Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Love For Eternity. (Goldfinch60) It\'s written in the stars. You only need look to the heavens at night and...
  February 8th, 2021 07:49
• All\'s Going Well (Doggerel Dave) Shakespear was performed as a comedy in its day. There\'s still a lot of...
  February 5th, 2021 19:44
• My first time (AlitaOpal) Lost into the lust of lovemaking.
  February 5th, 2021 19:32
• Spring morning (Willow tree) I wish I did see it! In this blessed lockdown world I am shielding,...
  February 5th, 2021 10:34
• A Creepy Bedtime Tale (Heatherbee) Was that a creak upon the stair? Why are you suddenly awake. Silence...
  February 5th, 2021 10:29
• Flimsy Stunners (Fay Slimm.) A feather. A singular thing of beauty no human hand could...
  February 5th, 2021 10:24
• Numbers Do Not Exist. (Goldfinch60) We all are children of the universe and all it\'s wonderful mystery.
  February 5th, 2021 10:10
• My Squeek (Joseph M Marion) The poetry of unconditional love. I\'m sure all fathers can relate to this...
  February 5th, 2021 10:07
• Savior or Captor? (PoeticBiscuit) Written from the point of view of a puppy in a pet shop ? ? ? ?
  February 4th, 2021 22:50
• Daisy (Mminarik00) Daisys wither.
  February 4th, 2021 18:53
• Grandkids (Heatherbee) Oh yes, I mis the little treasures too. Luckily I get some videos on...
  February 4th, 2021 18:42
• My world (Heatherbee) You dear soul, are very much a part of this world and will never be left...
  February 3rd, 2021 23:16
• Life (AlitaOpal) It sure does get better when you ask why. Especially when the ones you...
  February 3rd, 2021 17:36
• Untitled - XXX (SureshG) I missed this gem on the day you posted it. In a world consumed with the...
  February 3rd, 2021 14:11
• Hail! Democracy (SureshG) Just as was evident before we saw the recent attempts to claw back some...
  February 3rd, 2021 13:12
• উত্তরের জানালা (Md Hossain Jaker) ӁѼҁҷЯ₪₪ӹ‰ ǢǥζΫЊѨѮѮϣՋ ‡₣∆ƒÖ ...
  February 3rd, 2021 07:23
• Prosperous Progression (Orchidee) Yep, I\'m sure the archbishop and his bishops - all your church\'s...
  February 3rd, 2021 07:16
• Steps Into My River. (Goldfinch60) That lady river flows through your poetry like your inspirational muse....
  February 3rd, 2021 07:12
• LE MANOIR AUX QUAT’SAISONS (Michael Edwards) Firstly, you picture. It brought to mind the magician sawing up a lady...
  February 3rd, 2021 07:04
• AN ARTISAN (Michael Edwards) Lovely picture. Great poetry painting a character picture. I feel like...
  February 2nd, 2021 05:25
• The View From The Window. (Goldfinch60) A similar story I had heard before but it highlights so well our many...
  February 2nd, 2021 05:20
• Solitary (Lily_) If we all were to tell exactly \'how we are\' when asked I think the world...
  February 2nd, 2021 05:14
• Perfect (Sylviasearcher) The quandary of quandarys. Perhaps perfection is the act of taking part...
  February 1st, 2021 11:52
• I Want To Rise Like Birds (Naseer Ahmed Nasir) May you continue to rise, and in the company of your muse, that you may...
  February 1st, 2021 11:47
• God in the Details (M.E.M.) Yep, just so long as we aint talking about the christian church\'s god...
  February 1st, 2021 11:42
• Window North (Jerry Reynolds) Let us all you that you will be able to get out there and mingle before...
  February 1st, 2021 11:40
• Jewels and Treassures (Heatherbee) I\'m 100% with you on this.... in my heart i am a fell walker but in my...
  February 1st, 2021 11:38
• Adorned: with their petals of Thorns (L. B. Mek) Read it twice - I\'m confused by it. Now look where honesty got me!
  February 1st, 2021 10:08
• Timed (Fay Slimm.) Oooooh Fay, I wondered where you were taking us when 2nd stanza got down...
  February 1st, 2021 03:46
• Use By Date? (Goldfinch60) In these days of our later years maybe the toilet seat should have a...
  February 1st, 2021 03:41
• Failed love (Hayley) Love is a minefield. I remember it making me feel worthless on several...
  February 1st, 2021 03:33
• What happened to my dreams? (FredPeyer) I avoid the mirror these days Fred. It always seems to want to start an...
  February 1st, 2021 03:25
• The crow (Willow tree) Nicely highlighting some of the simple everyday things which, when we are...
