Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• You’re Always Hurting Me! (LittlePea) I\'m glad to read these times are behind you. Your piece speaks of the...
  June 20th, 2021 07:51
• Back in the Day (Neville) Reminiscences are the reward for having lived a fruitful younger...
  June 20th, 2021 07:49
• The New Day Ahead. (Goldfinch60) So true. I wish I was making better use of my days, too many going to...
  June 20th, 2021 07:46
• A Special Greeting to All Fathers and Father Figures (Laura🌻) Yessiree! And those lil critters the grandchildren too.
  June 20th, 2021 07:44
• Blues My Companion (Saxon Crow) Amen. Blues is the roots of all my playing.
  June 20th, 2021 07:43
• Thoughts (The Struggler) One spirit dwells within me, the spirit of life. It needs not any revered...
  June 19th, 2021 12:01
• A SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS (Andy Hunter) So very true. We can never really know how that smile can change anothers...
  June 19th, 2021 11:58
• A SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS (Andy Hunter)
  June 19th, 2021 11:57
• Where Do I Belong? (LittlePea) Welcome to the friendly fold which is MPS. Great opening poem with a...
  June 19th, 2021 09:44
• The Party In The Forest (Jayasree) I like it. I\'ve had dreams like this.
  June 19th, 2021 08:50
• Another night alone (Sandra) The sadness of desiring more than is available.
  June 19th, 2021 08:01
• June Vibrations (Fay Slimm.) Drenched in your words I am determined to take a drive into the...
  June 19th, 2021 06:44
• Memory To Come. (Goldfinch60) Lets hope there are plenty of good ones around the corner
  June 19th, 2021 06:41
• Good people in chains (Bernard Gabriel Okurut) Show me why the unthinking footsoldier does this to his fellow man. Why...
  June 18th, 2021 10:39
• The Bed Under the Ground (IAli) An amazing piece of writing about peace after death. Welcome to MPS....
  June 18th, 2021 10:34
• Neighbor Taken (Jerry Reynolds) Death. The end of a journey or a prize of selection for the next phase of...
  June 18th, 2021 10:30
• The Final Breath (The Struggler) Accepting a final breath will come as we transit is a signal of your own...
  June 18th, 2021 10:26
• Live And Let Live (Jayasree) Now wouldn\'t it be wonderful to follow your wise words and emerge post...
  June 18th, 2021 07:45
• Griddly Smethelton of Boffington Town (Saxon Crow) This is not to be sniffed at. More excellence from your story telling...
  June 18th, 2021 07:42
• Wisdom\'s Way - Wisdom Series (7) (Orchidee) Reminds me of Norman Wisdom. I didn\'t mean it Mr Grimsdale.
  June 18th, 2021 07:40
• What Is Life? (Goldfinch60) Life too is appreciating all the wonders around us, there for our...
  June 18th, 2021 06:34
• The Frangipani Tree (Jayasree) That\'s quite beautiful. I sight I would like to see. One for my...
  June 17th, 2021 01:55
• Music of my Heart (Dove) Wow! What it must be to have a piece like this written about you. I\'m so...
  June 17th, 2021 01:53
• Match Mask. (Goldfinch60) I\'ve met parking wardens like you. I\'m sure they must be human before...
  June 17th, 2021 01:50
• Bella (Saxon Crow) Such a loving poem about your loyal friend. I could picture her though i...
  June 17th, 2021 01:46
• Compare to her, Compare to me (Robbie GJ) Sad that there has been \'promoted\' a physical ideal. Beauty truly is in...
  June 16th, 2021 13:11
• DEATH (Advaitha) Ahem cool last line - stating the bleedin obvious - we are all gonna die...
  June 16th, 2021 08:55
• Wake Up Call (Advaitha) What a shame you forgot to give any hint of who \"THEY\" are in your piece...
  June 16th, 2021 08:52
• Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”) (AuburnScribbler) Live and let live.
  June 16th, 2021 06:44
• My Published Work on Amazon (Abu Aeesh) Are any of them readable? What are the sales figures like? Haven\'t seen...
  June 16th, 2021 06:43
• Not Meant (Fay Slimm.) A brief encounter, over the counter perhaps? A shiver or a wriggle, maybe...
  June 16th, 2021 05:54
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (2) (Michael Edwards) Great picture. Well guessing that your poetry is your sport, it\'s recent...
  June 16th, 2021 02:50
• Inside out (Sandra) You really touched me with this piece. I like to think I am an open book...
