Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Impossibly useless: improbable delight (Morwenna)
You poem the language of love\'s need for laughter when words of hurt...
June 9th, 2022 14:39 - Vladimir’s Full Metal Jacket (Neville)
Metal jacket or not those fragments tell their own sorry story - --- ...
June 9th, 2022 07:59 - Four Together. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful situation of happiness to have found to keep on loving each...
June 9th, 2022 02:33 - Detour of His Heart (MendedFences27)
An emotive read Phil - - Signs can give a smidgeon of truth for a heart to...
June 9th, 2022 01:32 - Ride the Waves? (Draven)
An apt comparison for life\'s upheavals is the force of tide and power of...
June 8th, 2022 16:09 - This tangled life (Morwenna)
Ah - loud applause for your tribute to otherness Morwenna - I too sing to...
June 8th, 2022 06:16 - Over and Out (Neville)
Sad but true incompatibility is hard to deal with in a relationship where...
June 8th, 2022 04:00 - HER LAST RESTING PLACE (Michael Edwards)
A few perfectly set lines of quiet scene to touch readers\' hearts Mike...
June 8th, 2022 02:39 - Reflections (MendedFences27)
Wow what a story and you pen it with such intrigue Phil - I was entranced...
June 7th, 2022 16:57 - It’s All in The Seeing (Neville)
Sight is unique and understanding is even more so -- - - many more side...
June 7th, 2022 03:24 - Came The Days. (Goldfinch60)
Your words set out the true meaning of life that if well spent will end...
June 7th, 2022 01:37 - Semi-Precious Summers (Neville)
Such an emotive verse Nev. The pathos of petalled togetherness when love...
June 6th, 2022 08:25 - Weatherscape (Morwenna)
Ah - a lovely read Morwenna - From title onwards this little gem...
June 5th, 2022 15:05 - Money Greed. (Goldfinch60)
Narcissism rules today and makes greed gather fortunes - when will they...
June 5th, 2022 04:14 - Grief for a probable future (Morwenna)
Such a vital question asked in your final line of this descriptive...
June 5th, 2022 04:09 - Petite Mort #2 (Neville)
A fresh look at recalling small deaths in this well crafted verse mon ami....
June 5th, 2022 03:01 - Music of the Shore, St Andrews, Scotland (Morwenna)
A super write of Scotland\'s beautiful sea-water tunes with its likeness...
June 4th, 2022 17:04 - Fixing Focus (Orchidee)
Good red Orchi.
June 4th, 2022 06:52 - in the arms of a stranger (Dusk arising)
Oh what avid dejection this verse brings out when deceit becomes clear...
June 4th, 2022 06:50 - Why Does It Happen? (Goldfinch60)
Sa me with my nightie but gave up trying and sneak it on inside out .
June 4th, 2022 06:48 - IF YOU CAN’T TELL (Michael Edwards)
An intriguing look at the sphere\'s of linguistic double-speak - a super...
June 4th, 2022 05:10 - Reed Song (Neville)
Soulful and needy is this poemed appeal and so winsomely scripted I can...
June 4th, 2022 04:46 - Where Recollections Reside (Neville)
Your recollections so aptly poemed bring to mind the special attachment...
June 2nd, 2022 05:15 - Sitting With Natures Realm. (Goldfinch60)
Scenes wrapped up in the bark of an old oak are felt by sensitives and I...
June 1st, 2022 04:57 - Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days (Neville)
A dip into memory never read more attractive -- your pen conjures lessons...
May 31st, 2022 07:20 - Be Positive In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Much and the best is a positive attitude dear Andy - thank you for this...
May 29th, 2022 01:55 - Embu (Neville)
One I must have missed and lovely indeed to end my sleepless interlude
...
May 28th, 2022 22:44 - Take Me Somewhere (Neville)
Ha - a girl after my own heart was She of the open air garden suggestion...
May 28th, 2022 22:15 - White Violets (Neville)
What a telling word is \"pearlescent\" when on a green sweater that moved...
May 28th, 2022 22:06 - I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville)
Couldnt sleep so had a peep at a few of your back numbers I may have...
May 28th, 2022 21:56 - Marathon of Poetry (MendedFences27)
Never a truer set of words to describe the painful effort of penning a...
May 28th, 2022 21:40 - so secret (Dusk arising)
Being an incurable romantic I related to every nuance in this look at love...
May 28th, 2022 01:32 - Naked Times. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - - you have personalised bed here methinks my friend. - a...
