Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Lullaby part two (Poetic Dan) Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir! Gentle...
  July 29th, 2018 07:19
• unanswered questions (Dusk arising) It\'s already been written and performed sir! I\'m a singer and musician...
  July 29th, 2018 07:02
• Delightful Disconnect (Lorna) Beautiful ... like a dream. You actually took my minds eye an a lovely...
  July 29th, 2018 06:35
• Intelligent Conversation. (Goldfinch60) Whilst visiting my son many moons ago i met my ex mum-in-law who conversed...
  July 29th, 2018 06:03
• A COUPLET (4) (Michael Edwards) Sounds like you are in balance with the world. I can venture out in to...
  July 29th, 2018 05:50
• The Wolf Pack (Reyas) I was thinking as i read it, a wolf will rarely attack alone. Excellent...
  July 28th, 2018 12:55
• Mourn Not (Lorna) In my collection of poems are several which recall very happy times with...
  July 28th, 2018 12:12
• Mission Of Mercy (Orchidee) Yes you\'re right and i do see before me a well structured piece which...
  July 28th, 2018 02:29
• A song may say it better? (Poetic Dan) There you go you see. Wisdom and thru wisdom - vision, and thru that...
  July 28th, 2018 02:25
• Mission Of Mercy (Orchidee) You\'re obviously a christian religious believer and i am not so i...
  July 28th, 2018 02:16
• To Be a Ghost (Sound) I know you don\'t really mean that - I can see right through you.
  July 28th, 2018 01:25
• Soundtrack to my Love (JasmineUK) Well i\'m ready to spin \'The only way is up\' but i dont mind if you\'d...
  July 28th, 2018 01:21
• Ultimate Chastisement. (Goldfinch60) One of the first things the EU did to us was to remove the right of a...
  July 28th, 2018 01:18
• A COUPLET (3) (Michael Edwards) Well at least we got a summer this year in UK. It\'s enough to knacker a...
  July 28th, 2018 01:15
• A Praying Mantis (W c) Do preying mantis eat spiders? If so i rekkon Tesco\'s (K mart if you\'re...
  July 27th, 2018 15:56
• You ever wonder? (Reyas) Announcement for our younger readers, the aforementioned characters are...
  July 27th, 2018 15:42
• It felt Like A Breeze. (Kevin browne) I couldn\'t agree more kevin. Gems of positivity are all around us,...
  July 27th, 2018 15:08
• Charles Trenet - La Mer (Lorna) Lovely words describing just how a piece of music/song/poem can lift us to...
  July 27th, 2018 10:54
• CLOSE COMFORT. (Fay Slimm.) A quite beautiful expression of love and longing for re-union. \"Love...
  July 27th, 2018 10:51
• Changing existence (Poetic Dan) Great self expression. Letting go of frustrations by losing yourself into...
  July 27th, 2018 10:36
• Playing with Clouds. (Goldfinch60) I shan\'t tire if u play more sinatra. I have high regard for his singing...
  July 27th, 2018 10:26
• Luminous Light (Orchidee) Strain my ears though i tried, i don\'t think i heard your dulcit tones...
  July 27th, 2018 10:21
• A COUPLET (2) (Michael Edwards) All too true, and i hope your eloquent self will provide a fitting
  July 27th, 2018 10:18
• The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna) I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
  July 26th, 2018 08:03
• The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna) I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
  July 26th, 2018 06:57
• The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna) I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
  July 26th, 2018 06:50
• Isolation (Poetic Dan) Love the world and it loves right back at you doesn\'t it.
  July 26th, 2018 04:26
• Failing Faith. (Goldfinch60) Certainly a test of faith. Or what alternative?
  July 26th, 2018 04:22
• A COUPLET (1) (Michael Edwards) Deep
  July 26th, 2018 04:16
• Fragile Walls (Reyas) There\'s a core within us all which is or was the timid young boy/girl of...
  July 25th, 2018 17:08
• Broken (Gabriella) Been there, done that, musta liked it some cos found myself there a few...
  July 25th, 2018 16:54
• धुँआ (SuEyesWrites) Thank you for sharing that with us. So easy to relate to!
  July 25th, 2018 16:30
• MAKE-OVER. (Fay Slimm.) Well i do hope you feel great, because you write flippin marvelous. What a...
  July 25th, 2018 04:07
• The power in me (Poetic Dan) Accepting that we make mistakes is a milestone along our path of self...
  July 25th, 2018 04:00
• Who Could Ask For More. (Goldfinch60) Lovely soothing music. You lucky man, your devices obviously love you. I...
