Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Wise Waiting (Orchidee) I strongly suspect Fido sees his god in your face.
  May 14th, 2021 10:54
• Unjustified Violence. (Goldfinch60) If you had to choose, which colour croquet ball would you be?
  May 14th, 2021 10:52
• Fletched (Neville) EE-BAH-GUM Fletch were a grand old fellah and deadly absolutely deadly at...
  May 13th, 2021 03:45
• Ascension Alleluias (Orchidee) I thought about you singing these alleluias at the top of your voice and...
  May 13th, 2021 02:54
• Endings (Fay Slimm.) I guess it\'s why we bury or cremate, to do away with the ugliness of...
  May 13th, 2021 02:30
• Love Day (Goldfinch60) A song and a poem, both about perfection.
  May 13th, 2021 02:26
• Tyrant (Michael Anthony) Sadly though the years do take away the memories, but what remains of them...
  May 12th, 2021 13:05
• Credit (Jerry Reynolds) swipe blight balance wiped The bain of our lives or our saviour?...
  May 12th, 2021 13:00
• Apprehension (Fay Slimm.) So relateable. As images flash across before our eyes like unfamiliar and...
  May 12th, 2021 07:57
• No Guaranteed Tomorrows (Neville) The memory of love\'s past make our tomorrows all the more welcome for who...
  May 12th, 2021 07:50
• Prayer Possibles (Orchidee) When you sing does Fido howl out a melody for your next hymn/verse?
  May 12th, 2021 07:47
• Work Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60) I\'ve been working 54 years (the last 40 yrs working self employed) and I...
  May 12th, 2021 07:44
• HOW ANNOYING IS THAT? (Michael Edwards) Yus, and \'blow me\' if i \'don\'t not\' agree with you \'110%\' which is...
  May 12th, 2021 07:40
• The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) The right music is such an aid to finding peace of mind and so to sleep.
  May 11th, 2021 08:55
• Take One (Fay Slimm.) I became quite sad reading your words today for you really captured the...
  May 11th, 2021 08:50
• Journey of Tears  (Neville) Ah, the shroud of female tears covers many a deviation from the actual....
  May 11th, 2021 08:39
• Can\'t (Rebeccasr5) These screens are like a drug we\'re hooked on aren\'t they. Depriving...
  May 10th, 2021 15:13
• Life’s a river of memory  and yearning.  (Trenz Pruca) Such an amazing title. It could stand alone with no other...
  May 10th, 2021 15:11
• Misunderstandings (Rebmasters) I\'m reading the words of a lovestruck soul here who is being bounced...
  May 10th, 2021 09:25
• Forever shifting our souls grounding, like tectonic plates. (Poetic Dan) When does the learning stop.... never. And amazing that one so young...
  May 10th, 2021 09:21
• Sandy (Jerry Reynolds) Ah those tunes the piper played when we were young. To recall is bliss,...
  May 10th, 2021 09:18
• Relevant (Fay Slimm.) The flowering of a young maiden bloom. Scented and bejewelled with colour...
  May 10th, 2021 04:54
• The March of the Chocolate Soldier (Alan .S. Jeeves) Excellent! A must to recite to the grandchildren.
  May 10th, 2021 04:13
• of Despairing, ganGreen Heart’s (L. B. Mek) Are we associating the opposition of the rights of tower block residents...
  May 10th, 2021 04:02
• Daily Duties (Orchidee) Yeah but rumours about their black market trading in toilet bleaches were...
  May 10th, 2021 02:59
• Life Anchors. (Goldfinch60) Yes I can see that. Giving of ones self in a form of compensation for some...
  May 10th, 2021 01:32
• Negative in Blue (Neville) Your lines are as artistically, knowingly loaded brushes painting from a...
  May 9th, 2021 23:19
• Approaching Ascension (Orchidee) Did Fido write this? He\'s at it again you know, telling people what Jesus...
  May 9th, 2021 07:42
• The Light Of The New Day. (Goldfinch60) As dusk falls AAAAAAARRRRGGGGGH i fell..... but i do agree, theres always...
  May 9th, 2021 01:35
• Somewhere in Time (Ron parrish aka wordman) It\'s a beautiful dream and a desire straight from a longing heart too....
  May 8th, 2021 17:38
• Live the dream ??? (Andy Hunter) Welcome home from the patriotic home guard of true Brits and the illegal...
  May 8th, 2021 14:46
• The Earth Worm-a sonnet  (Dove) The humble earthworm was not created to become hooked bait ot abused. No...
  May 8th, 2021 14:39
• Sleep Deprived (A Boy With Roses) I don\'t know which i like best, your piece today or your resonse to...
