Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- MAKE ME (Amon)
It\'s all there within you and it is only you can be what you will...
October 31st, 2020 04:22 - becoming (Queer-with-a-pen)
That\'s what is called unconditional love or devotion. Many of us have a...
October 31st, 2020 01:33 - Depression (L. B. Mek)
Wow, that must be one definitive revelation of a poets inner sadness.
October 30th, 2020 05:41 - Note to Self... (Orchidee)
A fine write - unquote.
October 30th, 2020 05:38 - Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60)
And so the journey of life continues. You choice of analogy, climbing a...
October 30th, 2020 05:20 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
A heartfelt plea for the real love and loyal dedication the mature heart...
October 30th, 2020 05:12 - It’s nothing personal (Aa Harvey)
It\'s good job i\'m a rabbit and this human thing is just a disguise so i...
October 29th, 2020 08:20 - Faithful Following - Isaiah Series (14) (Orchidee)
The sax pistols memory is tainted with a regret that they never had you as...
October 29th, 2020 03:19 - This Time. (Fay Slimm.)
The romance of a land which has captured our heart will, upon a long...
October 29th, 2020 03:16 - I AM (Trenz Pruca)
I\'m just a beautiful tree which was reincarnated as a human being... ...
October 29th, 2020 02:42 - Language and Music. (Goldfinch60)
During my life as atradesman working in peoples homes i had the misfortune...
October 29th, 2020 02:41 - UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards)
She went to the therapist to discuss her recurring nightmare until.... ...
October 29th, 2020 02:22 - Innerness (Neville)
In my case the world within would be more aptly described as a thicket....
October 28th, 2020 05:02 - Remainers (Fay Slimm.)
Well if this dont prick my finger with many memories i dont know what...
October 28th, 2020 04:17 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes, pearls of wisdom from star trek..... now that we are all aged...
October 28th, 2020 03:46 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
I could be here as critic,
something parasitic
but last night was...
October 28th, 2020 03:40 - Changing (Fay Slimm.)
I guess the safest approach for ones self is to be self assured and follow...
October 27th, 2020 13:36 - My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Lake placid eh? Being close to a body of water has a certain magic...
October 27th, 2020 07:06 - Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville)
This is a class thing i\'m sure.... the only dust i got was on my Airfix...
October 27th, 2020 07:03 - Still going (Aa Harvey)
That\'s the human condition... for a thinker.
October 26th, 2020 16:25 - Joker44’s Side – If We... (Nafis Light)
Ah yes wonderful words of wisdom but i can\'t think of a single century in...
October 26th, 2020 16:21 - Delusional (John Prophet)
Strange words to be accompanied by your chosen picture of busy ants. Ants...
October 26th, 2020 16:18 - Tall Tales (Fay Slimm.)
Superb picture your words painted for me today. I saw the ruined prow...
October 26th, 2020 05:41 - Restoration Reassurances - Isaiah Series (12) (Orchidee)
Falls from the lips like milk and honey. But i could have sworn that old...
October 26th, 2020 03:39 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
Yep. Totally agree. Make the point rather than the rhyme.
October 26th, 2020 03:36 - Dear Dad (LeighB)
This is the third piece of yours i have read (although it was the first...
October 26th, 2020 03:24 - My Invisible Hero (LeighB)
Having read your piece dear autism i decided to look at your other pieces...
October 26th, 2020 03:16 - Dear Autism (LeighB)
A wonderful insightful piece as can only be written from a parents...
October 26th, 2020 03:09 - Time Restabled. (Goldfinch60)
What they euphemistically call the time of dark nights..... i\'m going...
October 26th, 2020 02:33 - The beat of your tune (Lili Ahlam)
Close the distance and bring us more.
Please.
October 25th, 2020 05:19 - Nostalgia. (Fay Slimm.)
Lennon and McCartney words come to mind - there are places i\'ll remember,...
October 25th, 2020 04:34 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ve never had a problem seeing these places virtually everywhere but... ...
October 25th, 2020 02:27 - Poem, What I do not know. (AwHec8)
Looking for a meaning in an old book is wasting time. It\'s full of...
October 24th, 2020 18:10 - Beyond Broke (Neville)
Many out there are still in need of a repair kit in their later years. I...
