Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Every Life is a Story (Bella Shepard)
A very sensitive musing dear Bella - - and how true that third line of...
August 6th, 2022 13:01 - Fools Gold (Saxon Crow)
Thanks for this gem of wisdom Sax to know that when hopes are dashed and...
August 5th, 2022 15:24 - one facet of motivation (Dusk arising)
Dear and very courageous Dusk - your words strike to the core of what we...
August 5th, 2022 04:17 - You (James Michael)
Words of truth and of comfort - thank you James for this empowering...
August 5th, 2022 00:13 - Led By The Light (Orchidee)
Nothing like light to expose dark deeds my friend - -- being children of...
August 4th, 2022 02:12 - Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet (Neville)
I remember those back seats in my Dad\'s little Austin - - -- - -- my...
August 3rd, 2022 07:56 - Through The Mist. (Goldfinch60)
Keep walking on that grateful journey my dear friend. - -- You are a...
August 2nd, 2022 06:16 - Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor (Neville)
I certainly not only admire your wise words but know without doubt you ...
August 2nd, 2022 06:12 - Sunday Of Summer (Charles Edward York)
A talent for imagery lies snug in this summer song of ther sensual - a...
August 1st, 2022 07:03 - Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please (Neville)
Your imagery is as brill. as ever.........x
August 1st, 2022 06:56 - That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings (Neville)
Ah - what intimate memories of long gone relationships brought to...
July 31st, 2022 03:01 - The Shame of Yesterday’s News (Neville)
Yes what was important has radically changed in these uncaring days my...
July 30th, 2022 03:48 - Laughter And Sleep. (Goldfinch60)
Agreed dear Andy - and my feet are still tapping to that Beach Boys...
July 29th, 2022 04:04 - The Lovers of Modena Disturbed (Neville)
Sounds like more than one Italian secret was uncovered in those bones...
July 29th, 2022 03:38 - Salvation Sure (Orchidee)
Yes being alive in spirit is the best way to live. Good write Orchi.
July 29th, 2022 01:46 - BUDDING FRIENDSHIP (Manny Jordan)
A praise poem indeed Manny - - a well constructed piece . Thank you for...
July 29th, 2022 01:43 - There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
The worst weather forecast ever given was that time in eighty seven when...
July 28th, 2022 16:01 - How Far Do You Really Want to Go (Neville)
Poetry pleasure-ified my dear sir Neville.
July 28th, 2022 12:18 - Behind That Navajo Smile (Neville)
Oh the questions such victims of cruel land-rape must ask and penned here...
July 28th, 2022 03:42 - Fishing (Jerry Reynolds)
O secpmd Dusk - just to read of baked bass makes my mouth water - - we...
July 27th, 2022 15:41 - Seasons Change (Saxon Crow)
Oh Sax -- I ask the same question as I read your last line. The whole ...
July 27th, 2022 05:58 - there were shadows (Dusk arising)
A scene of mid-summer where games never cease and yet I have a feeling...
July 27th, 2022 05:52 - Of Time, That Is .. (Neville)
Yup - time will run off with love with too much talkin\' and not enough...
July 27th, 2022 04:46 - the love years (Dusk arising)
So sadly emotive these lines today Dusk - - time marches on with our...
July 26th, 2022 03:48 - Incidentally I Assure You (Neville)
Strange the way time makes our exits from once-loved relationships never...
July 26th, 2022 03:40 - Summer Birds (Jerry Reynolds)
Love the image and love your clever four liner - lessons learnt from this...
July 25th, 2022 12:42 - The Redundant Fist (Neville)
These words sum up the changes made in public opinion on ruling by fear...
July 25th, 2022 07:38 - Growing In Graces (Orchidee)
What better way is there to grow in than Graces. A good read Orchi.
July 25th, 2022 02:10 - As Each Day Dawns Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Simply beautiful words - what better each day than wake to this lovely...
July 24th, 2022 03:40 - Breathless (Dove)
What a gem of a love-song written so well in the villanelle style and full...
July 24th, 2022 01:33 - Mokhu #? (Neville)
Ha - -- Hic ! -- so mi amigo this is your take on penning the meaning of...
July 23rd, 2022 13:17 - Calmness Into Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Controlled by calm is what this troubled world needs to become -- a...
July 23rd, 2022 05:51 - Early Morning Rituals (Neville)
You pen with such ease not only a picture but a way of life that carries...
