Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Narcissistically Speaking (Neville) So skillful your words Nev on the unassailable nature of the true...
  November 18th, 2021 05:26
• Just Another Way Out (Neville) The pity when people come to such broken ends is captured with tender...
  November 17th, 2021 03:39
• DANCING IN THE BREEZE (Andy Hunter) A beautiful and moving tribute to two who found true love Andy - - thank...
  November 16th, 2021 16:53
• spelling (Dusk arising) Taken five minutes to decipher these wordlings but they sure left me...
  November 16th, 2021 11:08
• Lawnsome (Neville) I like faking the haiku too Nev. - never could scribble the real thing me...
  November 16th, 2021 10:51
• Dove In A Cathedral (Garth Rakumakoe) A most tender and poetically beautiful confession of love that surely no...
  November 16th, 2021 08:20
• spelling (Dusk arising) Ha ha ha - and then more - - yu nailed that bad spellin lark Dusky - -- ...
  November 16th, 2021 08:17
• Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville) Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even...
  November 16th, 2021 05:58
• Singing With Angels. (Goldfinch60) Very moving words and with such music as Moonlight Serenade no wonder the...
  November 14th, 2021 04:09
• Time Traveler. (Doggerel Dave) Longer the better for me too Dave - so glad you saw lots while you were...
  November 13th, 2021 08:55
• Those years (Dusk arising) Poignant and oh so beautiful dear Dusk - your pen captures the vulnerable...
  November 13th, 2021 05:04
• Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville) Yes amigo behind a mask anything goes - - or so they say - -- winks galore...
  November 13th, 2021 04:52
• unplug (Angela-a) Am so glad I caught this example of fine poetic merit for which I send...
  November 13th, 2021 03:17
• True Love. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful tune with words like True Love will move minds and hearts of...
  November 13th, 2021 03:08
• The Less I Understand (A.H. Browning) You capture the feeling all preemies must have when thinking of days when...
  November 12th, 2021 16:55
• Sea Story (Orchidee) Enjoyed this hymn-poem very much Orchi - thank you for sharing it.
  November 12th, 2021 13:03
• Today Makes Daddy Proud (Garth Rakumakoe) Oh how I agree that any tomorrows ought to be She - - - your verse well...
  November 12th, 2021 10:07
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards) Ah - I love your dibbles and dabbles my friend -- thank you for my first...
  November 12th, 2021 05:21
• silence (Dusk arising) This special remembrance as your verse reveals must never be forgotten...
  November 11th, 2021 09:29
• In Transit (Doggerel Dave) Wow - what a tale and left in suspense too - you have such a gift for...
  November 11th, 2021 07:35
• No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville) Ha - - good to see you posting again Nev..... but I now question - how...
  November 11th, 2021 04:16
• Shining Brightness. (Goldfinch60) Finding that hole in grey and seeing the blue is worth all the looking...
  November 11th, 2021 03:29
• The Two Faces Of War (Paul Bell) Stark from beginning to end but such a powerful read Paul - - war has its...
  November 10th, 2021 11:41
• Waiting For What. (Goldfinch60) Ha - - A sample of what curiosity we poets possess dear Andy - - now you...
  November 10th, 2021 03:01
• no fear for comforts company (Dusk arising) Glad to have caught this sad and solemn re-post - full of atmospheric...
  November 10th, 2021 02:59
• The Perfect Feet (Michael J. Schaeffer) Hi Michael - - Thanks for this heart-touching read Such a gem of tender...
  November 8th, 2021 14:09
• Day Of Rubies. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful picture of true love that can never die - - soul-mates are to...
  November 7th, 2021 04:03
• grin and bear it (Dusk arising) A haunt of a read showing the painful complexities of understaffed health...
  November 7th, 2021 04:00
• so quickly (Dusk arising) Your words move slowly to capture the experience of \"reality\'s...
  November 7th, 2021 03:47
• Sight (John Prophet) Hi John - Such a thoroughly engaging read on sight both outer and inner...
  November 6th, 2021 17:19
• Gnarly Little Things (John Prophet) \"People do not rule the world- - their programming does\" the truth of...
  November 6th, 2021 16:52
• No Chips! (Goldfinch60) Wow - - who would have believed it - - I thought chips were only fried...
  November 6th, 2021 07:26
• Frost (Lorna) Such an poignant appeal in this shivery read - thank you too for the...
