Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Perfect (Lily_) If ever there was a place to explore under the skin and let it all hang...
  June 15th, 2021 18:03
• I hate dawn. (Bernard Gabriel Okurut) You\'re kidding!
  June 15th, 2021 16:18
• The dopest drug (Blue Poet) Hmm many truths herein but hey lets blame this flippin pandemic for...
  June 15th, 2021 11:11
• What could go wrong? (Jerry Reynolds) Now what would one use to wet a roof with????? Guess I\'m trash too...
  June 15th, 2021 09:06
• The Planet Enterprise -1 (Advaitha) Is this the epitaph for the wealthiest organisation in the world - the...
  June 15th, 2021 08:12
• a sacred summer\'s day (Kevin Michael Bloor) All too easily done isn\'t it. But I hope you had wonderful dreams of that...
  June 15th, 2021 07:13
• Winter In Bahrain (Jayasree) Aaaah winter and no mention of snow, black ice, heavy frosts and freezing...
  June 15th, 2021 07:08
• Weeping Necromancer (A Boy With Roses) sshhudders !!!! Anyone who evokes the psycho in us is someone to run...
  June 15th, 2021 06:37
• Words #2 (Rebmasters) \"I sang for you of moonless nights and the call of the water. When...
  June 15th, 2021 06:31
• Sure Stone (Orchidee) I hope that\'s a typo when you write about the lord\'s \'ding\' Orchi (do...
  June 15th, 2021 06:17
• All Through Music. (Goldfinch60) Such stirring music. Joyce must have gained so much pleasure from being a...
  June 15th, 2021 06:06
• Unbreakable (Saxon Crow) Such a fine knowing tribute to motherly love and...
  June 15th, 2021 05:42
• Untitled - XLIII (SureshG) That\'s a good approximation of what\'s required to write my poetry.
  June 14th, 2021 16:42
• Nothing but a Keepsake (Neville) \"Memories light the corners of my mind, misty water...
  June 14th, 2021 11:44
• Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary) (AuburnScribbler) My sister once took me to a pub in Aslockton with her dawg. Big surprise...
  June 14th, 2021 11:40
• The party at the end of the world (Blue Poet) Whatever will be is beyond you and me and if those questions which...
  June 14th, 2021 06:59
• Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds) Oh so true Jerry you sage of wisdom. Having experienced too many car crash...
  June 14th, 2021 06:55
• A nightmare reality: titled Grenfell (L. B. Mek) Sickeningly we hear the loud voice of money speak when there are still...
  June 14th, 2021 06:43
• Show Us (Fay Slimm.) What a wonderful world we should have were your words of wisdom sincerely...
  June 14th, 2021 06:39
• Sanctuary of Peace. (Goldfinch60) The place you describe sounds wonderful, relaxing, reassuring.
  June 14th, 2021 06:36
• Sadness (Saxon Crow) But without TOO much self searching many of the answers are there ready...
  June 14th, 2021 06:34
• Between the place.. (Sandra) What you describe is treasure for the human soul way above any material...
  June 14th, 2021 06:32
• A Quilt Of Memories (Jayasree) Each night we sleep below a quilt of our life experiences don\'t we....
  June 14th, 2021 06:29
• Fog (Jerry Reynolds) =A seagul can spot a take-away in the thickest of fog.
  June 13th, 2021 16:01
• Whispering Dreams (Jayasree) Love those dreams spurring you on. Where would we poets be without...
  June 13th, 2021 11:00
• Branded (Fay Slimm.) Well a bit of sunshine\'s got the sap rising all over the place...
  June 13th, 2021 10:52
• Overcome (Neville) Disgracefully good! You\'ve phrased this so well here to take your...
  June 13th, 2021 09:06
• My New Lady. (Goldfinch60) I\'m listening to a few tracks and yes, she\'s a very relaxing lady.
  June 13th, 2021 08:53
• There Was So Much To Say (A Boy With Roses) There is still much to say and here you say it, your memories affect you,...
  June 12th, 2021 16:20
• Upon Bingham Market Square (AuburnScribbler) It is good to reject negativity, it hacks at one\'s vitality of life. I...
  June 12th, 2021 16:11
• Seizing Moments (Neville) When passion becomes a whispering breeze - worry! Whilst passiion is a...
  June 12th, 2021 08:19
• Benign Benefits - Wisdom Series (3) (Orchidee) I never wander far from his guided path..... tugging ten tablets of stone...
  June 12th, 2021 08:14
• Which Is The Greater? (Goldfinch60) I think I have an answer.... the greater is the mind which asks the...
