Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Epitaph for a PC (Doggerel Dave)
OOoh I know how you feel Dave - naked without means to cover your page...
August 17th, 2022 11:18 - Early One Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - well we can all wake sometimes with the wrong day in mind eh ?...
August 16th, 2022 17:48 - -Symphonic sadness- (Dean langmuir)
The title drew my close attention to this poignant lament dean - - you...
August 16th, 2022 16:56 - My Beloved Ziggy (Dove)
Such a sad loss for you Dove - - the shock alone must be taking its...
August 16th, 2022 16:47 - My life in lipstick (Morwenna)
An impressive write Morwenna - -- the use lipstick makes to a changing...
August 16th, 2022 16:26 - Being Human (Bella Shepard)
What a journey of learning is our life on this planet. Thank you for this...
August 14th, 2022 15:23 - Ruined By Heat. (Goldfinch60)
Yes those cool natural breezes are so very welcome at the moment dear Andy...
August 12th, 2022 02:11 - One drink down (MendedFences27)
An unforgettably rhythmic lament Phil with heartfelt learning curves...
August 11th, 2022 17:06 - surface tension (Dusk arising)
You catch the essence of the waning spirit being lifted by wonderfully...
August 11th, 2022 14:05 - Spellbound (Neville)
Am listening and hearing those whispers and shakin\' a bit as I light a...
August 11th, 2022 09:13 - Life\'s Arrow. (Goldfinch60)
A very apt metaphor that I had never before thought of dear Andy - - -...
August 7th, 2022 01:30 - Every Life is a Story (Bella Shepard)
A very sensitive musing dear Bella - - and how true that third line of...
August 6th, 2022 13:01 - The Last Romance (MendedFences27)
Oh what a sigh of a read Phil - you penned the very hurts that come when...
August 6th, 2022 12:56 - Fools Gold (Saxon Crow)
Thanks for this gem of wisdom Sax to know that when hopes are dashed and...
August 5th, 2022 15:24 - one facet of motivation (Dusk arising)
Dear and very courageous Dusk - your words strike to the core of what we...
August 5th, 2022 04:17 - You (James Michael)
Words of truth and of comfort - thank you James for this empowering...
August 5th, 2022 00:13 - Led By The Light (Orchidee)
Nothing like light to expose dark deeds my friend - -- being children of...
August 4th, 2022 02:12 - Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet (Neville)
I remember those back seats in my Dad\'s little Austin - - -- - -- my...
August 3rd, 2022 07:56 - Through The Mist. (Goldfinch60)
Keep walking on that grateful journey my dear friend. - -- You are a...
August 2nd, 2022 06:16 - Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor (Neville)
I certainly not only admire your wise words but know without doubt you ...
August 2nd, 2022 06:12 - Sunday Of Summer (Charles Edward York)
A talent for imagery lies snug in this summer song of ther sensual - a...
August 1st, 2022 07:03 - Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please (Neville)
Your imagery is as brill. as ever.........x
August 1st, 2022 06:56 - That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings (Neville)
Ah - what intimate memories of long gone relationships brought to...
July 31st, 2022 03:01 - The Shame of Yesterday’s News (Neville)
Yes what was important has radically changed in these uncaring days my...
July 30th, 2022 03:48 - Just a Dream (MendedFences27)
Sad to read of so many establishments in need of re-hashing. - -true...
July 29th, 2022 16:16 - Laughter And Sleep. (Goldfinch60)
Agreed dear Andy - and my feet are still tapping to that Beach Boys...
July 29th, 2022 04:04 - The Lovers of Modena Disturbed (Neville)
Sounds like more than one Italian secret was uncovered in those bones...
July 29th, 2022 03:38 - Salvation Sure (Orchidee)
Yes being alive in spirit is the best way to live. Good write Orchi.
July 29th, 2022 01:46 - BUDDING FRIENDSHIP (Manny Jordan)
A praise poem indeed Manny - - a well constructed piece . Thank you for...
July 29th, 2022 01:43 - There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
The worst weather forecast ever given was that time in eighty seven when...
July 28th, 2022 16:01 - Tenderness (MendedFences27)
Phrased with such tenderness this romantic verse is packed with emotive...
July 28th, 2022 15:56 - How Far Do You Really Want to Go (Neville)
Poetry pleasure-ified my dear sir Neville.
July 28th, 2022 12:18 - Behind That Navajo Smile (Neville)
Oh the questions such victims of cruel land-rape must ask and penned here...
