Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Reed Song (Neville) Soulful and needy is this poemed appeal and so winsomely scripted I can...
  June 4th, 2022 04:46
• Where Recollections Reside (Neville) Your recollections so aptly poemed bring to mind the special attachment...
  June 2nd, 2022 05:15
• Sitting With Natures Realm. (Goldfinch60) Scenes wrapped up in the bark of an old oak are felt by sensitives and I...
  June 1st, 2022 04:57
• Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days (Neville) A dip into memory never read more attractive -- your pen conjures lessons...
  May 31st, 2022 07:20
• Be Positive In Life. (Goldfinch60) Much and the best is a positive attitude dear Andy - thank you for this...
  May 29th, 2022 01:55
• Embu (Neville) One I must have missed and lovely indeed to end my sleepless interlude ...
  May 28th, 2022 22:44
• Take Me Somewhere (Neville) Ha - a girl after my own heart was She of the open air garden suggestion...
  May 28th, 2022 22:15
• White Violets (Neville) What a telling word is \"pearlescent\" when on a green sweater that moved...
  May 28th, 2022 22:06
• I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville) Couldnt sleep so had a peep at a few of your back numbers I may have...
  May 28th, 2022 21:56
• so secret (Dusk arising) Being an incurable romantic I related to every nuance in this look at love...
  May 28th, 2022 01:32
• Naked Times. (Goldfinch60) Ah - - you have personalised bed here methinks my friend. - a...
  May 27th, 2022 03:09
• Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane (Neville) Am not larfin\' Nev. as this read brought back much that lessons us later...
  May 27th, 2022 03:04
• Another New Day. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful uplift that verse and the music - thank you for your fervent...
  May 26th, 2022 01:49
• disappointed (re-write) (Dusk arising) You pen this shameful condition in established religion so well here my...
  May 26th, 2022 01:44
• Slaves of Eros (Neville) Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our...
  May 26th, 2022 01:38
• LIMERICK 118 (Michael Edwards) Giggling again at your form of wit - - and loving the watercolour with its...
  May 25th, 2022 07:28
• Winner In Life. (Goldfinch60) Can relate utterly with these lovely words dear Andy - may you ever remain...
  May 25th, 2022 07:26
• Verses Green Refrain (Charles Edward York) A dream of a read Charles with an amazingly colourful image - - thanks...
  May 25th, 2022 07:24
• Trusting Thoughts (Orchidee) A lovely form of grateful prayer and thank you for posting it Orchi.
  May 25th, 2022 07:21
• Mother Nature #1 (Saxon Crow) Living with nature is vital as this food-for-thought poem describes Sax - ...
  May 25th, 2022 06:42
• all in a dream (Dusk arising) Well after reading this piece of classical prose I shall look forward to...
  May 24th, 2022 13:43
• Chugging Along (Rozina) Was there with you Rozina on that chugging journey which is rhymed in free...
  May 24th, 2022 04:12
• Original Thinking? (Saxon Crow) Originality of thought has always been met with outright objection to the...
  May 24th, 2022 04:01
• Remember Me She Said (Neville) May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one...
  May 21st, 2022 03:52
• Together Forever More. (Goldfinch60) May your every day together be filled with such happiness dear Andy.
  May 21st, 2022 02:28
• Euphoria #1 (Saxon Crow) What a wonderful feel to this read Sax - - I am with you up there flying...
  May 20th, 2022 05:08
• A DARKSOME PLACE (Michael Edwards) A haunt of a write Mike and so realistic it sent shivers to stay long...
  May 20th, 2022 03:04
• Every Now and Then Maybe (Neville) That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I ...
  May 20th, 2022 01:38
• Morning To Night. (Goldfinch60) Nature is ever a sheer delight - Such a wonderful symphony birds give us...
  May 8th, 2022 04:56
• Shepherd Scene (Orchidee) Good write on what being a sheep can mean dear Orchi.
  May 8th, 2022 04:53
• Miss. Lock Memories (Neville) First love is always one we remember and your look-back dazzles with what...
  May 7th, 2022 21:41
• Eighth Wonder (Nicholas Browning) Your decision to leave this friendly site and start as an author is...
  May 7th, 2022 03:15
• All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat (Neville) A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his...
  May 6th, 2022 03:12
• Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60) Your gratitude for all things natural is a pleasure to read dear Andy -...
  May 5th, 2022 16:39
• The Spring Flowers (Christina8) You highlight my favourite blooms too at this time of year and spring...
