Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Gnarly Little Things (E.J. Waling)
\"People do not rule the world- - their programming does\" the truth of...
November 6th, 2021 16:52 - No Chips! (Goldfinch60)
Wow - - who would have believed it - - I thought chips were only fried...
November 6th, 2021 07:26 - Frost (Lorna)
Such an poignant appeal in this shivery read - thank you too for the...
November 6th, 2021 03:48 - cutting the mustard (Dusk arising)
Yes serious poetry freaks like me find an absorbing amount of time...
November 5th, 2021 11:02 - A Morning In Autumn (Garth Rakumakoe)
Autumn compared with care from a loved one - what could be better and you...
November 5th, 2021 09:12 - Spring Asunder (Nicholas Browning)
Feasible questions and inventively arranged to stay in readers\' minds...
November 5th, 2021 05:37 - Falling the cliff to fly (Spilleronsheet)
Am liking a load your linguistic imagery and the fine message concealed...
November 4th, 2021 12:15 - not over (Dusk arising)
Agree that this reads like a love song and one that can never end despite...
November 4th, 2021 10:10 - Kitten (Neville)
Methinks even tigers have to retreat when kittens turn wild - --...
November 4th, 2021 04:05 - Shy (Neville)
A pleasure indeed to read that finally all barriers down she can enjoy ...
November 3rd, 2021 04:21 - Silhouette (Spilleronsheet)
Wow - Was so drawn by the story am hoping that shadowy shape will show up...
November 2nd, 2021 17:41 - Moccasins (Lorna)
Intoxicating the quiet of that flute music and love your beautiful words...
November 2nd, 2021 17:30 - Oblivion (Nicholas Browning)
Love the lilt and flow of these dark lines where oblivion strolls among...
November 2nd, 2021 13:02 - Let These Words Speak For Themselves (Neville)
Such wise advice in this read today Nev. Explaining clearly your words on...
November 2nd, 2021 05:17 - Storm Petrel Rising (Neville)
A marvel of sight are those petrels in flight when seen from a boat at sea...
November 1st, 2021 06:39 - somewhere else (Dusk arising)
A dire warning set in your talented words dear Dusk - we all need to read...
November 1st, 2021 05:30 - It’s painful (Spilleronsheet)
Pain seems unavoidable on this world\'s indifferent stage of hypocrisy...
October 31st, 2021 11:44 - their sunday habit (Dusk arising)
You capture the same habits that have dominated religion for centuries...
October 31st, 2021 11:38 - Vacancy. (Goldfinch60)
What an intriguingly spooky tale and told at the right time of year too -...
October 31st, 2021 04:01 - Somewhere on a Spectrum (Neville)
Your poignant words make clear how vulnerable such special ones are my...
October 31st, 2021 03:22 - The Squirrel (Jerry Reynolds)
Ha ha - smiling at this purry-scene Jerry - the squirrel seems oblivious...
October 30th, 2021 11:38 - Poetry at sea (Poetic Dan)
Looking for nature\'s help can do marvels when feeling low dear Dan - I...
October 29th, 2021 15:45 - I Paid For That! (Goldfinch60)
I guess those electric ciggies will be found harmful before very long - ...
October 29th, 2021 15:42 - Inconsequential Gulls (Neville)
Methinks I know folk like gulls who crave attention by incessant mewing....
October 29th, 2021 04:13 - Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville)
Ha - Great minds think alike they say - and this young filly\'s eyes like...
October 28th, 2021 13:04 - Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville)
Old pictures viewed in today\'s mode must have seemed to perpetuate people...
October 28th, 2021 11:40 - Mouth My Name Slow (Neville)
Should you wish it will do that directly and without anger or pique....
October 27th, 2021 08:25 - Enlightenment #2 (Neville)
Deep with sombre reflections your pen describes scenes with perfect slow...
October 26th, 2021 09:46 - Breakfast Rituals (Neville)
Sounds great that kind of Sunday with two washing plates between...
October 25th, 2021 03:45 - Loves First Kiss - A Villanelle (Dove)
Such a warm flow to this lovely description of that very first kiss of...
October 25th, 2021 02:30 - People Do Not Care Rant. (Goldfinch60)
Perfectly expressed this rant against thoughtlessness dear Andy - - like...
October 25th, 2021 02:23 - So Much More (A.H. Browning)
Your words well nail the situation today friend -as \"life without light\"...
