Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Ah... my friend in Bretforton. Worth trying a ghost ale in that pub....
December 11th, 2020 05:44 - Rather than crank up the heat... (Rew4er2nail)
Hmmm those Btu\'s are a thing of the past in Britain since sometime back...
December 10th, 2020 16:27 - Nowness. (Fay Slimm.)
Firstly, well done using your chosen layout. It really works for pace and...
December 10th, 2020 10:28 - SHOW ME GOD (Amon)
My word, you\'ve really been sucked into this religion con by the look of...
December 10th, 2020 07:00 - Wholesome Way (Orchidee)
You should have a choir perform your pieces Orchidee.
Where can i learn...
December 10th, 2020 04:31 - More back In Return. (Goldfinch60)
Very true Goldfinch but we must be careful of not making people feel bad...
December 10th, 2020 02:43 - Turning And Trusting (Orchidee)
This LORD fellah, i thought he was supposed to be the god of love and now...
December 9th, 2020 09:42 - Humanity needs pollen & seeds (Poetic Dan)
If we could all flow at the same time and in the same direction then what...
December 9th, 2020 08:00 - Applause (Fay Slimm.)
The love of the wonders of nature shines through so strong in your poetry...
December 9th, 2020 07:53 - Tapestry of Words. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed they do, having been chosen with feeling totally suited to the...
December 9th, 2020 02:19 - Nostalgia (Fay Slimm.)
Oh yes, I\'d greedily accept a generous serving of that. Open up the...
December 8th, 2020 07:25 - Poem, Love Is, Love Moves? (AwHec8)
Blimey! You make it sound like a military campaign followed by...
December 7th, 2020 15:52 - Swansong (Neville)
It\'s a surprise i\'ve lasted this long. Long enough to admit, I like your...
December 7th, 2020 09:37 - Never too late, to reflect (L. B. Mek)
Why was i thinking about Trump as i read this?
December 7th, 2020 05:50 - Knowledge & unknown (Poetic Dan)
So much going on in your post today and your video is again...
December 7th, 2020 05:46 - William (Fay Slimm.)
I have seen some of his wonderful photography from the Scott expedition...
December 7th, 2020 05:39 - I pluck the sun from my pocket (Trenz Pruca)
What a little beauty you pen today.
December 7th, 2020 05:31 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (4) (Michael Edwards)
M.E. gave out shrewd advice
but the side effects weren\'t very...
December 7th, 2020 05:30 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
Nice music whilst i read your tribute. Of course i float away on the...
December 7th, 2020 05:18 - I hated that moment when (Lexbry)
Wow, so much passion for the negative in your post. Is that all there...
December 6th, 2020 06:39 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards)
Twere as if his words were soup
served up in a dish
of...
December 6th, 2020 06:35 - Carbonito de Sophie (Neville)
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ ...
December 6th, 2020 06:32 - To School. (Goldfinch60)
I went to many different schools often having to travel by bus to get...
December 6th, 2020 06:28 - Poetry is guiding me (Poetic Dan)
Poetry... is like an expression of what is inside us.... our poetry is as...
December 6th, 2020 05:58 - Groundhog Day (Neville)
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft...
December 5th, 2020 11:46 - Dear mother (Poetic Dan)
I bet it felt good to write those words Dan.
Lately your posts are...
December 5th, 2020 06:08 - She Was Standing There. (Goldfinch60)
Of course she was there for you. Always there for you in days passed and...
December 5th, 2020 06:04 - PASSION OVERHEATED (Michael Edwards)
Lorra wisdom in that!
December 5th, 2020 05:59 - Doubts (Birddie Jane)
Well, your future belongs to you not to him.
December 5th, 2020 05:52 - Tea with Mrs. Keeling (Jerry Reynolds)
A young person might wonder how we all managed to grow up with chipped and...
December 4th, 2020 18:35 - Doubts (Birddie Jane)
Terrible theme to be living under. If this was really happening you\'d...
December 4th, 2020 18:30 - Unadulterated anger (Mocuisle)
This reads like a keyboard warriors rant LOL....
Obviously you\'re...
December 4th, 2020 16:08 - A World Without Them (Carolkirby1952)
As will the children and grandchildren live in a world without us.
With...
