Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Bean Bag Chair (Jerry Reynolds) As life takes it\'s toll so too the balls fall I think Nancy (her...
  January 30th, 2021 10:10
• My hobbie and me (Heatherbee) Sometimes our hobbies become us. We become know as a baker etc with little...
  January 30th, 2021 07:20
• Healed (Hoopie) Part of it is taking that wrong advice and learning from it. In the end...
  January 30th, 2021 07:17
• That Photograph. (Goldfinch60) Cor! I\'d love a photo of your meeting up again..... the facial...
  January 30th, 2021 07:15
• Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave) My gagging reflex barely allowed me to read this piece. It stinks - in...
  January 30th, 2021 07:00
• Hawaiian Pig Hunt (FredPeyer) Bloody 4 x 4\'s spoil the fun. Nice story, I enjoyed reading it -...
  January 29th, 2021 17:59
• Through the looking glass (Heatherbee) LOL. My mirror plays tricks too. Some old stranger who looks a bit like my...
  January 29th, 2021 17:39
• God\'s accountability (Shearonder1987) So refreshing to see someone posting fairy tales on MPS
  January 29th, 2021 12:07
• Attitude. (Fay Slimm.) What a delightful turn arounf in your piece today. From the growing heat...
  January 29th, 2021 10:02
• Winter Wind (Jerry Reynolds) When the all clear is sounded and we are all well injected there is many...
  January 29th, 2021 09:09
• The Everlasting Rose (Harlequin Hearts 🖤) Quite a beautiful rendition of how it feels to be a beautiful worthy soul...
  January 29th, 2021 09:06
• Happily Ever After (Harlequin Hearts 🖤) Sad. Time will do its wonderful healing thing. A rose will once again...
  January 29th, 2021 09:01
• BOXED (L. B. Mek) How true. No form or certificate can contain us. We are free will...
  January 29th, 2021 06:25
• The Eighth Trumpet. (Goldfinch60) Bless your ears and bless Orchi too for though i may attack his postings...
  January 29th, 2021 06:21
• ডুবে মরছে যমুনায় (Md Hossain Jaker) Ƹǣǂȡʥȼ͡ΞΨϠѾѦ҉
  January 27th, 2021 13:16
• FABULOUS GOD (Amon) Who are you trying to convince?
  January 26th, 2021 09:34
• Lockdown (Heatherbee) Pain filled words indeed. Have you considered writing without rhyme....
  January 26th, 2021 09:31
• Birthright (Fay Slimm.) Great positive advice for those who need some in these difficult...
  January 26th, 2021 09:21
• Always make time for this (Poetic Dan) I hope Orchidee has taken your words to heart.... have you seen the poetry...
  January 26th, 2021 06:22
• LAST SUPPER (Michael Edwards) YUK bad subject. Im supposed to be getting suited up for a falsies plate...
  January 26th, 2021 06:02
• That Clock. (Goldfinch60) Lyrics from \"where does the time go\" If i could have a pound for every...
  January 26th, 2021 05:58
• Addiction (Arabella2001) This is very good. So much can be read into your lines here. I am a big...
  January 25th, 2021 08:00
• Good People (Heatherbee) I only allow the good ones into my life these days Heather. There are too...
  January 25th, 2021 07:53
• Chill. (Fay Slimm.) Oh yes indeed. Whereas we love to see a covering of snow, and we have a...
  January 25th, 2021 04:55
• As I look (Hoopie) That god is within you - your conscience.
  January 25th, 2021 04:51
• Wordiku Seven. (Goldfinch60) Diabolical disembowelment poetical
  January 25th, 2021 02:44
• RADIO (Nancy Rdz LL) That was fun and quite complex. I\'m glad i read your notes...
  January 25th, 2021 02:10
• New Year\'s Resolutions (FredPeyer) My new years resolution....I write them in the snow and wait till its...
  January 25th, 2021 00:08
• A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards) Humpty Trumpty promised a wall But grumpy Trump couldnt build one at...
  January 24th, 2021 02:07
• journey (Geekslutnerdgirl) You think I didn\'t know this?
  January 24th, 2021 02:02
• Grandma (SheWasTheSun) That\'s a really cute spin on death and dieing. None of us know of course....
  January 24th, 2021 00:03
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (3) About Midnight. (Doggerel Dave) \"And I attempt custody of my eyes\" - what an excellent line! - out on...
  January 23rd, 2021 22:03
• I don\'t know how (Poetic Dan) Dan mate, we are all individuals. Some fail where we succeed and sometimes...
  January 23rd, 2021 17:19
• Poem For Fay (Jerry Reynolds) That\'s Jimminy cricket dancing there for Fay\'s delight I think. You...