July 28th, 2022 03:42 - Fishing (Jerry Reynolds)
O secpmd Dusk - just to read of baked bass makes my mouth water - - we...
July 27th, 2022 15:41 - Seasons Change (Saxon Crow)
Oh Sax -- I ask the same question as I read your last line. The whole ...
July 27th, 2022 05:58 - there were shadows (Dusk arising)
A scene of mid-summer where games never cease and yet I have a feeling...
July 27th, 2022 05:52 - Of Time, That Is .. (Neville)
Yup - time will run off with love with too much talkin\' and not enough...
July 27th, 2022 04:46 - the love years (Dusk arising)
So sadly emotive these lines today Dusk - - time marches on with our...
July 26th, 2022 03:48 - Incidentally I Assure You (Neville)
Strange the way time makes our exits from once-loved relationships never...
July 26th, 2022 03:40 - Summer Birds (Jerry Reynolds)
Love the image and love your clever four liner - lessons learnt from this...
July 25th, 2022 12:42 - The Redundant Fist (Neville)
These words sum up the changes made in public opinion on ruling by fear...
July 25th, 2022 07:38 - Growing In Graces (Orchidee)
What better way is there to grow in than Graces. A good read Orchi.
July 25th, 2022 02:10 - As Each Day Dawns Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Simply beautiful words - what better each day than wake to this lovely...
July 24th, 2022 03:40 - Breathless (Dove)
What a gem of a love-song written so well in the villanelle style and full...
July 24th, 2022 01:33 - Mokhu #? (Neville)
Ha - -- Hic ! -- so mi amigo this is your take on penning the meaning of...
July 23rd, 2022 13:17 - Calmness Into Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Controlled by calm is what this troubled world needs to become -- a...
July 23rd, 2022 05:51 - Early Morning Rituals (Neville)
You pen with such ease not only a picture but a way of life that carries...
July 22nd, 2022 15:53 - I Dreamt (Bella Shepard)
Something to deeper ponder in those final words - -- short but telling...
July 21st, 2022 16:24 - More Important. (Goldfinch60)
How true it is that people mean more than just things.
July 21st, 2022 13:49 - What He Really, Really Wants (Neville)
You highlight the case of many a victim of controlled behaviour when...
July 21st, 2022 11:38 - LIMERICK 121 (Michael Edwards)
Good is this rhyme dear Mike - A chuckle a minute with your clever...
July 21st, 2022 09:00 - devour me (Siranswerer)
A bouquet of inuendoes and written with expert ease - this goes to my...
July 21st, 2022 06:40 - You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely (Neville)
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems...
July 20th, 2022 04:06 - Wake Up World. (Goldfinch60)
A needed warning dear Andy that we all need to wake up to the position ...
July 19th, 2022 04:48 - It Only Takes One Little Thing (Neville)
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments...
July 19th, 2022 04:26 - Why, write? (L. B. Mek)
What an inspired answer to the question contained in the title of this...
July 18th, 2022 08:18 - Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend (Neville)
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in...
July 18th, 2022 05:16 - days of morphine sulphate (Dusk arising)
Oh dearest Dusk - sending my best of big hugs as you try to recoup from...
July 17th, 2022 13:09 - Once Upon a Downing Street (Neville)
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is...
July 17th, 2022 07:42 - One Won\'t Hurt (Draven)
Lessons leant for us all at times Draven in this honest write - the best...
July 16th, 2022 14:15 - Etna (Neville)
She knew her potential did your gal Etna - explosively eruptive this read...
July 16th, 2022 14:08 - No Mercy on Mean Street (Neville)
Heart-felt horror to read of such happenings and what a title to draw...
July 15th, 2022 03:55 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
Love this one Dave and so will Andy - - that long-term appointment a...
July 14th, 2022 16:36 - Just a Few Significant Ponderings (Neville)
Inviting an honest self-assessment has never been writ better amigo -- ...
July 14th, 2022 05:20 - Please Tell Me It\'s Raining (MendedFences27)
Oh Phil - the write deeply stirs this reader\'s emotion with its...
July 13th, 2022 23:31 - Somewhere on a Family Tree (Neville)
This read brought me near tears with its raw and heartfelt honesty and am...
July 13th, 2022 04:26 - New Prints in Old Dust (Neville)
Leaving brave footprints to make way for the new is perhaps dangerous as...
July 12th, 2022 14:23 - Cups And Sugar. (Goldfinch60)
That is exactly the reason why two who are in love bypass any issues and...
