Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Let me tell you how the rain falls (Rrodriguez)
Yes, your post reminded me of the young joy of running in summer rain...
March 13th, 2021 14:19 - love (Jackeggz)
Great piece. Brought back so many occasions of pleasure to this wrinkly...
March 13th, 2021 14:13 - Tudor Love-Note. (Fay Slimm.)
Dearest one who doth yet place the fairest smile upon my lips with the...
March 13th, 2021 14:08 - Prayer For Preserving (Orchidee)
hmmmm a bit early for preserve making in my book unless youre importing...
March 13th, 2021 14:01 - Perspective (Jerry Reynolds)
Lovely. Brings to mind all the repair jobs which need to be tackled now...
March 13th, 2021 13:59 - Just for You (Neville)
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere...
March 13th, 2021 13:57 - Opinions are not irrelevant (Poetic Dan)
And long may the light of positivity shine within you Dan.
March 13th, 2021 13:53 - Corona Kids. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem expresses the frustration so many of us feel about exposure of...
March 13th, 2021 13:52 - Carrying On (Fay Slimm.)
A time when a land lubber is well away from the coast.
Your post brings...
March 11th, 2021 09:28 - Productive People (Orchidee)
A great encouraging write in time with the allure of springtime. A time...
March 11th, 2021 03:18 - Never Forget. (Goldfinch60)
A timely reminder to be thankful for the resilience within and more...
March 11th, 2021 03:12 - Million Dollars in A River (A Boy With Roses)
Distraction upon distraction prevents us from airing what we truly are,...
March 11th, 2021 03:04 - Nineveh Nullified (Orchidee)
You should make this into an online game orchi. You and fido could while...
March 10th, 2021 04:52 - Superhero sidekick (Mrbleasdale)
Completely understand this. Keep it as a wish, them at arms length,...
March 10th, 2021 04:50 - Minds Your Into. (Goldfinch60)
Was it dyslexia or simple dyspepsia brought this about..... have you...
March 10th, 2021 04:48 - HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards)
Good to see you again and a great piece which enlivens my mind to venture...
March 10th, 2021 04:45 - A dream. (Jorge serra)
May you spend may days like this in blissful expectation of tonite and...
March 10th, 2021 04:42 - The depths of my soul (Olivia.)
Good! lol now lets see them written here for our digestion.
March 10th, 2021 04:37 - So Fucking Tired of the Pain (A Boy With Roses)
Great expression of lifes frustrations and the results of our feeble...
March 10th, 2021 04:35 - Knowledge (FredPeyer)
knowledge... the base for wisdom.
Well thought out post Fred.
March 10th, 2021 04:32 - To a Friend (Jerry Reynolds)
Those yesterdays have a lot to answer for. Nice one Jerry.
March 9th, 2021 11:00 - Ice Cream Sundae (Mrbleasdale)
But the sun is shining today through my windows facing east. Warmth upon...
March 9th, 2021 05:55 - Out of Mind (Neville)
I was left reflecting upon the fact that each of my past loves elevated me...
March 9th, 2021 05:50 - Windmills Of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
One of the greatest song lyrics from the 60\'s indeed.
Aptly describes...
March 9th, 2021 05:45 - Coffee (Limitless Consciousness)
Shame that you have to defend your integrity from such negative folk. Not...
March 9th, 2021 05:39 - Femme Fatale (MendedFences27)
And he was only there looking for the guy he\'d seen tun into that house...
March 9th, 2021 05:35 - I Forgive You, My Lord (Daydreaming)
Your words here are those of someone coming to the realisation that the...
March 8th, 2021 13:27 - Puppy Love (Jerry Reynolds)
I suspect the two of you were both real in that field when you were a...
March 8th, 2021 13:21 - Spring (Mrbleasdale)
I second the comments made above by L.B.Mek wholeheartedly.
I had a very...
March 8th, 2021 07:56 - I\'m sorry for being a butt head (Jeffrey Roy)
A plea from the heart but is it time to recognise a relationship has...
March 8th, 2021 03:28 - That Distant Figure (Alex Arnot)
Why chase or search. Just accept. Let there be no \'why\'.
March 8th, 2021 02:12 - Still Frames (FredPeyer)
The enigmatic time problem. So many ways to question time aren\'t there. I...
March 8th, 2021 02:08 - I Came Back Slowly (Goddess of the Mist)
Lovely flowing lyrical verses.
You have me wondering. Is our reality...
March 8th, 2021 01:59 - Changing Times (A Boy With Roses)
To me this speaks of a deep wound of love ungiven when it was needed the...