  May 5th, 2022 16:33
• The Birdhouse (Daniel McDonagh) Ah Daniel - Such an appeal in this gentle lament - - - this tale of a...
  May 5th, 2022 07:54
• Dun a Runna (Neville) Guess this is why - runnin\' and not carin\' where or whom he hit for...
  May 5th, 2022 03:47
• Untitled - LIX (SureshG) Yes so deep-rooted the chasms between - a warning in each division of...
  May 4th, 2022 15:32
• No Looking Back Again (Neville) The pathos of losing what way back was hoped for of \"old here and...
  May 4th, 2022 04:34
• Music Is My Life Once More. (Goldfinch60) Music is there for us all and in all sorts of guises should we but find t...
  May 3rd, 2022 15:39
• Untitled - LVIII (SureshG) Fine wisdom to keep in mind Suresh - wind exposes objects to all sorts...
  May 3rd, 2022 08:43
• ODDITIES (3 4 & 5) (Michael Edwards) Still chuckling at the middle one - thanks for sharing oddities Mike and...
  May 3rd, 2022 01:27
• Memory palace (Spilleronsheet) Saw the tragedy of Alzheimer more clearly after reading this clever...
  May 2nd, 2022 05:40
• Fish Supper (Neville) This little gem reminds me most of the times spent bass-fishing from...
  May 2nd, 2022 04:41
• Skylark (Saxon Crow) Oh how very sad Sax - skylarks have long gone from walks I take on the...
  May 1st, 2022 10:38
• Waiting (Spilleronsheet) Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read...
  May 1st, 2022 10:30
• Upon Reflections Shattered (Neville) Mirrors are truly attractive to poets world-over - you aptly show on...
  May 1st, 2022 04:53
• Like Some Old Discarded Stocking (Neville) Ha ha -- - you got me there at the finish with that singularly clever...
  April 30th, 2022 08:16
• Memories (Jane Walker) Sorry to hear of your loss Jane but what a gem of a tribute to memories...
  April 29th, 2022 14:42
• grazed knees (Dusk arising) Secret low-goings under the bridge - a great way to remember passed...
  April 29th, 2022 09:47
• New Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60) So good to hear happiness versed so poetically honest - am sending the...
  April 29th, 2022 04:16
• Sleep?! (Saxon Crow) I can relate to each line Sax -- the final few words say it all for me...
  April 29th, 2022 04:14
• Platinum Peace (Orchidee) A fine tribute to a great Lady\'s amazing record of service as Queen for...
  April 29th, 2022 03:15
• Flights Of Fancy (Rozina) A gem of a bird-verse Rozina which has birthed my first smile of the day ...
  April 29th, 2022 03:12
• Into The Universe (Bella Shepard) Yes dear Bella when we seek silence and breathe night\'s peace we learn...
  April 28th, 2022 15:33
• Taking in the Seeds come Harvest (Neville) Seeing the intake clearly as I rejoice in your gift for intrigue so...
  April 28th, 2022 07:01
• Dust Devil (Jerry Reynolds) You pen the scene with finesse as love of some sort comes out of the dust ...
  April 27th, 2022 11:50
• The Caterpillar Slaughter (Saxon Crow) The fun poem brings food for thought about insecticides etc. - nature...
  April 27th, 2022 03:53
• ODDITIES (1) (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - well I must remember to put that question to the next penguin I...
  April 27th, 2022 01:37
• Children\'s Moments. (Goldfinch60) Always a pleasure to read your chosen subjects dear Andy and today your...
  April 27th, 2022 01:35
• FIRES UNLIT (Michael Edwards) Love the intriguing title amid superior rhyming Mike - a wise conclusion...
  April 26th, 2022 15:13
• Keep And Kept (Orchidee) A powerful verse and thank you for sharing it Orchi.
  April 26th, 2022 14:23
• Some things are Just Not Right (Neville) That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much...
  April 26th, 2022 07:21
• what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising) Beautifully sad eight liner dear friend - and a sure verse for my...
  April 26th, 2022 07:17
• What Memory? (Goldfinch60) I know what you mean my friend - it seems universal in this too busy world...
  April 26th, 2022 02:34
• as they all went forward – I looked back (Rocky Lagou) Dreams have sometimes to take second place depending on changes in...
  April 25th, 2022 14:00
• Mom (Christina8) Reading this heart-touching message brought me near tears dear Christina -...
