Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Raptor (Michael J. Schaeffer) Engaging and excitingly positive these lines of striking metaphor Michael ...
  December 10th, 2021 03:28
• Day Of Your Birth. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful tribute on this very special day dear Andy - - your darling...
  December 8th, 2021 16:12
• yeardrops (Dusk arising) Filled with emotion this reflection of how need can be resurrected strikes...
  December 8th, 2021 16:08
• Clarion (Draven) Wow you have captured the darkness of constant self-loathing so clearly...
  December 7th, 2021 17:35
• the only love she held on to (Dusk arising) The power of intrigue in these lines is astoundingly strong dear Dusk - I...
  December 7th, 2021 12:11
• Smothered (Lorna) Lorna you nailed it - - a wonderful exposé of all things anti-earth I...
  December 7th, 2021 09:04
• Slow Learner (Doggerel Dave) I\'m creased up here by your wit Dave - a veritable lifetime of beating...
  December 7th, 2021 07:23
• Something of a Quandary (Neville) Hhhmmm - -- interesting quandary this Nev. - -- methinks the name Omen...
  December 7th, 2021 05:15
• My Christmas Present. (Goldfinch60) I will give you my two year old A.M. dear Andy as I soon get bored with...
  December 7th, 2021 04:13
• Bilge (Neville) Some make a habit of painting those darkly who fail expectations - sad but...
  December 6th, 2021 07:01
• Above Water (Valerie Wilson) What a tragic experience you share with us Valerie and your verse tells...
  December 5th, 2021 17:55
• The day (Cedrick) I love the hidden intrigue of this clever haiku - -- so much on which...
  December 5th, 2021 16:56
• Floccinaucinihilipilification Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Wow - - this needs framing my friend - - what a word to challenge you...
  December 5th, 2021 16:43
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12) (Michael Edwards) Your wit knows no end with both art-work and verses MIke - so good to see...
  December 5th, 2021 16:39
• Stage Back (AuburnScribbler) You nail the time when to return on stage brings butterflies galore - I...
  December 5th, 2021 16:36
• Emotions (SureshG) A confession of pure reliance which reads like a prayer my friend -- I...
  December 5th, 2021 16:30
• Something in the Air Maybe (Neville) Something that scents the air often brings someone special to mind and so...
  December 5th, 2021 16:27
• The Lesson Of Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes how true - stillness is vital dear Andy and \"a most important...
  December 4th, 2021 03:23
• These Distant Dreams (Saxon Crow) Fantastic set of reasons why we need to keep dreaming dear Sax - this is...
  December 4th, 2021 03:18
• 𝕌𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕝𝕝 𝕠𝕗 ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕥𝕞𝕒𝕤 (Dove) Lovely read Dove - Christmas has a special place for everyone under its...
  December 3rd, 2021 12:35
• Looking For The Word (Jerry Reynolds) Yes it it the whispers of truth to keep and embrace - a lovely picture...
  December 3rd, 2021 11:25
• global warning (Dusk arising) A read to remember and shudder at the foreboding title and you nailed...
  December 3rd, 2021 11:23
• My Lady is More Than a Poem (Neville) No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon...
  December 3rd, 2021 07:29
• my body part (Dusk arising) ha ha ha -- ever bin fooled - cos I just have - - hhhhmmm couldn\'t...
  December 2nd, 2021 10:25
• First Snow (Lorna) A simply wonderful read of the magic snow brings - thank you Lorna.
  December 1st, 2021 06:10
• Making Rainbows Blindly (Neville) Folk do astonishing things when watched by a potential suicide case and it...
  December 1st, 2021 04:45
• Where are you Mary (Neville) The missing is permanent when love has to leave us - the searing hurt of...
  November 30th, 2021 05:17
• My Angel\'s Arrival !!! (Vamsi Sudha) Your words written in love must be such a treasure for your daughter to...
  November 30th, 2021 03:52
• A Heroes Home Coming (Mozzthe1) A heart-moving tribute to those who risk their lives for others - - your...
  November 29th, 2021 12:18
• Dandelions (Dove) I remember so well blowing away dandelion fairies as we used to call them...
  November 29th, 2021 11:01
• A Promenade in Twilight (PS) Your words capture the feeling of dusk and how walking in twilight brings...
  November 29th, 2021 10:57
• it was as if (Dusk arising) Wow - what a wonder of romance your dreaming gives you my dear friend --...
  November 29th, 2021 05:57
• Winter is coming (Kitty the naughty poet) Love the fierce graphic and too the crafted shape of your verse Katie - -...
