Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Lost Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A great piece today. It contains so much. The great loss of ones fionest...
April 20th, 2021 04:41 - A Jar of Nuthatch (Neville)
Not often I get to read a final line with a \'hard on\' in it.
In a...
April 20th, 2021 04:36 - New Light Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
Now for goodness sake get a shave!!!
I\'m lucky, got fed up with...
April 20th, 2021 04:28 - Christmas (Welsh)
Yep, it must feel like christmas now Wales has come out of lockdown.
April 19th, 2021 13:38 - Unreal (Fay Slimm.)
You do paint with words so well Fay. Worthy of my several re-reads to soak...
April 19th, 2021 07:00 - Victory Voicings (Orchidee)
Again Orchi you show me the similarities of our separate beliefs here.
April 19th, 2021 06:06 - Custer. (Goldfinch60)
Blimey i remember my brother telling me that story when i was about 14....
April 19th, 2021 06:00 - Dancing In Her Arms. (Goldfinch60)
To see truly good young singing talent on TV has a similar effect on me...
April 18th, 2021 08:39 - Inseparable (DesertWords)
Refreshing to see words of an enlightened mind. God is within us all, we...
April 18th, 2021 08:34 - Who cares but I (Rosiedm)
Great sentiment. Giving to our wildlife when we humans are doing so much...
April 17th, 2021 18:15 - Principles In Giving - Giving Series (6) (Orchidee)
This brings my god ever closer to me.
April 17th, 2021 04:56 - 01/24/2018 (CLM)
Again you bring the realism of true feelings. This time the lingering hurt...
April 17th, 2021 04:53 - Bookitis. (Goldfinch60)
One of my pleasure is to lose myself in a book in surroundings strange to...
April 17th, 2021 04:25 - Carefree Contentment (Orchidee)
Well my god is different to yours but i cant deny the similarity in your...
April 16th, 2021 12:45 - Listening (Fay Slimm.)
Water brings to us a tranquillity of reflective mood whether it be...
April 16th, 2021 12:41 - Talking With My Brother. (Goldfinch60)
Cor! if only the rules of rugby were so similar. Lovely game but i...
April 16th, 2021 12:34 - Ignorance Reigns. (Goldfinch60)
I\'d never think of you as ignorant. Rather i\'d say \"open minded to...
April 15th, 2021 05:44 - IN SCOTLAND - IN LONDON (Michael Edwards)
Love that picture Michael. Parts of it remind me of what comes out of my...
April 14th, 2021 11:57 - Life Book. (Goldfinch60)
May you never run out of paper to keep making new pages.
April 14th, 2021 02:03 - Doggerel Dave Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Devoting a poem to rhyme
brings forth enchantments devine
though oft...
April 13th, 2021 09:45 - Lover’s manual (L. B. Mek)
Hmm difficult. I would not choose to dictate to another how they should...
April 12th, 2021 04:05 - Truthful Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Speaking the truth in response to a direct question has landed me with all...
April 12th, 2021 04:00 - 11/18/2020 (CLM)
A heartfelt and touching piece. After damage is done within a...
April 12th, 2021 03:57 - Oh To Be (CLM)
I really like this. I think you voice a desire within all of us who are...
April 11th, 2021 19:14 - Light In Our Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest...
April 11th, 2021 03:13 - Island Heaven. (Goldfinch60)
Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It\'s as if you were doodling...
April 10th, 2021 11:06 - INEQUALITY BY TWO (Michael Edwards)
Equality being a two edged sword.
April 9th, 2021 18:30 - The Minute (Fay Slimm.)
Exquisite! I haven\'t been coming into mps much lately but so pleased i...
March 31st, 2021 04:08 - Inside every living being (Poetic Dan)
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown....
March 28th, 2021 17:35 - Inside every living being (Poetic Dan)
Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown....
March 27th, 2021 07:06 - Love\'s Insanity (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Blimey ! There\'s so much going on in this poem. I\'m full of...
March 15th, 2021 06:28 - Bounty (Fay Slimm.)
Ouch! Was that Orchi singing too or another falling rock.
How easily I...
March 15th, 2021 06:24 - Daily Door. (Goldfinch60)
Lets hope it brings a lot of joy and sets a trend.
March 15th, 2021 03:44 - The Struggle (Mrbleasdale)
Is this revealing or fiction. I\'m asking myself this because if it is a...
March 14th, 2021 07:56 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
Orchi, this is fine praise indeed from you and for all of us regardless of...
