Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- The Way Of Wisdom - Wisdom Series (1) (Orchidee)
The church has long been anti wisdom if people did not see things the way...
June 8th, 2021 02:44 - The Man In My Life. (Goldfinch60)
You have chosen one of my absolute favourite pieces of music...
June 8th, 2021 01:50 - WHAT I BELIEVE... (Jaimeleigh)
Maybe if you read some of the poetry on here it would begin to restore...
June 8th, 2021 01:37 - Cactus Days (Neville)
Suck who\'s lance was that?
A teenage called me a fat c.nt a while ago....
June 7th, 2021 12:21 - Seize (Fay Slimm.)
LOL the only times I look back with regret are upon the times i put my...
June 7th, 2021 12:08 - Mustard Meditation (Orchidee)
I am imagining you singing this fine piece u have penned (reaches for an...
June 7th, 2021 02:26 - Forest (Jayasree)
Well yes, you will know from my previous posts how i am in awe of the...
June 7th, 2021 02:15 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (Michael Edwards)
Wot no artwork? {ò¿ó}
Meet me at the 19th hole, darn it.
June 7th, 2021 02:02 - So Very Long Ago. (Goldfinch60)
As a man who latterly used his hands to earn a crust in the construction...
June 7th, 2021 01:57 - Natures Monet (Saxon Crow)
Love it, so glad you are posting again.
This is one for my fav\'s for...
June 7th, 2021 01:51 - Linda (Jerry Reynolds)
Contentment.
June 6th, 2021 09:39 - Enchantment (Fay Slimm.)
Ah those childhood hot summer days of boundless energy. Still there i\'m...
June 6th, 2021 08:14 - The Edge of Golden (Neville)
Said the spiderr to the fly.
June 6th, 2021 08:10 - Communing Company (Orchidee)
Symbolic cannibalism. Drinking his blood and eating his flesh.
June 6th, 2021 08:06 - The Earth Is Healing (Jayasree)
But the oceans were no less full of human waste plastics pollution and now...
June 6th, 2021 03:03 - Tears Stream Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Life goes on along it\'s journey for a purpose unrevealed to us.
June 6th, 2021 02:15 - Estuary (Saxon Crow)
Superb analogy. Each tide beyond my control.
May there be many more...
June 6th, 2021 02:13 - THE BREAK UP (Andy Hunter)
You express the uglyness of being on the wrong side of a break-up well...
June 5th, 2021 07:38 - New History (Saxon Crow)
Here we are with a government doing its best to do the right thing so that...
June 5th, 2021 07:30 - Don\'t cry ... (TenderMe)
Good positive words.
Tears though have an afterglow, we always feel...
June 5th, 2021 06:58 - The Blue Planet (Jayasree)
Until EVERYONE realises they must do their bit we are fighting a losing...
June 5th, 2021 06:53 - Meditative Moments (Orchidee)
Sexism at play here.
June 5th, 2021 06:49 - Out of the blue (Jerry Reynolds)
Brilliant.
Short, sweet, punchy.
Goes into my fav\'s.
June 5th, 2021 06:34 - Unspooled (Fay Slimm.)
Who knows what maelstrom our minds may be swept into if dementia choses to...
June 5th, 2021 06:27 - As Yet Unforgiven (Neville)
Really good use of the double negative in that last line. This piece wins...
June 5th, 2021 06:19 - The Day Is Ended. (Goldfinch60)
I love this piece. I bet you felt incredibly moved.
Your so good to...
June 5th, 2021 06:15 - RANDOM THOUGHTS ON COMPLEX ISSUES (Michael Edwards)
Before stepping outside your own front door it is prudent to ensure all at...
June 5th, 2021 05:51 - Kintsugi (Saxon Crow)
So long as you are both happy to keep using the repaired relationship, it...
June 5th, 2021 05:48 - Aged Dreams (MendedFences27)
Ah yes, those young idealistic days matured into an acceptable truce of...
June 4th, 2021 14:32 - Not Forgotten (Jerry Reynolds)
Some love opportunities benefit from being cut short so that we may live...
June 4th, 2021 07:56 - sometimes it hurts more than others (Queer-with-a-pen)
Very disturbing personal revelations from you today.
My words are to...
June 4th, 2021 04:54 - Alone (TenderMe)
Those times of sadness and soul searching which we all must pass through...
June 4th, 2021 04:23 - A Precious Drought (Neville)
Violet shaded tears of amethyst treasure long loving moments of...
