Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Changing the Ending. (Goldfinch60)
That is so profound. Tomorrow is the first day of the rest of my...
December 16th, 2020 02:36 - THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 4 - 6 (Michael Edwards)
He nervously kept his dental appointment knowing the extraction would be...
December 15th, 2020 08:32 - What Was Wrong! (Goldfinch60)
Somehow i can\'t imagine Goldfinch enjoying having his radio tuned to a...
December 15th, 2020 08:29 - Dear writers (Poetic Dan)
Well said Dan. I know MPS has given me many things and i have learned so...
December 15th, 2020 08:23 - Poem, Where is the Love? (AwHec8)
I read your authors comments together with this post and i think you try...
December 14th, 2020 10:15 - Do I (SunSearcher)
Are you? Do you? Will I?
December 14th, 2020 05:21 - Walking (Peto)
Those first two lines are classic. Nice one.
December 14th, 2020 05:20 - Heraldic Harbinger (Orchidee)
And the lord seth unto Moses
come forth
but he came fifth
and won a bag...
December 14th, 2020 04:38 - NIGELLA (Michael Edwards)
Whilst watching her puff pastry
i was taken quite short
and on visiting...
December 14th, 2020 04:36 - Bedtime for tiny tots (Dusk arising)
Dan thanks mate, one for Maarii when she\'s a little bit older...
December 14th, 2020 04:04 - We are not wanting on time, time is waiting on us! (Poetic Dan)
Yes, it\'s all about the journey, I am with you 100% on that vibe.
December 14th, 2020 03:57 - Two Muses. (Goldfinch60)
Envious, I don\'t have a muse. Callioipe maybe but not a name i knew until...
December 14th, 2020 03:54 - Spring (Christina8)
There is really heartfelt pain and longing in your words. It\'s...
December 14th, 2020 03:38 - The Loss of Tenderness (FredPeyer)
Painful words. The sort of words one feels when something, which could...
December 14th, 2020 03:34 - Few little steps in the poerty of life (Poetic Dan)
A lovely time to remember Dan. There will be many more. Such pleasures...
December 14th, 2020 03:30 - TRUE LOVE ~ WHAT ON EARTH IS IT ? A 3 6 3 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good old Corinthians 1 :13 eh?
December 13th, 2020 05:12 - Give Thanks (BlueHeron77)
To the wonder of our omniptent all seeing all conquering god who hath...
December 12th, 2020 19:40 - No Time (FredPeyer)
And long may you feel so.
December 12th, 2020 19:30 - Happy Christmas from my Cathedral (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Thank you Andrew Charles for your kind wishes. And my wishes for health...
December 12th, 2020 19:28 - Life is ment to inspire us all (Poetic Dan)
The past has hurt you and the journey from then to now has been torture...
December 12th, 2020 19:20 - THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards)
There weren\'t many things Bill couldn\'t do well.
But his missus had a...
December 12th, 2020 05:39 - The Moon\'s Call. (Goldfinch60)
Great to hear Chet really bop. This is 1954 and he still had his teeth.I...
December 12th, 2020 05:23 - black dea(th/f) (Tylerintheclouds)
I read your poem \'free therapy\' as the first of yours that i had seen....
December 11th, 2020 19:54 - eye of the storm (Tylerintheclouds)
Yes, giving your vulnerability to a lover means overcoming this fear. Love...
December 11th, 2020 19:48 - free therapy (Tylerintheclouds)
I\'m not really sure why but i like this a lot. It\'s certainly a bit...
December 11th, 2020 19:45 - invisible Souls..... (Suresh)
And as you grow up the crying gets pushed further and further to the back...
December 11th, 2020 19:41 - LIVE TO WORSHIP ANOTHER DAY (Blackhawkwings)
Apart from making the person who prays feel better, what good did praying...
December 11th, 2020 19:36 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Ah... my friend in Bretforton. Worth trying a ghost ale in that pub....
December 11th, 2020 05:44 - Rather than crank up the heat... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Hmmm those Btu\'s are a thing of the past in Britain since sometime back...
December 10th, 2020 16:27 - Nowness. (Fay Slimm.)
Firstly, well done using your chosen layout. It really works for pace and...
December 10th, 2020 10:28 - SHOW ME GOD (Amon)
My word, you\'ve really been sucked into this religion con by the look of...
December 10th, 2020 07:00 - Wholesome Way (Orchidee)
You should have a choir perform your pieces Orchidee.
