Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• This Fleeting Day (A.H. Browning) Ah - an inspiring first read of my day dear poet and thank you for...
  December 28th, 2021 02:56
• Such A Lucky Man. (Goldfinch60) You phrase your life in such grateful words Andy and we can all follow...
  December 28th, 2021 02:46
• though tears (Dusk arising) Ah - -Dusk how I relate to your words today. Tears are a gift for calming...
  December 27th, 2021 03:42
• A Life Lived Sadly (Neville) Certainly a variant Nev. - -- even within the title an important ...
  December 26th, 2021 13:32
• Dance The Day. (Goldfinch60) Just listened to the number by Rick Wakeman and Wow - - what a great...
  December 25th, 2021 03:35
• Dance The Day. (Goldfinch60) Ah - - such a grand set of wishes for good things to come - - thanks for...
  December 25th, 2021 03:29
• Solstice (Draven) The cold always suits me better too - thanks for the solstice verse...
  December 24th, 2021 09:08
• Flames (Draven) Oh Draven a spark can indeed fire a whole forest - -what a haunt of a...
  December 23rd, 2021 16:50
• What Women Want (Paul Bell) Ha ha - -- and who could blame her eh Paul - -- the read made my hair...
  December 23rd, 2021 13:10
• HAPPY HOLIDAYS (Laura🌻) And may your kind wishes bring the same happiness back to your own door...
  December 23rd, 2021 11:38
• A Life Sadly Lived (Neville) The title alone of this sensitive verse brought a lump to my throat -...
  December 23rd, 2021 07:24
• Happy Birthday Again Chet. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for this great sound of Chet dear Andy -- Brilliant artist and so...
  December 23rd, 2021 03:11
• A MERRY CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards) A lovely cartoon to illustrate your kind wishes dear Michael - - sending...
  December 23rd, 2021 03:08
• velvet (Dusk arising) Simply brilliant these poetic expressions of dawn\'s entrance. One for my...
  December 22nd, 2021 16:32
• Weeping Wall (MendedFences27) Those hammers and picks must have brought tears of deep pity for the many...
  December 22nd, 2021 16:28
• The Taking of Innocence (Neville) Rape would make a saint angry - this write needs reading by a far larger...
  December 22nd, 2021 05:50
• Examples Elicited (Orchidee) Time spent trying to better the spirit is never wasted as love, peace and...
  December 22nd, 2021 03:36
• What A Wonderful Day I Had Had. (Goldfinch60) Your day sounds so well spent and rewarding in all ways dear Andy and...
  December 22nd, 2021 03:30
• Touch A Leaf, Hug A Tree (Garth Rakumakoe) This write goes straight to my favourites Garth - a piece of sound wisdom...
  December 21st, 2021 16:42
• The Sea (Coyote) One of my favourite subjects about which to write is the gloriously...
  December 21st, 2021 16:34
• Midwinter (Draven) Can feel for you in that low temp. dear Draven - your words paint so...
  December 21st, 2021 13:19
• Quarry (Neville) Can see you know the inns and the out of the poaching game Nev. - - shall...
  December 21st, 2021 09:15
• Signing Out (Neville) How could a muse forsake thee who weaves words so endearingly wrapped for...
  December 20th, 2021 15:54
• gently now withdrawn (Dusk arising) Such a heart-moving read Dusk.The power of metaphor in this poetic gem is...
  December 20th, 2021 12:19
• turn back the clock (Dusk arising) A question well put to know who would do much different if clocks were...
  December 17th, 2021 15:01
• The Realisation of Probability (Neville) Ha - - Who says we\'re all out of they pheromones mon ami ? - - - - ...
  December 16th, 2021 11:46
• No Longer in The Making (Neville) Perfumed as such no wonder their memory could not be forgotten - you...
  December 15th, 2021 09:13
• what are we? (Dusk arising) No tragedy worse my friend than the murder of innocents - like yourself I...
  December 14th, 2021 11:30
• Raptor (Michael J. Schaeffer) Engaging and excitingly positive these lines of striking metaphor Michael ...
  December 10th, 2021 03:28
• Day Of Your Birth. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful tribute on this very special day dear Andy - - your darling...
  December 8th, 2021 16:12
• yeardrops (Dusk arising) Filled with emotion this reflection of how need can be resurrected strikes...
  December 8th, 2021 16:08
• Clarion (Draven) Wow you have captured the darkness of constant self-loathing so clearly...
  December 7th, 2021 17:35
• the only love she held on to (Dusk arising) The power of intrigue in these lines is astoundingly strong dear Dusk - I...