  November 6th, 2021 03:48
• cutting the mustard (Dusk arising) Yes serious poetry freaks like me find an absorbing amount of time...
  November 5th, 2021 11:02
• A Morning In Autumn (Garth Rakumakoe) Autumn compared with care from a loved one - what could be better and you...
  November 5th, 2021 09:12
• Spring Asunder (Nicholas Browning) Feasible questions and inventively arranged to stay in readers\' minds...
  November 5th, 2021 05:37
• The Sand And The Sea (Paul Bell) So well spaced and relatable to many in that situation where being told is...
  November 5th, 2021 05:24
• Falling the cliff to fly (Spilleronsheet) Am liking a load your linguistic imagery and the fine message concealed...
  November 4th, 2021 12:15
• not over (Dusk arising) Agree that this reads like a love song and one that can never end despite...
  November 4th, 2021 10:10
• Kitten (Neville) Methinks even tigers have to retreat when kittens turn wild - --...
  November 4th, 2021 04:05
• Destiny (Paul Bell) Love the unique usage of personifying what we call Destiny and the...
  November 3rd, 2021 16:17
• Shy (Neville) A pleasure indeed to read that finally all barriers down she can enjoy ...
  November 3rd, 2021 04:21
• Silhouette (Spilleronsheet) Wow - Was so drawn by the story am hoping that shadowy shape will show up...
  November 2nd, 2021 17:41
• Moccasins (Lorna) Intoxicating the quiet of that flute music and love your beautiful words...
  November 2nd, 2021 17:30
• Oblivion (Nicholas Browning) Love the lilt and flow of these dark lines where oblivion strolls among...
  November 2nd, 2021 13:02
• Let These Words Speak For Themselves (Neville) Such wise advice in this read today Nev. Explaining clearly your words on...
  November 2nd, 2021 05:17
• Storm Petrel Rising (Neville) A marvel of sight are those petrels in flight when seen from a boat at sea...
  November 1st, 2021 06:39
• somewhere else (Dusk arising) A dire warning set in your talented words dear Dusk - we all need to read...
  November 1st, 2021 05:30
• It’s painful (Spilleronsheet) Pain seems unavoidable on this world\'s indifferent stage of hypocrisy...
  October 31st, 2021 11:44
• their sunday habit (Dusk arising) You capture the same habits that have dominated religion for centuries...
  October 31st, 2021 11:38
• Vacancy. (Goldfinch60) What an intriguingly spooky tale and told at the right time of year too -...
  October 31st, 2021 04:01
• Somewhere on a Spectrum (Neville) Your poignant words make clear how vulnerable such special ones are my...
  October 31st, 2021 03:22
• The Squirrel (Jerry Reynolds) Ha ha - smiling at this purry-scene Jerry - the squirrel seems oblivious...
  October 30th, 2021 11:38
• Poetry at sea (Poetic Dan) Looking for nature\'s help can do marvels when feeling low dear Dan - I...
  October 29th, 2021 15:45
• I Paid For That! (Goldfinch60) I guess those electric ciggies will be found harmful before very long - ...
  October 29th, 2021 15:42
• Protocol (Paul Bell) LOVE the smile in these lines Paul....... just the ticket the meeting...
  October 29th, 2021 05:38
• Inconsequential Gulls (Neville) Methinks I know folk like gulls who crave attention by incessant mewing....
  October 29th, 2021 04:13
• Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville) Ha - Great minds think alike they say - and this young filly\'s eyes like...
  October 28th, 2021 13:04
• Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville) Old pictures viewed in today\'s mode must have seemed to perpetuate people...
  October 28th, 2021 11:40
• Mouth My Name Slow (Neville) Should you wish it will do that directly and without anger or pique....
  October 27th, 2021 08:25
• Enlightenment #2 (Neville) Deep with sombre reflections your pen describes scenes with perfect slow...
  October 26th, 2021 09:46
• Breakfast Rituals (Neville) Sounds great that kind of Sunday with two washing plates between...
  October 25th, 2021 03:45
• Loves First Kiss - A Villanelle (Dove) Such a warm flow to this lovely description of that very first kiss of...
  October 25th, 2021 02:30
• People Do Not Care Rant. (Goldfinch60) Perfectly expressed this rant against thoughtlessness dear Andy - - like...
  October 25th, 2021 02:23
• So Much More (A.H. Browning) Your words well nail the situation today friend -as \"life without light\"...