March 8th, 2021 01:55 - Painted Faces (MendedFences27)
Painted faces, so much falseness we see daily. A mask? Ask them why they...
March 8th, 2021 01:45 - Sanctury (Mrbleasdale)
Great positivity runs through your words today. I wish you every success...
March 7th, 2021 04:08 - Love like a Song (Neville)
kinda like... with feeling!
well as an ex singer turned...
March 7th, 2021 03:06 - Zoom Coffee. (Goldfinch60)
Smiling Yes.... but this one went clean over my head... Zoom??
March 7th, 2021 03:03 - Without You (MendedFences27)
Wonderful. Mesmerising story which asks so many questions in my head yet...
March 7th, 2021 00:24 - Style Stalker (Readyplayerstew)
My life\'s pleasures were not, contrary to your author\'s note, measured...
March 7th, 2021 00:20 - Black Sheep (Haydenraquel)
We are given the tools to create the future \'us\'. Regrets will only...
March 7th, 2021 00:13 - Let\'s Kiss in the Rain (A Boy With Roses)
The magic of idealistic romantic brought into stark contrast with life\'s...
March 7th, 2021 00:10 - Planet B (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Could be the answer is in Uranus.
March 6th, 2021 11:50 - Don\'t disc me wrong (Poetic Dan)
Good to read you are busy and that you are getting the professional...
March 6th, 2021 05:18 - Prayer For Purity (Orchidee)
Did fido have a paw in this?
March 6th, 2021 05:14 - Child of the Stars (Asrealastheycome)
Enjoyed reading your words. I agree totally with your thoughts expressed...
March 6th, 2021 05:13 - My ADHD (Poetry_Lover)
I\'m glad you got it together enough to write this piece. We (that...
March 6th, 2021 05:08 - Never Parted. (Goldfinch60)
Poetic scenes fill my mind upon reading your post. Not unlike the owl and...
March 6th, 2021 05:03 - Embers & I hear her Smile (FredPeyer)
True love lives on within us. But what does it make of us.... all we have...
March 6th, 2021 05:00 - Volcano (Brimelow)
Super imagery! Love the idea of giving a volcano a personality.
The...
March 5th, 2021 22:05 - NO CALM MEANT (Joe Marcello)
Walk away from the awkward ones and let them be a pest to someone else....
March 5th, 2021 17:11 - Unconditional Love (Olivia.)
Lovely to have a centre to focus unconditional love isn\'t it. I have a...
March 5th, 2021 16:49 - the test of time (Lucifer very very very 1st)
time tells a vocabulary
time tells a tale of a grand vocabulary
the...
March 5th, 2021 15:24 - The sun will rise on me (Lily_)
Hello Silk. Poetry is a great way of expressing angst and deep emotional...
March 5th, 2021 09:14 - Words To Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes.Where did it all go and what have i still got besides bricks,...
March 5th, 2021 09:07 - Was & is (Poetic Dan)
Much wisdom in ya words today Dan.
March 5th, 2021 09:04 - Reflection (Jerry Reynolds)
There is the slowing down of years of wisdom gained, now put into...
March 5th, 2021 08:56 - Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road? (M.E.M.)
Not destined to the destiny someone else plans for us..... parent?.......
March 5th, 2021 08:54 - I’m Special (JonathanB)
Well written tongue in cheek message.
Deserving of the comment...
March 5th, 2021 08:47 - Bungalow (Brimelow)
Classic. Excellent imagery. Contains well the frustration of loss and...
March 5th, 2021 08:43 - Hypnotic (A Boy With Roses)
Wow! What an amazing journey you took me on through the lines of this...
March 5th, 2021 08:37 - Brick by brick (Olivia.)
The building blocks of our character are within the bricks of your words...
March 5th, 2021 08:33 - Getting Older. (Goldfinch60)
So right Andy. I lost my older brother some years ago and a part of me...
March 5th, 2021 08:29 - Just Judgement (Orchidee)
Tut at that last verse. Your god of destroying one and saving the other....
March 5th, 2021 08:27 - Love Is Forever. (Goldfinch60)
The loves of my life didn\'t stand the test of time but the love I felt in...
March 1st, 2021 04:13 - Irish Renga on the second day of Purim (Jerry Reynolds)
Is it me or a sign of the times
reading such lyrical rhymes
someone\'s...
February 27th, 2021 11:22 - In Sleep, I Will Trust (AuburnScribbler)
As a reader whose body clock is malfunctioning through lockdown\'s lack of...