October 24th, 2020 18:01 - What\'s Wrong With Me (Invisible Scars)
Coming out of a relationship with those feelings is something I have...
October 24th, 2020 03:36 - Just a second, or an hour...... (Orchidee)
Like so much of my time these days I spent it shielding. Sat in a clear...
October 24th, 2020 03:30 - I KID YOU NOT AT ALL (Michael Edwards)
Surely the correct title should be \'pool of mixed race\' - may contain...
October 24th, 2020 03:26 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s the time traveller in you sneaking out through the chinks in the...
October 24th, 2020 03:21 - Loves Sunken Ship (Blackhawkwings)
Well old dude, at your age (just a couple of years older than mine) you...
October 23rd, 2020 19:04 - We Made It Another Day (Felicityjones)
In our wandering through life there are many paths before us. Sometimes...
October 23rd, 2020 18:55 - a executive order (Lucifer very very very 1st)
I see you are still having problems with basic English grammar.
October 23rd, 2020 13:28 - Commitment (Fay Slimm.)
Well now I realise you see me for the ingenuine beast i really am. Totally...
October 23rd, 2020 13:12 - Daydream (Dasim)
Now that is a beautiful piece of work sir! What wonderful things our...
October 23rd, 2020 12:53 - Awash With Sunlight. (Goldfinch60)
Why does it take so long for us to find we love our world? Oh that we were...
October 23rd, 2020 04:04 - PICTURE SHOW (Joe Marcello)
LOL so you\'re saying never mind what is there, just see what you want to...
October 22nd, 2020 16:55 - Humbly with Love (VPalmer)
Good words. Unity is needed, we are as one on this planet. It is all to...
October 22nd, 2020 13:45 - Joker44’s Side – Two Play Together (Nafis Light)
100% agree... spot on!
But depressed people hate me for being like...
October 22nd, 2020 10:34 - Freedom Favour (Orchidee)
As you know, my thoughts of god differ from yours but your words today are...
October 22nd, 2020 10:10 - Afraid (Dasim)
Between your words is the dilemma of caring when someone chooses a path...
October 22nd, 2020 10:04 - Silence (Last Shadow)
OMG and we havent had guy fawkes night yet!
October 22nd, 2020 09:59 - Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54)
And still the drums pound.
Impotent as I am in this struggle for human...
October 22nd, 2020 02:54 - Little Man (Dasim)
Most evocative of the hum-drum pattern we can fall into without...
October 22nd, 2020 02:31 - Moving On (Brycycle)
Beautiful in it\'s honesty and simplicity. Explores the aching chasm in us...
October 22nd, 2020 02:28 - The Ocean (MMadrid)
Yes, the sea has a wonderous effect upon all who take time to contemplate...
October 22nd, 2020 02:25 - The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
Evocative of those 50\'s days indeed. Your words took me back to the...
October 22nd, 2020 02:19 - Hold Hard. (Fay Slimm.)
Ere\'bouts weem got thaa natrel gaas see. Gon\'suz days o sendin out lad...
October 21st, 2020 07:47 - Lost Pictures. (Goldfinch60)
I know the feeling.
Many moons ago i became a keen amateur and collected...
October 21st, 2020 01:21 - UNSAME 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards)
when reading poets on mps
I note the subjects only fools address
like...
October 21st, 2020 01:15 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
That is clever is that.
October 20th, 2020 14:49 - Los Echoes (Neville)
Reading others poetry we create a meaning from the familiar in our...
October 20th, 2020 14:47 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Gone are the days of real bum burner curries for me. It did seem to burn...
October 19th, 2020 09:39 - of Immortal Poetry (L. B. Mek)
Hmmm I\'d like to think there is a third way as I cannot claim to be nor...
October 19th, 2020 09:28 - Regret (Fay Slimm.)
Unsure whether this is after an \"I\'m leaving you\" break up or a change...
October 19th, 2020 03:54 - caring church minister. (Goldfinch60)
If only people would open their eyes to what is ACTUALLY going on in the...
October 19th, 2020 02:31 - NIGELLA (Michael Edwards)
Makes my blood broil.
October 19th, 2020 01:26 - Ode to Calochilus robertsonii, or Purple beard orchid. (TheOzGreenMan)
Good one! Short and sweet with humour too.