Where can i learn...
December 10th, 2020 04:31 - More back In Return. (Goldfinch60)
Very true Goldfinch but we must be careful of not making people feel bad...
December 10th, 2020 02:43 - Turning And Trusting (Orchidee)
This LORD fellah, i thought he was supposed to be the god of love and now...
December 9th, 2020 09:42 - Humanity needs pollen & seeds (Poetic Dan)
If we could all flow at the same time and in the same direction then what...
December 9th, 2020 08:00 - Applause (Fay Slimm.)
The love of the wonders of nature shines through so strong in your poetry...
December 9th, 2020 07:53 - Tapestry of Words. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed they do, having been chosen with feeling totally suited to the...
December 9th, 2020 02:19 - Nostalgia (Fay Slimm.)
Oh yes, I\'d greedily accept a generous serving of that. Open up the...
December 8th, 2020 07:25 - Poem, Love Is, Love Moves? (AwHec8)
Blimey! You make it sound like a military campaign followed by...
December 7th, 2020 15:52 - Swansong (Neville)
It\'s a surprise i\'ve lasted this long. Long enough to admit, I like your...
December 7th, 2020 09:37 - Never too late, to reflect (L. B. Mek)
Why was i thinking about Trump as i read this?
December 7th, 2020 05:50 - Knowledge & unknown (Poetic Dan)
So much going on in your post today and your video is again...
December 7th, 2020 05:46 - William (Fay Slimm.)
I have seen some of his wonderful photography from the Scott expedition...
December 7th, 2020 05:39 - I pluck the sun from my pocket (Trenz Pruca)
What a little beauty you pen today.
December 7th, 2020 05:31 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (4) (Michael Edwards)
M.E. gave out shrewd advice
but the side effects weren\'t very...
December 7th, 2020 05:30 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
Nice music whilst i read your tribute. Of course i float away on the...
December 7th, 2020 05:18 - I hated that moment when (Lexbry)
Wow, so much passion for the negative in your post. Is that all there...
December 6th, 2020 06:39 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards)
Twere as if his words were soup
served up in a dish
of...
December 6th, 2020 06:35 - Carbonito de Sophie (Neville)
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ ...
December 6th, 2020 06:32 - To School. (Goldfinch60)
I went to many different schools often having to travel by bus to get...
December 6th, 2020 06:28 - Poetry is guiding me (Poetic Dan)
Poetry... is like an expression of what is inside us.... our poetry is as...
December 6th, 2020 05:58 - Groundhog Day (Neville)
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft...
December 5th, 2020 11:46 - Dear mother (Poetic Dan)
I bet it felt good to write those words Dan.
Lately your posts are...
December 5th, 2020 06:08 - She Was Standing There. (Goldfinch60)
Of course she was there for you. Always there for you in days passed and...
December 5th, 2020 06:04 - PASSION OVERHEATED (Michael Edwards)
Lorra wisdom in that!
December 5th, 2020 05:59 - Doubts (Birddie Jane)
Well, your future belongs to you not to him.
December 5th, 2020 05:52 - Tea with Mrs. Keeling (Jerry Reynolds)
A young person might wonder how we all managed to grow up with chipped and...
December 4th, 2020 18:35 - Doubts (Birddie Jane)
Terrible theme to be living under. If this was really happening you\'d...
December 4th, 2020 18:30 - Unadulterated anger (Mocuisle)
This reads like a keyboard warriors rant LOL....
Obviously you\'re...
December 4th, 2020 16:08 - A World Without Them (Carolkirby1952)
As will the children and grandchildren live in a world without us.
With...
December 4th, 2020 07:10 - of Destiny (L. B. Mek)
Three good questions upon which to wisely ponder and one resounding...
December 4th, 2020 06:59 - Morecombe 2 (Goldfinch60)
No one can write them like wot you wrote!
Get out of that.... you can\'t...
December 4th, 2020 06:46 - Un-Vocal (Fay Slimm.)
Cor! This made me think about silence, my silence poetically. \"Nowt to...
December 4th, 2020 06:42 - My life (Caz84)
Having just discovered you on here i had to see more of your poetry. You...
December 4th, 2020 06:31 - Although I weep... (Caz84)
This is quite beautiful. Hard to believe such a wonderful piece could be...
December 4th, 2020 06:25 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (2) (Michael Edwards)
Hv u vvr trd wrtng wth s mny vwls mssng s pssbl. thyr jst nt rlly mprtnt r...
