Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- What Day is it Today? (Goldfinch60)
Blessed is the bringer of joy.
August 18th, 2018 10:35 - A cry of more light (Poetic Dan)
No meaningful words of comfort from me today brother man, for none will...
August 17th, 2018 04:30 - Angels Assisting (Orchidee)
Of course a modern day angel might not be quite what you were expecting to...
August 17th, 2018 04:19 - Apocalypse Now? (Goldfinch60)
Now THERE\'S an inspiration for a poet.... a successful toasting accident....
August 17th, 2018 04:17 - HIGH FIVES (Michael Edwards)
The \'finger\' seemed to catch on quite quickly and somehow has replaced...
August 17th, 2018 00:34 - shut the burka boris (Hilllow)
HEY! that\'s not a letter bomb in your hand is it?
August 17th, 2018 00:29 - Come Join The Risen (Edthepoet)
There\'s so much in here. I think you\'ve got to have been on both sides...
August 15th, 2018 15:06 - Mindless Bipolar (Reyas)
Hmmm i had the opportunity to live with an officially bi-polar partner for...
August 15th, 2018 14:43 - Summer Breeze (Christina8)
Summer and it\'s heat, a time to watch people playing laughing loving...
August 15th, 2018 14:36 - Education! Education! Education! (Sylviasearcher)
Sometimes roles are amazingly reversed. Here you have led us to read of...
August 15th, 2018 05:38 - FOR SALE. (Fay Slimm.)
Very moving. Indeed what scenes have been witnessed by the rooms we...
August 15th, 2018 05:27 - Awakening Days. (Goldfinch60)
It is good to welcome each new day with its challenges and rewards, life...
August 15th, 2018 05:21 - Maybe...... (Orchidee)
\'False pretences\' have brought out your fallible humanity onto our...
August 15th, 2018 04:35 - How should I feel (Jooles)
I love the repeated question in your piece. For right there and then its a...
August 15th, 2018 04:28 - EVERY NOW AND THEN (Michael Edwards)
love that humour
August 15th, 2018 04:22 - AWAKENING. (Fay Slimm.)
A lesson i learned well in 1976 on the south west coast of your lovely...
August 14th, 2018 12:02 - God Only Knows. (Goldfinch60)
Great personification of todays multi ethnic society
August 14th, 2018 11:58 - EXPOSED (Michael Edwards)
So you\'d met my mother in law?
You using your artistry of fine...
August 14th, 2018 11:35 - My affirmation (Poetic Dan)
That world is the here and now. Your message is wholesome and...
August 13th, 2018 15:51 - APTITUDE. (Fay Slimm.)
A lot of life and living shines from your short piece today.
August 13th, 2018 15:47 - The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely,so aptly describing a poets dilemma.
I think these \'lost words\'...
August 13th, 2018 15:44 - POETICAL OUTTAKES (Michael Edwards)
Each one a gem for my mind to play with!
Looking forward to your poem.
August 13th, 2018 15:37 - COMPLIANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
Is this lady now trapped by circumstance to continue? Love for those...
August 8th, 2018 10:44 - More rambling of life (Poetic Dan)
You make it plain to see that special children, whom society seems to be...
August 8th, 2018 10:32 - Noticing The Needy (Orchidee)
And long may that light play upon you.
Tough indeed when a relative is...
August 8th, 2018 02:21 - Hummingbird\'s Lullaby (Sylviasearcher)
You know this could well be saying goodbye to the spirit of a loved one...
August 8th, 2018 02:16 - Cropped Tops (Goldfinch60)
LOL \'twoderful\'. I just left a video clip for Orchidee to demonstrate...
August 8th, 2018 02:13 - THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1) (Michael Edwards)
That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain...
August 8th, 2018 02:02 - Don’t Falter (Reyas)
Aha the external shell we all build around our feelings and inner...
August 7th, 2018 11:45 - Sunday Afternoon. (Goldfinch60)
Your piece describes a state i have oft experienced and long to be there...
August 7th, 2018 05:47 - THE FLY (Michael Edwards)
Excellent cartoon and poem.
^^8^^ don\'t buzz round the house
when the...
August 7th, 2018 05:26 - Sanddune Solitude (Sylviasearcher)
Read all your comments before making my own here.
I really enjoyed this....
August 7th, 2018 05:00 - What is Love? (Goldfinch60)
Love suffers long and is kind; love does not envy; love does not parade...
