Comments on community poems by Lauraš»
- Creation\'s Tears (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
⢠āCreationās Tearsā
Before I read your masterfully...
December 11th, 2021 15:59 - Camel Drive or Putt? (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A camel šŖ on the lam?! Seeing that camel on the run must have...
December 10th, 2021 03:37 - Green (Lorna)
Lorna,
What a great picture! (If you donāt mind, may I post it in my...
December 10th, 2021 03:06 - Red (Lorna)
Lorna,
Wow š®ā¦what an explosion! š„
Lauraš»
December 10th, 2021 02:29 - Blessing\'s For Sale (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Two powerful and amazing writes. A contemplative read.
Thank you...
December 5th, 2021 00:20 - Leaden Heart (Lorna)
My Dear Lorna,
As I read your poem, it reminded me of the times I would...
December 4th, 2021 17:14 - Lost? (Orchidee)
Orchi,
I enjoyed your interesting write and my auntie had a lot of...
December 4th, 2021 13:18 - The Lesson Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Youāre so spot on with with your brilliant write. Iāve...
December 4th, 2021 12:15 - Incomparable (Fay Slimm.)
My Dear Fay,
Your awesome poem is definitely in a class of its own....
December 3rd, 2021 16:23 - THE GUY WHO ISNāT THERE - A COLLABORATION (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
Iām glad I read this re-write. Thank you for penning it and...
December 3rd, 2021 12:18 - My Lady is More Than a Poem (Neville)
Neville,
A ākeeperā indeedā¦ā¦ā¦ā¦
āto cherish, to...
December 3rd, 2021 11:54 - The Forest & The Trees (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
ā¢āThe Forest & The Treesā
A befitting title for your
two...
December 3rd, 2021 11:37 - Where are you Mary (Neville)
Neville,
Today is one of those days for āusā to weep, to grieve, to...
November 30th, 2021 15:47 - Safe In Our Beds (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
So true and spot on are your wordsā¦
āāthe soap of...
November 28th, 2021 23:59 - On My Mind (Lorna)
Lorna,
Beautifully penned words to remember your love⦠whoās...
November 27th, 2021 12:37 - Thankful Turning (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A good writeā¦
Yes, let us be thankful!
Thank you for...
November 27th, 2021 03:42 - From Experience. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Your penned poem is spot on and so relatable.
Thank you for...
November 27th, 2021 03:11 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (4 - 6) (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
Iāll drink to that!
Saluteš·š·
Love your couplets...
November 27th, 2021 02:58 - Down With Everything (Neville)
Neville,
A very interesting write.
Are your eyes blue?ā¦just...
November 27th, 2021 02:49 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
Neville,
A fine write indeed!
Whether your penned words are...
November 17th, 2021 16:45 - Kingdom Of One (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
⢠āKingdom Of Oneā
Your penned words are so relatable at...
November 17th, 2021 13:17 - One Hand Clapping (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Love the title of this
penned gem.
Thank you for...
November 10th, 2021 00:33 - Escape (James Michael)
Michael,
A beautifully penned poem which I enjoyed reading. Thank you...
November 8th, 2021 23:16 - Let These Words Speak For Themselves (Neville)
Neville,
Your penned words do speak for themselves and I appreciate...
November 2nd, 2021 15:27 - Eternal Love. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Yes, your beautiful shining Star is there looking down upon you...
November 2nd, 2021 02:17 - Moccasins (Lorna)
My Dear Lorna,
A beautifully written poem. As I read it, lots of my...
November 2nd, 2021 02:00 - Final Draft (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
AMEN!
Laurš»
November 1st, 2021 00:15 - Best (Fay Slimm.)
My Dear Fay,
Love, love, loveā¦
What a wonderful wordā¦
What a...
October 31st, 2021 00:10 - Halloween Horror (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A fun read. Go on singingā¦
it is Halloween after all. Lol...
October 31st, 2021 00:00 - Eternal River. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Ah yesā¦
your River and your beloved Joyce.
One day you will...
October 30th, 2021 23:55 - Short Straw (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
āA jazz musicianāā¦
āA poet in laurelsāā¦
ā¦and they...
October 30th, 2021 23:36 - A Last Dance (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Wowā¦I love this one very, very much!
Thank you for sharing ...
October 29th, 2021 12:50 - Making Plain (Fay Slimm.)
My Dear Fay,
I love your poem in its entirety. I especially...