October 19th, 2020 00:35 - CHESS (FineB)
Oh so true. I taught a good friend the moves and some strategies - ruined...
October 19th, 2020 00:20 - Into Your Future. (Goldfinch60)
Those words are so true. The law of averages proves most relationships...
October 18th, 2020 15:21 - Making. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh that apprentices of the twenty first century were like that. But no....
October 17th, 2020 06:31 - Idiomatic Incisiveness (Orchidee)
I suppose parables helped in understanding for the uneducated masses in...
October 17th, 2020 02:40 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
LOL you could have replaced it with ajar..... it all hinges on unlocking...
October 17th, 2020 02:23 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
Good job too, cos if you were driving into foglight you\'d be heading for...
October 17th, 2020 01:22 - The Kingdom (Crowns4Christ)
I believe in god. But all this rhetoric about kingdoms and old fashioned...
October 17th, 2020 00:31 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
I had fast food last week eating a corned beef sarnie on the motorway at...
October 16th, 2020 14:22 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
Picture me, sat on the quayside seeing this exactly as you describe,...
October 16th, 2020 05:56 - Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.)
Well i think it\'s kind of obvious I\'m going to agree with every word of...
October 16th, 2020 02:51 - WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF WASPS ? ~ AN AFFIRMATIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh yes,wasps do exist for a reason. They provide us with a very satisfying...
October 16th, 2020 00:56 - Family Plowing (Dlherrmann)
A very readable analogy piece. But your heritage made a financial living...
October 15th, 2020 10:41 - Staying Alive (Lorna)
It is necessary to have a sanctum, a place to be self without pressures of...
October 15th, 2020 10:36 - Left Behind. (Fay Slimm.)
An act of nature, gifted to you to marvel upon. Just as is some poetry...
October 15th, 2020 09:45 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
One hundred percent with you on this one.
October 15th, 2020 09:40 - Scarecrow Ode (Dove)
Our local farmer has installed enhancements so that the scarecrow smells...
October 14th, 2020 21:30 - Tapestry of life (Arobot)
For we are but stardust recycled.
October 14th, 2020 15:12 - Moses was a strange man (Trenz Pruca)
Christianity is full of dual standards. Once realised and one\'s questions...
October 14th, 2020 15:03 - I was made for you (Crowns4Christ)
Long may it last for you both. A lovely expression of deep affection from...
October 14th, 2020 13:00 - The Sheets and Time (Lorna)
Many of us, of all ages, for all reasons, are living life at a low pace...
October 14th, 2020 12:57 - Wasps (Neville)
Oh i dunno about good for nuthin..... they make a rather satisfying...
October 14th, 2020 12:40 - Raptoring. (Fay Slimm.)
Nice one. These birds are really exciting to watch. I saw one being...
October 14th, 2020 12:39 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, i was there, that was the day i was combing the beach for old fossils...
October 14th, 2020 12:32 - Bring us More Liquor (Neville)
I\'m gonna be a train driver when I grow up, what you gonna be...
October 13th, 2020 05:58 - Sometime Life Happens. (Goldfinch60)
Famously john lennon said \"life is what happens to you whilst your busy...
October 13th, 2020 05:51 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
So much to read into this fine piece as it paints upon the easel of my...
October 13th, 2020 05:46 - Spit it Out (Neville)
Some become so enraged by the hurt they experience that they are unable to...
October 10th, 2020 08:55 - Never Forget (Fay Slimm.)
In the hope that those who have not yet considered both the futility and...
October 10th, 2020 06:57 - The Things They Do (Lorna)
Lovely celebration of individualism Lorna. And long shall it stay this...
October 10th, 2020 04:48 - Heaven on Earth? (Saxon Crow)
Yes indeed, not in a book or a church.
October 10th, 2020 02:03 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
worried of blubber around her hips
she surfed the net for dietry...
October 10th, 2020 02:00 - judge not (Crowns4Christ)
Set free from what?
October 10th, 2020 01:41 - Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely agree. Well said!
October 10th, 2020 01:38 - Mile High (Neville)
On the occasions when i flew to close to the sun which lit a lovers bed I...
October 9th, 2020 11:25
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