Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• So Very Strange. (Goldfinch60) Agree with Neville that love should be a shared thing and when it is then...
  October 15th, 2022 10:28
• Why Not Just Call It a Day (Neville) The she in this double would know where she stood right enough by these...
  October 13th, 2022 05:30
• Prayers In Perils (Orchidee) Fine write Orchi.
  October 12th, 2022 03:00
• singularity (Arqios) Oh I agree Rik - poetry means travel through word-mountains to pen each...
  October 12th, 2022 02:58
• Siblings (Chris Duffy) A thrill of a read is your well penned account of what family is all about...
  October 12th, 2022 02:43
• Forever Memories. (Goldfinch60) Memories both good and troublesome I am sure last for as long as we do my...
  October 11th, 2022 12:40
• to be agreed (Arqios) Ah - -- good and wise thinking and aptly imaged here Rik - -- and I...
  October 11th, 2022 08:39
• A Few More Things Remembered (Neville) Your usage of word is simply stunning in this romantic memory of the way...
  October 11th, 2022 05:55
• Not Just Any Old Day at the Office (Neville) Nothing but experience could pen words that strike home so vividly this ...
  October 10th, 2022 04:24
• Untitled - LXIII (SureshG) Oh how true are your words Suresh -- must keep this one for reference -...
  October 9th, 2022 12:25
• Burden Lifted? (Christina8) You pen the burden some carers carry so well here Christina - the time...
  October 8th, 2022 10:36
• That Point Where We Each Begin (Neville) Strange that time when two never know where the \"me\" ends and the\"you\"...
  October 8th, 2022 09:00
• What Didn’t We Find in the Attic (Neville) What fun to find even half of these long-ago things in an attic - - your...
  October 7th, 2022 09:36
• Paper Boat (Arqios) A refreshing daily float down life\'s running stream seems ideal for ...
  October 7th, 2022 04:46
• Off On Vacation! (Bella Shepard) Wishing you memorable moments in your trip through the eastern districts ...
  October 6th, 2022 14:16
• I\'ll walk with you (Poetic Dan) A caring gift for your friend who i am sure will value the words and the...
  October 6th, 2022 10:33
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) Many happy returns of this your special day dear Andy - - am so pleased...
  October 6th, 2022 04:59
• Excuse Me I Love You She Said (Neville) What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with...
  October 5th, 2022 11:25
• take two (Arqios) Whose \"hope\" would not be uplifted again to look forward to new...
  October 5th, 2022 01:40
• With Nothing More to Lose (Neville) A linguistic picture of heart-touching moments when tears tell more than...
  October 4th, 2022 09:27
• Oh Please! (Doggerel Dave) Hope some of those \'pollies\' will read this lament and maybe through you...
  October 3rd, 2022 13:09
• The True Value of Dreaming (Neville) Fraught with naughty wishes be my dreams mon ami - - -- but methinks...
  October 3rd, 2022 07:52
• Inconsequential Wonderings (Neville) First rate penning again mon ami and I think not inconsequential these...
  October 2nd, 2022 08:04
• Secret Lady (Paul Bell) A gem of penned lament for lost lady of beauty - great piece of...
  October 2nd, 2022 05:58
• Untitled - LXII (SureshG) A needed warning on anger which indeed can and does devour good virtues....
  October 1st, 2022 15:11
• What! No Strawberries! (Goldfinch60) A plummy Eton Mess sounds good - - am so glad you found it tasteful...
  October 1st, 2022 15:03
• Wholesome Healing (Orchidee) The healing power is a gift of great value - thanking you for the needed...
  October 1st, 2022 04:14
• A Different Man (MendedFences27) This read filled my heart with the tragedy of love lost when parted by...
  September 30th, 2022 12:20
• Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow (Neville) Penned expertly those days long ago where naught can alter love once so...
  September 30th, 2022 10:25
• What Abuse? (Goldfinch60) My complete agreement Andy with your verse on today\'s view of Abuse - -...
  September 28th, 2022 06:51
• Serious Questions (Doggerel Dave) That\'s happened tp me at least twice Dave - - - I was refused a...
  September 28th, 2022 06:39
• GOODBYE (Dr. Soma) An inspiring read dear Soma. - Good deeds certainly do remain forever...
  September 28th, 2022 04:43
• A Certain Kind of Highness (Neville) Ah - - another gem to lift readers hearts Nev. -- - From the title alone...
  September 28th, 2022 04:25
• That Creation. (Goldfinch60) Worth waking up for though Andy - finished ice cream takes no note of
  September 25th, 2022 04:35
• Unconditional Love (Dr. Soma) A very relatable look at true love - - thanks for sharing it with such...
