbee)
I read your \'authors comment\'. It\'s so important to keep in...
February 17th, 2021 15:39 - Truth.. (AlitaOpal)
Good stuff! Never be afraid of telling it how it is. The trouble it brings...
February 17th, 2021 12:55 - A republic, if you can keep it (SureshG)
Was USA ever a true democracy in anything other than just the word.?? When...
February 17th, 2021 12:48 - They Won\'t Bite (Jerry Reynolds)
Reminded me of a story about bottoms i heard recently.....
\"Doctor my...
February 17th, 2021 12:44 - Unconfined (Fay Slimm.)
And aren\'t they awe inspiring. From infant days our minds wonder at the...
February 17th, 2021 05:35 - fantasy (Birddie Jane)
Have faith in your inner strength young lady. Your circumstances force you...
February 17th, 2021 03:42 - Stones To Bread (Orchidee)
When you compose these ditties do you barricade the windows as in that...
February 17th, 2021 03:35 - My Star Of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful poetry Andy. All the more so knowing what the words truly mean...
February 17th, 2021 02:59 - Left Behind in Hell (Opal Tears)
Here on MPS we are the safety valve for torn emotions. Inner turmoil needs...
February 17th, 2021 00:37 - The Dancer (Heatherbee)
Oh to have those young experiences again. I used to love to go dancing.
February 16th, 2021 20:43 - Seduction (Jerry Reynolds)
Utter filth of course. More please.
Bloomin good fun.
February 16th, 2021 16:13 - Satori (Neville)
Kensho brings wherever it will take. For to see that which is before us...
February 16th, 2021 14:48 - Mysterious. (Fay Slimm.)
To have reached the end of your fine piece has been a journey through...
February 16th, 2021 14:41 - The New Day (Goldfinch60)
\"The colours of the rainbow so pretty in the sky are also on the faces of...
February 16th, 2021 14:32 - To The Readers - 1 (Nafis Light)
All our sight and perception contains our past. We see through the opaque...
February 15th, 2021 22:48 - Tamerlane and other Poems by a Bostonian (FredPeyer)
I was enthralled Fred. Especially i felt his mind alter, you portrayed...
February 15th, 2021 22:45 - I Regret Nothing (Mizgeen Berzinari)
Wonderful expression of love and devotion. Any recipient could ask for no...
February 15th, 2021 22:35 - Of Shoots and Man (AuburnScribbler)
Yep! I do wish everyone could see it like that too.
February 15th, 2021 16:22 - The Puppet Master (Wi11ow)
I love this, an invite to the thoughtless or those whose brain resides in...
February 15th, 2021 12:50 - Spring Memory (Jerry Reynolds)
LOL @ your socks. Essential garments which ease the discomfort of ones...
February 15th, 2021 10:36 - Dreamland (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Quite wonderful. Seldom does a memoire or tribute contain such down to...
February 15th, 2021 08:35 - Suchness (Fay Slimm.)
I feel your \'suchness\' of today\'s words is the unconditional love which...
February 15th, 2021 04:43 - Anthology of Truth (Nat Muñoz)
Love is all. The journey for most of us begins through the love...
February 15th, 2021 04:36 - That Handbag. (Goldfinch60)
And so we pass into the great unknown, for that we have to admit is all we...
February 15th, 2021 04:19 - Groundhog day (Heatherbee)
The story of all our sad lives at the moment Heatherbee, though aptly told...
February 15th, 2021 04:09 - Moon (TS)
Like a comfort, when all around us in our personal life is falling apart,...
February 15th, 2021 04:05 - Valentine for Linda (Jerry Reynolds)
I\'ll bet that your missus
needs candy striped kisses
that is what she...
February 14th, 2021 09:59 - A new chapter. (Olivia.)
Go for it! Make sure those wide open eyes are not blinkered.
February 14th, 2021 09:56 - Peaceful Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
Awe inspiring aren\'t they. Who doesn\'t get carried away wondering what...
February 14th, 2021 02:28 - My valentine (Heatherbee)
And ain\'t that just the way it is. Heartfelt and honest without the...
February 13th, 2021 22:34 - An ode to the arts (Thewayiwrite)
So lets see more than the occasional post....poet. LOL
February 13th, 2021 22:31 - The Power Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Its a pity the general public only know Morricone for his film music (if...
February 13th, 2021 22:24 - SPRING (Michael Edwards)
Bring on that springtime glow.
February 13th, 2021 22:19 - Winter-Dazed (Fay Slimm.)
A buy line to die for.
A warm heart looks beneath the frosty covering...
February 13th, 2021 22:16 - Death Take Me Now (TS)
Beware of the dark \'poet\' who has a history of treating MPS as an...
February 12th, 2021 16:49 - I wrote my worries away (Poetic Dan)
I used to walk in the gutter, eyes cast down until i wrote myself onto...
February 9th, 2021 13:23 - The Mourning After The Morning After (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A mournful air surely fills this with your well chosen words. The heavy...
February 9th, 2021 13:20 - Morning Coffee (Jerry Reynolds)
Can\'t beat real coffee in the morning. Doctor insists mine is caffeine...
February 9th, 2021 13:13 - Trusting Through Troubles (Orchidee)
Oh lord,please give Orchi an enquiring mind so that he may see through the...
February 9th, 2021 07:24 - The Green Disappears – Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Tears from heaven fall
Bringing forth a joyous call
Build a snowman...
February 9th, 2021 07:23 - Sometimes (AlitaOpal)
Who knows what we see in one another\'s charcters. The written word can...
February 9th, 2021 07:16 - A Dram Induced Dream or The Poet and the Emperor (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Love it. The enigmatic dream. So full of possibilities to romance.
And...
February 8th, 2021 18:30 - From First to Last (FredPeyer)
Reminds me of a one legged daredevil I once knew.
February 8th, 2021 15:53 - What Women Want… or don’t want, you figure it out (M.E.M.)
I\'m sure you speak for all women.....
February 8th, 2021 14:22 - It does not flow (B-LAH-que)
Isn\'t the world of poetry interesting in 2021. Whereas I disagree with...
February 8th, 2021 12:57 - Short & Sweet as life should be (Poetic Dan)
conversation between two old pals
\'What happened to your blues...
February 8th, 2021 08:06 - Drowsy Treasure (Fay Slimm.)
Let the essence and emotion of your words awaken me each morn...... rather...
February 8th, 2021 07:54
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