  April 25th, 2022 08:23
• Wind Dancer .. a Haiku (Neville) To see on a clear day those dancing sky-surfers fills poetic hearts with ...
  April 25th, 2022 04:20
• Good Life Senryu. (Goldfinch60) So good to take in your positive outlook on life again Andy and thank you...
  April 24th, 2022 16:50
• Food for Thought (Saxon Crow) Brilliant - - will have that wise feast at any time alongside with you...
  April 24th, 2022 16:48
• this special springtime (Dusk arising) Your selection of springtime treasures in hedgerow and lane is stunningly...
  April 24th, 2022 16:04
• Inside Her Pants #2 (Neville) What a picture of sheer delight to intrigue my eyes on returning to this...
  April 24th, 2022 15:57
• Just for us Lemons (Neville) Tart is the sour lover who rejects gentle sweetness - -- hope she reads...
  April 15th, 2022 04:19
• Spare a Moment for These Words (Neville) Am never afraid to spare more than a moment for your extraordinary work...
  April 14th, 2022 07:00
• principles (Dusk arising) You got them nailed Dusk - and I second your point.
  April 13th, 2022 15:29
• Before it Hurts Too Much to See (Neville) Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at...
  April 13th, 2022 08:00
• Gooder than Good Even (Neville) Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds...
  April 12th, 2022 03:15
• Gethsemane Gathering (Orchidee) Thanks Orchi for an apt reminder of this special time of the year to many...
  April 12th, 2022 02:42
• raft of reeds (Dusk arising) The opening lines say it all to me Dusk - - - - I relate to that never...
  April 12th, 2022 02:40
• Endless (Saxon Crow) Great read of inner-sight when holding a pebble - -- you have such a good...
  April 12th, 2022 02:32
• The Maze. (Chris Duffy) Life can appear like that maze to some on the edge of ending it all - -...
  April 12th, 2022 01:02
• Weird Family (Chris Duffy) Love your humour and rhyming ability in this chuckle-a-minute tale of a...
  April 12th, 2022 00:54
• Strange Friend. (Goldfinch60) Such wise words Andy - friends are but strangers we have met and now know....
  April 12th, 2022 00:40
• Even Sadder than That Even (Neville) The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words...
  April 11th, 2022 10:44
• Shining Love. (Goldfinch60) Love shines with many faces and you have found again a wonderful joy of...
  April 11th, 2022 01:38
• now ready to depart (Dusk arising) Hesitation lifting her veil is such a sheer dream of a line to read aloud...
  April 10th, 2022 11:35
• Free (Draven) Oh Draven - endings are always that bit sad - I know how it feels to sit...
  April 10th, 2022 09:03
• Can\'t Sit Still! (Christina8) A h - wishing you the bestest of times on your exciting trip dear...
  April 10th, 2022 09:00
• LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105 (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - you crease me up with every line of these clever limericks - - I...
  April 10th, 2022 06:57
• The Jolly Little Cafe Where A Chestnut Tree Once Grew (Monologue) (Alan .S. Jeeves) A wonderful piece of rhymed tale in this monologue Alan and so good to see...
  April 10th, 2022 06:27
• Why (Neville) The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your...
  April 10th, 2022 03:47
• Zen Tree (Neville) Thank you dear N. for showing by poetic talent how much power emptiness...
  March 28th, 2022 02:44
• ONCE (Michael Edwards) Times change and city gents retired to let in the \"young thrusters\" as...
  March 28th, 2022 01:39
• Little Birdie (Bella Shepard) A symphony of bird-song and penned so sweetly I felt I was there with you...
  March 27th, 2022 10:38
• On the Cusp of a Sneeze .. (Neville) Musing on what once was brings a bouquet of intimate memories and so well...
  March 27th, 2022 05:08
• Never Going Nowhere Maybe (Neville) Once love is exchanged no matter the time a couple remembers the highs of...
  March 26th, 2022 08:01
• War Veterans (Doggerel Dave) War\'s devastation penned with linguistic excellence - - a most...
  March 26th, 2022 03:41
• i will comfort you (Dusk arising) So utterly moving and what more can a friend offer than help to another...
  March 25th, 2022 07:13
• Back Together. (Goldfinch60) What a celebration when you two can meet up again - a most romantic...
  March 24th, 2022 15:26
• Tick Tock Bang (Jerry Reynolds) You penned the present chaos so well in this short verse Jerry and the...
  March 24th, 2022 13:32