  December 7th, 2021 12:11
• Smothered (Lorna) Lorna you nailed it - - a wonderful exposé of all things anti-earth I...
  December 7th, 2021 09:04
• Slow Learner (Doggerel Dave) I\'m creased up here by your wit Dave - a veritable lifetime of beating...
  December 7th, 2021 07:23
• Something of a Quandary (Neville) Hhhmmm - -- interesting quandary this Nev. - -- methinks the name Omen...
  December 7th, 2021 05:15
• My Christmas Present. (Goldfinch60) I will give you my two year old A.M. dear Andy as I soon get bored with...
  December 7th, 2021 04:13
• Bilge (Neville) Some make a habit of painting those darkly who fail expectations - sad but...
  December 6th, 2021 07:01
• Above Water (Valerie Wilson) What a tragic experience you share with us Valerie and your verse tells...
  December 5th, 2021 17:55
• The day (Cedrick) I love the hidden intrigue of this clever haiku - -- so much on which...
  December 5th, 2021 16:56
• Floccinaucinihilipilification Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Wow - - this needs framing my friend - - what a word to challenge you...
  December 5th, 2021 16:43
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12) (Michael Edwards) Your wit knows no end with both art-work and verses MIke - so good to see...
  December 5th, 2021 16:39
• Stage Back (AuburnScribbler) You nail the time when to return on stage brings butterflies galore - I...
  December 5th, 2021 16:36
• Emotions (SureshG) A confession of pure reliance which reads like a prayer my friend -- I...
  December 5th, 2021 16:30
• Something in the Air Maybe (Neville) Something that scents the air often brings someone special to mind and so...
  December 5th, 2021 16:27
• The Lesson Of Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes how true - stillness is vital dear Andy and \"a most important...
  December 4th, 2021 03:23
• These Distant Dreams (Saxon Crow) Fantastic set of reasons why we need to keep dreaming dear Sax - this is...
  December 4th, 2021 03:18
• 𝕌𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕝𝕝 𝕠𝕗 ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕥𝕞𝕒𝕤 (Dove) Lovely read Dove - Christmas has a special place for everyone under its...
  December 3rd, 2021 12:35
• Looking For The Word (Jerry Reynolds) Yes it it the whispers of truth to keep and embrace - a lovely picture...
  December 3rd, 2021 11:25
• global warning (Dusk arising) A read to remember and shudder at the foreboding title and you nailed...
  December 3rd, 2021 11:23
• My Lady is More Than a Poem (Neville) No doubt this is a verse to treasure for your sleek ship-shape lady mon...
  December 3rd, 2021 07:29
• my body part (Dusk arising) ha ha ha -- ever bin fooled - cos I just have - - hhhhmmm couldn\'t...
  December 2nd, 2021 10:25
• First Snow (Lorna) A simply wonderful read of the magic snow brings - thank you Lorna.
  December 1st, 2021 06:10
• Making Rainbows Blindly (Neville) Folk do astonishing things when watched by a potential suicide case and it...
  December 1st, 2021 04:45
• Where are you Mary (Neville) The missing is permanent when love has to leave us - the searing hurt of...
  November 30th, 2021 05:17
• My Angel\'s Arrival !!! (Vamsi Sudha) Your words written in love must be such a treasure for your daughter to...
  November 30th, 2021 03:52
• A Heroes Home Coming (Mozzthe1) A heart-moving tribute to those who risk their lives for others - - your...
  November 29th, 2021 12:18
• Dandelions (Dove) I remember so well blowing away dandelion fairies as we used to call them...
  November 29th, 2021 11:01
• A Promenade in Twilight (PS) Your words capture the feeling of dusk and how walking in twilight brings...
  November 29th, 2021 10:57
• it was as if (Dusk arising) Wow - what a wonder of romance your dreaming gives you my dear friend --...
  November 29th, 2021 05:57
• Winter is coming (Kitty the naughty poet) Love the fierce graphic and too the crafted shape of your verse Katie - -...
  November 29th, 2021 05:19
• On Being Called to War  (Neville) Many were facing that call and for conscience accepted white feathers and...
  November 29th, 2021 03:38
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (7 - 9) (Michael Edwards) How do you do it my friend - another clever collection of memorables.
  November 29th, 2021 03:24
• Who Among Us? (Garth Rakumakoe) Oh the power in these haunting lines and the shame of civilization for its...
  November 28th, 2021 16:41
• bear faced lies (Dusk arising) A great Sunday tale about bear behaviour in places I\'ve never been - -...
  November 28th, 2021 13:54
• Summer 19.. (Neville) Shows what love can do when it strikes eh ? - - just guessing the year -...