August 6th, 2018 02:28 - Untravelled traveler (Poetic Dan)
Whatever faith we have, so long as it does not demand anything from...
August 6th, 2018 02:19 - The slower I go the deeper I flow (Poetic Dan)
First impressions are something which just happens, difficult to combat. I...
August 6th, 2018 01:25 - The Gas Station Rose (Clark)
This is great. End of a love but not the end of the world. A refreshing...
August 6th, 2018 01:14 - SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED (Michael Edwards)
Eyyup lad, i\'m off t\'woods to snap a twig underfoot. Appen as i\'m...
August 6th, 2018 01:08 - Prayer Progress (Orchidee)
Ace rhyming complacent with penitent. That last verse is a winner on it\'s...
August 6th, 2018 00:34 - Cutting Edge (Reyas)
Physical to overcome the mental. Incisive harsh action punishes the reader...
August 6th, 2018 00:14 - SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Crikey yes ties i remember those.
August 5th, 2018 08:35 - Captured in Art (Goldfinch60)
Great to know that us old codgers can still be gobsmakked by the beauty of...
August 5th, 2018 08:33 - Encroachment in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Satie had a wonderful way of creating memorable simple pieces with...
August 4th, 2018 10:12 - I WRITE (Michael Edwards)
Ah, so thats how you do it.
August 3rd, 2018 07:57 - Backyard Imagination (Reyas)
He he he i love it. But this love of mum\'s food spoiling all the fun....
August 2nd, 2018 14:22 - Invisible (Lorna)
Small as you wish to be, you reach out big to us readers.
Why does the...
August 2nd, 2018 06:41 - CATZZZ. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh i just love this. I can see so many of the lovely cats i have known in...
August 2nd, 2018 06:30 - My Everlasting Friend. (Goldfinch60)
You most definitely have an affinity with the Avon. Todays write feels...
August 2nd, 2018 02:17 - AUGUST (Michael Edwards)
Lovely, i see small wildlife scurrying from my path.
August 2nd, 2018 02:12 - Untitled (Kailie Jackson)
LOL love it
August 1st, 2018 14:15 - A Young Poet’s Dream (Reyas)
A fine aspiration \"I want it said when i am gone, i moved the world just...
August 1st, 2018 14:15 - A Young Poet’s Dream (Reyas)
A fine aspiration \"I want it said when i am gone, i moved the world just...
August 1st, 2018 13:44 - The Purple Elephant (Jenn2009)
He gonna explode one day!
Cute message.
August 1st, 2018 13:27 - The Purple Elephant (Jenn2009)
He gonna explode one day!
Cute message.
August 1st, 2018 10:55 - A POET (Michael Edwards)
I\'m no poet mate, I\'m just in therapy here.
I live in fear of laptop...
August 1st, 2018 09:13 - Rain Refreshment (Orchidee)
But why dust tho play such a wicked game
Wrecking lives with a...
August 1st, 2018 09:03 - Blissful Quiet. (Goldfinch60)
We all enjoy the convenience of our services laid into our homes, take...
August 1st, 2018 08:58 - My \'72 Cheyenne Truck And \'85 Camaro (W c)
Yes we do build an affinity with our vehicles without doubt. I\'m tempted...
August 1st, 2018 08:50 - Better than worse (Poetic Dan)
A great day in both your lives. Love the music, love the sentiment and...
August 1st, 2018 08:47 - Life (Everlong)
Ah but you may have both for the magic, zest and pace of young life will...
August 1st, 2018 08:39 - The Surgeon Moon (August) (Lorna)
Lovely mind pictures accompany your words today. Thank you for light...
August 1st, 2018 07:13 - CHAINS. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m all too familiar with the sentiment of your well written piece today...
August 1st, 2018 05:39 - SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Murphy was disappointed with his score in the olympic high diving 2.2 ...
July 31st, 2018 03:04 - Alone Together (Lorna)
Romances and pairings can teach us such a lot about ourselves. Especially...
July 30th, 2018 08:29 - CARRYING ON. (Fay Slimm.)
My faith was tested and changed... no answers were found... questions...
July 30th, 2018 08:23 - SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
I break all the rules these days. Once upon a time i was a paragon of...
July 30th, 2018 08:17 - Hearing The Lone Ranger. (Goldfinch60)
Kimmo sabbe! My dad used to tell a wonderful story about the young man...
July 30th, 2018 08:13 - Admittance (Jenn2009)
Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented...
July 30th, 2018 07:22 - Admittance (Jenn2009)
Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented...
