Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- - Division - (PoeticBiscuit)
Which country is that?
November 17th, 2020 21:11 - Anomalous (Jbritt321)
Seems like they are the wrong society for you to be mixing in.
November 17th, 2020 14:25 - 3. Humble B. Bumble : Bee my guest (Aa Harvey)
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover....
November 17th, 2020 14:24 - Us (Starbuks)
Looks like that day you mentioned in the first line of your poem has...
November 17th, 2020 11:05 - A Preaching Précis (Orchidee)
I think it is man (the religious christian man in this case) who stands in...
November 17th, 2020 10:23 - Hippies. (Goldfinch60)
Well they had a point, I was too young at 15 in the summer of love to...
November 17th, 2020 10:16 - SHORTLIES (4) (Michael Edwards)
Firstly before i read your post, dammit thats a really appealing piece of...
November 17th, 2020 10:08 - Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave)
Somebody stole my dad\'s car with my essay in it whilst i was in the...
November 17th, 2020 10:01 - Haze (Jbritt321)
Reads like you are hungry to move on. The future is out there an on its...
November 17th, 2020 09:57 - Until I did (Lonelyraccoon)
This is an excellent piece of poetry. It displays what I have taken to...
November 17th, 2020 09:54 - Gone (Neville)
Really? Is there no way to get rid of you? just kidding.
I suppose...
November 16th, 2020 16:08 - 2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie) (Aa Harvey)
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the...
November 16th, 2020 11:27 - I want (Jeffrey Roy)
It would worry me a bit to enter a relationship with someone who is needy....
November 16th, 2020 06:05 - Servant Sheep (Orchidee)
And were in the precepts does it say go to church or even that a church is...
November 16th, 2020 05:45 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
Your first three verses take me on yet another familiarity infused trip of...
November 16th, 2020 05:38 - Mediators of life (Poetic Dan)
Yes I agree. Surely out first responsibilities are to respect and protect...
November 16th, 2020 05:28 - Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Tell me about it, after chemotherapy had it\'s way with my memory cells...
November 16th, 2020 05:26 - Living Questions (DesertWords)
And perhaps compromise comes later still. Some questions are so huge we...
November 15th, 2020 07:46 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
I fell from a tree
where i had no place to be
The school of hard...
November 15th, 2020 07:43 - I am pure poetry (Poetic Dan)
Dan, please never lose sight of what you are today. You are an authority...
November 15th, 2020 07:38 - A PATRIOT I (or A DOUBLE WHAMMY) (Michael Edwards)
Absolutely agree with you here. Yet eyes blinded by dogma will think you a...
November 15th, 2020 07:21 - Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60)
Historically the organised christian churches, especially that catholic...
November 15th, 2020 07:08 - Becoming...Human – Silk Dance (Nafis Light)
Thats just what i used to love about trance.
November 14th, 2020 09:48 - Children of nature (Poetic Dan)
I Watched the Video then read your short poem. I\'ll, tell you what, I...
November 14th, 2020 09:46 - Happy Diwali 2020 (Suresh)
May the lights remain in your soul to light your future wellbeing. Stay...
November 14th, 2020 09:36 - Such a Good Start. (Goldfinch60)
Well, what can I say about Weather Report.... I have all the studio...
November 14th, 2020 03:59 - Becoming...Human – Poetic DAN (Nafis Light)
A good character capture of our Poetic Dan.
Poetry is therapy.
November 13th, 2020 11:43 - Where Did This Come From? (Goldfinch60)
When it comes to the subject of music, then the lyric \"there is always...
November 13th, 2020 09:37 - Co-Existence (Fay Slimm.)
Co-existence. Acceptance, forgiving, overlooking, chiding, learning,...
November 12th, 2020 08:16 - Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60)
I share your joy of the beautiful world expressed so simply in your words...
November 12th, 2020 08:09 - Maarii lullaby returns (Poetic Dan)
Dan, it\'s so good to see you writing about someone you love and feeling...
November 12th, 2020 08:03 - War-Usage (Fay Slimm.)
Your well chosen feature of our young men and boys marching into war...
November 11th, 2020 08:02 - Winning. (Goldfinch60)
Oh yes, we have to be big enough and ugly enough to take it on the chin...
November 11th, 2020 07:55 - POEM FOR A WINTER\'S NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
ooh by \'eck, you\'ve inspired me to write about a winter\'s night. I\'ll...