  June 12th, 2021 08:03
• What and Why (SureshG) A great time in a child\'s life..... a time of learning.... an opportunity...
  June 12th, 2021 07:59
• Faith#2 and Patience (Saxon Crow) Your hopes, your dreams, ambitions and heartaches are all found between...
  June 12th, 2021 07:48
• Sunset to Sunrise/Sunrise to Sunset 🌅 (Laura🌻) The love of life is poetry itself.
  June 12th, 2021 07:45
• Beautiful dream (TenderMe) Goodbye dream, now forever tainted. Patience awaits with the excitement of...
  June 12th, 2021 07:42
• How The Town Grows (MendedFences27) Super analogies. One for my favourites. Thank you
  June 12th, 2021 07:39
• Lavender in the Air (A Boy With Roses) Revealing the personal which has made you a poet.
  June 12th, 2021 07:38
• Unscathed (Jerry Reynolds) Red. A dirt road? Red is the vivid colour of passion still in your heart...
  June 12th, 2021 07:31
• Untitled - XLII (SureshG) What a wonderful sub-title this would make for any/every book of...
  June 11th, 2021 04:15
• Little Gems (Jayasree) I smiled widely reading your words and was genuinely filled with the...
  June 11th, 2021 04:10
• Love Bites (Fay Slimm.) \"Love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs any heart not tough, or...
  June 11th, 2021 03:33
• Nowhere Left to Bleed (Neville) Don\'t pull yer punches Neville. Tell it like it is. In her crazy...
  June 11th, 2021 02:53
• Clickety Clack Life (Saxon Crow) Don\'t ever lose that ticket but be sure to get it stamped at every...
  June 11th, 2021 02:50
• Emotions Pour Out. (Goldfinch60) All this from reading a book shows you are still very much alive my
  June 11th, 2021 02:36
• True Love (Ron parrish aka wordman) This certainly tugs at the heart strings. Very emotional piece.
  June 10th, 2021 13:11
• Haibun to Friends (Jerry Reynolds) And they try to put restrictions on foreign travel.... not on mps they...
  June 10th, 2021 11:25
• Who Dares (Fay Slimm.) They\'re marvelous creations those tenacious Otter. We have some in a...
  June 10th, 2021 04:34
• Wholesome Wisdom - Wisdom Series (2) (Orchidee) The dentist took away any wisdom I ever had.
  June 10th, 2021 04:30
• Never Too Late (Jayasree) And my, how you bloom with your finely woven words here on...
  June 10th, 2021 04:27
• Untitled - XLI (SureshG) The melody of life runs through your lines today in the beloved sight of...
  June 10th, 2021 04:18
• Feeling Flushed (Saxon Crow) Oh horror of horrors..... the last time this happened to me it was...
  June 10th, 2021 04:03
• Am I Just Getting Old? (Goldfinch60) Wjhats wrong with getting old? Where do I start??? People tell me i...
  June 10th, 2021 03:59
• Circle Fly’s (Jerry Reynolds) You deserve a prize for this one (thinking of a man with a huge comb-over...
  June 9th, 2021 09:11
• Hope (Jayasree) How true, tears are such cleansing droplets of repair. A new world opens...
  June 9th, 2021 02:53
• The Influencer (SureshG) Wanting to help others. Is that a need?
  June 9th, 2021 02:50
• The Promise of the Holy Spirit (Orchidee) I agree with Goldfinch\'s comment entirely. There was goodwill and charity...
  June 9th, 2021 02:48
• Humanity and Love. (Goldfinch60) And may harmony be our goal. Amen.
  June 9th, 2021 02:45
• Stolen moment (Saxon Crow) Yes, you have captured something intangible here which really does...
  June 9th, 2021 02:44
• Cardinal (Jerry Reynolds) Lovely vision of vivid colour against darkness.
  June 8th, 2021 11:27
• The Way Of Wisdom - Wisdom Series (1) (Orchidee) The church has long been anti wisdom if people did not see things the way...
  June 8th, 2021 02:44
• The Man In My Life. (Goldfinch60) You have chosen one of my absolute favourite pieces of music...
  June 8th, 2021 01:50
• WHAT I BELIEVE... (Jaimeleigh) Maybe if you read some of the poetry on here it would begin to restore...
  June 8th, 2021 01:37
• Cactus Days (Neville) Suck who\'s lance was that? A teenage called me a fat c.nt a while ago....
  June 7th, 2021 12:21
• Seize (Fay Slimm.) LOL the only times I look back with regret are upon the times i put my...