  February 1st, 2021 03:21
• I Miss You (Harlequin Hearts 🖤) Looks like you\'re ready for a new start.
  January 31st, 2021 11:52
• Spring Love (Jerry Reynolds) East cum, easy go.
  January 31st, 2021 10:17
• Miss Take (Neville) Beauty is only skin deep eh? As a youngster I used to wish I was better...
  January 31st, 2021 10:15
• Immoral (Md Hossain Jaker) Very confused grammar and gender.
  January 31st, 2021 08:30
• Untitled - XXXVI (Suresh) Deeper still you will be aware of the spiritual plane opening up to reveal...
  January 31st, 2021 08:28
• An Evening At Gloria Jeans (Naseer Ahmed Nasir) Quite a ramble of a piece to say how impersonal we have become in today...
  January 31st, 2021 05:21
• A Dream Fallen Out From Sleep (Naseer Ahmed Nasir) I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. It captures my feeling and many a...
  January 31st, 2021 01:38
• Bean Bag Chair (Jerry Reynolds) As life takes it\'s toll so too the balls fall I think Nancy (her...
  January 30th, 2021 10:10
• My hobbie and me (Heatherbee) Sometimes our hobbies become us. We become know as a baker etc with little...
  January 30th, 2021 07:20
• Healed (Hoopie) Part of it is taking that wrong advice and learning from it. In the end...
  January 30th, 2021 07:17
• That Photograph. (Goldfinch60) Cor! I\'d love a photo of your meeting up again..... the facial...
  January 30th, 2021 07:15
• Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave) My gagging reflex barely allowed me to read this piece. It stinks - in...
  January 30th, 2021 07:00
• Hawaiian Pig Hunt (FredPeyer) Bloody 4 x 4\'s spoil the fun. Nice story, I enjoyed reading it -...
  January 29th, 2021 17:59
• Through the looking glass (Heatherbee) LOL. My mirror plays tricks too. Some old stranger who looks a bit like my...
  January 29th, 2021 17:39
• God\'s accountability (Shearonder1987) So refreshing to see someone posting fairy tales on MPS
  January 29th, 2021 12:07
• Attitude. (Fay Slimm.) What a delightful turn arounf in your piece today. From the growing heat...
  January 29th, 2021 10:02
• Winter Wind (Jerry Reynolds) When the all clear is sounded and we are all well injected there is many...
  January 29th, 2021 09:09
• The Everlasting Rose (Harlequin Hearts 🖤) Quite a beautiful rendition of how it feels to be a beautiful worthy soul...
  January 29th, 2021 09:06
• Happily Ever After (Harlequin Hearts 🖤) Sad. Time will do its wonderful healing thing. A rose will once again...
  January 29th, 2021 09:01
• BOXED (L. B. Mek) How true. No form or certificate can contain us. We are free will...
  January 29th, 2021 06:25
• The Eighth Trumpet. (Goldfinch60) Bless your ears and bless Orchi too for though i may attack his postings...
  January 29th, 2021 06:21
• ডুবে মরছে যমুনায় (Md Hossain Jaker) Ƹǣǂȡʥȼ͡ΞΨϠѾѦ҉
  January 27th, 2021 13:16
• FABULOUS GOD (Amon) Who are you trying to convince?
  January 26th, 2021 09:34
• Lockdown (Heatherbee) Pain filled words indeed. Have you considered writing without rhyme....
  January 26th, 2021 09:31
• Birthright (Fay Slimm.) Great positive advice for those who need some in these difficult...
  January 26th, 2021 09:21
• Always make time for this (Poetic Dan) I hope Orchidee has taken your words to heart.... have you seen the poetry...
  January 26th, 2021 06:22
• LAST SUPPER (Michael Edwards) YUK bad subject. Im supposed to be getting suited up for a falsies plate...
  January 26th, 2021 06:02
• That Clock. (Goldfinch60) Lyrics from \"where does the time go\" If i could have a pound for every...
  January 26th, 2021 05:58
• Addiction (Arabella2001) This is very good. So much can be read into your lines here. I am a big...
  January 25th, 2021 08:00
• Good People (Heatherbee) I only allow the good ones into my life these days Heather. There are too...
  January 25th, 2021 07:53
• Chill. (Fay Slimm.) Oh yes indeed. Whereas we love to see a covering of snow, and we have a...
  January 25th, 2021 04:55
• As I look (Hoopie) That god is within you - your conscience.
  January 25th, 2021 04:51
• Wordiku Seven. (Goldfinch60) Diabolical disembowelment poetical
  January 25th, 2021 02:44
• RADIO (Nancy Rdz LL) That was fun and quite complex. I\'m glad i read your notes...