  September 25th, 2022 04:32
• The True Weight of a Man’s Soul (Neville) Simply brilliant - - must be one of your very best - - am putting this...
  September 24th, 2022 03:29
• days of the living dead (Arqios) Heaviness has to be worded at some time my friend and your poetic honesty...
  September 23rd, 2022 15:42
• Star (Charles Edward York) Ah such a readable tribute to our nightly performers of light and mystery...
  September 23rd, 2022 06:21
• While Drowning off Padliegh Hill (Neville) Flashbacks can shock even after long passage of time - - insignificance...
  September 23rd, 2022 04:28
• My Father’s Last Wish (Dr. Soma) A heart-wrenching read of parental guidance which although was sadly lost...
  September 22nd, 2022 15:37
• Fishermen\'s Friends The Musical. (Goldfinch60) Love all the numbers and so pleased you both enjoyed the show - --...
  September 22nd, 2022 15:29
• Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You (Neville) Ah - your fans will love this piece of fancy my friend. A tempting invite...
  September 22nd, 2022 13:03
• hands off that snooze button! (Arqios) Inspiringly good and alive with empowerment these fine linguistic invites....
  September 22nd, 2022 07:45
• Teach Me (Bella Shepard) You framed the very essence of growth toward real living dear Bella - this...
  September 20th, 2022 15:16
• Cygnets At Rest, (Goldfinch60) A wonderful sight to behold - swans are such a gift to our need for nature...
  September 20th, 2022 05:25
• Brahn Boots. (Doggerel Dave) Ha - am lightening up as I type and smile at that number Dave - brings...
  September 19th, 2022 15:42
• queen (Dusk arising) Yes dear Dusk - Goodbye but not ever forgotten our dear lady Queen - ...
  September 19th, 2022 15:26
• A Wise Person. (Goldfinch60) You describe well the need for wise words today Andy - - thank you for...
  September 18th, 2022 03:11
• Dislocation (Morwenna) A captivating snippet of your happy revisit to a continent of exotic...
  September 14th, 2022 17:21
• Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again (Neville) Oh Nev. -the depth of this verse really hits home in that hearts who...
  September 10th, 2022 03:19
• The Sea Of Eternity. (Goldfinch60) You pen well the example such a diligent Queen who met her task of...
  September 9th, 2022 06:33
• A SWEET POISON (Raymond shawa) Sweet poison indeed is love and your verse its preciousness with ease --...
  September 9th, 2022 04:33
• THE FOREVER BEST FRIEND (Raymond shawa) Stunningly inventive you capture the darts of the ego so well Raymond. Am...
  September 9th, 2022 04:30
• Gone! (Dusk arising) I truly second your thoughts on what a fine example of dignity and...
  September 9th, 2022 03:19
• Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming (Neville) Met but never forgotten I guess is that unassuming small chap - -- ...
  September 9th, 2022 03:15
• 100 Years Strong (Bella Shepard) Do please pass on my Birthday Congratulations to Ed a wonderful ...
  September 8th, 2022 15:33
• Within cobweb confines ! (Justa_Geezer) The valour of medieval chase to capture a villain and catch a fine Lady is...
  September 8th, 2022 04:38
• Blackbird in Autumn (Saxon Crow) Love this to bits Sax -- must read it again in my faves for its flowing...
  September 8th, 2022 04:33
• Creaturely Celebration (Orchidee) Very inspiring and thanks for sharing such positive praise for truth which...
  September 7th, 2022 15:46
• Hangout (Dr. Soma) I really enjoyed the flow of this rollicking invitation to have happy...
  September 7th, 2022 13:52
• this old upturned boat (Dusk arising) I am so inspired by your use of personification and the invitation seems...
  September 7th, 2022 13:10
• Past And Future. (Goldfinch60) Such an inspiring read and one which I can relate to myself - walking...
  September 7th, 2022 02:36
• Willows Table (Jerry Reynolds) Perfectly balanced with image and three line conception Jerry --- so...
  September 6th, 2022 09:56
• Nature Enlivening. (Goldfinch60) You have captured my favourite season with your tribute to Nature\'s...
  September 6th, 2022 08:45
• Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister (Neville) When so politely asked I wonder just who would step forward for just a...
  September 6th, 2022 08:39
• starlight (Dusk arising) That prayer to starlight did it for me Dusk - - holding off the future by...