December 4th, 2020 07:10 - of Destiny (L. B. Mek)
Three good questions upon which to wisely ponder and one resounding...
December 4th, 2020 06:59 - Morecombe 2 (Goldfinch60)
No one can write them like wot you wrote!
Get out of that.... you can\'t...
December 4th, 2020 06:46 - Un-Vocal (Fay Slimm.)
Cor! This made me think about silence, my silence poetically. \"Nowt to...
December 4th, 2020 06:42 - My life (Caz84)
Having just discovered you on here i had to see more of your poetry. You...
December 4th, 2020 06:31 - Although I weep... (Caz84)
This is quite beautiful. Hard to believe such a wonderful piece could be...
December 4th, 2020 06:25 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (2) (Michael Edwards)
Hv u vvr trd wrtng wth s mny vwls mssng s pssbl. thyr jst nt rlly mprtnt r...
December 4th, 2020 02:49 - Rainbows of your Love (Fatlass)
Wow! The quality of your poetry is excellent.
A very personal and moving...
December 4th, 2020 02:43 - December Sunset (Fay Slimm.)
By gum, on a day like that rush off home for a good hot cuppa and a hearty...
December 2nd, 2020 04:13 - RECALLING (Michael Edwards)
Before i start to read, I have to compliment you on a cracking picture...
December 2nd, 2020 04:06 - With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60)
Wish i had a nearby river. The Severn is a bit of a jaunt away through the...
December 2nd, 2020 03:59 - Heavens door (Fatlass)
This is damned good poetry. Well thought out and composed with brilliant...
December 1st, 2020 19:18 - Broken chains, no more crying shame! (Poetic Dan)
Peace, harmony, compromise. Live and let live without turning your back on...
December 1st, 2020 19:10 - Remaining Span (Suresh)
If time be on our hands at the fall of the day, as dusk arises from the...
November 30th, 2020 10:31 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
The greatest emotion we know is love and love of the romantic kind brings...
November 30th, 2020 10:16 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely right. It\'s pointless looking for someone else to do that...
November 30th, 2020 03:07 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
Ah yes that wonderful time each day as our planet home turns us away from...
November 28th, 2020 04:35 - Choice. (Goldfinch60)
But i get blank looks when i venture out, which is quite rare these...
November 28th, 2020 03:42 - In the End (Neville)
November 28th, 2020 00:34 - In the End (Neville)
Grrr at arithmetic in poetry.
Let us be thankful that our deaths are to...
November 28th, 2020 00:34 - Broken Me (SimonW1997)
Forget people trying to teach you rules. Rules will only restrict your...
November 27th, 2020 19:00 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
As a foreigner to your shores, one wonders if those native american...
November 27th, 2020 05:57 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
Your muse is showing.
What wonderful things love does to us ..... to...
November 27th, 2020 05:49 - Solutions (Fay Slimm.)
Scented solutions become the essential oils of a good loving...
November 27th, 2020 05:40 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
I can imagine you sat on your captains log, reading a copy of the...
November 27th, 2020 02:46 - HARD CHEESE (Michael Edwards)
As i said to the milkman \'dairy Lee\' this morning. I think you\'re...
November 27th, 2020 00:48 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
There\'s a sweet-spot on their \'rim\' and dance they surely will but........
November 26th, 2020 15:27 - Tabernacle Time (Orchidee)
I took your list to Lidl but could find none of it on the shelves.
I...
November 26th, 2020 03:11 - IF (Fay Slimm.)
A true reminiscence, with absolutely no distractions, can indeed be a very...
November 26th, 2020 03:07 - What else is there to do! (Poetic Dan)
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair,...
November 26th, 2020 02:20 - Suburban Solidarity (Doggerel Dave)
If the system is against ya..... chop the bugger down. Or drill a hole in...
November 26th, 2020 00:45 - I rhyme better than I can act (Poetic Dan)
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines...
November 26th, 2020 00:38 - Challenge (Fay Slimm.)
Resilience, but we\'re not born with it. It is a life skill we learn or...
November 25th, 2020 05:26 - In My Mind. (Goldfinch60)
There are bound to be days like that. You are a strong and philosophical,...
November 25th, 2020 02:35 - Poetry in motion (Poetic Dan)
That video says so much about you and your empathy, understanding and love...