  June 16th, 2021 02:39
• Heart Hearing - Wisdom Series (5) (Orchidee) Nice one Orchi. I am a true follower of my heart
  June 16th, 2021 02:26
• Calmness Abounds (Goldfinch60) It is indeed a very relaxing piece. And now he played it just for me too.
  June 16th, 2021 01:13
• Blessings (Jayasree) You sit still and take stock of your blessings but still there is...
  June 16th, 2021 01:05
• Griddly Smetheltons Great Big Sneeze (Saxon Crow) At least on the bright side - he didn\'t follow through! A good laugh...
  June 16th, 2021 00:59
• Medieval self discovery (Blue Poet) Join the club. That\'s exactly what most of us are doing. But I\'m sure...
  June 16th, 2021 00:40
• Smile for the “camera” (Robbie GJ) Ouch! Good job not all men function as described.
  June 15th, 2021 18:07
• Perfect (Lily_) If ever there was a place to explore under the skin and let it all hang...
  June 15th, 2021 18:03
• I hate dawn. (Bernard Gabriel Okurut) You\'re kidding!
  June 15th, 2021 16:18
• The dopest drug (Blue Poet) Hmm many truths herein but hey lets blame this flippin pandemic for...
  June 15th, 2021 11:11
• What could go wrong? (Jerry Reynolds) Now what would one use to wet a roof with????? Guess I\'m trash too...
  June 15th, 2021 09:06
• The Planet Enterprise -1 (Advaitha) Is this the epitaph for the wealthiest organisation in the world - the...
  June 15th, 2021 08:12
• a sacred summer\'s day (Kevin Michael Bloor) All too easily done isn\'t it. But I hope you had wonderful dreams of that...
  June 15th, 2021 07:13
• Winter In Bahrain (Jayasree) Aaaah winter and no mention of snow, black ice, heavy frosts and freezing...
  June 15th, 2021 07:08
• Weeping Necromancer (A Boy With Roses) sshhudders !!!! Anyone who evokes the psycho in us is someone to run...
  June 15th, 2021 06:37
• Words #2 (Rebmasters) \"I sang for you of moonless nights and the call of the water. When...
  June 15th, 2021 06:31
• Sure Stone (Orchidee) I hope that\'s a typo when you write about the lord\'s \'ding\' Orchi (do...
  June 15th, 2021 06:17
• All Through Music. (Goldfinch60) Such stirring music. Joyce must have gained so much pleasure from being a...
  June 15th, 2021 06:06
• Unbreakable (Saxon Crow) Such a fine knowing tribute to motherly love and...
  June 15th, 2021 05:42
• Untitled - XLIII (SureshG) That\'s a good approximation of what\'s required to write my poetry.
  June 14th, 2021 16:42
• Nothing but a Keepsake (Neville) \"Memories light the corners of my mind, misty water...
  June 14th, 2021 11:44
• Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary) (AuburnScribbler) My sister once took me to a pub in Aslockton with her dawg. Big surprise...
  June 14th, 2021 11:40
• The party at the end of the world (Blue Poet) Whatever will be is beyond you and me and if those questions which...
  June 14th, 2021 06:59
• Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds) Oh so true Jerry you sage of wisdom. Having experienced too many car crash...
  June 14th, 2021 06:55
• A nightmare reality: titled Grenfell (L. B. Mek) Sickeningly we hear the loud voice of money speak when there are still...
  June 14th, 2021 06:43
• Show Us (Fay Slimm.) What a wonderful world we should have were your words of wisdom sincerely...
  June 14th, 2021 06:39
• Sanctuary of Peace. (Goldfinch60) The place you describe sounds wonderful, relaxing, reassuring.
  June 14th, 2021 06:36
• Sadness (Saxon Crow) But without TOO much self searching many of the answers are there ready...
  June 14th, 2021 06:34
• Between the place.. (Sandra) What you describe is treasure for the human soul way above any material...
  June 14th, 2021 06:32
• A Quilt Of Memories (Jayasree) Each night we sleep below a quilt of our life experiences don\'t we....
  June 14th, 2021 06:29
• Fog (Jerry Reynolds) =A seagul can spot a take-away in the thickest of fog.
  June 13th, 2021 16:01
• Whispering Dreams (Jayasree) Love those dreams spurring you on. Where would we poets be without...
  June 13th, 2021 11:00
• Branded (Fay Slimm.) Well a bit of sunshine\'s got the sap rising all over the place...
  June 13th, 2021 10:52
• Overcome (Neville) Disgracefully good! You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your...
  June 13th, 2021 09:06
• My New Lady. (Goldfinch60) I\'m listening to a few tracks and yes, she\'s a very relaxing lady.
