Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- of Destiny (L. B. Mek)
Three good questions upon which to wisely ponder and one resounding...
December 4th, 2020 06:59 - Morecombe 2 (Goldfinch60)
No one can write them like wot you wrote!
Get out of that.... you can\'t...
December 4th, 2020 06:46 - Un-Vocal (Fay Slimm.)
Cor! This made me think about silence, my silence poetically. \"Nowt to...
December 4th, 2020 06:42 - My life (Caz84)
Having just discovered you on here i had to see more of your poetry. You...
December 4th, 2020 06:31 - Although I weep... (Caz84)
This is quite beautiful. Hard to believe such a wonderful piece could be...
December 4th, 2020 06:25 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (2) (Michael Edwards)
Hv u vvr trd wrtng wth s mny vwls mssng s pssbl. thyr jst nt rlly mprtnt r...
December 4th, 2020 02:49 - Rainbows of your Love (Fatlass)
Wow! The quality of your poetry is excellent.
A very personal and moving...
December 4th, 2020 02:43 - December Sunset (Fay Slimm.)
By gum, on a day like that rush off home for a good hot cuppa and a hearty...
December 2nd, 2020 04:13 - RECALLING (Michael Edwards)
Before i start to read, I have to compliment you on a cracking picture...
December 2nd, 2020 04:06 - With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60)
Wish i had a nearby river. The Severn is a bit of a jaunt away through the...
December 2nd, 2020 03:59 - Heavens door (Fatlass)
This is damned good poetry. Well thought out and composed with brilliant...
December 1st, 2020 19:18 - Broken chains, no more crying shame! (Poetic Dan)
Peace, harmony, compromise. Live and let live without turning your back on...
December 1st, 2020 19:10 - Remaining Span (Suresh)
If time be on our hands at the fall of the day, as dusk arises from the...
November 30th, 2020 10:31 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
The greatest emotion we know is love and love of the romantic kind brings...
November 30th, 2020 10:16 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely right. It\'s pointless looking for someone else to do that...
November 30th, 2020 03:07 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
Ah yes that wonderful time each day as our planet home turns us away from...
November 28th, 2020 04:35 - Choice. (Goldfinch60)
But i get blank looks when i venture out, which is quite rare these...
November 28th, 2020 03:42 - In the End (Neville)
November 28th, 2020 00:34 - In the End (Neville)
Grrr at arithmetic in poetry.
Let us be thankful that our deaths are to...
November 28th, 2020 00:34 - Broken Me (SimonW1997)
Forget people trying to teach you rules. Rules will only restrict your...
November 27th, 2020 19:00 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
As a foreigner to your shores, one wonders if those native american...
November 27th, 2020 05:57 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
Your muse is showing.
What wonderful things love does to us ..... to...
November 27th, 2020 05:49 - Solutions (Fay Slimm.)
Scented solutions become the essential oils of a good loving...
November 27th, 2020 05:40 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
I can imagine you sat on your captains log, reading a copy of the...
November 27th, 2020 02:46 - HARD CHEESE (Michael Edwards)
As i said to the milkman \'dairy Lee\' this morning. I think you\'re...
November 27th, 2020 00:48 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
There\'s a sweet-spot on their \'rim\' and dance they surely will but........
November 26th, 2020 15:27 - Tabernacle Time (Orchidee)
I took your list to Lidl but could find none of it on the shelves.
I...
November 26th, 2020 03:11 - IF (Fay Slimm.)
A true reminiscence, with absolutely no distractions, can indeed be a very...
November 26th, 2020 03:07 - What else is there to do! (Poetic Dan)
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair,...
November 26th, 2020 02:20 - Suburban Solidarity (Doggerel Dave)
If the system is against ya..... chop the bugger down. Or drill a hole in...
November 26th, 2020 00:45 - I rhyme better than I can act (Poetic Dan)
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines...
November 26th, 2020 00:38 - Challenge (Fay Slimm.)
Resilience, but we\'re not born with it. It is a life skill we learn or...
November 25th, 2020 05:26 - In My Mind. (Goldfinch60)
There are bound to be days like that. You are a strong and philosophical,...
November 25th, 2020 02:35 - Poetry in motion (Poetic Dan)
That video says so much about you and your empathy, understanding and love...