July 30th, 2018 03:05 - Nothing Town (JasmineUK)
A cry out for those who\'s cries cannot be heard nor understood.
A...
July 29th, 2018 19:21 - A Poet (W c)
Does life ever pass us by? This here and now is your life, my life, and...
July 29th, 2018 19:08 - Under The Weather (Christina8)
Nice to see your blooms on MPS again. Wishing you a full and speedy...
July 29th, 2018 19:03 - somehow something (Dusk arising)
I had in mind the overall feel created by Everything But The Girl on...
July 29th, 2018 17:58 - somehow something (Dusk arising)
Hi Joe. Thank you for commenting on this piece. It is written as a song...
July 29th, 2018 17:53 - Everything and Nothing (Reyas)
If only more people could see this in themselves. I have to say that it...
July 29th, 2018 14:33 - Case Number 179,001 (EliDagger)
My short journey to here through your two other pieces has been one of...
July 29th, 2018 14:12 - How I Fell (EliDagger)
Well i wrote that having read your \'that moment, the moment\' i would...
July 29th, 2018 14:02 - That Moment, The Moment (EliDagger)
Amazing... this is just so good!
W O W !!!
So strong, captivating....
July 29th, 2018 13:48 - why (Avigail)
Some questions haunt us, popping into mind at random but why? Do others...
July 29th, 2018 13:38 - Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Your structure, meter, pace and metaphor here are second to none.
I...
July 29th, 2018 13:21 - One is one too many (Edthepoet)
Nice one Ed, if only eh? I would truly support your stance here with the...
July 29th, 2018 07:32 - Lullaby part two (Poetic Dan)
Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir!
Gentle...
July 29th, 2018 07:19 - unanswered questions (Dusk arising)
It\'s already been written and performed sir! I\'m a singer and musician...
July 29th, 2018 07:02 - Delightful Disconnect (Lorna)
Beautiful ... like a dream.
You actually took my minds eye an a lovely...
July 29th, 2018 06:35 - Intelligent Conversation. (Goldfinch60)
Whilst visiting my son many moons ago i met my ex mum-in-law who conversed...
July 29th, 2018 06:03 - A COUPLET (4) (Michael Edwards)
Sounds like you are in balance with the world.
I can venture out in to...
July 29th, 2018 05:50 - The Wolf Pack (Reyas)
I was thinking as i read it, a wolf will rarely attack alone. Excellent...
July 28th, 2018 12:55 - Mourn Not (Lorna)
In my collection of poems are several which recall very happy times with...
July 28th, 2018 12:12 - Mission Of Mercy (Orchidee)
Yes you\'re right and i do see before me a well structured piece which...
July 28th, 2018 02:29 - A song may say it better? (Poetic Dan)
There you go you see. Wisdom and thru wisdom - vision, and thru that...
July 28th, 2018 02:25 - Mission Of Mercy (Orchidee)
You\'re obviously a christian religious believer and i am not so i...
July 28th, 2018 02:16 - To Be a Ghost (Sound)
I know you don\'t really mean that - I can see right through you.
July 28th, 2018 01:25 - Soundtrack to my Love (JasmineUK)
Well i\'m ready to spin \'The only way is up\' but i dont mind if you\'d...
July 28th, 2018 01:21 - Ultimate Chastisement. (Goldfinch60)
One of the first things the EU did to us was to remove the right of a...
July 28th, 2018 01:18 - A COUPLET (3) (Michael Edwards)
Well at least we got a summer this year in UK. It\'s enough to knacker a...
July 28th, 2018 01:15 - A Praying Mantis (W c)
Do preying mantis eat spiders? If so i rekkon Tesco\'s (K mart if you\'re...
July 27th, 2018 15:56 - You ever wonder? (Reyas)
Announcement for our younger readers, the aforementioned characters are...
July 27th, 2018 15:42 - It felt Like A Breeze. (Kevin browne)
I couldn\'t agree more kevin. Gems of positivity are all around us,...
July 27th, 2018 15:08 - Charles Trenet - La Mer (Lorna)
Lovely words describing just how a piece of music/song/poem can lift us to...
July 27th, 2018 10:54 - CLOSE COMFORT. (Fay Slimm.)
A quite beautiful expression of love and longing for re-union.
\"Love...
July 27th, 2018 10:51 - Changing existence (Poetic Dan)
Great self expression. Letting go of frustrations by losing yourself into...
July 27th, 2018 10:36
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