October 28th, 2021 23:43 - Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville)
Neville,
This is a very interesting and intriguing...
October 28th, 2021 23:27 - Guardian Angel Baby (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
A beautifully penned poem expressing a powerful message with a...
October 28th, 2021 17:44 - To Rise Again (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
⢠āTo Rise Againā
Reading your penned words of this ...
October 28th, 2021 08:21 - Salvation Sure (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A wonderful hymn-poem complemented beautifully with your choice...
October 27th, 2021 00:28 - Faith In The Wind (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
WOW!!
These āDreamsleepā are extraordinary. Thereās so...
October 26th, 2021 13:32 - Enlightenment #2 (Neville)
My Dear Neville,
Youāre spot on with your inked wordsā¦
ā¦ā¦....
October 26th, 2021 11:02 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
My Dear Fay,
This gem of a poem reminded me of my beautiful childhood...
October 26th, 2021 10:25 - Dad\'s Back. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Beautiful memoriesā¦
yes, your dad is with youā¦
what a...
October 26th, 2021 01:41 - One-Way Mirrors (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Three great inspirational poems that give the reader so much to...
October 26th, 2021 00:37 - Breakfast Rituals (Neville)
Neville,
What a treatā¦ā¦
Breakfast, Lunch,
and/or...
October 25th, 2021 13:49 - Recollections (Neville)
Neville,
ā¦absolutely
āso much harder to forgetāā¦
that...
October 24th, 2021 16:40 - Mourning Dove (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
A gem of a write.
With an open heart
I welcome the...
October 24th, 2021 13:57 - One Last Time (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
As I read āOne Last Timeā, for some reason I felt a certain...
October 24th, 2021 13:37 - From Black Tar, To Black Top (Simple-Man87)
S-M7,
Wowā¦a very intense and dark write. What an imagination. It felt...
October 23rd, 2021 18:22 - Magnificently Flawed (Neville)
Neville,
Ahhā¦those first impressions can be so deceivingā¦so much...
October 23rd, 2021 18:12 - purple skies grumble (Dusk arising)
D.A.,
What a delightful read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful...
October 23rd, 2021 02:03 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (7) (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
Thank you for sharing and making me smile. Great artā¦love...
October 23rd, 2021 01:46 - Age Celebration. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Yes, I totally agree and raise my glassš·to life and to you for...
October 23rd, 2021 01:39 - Breakaway (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Glad to see your āDreamsleepā post.
After reading your...
October 22nd, 2021 13:41 - A Diamond in The Making (Neville)
Neville,
Beautifully stated my dear friend.
Lauraš»
October 22nd, 2021 03:12 - Too Little / Too Late (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
āHindsight is 20/20ā
Could we�
Should we�
Would...
October 6th, 2021 10:59 - \'False Witness\' (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Padre, Figlio, e
Spirito Santo.
Amen!
Lauraš»
October 5th, 2021 12:53 - Crossing The Equator (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā poems are beyond impressive. So gracious...
October 5th, 2021 09:22 - Fault Line (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
ā¢āFault Lineā
A āfault lineā of life will either...
October 1st, 2021 18:52 - My religion (Poetic Dan)
Dear Dan,
ābass is my religion and its here to stay!ā
Getting in...
October 1st, 2021 09:56 - Above The Beyond (Something For Laura) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
āThe minstrel frees the poetās words
āand drives the...
September 29th, 2021 18:34 - Faith-Full (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A beautiful read.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
September 28th, 2021 16:56 - The Rest Is History. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Enjoyed reading your
historical fiction poem.
Thank you for...
September 28th, 2021 16:42 - Wasted Breath (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Reading your couplets have evoked feelings beyond angerā¦
It...
September 28th, 2021 14:46 - Blinded By The Light (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
āThe most treasured of things
to be loved and...
September 27th, 2021 10:48 - Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration (Doggerel Dave)
D.D.,
Your wonderfully written poem is very relatable. A very humorous...
September 25th, 2021 20:34 - TIMING (Jerry Reynolds)
Jerry,
Who can resist
a āSilk shirtā,
a āStetson hatā,...
September 25th, 2021 19:25 - Oraculum (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
So humble and unpretentious of you my dear...
September 25th, 2021 19:05 - The Tease (Neville)
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to...
