Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Sleep Deprived (A Boy With Roses)
I don\'t know which i like best, your piece today or your resonse to...
May 8th, 2021 14:36 - Living Inside (Starrbaby91)
\"I live inside my own head most days\". Maybe the other days are the ones...
May 8th, 2021 14:30 - Through the Lens of Drunk Eyes (A Boy With Roses)
The motivation behind drunken words can be difficult to face up to for...
May 8th, 2021 14:27 - Meditation (Fay Slimm.)
Today in the rainfall i tried to imagine meditation out there in the...
May 8th, 2021 12:52 - Coffin Dodger. (Goldfinch60)
Great to laugh at ourselves isn\'t it. Lets be honest, we all want to...
May 8th, 2021 12:40 - My little slice of heaven (Poetic Dan)
Really good to read how your mind at peace has come to love the everday...
May 8th, 2021 12:38 - Sleepless Dreamer (MrNobody40)
What a great situation that would be. To be able to live in dreams which...
April 23rd, 2021 09:43 - Missing (Fay Slimm.)
Oh yes and yes again.... when the telly is more important than her...
April 23rd, 2021 05:41 - Love #2 (Rebmasters)
How is it we can elevate one so high with love that we don\'t want to love...
April 23rd, 2021 05:28 - Making Islands (Neville)
Neville you devil. So many wats to interpret this gem.
I like to think...
April 23rd, 2021 05:15 - Liberty To Love (Orchidee)
I\'m reiterating Goldfinch\'s words on this one.
April 23rd, 2021 05:02 - Virtual Event. (Goldfinch60)
When did a meeting of many \'leaders\' ever amount to a true meeting of...
April 23rd, 2021 04:58 - In Praise of a Higher Authority (Accidental Poet)
I\'m with you all the way on this one.
April 22nd, 2021 17:00 - The Wild Wind Of Antiquity (Alan .S. Jeeves)
And we who survive the ill wind shall know more than we thought. We were...
April 22nd, 2021 16:59 - A Moment (MrNobody40)
As life goes on so such brief encounters colour the poets character.
April 22nd, 2021 11:45 - Sweet Pride (Jerry Reynolds)
mmmm You\'ve made me look forward to seeing my grandaughters in their...
April 22nd, 2021 09:11 - Fall Out (Neville)
Fed up with her station of abstenance she decided to let it roll.
I...
April 22nd, 2021 07:14 - Jail-bird (Fay Slimm.)
THe only cage for a bird I could respect was that in which dwelled an...
April 22nd, 2021 07:11 - In My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m very much a fan of \'Last of the summer wine\' and record all the...
April 22nd, 2021 07:03 - Aced (Last Shadow)
Words escape me -- i saw no poem
April 21st, 2021 17:34 - Memories (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah those memories which make us what we are today. Where would any poet be...
April 21st, 2021 09:38 - lonely (Dysthymia)
Very moving passages from a lonely heart.
Suggestion, find a bench in...
April 21st, 2021 09:35 - THE CRUX OF LIFE (Amon)
Without darkness how can we appreciate the light. Pleasure is all the...
April 21st, 2021 09:28 - Incoming (Fay Slimm.)
You tease the longing, in this my solo heart, to be the hero arriving upon...
April 21st, 2021 09:09 - When I am Done (Neville)
Nicely plucked snippets of occasion from a life lived in fullness. It\'s...
April 21st, 2021 09:03 - Good Lives For Each Of Us. (Goldfinch60)
Nice words, we are indeed lucky to be middle class white retirees.
April 21st, 2021 08:56 - Just a Person (Annonymouswonder)
Makes me uncomfortable when people apologise for their right to be...
April 20th, 2021 12:50 - To Say That ‘I AM A JOKER’...Is Not About Ego (Nafis Light)
A joker, a clown, a facade, a defence mechanism. Not the real person but...
April 20th, 2021 09:42 - Readied (Fay Slimm.)
My word, this \'virgin\' bride has been well schooled and readied for her...
April 20th, 2021 09:37 - TREASURES OF THE SNOW (Amon)
\"Divers troubles had befallen me\" - the \'bends\' perhaps - or running...
April 20th, 2021 05:36 - Lost Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A great piece today. It contains so much. The great loss of ones fionest...
April 20th, 2021 04:41 - A Jar of Nuthatch (Neville)
Not often I get to read a final line with a \'hard on\' in it.
In a...
April 20th, 2021 04:36 - New Light Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
Now for goodness sake get a shave!!!