May 27th, 2022 03:09 - Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane (Neville)
Am not larfin\' Nev. as this read brought back much that lessons us later...
May 27th, 2022 03:04 - Another New Day. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful uplift that verse and the music - thank you for your fervent...
May 26th, 2022 01:49 - disappointed (re-write) (Dusk arising)
You pen this shameful condition in established religion so well here my...
May 26th, 2022 01:44 - Slaves of Eros (Neville)
Yup - that Eros has been a tough master and you pen his hold over our...
May 26th, 2022 01:38 - LIMERICK 118 (Michael Edwards)
Giggling again at your form of wit - - and loving the watercolour with its...
May 25th, 2022 07:28 - Winner In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Can relate utterly with these lovely words dear Andy - may you ever remain...
May 25th, 2022 07:26 - Verses Green Refrain (Charles Edward York)
A dream of a read Charles with an amazingly colourful image - - thanks...
May 25th, 2022 07:24 - Trusting Thoughts (Orchidee)
A lovely form of grateful prayer and thank you for posting it Orchi.
May 25th, 2022 07:21 - Mother Nature #1 (Saxon Crow)
Living with nature is vital as this food-for-thought poem describes Sax - ...
May 25th, 2022 06:42 - My Heart\'s on Fire (MendedFences27)
At a guess it would seem the writer had fallen in love with a movie queen...
May 25th, 2022 01:29 - all in a dream (Dusk arising)
Well after reading this piece of classical prose I shall look forward to...
May 24th, 2022 13:43 - Chugging Along (Rozina)
Was there with you Rozina on that chugging journey which is rhymed in free...
May 24th, 2022 04:12 - Original Thinking? (Saxon Crow)
Originality of thought has always been met with outright objection to the...
May 24th, 2022 04:01 - Remember Me She Said (Neville)
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one...
May 21st, 2022 03:52 - Together Forever More. (Goldfinch60)
May your every day together be filled with such happiness dear Andy.
May 21st, 2022 02:28 - Euphoria #1 (Saxon Crow)
What a wonderful feel to this read Sax - - I am with you up there flying...
May 20th, 2022 05:08 - A DARKSOME PLACE (Michael Edwards)
A haunt of a write Mike and so realistic it sent shivers to stay long...
May 20th, 2022 03:04 - Every Now and Then Maybe (Neville)
That sip once taken makes lovely memories that last a lifetime - - I ...
May 20th, 2022 01:38 - Morning To Night. (Goldfinch60)
Nature is ever a sheer delight - Such a wonderful symphony birds give us...
May 8th, 2022 04:56 - Shepherd Scene (Orchidee)
Good write on what being a sheep can mean dear Orchi.
May 8th, 2022 04:53 - Miss. Lock Memories (Neville)
First love is always one we remember and your look-back dazzles with what...
May 7th, 2022 21:41 - My Spinning Mind (MendedFences27)
A haunting plea for a chance at life - and so poetically expressed that...
May 7th, 2022 17:48 - Eighth Wonder (Nicholas Browning)
Your decision to leave this friendly site and start as an author is...
May 7th, 2022 03:15 - All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat (Neville)
A haunt of a read which describes so aptly a runaway guy blind to his...
May 6th, 2022 03:12 - Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Your gratitude for all things natural is a pleasure to read dear Andy
-...
May 5th, 2022 16:39 - The Spring Flowers (Christina8)
You highlight my favourite blooms too at this time of year and spring...
May 5th, 2022 16:33 - The Birdhouse (Daniel McDonagh)
Ah Daniel - Such an appeal in this gentle lament - - - this tale of a...
May 5th, 2022 07:54 - Dun a Runna (Neville)
Guess this is why - runnin\' and not carin\' where or whom he hit for...
May 5th, 2022 03:47 - Untitled - LIX (SureshG)
Yes so deep-rooted the chasms between - a warning in each division of...
May 4th, 2022 15:32 - No Looking Back Again (Neville)
The pathos of losing what way back was hoped for of \"old here and...
May 4th, 2022 04:34 - Music Is My Life Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Music is there for us all and in all sorts of guises should we but find t...
May 3rd, 2022 15:39 - Untitled - LVIII (SureshG)
Fine wisdom to keep in mind Suresh - wind exposes objects to all sorts...
May 3rd, 2022 08:43 - ODDITIES (3 4 & 5) (Michael Edwards)
Still chuckling at the middle one - thanks for sharing oddities Mike and...