September 25th, 2021 18:26 - Healing Hopes (Orchidee)
Orchi,
Thank you for sharing your wonderful hymn/poem. Just read it to...
September 25th, 2021 16:54 - Into The Authors World Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Reading a good book is a āgift that keeps on givingā. ...
September 25th, 2021 16:47 - With The Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Out of the shadows into the lightā¦
Lightā
our guideā¦
our...
September 24th, 2021 19:06 - Nothing to Lose (Neville)
Neville,
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.š
When thereās...
September 24th, 2021 17:18 - This Heart (Fay Slimm.)
My Dear Fay,
As I read your incredible poem, I sense and feel the...
September 24th, 2021 15:23 - Without Closure (Neville)
Neville,
Your words convey a message of sadness and a void that this...
September 24th, 2021 01:37 - Our One God. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
Thank you for your wonderful poem and for sharing your thoughts....
September 24th, 2021 01:24 - weary n weak (Dusk arising)
Dear D.A.,
Such a poignant writeā¦so relatable. You are truly amazing...
September 24th, 2021 01:14 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
I enjoyed reading your witty couplet and your artwork of...
September 24th, 2021 00:37 - La Traviata. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
āLa Traviataā is one of my favorites. When youāre fully...
September 24th, 2021 00:15 - To Always Return (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Definitely for you
āone time is not enoughā.
The more you...
September 23rd, 2021 23:32 - Insane? (Simple-Man87)
S-M87,
As I read your poem, I sense a sadness. Iām hoping the words...
September 23rd, 2021 23:23 - once there was spring (Dusk arising)
D.A.,
Your written words are delightful and most pleasing. Thank you...
September 22nd, 2021 00:13 - Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
Dear Andy,
You are a beacon of light on this MPS site. What a pleasure...
September 21st, 2021 23:52 - Reminders (Fay Slimm.)
My Dear Fay,
A beautiful season indeed. Your choice of words to remind...
September 21st, 2021 23:07 - In The Still of The Night (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Ron,
A wonderful and sensitive poem which I enjoyed readingā¦love the...
September 21st, 2021 20:39 - Nice & Snug (Poetic Dan)
Dan,
Iāve enjoyed this great poem of yours. I especially...
September 21st, 2021 16:35 - A Taste Well Shared (Neville)
Neville,
Letās hope their taste buds are aplenty with papillae and...
September 21st, 2021 15:44 - The Ostrich (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
Your āDreamsleepā is a gem jammed with the truth. So many...
September 21st, 2021 15:08 - Someone More Golden (Neville)
Neville,
Letās think of it this wayā¦
1kt worth of gold is...
September 19th, 2021 14:55 - goodbye (Dusk arising)
D.A.,
Wowā¦
I was totally engrossed in reading your awesome write. I...
September 18th, 2021 09:42 - ScarperĀ (Neville)
Neville,
āScarperāā¦
When I saw this title, I immediately thought...
September 18th, 2021 08:13 - . (Poky)
Poky,
ā¦and no one noticed
ālong sleeves covering
her...
September 15th, 2021 16:34 - Treasure Told (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A ātreasureā of a write.
ā¦and my auntās
comment to...
September 15th, 2021 13:14 - long-lost friend (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Kevin,
āNeither faithless,
nor non-believerā¦ā
Thank you for...
September 15th, 2021 11:05 - Yesterday, Tomorrow, Today. (Goldfinch60)
Andy,
A beautiful uplifting read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful...
September 15th, 2021 10:12 - Time\'s Gauntlet (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
āTis wise and prudent
to heed the
āvoices from the...
September 13th, 2021 22:57 - Sign of the Cross (James Michael)
Johnny FN Lawless,
A very interesting interpretation of the
āSign...
September 13th, 2021 22:11 - Two Small Eyes (Satishverma)
Satishverma,
To our dismay, āthe neighbourhood of snakesā will...
September 12th, 2021 19:00 - Waves (Satishverma)
Satishverma,
Yes indeedā¦
Earth does have
āmany enemies...
September 12th, 2021 00:04 - My Lotus and Me (Neville)
Neville,
Alas, that Lotus number seventeen was willing to perform,...
September 9th, 2021 00:13 - HELL (Simple-Man87)
S-M87,
You donāt see the flame because it is within. Donāt let that...
September 8th, 2021 21:49 - Wryneck (Neville)
Neville,
Today I learned something new, thanks to you my dear...
September 6th, 2021 16:08
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