Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Prayer Progress (Orchidee) Ace rhyming complacent with penitent. That last verse is a winner on it\'s...
  August 6th, 2018 00:34
• Cutting Edge (Reyas) Physical to overcome the mental. Incisive harsh action punishes the reader...
  August 6th, 2018 00:14
• SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (3) (Michael Edwards) Crikey yes ties i remember those.
  August 5th, 2018 08:35
• Captured in Art (Goldfinch60) Great to know that us old codgers can still be gobsmakked by the beauty of...
  August 5th, 2018 08:33
• Encroachment in Life. (Goldfinch60) Satie had a wonderful way of creating memorable simple pieces with...
  August 4th, 2018 10:12
• I WRITE (Michael Edwards) Ah, so thats how you do it.
  August 3rd, 2018 07:57
• Backyard Imagination (Reyas) He he he i love it. But this love of mum\'s food spoiling all the fun....
  August 2nd, 2018 14:22
• Invisible (Lorna) Small as you wish to be, you reach out big to us readers. Why does the...
  August 2nd, 2018 06:41
• CATZZZ. (Fay Slimm.) Oh i just love this. I can see so many of the lovely cats i have known in...
  August 2nd, 2018 06:30
• My Everlasting Friend. (Goldfinch60) You most definitely have an affinity with the Avon. Todays write feels...
  August 2nd, 2018 02:17
• AUGUST (Michael Edwards) Lovely, i see small wildlife scurrying from my path.
  August 2nd, 2018 02:12
• Untitled (Kailie Jackson) LOL love it
  August 1st, 2018 14:15
• A Young Poet’s Dream (Reyas) A fine aspiration \"I want it said when i am gone, i moved the world just...
  August 1st, 2018 14:15
• A Young Poet’s Dream (Reyas) A fine aspiration \"I want it said when i am gone, i moved the world just...
  August 1st, 2018 13:44
• The Purple Elephant (Jenn2009) He gonna explode one day! Cute message.
  August 1st, 2018 13:27
• The Purple Elephant (Jenn2009) He gonna explode one day! Cute message.
  August 1st, 2018 10:55
• A POET (Michael Edwards) I\'m no poet mate, I\'m just in therapy here. I live in fear of laptop...
  August 1st, 2018 09:13
• Rain Refreshment (Orchidee) But why dust tho play such a wicked game Wrecking lives with a...
  August 1st, 2018 09:03
• Blissful Quiet. (Goldfinch60) We all enjoy the convenience of our services laid into our homes, take...
  August 1st, 2018 08:58
• My \'72 Cheyenne Truck And \'85 Camaro (W c) Yes we do build an affinity with our vehicles without doubt. I\'m tempted...
  August 1st, 2018 08:50
• Better than worse (Poetic Dan) A great day in both your lives. Love the music, love the sentiment and...
  August 1st, 2018 08:47
• Life (Everlong) Ah but you may have both for the magic, zest and pace of young life will...
  August 1st, 2018 08:39
• The Surgeon Moon (August) (Lorna) Lovely mind pictures accompany your words today. Thank you for light...
  August 1st, 2018 07:13
• CHAINS. (Fay Slimm.) I\'m all too familiar with the sentiment of your well written piece today...
  August 1st, 2018 05:39
• SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2) (Michael Edwards) Murphy was disappointed with his score in the olympic high diving 2.2 ...
  July 31st, 2018 03:04
• Alone Together (Lorna) Romances and pairings can teach us such a lot about ourselves. Especially...
  July 30th, 2018 08:29
• CARRYING ON. (Fay Slimm.) My faith was tested and changed... no answers were found... questions...
  July 30th, 2018 08:23
• SARTORIAL INELEGANCIES (1) (Michael Edwards) I break all the rules these days. Once upon a time i was a paragon of...
  July 30th, 2018 08:17
• Hearing The Lone Ranger. (Goldfinch60) Kimmo sabbe! My dad used to tell a wonderful story about the young man...
  July 30th, 2018 08:13
• Admittance (Jenn2009) Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented...
  July 30th, 2018 07:22
• Admittance (Jenn2009) Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented...
  July 30th, 2018 03:05
• Nothing Town (JasmineUK) A cry out for those who\'s cries cannot be heard nor understood. A...
  July 29th, 2018 19:21
• A Poet (W c) Does life ever pass us by? This here and now is your life, my life, and...
  July 29th, 2018 19:08
• Under The Weather (Christina8) Nice to see your blooms on MPS again. Wishing you a full and speedy...