  May 8th, 2021 14:36
• Living Inside (Starrbaby91) \"I live inside my own head most days\". Maybe the other days are the ones...
  May 8th, 2021 14:30
• Through the Lens of Drunk Eyes (A Boy With Roses) The motivation behind drunken words can be difficult to face up to for...
  May 8th, 2021 14:27
• Meditation (Fay Slimm.) Today in the rainfall i tried to imagine meditation out there in the...
  May 8th, 2021 12:52
• Coffin Dodger. (Goldfinch60) Great to laugh at ourselves isn\'t it. Lets be honest, we all want to...
  May 8th, 2021 12:40
• My little slice of heaven (Poetic Dan) Really good to read how your mind at peace has come to love the everday...
  May 8th, 2021 12:38
• Sleepless Dreamer (MrNobody40) What a great situation that would be. To be able to live in dreams which...
  April 23rd, 2021 09:43
• Missing (Fay Slimm.) Oh yes and yes again.... when the telly is more important than her...
  April 23rd, 2021 05:41
• Love #2 (Rebmasters) How is it we can elevate one so high with love that we don\'t want to love...
  April 23rd, 2021 05:28
• Making Islands (Neville) Neville you devil. So many wats to interpret this gem. I like to think...
  April 23rd, 2021 05:15
• Liberty To Love (Orchidee) I\'m reiterating Goldfinch\'s words on this one.
  April 23rd, 2021 05:02
• Virtual Event. (Goldfinch60) When did a meeting of many \'leaders\' ever amount to a true meeting of...
  April 23rd, 2021 04:58
• The Wild Wind Of Antiquity (Alan .S. Jeeves) And we who survive the ill wind shall know more than we thought. We were...
  April 22nd, 2021 16:59
• A Moment (MrNobody40) As life goes on so such brief encounters colour the poets character.
  April 22nd, 2021 11:45
• Sweet Pride (Jerry Reynolds) mmmm You\'ve made me look forward to seeing my grandaughters in their...
  April 22nd, 2021 09:11
• Fall Out (Neville) Fed up with her station of abstenance she decided to let it roll. I...
  April 22nd, 2021 07:14
• Jail-bird (Fay Slimm.) THe only cage for a bird I could respect was that in which dwelled an...
  April 22nd, 2021 07:11
• In My Dreams. (Goldfinch60) I\'m very much a fan of \'Last of the summer wine\' and record all the...
  April 22nd, 2021 07:03
• Aced (Last Shadow) Words escape me -- i saw no poem
  April 21st, 2021 17:34
• Memories (Jerry Reynolds) Ah those memories which make us what we are today. Where would any poet be...
  April 21st, 2021 09:38
• lonely (Dysthymia) Very moving passages from a lonely heart. Suggestion, find a bench in...
  April 21st, 2021 09:35
• THE CRUX OF LIFE (Amon) Without darkness how can we appreciate the light. Pleasure is all the...
  April 21st, 2021 09:28
• Incoming (Fay Slimm.) You tease the longing, in this my solo heart, to be the hero arriving upon...
  April 21st, 2021 09:09
• When I am Done (Neville) Nicely plucked snippets of occasion from a life lived in fullness. It\'s...
  April 21st, 2021 09:03
• Good Lives For Each Of Us. (Goldfinch60) Nice words, we are indeed lucky to be middle class white retirees.
  April 21st, 2021 08:56
• Just a Person (Annonymouswonder) Makes me uncomfortable when people apologise for their right to be...
  April 20th, 2021 12:50
• To Say That ‘I AM A JOKER’...Is Not About Ego (Nafis Light) A joker, a clown, a facade, a defence mechanism. Not the real person but...
  April 20th, 2021 09:42
• Readied (Fay Slimm.) My word, this \'virgin\' bride has been well schooled and readied for her...
  April 20th, 2021 09:37
• TREASURES OF THE SNOW (Amon) \"Divers troubles had befallen me\" - the \'bends\' perhaps - or running...
  April 20th, 2021 05:36
• Lost Love (Kevin Michael Bloor) A great piece today. It contains so much. The great loss of ones fionest...
  April 20th, 2021 04:41
• A Jar of Nuthatch (Neville) Not often I get to read a final line with a \'hard on\' in it. In a...
  April 20th, 2021 04:36
• New Light Ahead. (Goldfinch60) Now for goodness sake get a shave!!! I\'m lucky, got fed up with...
  April 20th, 2021 04:28
• Christmas (Welsh) Yep, it must feel like christmas now Wales has come out of lockdown.
  April 19th, 2021 13:38
• Unreal (Fay Slimm.) You do paint with words so well Fay. Worthy of my several re-reads to soak...