  June 7th, 2021 12:08
• Mustard Meditation (Orchidee) I am imagining you singing this fine piece u have penned (reaches for an...
  June 7th, 2021 02:26
• Forest (Jayasree) Well yes, you will know from my previous posts how i am in awe of the...
  June 7th, 2021 02:15
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (Michael Edwards) Wot no artwork? {ò¿ó} Meet me at the 19th hole, darn it.
  June 7th, 2021 02:02
• So Very Long Ago. (Goldfinch60) As a man who latterly used his hands to earn a crust in the construction...
  June 7th, 2021 01:57
• Natures Monet (Saxon Crow) Love it, so glad you are posting again. This is one for my fav\'s for...
  June 7th, 2021 01:51
• Linda (Jerry Reynolds) Contentment.
  June 6th, 2021 09:39
• Enchantment (Fay Slimm.) Ah those childhood hot summer days of boundless energy. Still there i\'m...
  June 6th, 2021 08:14
• The Edge of Golden (Neville) Said the spiderr to the fly.
  June 6th, 2021 08:10
• Communing Company (Orchidee) Symbolic cannibalism. Drinking his blood and eating his flesh.
  June 6th, 2021 08:06
• The Earth Is Healing (Jayasree) But the oceans were no less full of human waste plastics pollution and now...
  June 6th, 2021 03:03
• Tears Stream Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Life goes on along it\'s journey for a purpose unrevealed to us.
  June 6th, 2021 02:15
• Estuary (Saxon Crow) Superb analogy. Each tide beyond my control. May there be many more...
  June 6th, 2021 02:13
• THE BREAK UP (Andy Hunter) You express the uglyness of being on the wrong side of a break-up well...
  June 5th, 2021 07:38
• New History (Saxon Crow) Here we are with a government doing its best to do the right thing so that...
  June 5th, 2021 07:30
• Don\'t cry ... (TenderMe) Good positive words. Tears though have an afterglow, we always feel...
  June 5th, 2021 06:58
• The Blue Planet (Jayasree) Until EVERYONE realises they must do their bit we are fighting a losing...
  June 5th, 2021 06:53
• Meditative Moments (Orchidee) Sexism at play here.
  June 5th, 2021 06:49
• Out of the blue (Jerry Reynolds) Brilliant. Short, sweet, punchy. Goes into my fav\'s.
  June 5th, 2021 06:34
• Unspooled (Fay Slimm.) Who knows what maelstrom our minds may be swept into if dementia choses to...
  June 5th, 2021 06:27
• As Yet Unforgiven (Neville) Really good use of the double negative in that last line. This piece wins...
  June 5th, 2021 06:19
• The Day Is Ended. (Goldfinch60) I love this piece. I bet you felt incredibly moved. Your so good to...
  June 5th, 2021 06:15
• RANDOM THOUGHTS ON COMPLEX ISSUES (Michael Edwards) Before stepping outside your own front door it is prudent to ensure all at...
  June 5th, 2021 05:51
• Kintsugi (Saxon Crow) So long as you are both happy to keep using the repaired relationship, it...
  June 5th, 2021 05:48
• Aged Dreams (MendedFences27) Ah yes, those young idealistic days matured into an acceptable truce of...
  June 4th, 2021 14:32
• Not Forgotten (Jerry Reynolds) Some love opportunities benefit from being cut short so that we may live...
  June 4th, 2021 07:56
• sometimes it hurts more than others (Queer-with-a-pen) Very disturbing personal revelations from you today. My words are to...
  June 4th, 2021 04:54
• Alone (TenderMe) Those times of sadness and soul searching which we all must pass through...
  June 4th, 2021 04:23
• A Precious Drought (Neville) Violet shaded tears of amethyst treasure long loving moments of...
  June 4th, 2021 04:06
• Mercy Musings (Orchidee) This reads like a section of Orchidee\'s concise revised bible. Well at...
  June 4th, 2021 02:27
• The Cat In The Window (Jayasree) Who knows what the mind of a cat perceives. But you certainly give us...
  June 4th, 2021 02:24
• Challenges (Fay Slimm.) Yes indeed Fay for now i am taking on a bent and twisted stance myself. It...
  June 4th, 2021 02:19
• Tapestry of Scars (Saxon Crow) Such wonderful words which reach into our soul. When confidence is damaged...
  June 4th, 2021 02:14
• Orchid Love. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful message of undying love Goldfinch.
  June 4th, 2021 02:09
• The beauty of tenderness (TenderMe) A truly tender loving poem.
  June 3rd, 2021 07:12