November 11th, 2020 07:53 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
No one but you Fay can romance the taste of home made wine with the...
November 10th, 2020 07:36 - Cinema Paridiso. (Goldfinch60)
Some have the gift of embodying emotion into their creative pieces be they...
November 10th, 2020 07:30 - love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Congratulations, you\'re getting worse. You\'re so vain is the correct...
November 9th, 2020 18:59 - Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8)
Blimey, u don\'t half rely on some dodgy background stories. Adam and eve...
November 9th, 2020 13:07 - Back There (Fay Slimm.)
Dreamed of home, whilst surrounded by deaths active machine of war not...
November 9th, 2020 10:19 - Somewhere Between Trees (Neville)
The golden years. For some there may just golden days but gold is gold and...
November 9th, 2020 09:58 - The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s no rush to take that final journey yet. Plenty of needs for you...
November 9th, 2020 09:48 - Unsung (Fay Slimm.)
Nature does her beautiful fine costumery over grounds once swept with...
November 8th, 2020 09:43 - Nevafar (Neville)
Somethings are said and linger. They tease hope when time should have...
November 8th, 2020 09:02 - Revering Remembrance (Orchidee)
Onward christian soldaten mitt der cross of jesus leading us to kill and...
November 8th, 2020 06:53 - A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Nice one me old china! Brought back memories like it was only down the...
November 8th, 2020 05:25 - Clouds (Bay)
Lovely positive appreciation of the wonderful world we live in and of...
November 8th, 2020 05:19 - SHORTLIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
She stood on the bridge at midnight
looking awful and feeling woosey
a...
November 8th, 2020 05:15 - The QUEEN (FineB)
Yes, the noble beauty, around whom strategic forces move. Respect her...
November 8th, 2020 05:07 - Happy Anniversary Joyce. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving piece today. Your heart is surrounded in the strength of the...
November 8th, 2020 04:58 - A Taxonomy of Knowledge Warren Gaston (Warren Gaston)
Good fun, certainly raised a laugh in me.... more please.
November 7th, 2020 09:44 - MERRY CHRISTMAS (Last Shadow)
Are you planning on surviving till christmas.... it\'s all of 46 days...
November 7th, 2020 09:41 - PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK (Airatmaninravi)
Happiness is peace of mind.
Does not need so many words and verses as...
November 7th, 2020 07:57 - Returning Reality - Isaiah Series (18) (Orchidee)
Guide me oh great jehova!... but does a guide arrive at all.... is the...
November 7th, 2020 06:21 - Panic Attack (Gray)
Sex shouldnt feel like that... have you considered a new mattress?
November 7th, 2020 06:18 - The Bishop (FineB)
One\'s bishop should always be respected and brought into play only when a...
November 7th, 2020 05:54 - Unity of Opposites (Neville)
Opposites are often closer than is apparent in the sphere of human...
November 7th, 2020 05:50 - Asking (Fay Slimm.)
Ah and here we see the mind at work behind the reticence..... you have a...
November 7th, 2020 05:45 - Total Confusion. (Goldfinch60)
Reggae version =
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5tVhHDH4aDA
or on a...
November 7th, 2020 05:42 - Hunger (Fay Slimm.)
How many indeed. These brave home makers, wives and mothers placing their...
November 2nd, 2020 04:11 - Survive Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
On my TV are MP\'s imploring
Stay at home even if it\'s quite...
November 2nd, 2020 03:56 - Everyday is Halloween (Arobot)
Halloween was wild here in UK. I wish everday could be so invigorating. It...
November 1st, 2020 17:52 - Sidewalk Cracks III (SheWasTheSun)
I found it behind the wallpaper in a bedsit i had many years ago. It was...
November 1st, 2020 17:49 - The Genesis connection (Gerrylegister)
Genesis is so abviously a myth written by a man... clearly there were no...
November 1st, 2020 09:41 - Joker44’s Side – Keep on Living...Aftermath (Nafis Light)
Good positive stuff, damn shame it is at a time when so much is in...
November 1st, 2020 07:37 - Heydays (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely. Weren\'t those days of simple pleasures so wonderful... and now we...
November 1st, 2020 06:36 - Little Shepherdesses (Neville)
What a lovely bright and dare i say \'jolly\' poem. Great light hearted...