November 24th, 2020 04:12 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
The bringing together of love\'s desire and fantasy with the tangible...
November 24th, 2020 04:04 - Nature\'s Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
\"The colours of the rainbow, so pretty in the sky, are also on the faces...
November 24th, 2020 04:01 - Seize (Fay Slimm.)
The here and the now
I would steer from the prow
glancing not one look...
November 23rd, 2020 10:32 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
I find it quite possible
to miscount my syllables
but it\'s rather...
November 23rd, 2020 04:11 - It Is So Easy. (Goldfinch60)
Until i read the third line i thought you were going to tell us how to...
November 23rd, 2020 03:30 - Nature - got to be a winner!? (Doggerel Dave)
(sing to tune of I\'m all shook up)
Affixed to my sole
from out some...
November 23rd, 2020 01:41 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
There will always be a beacon light for eyes which see a future.
A light...
November 22nd, 2020 13:32 - With Every Step. (Goldfinch60)
The current is steady but the flow is deep, strong and perpetual. A motion...
November 22nd, 2020 13:24 - In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove)
Be positive, for in your life there has been the joy of love which is...
November 21st, 2020 10:35 - Aperitif (Neville)
These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of...
November 21st, 2020 09:06 - Re-Forming (Fay Slimm.)
Oh I know where you are coming from and in any other year I would be...
November 21st, 2020 08:59 - This Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Some people call what you have described and \'mindfulness\'. As if...
November 21st, 2020 08:45 - UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards)
The ambulance.
There to rescue us in times of dire need.
Yet, alarmed at...
November 21st, 2020 08:41 - My Joy (Christina8)
Great time of year but brrrrr isn\'t it cold. Great tribute to our...
November 21st, 2020 08:04 - Deconstruction (Sylviasearcher)
Are these the words of unfulfilled emotion us poets experience when we...
November 20th, 2020 06:18 - Reflections on Love. (Fay Slimm.)
It is sad to see the words of loves frailty here. Their meaning can only...
November 20th, 2020 06:12 - UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards)
A set of symptoms which wont let go of me
Are the after effects of...
November 20th, 2020 05:55 - How Far. (Goldfinch60)
Though looking back is inevitable, at our age having something, or the...
November 20th, 2020 05:48 - Walk Away (Clara)
Here i quote an old song \"love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs...
November 19th, 2020 18:47 - That’s life (Arazimus)
Oh so true. Once one realises it has taken a hold, it is time to get rid...
November 19th, 2020 17:06 - 5. Humble B. Bumble : Beeside signs (Aa Harvey)
Well i for one am enjoying your continuing story. I hope you are having a...
November 19th, 2020 11:39 - Time & space (Poetic Dan)
I agree. Time and space and things mellow..... sharp edges fall of...
November 19th, 2020 07:46 - Silent Music (Fay Slimm.)
Bring on again the warmer days when you may sit among the flowers or walk...
November 19th, 2020 07:38 - Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60)
Ah the pleasure of being lost in a good book. Pleasures i reserve for...
November 19th, 2020 07:34 - PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards)
How our hearts sing for the renewal of spring. This year more than ever we...
November 19th, 2020 07:31 - Windfallen (Neville)
Fallen fruit indeed. For our fields have not seen the fruit of our youth...
November 19th, 2020 07:23 - Promised Land (Last Shadow)
How come that since January 2018 you only were interested enough in poetry...
November 18th, 2020 15:48 - Promised Land (Last Shadow)
Who\'s promises are they though?
November 18th, 2020 11:46 - If You’re Anything Like Me (Jbritt321)
Been there, done that. The T-shirt isn\'t warm enough these days...
November 18th, 2020 11:45 - 4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee! (Aa Harvey)
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42 - Feelings (Fay Slimm.)
Deep felt longing pours from your words. Sleepless nights of unfulfilled...
November 18th, 2020 09:50 - Trench Life (Neville)
Madness isn\'t. And had they not been mown down by machine gun fire what...
November 18th, 2020 09:43 - Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60)
Well we all started somewhere.
P.S. I dont live in a wellie in Glos but...
November 18th, 2020 09:34 - - Division - (PoeticBiscuit)
Which country is that?