February 27th, 2021 11:11 - Snow Moon. (Goldfinch60)
I noticed the big bright moon in the early hours this morning. I paused,...
February 27th, 2021 11:05 - Let’s Talk Scars (Neville)
The scars always show up. Just as you say, some are well concealed and...
February 27th, 2021 10:58 - Mad Dark Humour (Orchidee)
Don\'t put your son on the stage Mrs Worthington.
February 26th, 2021 09:13 - When I Lose (Jerry Reynolds)
Much wisdom in a simple four liner. I wish I were so wise as your words...
February 26th, 2021 09:09 - At The Deepest Center (DesertWords)
Yes, totally agree and the light is within us too.
Wonderful spiritual...
February 26th, 2021 08:58 - Goldie Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
That odd cheesey smell eminating
had provided a rudest awakening
he...
February 26th, 2021 03:04 - Nature\'s Memory (Merissa)
Why do I read a contradiction within your words. Where you talk of fear...
February 26th, 2021 01:48 - Salty River (SunSearcher)
Carry your baggage well lest it become a burden.
February 26th, 2021 01:43 - tired. (Brycycle)
In empty days after empty days we can turn in on ourselves. It\'s
February 26th, 2021 01:38 - What\'s The Point? (Merissa)
So long as you maintain freedom of choice!
February 26th, 2021 01:35 - one day while walking on the beach (Trenz Pruca)
I met a man passing a small damaged octopus to another saying \"Here\'s...
February 26th, 2021 01:32 - Disparate Love (Jerry Reynolds)
You made me chuckle. Such negative thoughts entering the mind at such a...
February 26th, 2021 01:28 - Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Love that Zappa quote. Difficult to remain open minded on some subjects...
February 26th, 2021 01:24 - Gracious Giving (Orchidee)
And when the pastor/father knows he is asking the poor to contribute in...
February 26th, 2021 01:20 - My Children (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Deep within these words is the love of you for your children. It speaks of...
February 23rd, 2021 12:27 - Never Enough (Jerry Reynolds)
Food for thought feedeth not the hungry belly.
February 23rd, 2021 12:24 - Too much water under the bridge (Olivia.)
When troubles have mounted it is good and wholesome to be able to look to...
February 23rd, 2021 12:22 - Bridged (Fay Slimm.)
Some people are so attuned to the natural world that even the birds know...
February 23rd, 2021 12:19 - Lockdown Grey (Neville)
Ah, the mind of the true poet walks where inspiration has filled his soul...
February 23rd, 2021 12:11 - A Good Day. (Goldfinch60)
If you can climb the stairs to bed, then its been a good day, you...
February 23rd, 2021 12:01 - Politics-Policies (Jerry Reynolds)
erm thats baseball terminology I think..... here in U.K. we play...
February 22nd, 2021 09:23 - Testing the Waters (TS)
Blissful poetic words paint a scene any man could relax into.
February 22nd, 2021 06:31 - Funny girl life (A passing lyric)
Wonderful. To read of how you smile through your experience of life...
February 22nd, 2021 05:55 - Sundayness (Fay Slimm.)
Eyyup lass, worra-bout t\'tin bath in front\'a range? Sundee neet \'wo...
February 22nd, 2021 05:12 - Redeemed By The Son (Orchidee)
In your hymn composition life did you ever have a punk period?
(and are...
February 22nd, 2021 04:49 - Mastication (Neville)
Post mastication he devoured her essence feeling the cotton wool thrust of...
February 22nd, 2021 04:47 - Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60)
You manage to post a meaningful poem each day. That\'s beyond my...
February 22nd, 2021 04:40 - I am Creation (Gesenia Burley)
Whereas I don\'t buy the genesis theme written by men, when the world was...
February 22nd, 2021 04:24 - Bad Advise (FredPeyer)
We see this all to often, even here on MPS. I\'m as guilty as any one in...
February 22nd, 2021 04:17 - The Fountain. (Goldfinch60)
In the words of baddiel the comic,\"that\'s your halo, that is\".
February 21st, 2021 02:53 - K-9 OUT OF 10 (Joe Marcello)
Vivisection is criminal.
Treat your dog well and it will do anything...
February 21st, 2021 01:00 - Dove Poison (A Boy With Roses)
The two sides of change. Desire and fear.
February 21st, 2021 00:50 - Just sitting around (FredPeyer)
Drinking is thirsty work Fred. The bottled ale I drink tastes better at...
February 21st, 2021 00:46
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