October 24th, 2021 03:11 - Recollections (Neville)
Forgetting is not easy when pleasures of love has to end Nev. - such a sad...
October 24th, 2021 02:39 - Love (Lorna)
A ride on your writing gave me such a feeling of magic being wrapped up in...
October 23rd, 2021 13:59 - of Elspenore pt 2 (Dusk arising)
Compelling read and so expertly versed - cant say I remember this one...
October 23rd, 2021 12:45 - Exodus Exaltings (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi
October 23rd, 2021 12:41 - Magnificently Flawed (Neville)
Wow - the timing was great if found out not too late the lady was not...
October 23rd, 2021 05:25 - purple skies grumble (Dusk arising)
This describes autumn to a tee my friend. Great four liner.
October 22nd, 2021 11:38 - The intrinsic value of words (Bill Smith Parker Sr.)
Excellent word-usage in this very readable piece - one which I intent...
October 22nd, 2021 09:31 - Soft Love (Jerry Reynolds)
A gem of a tender romantic read Jerry - from the title onward your words...
October 22nd, 2021 08:43 - A Diamond in The Making (Neville)
Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are...
October 22nd, 2021 03:34 - should i compare (Dusk arising)
Your words after such set-back are such an example - personification of...
October 21st, 2021 11:01 - I\'ve Been A Good Boy Today. (Goldfinch60)
Oooh I agree that the ironing chore waits for me too dear Andy - you are...
October 21st, 2021 04:02 - Two Days into Autumn (Neville)
I know just what you mean -- autumn appears of a sudden and magics shades...
October 21st, 2021 04:00 - Ithaca (Neville)
Sounds like a paradise waiting for exploration - -- must go there one day...
October 20th, 2021 09:22 - Dirty Laugh (Neville)
Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to...
October 19th, 2021 02:50 - The Good In Life Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Keeping in mind your wise words is so vital in these difficult times in...
October 19th, 2021 02:36 - Shut Up Shutting Up? (Orchidee)
Love this ramble with the gorgeous doggie video too.
October 18th, 2021 06:17 - Breathe (Neville)
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon...
October 18th, 2021 05:43 - A Formal Study of Her Knees (Neville)
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows -...
October 16th, 2021 10:38 - A Formal Study of Her Knees (Neville)
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed...
October 16th, 2021 03:06 - She Was My Sun. (Goldfinch60)
Love like you describe fills my heart to the full that you and your...
October 15th, 2021 15:21 - Ah-Weh-Eyu - Pretty Flower (Neville)
The long-time abuse of such pretty flowers is etched with perfection in...
October 15th, 2021 06:33 - Hindsite (Jerry Reynolds)
Compelling three liner dear Jerry - - love the wise brevity and the...
October 13th, 2021 15:34 - Water is life and seems alive (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
I am so glad to have caught this tribute to water and after a second-time...
October 13th, 2021 15:31 - So Many Days. (Goldfinch60)
Full of such positive outlook on this wonder we call life your verse shows...
October 13th, 2021 02:21 - Nature\'s Orchestra. (Goldfinch60)
Reading your poetic picture of nature\'s great symphony I heard every...
October 13th, 2021 02:17 - When Came This Chill (ADarkerMind)
I love the style and the metaphor used in this piece of poetic reflection...
October 12th, 2021 15:58 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (7) (Michael Edwards)
Cant stop the giggle exploding when thoughts of what a mighty big plug...
October 12th, 2021 15:42 - Memorial on The River (Jerry Reynolds)
Your sad experience Jerry written here in the tenderest style is very ...
October 7th, 2021 10:14 - The Light Of My World. (Goldfinch60)
The love you speak of will never fade and that wonderful closeness will...
October 7th, 2021 02:16 - RAW YOUTH (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
What a captivating story Prem and with a wonderfully happy ending too -...
October 5th, 2021 08:57 - A Very Bad Accident. (Goldfinch60)
What a surprise and a relief to find all that blood turned out to be...
October 2nd, 2021 10:00 - Clock Change – Tonight!! (Doggerel Dave)
With you all the way Dave in detesting changes in time - I never remember...
October 2nd, 2021 05:47 - Jazz Was Back. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - - that great number and so well played - - just my cup pf tea too...
September 30th, 2021 09:45 - In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove)
What a perfectly toned first line of this tender reflection of love as it...
