Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• POEM FOR A WINTER\'S NIGHT (Michael Edwards) ooh by \'eck, you\'ve inspired me to write about a winter\'s night. I\'ll...
  November 11th, 2020 07:53
• Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) No one but you Fay can romance the taste of home made wine with the...
  November 10th, 2020 07:36
• Cinema Paridiso. (Goldfinch60) Some have the gift of embodying emotion into their creative pieces be they...
  November 10th, 2020 07:30
• love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st) Congratulations, you\'re getting worse. You\'re so vain is the correct...
  November 9th, 2020 18:59
• Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8) Blimey, u don\'t half rely on some dodgy background stories. Adam and eve...
  November 9th, 2020 13:07
• Back There (Fay Slimm.) Dreamed of home, whilst surrounded by deaths active machine of war not...
  November 9th, 2020 10:19
• Somewhere Between Trees (Neville) The golden years. For some there may just golden days but gold is gold and...
  November 9th, 2020 09:58
• The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60) There\'s no rush to take that final journey yet. Plenty of needs for you...
  November 9th, 2020 09:48
• Unsung (Fay Slimm.) Nature does her beautiful fine costumery over grounds once swept with...
  November 8th, 2020 09:43
• Nevafar (Neville) Somethings are said and linger. They tease hope when time should have...
  November 8th, 2020 09:02
• Revering Remembrance (Orchidee) Onward christian soldaten mitt der cross of jesus leading us to kill and...
  November 8th, 2020 06:53
• A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves) Nice one me old china! Brought back memories like it was only down the...
  November 8th, 2020 05:25
• Clouds (Bay) Lovely positive appreciation of the wonderful world we live in and of...
  November 8th, 2020 05:19
• SHORTLIES (2) (Michael Edwards) She stood on the bridge at midnight looking awful and feeling woosey a...
  November 8th, 2020 05:15
• The QUEEN (FineB) Yes, the noble beauty, around whom strategic forces move. Respect her...
  November 8th, 2020 05:07
• Happy Anniversary Joyce. (Goldfinch60) Such a moving piece today. Your heart is surrounded in the strength of the...
  November 8th, 2020 04:58
• A Taxonomy of Knowledge Warren Gaston (Warren Gaston) Good fun, certainly raised a laugh in me.... more please.
  November 7th, 2020 09:44
• MERRY CHRISTMAS (Last Shadow) Are you planning on surviving till christmas.... it\'s all of 46 days...
  November 7th, 2020 09:41
• PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK (AiR - Atman in Ravi) Happiness is peace of mind. Does not need so many words and verses as...
  November 7th, 2020 07:57
• Returning Reality - Isaiah Series (18) (Orchidee) Guide me oh great jehova!... but does a guide arrive at all.... is the...
  November 7th, 2020 06:21
• Panic Attack (Gray) Sex shouldnt feel like that... have you considered a new mattress?
  November 7th, 2020 06:18
• The Bishop (FineB) One\'s bishop should always be respected and brought into play only when a...
  November 7th, 2020 05:54
• Unity of Opposites (Neville) Opposites are often closer than is apparent in the sphere of human...
  November 7th, 2020 05:50
• Asking (Fay Slimm.) Ah and here we see the mind at work behind the reticence..... you have a...
  November 7th, 2020 05:45
• Total Confusion. (Goldfinch60) Reggae version = https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5tVhHDH4aDA or on a...
  November 7th, 2020 05:42
• Hunger (Fay Slimm.) How many indeed. These brave home makers, wives and mothers placing their...
  November 2nd, 2020 04:11
• Survive Limerick. (Goldfinch60) On my TV are MP\'s imploring Stay at home even if it\'s quite...
  November 2nd, 2020 03:56
• Everyday is Halloween (Arobot) Halloween was wild here in UK. I wish everday could be so invigorating. It...
  November 1st, 2020 17:52
• Sidewalk Cracks III (SheWasTheSun) I found it behind the wallpaper in a bedsit i had many years ago. It was...
  November 1st, 2020 17:49
• The Genesis connection (Gerrylegister) Genesis is so abviously a myth written by a man... clearly there were no...
  November 1st, 2020 09:41
• Joker44’s Side – Keep on Living...Aftermath (Nafis Light) Good positive stuff, damn shame it is at a time when so much is in...
  November 1st, 2020 07:37
• Heydays (Fay Slimm.) Lovely. Weren\'t those days of simple pleasures so wonderful... and now we...