I\'m lucky, got fed up with...
April 20th, 2021 04:28 - Christmas (Welsh)
Yep, it must feel like christmas now Wales has come out of lockdown.
April 19th, 2021 13:38 - Unreal (Fay Slimm.)
You do paint with words so well Fay. Worthy of my several re-reads to soak...
April 19th, 2021 07:00 - Victory Voicings (Orchidee)
Again Orchi you show me the similarities of our separate beliefs here.
April 19th, 2021 06:06 - Custer. (Goldfinch60)
Blimey i remember my brother telling me that story when i was about 14....
April 19th, 2021 06:00 - Dancing In Her Arms. (Goldfinch60)
To see truly good young singing talent on TV has a similar effect on me...
April 18th, 2021 08:39 - Inseparable (DesertWords)
Refreshing to see words of an enlightened mind. God is within us all, we...
April 18th, 2021 08:34 - Who cares but I (Rosiedm)
Great sentiment. Giving to our wildlife when we humans are doing so much...
April 17th, 2021 18:15 - Principles In Giving - Giving Series (6) (Orchidee)
This brings my god ever closer to me.
April 17th, 2021 04:56 - 01/24/2018 (CLM)
Again you bring the realism of true feelings. This time the lingering hurt...
April 17th, 2021 04:53 - Bookitis. (Goldfinch60)
One of my pleasure is to lose myself in a book in surroundings strange to...
April 17th, 2021 04:25 - Carefree Contentment (Orchidee)
Well my god is different to yours but i cant deny the similarity in your...
April 16th, 2021 12:45 - Listening (Fay Slimm.)
Water brings to us a tranquillity of reflective mood whether it be...
April 16th, 2021 12:41 - Talking With My Brother. (Goldfinch60)
Cor! if only the rules of rugby were so similar. Lovely game but i...
April 16th, 2021 12:34 - Ignorance Reigns. (Goldfinch60)
I\'d never think of you as ignorant. Rather i\'d say \"open minded to...
April 15th, 2021 05:44 - IN SCOTLAND - IN LONDON (Michael Edwards)
Love that picture Michael. Parts of it remind me of what comes out of my...
April 14th, 2021 11:57 - Life Book. (Goldfinch60)
May you never run out of paper to keep making new pages.
April 14th, 2021 02:03 - Doggerel Dave Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Devoting a poem to rhyme
brings forth enchantments devine
though oft...
April 13th, 2021 09:45 - Lover’s manual (L. B. Mek)
Hmm difficult. I would not choose to dictate to another how they should...
April 12th, 2021 04:05 - Truthful Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Speaking the truth in response to a direct question has landed me with all...
April 12th, 2021 04:00 - 11/18/2020 (CLM)
A heartfelt and touching piece. After damage is done within a...
April 12th, 2021 03:57 - Oh To Be (CLM)
I really like this. I think you voice a desire within all of us who are...
April 11th, 2021 19:14 - Light In Our Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest...
April 11th, 2021 03:13 - Island Heaven. (Goldfinch60)
Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It\'s as if you were doodling...
April 10th, 2021 11:06 - INEQUALITY BY TWO (Michael Edwards)
Equality being a two edged sword.
April 9th, 2021 18:30 - The Minute (Fay Slimm.)
Exquisite! I haven\'t been coming into mps much lately but so pleased i...
March 31st, 2021 04:08 - Inside every living being (Poetic Dan)
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown....
March 28th, 2021 17:35 - Inside every living being (Poetic Dan)
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown....
March 27th, 2021 07:06 - Love\'s Insanity (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Blimey ! There\'s so much going on in this poem. I\'m full of...
March 15th, 2021 06:28 - Bounty (Fay Slimm.)
Ouch! Was that Orchi singing too or another falling rock.
How easily I...
March 15th, 2021 06:24 - Daily Door. (Goldfinch60)
Lets hope it brings a lot of joy and sets a trend.
March 15th, 2021 03:44 - The Struggle (Mrbleasdale)
Is this revealing or fiction. I\'m asking myself this because if it is a...
March 14th, 2021 07:56 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
Orchi, this is fine praise indeed from you and for all of us regardless of...
March 14th, 2021 06:36 - Aah Bach. (Goldfinch60)
I read your piece and decided to then play the video and listen.
My...
March 14th, 2021 06:31 - Mental health matters to me (Poetic Dan)
You, me and the rest of the poets on here are the lucky ones who know...