September 26th, 2021 10:47 - TIMING (Jerry Reynolds)
Being the last is bound to be best - Jerry your apt description proves ...
September 25th, 2021 11:13 - The Tease (Neville)
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the...
September 25th, 2021 05:04 - Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration (Doggerel Dave)
And after a read of this enjoyable rhyming a bard you certainly were and...
September 25th, 2021 03:09 - Favourable Farewell (Orchidee)
A comforting write Orchi.
September 24th, 2021 10:47 - Nothing to Lose (Neville)
That eventual awakening so very sensitively portrayed brought a smile to...
September 24th, 2021 03:13 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards)
So good to see you posting again Michael - - I chuckled at your witty two...
September 23rd, 2021 15:30 - La Traviata. (Goldfinch60)
What a delight to see on screen that famous opera and then to have you...
September 23rd, 2021 03:54 - weary n weak (Dusk arising)
Your courage and determination blaze through these lines my friend -- with...
September 23rd, 2021 03:10 - Autumnal Equinox (Laura🌻)
Dear Laura - -- How near you appear with the image and wording as you sit...
September 22nd, 2021 16:47 - First Day Of Autumn (Jerry Reynolds)
Applause for this super rhyme on the change Autumn brings and what an...
September 22nd, 2021 12:48 - Without Closure (Neville)
The case of a missing lady-love and what skill in the telling when your...
September 22nd, 2021 12:46 - Natures Gymnopodie. (Goldfinch60)
Your verse oozes peace and what a number to relax with dear Andy
September 22nd, 2021 03:31 - A Taste Well Shared (Neville)
Leaving me near speechless the appeal of these scenes Nev where closeness...
September 21st, 2021 05:10 - For Reference Purposes Only (Neville)
Slowing reading and finding near-at-hand special shelves for these...
September 20th, 2021 04:56 - Someone More Golden (Neville)
Hope you are just wondering Nev. and not really experiencing the saddest...
September 19th, 2021 04:52 - CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards)
So good to read your engaging words again Michael and view your impressive...
September 19th, 2021 03:03 - Scarper (Neville)
Ha - Well at least it was mutual that quick scarper Nev. . Scalded by...
September 18th, 2021 06:01 - it was easy (Dusk arising)
Your words make those trips to watch tides spreading good fortune sound...
September 17th, 2021 08:03 - Blighty (Neville)
These potent words got to my heart the first time Nev and now after this...
September 17th, 2021 05:22 - Shark Cloud. (Goldfinch60)
yes clouds can have many faces that change with the breeze or wind - a...
September 17th, 2021 03:37 - What you see is not all of me (Poetic Dan)
Yes sometimes we have to \"let it be\" and give misery central stage for a...
September 16th, 2021 12:44 - Question (Jerry Reynolds)
yes Jerry - the question is answered by your last line - love knows...
September 16th, 2021 12:29 - Yesterday, Tomorrow, Today. (Goldfinch60)
How wise these lines on how to look at the three times and find they are...
September 15th, 2021 15:06 - May I (Myself and me)
Simply riveting these few loaded words. Into my list of faves goes this...
September 11th, 2021 13:01 - Fablon (Neville)
Ah - such clever imagery to get the point over Nev. Fablon makes the...
September 11th, 2021 02:39 - Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
Much food for thought in this well written reminder on Pursuing Peace.
September 10th, 2021 04:35 - Narcissist (Neville)
Sometimes a strong message such as this commendable verse contains is...
September 10th, 2021 04:19 - falling into autumn glory (Dusk arising)
What an experience to hear romantic music while reading your tender and...
September 10th, 2021 02:30 - maybe (Dusk arising)
Only a poet could fancy those changes in to peaceful living my friend -...
September 9th, 2021 07:38 - Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60)
Can feel your angst my dear friend - lies are what politics are all...
September 8th, 2021 05:33 - O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave)
For thirty or forty five minutes this rant of a write matches my own...
September 8th, 2021 04:55 - My Lotus and Me (Neville)
Not being race-trained I ask did this Lotus have a tragic accident when a...
September 8th, 2021 03:31 - Sea (Floreann)
Amazingly colourful this seaside scene at Santa Cruz and your wonderful...
September 7th, 2021 16:13 - Clouds of Destiny (Dove)
Such an appealing read my friend -
your imagery deserves applause....
September 7th, 2021 15:29
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