  November 1st, 2020 06:36
• Little Shepherdesses (Neville) What a lovely bright and dare i say \'jolly\' poem. Great light hearted...
  November 1st, 2020 06:29
• Saints Splendorous (Orchidee) That feeding of the five thousand with a few scraps of food. Were there...
  November 1st, 2020 03:38
• Autumns Wonder. (Goldfinch60) Nice one and oh how i miss it... staying locked away for self...
  November 1st, 2020 03:33
• UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards) I agree, three good ones and clever. Beyond my scope to contribute this...
  November 1st, 2020 03:29
• On Tour. (Doggerel Dave) Great poem, horrendous accommodation. I never stay in pubs for all the...
  October 31st, 2020 17:51
• Joker44’s Side – Emotionally Attractive (Nafis Light) It would be easy to write that broken wings maketh the poet Joker but I am...
  October 31st, 2020 04:52
• Returning And Restoration - Isaiah Series (15) (Orchidee) Are those all your words or did another man write them..... putting words...
  October 31st, 2020 04:32
• The Witching Hours. (Goldfinch60) I hate to dampen your enthusiasm but i think it\'s going to rain on your...
  October 31st, 2020 04:30
• MAKE ME (Amon) It\'s all there within you and it is only you can be what you will...
  October 31st, 2020 04:22
• becoming (Queer-with-a-pen) That\'s what is called unconditional love or devotion. Many of us have a...
  October 31st, 2020 01:33
• Depression (L. B. Mek) Wow, that must be one definitive revelation of a poets inner sadness.
  October 30th, 2020 05:41
• Note to Self... (Orchidee) A fine write - unquote.
  October 30th, 2020 05:38
• Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60) And so the journey of life continues. You choice of analogy, climbing a...
  October 30th, 2020 05:20
• Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.) A heartfelt plea for the real love and loyal dedication the mature heart...
  October 30th, 2020 05:12
• It’s nothing personal (Aa Harvey) It\'s good job i\'m a rabbit and this human thing is just a disguise so i...
  October 29th, 2020 08:20
• Faithful Following - Isaiah Series (14) (Orchidee) The sax pistols memory is tainted with a regret that they never had you as...
  October 29th, 2020 03:19
• This Time. (Fay Slimm.) The romance of a land which has captured our heart will, upon a long...
  October 29th, 2020 03:16
• I AM (Trenz Pruca) I\'m just a beautiful tree which was reincarnated as a human being... ...
  October 29th, 2020 02:42
• Language and Music. (Goldfinch60) During my life as atradesman working in peoples homes i had the misfortune...
  October 29th, 2020 02:41
• UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards) She went to the therapist to discuss her recurring nightmare until.... ...
  October 29th, 2020 02:22
• Innerness (Neville) In my case the world within would be more aptly described as a thicket....
  October 28th, 2020 05:02
• Remainers (Fay Slimm.) Well if this dont prick my finger with many memories i dont know what...
  October 28th, 2020 04:17
• Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60) Ah yes, pearls of wisdom from star trek..... now that we are all aged...
  October 28th, 2020 03:46
• ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards) I could be here as critic, something parasitic but last night was...
  October 28th, 2020 03:40
• Changing (Fay Slimm.) I guess the safest approach for ones self is to be self assured and follow...
  October 27th, 2020 13:36
• My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Lake placid eh? Being close to a body of water has a certain magic...
  October 27th, 2020 07:06
• Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville) This is a class thing i\'m sure.... the only dust i got was on my Airfix...
  October 27th, 2020 07:03
• Still going (Aa Harvey) That\'s the human condition... for a thinker.
  October 26th, 2020 16:25
• Joker44’s Side – If We... (Nafis Light) Ah yes wonderful words of wisdom but i can\'t think of a single century in...
  October 26th, 2020 16:21
• Delusional (John Prophet) Strange words to be accompanied by your chosen picture of busy ants. Ants...
  October 26th, 2020 16:18
• Tall Tales (Fay Slimm.) Superb picture your words painted for me today. I saw the ruined prow...
  October 26th, 2020 05:41
• Restoration Reassurances - Isaiah Series (12) (Orchidee) Falls from the lips like milk and honey. But i could have sworn that old...
  October 26th, 2020 03:39
• Unruly (L. B. Mek) Yep. Totally agree. Make the point rather than the rhyme.
  October 26th, 2020 03:36
• Dear Dad (LeighB) This is the third piece of yours i have read (although it was the first...
  October 26th, 2020 03:24
• My Invisible Hero (LeighB) Having read your piece dear autism i decided to look at your other pieces...