May 3rd, 2022 01:27 - Memory palace (Spilleronsheet)
Saw the tragedy of Alzheimer more clearly after reading this clever...
May 2nd, 2022 05:40 - Fish Supper (Neville)
This little gem reminds me most of the times spent bass-fishing from...
May 2nd, 2022 04:41 - Skylark (Saxon Crow)
Oh how very sad Sax - skylarks have long gone from walks I take on the...
May 1st, 2022 10:38 - Waiting (Spilleronsheet)
Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read...
May 1st, 2022 10:30 - Upon Reflections Shattered (Neville)
Mirrors are truly attractive to poets world-over - you aptly show on...
May 1st, 2022 04:53 - Like Some Old Discarded Stocking (Neville)
Ha ha -- - you got me there at the finish with that singularly clever...
April 30th, 2022 08:16 - Memories (Jane Walker)
Sorry to hear of your loss Jane but what a gem of a tribute to memories...
April 29th, 2022 14:42 - grazed knees (Dusk arising)
Secret low-goings under the bridge - a great way to remember passed...
April 29th, 2022 09:47 - New Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60)
So good to hear happiness versed so poetically honest - am sending the...
April 29th, 2022 04:16 - Sleep?! (Saxon Crow)
I can relate to each line Sax -- the final few words say it all for me...
April 29th, 2022 04:14 - Platinum Peace (Orchidee)
A fine tribute to a great Lady\'s amazing record of service as Queen for...
April 29th, 2022 03:15 - Flights Of Fancy (Rozina)
A gem of a bird-verse Rozina which has birthed my first smile of the day ...
April 29th, 2022 03:12 - Into The Universe (Bella Shepard)
Yes dear Bella when we seek silence and breathe night\'s peace we learn...
April 28th, 2022 15:33 - Taking in the Seeds come Harvest (Neville)
Seeing the intake clearly as I rejoice in your gift for intrigue so...
April 28th, 2022 07:01 - Dust Devil (Jerry Reynolds)
You pen the scene with finesse as love of some sort comes out of the dust ...
April 27th, 2022 11:50 - The Caterpillar Slaughter (Saxon Crow)
The fun poem brings food for thought about insecticides etc. - nature...
April 27th, 2022 03:53 - ODDITIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - well I must remember to put that question to the next penguin I...
April 27th, 2022 01:37 - Children\'s Moments. (Goldfinch60)
Always a pleasure to read your chosen subjects dear Andy and today your...
April 27th, 2022 01:35 - FIRES UNLIT (Michael Edwards)
Love the intriguing title amid superior rhyming Mike - a wise conclusion...
April 26th, 2022 15:13 - Keep And Kept (Orchidee)
A powerful verse and thank you for sharing it Orchi.
April 26th, 2022 14:23 - Some things are Just Not Right (Neville)
That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much...
April 26th, 2022 07:21 - what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising)
Beautifully sad eight liner dear friend - and a sure verse for my...
April 26th, 2022 07:17 - What Memory? (Goldfinch60)
I know what you mean my friend - it seems universal in this too busy world...
April 26th, 2022 02:34 - as they all went forward – I looked back (Rocky Lagou)
Dreams have sometimes to take second place depending on changes in...
April 25th, 2022 14:00 - Mom (Christina8)
Reading this heart-touching message brought me near tears dear Christina -...
April 25th, 2022 08:23 - Wind Dancer .. a Haiku (Neville)
To see on a clear day those dancing sky-surfers fills poetic hearts with ...
April 25th, 2022 04:20 - Good Life Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
So good to take in your positive outlook on life again Andy and thank you...
April 24th, 2022 16:50 - Food for Thought (Saxon Crow)
Brilliant - - will have that wise feast at any time alongside with you...
April 24th, 2022 16:48 - this special springtime (Dusk arising)
Your selection of springtime treasures in hedgerow and lane is stunningly...
April 24th, 2022 16:04 - Inside Her Pants #2 (Neville)
What a picture of sheer delight to intrigue my eyes on returning to this...
April 24th, 2022 15:57 - Just for us Lemons (Neville)
Tart is the sour lover who rejects gentle sweetness - -- hope she reads...
April 15th, 2022 04:19 - Spare a Moment for These Words (Neville)
Am never afraid to spare more than a moment for your extraordinary work...
April 14th, 2022 07:00 - principles (Dusk arising)
You got them nailed Dusk - and I second your point.
April 13th, 2022 15:29 - Before it Hurts Too Much to See (Neville)
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at...
April 13th, 2022 08:00
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