  July 29th, 2018 19:03
• somehow something (Dusk arising) I had in mind the overall feel created by Everything But The Girl on...
  July 29th, 2018 17:58
• somehow something (Dusk arising) Hi Joe. Thank you for commenting on this piece. It is written as a song...
  July 29th, 2018 17:53
• Everything and Nothing (Reyas) If only more people could see this in themselves. I have to say that it...
  July 29th, 2018 14:33
• Case Number 179,001 (EliDagger) My short journey to here through your two other pieces has been one of...
  July 29th, 2018 14:12
• How I Fell (EliDagger) Well i wrote that having read your \'that moment, the moment\' i would...
  July 29th, 2018 14:02
• That Moment, The Moment (EliDagger) Amazing... this is just so good! W O W !!! So strong, captivating....
  July 29th, 2018 13:48
• why (Avigail) Some questions haunt us, popping into mind at random but why? Do others...
  July 29th, 2018 13:38
• Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor) Your structure, meter, pace and metaphor here are second to none. I...
  July 29th, 2018 13:21
• One is one too many (Edthepoet) Nice one Ed, if only eh? I would truly support your stance here with the...
  July 29th, 2018 07:32
• Lullaby part two (Poetic Dan) Really good to see such a wonderful healing message from you sir! Gentle...
  July 29th, 2018 07:19
• unanswered questions (Dusk arising) It\'s already been written and performed sir! I\'m a singer and musician...
  July 29th, 2018 07:02
• Delightful Disconnect (Lorna) Beautiful ... like a dream. You actually took my minds eye an a lovely...
  July 29th, 2018 06:35
• Intelligent Conversation. (Goldfinch60) Whilst visiting my son many moons ago i met my ex mum-in-law who conversed...
  July 29th, 2018 06:03
• A COUPLET (4) (Michael Edwards) Sounds like you are in balance with the world. I can venture out in to...
  July 29th, 2018 05:50
• The Wolf Pack (Reyas) I was thinking as i read it, a wolf will rarely attack alone. Excellent...
  July 28th, 2018 12:55
• Mourn Not (Lorna) In my collection of poems are several which recall very happy times with...
  July 28th, 2018 12:12
• Mission Of Mercy (Orchidee) Yes you\'re right and i do see before me a well structured piece which...
  July 28th, 2018 02:29
• A song may say it better? (Poetic Dan) There you go you see. Wisdom and thru wisdom - vision, and thru that...
  July 28th, 2018 02:25
• Mission Of Mercy (Orchidee) You\'re obviously a christian religious believer and i am not so i...
  July 28th, 2018 02:16
• To Be a Ghost (Sound) I know you don\'t really mean that - I can see right through you.
  July 28th, 2018 01:25
• Soundtrack to my Love (JasmineUK) Well i\'m ready to spin \'The only way is up\' but i dont mind if you\'d...
  July 28th, 2018 01:21
• Ultimate Chastisement. (Goldfinch60) One of the first things the EU did to us was to remove the right of a...
  July 28th, 2018 01:18
• A COUPLET (3) (Michael Edwards) Well at least we got a summer this year in UK. It\'s enough to knacker a...
  July 28th, 2018 01:15
• A Praying Mantis (W c) Do preying mantis eat spiders? If so i rekkon Tesco\'s (K mart if you\'re...
  July 27th, 2018 15:56
• You ever wonder? (Reyas) Announcement for our younger readers, the aforementioned characters are...
  July 27th, 2018 15:42
• It felt Like A Breeze. (Kevin browne) I couldn\'t agree more kevin. Gems of positivity are all around us,...
  July 27th, 2018 15:08
• Charles Trenet - La Mer (Lorna) Lovely words describing just how a piece of music/song/poem can lift us to...
  July 27th, 2018 10:54
• CLOSE COMFORT. (Fay Slimm.) A quite beautiful expression of love and longing for re-union. \"Love...
  July 27th, 2018 10:51
• Changing existence (Poetic Dan) Great self expression. Letting go of frustrations by losing yourself into...
  July 27th, 2018 10:36
• Playing with Clouds. (Goldfinch60) I shan\'t tire if u play more sinatra. I have high regard for his singing...
  July 27th, 2018 10:26
• Luminous Light (Orchidee) Strain my ears though i tried, i don\'t think i heard your dulcit tones...
  July 27th, 2018 10:21
• A COUPLET (2) (Michael Edwards) All too true, and i hope your eloquent self will provide a fitting
  July 27th, 2018 10:18
• The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna) I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
  July 26th, 2018 08:03
• The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna) I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
  July 26th, 2018 06:57
• The Buck Moon (July) (Lorna) I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your...