  April 19th, 2021 07:00
• Victory Voicings (Orchidee) Again Orchi you show me the similarities of our separate beliefs here.
  April 19th, 2021 06:06
• Custer. (Goldfinch60) Blimey i remember my brother telling me that story when i was about 14....
  April 19th, 2021 06:00
• Dancing In Her Arms. (Goldfinch60) To see truly good young singing talent on TV has a similar effect on me...
  April 18th, 2021 08:39
• Inseparable (DesertWords) Refreshing to see words of an enlightened mind. God is within us all, we...
  April 18th, 2021 08:34
• Who cares but I (Rosiedm) Great sentiment. Giving to our wildlife when we humans are doing so much...
  April 17th, 2021 18:15
• Principles In Giving - Giving Series (6) (Orchidee) This brings my god ever closer to me.
  April 17th, 2021 04:56
• 01/24/2018 (CLM) Again you bring the realism of true feelings. This time the lingering hurt...
  April 17th, 2021 04:53
• Bookitis. (Goldfinch60) One of my pleasure is to lose myself in a book in surroundings strange to...
  April 17th, 2021 04:25
• Carefree Contentment (Orchidee) Well my god is different to yours but i cant deny the similarity in your...
  April 16th, 2021 12:45
• Listening (Fay Slimm.) Water brings to us a tranquillity of reflective mood whether it be...
  April 16th, 2021 12:41
• Talking With My Brother. (Goldfinch60) Cor! if only the rules of rugby were so similar. Lovely game but i...
  April 16th, 2021 12:34
• Ignorance Reigns. (Goldfinch60) I\'d never think of you as ignorant. Rather i\'d say \"open minded to...
  April 15th, 2021 05:44
• IN SCOTLAND - IN LONDON (Michael Edwards) Love that picture Michael. Parts of it remind me of what comes out of my...
  April 14th, 2021 11:57
• Life Book. (Goldfinch60) May you never run out of paper to keep making new pages.
  April 14th, 2021 02:03
• Doggerel Dave Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Devoting a poem to rhyme brings forth enchantments devine though oft...
  April 13th, 2021 09:45
• Lover’s manual (L. B. Mek) Hmm difficult. I would not choose to dictate to another how they should...
  April 12th, 2021 04:05
• Truthful Lives. (Goldfinch60) Speaking the truth in response to a direct question has landed me with all...
  April 12th, 2021 04:00
• 11/18/2020 (CLM) A heartfelt and touching piece. After damage is done within a...
  April 12th, 2021 03:57
• Oh To Be (CLM) I really like this. I think you voice a desire within all of us who are...
  April 11th, 2021 19:14
• Light In Our Lives. (Goldfinch60) Yes, there is always light for those who will see it, even in the darkest...
  April 11th, 2021 03:13
• Island Heaven. (Goldfinch60) Rare to see you producing rhyme like this. It\'s as if you were doodling...
  April 10th, 2021 11:06
• INEQUALITY BY TWO (Michael Edwards) Equality being a two edged sword.
  April 9th, 2021 18:30
• The Minute (Fay Slimm.) Exquisite! I haven\'t been coming into mps much lately but so pleased i...
  March 31st, 2021 04:08
• Inside every living being (Poetic Dan) Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown....
  March 28th, 2021 17:35
• Inside every living being (Poetic Dan) Reading your posts over the last few years its clear that you have grown....
  March 27th, 2021 07:06
• Love\'s Insanity (Kevin Michael Bloor) Blimey ! There\'s so much going on in this poem. I\'m full of...
  March 15th, 2021 06:28
• Bounty (Fay Slimm.) Ouch! Was that Orchi singing too or another falling rock. How easily I...
  March 15th, 2021 06:24
• Daily Door. (Goldfinch60) Lets hope it brings a lot of joy and sets a trend.
  March 15th, 2021 03:44
• The Struggle (Mrbleasdale) Is this revealing or fiction. I\'m asking myself this because if it is a...
  March 14th, 2021 07:56
• Wise Waiting (Orchidee) Orchi, this is fine praise indeed from you and for all of us regardless of...
  March 14th, 2021 06:36
• Aah Bach. (Goldfinch60) I read your piece and decided to then play the video and listen. My...
  March 14th, 2021 06:31
• Mental health matters to me (Poetic Dan) You, me and the rest of the poets on here are the lucky ones who know...
  March 14th, 2021 06:19
• Our Poem (Fay Slimm.) How our endings have shaped our picture of a safer future. Who hasn\'t...
  March 14th, 2021 06:05
• Angels n Demands (HAZE) Reads like a construct of a self centered wannabe. Only let down by the...
  March 13th, 2021 19:37