  November 28th, 2021 06:31
• Fill Your Cup (James Alexander) What an uplifting invitation James - am so pleased to have caught your...
  November 27th, 2021 09:44
• johannes sabastian WOOF (Dusk arising) Laughed me cotton socks off at this clever ditty - hope Orchi can write...
  November 27th, 2021 08:45
• On My Mind (Lorna) A stunningly good write on never forgetting - - this one goes into my...
  November 27th, 2021 08:41
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (4 - 6) (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - you have just made my morning Mike - love your sense of humour...
  November 27th, 2021 05:09
• Down With Everything (Neville) That becoming pernickety never does the trick of alluring - - lovers can...
  November 27th, 2021 05:07
• I wonder (Spilleronsheet) A meaningful piece of legitimate questioning wrapped in a spellbinding...
  November 26th, 2021 16:28
• upon midnight (Dusk arising) yes such a tale of meeting sorrow with slow steps of short-line tempo this...
  November 26th, 2021 16:18
• Love and Battle in the North (Nicholas Browning) Surely a novel in the making here - the aspect of brandishing weapons to...
  November 26th, 2021 11:47
• Dip Your Brush Into Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Just the job for a mood-breaker whih we all need from time to time is...
  November 26th, 2021 10:18
• The Final Goodbye (Paul Bell) A haunt of a read Paul when lines get crossed and what a surprise your...
  November 26th, 2021 05:25
• Free at last.......... (Doggerel Dave) Must have been written through too much indoorness dear Dave - - hope...
  November 26th, 2021 04:21
• Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville) Such an irresistible invitation to climb for a while to places where...
  November 26th, 2021 03:51
• Anchored (Fay Slimm.) oh dear - apologies my friend - though pleased to know my poetry stirs...
  November 25th, 2021 06:03
• An Unmistakable She (Neville) Methinks your She\'s are found wanting if R\'s rolling is all they can...
  November 25th, 2021 05:17
• Solitude Acrostic (Goldfinch60) A wonderfully positive acrostic based on Solitude - so good your poetry...
  November 25th, 2021 03:12
• Ma Petit Serviette (Neville) Well shiver me timbers me hearty - no question about what she served...
  November 24th, 2021 06:57
• Linger (Neville) A haunt of a mourning song this - it reminds me that \"Parting is such...
  November 23rd, 2021 03:45
• Woman Of Color (Garth Rakumakoe) First class writing Garth - full of literary surprises this goes straight...
  November 22nd, 2021 14:32
• somehow something (Dusk arising) Simply compellingly good this example of excellent wording that stays in...
  November 22nd, 2021 06:51
• Days Like These (Nicholas Browning) Whoever wrote this little masters both words and feelings behind the mask...
  November 22nd, 2021 05:13
• Rescue Recital (Orchidee) Lovely and comforting thoughts in this verse - - thank you Orchi.
  November 22nd, 2021 03:58
• An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville) Being loved the best is an aim of so many who need constant assurance of...
  November 22nd, 2021 03:28
• The Earworm….. (Doggerel Dave) Gud day and thanks for tacklin\' this subject Dave - - am with you all the...
  November 22nd, 2021 00:44
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (1 - 3) (Michael Edwards) Still chuckling at not only your drawings but those funny couplets as well...
  November 21st, 2021 11:01
• Late night (Spilleronsheet) The movement you rouse in this on-going description of beating the blues...
  November 21st, 2021 09:38
• An All Too Familiar Modus (Neville) Seems often the misled mislead those who being vulnerable believe too...
  November 21st, 2021 04:28
• tide has turned (Dusk arising) Perfectly penned - fantastic imagery and a read to remember my friend....
  November 20th, 2021 09:35
• The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville) Your title says it all Nev. Familiar around our coastline too are boats...
  November 20th, 2021 04:22
• dont ask me why (Dusk arising) The why never seems to make known the reasons to a child that has never...
  November 19th, 2021 06:58
• Unsincerely Yours (Neville) Indifference walks off and can leave often - methinks good riddance to...
  November 19th, 2021 06:27
• The Mothers We Lost (Garth Rakumakoe) Your title drew my attention as it surmounted the worded tribute to...
  November 18th, 2021 09:40
• Two squirrels (Spilleronsheet) One of my favourite creatures are fun-loving squirrels which your words...
  November 18th, 2021 09:37
• The Greatest Gift. (Goldfinch60) Inspiring words Andy - and the wonderful number to go with them brought...
  November 18th, 2021 07:12
• there (Dusk arising) Got to be one of your best and has to be one of my favourities. Great read...
  November 18th, 2021 07:07