  July 26th, 2018 06:50
• Isolation (Poetic Dan) Love the world and it loves right back at you doesn\'t it.
  July 26th, 2018 04:26
• Failing Faith. (Goldfinch60) Certainly a test of faith. Or what alternative?
  July 26th, 2018 04:22
• A COUPLET (1) (Michael Edwards) Deep
  July 26th, 2018 04:16
• Fragile Walls (Reyas) There\'s a core within us all which is or was the timid young boy/girl of...
  July 25th, 2018 17:08
• Broken (Gabriella) Been there, done that, musta liked it some cos found myself there a few...
  July 25th, 2018 16:54
• धुँआ (SuEyesWrites) Thank you for sharing that with us. So easy to relate to!
  July 25th, 2018 16:30
• MAKE-OVER. (Fay Slimm.) Well i do hope you feel great, because you write flippin marvelous. What a...
  July 25th, 2018 04:07
• The power in me (Poetic Dan) Accepting that we make mistakes is a milestone along our path of self...
  July 25th, 2018 04:00
• Who Could Ask For More. (Goldfinch60) Lovely soothing music. You lucky man, your devices obviously love you. I...
  July 25th, 2018 03:43
• Love Me Like There\'s No Tomorrow. (Kevin browne) What a convoluted tale of love and romance. \"Live by the death of your...
  July 25th, 2018 02:36
• Love Me Like There\'s No Tomorrow. (Kevin browne) What a convoluted tale of love and romance. \"Live by the death of your...
  July 25th, 2018 00:45
• NOAH\'S LAMENT (Michael Edwards) Lets face it, rabbits are well ahead of us in weighing up the situation....
  July 25th, 2018 00:34
• Life’s Limbo (JackSkelton) A fine opening piece sir! Great \'open heart therapy\' this poem writing...
  July 25th, 2018 00:15
• Life’s Limbo (JackSkelton) A fine opening piece sir! Great \'open heart therapy\' this poem writing...
  July 24th, 2018 23:24
• \"Once Happy, Now Fallen\" (Ryuji) Before commenting i read your rely above. I\'m pleased that i did because...
  July 24th, 2018 23:10
• Behind These Walls (MrNobody40) Nice one! These days just run away with themselves now we are no longer...
  July 24th, 2018 23:05
• Comfort in Solitude (Asrealastheycome) They wreck you because they don\'t have your depth. But deep people cant...
  July 24th, 2018 22:56
• Intoxicated Driver (Cindy Christmas) Having read part 2, i decided to come and look up part 1. I like this,...
  July 24th, 2018 22:51
• Intoxicated Driver (Part 2) (Cindy Christmas) I am with you 100% in the message you convey, which you have done so...
  July 24th, 2018 22:47
• Dashwood (JasmineUK) Yay forsooth thou hast hailed mine devil within. Twas with lustful glare...
  July 24th, 2018 22:38
• Dark Abyss (Reyas) Hey, what about life after death. I hope you took a packed lunch.
  July 24th, 2018 14:58
• move along (Dusk arising) Thanks Cat. Yes i know only too well the pain etc but you\'re so right,...
  July 24th, 2018 11:26
• move along (Dusk arising) A moment ago i was leaving a comment on your piece today and wondering how...
  July 24th, 2018 10:38
• AWESOME. (Fay Slimm.) Struck once again by your poetic pyrotechnics here. Thunder storms are...
  July 24th, 2018 10:14
• A lullaby (Poetic Dan) This will be great for your young kids Dan. Writing for young ones is such...
  July 24th, 2018 09:59
• Time After Time. (Goldfinch60) Great write again and stirring up my thoughts. We\'re such rational...
  July 24th, 2018 09:53
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (10) (Michael Edwards) Doh ,
  July 24th, 2018 09:43
• WE WERE BOTH SO YOUNG (Lasergraph) Nice one sir. I tried to write something similar and your writing brought...
  July 23rd, 2018 11:32
• Broken (Reyas) Break out of the broken outlook. Many things may be broken but repairable....
  July 23rd, 2018 11:25
• INTENTIONS. (Fay Slimm.) Love, that wonderful mystery prize for you know not where it will take you...
  July 23rd, 2018 10:54
• It went like this (Poetic Dan) Here we are like a brotherhood of understanding and nurture. Its good that...
  July 23rd, 2018 01:51