December 4th, 2020 02:49 - Rainbows of your Love (Fatlass)
Wow! The quality of your poetry is excellent.
A very personal and moving...
December 4th, 2020 02:43 - December Sunset (Fay Slimm.)
By gum, on a day like that rush off home for a good hot cuppa and a hearty...
December 2nd, 2020 04:13 - RECALLING (Michael Edwards)
Before i start to read, I have to compliment you on a cracking picture...
December 2nd, 2020 04:06 - With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60)
Wish i had a nearby river. The Severn is a bit of a jaunt away through the...
December 2nd, 2020 03:59 - Heavens door (Fatlass)
This is damned good poetry. Well thought out and composed with brilliant...
December 1st, 2020 19:18 - Broken chains, no more crying shame! (Poetic Dan)
Peace, harmony, compromise. Live and let live without turning your back on...
December 1st, 2020 19:10 - Remaining Span (Suresh)
If time be on our hands at the fall of the day, as dusk arises from the...
November 30th, 2020 10:31 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
The greatest emotion we know is love and love of the romantic kind brings...
November 30th, 2020 10:16 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely right. It\'s pointless looking for someone else to do that...
November 30th, 2020 03:07 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
Ah yes that wonderful time each day as our planet home turns us away from...
November 28th, 2020 04:35 - Choice. (Goldfinch60)
But i get blank looks when i venture out, which is quite rare these...
November 28th, 2020 03:42 - In the End (Neville)
November 28th, 2020 00:34 - In the End (Neville)
Grrr at arithmetic in poetry.
Let us be thankful that our deaths are to...
November 28th, 2020 00:34 - Broken Me (SimonW1997)
Forget people trying to teach you rules. Rules will only restrict your...
November 27th, 2020 19:00 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
As a foreigner to your shores, one wonders if those native american...
November 27th, 2020 05:57 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
Your muse is showing.
What wonderful things love does to us ..... to...
November 27th, 2020 05:49 - Solutions (Fay Slimm.)
Scented solutions become the essential oils of a good loving...
November 27th, 2020 05:40 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
I can imagine you sat on your captains log, reading a copy of the...
November 27th, 2020 02:46 - HARD CHEESE (Michael Edwards)
As i said to the milkman \'dairy Lee\' this morning. I think you\'re...
November 27th, 2020 00:48 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
There\'s a sweet-spot on their \'rim\' and dance they surely will but........
November 26th, 2020 15:27 - Tabernacle Time (Orchidee)
I took your list to Lidl but could find none of it on the shelves.
I...
November 26th, 2020 03:11 - IF (Fay Slimm.)
A true reminiscence, with absolutely no distractions, can indeed be a very...
November 26th, 2020 03:07 - What else is there to do! (Poetic Dan)
Lockdown plays havoc with my body clock too. I fall asleep in my chair,...
November 26th, 2020 02:20 - Suburban Solidarity (Doggerel Dave)
If the system is against ya..... chop the bugger down. Or drill a hole in...
November 26th, 2020 00:45 - I rhyme better than I can act (Poetic Dan)
There\'s a lot of wise words in your post today.
Those headlines...
November 26th, 2020 00:38 - Challenge (Fay Slimm.)
Resilience, but we\'re not born with it. It is a life skill we learn or...
November 25th, 2020 05:26 - In My Mind. (Goldfinch60)
There are bound to be days like that. You are a strong and philosophical,...
November 25th, 2020 02:35 - Poetry in motion (Poetic Dan)
That video says so much about you and your empathy, understanding and love...
November 24th, 2020 04:12 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
The bringing together of love\'s desire and fantasy with the tangible...
November 24th, 2020 04:04 - Nature\'s Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
\"The colours of the rainbow, so pretty in the sky, are also on the faces...
November 24th, 2020 04:01 - Seize (Fay Slimm.)
The here and the now
I would steer from the prow
glancing not one look...
November 23rd, 2020 10:32 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
I find it quite possible
to miscount my syllables
but it\'s rather...
November 23rd, 2020 04:11 - It Is So Easy. (Goldfinch60)
Until i read the third line i thought you were going to tell us how to...
November 23rd, 2020 03:30 - Nature - got to be a winner!? (Doggerel Dave)
(sing to tune of I\'m all shook up)
Affixed to my sole
from out some...
November 23rd, 2020 01:41
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