November 24th, 2020 04:12 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
The bringing together of love\'s desire and fantasy with the tangible...
November 24th, 2020 04:04 - Nature\'s Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
\"The colours of the rainbow, so pretty in the sky, are also on the faces...
November 24th, 2020 04:01 - Seize (Fay Slimm.)
The here and the now
I would steer from the prow
glancing not one look...
November 23rd, 2020 10:32 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
I find it quite possible
to miscount my syllables
but it\'s rather...
November 23rd, 2020 04:11 - It Is So Easy. (Goldfinch60)
Until i read the third line i thought you were going to tell us how to...
November 23rd, 2020 03:30 - Nature - got to be a winner!? (Doggerel Dave)
(sing to tune of I\'m all shook up)
Affixed to my sole
from out some...
November 23rd, 2020 01:41 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
There will always be a beacon light for eyes which see a future.
A light...
November 22nd, 2020 13:32 - With Every Step. (Goldfinch60)
The current is steady but the flow is deep, strong and perpetual. A motion...
November 22nd, 2020 13:24 - In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove)
Be positive, for in your life there has been the joy of love which is...
November 21st, 2020 10:35 - Aperitif (Neville)
These are words of the richness of maturity. Reassuring closeness of...
November 21st, 2020 09:06 - Re-Forming (Fay Slimm.)
Oh I know where you are coming from and in any other year I would be...
November 21st, 2020 08:59 - This Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Some people call what you have described and \'mindfulness\'. As if...
November 21st, 2020 08:45 - UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards)
The ambulance.
There to rescue us in times of dire need.
Yet, alarmed at...
November 21st, 2020 08:41 - My Joy (Christina8)
Great time of year but brrrrr isn\'t it cold. Great tribute to our...
November 21st, 2020 08:04 - Deconstruction (Sylviasearcher)
Are these the words of unfulfilled emotion us poets experience when we...
November 20th, 2020 06:18 - Reflections on Love. (Fay Slimm.)
It is sad to see the words of loves frailty here. Their meaning can only...
November 20th, 2020 06:12 - UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards)
A set of symptoms which wont let go of me
Are the after effects of...
November 20th, 2020 05:55 - How Far. (Goldfinch60)
Though looking back is inevitable, at our age having something, or the...
November 20th, 2020 05:48 - Walk Away (Clara)
Here i quote an old song \"love hurts, love scars, love wounds and marrs...
November 19th, 2020 18:47 - That’s life (Arazimus)
Oh so true. Once one realises it has taken a hold, it is time to get rid...
November 19th, 2020 17:06 - 5. Humble B. Bumble : Beeside signs (Aa Harvey)
Well i for one am enjoying your continuing story. I hope you are having a...
November 19th, 2020 11:39 - Time & space (Poetic Dan)
I agree. Time and space and things mellow..... sharp edges fall of...
November 19th, 2020 07:46 - Silent Music (Fay Slimm.)
Bring on again the warmer days when you may sit among the flowers or walk...
November 19th, 2020 07:38 - Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60)
Ah the pleasure of being lost in a good book. Pleasures i reserve for...
November 19th, 2020 07:34 - PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards)
How our hearts sing for the renewal of spring. This year more than ever we...
November 19th, 2020 07:31 - Windfallen (Neville)
Fallen fruit indeed. For our fields have not seen the fruit of our youth...
November 19th, 2020 07:23 - Promised Land (Last Shadow)
How come that since January 2018 you only were interested enough in poetry...
November 18th, 2020 15:48 - Promised Land (Last Shadow)
Who\'s promises are they though?
November 18th, 2020 11:46 - If You’re Anything Like Me (Jbritt321)
Been there, done that. The T-shirt isn\'t warm enough these days...
November 18th, 2020 11:45 - 4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee! (Aa Harvey)
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42 - Feelings (Fay Slimm.)
Deep felt longing pours from your words. Sleepless nights of unfulfilled...
November 18th, 2020 09:50 - Trench Life (Neville)
Madness isn\'t. And had they not been mown down by machine gun fire what...
November 18th, 2020 09:43 - Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60)
Well we all started somewhere.
P.S. I dont live in a wellie in Glos but...
November 18th, 2020 09:34
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