Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Another Golden Dawn (Neville) There will always be a beacon light for eyes which see a future. A light...
  November 22nd, 2020 13:32
• With Every Step. (Goldfinch60) The current is steady but the flow is deep, strong and perpetual. A motion...
  November 22nd, 2020 13:24
• In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove) Be positive, for in your life there has been the joy of love which is...
  November 21st, 2020 10:35
• Aperitif (Neville) These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of...
  November 21st, 2020 09:06
• Re-Forming (Fay Slimm.) Oh I know where you are coming from and in any other year I would be...
  November 21st, 2020 08:59
• This Moment. (Goldfinch60) Some people call what you have described and \'mindfulness\'. As if...
  November 21st, 2020 08:45
• UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards) The ambulance. There to rescue us in times of dire need. Yet, alarmed at...
  November 21st, 2020 08:41
• My Joy (Christina8) Great time of year but brrrrr isn\'t it cold. Great tribute to our...
  November 21st, 2020 08:04
• Deconstruction (Sylviasearcher) Are these the words of unfulfilled emotion us poets experience when we...
  November 20th, 2020 06:18
• Reflections on Love. (Fay Slimm.) It is sad to see the words of loves frailty here. Their meaning can only...
  November 20th, 2020 06:12
• UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards) A set of symptoms which wont let go of me Are the after effects of...
  November 20th, 2020 05:55
• How Far. (Goldfinch60) Though looking back is inevitable, at our age having something, or the...
  November 20th, 2020 05:48
• Walk Away (Clara) Here i quote an old song \"love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs...
  November 19th, 2020 18:47
• That’s life (Arazimus) Oh so true. Once one realises it has taken a hold, it is time to get rid...
  November 19th, 2020 17:06
• 5. Humble B. Bumble : Beeside signs (Aa Harvey) Well i for one am enjoying your continuing story. I hope you are having a...
  November 19th, 2020 11:39
• Time & space (Poetic Dan) I agree. Time and space and things mellow..... sharp edges fall of...
  November 19th, 2020 07:46
• Silent Music (Fay Slimm.) Bring on again the warmer days when you may sit among the flowers or walk...
  November 19th, 2020 07:38
• Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60) Ah the pleasure of being lost in a good book. Pleasures i reserve for...
  November 19th, 2020 07:34
• PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards) How our hearts sing for the renewal of spring. This year more than ever we...
  November 19th, 2020 07:31
• Windfallen (Neville) Fallen fruit indeed. For our fields have not seen the fruit of our youth...
  November 19th, 2020 07:23
• Promised Land (Last Shadow) How come that since January 2018 you only were interested enough in poetry...
  November 18th, 2020 15:48
• Promised Land (Last Shadow) Who\'s promises are they though?
  November 18th, 2020 11:46
• If You’re Anything Like Me (Jbritt321) Been there, done that. The T-shirt isn\'t warm enough these days...
  November 18th, 2020 11:45
• 4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee! (Aa Harvey) Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
  November 18th, 2020 11:42
• Feelings (Fay Slimm.) Deep felt longing pours from your words. Sleepless nights of unfulfilled...
  November 18th, 2020 09:50
• Trench Life (Neville) Madness isn\'t. And had they not been mown down by machine gun fire what...
  November 18th, 2020 09:43
• Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60) Well we all started somewhere. P.S. I dont live in a wellie in Glos but...
  November 18th, 2020 09:34
• - Division - (PoeticBiscuit) Which country is that?
  November 17th, 2020 21:11
• Anomalous (Jbritt321) Seems like they are the wrong society for you to be mixing in.
  November 17th, 2020 14:25
• 3. Humble B. Bumble : Bee my guest (Aa Harvey) So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover....
  November 17th, 2020 14:24
• Us (Starbuks) Looks like that day you mentioned in the first line of your poem has...
  November 17th, 2020 11:05
• A Preaching Précis (Orchidee) I think it is man (the religious christian man in this case) who stands in...
  November 17th, 2020 10:23
• Hippies. (Goldfinch60) Well they had a point, I was too young at 15 in the summer of love to...
  November 17th, 2020 10:16
• SHORTLIES (4) (Michael Edwards) Firstly before i read your post, dammit thats a really appealing piece of...
  November 17th, 2020 10:08
• Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave) Somebody stole my dad\'s car with my essay in it whilst i was in the...
  November 17th, 2020 10:01
• Haze (Jbritt321) Reads like you are hungry to move on. The future is out there an on its...