March 14th, 2021 06:36 - Aah Bach. (Goldfinch60)
I read your piece and decided to then play the video and listen.
My...
March 14th, 2021 06:31 - Mental health matters to me (Poetic Dan)
You, me and the rest of the poets on here are the lucky ones who know...
March 14th, 2021 06:19 - Our Poem (Fay Slimm.)
How our endings have shaped our picture of a safer future. Who hasn\'t...
March 14th, 2021 06:05 - Angels n Demands (HAZE)
Reads like a construct of a self centered wannabe. Only let down by the...
March 13th, 2021 19:37 - Let me tell you how the rain falls (Rrodriguez)
Yes, your post reminded me of the young joy of running in summer rain...
March 13th, 2021 14:19 - love (Jackeggz)
Great piece. Brought back so many occasions of pleasure to this wrinkly...
March 13th, 2021 14:13 - Tudor Love-Note. (Fay Slimm.)
Dearest one who doth yet place the fairest smile upon my lips with the...
March 13th, 2021 14:08 - Prayer For Preserving (Orchidee)
hmmmm a bit early for preserve making in my book unless youre importing...
March 13th, 2021 14:01 - Perspective (Jerry Reynolds)
Lovely. Brings to mind all the repair jobs which need to be tackled now...
March 13th, 2021 13:59 - Just for You (Neville)
\"Nothing but the exaltation within my heart for the elevation your mere...
March 13th, 2021 13:57 - Opinions are not irrelevant (Poetic Dan)
And long may the light of positivity shine within you Dan.
March 13th, 2021 13:53 - Corona Kids. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem expresses the frustration so many of us feel about exposure of...
March 13th, 2021 13:52 - Carrying On (Fay Slimm.)
A time when a land lubber is well away from the coast.
Your post brings...
March 11th, 2021 09:28 - Productive People (Orchidee)
A great encouraging write in time with the allure of springtime. A time...
March 11th, 2021 03:18 - Never Forget. (Goldfinch60)
A timely reminder to be thankful for the resilience within and more...
March 11th, 2021 03:12 - Million Dollars in A River (A Boy With Roses)
Distraction upon distraction prevents us from airing what we truly are,...
March 11th, 2021 03:04 - Nineveh Nullified (Orchidee)
You should make this into an online game orchi. You and fido could while...
March 10th, 2021 04:52 - Superhero sidekick (Mrbleasdale)
Completely understand this. Keep it as a wish, them at arms length,...
March 10th, 2021 04:50 - Minds Your Into. (Goldfinch60)
Was it dyslexia or simple dyspepsia brought this about..... have you...
March 10th, 2021 04:48 - HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards)
Good to see you again and a great piece which enlivens my mind to venture...
March 10th, 2021 04:45 - A dream. (Jorge serra)
May you spend may days like this in blissful expectation of tonite and...
March 10th, 2021 04:42 - The depths of my soul (Olivia.)
Good! lol now lets see them written here for our digestion.
March 10th, 2021 04:37 - So Fucking Tired of the Pain (A Boy With Roses)
Great expression of lifes frustrations and the results of our feeble...
March 10th, 2021 04:35 - Knowledge (FredPeyer)
knowledge... the base for wisdom.
Well thought out post Fred.
March 10th, 2021 04:32 - To a Friend (Jerry Reynolds)
Those yesterdays have a lot to answer for. Nice one Jerry.
March 9th, 2021 11:00 - Ice Cream Sundae (Mrbleasdale)
But the sun is shining today through my windows facing east. Warmth upon...
March 9th, 2021 05:55 - Out of Mind (Neville)
I was left reflecting upon the fact that each of my past loves elevated me...
March 9th, 2021 05:50 - Windmills Of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
One of the greatest song lyrics from the 60\'s indeed.
Aptly describes...
March 9th, 2021 05:45 - Coffee (Limitless Consciousness)
Shame that you have to defend your integrity from such negative folk. Not...
March 9th, 2021 05:39 - Femme Fatale (MendedFences27)
And he was only there looking for the guy he\'d seen tun into that house...
March 9th, 2021 05:35 - I Forgive You, My Lord (Daydreaming)
Your words here are those of someone coming to the realisation that the...
March 8th, 2021 13:27 - Puppy Love (Jerry Reynolds)
I suspect the two of you were both real in that field when you were a...
March 8th, 2021 13:21 - Spring (Mrbleasdale)
I second the comments made above by L.B.Mek wholeheartedly.