November 17th, 2020 21:11 - Anomalous (Jbritt321)
Seems like they are the wrong society for you to be mixing in.
November 17th, 2020 14:25 - 3. Humble B. Bumble : Bee my guest (Aa Harvey)
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover....
November 17th, 2020 14:24 - Us (Starbuks)
Looks like that day you mentioned in the first line of your poem has...
November 17th, 2020 11:05 - A Preaching Précis (Orchidee)
I think it is man (the religious christian man in this case) who stands in...
November 17th, 2020 10:23 - Hippies. (Goldfinch60)
Well they had a point, I was too young at 15 in the summer of love to...
November 17th, 2020 10:16 - SHORTLIES (4) (Michael Edwards)
Firstly before i read your post, dammit thats a really appealing piece of...
November 17th, 2020 10:08 - Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave)
Somebody stole my dad\'s car with my essay in it whilst i was in the...
November 17th, 2020 10:01 - Haze (Jbritt321)
Reads like you are hungry to move on. The future is out there an on its...
November 17th, 2020 09:57 - Until I did (Lonelyraccoon)
This is an excellent piece of poetry. It displays what I have taken to...
November 17th, 2020 09:54 - Gone (Neville)
Really? Is there no way to get rid of you? just kidding.
I suppose...
November 16th, 2020 16:08 - 2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie) (Aa Harvey)
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the...
November 16th, 2020 11:27 - I want (Jeffrey Roy)
It would worry me a bit to enter a relationship with someone who is needy....
November 16th, 2020 06:05 - Servant Sheep (Orchidee)
And were in the precepts does it say go to church or even that a church is...
November 16th, 2020 05:45 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
Your first three verses take me on yet another familiarity infused trip of...
November 16th, 2020 05:38 - Mediators of life (Poetic Dan)
Yes I agree. Surely out first responsibilities are to respect and protect...
November 16th, 2020 05:28 - Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Tell me about it, after chemotherapy had it\'s way with my memory cells...
November 16th, 2020 05:26 - Living Questions (DesertWords)
And perhaps compromise comes later still. Some questions are so huge we...
November 15th, 2020 07:46 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
I fell from a tree
where i had no place to be
The school of hard...
November 15th, 2020 07:43 - I am pure poetry (Poetic Dan)
Dan, please never lose sight of what you are today. You are an authority...
November 15th, 2020 07:38 - A PATRIOT I (or A DOUBLE WHAMMY) (Michael Edwards)
Absolutely agree with you here. Yet eyes blinded by dogma will think you a...
November 15th, 2020 07:21 - Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60)
Historically the organised christian churches, especially that catholic...
November 15th, 2020 07:08 - Becoming...Human – Silk Dance (Nafis Light)
Thats just what i used to love about trance.
November 14th, 2020 09:48 - Children of nature (Poetic Dan)
I Watched the Video then read your short poem. I\'ll, tell you what, I...
November 14th, 2020 09:46 - Happy Diwali 2020 (Suresh)
May the lights remain in your soul to light your future wellbeing. Stay...
November 14th, 2020 09:36 - Such a Good Start. (Goldfinch60)
Well, what can I say about Weather Report.... I have all the studio...
November 14th, 2020 03:59 - Becoming...Human – Poetic DAN (Nafis Light)
A good character capture of our Poetic Dan.
Poetry is therapy.
November 13th, 2020 11:43 - Where Did This Come From? (Goldfinch60)
When it comes to the subject of music, then the lyric \"there is always...
November 13th, 2020 09:37 - Co-Existence (Fay Slimm.)
Co-existence. Acceptance, forgiving, overlooking, chiding, learning,...
November 12th, 2020 08:16 - Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60)
I share your joy of the beautiful world expressed so simply in your words...
November 12th, 2020 08:09 - Maarii lullaby returns (Poetic Dan)
Dan, it\'s so good to see you writing about someone you love and feeling...
November 12th, 2020 08:03 - War-Usage (Fay Slimm.)
Your well chosen feature of our young men and boys marching into war...
November 11th, 2020 08:02 - Winning. (Goldfinch60)
Oh yes, we have to be big enough and ugly enough to take it on the chin...
November 11th, 2020 07:55
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