  November 17th, 2020 09:57
• Until I did (Lonelyraccoon) This is an excellent piece of poetry. It displays what I have taken to...
  November 17th, 2020 09:54
• Gone (Neville) Really? Is there no way to get rid of you? just kidding. I suppose...
  November 16th, 2020 16:08
• 2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie) (Aa Harvey) Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the...
  November 16th, 2020 11:27
• I want (Jeffrey Roy) It would worry me a bit to enter a relationship with someone who is needy....
  November 16th, 2020 06:05
• Servant Sheep (Orchidee) And were in the precepts does it say go to church or even that a church is...
  November 16th, 2020 05:45
• Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.) Your first three verses take me on yet another familiarity infused trip of...
  November 16th, 2020 05:38
• Mediators of life (Poetic Dan) Yes I agree. Surely out first responsibilities are to respect and protect...
  November 16th, 2020 05:28
• Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60) Tell me about it, after chemotherapy had it\'s way with my memory cells...
  November 16th, 2020 05:26
• Living Questions (DesertWords) And perhaps compromise comes later still. Some questions are so huge we...
  November 15th, 2020 07:46
• A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville) I fell from a tree where i had no place to be The school of hard...
  November 15th, 2020 07:43
• I am pure poetry (Poetic Dan) Dan, please never lose sight of what you are today. You are an authority...
  November 15th, 2020 07:38
• A PATRIOT I (or A DOUBLE WHAMMY) (Michael Edwards) Absolutely agree with you here. Yet eyes blinded by dogma will think you a...
  November 15th, 2020 07:21
• Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60) Historically the organised christian churches, especially that catholic...
  November 15th, 2020 07:08
• Becoming...Human – Silk Dance (Nafis Light) Thats just what i used to love about trance.
  November 14th, 2020 09:48
• Children of nature (Poetic Dan) I Watched the Video then read your short poem. I\'ll, tell you what, I...
  November 14th, 2020 09:46
• Happy Diwali 2020 (Suresh) May the lights remain in your soul to light your future wellbeing. Stay...
  November 14th, 2020 09:36
• Such a Good Start. (Goldfinch60) Well, what can I say about Weather Report.... I have all the studio...
  November 14th, 2020 03:59
• Becoming...Human – Poetic DAN (Nafis Light) A good character capture of our Poetic Dan. Poetry is therapy.
  November 13th, 2020 11:43
• Where Did This Come From? (Goldfinch60) When it comes to the subject of music, then the lyric \"there is always...
  November 13th, 2020 09:37
• Co-Existence (Fay Slimm.) Co-existence. Acceptance, forgiving, overlooking, chiding, learning,...
  November 12th, 2020 08:16
• Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60) I share your joy of the beautiful world expressed so simply in your words...
  November 12th, 2020 08:09
• Maarii lullaby returns (Poetic Dan) Dan, it\'s so good to see you writing about someone you love and feeling...
  November 12th, 2020 08:03
• War-Usage (Fay Slimm.) Your well chosen feature of our young men and boys marching into war...
  November 11th, 2020 08:02
• Winning. (Goldfinch60) Oh yes, we have to be big enough and ugly enough to take it on the chin...
  November 11th, 2020 07:55
• POEM FOR A WINTER\'S NIGHT (Michael Edwards) ooh by \'eck, you\'ve inspired me to write about a winter\'s night. I\'ll...
  November 11th, 2020 07:53
• Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) No one but you Fay can romance the taste of home made wine with the...
  November 10th, 2020 07:36
• Cinema Paridiso. (Goldfinch60) Some have the gift of embodying emotion into their creative pieces be they...
  November 10th, 2020 07:30
• love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st) Congratulations, you\'re getting worse. You\'re so vain is the correct...
  November 9th, 2020 18:59
• Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8) Blimey, u don\'t half rely on some dodgy background stories. Adam and eve...
  November 9th, 2020 13:07
• Back There (Fay Slimm.) Dreamed of home, whilst surrounded by deaths active machine of war not...
  November 9th, 2020 10:19
• Somewhere Between Trees (Neville) The golden years. For some there may just golden days but gold is gold and...
  November 9th, 2020 09:58
• The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60) There\'s no rush to take that final journey yet. Plenty of needs for you...
  November 9th, 2020 09:48
• Unsung (Fay Slimm.) Nature does her beautiful fine costumery over grounds once swept with...