  January 23rd, 2021 14:10
• pain my friend or foe (Heatherbee) I was so enthralled reading your \'My place to go\' post that I decided to...
  January 23rd, 2021 10:44
• My place to go (Heatherbee) That was a delight to read and took me away to a warm mid summer garden....
  January 23rd, 2021 10:36
• For Eternity. (Goldfinch60) You will never be alone. Her spirit lifts you and smiles with your eyes,...
  January 23rd, 2021 02:24
• Winter (TS) When the pandemic is passed I must go in search of sycamore leaves which...
  January 23rd, 2021 02:19
• Until We Meet Again (DarkSoul98) Such feelings of loss begin to teach us to be more sensitive to the needs...
  January 23rd, 2021 02:15
• Tick Tock (PoeticBiscuit) Herein older year the clock seems to leap forward leaving one wondering......
  January 23rd, 2021 02:05
• SACRED TEMPLE (Amon) Don\'t tell me, let me guess. A man told you all this as a part of your...
  January 22nd, 2021 10:53
• Indivisible Fractions (Neville) I am writing this looking to the future but just realise i started in the...
  January 22nd, 2021 05:27
• Rousing (Fay Slimm.) There\'s a lot to be said about morning arousal when a bird is singing...
  January 22nd, 2021 04:31
• I Await Expectantly. (Goldfinch60) Remember you are supposed to be shielding. Whatsmore Ludwig Van wotsit...
  January 22nd, 2021 02:41
• THE WRITER\'S MIND (Nancy Rdz LL) Im knackered after reading all that. That was a long one, I often give up...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:27
• No Fear of Death (DarkSoul98) Well done, I have never seen death depicted as a live entity before, To be...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:04
• WE ARE THE WEIRDOS AND THE STRANGE (Nancy Rdz LL) Hey Nancy welcome to this collective of weirdos and poets and weird poets...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:00
• Rose Petals in Vaults (A Boy With Roses) That wine is the poetic blood which daily courses through you and falls...
  January 21st, 2021 22:14
• Just Be (Julie B) Nor lose yourself in the chains of immature love. A caged tiger is no...
  January 21st, 2021 17:22
• Drawing Lesson (Jerry Reynolds) You mean my scribblings are wasteful? I resemble that remark.
  January 21st, 2021 11:25
• Paired (Fay Slimm.) You describe well the magic between two as they realise their feelings are...
  January 21st, 2021 04:37
• Calling And Choice (Orchidee) In all religions we see the intelligentsia depart from religious dogma in...
  January 21st, 2021 04:10
• We Are Still Here. (Goldfinch60) Positivity throughout. I await days when i may again be allowed to safely...
  January 21st, 2021 04:04
• AIM HIGH (Michael Edwards) I though this was going to be a peeing contest when i read the title. I...
  January 21st, 2021 04:01
• Spoiler Alert (PoeticBiscuit) LOL 4 years too late but most of the world saw where the election of Trump...
  January 21st, 2021 03:56
• Inauguration Day (Jerry Reynolds) chickens teeth tongue firmly in cheek just beak-cos
  January 20th, 2021 11:53
• A Collection of Slumbers (Neville) One of my ex\'s had a pair of secret drawers, on special occasions she...
  January 20th, 2021 08:05
• Walking This Way (Orchidee) \"Teach me your way oh lord\" - and how\'s the lord going to do that then?...
  January 20th, 2021 04:21
• Weaponry (Fay Slimm.) Built for predation. Such perfection is poetry itself. These are stunning...
  January 20th, 2021 04:20
• Oh Look! (Goldfinch60) May the weather be optimum for your activities sir. (Where\'s the \'now...
  January 20th, 2021 02:32
• Life is but a dream (Poetic Dan) The Buddha taught \"life is but an illusion\". Someone else just said...
  January 19th, 2021 17:39
• We are Strong (Avocado) So are you implying that those thousands who died were weak?
  January 19th, 2021 10:58
• Awareness (Fay Slimm.) The words of love enriching understanding and acceptance. But told in your...
  January 19th, 2021 07:04
• Reasons for Leaving (Neville) Reminded me of a poem i wrote ages ago:- when u find she\'s not the...
  January 19th, 2021 06:58
• Mirror Image Goldiku (Goldfinch60) I don\'t care about what i see in the mirror, I\'ve always been backward.
  January 19th, 2021 05:31
• I WOKED (Michael Edwards) D\'you ever wonder on opening yer eyes How sleeptime lingers or sometimes...
  January 19th, 2021 05:29
• Ears, pulsing beat (L. B. Mek) Those early stage nerves before we start playing. The playing is of course...