I had a very...
March 8th, 2021 07:56 - I\'m sorry for being a butt head (Jeffrey Roy)
A plea from the heart but is it time to recognise a relationship has...
March 8th, 2021 03:28 - That Distant Figure (Alex Arnot)
Why chase or search. Just accept. Let there be no \'why\'.
March 8th, 2021 02:12 - Still Frames (FredPeyer)
The enigmatic time problem. So many ways to question time aren\'t there. I...
March 8th, 2021 02:08 - I Came Back Slowly (Goddess of the Mist)
Lovely flowing lyrical verses.
You have me wondering. Is our reality...
March 8th, 2021 01:59 - Changing Times (A Boy With Roses)
To me this speaks of a deep wound of love ungiven when it was needed the...
March 8th, 2021 01:55 - Painted Faces (MendedFences27)
Painted faces, so much falseness we see daily. A mask? Ask them why they...
March 8th, 2021 01:45 - Sanctury (Mrbleasdale)
Great positivity runs through your words today. I wish you every success...
March 7th, 2021 04:08 - Love like a Song (Neville)
kinda like... with feeling!
well as an ex singer turned...
March 7th, 2021 03:06 - Zoom Coffee. (Goldfinch60)
Smiling Yes.... but this one went clean over my head... Zoom??
March 7th, 2021 03:03 - Without You (MendedFences27)
Wonderful. Mesmerising story which asks so many questions in my head yet...
March 7th, 2021 00:24 - Style Stalker (Readyplayerstew)
My life\'s pleasures were not, contrary to your author\'s note, measured...
March 7th, 2021 00:20 - Black Sheep (Haydenraquel)
We are given the tools to create the future \'us\'. Regrets will only...
March 7th, 2021 00:13 - Let\'s Kiss in the Rain (A Boy With Roses)
The magic of idealistic romantic brought into stark contrast with life\'s...
March 7th, 2021 00:10 - Planet B (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Could be the answer is in Uranus.
March 6th, 2021 11:50 - Don\'t disc me wrong (Poetic Dan)
Good to read you are busy and that you are getting the professional...
March 6th, 2021 05:18 - Prayer For Purity (Orchidee)
Did fido have a paw in this?
March 6th, 2021 05:14 - Child of the Stars (Asrealastheycome)
Enjoyed reading your words. I agree totally with your thoughts expressed...
March 6th, 2021 05:13 - My ADHD (Poetry_Lover)
I\'m glad you got it together enough to write this piece. We (that...
March 6th, 2021 05:08 - Never Parted. (Goldfinch60)
Poetic scenes fill my mind upon reading your post. Not unlike the owl and...
March 6th, 2021 05:03 - Embers & I hear her Smile (FredPeyer)
True love lives on within us. But what does it make of us.... all we have...
March 6th, 2021 05:00 - Volcano (Brimelow)
Super imagery! Love the idea of giving a volcano a personality.
The...
March 5th, 2021 22:05 - NO CALM MEANT (Joe Marcello)
Walk away from the awkward ones and let them be a pest to someone else....
March 5th, 2021 17:11 - Unconditional Love (Olivia.)
Lovely to have a centre to focus unconditional love isn\'t it. I have a...
March 5th, 2021 16:49 - the test of time (Lucifer very very very 1st)
time tells a vocabulary
time tells a tale of a grand vocabulary
the...
March 5th, 2021 15:24 - The sun will rise on me (Lily_)
Hello Silk. Poetry is a great way of expressing angst and deep emotional...
March 5th, 2021 09:14 - Words To Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes.Where did it all go and what have i still got besides bricks,...
March 5th, 2021 09:07 - Was & is (Poetic Dan)
Much wisdom in ya words today Dan.
March 5th, 2021 09:04 - Reflection (Jerry Reynolds)
There is the slowing down of years of wisdom gained, now put into...
March 5th, 2021 08:56 - Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road? (M.E.M.)
Not destined to the destiny someone else plans for us..... parent?.......
March 5th, 2021 08:54 - I’m Special (JonathanB)
Well written tongue in cheek message.
Deserving of the comment...
March 5th, 2021 08:47 - Bungalow (Brimelow)
Classic. Excellent imagery. Contains well the frustration of loss and...
March 5th, 2021 08:43 - Hypnotic (A Boy With Roses)
Wow! What an amazing journey you took me on through the lines of this...
March 5th, 2021 08:37
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