  November 29th, 2021 05:19
• On Being Called to War  (Neville) Many were facing that call and for conscience accepted white feathers and...
  November 29th, 2021 03:38
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (7 - 9) (Michael Edwards) How do you do it my friend - another clever collection of memorables.
  November 29th, 2021 03:24
• Who Among Us? (Garth Rakumakoe) Oh the power in these haunting lines and the shame of civilization for its...
  November 28th, 2021 16:41
• bear faced lies (Dusk arising) A great Sunday tale about bear behaviour in places I\'ve never been - -...
  November 28th, 2021 13:54
• Summer 19.. (Neville) Shows what love can do when it strikes eh ? - - just guessing the year -...
  November 28th, 2021 06:31
• Fill Your Cup (James Alexander) What an uplifting invitation James - am so pleased to have caught your...
  November 27th, 2021 09:44
• johannes sabastian WOOF (Dusk arising) Laughed me cotton socks off at this clever ditty - hope Orchi can write...
  November 27th, 2021 08:45
• On My Mind (Lorna) A stunningly good write on never forgetting - - this one goes into my...
  November 27th, 2021 08:41
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (4 - 6) (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - you have just made my morning Mike - love your sense of humour...
  November 27th, 2021 05:09
• Down With Everything (Neville) That becoming pernickety never does the trick of alluring - - lovers can...
  November 27th, 2021 05:07
• I wonder (Spilleronsheet) A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding...
  November 26th, 2021 16:28
• upon midnight (Dusk arising) yes such a tale of meeting sorrow with slow steps of short-line tempo this...
  November 26th, 2021 16:18
• Love and Battle in the North (Nicholas Browning) Surely a novel in the making here - the aspect of brandishing weapons to...
  November 26th, 2021 11:47
• Dip Your Brush Into Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Just the job for a mood-breaker whih we all need from time to time is...
  November 26th, 2021 10:18
• Free at last.......... (Doggerel Dave) Must have been written through too much indoorness dear Dave - - hope...
  November 26th, 2021 04:21
• Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville) Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where...
  November 26th, 2021 03:51
• Anchored (Fay Slimm.) oh dear - apologies my friend - though pleased to know my poetry stirs...
  November 25th, 2021 06:03
• An Unmistakable She (Neville) Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can...
  November 25th, 2021 05:17
• Solitude Acrostic (Goldfinch60) A wonderfully positive acrostic based on Solitude - so good your poetry...
  November 25th, 2021 03:12
• Ma Petit Serviette (Neville) Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served...
  November 24th, 2021 06:57
• Linger (Neville) A haunt of a mourning song this - it reminds me that \"Parting is such...
  November 23rd, 2021 03:45
• Woman Of Color (Garth Rakumakoe) First class writing Garth - full of literary surprises this goes straight...
  November 22nd, 2021 14:32
• somehow something (Dusk arising) Simply compellingly good this example of excellent wording that stays in...
  November 22nd, 2021 06:51
• Days Like These (Nicholas Browning) Whoever wrote this little masters both words and feelings behind the mask...
  November 22nd, 2021 05:13
• Rescue Recital (Orchidee) Lovely and comforting thoughts in this verse - - thank you Orchi.
  November 22nd, 2021 03:58
• An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville) Being loved the best is an aim of so many who need constant assurance of...
  November 22nd, 2021 03:28
• The Earworm….. (Doggerel Dave) Gud day and thanks for tacklin\' this subject Dave - - am with you all the...
  November 22nd, 2021 00:44
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (1 - 3) (Michael Edwards) Still chuckling at not only your drawings but those funny couplets as well...
  November 21st, 2021 11:01
• Late night (Spilleronsheet) The movement you rouse in this on-going description of beating the blues...
  November 21st, 2021 09:38
• An All Too Familiar Modus (Neville) Seems often the misled mislead those who being vulnerable believe too...
  November 21st, 2021 04:28
• tide has turned (Dusk arising) Perfectly penned - fantastic imagery and a read to remember my friend....
  November 20th, 2021 09:35
• The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville) Your title says it all Nev. Familiar around our coastline too are boats...
  November 20th, 2021 04:22
• dont ask me why (Dusk arising) The why never seems to make known the reasons to a child that has never...
  November 19th, 2021 06:58
• Unsincerely Yours (Neville) Indifference walks off and can leave often - methinks good riddance to...