  January 18th, 2021 07:38
• In Reality. (Goldfinch60) Undeniably a strong spiritual connection runs through this.
  January 18th, 2021 07:31
• Ephemeral (FredPeyer) I think you clearly identify how mankind has attempted to detach itself...
  January 17th, 2021 19:25
• Birdspeak (Neville) You could feel it throughout the nation their skyward gaze...
  January 17th, 2021 07:06
• Snooker Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Yes Yan is very impressive. He will go far.
  January 17th, 2021 06:58
• who are we (FredPeyer) Nice one. I agree with you but sssshhh - you\'ll upset the christians.
  January 16th, 2021 17:30
• Writing Back – To All of You...Page 2 (Nafis Light) Blimey Joker, I didn\'t know you read other peoples poetry on here.... you...
  January 16th, 2021 17:29
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (2) Around Midnight. (Doggerel Dave) EE BAH GUM lad, luxury.... tha got to spend a neet in\'t cells an ya never...
  January 16th, 2021 17:25
• Two Hopes for Thee (Neville) Light and shade and our perception. Yet you refreshingly bring feminine...
  January 16th, 2021 06:04
• Life is a risk, get over it! (Poetic Dan) Listen to cynics and you\'ll become a cynic. Imperfection is a part of...
  January 16th, 2021 06:00
• RAIN (Michael Edwards) Two quite lovely pictures from you today M.E.
  January 16th, 2021 05:47
• Laughter Acrostic, (Goldfinch60) Laughter is a big part of my life.
  January 16th, 2021 05:42
• Life Updates (Cali Kittana) That was one very enjoyable read. I really like the complete turn around...
  January 16th, 2021 05:36
• Lethal Injection (Robert Southwick Richmond) There is something wrong with capital punishment. Something wrong with the...
  January 16th, 2021 05:31
• Street Talk (Lexbry) I really enjoyed your poem today.
  January 16th, 2021 05:22
• Wanton Need (Suresh) The great divide. Still as well defined as ever, yet in between act the...
  January 16th, 2021 05:18
• Enough is Enough (Avocado) it is the blind who WILL NOT see it. everyone else sees it. B L M
  January 15th, 2021 10:29
• Politics (Jerry Reynolds) Tailgate driver enhances kerbside
  January 15th, 2021 10:27
• Specialness (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful. I\'ve taken a long pause having read your poem because it is...
  January 15th, 2021 06:58
• Emotional Art. (Goldfinch60) Yes, the artist/songwriter/poet gives us the materials arranged in a way...
  January 15th, 2021 06:50
• Untitled - XXXV (Suresh) Clever stuff beyond doubt.
  January 14th, 2021 14:53
• My Friend (Fay Slimm.) Doggies, so loveable but..... i have a problem... You see, I always...
  January 14th, 2021 14:35
• Quaffed (Neville) She was my elixir, my sensation\'s zenith, my addiction, my sacrifice, my...
  January 14th, 2021 14:29
• The Bite to Seal All Fates (Poem by ink) Temptation is temptation per se but did humanity need it camoflaged in the...
  January 14th, 2021 09:10
• fool me (AJ) The lonely heart seeks, rests a while in company, but...... a lonely...
  January 14th, 2021 09:05
• silent movies at late night drive-ins (Lauraoverxo) Yes, you really show the romance of the mind\'s overtime when we are cast...
  January 14th, 2021 09:03
• PUT THE FIRE OUT (Michael Edwards) Loved that, didn\'t see that one coming. Hello M.E. artist,. well...
  January 14th, 2021 08:42
• Better Ones To Come. (Goldfinch60) II could have written those words Goldfinch. Always I know that a tim of...
  January 14th, 2021 08:37
• Whiskey and Blood Run Together (Robert Southwick Richmond) Keep that whiskey stuff out of your system I\'d say. Try whisky instead,...
  January 13th, 2021 17:20
• Stopped Clocks (Fay Slimm.) Such treasures are memories made when the heart was winged and flew in the...
  January 13th, 2021 06:32
• Remembered (Neville) Tell me it\'s the owl and the pussycat.... such romance of legend has to...
  January 13th, 2021 06:26
• Hair-Raising? (Orchidee) to the tune of the humpty dumpty nursery rhyme:- Humpty trumpty...
  January 13th, 2021 06:21
• Spiritual Death (Samer Amin) If this holy light is anything to do with the rubbish the christian...
  January 13th, 2021 06:14
• Lockdown Life. (Goldfinch60) All that tea and no mention of prostate. You are far more organised than...
  January 13th, 2021 06:08