  July 25th, 2018 03:43
• Love Me Like There\'s No Tomorrow. (Kevin browne) What a convoluted tale of love and romance. \"Live by the death of your...
  July 25th, 2018 02:36
• Love Me Like There\'s No Tomorrow. (Kevin browne) What a convoluted tale of love and romance. \"Live by the death of your...
  July 25th, 2018 00:45
• NOAH\'S LAMENT (Michael Edwards) Lets face it, rabbits are well ahead of us in weighing up the situation....
  July 25th, 2018 00:34
• Life’s Limbo (JackSkelton) A fine opening piece sir! Great \'open heart therapy\' this poem writing...
  July 25th, 2018 00:15
• Life’s Limbo (JackSkelton) A fine opening piece sir! Great \'open heart therapy\' this poem writing...
  July 24th, 2018 23:24
• \"Once Happy, Now Fallen\" (Ryuji) Before commenting i read your rely above. I\'m pleased that i did because...
  July 24th, 2018 23:10
• Behind These Walls (MrNobody40) Nice one! These days just run away with themselves now we are no longer...
  July 24th, 2018 23:05
• Comfort in Solitude (Asrealastheycome) They wreck you because they don\'t have your depth. But deep people cant...
  July 24th, 2018 22:56
• Intoxicated Driver (Cindy Christmas) Having read part 2, i decided to come and look up part 1. I like this,...
  July 24th, 2018 22:51
• Intoxicated Driver (Part 2) (Cindy Christmas) I am with you 100% in the message you convey, which you have done so...
  July 24th, 2018 22:47
• Dashwood (JasmineUK) Yay forsooth thou hast hailed mine devil within. Twas with lustful glare...
  July 24th, 2018 22:38
• Dark Abyss (Reyas) Hey, what about life after death. I hope you took a packed lunch.
  July 24th, 2018 14:58
• move along (Dusk arising) Thanks Cat. Yes i know only too well the pain etc but you\'re so right,...
  July 24th, 2018 11:26
• move along (Dusk arising) A moment ago i was leaving a comment on your piece today and wondering how...
  July 24th, 2018 10:38
• AWESOME. (Fay Slimm.) Struck once again by your poetic pyrotechnics here. Thunder storms are...
  July 24th, 2018 10:14
• A lullaby (Poetic Dan) This will be great for your young kids Dan. Writing for young ones is such...
  July 24th, 2018 09:59
• Time After Time. (Goldfinch60) Great write again and stirring up my thoughts. We\'re such rational...
  July 24th, 2018 09:53
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (10) (Michael Edwards) Doh ,
  July 24th, 2018 09:43
• WE WERE BOTH SO YOUNG (Lasergraph) Nice one sir. I tried to write something similar and your writing brought...
  July 23rd, 2018 11:32
• Broken (Reyas) Break out of the broken outlook. Many things may be broken but repairable....
  July 23rd, 2018 11:25
• INTENTIONS. (Fay Slimm.) Love, that wonderful mystery prize for you know not where it will take you...
  July 23rd, 2018 10:54
• It went like this (Poetic Dan) Here we are like a brotherhood of understanding and nurture. Its good that...
  July 23rd, 2018 01:51
• Changing Days. (Goldfinch60) Hold onto your sanity fine sir! Your writing is a window of your soul and...
  July 23rd, 2018 01:46
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (9) (Michael Edwards) Victoria....are you down there?
  July 23rd, 2018 01:41
• Have you ever had a poem written about you? (JamesMichealDaniel) Hmmm sounds like its time you grew a pair and told your friend how you...
  July 22nd, 2018 16:17
• Sixteen (Skyebellasario) LOL at your last line. Never say never. I like this, enjoyed reading it....
  July 22nd, 2018 14:58
• Sixteen (Skyebellasario) LOL at your last line. Never say never. I like this, enjoyed reading it....
  July 22nd, 2018 14:08
• When we sway (Poetic Dan) Sway in the breeze of life my friend as it wafts you through revelation...
  July 22nd, 2018 03:47
• If you still saw me (Nobody special) Interesting introspective read. Move on, she obviously has but females...
  July 22nd, 2018 02:41
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (8) (Michael Edwards) Mmmm loss of amnesia as Tony Hancock called it glancing at an armful of...
  July 22nd, 2018 02:33
• Barge Life. (Goldfinch60) idyllic. I\'m envious of my ex who\'s managed to live on a narrowboat for...
  July 22nd, 2018 02:30
• To whom this atheist preys (Edthepoet) Being brought up in a christian society will have influenced your outlook...