July 22nd, 2022 15:53 - I Dreamt (Bella Shepard)
Something to deeper ponder in those final words - -- short but telling...
July 21st, 2022 16:24 - More Important. (Goldfinch60)
How true it is that people mean more than just things.
July 21st, 2022 13:49 - What He Really, Really Wants (Neville)
You highlight the case of many a victim of controlled behaviour when...
July 21st, 2022 11:38 - LIMERICK 121 (Michael Edwards)
Good is this rhyme dear Mike - A chuckle a minute with your clever...
July 21st, 2022 09:00 - devour me (Siranswerer)
A bouquet of inuendoes and written with expert ease - this goes to my...
July 21st, 2022 06:40 - You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely (Neville)
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems...
July 20th, 2022 04:06 - Wake Up World. (Goldfinch60)
A needed warning dear Andy that we all need to wake up to the position ...
July 19th, 2022 04:48 - It Only Takes One Little Thing (Neville)
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments...
July 19th, 2022 04:26 - Why, write? (L. B. Mek)
What an inspired answer to the question contained in the title of this...
July 18th, 2022 08:18 - Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend (Neville)
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in...
July 18th, 2022 05:16 - days of morphine sulphate (Dusk arising)
Oh dearest Dusk - sending my best of big hugs as you try to recoup from...
July 17th, 2022 13:09 - Once Upon a Downing Street (Neville)
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is...
July 17th, 2022 07:42 - One Won\'t Hurt (Draven)
Lessons leant for us all at times Draven in this honest write - the best...
July 16th, 2022 14:15 - Etna (Neville)
She knew her potential did your gal Etna - explosively eruptive this read...
July 16th, 2022 14:08 - No Mercy on Mean Street (Neville)
Heart-felt horror to read of such happenings and what a title to draw...
July 15th, 2022 03:55 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
Love this one Dave and so will Andy - - that long-term appointment a...
July 14th, 2022 16:36 - Just a Few Significant Ponderings (Neville)
Inviting an honest self-assessment has never been writ better amigo -- ...
July 14th, 2022 05:20 - Somewhere on a Family Tree (Neville)
This read brought me near tears with its raw and heartfelt honesty and am...
July 13th, 2022 04:26 - New Prints in Old Dust (Neville)
Leaving brave footprints to make way for the new is perhaps dangerous as...
July 12th, 2022 14:23 - Cups And Sugar. (Goldfinch60)
That is exactly the reason why two who are in love bypass any issues and...
July 12th, 2022 04:25 - Home for Breakfast (Neville)
So unutterably sickening is war\'s unforgettable aftermath and tragedy...
July 9th, 2022 02:33 - Clearly a Vague Recollection (Neville)
Great read Nev - had me pondering why the draped female who wanted her man...
July 8th, 2022 03:10 - Love Forever FIB. (Goldfinch60)
Love when real cannot be defeated - - a beautiful testimony to its peace...
July 7th, 2022 04:16 - I Kin Write My Name As Good As Wol (Cheeky Missy)
Ah - and I do so enjoy your valued sonnets dear long-time friend -...
July 7th, 2022 04:13 - Waving at Amphitrite (Neville)
After such an expressively written invite that Greek goddess would never...
July 7th, 2022 02:40 - Beat another day (Poetic Dan)
Loud applause for beating another day in these wonderful and winning ways...
July 6th, 2022 03:30 - So Good. (Goldfinch60)
Ah -- one of my most favourite female singers - - Ella can move my...
July 6th, 2022 02:48 - A Very Sudden Realisation (Neville)
A confession penned from dire hunger could not be more moving Nev. and...
July 6th, 2022 02:23 - smile (Dusk arising)
What better that that daily smile despite the storms of life my dear...
July 5th, 2022 12:44 - Generosity (Neville)
Sighing most freely at reading this posting mon ami - - have a good break...
July 5th, 2022 06:05 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
Such a wise suggestion on apathy - thanks Andy for an answer to the too...
July 5th, 2022 02:27 - Cry Of Pain! (Goldfinch60)
OUCH - -- dog-talk that means throw my rock- ball please - --hope it feels...
July 4th, 2022 05:28 - Contentment (Morwenna)
Such a fetching view of pure contentment Morwenna - - what better...
June 30th, 2022 16:28 - I Am Becoming My Dad. (Goldfinch60)
What better can we ever become than like a loved parent -- a lovely...
June 30th, 2022 15:24 - dark places (Dusk arising)
Such inventive appeal in this penned detail of \"victimhood\" dear Dusk...