  October 26th, 2020 03:16
• Dear Autism (LeighB) A wonderful insightful piece as can only be written from a parents...
  October 26th, 2020 03:09
• Time Restabled. (Goldfinch60) What they euphemistically call the time of dark nights..... i\'m going...
  October 26th, 2020 02:33
• The beat of your tune (Lili Ahlam) Close the distance and bring us more. Please.
  October 25th, 2020 05:19
• Nostalgia. (Fay Slimm.) Lennon and McCartney words come to mind - there are places i\'ll remember,...
  October 25th, 2020 04:34
• Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60) I\'ve never had a problem seeing these places virtually everywhere but... ...
  October 25th, 2020 02:27
• Poem, What I do not know. (AwHec8) Looking for a meaning in an old book is wasting time. It\'s full of...
  October 24th, 2020 18:10
• Beyond Broke (Neville) Many out there are still in need of a repair kit in their later years. I...
  October 24th, 2020 18:01
• What\'s Wrong With Me (Invisible Scars) Coming out of a relationship with those feelings is something I have...
  October 24th, 2020 03:36
• Just a second, or an hour...... (Orchidee) Like so much of my time these days I spent it shielding. Sat in a clear...
  October 24th, 2020 03:30
• I KID YOU NOT AT ALL (Michael Edwards) Surely the correct title should be \'pool of mixed race\' - may contain...
  October 24th, 2020 03:26
• In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60) That\'s the time traveller in you sneaking out through the chinks in the...
  October 24th, 2020 03:21
• Loves Sunken Ship (Blackhawkwings) Well old dude, at your age (just a couple of years older than mine) you...
  October 23rd, 2020 19:04
• We Made It Another Day (Felicityjones) In our wandering through life there are many paths before us. Sometimes...
  October 23rd, 2020 18:55
• a executive order (Lucifer very very very 1st) I see you are still having problems with basic English grammar.
  October 23rd, 2020 13:28
• Commitment (Fay Slimm.) Well now I realise you see me for the ingenuine beast i really am. Totally...
  October 23rd, 2020 13:12
• Daydream (Dasim) Now that is a beautiful piece of work sir! What wonderful things our...
  October 23rd, 2020 12:53
• Awash With Sunlight. (Goldfinch60) Why does it take so long for us to find we love our world? Oh that we were...
  October 23rd, 2020 04:04
• PICTURE SHOW (Joe Marcello) LOL so you\'re saying never mind what is there, just see what you want to...
  October 22nd, 2020 16:55
• Humbly with Love (VPalmer) Good words. Unity is needed, we are as one on this planet. It is all to...
  October 22nd, 2020 13:45
• Joker44’s Side – Two Play Together (Nafis Light) 100% agree... spot on! But depressed people hate me for being like...
  October 22nd, 2020 10:34
• Freedom Favour (Orchidee) As you know, my thoughts of god differ from yours but your words today are...
  October 22nd, 2020 10:10
• Afraid (Dasim) Between your words is the dilemma of caring when someone chooses a path...
  October 22nd, 2020 10:04
• Silence (Last Shadow) OMG and we havent had guy fawkes night yet!
  October 22nd, 2020 09:59
• Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54) And still the drums pound. Impotent as I am in this struggle for human...
  October 22nd, 2020 02:54
• Little Man (Dasim) Most evocative of the hum-drum pattern we can fall into without...
  October 22nd, 2020 02:31
• Moving On (Brycycle) Beautiful in it\'s honesty and simplicity. Explores the aching chasm in us...
  October 22nd, 2020 02:28
• The Ocean (MMadrid) Yes, the sea has a wonderous effect upon all who take time to contemplate...
  October 22nd, 2020 02:25
• The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60) Evocative of those 50\'s days indeed. Your words took me back to the...
  October 22nd, 2020 02:19
• Hold Hard. (Fay Slimm.) Ere\'bouts weem got thaa natrel gaas see. Gon\'suz days o sendin out lad...
  October 21st, 2020 07:47
• Lost Pictures. (Goldfinch60) I know the feeling. Many moons ago i became a keen amateur and collected...
  October 21st, 2020 01:21
• UNSAME 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards) when reading poets on mps I note the subjects only fools address like...
  October 21st, 2020 01:15
• Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) That is clever is that.
  October 20th, 2020 14:49
• Los Echoes (Neville) Reading others poetry we create a meaning from the familiar in our...
  October 20th, 2020 14:47