June 4th, 2021 04:06 - Mercy Musings (Orchidee)
This reads like a section of Orchidee\'s concise revised bible. Well at...
June 4th, 2021 02:27 - The Cat In The Window (Jayasree)
Who knows what the mind of a cat perceives. But you certainly give us...
June 4th, 2021 02:24 - Challenges (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed Fay for now i am taking on a bent and twisted stance myself. It...
June 4th, 2021 02:19 - Tapestry of Scars (Saxon Crow)
Such wonderful words which reach into our soul. When confidence is damaged...
June 4th, 2021 02:14 - Orchid Love. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful message of undying love Goldfinch.
June 4th, 2021 02:09 - The beauty of tenderness (TenderMe)
A truly tender loving poem.
June 3rd, 2021 07:12 - Let\'s Be Frenemies (Poetic_person)
There\'s a lot of wisdom in your words. Especially when you really love...
June 3rd, 2021 05:45 - Enticing (Fay Slimm.)
I can picture you in my twisted mind\'s eye sat in the shroud of night...
June 3rd, 2021 05:37 - Upon Reflection (Neville)
Oh thats just superb Neville! The most profound words I have read this...
June 3rd, 2021 05:30 - Stolen words! (Saxon Crow)
Oh so true. And then they want you to keep yer records on a cloud??? Dream...
June 3rd, 2021 05:28 - Natures Symphonic Day. (Goldfinch60)
Natures theme music and the beautiful solos she brings.
Blissful.
June 3rd, 2021 05:25 - Untitled - XXXIX (SureshG)
Everything changes within the wink of an eye.
June 3rd, 2021 05:23 - The Night Sky (Jayasree)
Alone with the midnight moon and her light bathes a magic glow to...
June 3rd, 2021 05:13 - Fireflies (Saxon Crow)
I like this and the message, no matter what is happening in our lives, the...
June 2nd, 2021 12:40 - The Hidden Side of Days – Day 1 (Nafis Light)
A truly great passtime if u can live up to it. Now how about giving some...
June 2nd, 2021 09:09 - Let me be yours again (TenderMe)
Wow. So many mixed up questions raid the brain when young love goes awry...
June 2nd, 2021 05:07 - The Way Things Are (Poetic_person)
I like it. Nice story telling with a super last verse. I especially liked...
June 2nd, 2021 05:03 - My wish (Jayasree)
You are a poet. That wild imagination is your gift. Here on MPS you know...
June 2nd, 2021 04:59 - As long as your happy. (Jay123)
There is a great deal of wisdom in your words about LIFE today Joe. I get...
June 2nd, 2021 04:50 - Global Warning (Subregi)
Seems so easy to think about and tell ourselves its right to make serious...
June 2nd, 2021 04:42 - Hearing, Helping, Hoping (Orchidee)
Uplifting isn\'t it when you shed tears and plea. Theres a...
June 2nd, 2021 04:37 - Queries (Fay Slimm.)
I sense those jarring moments when self assurance subsides and faith in...
June 2nd, 2021 04:34 - If Truth was a Colour (Neville)
I wish truth were black and white with no room for...
June 2nd, 2021 04:13 - All\'s Well. (Goldfinch60)
Take her out into a social circle Goldie, let her be in the company of...
June 2nd, 2021 04:06 - Ten Summers Bygone (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Get there whilst you can Alan because it\'s looking like another covid...
June 1st, 2021 12:23 - Alive (Rebmasters)
I believe it does.... I wonder what we\'ll get next time around?
June 1st, 2021 05:21 - Frenzy (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely depiction of my favourite bird. I\'m always amazed by the bird...
June 1st, 2021 04:05 - I am not alive (TenderMe)
A beautifully written poem with a sadness of soul.
If you take time to...
June 1st, 2021 03:04 - Chasing the rainbow (Jayasree)
Yep, I am my own very rainbow just as you describe so well. Happy to be...
June 1st, 2021 02:59 - A Daily Ditty (Orchidee)
Good message Orchi.
June 1st, 2021 02:57 - Once Upon a Freckled Cheek (Neville)
Delightful. I\'m jealous.
How do you pack so much into short lines?
June 1st, 2021 02:41 - Daily Drops. (Goldfinch60)
Great to hear satchmo singing and wow at that clarinet solo.
Keep...
June 1st, 2021 02:39 - You and I (Trenz Pruca)
Wonderful, all encompassing, poetry.
Yes this is me, within your words,...