  November 8th, 2020 09:43
• Nevafar (Neville) Somethings are said and linger. They tease hope when time should have...
  November 8th, 2020 09:02
• Revering Remembrance (Orchidee) Onward christian soldaten mitt der cross of jesus leading us to kill and...
  November 8th, 2020 06:53
• A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves) Nice one me old china! Brought back memories like it was only down the...
  November 8th, 2020 05:25
• Clouds (Bay) Lovely positive appreciation of the wonderful world we live in and of...
  November 8th, 2020 05:19
• SHORTLIES (2) (Michael Edwards) She stood on the bridge at midnight looking awful and feeling woosey a...
  November 8th, 2020 05:15
• The QUEEN (FineB) Yes, the noble beauty, around whom strategic forces move. Respect her...
  November 8th, 2020 05:07
• Happy Anniversary Joyce. (Goldfinch60) Such a moving piece today. Your heart is surrounded in the strength of the...
  November 8th, 2020 04:58
• A Taxonomy of Knowledge Warren Gaston (Warren Gaston) Good fun, certainly raised a laugh in me.... more please.
  November 7th, 2020 09:44
• MERRY CHRISTMAS (Last Shadow) Are you planning on surviving till christmas.... it\'s all of 46 days...
  November 7th, 2020 09:41
• PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK (AiR - Atman in Ravi) Happiness is peace of mind. Does not need so many words and verses as...
  November 7th, 2020 07:57
• Returning Reality - Isaiah Series (18) (Orchidee) Guide me oh great jehova!... but does a guide arrive at all.... is the...
  November 7th, 2020 06:21
• Panic Attack (Gray) Sex shouldnt feel like that... have you considered a new mattress?
  November 7th, 2020 06:18
• The Bishop (FineB) One\'s bishop should always be respected and brought into play only when a...
  November 7th, 2020 05:54
• Unity of Opposites (Neville) Opposites are often closer than is apparent in the sphere of human...
  November 7th, 2020 05:50
• Asking (Fay Slimm.) Ah and here we see the mind at work behind the reticence..... you have a...
  November 7th, 2020 05:45
• Total Confusion. (Goldfinch60) Reggae version = https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5tVhHDH4aDA or on a...
  November 7th, 2020 05:42
• Hunger (Fay Slimm.) How many indeed. These brave home makers, wives and mothers placing their...
  November 2nd, 2020 04:11
• Survive Limerick. (Goldfinch60) On my TV are MP\'s imploring Stay at home even if it\'s quite...
  November 2nd, 2020 03:56
• Everyday is Halloween (Arobot) Halloween was wild here in UK. I wish everday could be so invigorating. It...
  November 1st, 2020 17:52
• Sidewalk Cracks III (SheWasTheSun) I found it behind the wallpaper in a bedsit i had many years ago. It was...
  November 1st, 2020 17:49
• The Genesis connection (Gerrylegister) Genesis is so abviously a myth written by a man... clearly there were no...
  November 1st, 2020 09:41
• Joker44’s Side – Keep on Living...Aftermath (Nafis Light) Good positive stuff, damn shame it is at a time when so much is in...
  November 1st, 2020 07:37
• Heydays (Fay Slimm.) Lovely. Weren\'t those days of simple pleasures so wonderful... and now we...
  November 1st, 2020 06:36
• Little Shepherdesses (Neville) What a lovely bright and dare i say \'jolly\' poem. Great light hearted...
  November 1st, 2020 06:29
• Saints Splendorous (Orchidee) That feeding of the five thousand with a few scraps of food. Were there...
  November 1st, 2020 03:38
• Autumns Wonder. (Goldfinch60) Nice one and oh how i miss it... staying locked away for self...
  November 1st, 2020 03:33
• UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards) I agree, three good ones and clever. Beyond my scope to contribute this...
  November 1st, 2020 03:29
• On Tour. (Doggerel Dave) Great poem, horrendous accommodation. I never stay in pubs for all the...
  October 31st, 2020 17:51
• Joker44’s Side – Emotionally Attractive (Nafis Light) It would be easy to write that broken wings maketh the poet Joker but I am...
  October 31st, 2020 04:52
• Returning And Restoration - Isaiah Series (15) (Orchidee) Are those all your words or did another man write them..... putting words...
  October 31st, 2020 04:32
• The Witching Hours. (Goldfinch60) I hate to dampen your enthusiasm but i think it\'s going to rain on your...
  October 31st, 2020 04:30