  January 25th, 2021 02:10
• New Year\'s Resolutions (FredPeyer) My new years resolution....I write them in the snow and wait till its...
  January 25th, 2021 00:08
• A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards) Humpty Trumpty promised a wall But grumpy Trump couldnt build one at...
  January 24th, 2021 02:07
• journey (Geekslutnerdgirl) You think I didn\'t know this?
  January 24th, 2021 02:02
• Grandma (SheWasTheSun) That\'s a really cute spin on death and dieing. None of us know of course....
  January 24th, 2021 00:03
• MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (3) About Midnight. (Doggerel Dave) \"And I attempt custody of my eyes\" - what an excellent line! - out on...
  January 23rd, 2021 22:03
• I don\'t know how (Poetic Dan) Dan mate, we are all individuals. Some fail where we succeed and sometimes...
  January 23rd, 2021 17:19
• Poem For Fay (Jerry Reynolds) That\'s Jimminy cricket dancing there for Fay\'s delight I think. You...
  January 23rd, 2021 14:10
• pain my friend or foe (Heatherbee) I was so enthralled reading your \'My place to go\' post that I decided to...
  January 23rd, 2021 10:44
• My place to go (Heatherbee) That was a delight to read and took me away to a warm mid summer garden....
  January 23rd, 2021 10:36
• For Eternity. (Goldfinch60) You will never be alone. Her spirit lifts you and smiles with your eyes,...
  January 23rd, 2021 02:24
• Winter (TS) When the pandemic is passed I must go in search of sycamore leaves which...
  January 23rd, 2021 02:19
• Until We Meet Again (DarkSoul98) Such feelings of loss begin to teach us to be more sensitive to the needs...
  January 23rd, 2021 02:15
• Tick Tock (PoeticBiscuit) Herein older year the clock seems to leap forward leaving one wondering......
  January 23rd, 2021 02:05
• SACRED TEMPLE (Amon) Don\'t tell me, let me guess. A man told you all this as a part of your...
  January 22nd, 2021 10:53
• Indivisible Fractions (Neville) I am writing this looking to the future but just realise i started in the...
  January 22nd, 2021 05:27
• Rousing (Fay Slimm.) There\'s a lot to be said about morning arousal when a bird is singing...
  January 22nd, 2021 04:31
• I Await Expectantly. (Goldfinch60) Remember you are supposed to be shielding. Whatsmore Ludwig Van wotsit...
  January 22nd, 2021 02:41
• THE WRITER\'S MIND (Nancy Rdz LL) Im knackered after reading all that. That was a long one, I often give up...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:27
• No Fear of Death (DarkSoul98) Well done, I have never seen death depicted as a live entity before, To be...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:04
• WE ARE THE WEIRDOS AND THE STRANGE (Nancy Rdz LL) Hey Nancy welcome to this collective of weirdos and poets and weird poets...
  January 22nd, 2021 01:00
• Rose Petals in Vaults (A Boy With Roses) That wine is the poetic blood which daily courses through you and falls...
  January 21st, 2021 22:14
• Just Be (Julie B) Nor lose yourself in the chains of immature love. A caged tiger is no...
  January 21st, 2021 17:22
• Drawing Lesson (Jerry Reynolds) You mean my scribblings are wasteful? I resemble that remark.
  January 21st, 2021 11:25
• Paired (Fay Slimm.) You describe well the magic between two as they realise their feelings are...
  January 21st, 2021 04:37
• Calling And Choice (Orchidee) In all religions we see the intelligentsia depart from religious dogma in...
  January 21st, 2021 04:10
• We Are Still Here. (Goldfinch60) Positivity throughout. I await days when i may again be allowed to safely...
  January 21st, 2021 04:04
• AIM HIGH (Michael Edwards) I though this was going to be a peeing contest when i read the title. I...
  January 21st, 2021 04:01
• Spoiler Alert (PoeticBiscuit) LOL 4 years too late but most of the world saw where the election of Trump...
  January 21st, 2021 03:56
• Inauguration Day (Jerry Reynolds) chickens teeth tongue firmly in cheek just beak-cos
  January 20th, 2021 11:53
• A Collection of Slumbers (Neville) One of my ex\'s had a pair of secret drawers, on special occasions she...
  January 20th, 2021 08:05
• Walking This Way (Orchidee) \"Teach me your way oh lord\" - and how\'s the lord going to do that then?...
  January 20th, 2021 04:21
• Weaponry (Fay Slimm.) Built for predation. Such perfection is poetry itself. These are stunning...
  January 20th, 2021 04:20
• Oh Look! (Goldfinch60) May the weather be optimum for your activities sir. (Where\'s the \'now...
  January 20th, 2021 02:32