  July 21st, 2018 19:48
• Auto Pilot (Reyas) I rekkon this is what it must be like on some of those drugs that alter...
  July 21st, 2018 13:44
• I\'m Loving It (JasmineUK) And there i was thinking youre a chocaholic.
  July 21st, 2018 13:27
• I am assisting are you listening (Poetic Dan) Great write again sir. None of us have it all nor all that we are going to...
  July 21st, 2018 09:12
• The Car of My Dreams. (Goldfinch60) How could you be so unfaithful???? That lovely Anglia 105E sat in your...
  July 21st, 2018 08:50
• 00:17 (Edthepoet) All too true and masterfully written as per. Now i\'m gonna try to preach...
  July 21st, 2018 08:44
• Acquire A New Skill (Brooklyn6timesplus) Excellent positivity.
  July 20th, 2018 15:12
• Yes, Madam (JasmineUK) Aha your vocation! Poet of course. (or should i say of coarse). No...
  July 20th, 2018 13:31
• Not sure what you expect but I\'m what you get (Poetic Dan) I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to...
  July 20th, 2018 11:46
• The Sad Reality (Reyas) Sad self mutilation and ultimate sacrifice. Disturbing reading. Well...
  July 20th, 2018 11:39
• Beechworth Streets #01: still (standing) (Frank Prem) A mere one hundred years pah! I\'m writing from England, Europe you know,...
  July 20th, 2018 06:15
• She Touched His Art with Her Magical Wand (Jim Yates) In my sixties i feel like you wrote this piece from peeping over my...
  July 20th, 2018 06:10
• TROD TRACKS. (Fay Slimm.) I have trod some of those tracks over a number of years visiting your...
  July 20th, 2018 05:17
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (7) (Michael Edwards) Cute! I wonder if they\'\'ll ever create an artificial intelligence...
  July 20th, 2018 05:09
• Threshold of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60) We are all teachers and students too. I\'m sure you\'ll agree we never...
  July 20th, 2018 04:33
• bbc off cliff (Hilllow) Nice clever writing. Justice to this poor man too. Not that he is poor in...
  July 20th, 2018 04:15
• Imaginary Friend (CarefulWhereYouStand) Mesmerising. You tease us with fun. Though theres a hint of sadness and...
  July 20th, 2018 03:41
• Where (CarefulWhereYouStand) Oh i love this style of writing. You are gonna go far! Such a pleasure to...
  July 20th, 2018 03:37
• The Mute (Goodman) On your home/profile page it shows how many poems by other people you...
  July 20th, 2018 03:28
• The Muse (Jim Yates) Beautiful. have found it necessary to write of my past muse(s) when the...
  July 20th, 2018 03:19
• A LOVER\'S HEAT (Lasergraph) Oh nicely done and a rare but tasteful place to end your piece today. Your...
  July 20th, 2018 01:11
• Crash Landing (Reyas) I like this. It left my chuckling because the ending was quite a surprise....
  July 20th, 2018 01:00
• Dear You~Dream (MP Martinez) I love the lyrical flow of your work here. It has a dream like feel just...
  July 20th, 2018 00:57
• Insomniac mind (SilverXball) Aaaaah but does insomnia inspire the poetic mind??? You could be...
  July 20th, 2018 00:53
• My inner child say be fearless and brave (Poetic Dan) Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out! From your recent...
  July 20th, 2018 00:47
• ABANDON. (Fay Slimm.) Oooooh that young soul hasn\'t left your limbs I\'m thinking. Did your...
  July 20th, 2018 00:42
• I Found A Place (Ternic73) What a lovely read. Light hearted, free flowing and joyous. A wonderful...
  July 20th, 2018 00:32
• HIGH SUMMER (Michael Edwards) Your writing today brought to mind how the scents of our countryside in...
  July 18th, 2018 18:31
• 1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see (Poetic Dan) A proud son will read this. Whether he perceives the deep soulful man his...
  July 18th, 2018 18:26
• NOW SLEEPING. (Fay Slimm.) \'Stop all the clocks\'. Terrible drama from your eloquence today. A...
  July 18th, 2018 18:18
• Perfection Failed. (Goldfinch60) Firstly, a big BIG thank you for introducing me to the Classical Jazz...
  July 18th, 2018 05:53
• Maybe (Naeners) This piece is very well written. I like concise works, such as yours, for...
  July 18th, 2018 05:37
• CONTAGION (Michael Edwards) Frightening yet quite natural. Reminiscent of my ex mother-in-law from...
  July 17th, 2018 03:37
• Unbroken Love. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful emotion. You lucky man.
  July 17th, 2018 03:29