  June 13th, 2021 08:53
• There Was So Much To Say (A Boy With Roses) There is still much to say and here you say it, your memories affect you,...
  June 12th, 2021 16:20
• Upon Bingham Market Square (AuburnScribbler) It is good to reject negativity, it hacks at one\'s vitality of life. I...
  June 12th, 2021 16:11
• Seizing Moments (Neville) When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry! Whilst passiion is a...
  June 12th, 2021 08:19
• Benign Benefits - Wisdom Series (3) (Orchidee) I never wander far from his guided path..... tugging ten tablets of stone...
  June 12th, 2021 08:14
• Which Is The Greater? (Goldfinch60) I think I have an answer.... the greater is the mind which asks the...
  June 12th, 2021 08:03
• What and Why (SureshG) A great time in a child\'s life..... a time of learning.... an opportunity...
  June 12th, 2021 07:59
• Faith#2 and Patience (Saxon Crow) Your hopes, your dreams, ambitions and heartaches are all found between...
  June 12th, 2021 07:48
• Sunset to Sunrise/Sunrise to Sunset 🌅 (Laura🌻) The love of life is poetry itself.
  June 12th, 2021 07:45
• Beautiful dream (TenderMe) Goodbye dream, now forever tainted. Patience awaits with the excitement of...
  June 12th, 2021 07:42
• How The Town Grows (MendedFences27) Super analogies. One for my favourites. Thank you
  June 12th, 2021 07:39
• Lavender in the Air (A Boy With Roses) Revealing the personal which has made you a poet.
  June 12th, 2021 07:38
• Unscathed (Jerry Reynolds) Red. A dirt road? Red is the vivid colour of passion still in your heart...
  June 12th, 2021 07:31
• Untitled - XLII (SureshG) What a wonderful sub-title this would make for any/every book of...
  June 11th, 2021 04:15
• Little Gems (Jayasree) I smiled widely reading your words and was genuinely filled with the...
  June 11th, 2021 04:10
• Love Bites (Fay Slimm.) \"Love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs any heart not tough, or...
  June 11th, 2021 03:33
• Nowhere Left to Bleed (Neville) Don\'t pull yer punches Neville. Tell it like it is. In her crazy...
  June 11th, 2021 02:53
• Clickety Clack Life (Saxon Crow) Don\'t ever lose that ticket but be sure to get it stamped at every...
  June 11th, 2021 02:50
• Emotions Pour Out. (Goldfinch60) All this from reading a book shows you are still very much alive my
  June 11th, 2021 02:36
• True Love (Ron parrish aka wordman) This certainly tugs at the heart strings. Very emotional piece.
  June 10th, 2021 13:11
• Haibun to Friends (Jerry Reynolds) And they try to put restrictions on foreign travel.... not on mps they...
  June 10th, 2021 11:25
• Who Dares (Fay Slimm.) They\'re marvelous creations those tenacious Otter. We have some in a...
  June 10th, 2021 04:34
• Wholesome Wisdom - Wisdom Series (2) (Orchidee) The dentist took away any wisdom I ever had.
  June 10th, 2021 04:30
• Never Too Late (Jayasree) And my, how you bloom with your finely woven words here on...
  June 10th, 2021 04:27
• Untitled - XLI (SureshG) The melody of life runs through your lines today in the beloved sight of...
  June 10th, 2021 04:18
• Feeling Flushed (Saxon Crow) Oh horror of horrors..... the last time this happened to me it was...
  June 10th, 2021 04:03
• Am I Just Getting Old? (Goldfinch60) Wjhats wrong with getting old? Where do I start??? People tell me i...
  June 10th, 2021 03:59
• Circle Fly’s (Jerry Reynolds) You deserve a prize for this one (thinking of a man with a huge comb-over...
  June 9th, 2021 09:11
• Hope (Jayasree) How true, tears are such cleansing droplets of repair. A new world opens...
  June 9th, 2021 02:53
• The Influencer (SureshG) Wanting to help others. Is that a need?
  June 9th, 2021 02:50
• The Promise of the Holy Spirit (Orchidee) I agree with Goldfinch\'s comment entirely. There was goodwill and charity...
  June 9th, 2021 02:48
• Humanity and Love. (Goldfinch60) And may harmony be our goal. Amen.
  June 9th, 2021 02:45
• Stolen moment (Saxon Crow) Yes, you have captured something intangible here which really does...
  June 9th, 2021 02:44
• Cardinal (Jerry Reynolds) Lovely vision of vivid colour against darkness.
  June 8th, 2021 11:27