June 1st, 2021 02:33 - Together (Fay Slimm.)
One to one as neighbors we seem to get along until a politician or two...
May 31st, 2021 02:51 - Exist For Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
I was taken the first time i heard Eva Cassidy sing Somewhere Over the...
May 31st, 2021 02:46 - Tulsa (Jerry Reynolds)
Is it a part of the fabled wild west?
May 30th, 2021 09:24 - Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
Again I see how alike we are in our outlook. No matter what troubles have...
May 30th, 2021 04:33 - Riding a Curve (Neville)
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on...
May 30th, 2021 04:31 - Timing (Jerry Reynolds)
A time for mutual assurance to be demonstrated to one another (and anyone...
May 29th, 2021 09:51 - My Baby Doll (Randyjohnson71)
A touching tribute to your much loved friend.
May 29th, 2021 07:55 - Spent (Fay Slimm.)
Those of us living in the sometimes fertile lands outside a marriage come...
May 29th, 2021 03:46 - 2 Put it Frankly (Neville)
Something tragic and heartfelt recounted here. One of those moments where...
May 29th, 2021 03:34 - People In Life. (Goldfinch60)
So very true sir. I have made sure to include many memories into my pieces...
May 29th, 2021 03:29 - Seen (M.E.M.)
Great write about the confusion of who you are. Well right now you is,...
May 28th, 2021 09:01 - Drifting (Saxon Crow)
And where have you been hiding lately? Warning - only the shallowest...
May 28th, 2021 08:57 - Post-truth in wonderland (Subregi)
I think i\'m going to go live in a cave now. I can no longer trust in...
May 28th, 2021 06:51 - Wholesome Wisdom (Orchidee)
I was imagining you quietly singing this to yourself as you wandered among...
May 28th, 2021 05:08 - Interference (Fay Slimm.)
A vision came as I read your words today. Nothing profound but a vision of...
May 28th, 2021 04:34 - Bloom (Myself and me)
Out of place, unidentified but not overlooked. A sole beauty enlightening...
May 28th, 2021 04:28 - A Box Full of Maybe’s (Neville)
Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let...
May 28th, 2021 03:32 - British Summertime. (Goldfinch60)
Well that\'s it then. The end of english summer. Looks like you enjoyed...
May 28th, 2021 02:58 - SUNSHINE FOREVER (Jayasree)
Just what I need to read after all this poor weather we\'ve had in...
May 28th, 2021 02:52 - Love\'s Glow (Fay Slimm.)
Love comes to us like the promised treasure at the end of that rainbow of...
May 27th, 2021 12:22 - Do Shut Up Orchi.... (Orchidee)
And what is a bishoprick? Why do they have cannons in churches. Would you...
May 27th, 2021 05:00 - Rokhsana (Neville)
Maybe the world was not ready for true beauty. Maybe it is still not...
May 27th, 2021 03:38 - What Is Tomorrow? (Goldfinch60)
Tomorrow is an opportunity.
May 27th, 2021 03:23 - Yellow Birds (Jerry Reynolds)
So He\'s banging to keep half the birds in flight..... saves on the old...
May 26th, 2021 12:51 - So Much (Fay Slimm.)
Whilst sat yearning for my body to awaken to springtime 2021 you lit my...
May 26th, 2021 03:08 - Mary Lou Williams. (Goldfinch60)
Initially overwhelmed by the boldness of her changes in your chosen video,...
May 26th, 2021 02:45 - Scarce Blues (Neville)
In the ending of all things life rests as fragile as butterfly wings...
May 26th, 2021 02:39 - FIRST DATE (Andy Hunter)
I think you captured the atmosphere of younger days very well in your...
May 25th, 2021 13:09 - Me (Jayasree)
Of all those things in the universe we are created. We are the wind, the...
May 25th, 2021 03:21 - The Baby Boomers Of Paradise (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Do we ever really \'grow up\' I wonder. The child of reckless freedoms is...
May 25th, 2021 03:17 - Face-ination (Neville)
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all...
May 25th, 2021 02:32 - Souls Satisfied (Orchidee)
I\'ve done my complaining to god long ago.... all it left me with are...
May 25th, 2021 02:29 - Is The Livin\' Easy In Summertime? (Goldfinch60)
Oh dont knock it my friend, so far it\'s been lockdown then rain.... any...
May 25th, 2021 02:21 - VADAKKUMNATHAN (Jayasree)
Reading your words this morning took me to a place of peace and...
May 24th, 2021 03:47
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