March 14th, 2021 06:19 - Our Poem (Fay Slimm.)
How our endings have shaped our picture of a safer future. Who hasn\'t...
March 14th, 2021 06:05 - Angels n Demands (HAZE)
Reads like a construct of a self centered wannabe. Only let down by the...
March 13th, 2021 19:37 - Let me tell you how the rain falls (Rrodriguez)
Yes, your post reminded me of the young joy of running in summer rain...
March 13th, 2021 14:19 - love (Jackeggz)
Great piece. Brought back so many occasions of pleasure to this wrinkly...
March 13th, 2021 14:13 - Tudor Love-Note. (Fay Slimm.)
Dearest one who doth yet place the fairest smile upon my lips with the...
March 13th, 2021 14:08 - Prayer For Preserving (Orchidee)
hmmmm a bit early for preserve making in my book unless youre importing...
March 13th, 2021 14:01 - Perspective (Jerry Reynolds)
Lovely. Brings to mind all the repair jobs which need to be tackled now...
March 13th, 2021 13:59 - Just for You (Neville)
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere...
March 13th, 2021 13:57 - Opinions are not irrelevant (Poetic Dan)
And long may the light of positivity shine within you Dan.
March 13th, 2021 13:53 - Corona Kids. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem expresses the frustration so many of us feel about exposure of...
March 13th, 2021 13:52 - Carrying On (Fay Slimm.)
A time when a land lubber is well away from the coast.
Your post brings...
March 11th, 2021 09:28 - Productive People (Orchidee)
A great encouraging write in time with the allure of springtime. A time...
March 11th, 2021 03:18 - Never Forget. (Goldfinch60)
A timely reminder to be thankful for the resilience within and more...
March 11th, 2021 03:12 - Million Dollars in A River (A Boy With Roses)
Distraction upon distraction prevents us from airing what we truly are,...
March 11th, 2021 03:04 - Nineveh Nullified (Orchidee)
You should make this into an online game orchi. You and fido could while...
March 10th, 2021 04:52 - Superhero sidekick (Mrbleasdale)
Completely understand this. Keep it as a wish, them at arms length,...
March 10th, 2021 04:50 - Minds Your Into. (Goldfinch60)
Was it dyslexia or simple dyspepsia brought this about..... have you...
March 10th, 2021 04:48 - HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards)
Good to see you again and a great piece which enlivens my mind to venture...
March 10th, 2021 04:45 - A dream. (Jorge serra)
May you spend may days like this in blissful expectation of tonite and...
March 10th, 2021 04:42 - The depths of my soul (Olivia.)
Good! lol now lets see them written here for our digestion.
March 10th, 2021 04:37 - So Fucking Tired of the Pain (A Boy With Roses)
Great expression of lifes frustrations and the results of our feeble...
March 10th, 2021 04:35 - Knowledge (FredPeyer)
knowledge... the base for wisdom.
Well thought out post Fred.
March 10th, 2021 04:32 - To a Friend (Jerry Reynolds)
Those yesterdays have a lot to answer for. Nice one Jerry.
March 9th, 2021 11:00 - Ice Cream Sundae (Mrbleasdale)
But the sun is shining today through my windows facing east. Warmth upon...
March 9th, 2021 05:55 - Out of Mind (Neville)
I was left reflecting upon the fact that each of my past loves elevated me...
March 9th, 2021 05:50 - Windmills Of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
One of the greatest song lyrics from the 60\'s indeed.
Aptly describes...
March 9th, 2021 05:45 - Coffee (Limitless Consciousness)
Shame that you have to defend your integrity from such negative folk. Not...
March 9th, 2021 05:39 - Femme Fatale (MendedFences27)
And he was only there looking for the guy he\'d seen tun into that house...
March 9th, 2021 05:35 - I Forgive You, My Lord (Daydreaming)
Your words here are those of someone coming to the realisation that the...
March 8th, 2021 13:27 - Puppy Love (Jerry Reynolds)
I suspect the two of you were both real in that field when you were a...
March 8th, 2021 13:21 - Spring (Mrbleasdale)
I second the comments made above by L.B.Mek wholeheartedly.
I had a very...
March 8th, 2021 07:56 - I\'m sorry for being a butt head (Jeffrey Roy)
A plea from the heart but is it time to recognise a relationship has...
March 8th, 2021 03:28 - That Distant Figure (Alex Arnot)
Why chase or search. Just accept. Let there be no \'why\'.
March 8th, 2021 02:12
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