July 12th, 2022 04:25 - A Rose Arose (MendedFences27)
A tale of sheer devotion to saving nature and all she creates -- the...
July 10th, 2022 14:37 - Home for Breakfast (Neville)
So unutterably sickening is war\'s unforgettable aftermath and tragedy...
July 9th, 2022 02:33 - Clearly a Vague Recollection (Neville)
Great read Nev - had me pondering why the draped female who wanted her man...
July 8th, 2022 03:10 - Shoes (MendedFences27)
How true and penned so compellingly this look-back at the pride I had when...
July 7th, 2022 15:34 - Love Forever FIB. (Goldfinch60)
Love when real cannot be defeated - - a beautiful testimony to its peace...
July 7th, 2022 04:16 - I Kin Write My Name As Good As Wol (Cheeky Missy)
Ah - and I do so enjoy your valued sonnets dear long-time friend -...
July 7th, 2022 04:13 - Waving at Amphitrite (Neville)
After such an expressively written invite that Greek goddess would never...
July 7th, 2022 02:40 - A Life (MendedFences27)
This read of time passing and folk living through busyness to poignant...
July 6th, 2022 15:45 - Beat another day (Poetic Dan)
Loud applause for beating another day in these wonderful and winning ways...
July 6th, 2022 03:30 - So Good. (Goldfinch60)
Ah -- one of my most favourite female singers - - Ella can move my...
July 6th, 2022 02:48 - Sea of Heartbreak (MendedFences27)
Your imagery got me near tears Phil - - the sea and its waves means so...
July 6th, 2022 02:32 - A Very Sudden Realisation (Neville)
A confession penned from dire hunger could not be more moving Nev. and...
July 6th, 2022 02:23 - smile (Dusk arising)
What better that that daily smile despite the storms of life my dear...
July 5th, 2022 12:44 - Generosity (Neville)
Sighing most freely at reading this posting mon ami - - have a good break...
July 5th, 2022 06:05 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
Such a wise suggestion on apathy - thanks Andy for an answer to the too...
July 5th, 2022 02:27 - Cry Of Pain! (Goldfinch60)
OUCH - -- dog-talk that means throw my rock- ball please - --hope it feels...
July 4th, 2022 05:28 - Contentment (Morwenna)
Such a fetching view of pure contentment Morwenna - - what better...
June 30th, 2022 16:28 - I Am Becoming My Dad. (Goldfinch60)
What better can we ever become than like a loved parent -- a lovely...
June 30th, 2022 15:24 - dark places (Dusk arising)
Such inventive appeal in this penned detail of \"victimhood\" dear Dusk...
June 27th, 2022 03:01 - The Boat Of Pleasant Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful survey of what lies ahead for everyone sooner or later dear...
June 27th, 2022 02:58 - Search Me, See me, Save Me (Orchidee)
A very illuminating read dear Orchi.
June 27th, 2022 02:55 - Counting my assets (Morwenna)
Such a fine penning of assets that no money can ever buy - so pleased I...
June 25th, 2022 17:43 - Finding a sense of wonder (Vincent Forberger)
You describe the height and the depth of a real sense of wonder which...
June 20th, 2022 16:14 - Yellowcraigs: a sunny day in Scotland (Morwenna)
A lovely picture to go with your ideal idea for a couple of fine haikus...
June 20th, 2022 16:09 - the green (Dusk arising)
Ah - - love the theme of your woodland dream before that warm lick my...
June 20th, 2022 10:16 - History it is Not (Part two) (Doggerel Dave)
Good read Dave - love and prayer could turn the scales methinks - hoping...
June 15th, 2022 12:10 - Every Storm. (Goldfinch60)
Love that thought - storms teach us how to dance in the rain. - How very...
June 14th, 2022 14:08 - a ghost of grieving (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A compelling write Kevin with some well poemed phrasing - -- the...
June 12th, 2022 16:03 - The poet (Michael William Reid)
Hello Michael - - how true that the poet has to write with soul to get the...
June 12th, 2022 11:53 - My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville)
Ah - - enjoy your break and come back refreshed and ready to post again eh...
June 11th, 2022 11:55 - My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville)
A sigh ends this haunt of a read at least it does for me Nev.. Tragic...
June 11th, 2022 05:03 - Hypothetically Yours (Neville)
Thanking you and your romantic heart for this ardent read Nev - -and now...
June 10th, 2022 03:13
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