  October 24th, 2021 03:11
• Recollections (Neville) Forgetting is not easy when pleasures of love has to end Nev. - such a sad...
  October 24th, 2021 02:39
• Love (Lorna) A ride on your writing gave me such a feeling of magic being wrapped up in...
  October 23rd, 2021 13:59
• of Elspenore pt 2 (Dusk arising) Compelling read and so expertly versed - cant say I remember this one...
  October 23rd, 2021 12:45
• Exodus Exaltings (Orchidee) Fine write Orchi
  October 23rd, 2021 12:41
• Magnificently Flawed (Neville) Wow - the timing was great if found out not too late the lady was not...
  October 23rd, 2021 05:25
• purple skies grumble (Dusk arising) This describes autumn to a tee my friend. Great four liner.
  October 22nd, 2021 11:38
• The intrinsic value of words (Bill Smith Parker Sr.) Excellent word-usage in this very readable piece - one which I intent...
  October 22nd, 2021 09:31
• Soft Love (Jerry Reynolds) A gem of a tender romantic read Jerry - from the title onward your words...
  October 22nd, 2021 08:43
• A Diamond in The Making (Neville) Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are...
  October 22nd, 2021 03:34
• should i compare (Dusk arising) Your words after such set-back are such an example - personification of...
  October 21st, 2021 11:01
• I\'ve Been A Good Boy Today. (Goldfinch60) Oooh I agree that the ironing chore waits for me too dear Andy - you are...
  October 21st, 2021 04:02
• Two Days into Autumn (Neville) I know just what you mean -- autumn appears of a sudden and magics shades...
  October 21st, 2021 04:00
• Ithaca (Neville) Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day...
  October 20th, 2021 09:22
• Dirty Laugh (Neville) Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to...
  October 19th, 2021 02:50
• The Good In Life Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Keeping in mind your wise words is so vital in these difficult times in...
  October 19th, 2021 02:36
• Shut Up Shutting Up? (Orchidee) Love this ramble with the gorgeous doggie video too.
  October 18th, 2021 06:17
• Breathe (Neville) Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon...
  October 18th, 2021 05:43
• A Formal Study of Her Knees (Neville) Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows -...
  October 16th, 2021 10:38
• A Formal Study of Her Knees (Neville) Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed...
  October 16th, 2021 03:06
• She Was My Sun. (Goldfinch60) Love like you describe fills my heart to the full that you and your...
  October 15th, 2021 15:21
• Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower (Neville) The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in...
  October 15th, 2021 06:33
• Hindsite (Jerry Reynolds) Compelling three liner dear Jerry - - love the wise brevity and the...
  October 13th, 2021 15:34
• Water is life and seems alive (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) I am so glad to have caught this tribute to water and after a second-time...
  October 13th, 2021 15:31
• So Many Days. (Goldfinch60) Full of such positive outlook on this wonder we call life your verse shows...
  October 13th, 2021 02:21
• Nature\'s Orchestra. (Goldfinch60) Reading your poetic picture of nature\'s great symphony I heard every...
  October 13th, 2021 02:17
• When Came This Chill (ADarkerMind) I love the style and the metaphor used in this piece of poetic reflection...
  October 12th, 2021 15:58
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (7) (Michael Edwards) Cant stop the giggle exploding when thoughts of what a mighty big plug...
  October 12th, 2021 15:42
• Memorial on The River (Jerry Reynolds) Your sad experience Jerry written here in the tenderest style is very ...
  October 7th, 2021 10:14
• The Light Of My World. (Goldfinch60) The love you speak of will never fade and that wonderful closeness will...
  October 7th, 2021 02:16
• RAW YOUTH (Short story) (PrEm Ji) What a captivating story Prem and with a wonderfully happy ending too -...
  October 5th, 2021 08:57
• CRY! (MendedFences27) These powerful words ought to be printed and sent around the world - a...
  October 2nd, 2021 15:45
• A Very Bad Accident. (Goldfinch60) What a surprise and a relief to find all that blood turned out to be...
  October 2nd, 2021 10:00
• Clock Change – Tonight!! (Doggerel Dave) With you all the way Dave in detesting changes in time - I never remember...
  October 2nd, 2021 05:47
• Jazz Was Back. (Goldfinch60) Ah - - that great number and so well played - - just my cup pf tea too...
  September 30th, 2021 09:45
• In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove) What a perfectly toned first line of this tender reflection of love as it...
  September 26th, 2021 10:47