  September 6th, 2022 08:22
• We Met On A Crossing. (Goldfinch60) P.S. - - forgot to say how much I love the number -- -- Autumn Leaves...
  September 6th, 2022 02:56
• We Met On A Crossing. (Goldfinch60) Am so glad I caught this one dear Andy - - I love the metaphor and the...
  September 6th, 2022 02:50
• Burning Roses (MendedFences27) Oh poor Tom and poor Jack of course - what a sad end to a woman\'s...
  September 3rd, 2022 09:50
• On Being Too Gentle (Neville) Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am...
  September 3rd, 2022 02:51
• Family Meeting. (Goldfinch60) Wishing the special meetings every success and filled with memorable ...
  September 3rd, 2022 02:37
• Experience. (Goldfinch60) Your attitude to each day is so inspiring dear Andy --- being grateful...
  September 2nd, 2022 15:16
• The Words We Spoke (MendedFences27) A wise and tender look at what happens to love over years -- those final...
  September 2nd, 2022 13:05
• Potage du Femme (Neville) Tis my kina broth this slice after slice of salty potage with delectable...
  September 2nd, 2022 08:57
• Somewhere Between Lovers (Neville) Yes the result of insatiable lust ends often in heart-wrenching sadness...
  September 1st, 2022 06:07
• Love So Deep (MendedFences27) I could hardly breathe as the tragedy struck in this tale of love and loss...
  September 1st, 2022 01:32
• The Steel Fortress (Bella Shepard) You pen so well the shock of bullets fired from inside a steel-built...
  August 31st, 2022 15:52
• Salvation Surety (Orchidee) A comforting read dear Orchi and thank you for sharing it.
  August 31st, 2022 03:47
• Looking Forward to Later (Neville) The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture\'s...
  August 31st, 2022 03:46
• Innocence. (Goldfinch60) Good and apt question your last line of delightful poetry raised Andy - -...
  August 31st, 2022 02:30
• A Few Moments After (Neville) Another warm glimpse into an intimate moment giving your poet\'s view of ...
  August 30th, 2022 03:13
• Touch the non-existence (SureshG) The journey you so eloquently describe is inevitable and all must...
  August 30th, 2022 01:09
• Yearlong (MendedFences27) The journey back to our lover can be hazardly long and you pen the...
  August 28th, 2022 18:15
• Just a Few Recollections (Neville) Old crumpled photos can bring instantly back those golden days when love...
  August 28th, 2022 11:12
• Take Two Poles Josie (Neville) Thoughts of such unique perception are treasured as gems when we lose all...
  August 27th, 2022 04:50
• Between Pauses (Neville) Strength builds between pauses and that\'s what is needed when hearts skip...
  August 26th, 2022 06:19
• Three Things. (Goldfinch60) You verse life\'s journey so well with time showing us what we cannot...
  August 26th, 2022 02:51
• September (Dusk arising) These words feed the soul with tangible emotion as September draws near ...
  August 26th, 2022 02:45
• The Making of Them Both Maybe (Neville) Ah - the lift laughter gives to any relationship and in this case could...
  August 25th, 2022 16:45
• with you (Arqios) Applied with poetic imagery to sigh for is this description of how distant...
  August 25th, 2022 04:21
• Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60) Days of play create many memories and thank you for reminding us that...
  August 24th, 2022 05:03
• With Only Five Leaves Left (Neville) The fate of some folk lies in their lifestyles but you pen Drakes sad case...
  August 24th, 2022 04:23
• Anticipating Angels (Neville) Nothing like a milligram or two of anticipation my friend. You paint such...
  August 21st, 2022 04:22
• Trapped In A Telephone. (Goldfinch60) I have to laugh when I see someone talking it seems to themselves - we...
  August 21st, 2022 03:35
• Winter Loneliness (MendedFences27) A wonderful use of metaphor Phil - - your third stanza captures the...
  August 20th, 2022 02:51
• perceiving chapters (Dusk arising) A question worth asking fills your last lines Dusk in this heart-tugging...
  August 19th, 2022 04:31
• Progressing Prosperously (Orchidee) An appeal in each psalm - - good write my friend.
  August 19th, 2022 02:22
• Changes In Time. (Goldfinch60) A tear in my eye after reading your words - - so true Andy that time...
  August 19th, 2022 02:20
• Why Not Just Throw Away The Key (Neville) Indeed a femme fatale can play many a perverted game methinks Nev and it ...
  August 18th, 2022 07:49
• Come Let us Dance Some More (Neville) Yes despite acid rain let the dancing continue - cleverly writ the ...
  August 17th, 2022 14:22