November 1st, 2020 06:29 - Saints Splendorous (Orchidee)
That feeding of the five thousand with a few scraps of food. Were there...
November 1st, 2020 03:38 - Autumns Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one and oh how i miss it... staying locked away for self...
November 1st, 2020 03:33 - UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards)
I agree, three good ones and clever. Beyond my scope to contribute this...
November 1st, 2020 03:29 - On Tour. (Doggerel Dave)
Great poem, horrendous accommodation. I never stay in pubs for all the...
October 31st, 2020 17:51 - Joker44’s Side – Emotionally Attractive (Nafis Light)
It would be easy to write that broken wings maketh the poet Joker but I am...
October 31st, 2020 04:52 - Returning And Restoration - Isaiah Series (15) (Orchidee)
Are those all your words or did another man write them..... putting words...
October 31st, 2020 04:32 - The Witching Hours. (Goldfinch60)
I hate to dampen your enthusiasm but i think it\'s going to rain on your...
October 31st, 2020 04:30 - MAKE ME (Amon)
It\'s all there within you and it is only you can be what you will...
October 31st, 2020 04:22 - becoming (Queer-with-a-pen)
That\'s what is called unconditional love or devotion. Many of us have a...
October 31st, 2020 01:33 - Depression (L. B. Mek)
Wow, that must be one definitive revelation of a poets inner sadness.
October 30th, 2020 05:41 - Note to Self... (Orchidee)
A fine write - unquote.
October 30th, 2020 05:38 - Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60)
And so the journey of life continues. You choice of analogy, climbing a...
October 30th, 2020 05:20 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
A heartfelt plea for the real love and loyal dedication the mature heart...
October 30th, 2020 05:12 - It’s nothing personal (Aa Harvey)
It\'s good job i\'m a rabbit and this human thing is just a disguise so i...
October 29th, 2020 08:20 - Faithful Following - Isaiah Series (14) (Orchidee)
The sax pistols memory is tainted with a regret that they never had you as...
October 29th, 2020 03:19 - This Time. (Fay Slimm.)
The romance of a land which has captured our heart will, upon a long...
October 29th, 2020 03:16 - I AM (Trenz Pruca)
I\'m just a beautiful tree which was reincarnated as a human being... ...
October 29th, 2020 02:42 - Language and Music. (Goldfinch60)
During my life as atradesman working in peoples homes i had the misfortune...
October 29th, 2020 02:41 - UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards)
She went to the therapist to discuss her recurring nightmare until.... ...
October 29th, 2020 02:22 - Innerness (Neville)
In my case the world within would be more aptly described as a thicket....
October 28th, 2020 05:02 - Remainers (Fay Slimm.)
Well if this dont prick my finger with many memories i dont know what...
October 28th, 2020 04:17 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes, pearls of wisdom from star trek..... now that we are all aged...
October 28th, 2020 03:46 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
I could be here as critic,
something parasitic
but last night was...
October 28th, 2020 03:40 - Changing (Fay Slimm.)
I guess the safest approach for ones self is to be self assured and follow...
October 27th, 2020 13:36 - My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Lake placid eh? Being close to a body of water has a certain magic...
October 27th, 2020 07:06 - Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville)
This is a class thing i\'m sure.... the only dust i got was on my Airfix...
October 27th, 2020 07:03 - Still going (Aa Harvey)
That\'s the human condition... for a thinker.
October 26th, 2020 16:25 - Joker44’s Side – If We... (Nafis Light)
Ah yes wonderful words of wisdom but i can\'t think of a single century in...
October 26th, 2020 16:21 - Delusional (John Prophet)
Strange words to be accompanied by your chosen picture of busy ants. Ants...
October 26th, 2020 16:18 - Tall Tales (Fay Slimm.)
Superb picture your words painted for me today. I saw the ruined prow...
October 26th, 2020 05:41 - Restoration Reassurances - Isaiah Series (12) (Orchidee)
Falls from the lips like milk and honey. But i could have sworn that old...
October 26th, 2020 03:39 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
Yep. Totally agree. Make the point rather than the rhyme.
October 26th, 2020 03:36 - Dear Dad (LeighB)
This is the third piece of yours i have read (although it was the first...
October 26th, 2020 03:24 - My Invisible Hero (LeighB)
Having read your piece dear autism i decided to look at your other pieces...
October 26th, 2020 03:16
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