June 27th, 2022 03:01 - The Boat Of Pleasant Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful survey of what lies ahead for everyone sooner or later dear...
June 27th, 2022 02:58 - Search Me, See me, Save Me (Orchidee)
A very illuminating read dear Orchi.
June 27th, 2022 02:55 - Counting my assets (Morwenna)
Such a fine penning of assets that no money can ever buy - so pleased I...
June 25th, 2022 17:43 - Finding a sense of wonder (Vincent Forberger)
You describe the height and the depth of a real sense of wonder which...
June 20th, 2022 16:14 - Yellowcraigs: a sunny day in Scotland (Morwenna)
A lovely picture to go with your ideal idea for a couple of fine haikus...
June 20th, 2022 16:09 - the green (Dusk arising)
Ah - - love the theme of your woodland dream before that warm lick my...
June 20th, 2022 10:16 - History it is Not (Part two) (Doggerel Dave)
Good read Dave - love and prayer could turn the scales methinks - hoping...
June 15th, 2022 12:10 - Every Storm. (Goldfinch60)
Love that thought - storms teach us how to dance in the rain. - How very...
June 14th, 2022 14:08 - a ghost of grieving (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A compelling write Kevin with some well poemed phrasing - -- the...
June 12th, 2022 16:03 - The poet (Michael William Reid)
Hello Michael - - how true that the poet has to write with soul to get the...
June 12th, 2022 11:53 - My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville)
Ah - - enjoy your break and come back refreshed and ready to post again eh...
June 11th, 2022 11:55 - My Pretty Little Psychopath (Neville)
A sigh ends this haunt of a read at least it does for me Nev.. Tragic...
June 11th, 2022 05:03 - Hypothetically Yours (Neville)
Thanking you and your romantic heart for this ardent read Nev - -and now...
June 10th, 2022 03:13 - Impossibly useless: improbable delight (Morwenna)
You poem the language of love\'s need for laughter when words of hurt...
June 9th, 2022 14:39 - Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville)
Metal jacket or not those fragments tell their own sorry story - --- ...
June 9th, 2022 07:59 - Four Together. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful situation of happiness to have found to keep on loving each...
June 9th, 2022 02:33 - Ride the Waves? (Draven)
An apt comparison for life\'s upheavals is the force of tide and power of...
June 8th, 2022 16:09 - This tangled life (Morwenna)
Ah - loud applause for your tribute to otherness Morwenna - I too sing to...
June 8th, 2022 06:16 - Over and Out (Neville)
Sad but true incompatibility is hard to deal with in a relationship where...
June 8th, 2022 04:00 - HER LAST RESTING PLACE (Michael Edwards)
A few perfectly set lines of quiet scene to touch readers\' hearts Mike...
June 8th, 2022 02:39 - It’s All in The Seeing (Neville)
Sight is unique and understanding is even more so -- - - many more side...
June 7th, 2022 03:24 - Came The Days. (Goldfinch60)
Your words set out the true meaning of life that if well spent will end...
June 7th, 2022 01:37 - Semi-Precious Summers (Neville)
Such an emotive verse Nev. The pathos of petalled togetherness when love...
June 6th, 2022 08:25 - Weatherscape (Morwenna)
Ah - a lovely read Morwenna - From title onwards this little gem...
June 5th, 2022 15:05 - Money Greed. (Goldfinch60)
Narcissism rules today and makes greed gather fortunes - when will they...
June 5th, 2022 04:14 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
Such a vital question asked in your final line of this descriptive...
June 5th, 2022 04:09 - Petite Mort #2 (Neville)
A fresh look at recalling small deaths in this well crafted verse mon ami....
June 5th, 2022 03:01 - Music of the Shore, St Andrews, Scotland (Morwenna)
A super write of Scotland\'s beautiful sea-water tunes with its likeness...
June 4th, 2022 17:04 - Fixing Focus (Orchidee)
Good red Orchi.
June 4th, 2022 06:52 - in the arms of a stranger (Dusk arising)
Oh what avid dejection this verse brings out when deceit becomes clear...
June 4th, 2022 06:50 - Why Does It Happen? (Goldfinch60)
Sa me with my nightie but gave up trying and sneak it on inside out .
June 4th, 2022 06:48 - IF YOU CAN’T TELL (Michael Edwards)
An intriguing look at the sphere\'s of linguistic double-speak - a super...
June 4th, 2022 05:10
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