  November 19th, 2021 06:27
• The Mothers We Lost (Garth Rakumakoe) Your title drew my attention as it surmounted the worded tribute to...
  November 18th, 2021 09:40
• Two squirrels (Spilleronsheet) One of my favourite creatures are fun-loving squirrels which your words...
  November 18th, 2021 09:37
• The Greatest Gift. (Goldfinch60) Inspiring words Andy - and the wonderful number to go with them brought...
  November 18th, 2021 07:12
• there (Dusk arising) Got to be one of your best and has to be one of my favourities. Great read...
  November 18th, 2021 07:07
• Narcissistically Speaking (Neville) So skillful your words Nev on the unassailable nature of the true...
  November 18th, 2021 05:26
• Just Another Way Out (Neville) The pity when people come to such broken ends is captured with tender...
  November 17th, 2021 03:39
• DANCING IN THE BREEZE (Andy Hunter) A beautiful and moving tribute to two who found true love Andy - - thank...
  November 16th, 2021 16:53
• spelling (Dusk arising) Taken five minutes to decipher these wordlings but they sure left me...
  November 16th, 2021 11:08
• Lawnsome (Neville) I like faking the haiku too Nev. - never could scribble the real thing me...
  November 16th, 2021 10:51
• Dove In A Cathedral (Garth Rakumakoe) A most tender and poetically beautiful confession of love that surely no...
  November 16th, 2021 08:20
• spelling (Dusk arising) Ha ha ha - and then more - - yu nailed that bad spellin lark Dusky - -- ...
  November 16th, 2021 08:17
• Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville) Nothing like a mystery to set pulses alive - not clearly defined is even...
  November 16th, 2021 05:58
• Singing With Angels. (Goldfinch60) Very moving words and with such music as Moonlight Serenade no wonder the...
  November 14th, 2021 04:09
• Time Traveler. (Doggerel Dave) Longer the better for me too Dave - so glad you saw lots while you were...
  November 13th, 2021 08:55
• Those years (Dusk arising) Poignant and oh so beautiful dear Dusk - your pen captures the vulnerable...
  November 13th, 2021 05:04
• Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville) Yes amigo behind a mask anything goes - - or so they say - -- winks galore...
  November 13th, 2021 04:52
• unplug (Angela-a) Am so glad I caught this example of fine poetic merit for which I send...
  November 13th, 2021 03:17
• True Love. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful tune with words like True Love will move minds and hearts of...
  November 13th, 2021 03:08
• The Less I Understand (A.H. Browning) You capture the feeling all preemies must have when thinking of days when...
  November 12th, 2021 16:55
• Sea Story (Orchidee) Enjoyed this hymn-poem very much Orchi - thank you for sharing it.
  November 12th, 2021 13:03
• Today Makes Daddy Proud (Garth Rakumakoe) Oh how I agree that any tomorrows ought to be She - - - your verse well...
  November 12th, 2021 10:07
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards) Ah - I love your dibbles and dabbles my friend -- thank you for my first...
  November 12th, 2021 05:21
• silence (Dusk arising) This special remembrance as your verse reveals must never be forgotten...
  November 11th, 2021 09:29
• In Transit (Doggerel Dave) Wow - what a tale and left in suspense too - you have such a gift for...
  November 11th, 2021 07:35
• No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville) Ha - - good to see you posting again Nev..... but I now question - how...
  November 11th, 2021 04:16
• Shining Brightness. (Goldfinch60) Finding that hole in grey and seeing the blue is worth all the looking...
  November 11th, 2021 03:29
• Waiting For What. (Goldfinch60) Ha - - A sample of what curiosity we poets possess dear Andy - - now you...
  November 10th, 2021 03:01
• no fear for comforts company (Dusk arising) Glad to have caught this sad and solemn re-post - full of atmospheric...
  November 10th, 2021 02:59
• The Perfect Feet (Michael J. Schaeffer) Hi Michael - - Thanks for this heart-touching read Such a gem of tender...
  November 8th, 2021 14:09
• Day Of Rubies. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful picture of true love that can never die - - soul-mates are to...
  November 7th, 2021 04:03
• grin and bear it (Dusk arising) A haunt of a read showing the painful complexities of understaffed health...
  November 7th, 2021 04:00
• so quickly (Dusk arising) Your words move slowly to capture the experience of \"reality\'s...
  November 7th, 2021 03:47
• Sight (E.J. Waling) Hi John - Such a thoroughly engaging read on sight both outer and inner...
  November 6th, 2021 17:19