Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• When Size is Not Everything (Neville) Tiny is often likeable and gigantic can be mind-blowing but climaxing...
  December 9th, 2022 07:48
• Creatures of Nature (Bella Shepard) Your \"ramblings\" as you call them are examples of fine poetic...
  December 5th, 2022 11:56
• Hidden (Neville) The thrill of hiding those special moments and hoping nobody else ...
  December 5th, 2022 05:45
• Your Leaving (MendedFences27) Yes Phil - - loneliness has to be given its time of work-outs - -- then...
  December 4th, 2022 07:21
• Leaf(p) of faith (Saxon Crow) Loud applause for this comforting lesson in how life continues. Such depth...
  December 4th, 2022 04:31
• What an Appetite for Attention She Had (Neville) The read of your poetic posting today hits a valuable truth my friend. -...
  December 4th, 2022 04:19
• Blessed Laughter. (Goldfinch60) You hit on the trait I feel is the best of healers my friend. - Laughter...
  December 3rd, 2022 16:14
• Now That My Lady Is Gone (Neville) Honesty wins hands down in these few lines of truthful reflection - -- ...
  December 3rd, 2022 16:05
• So Long and Thanks for All the Fish (Neville) Ha - -- Space travel never being my thing I am not remembering much of...
  December 2nd, 2022 16:25
• Desk Top Fever (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) Oh how i agree that too much desk-work brings on the yawns and nothing is...
  December 2nd, 2022 13:49
• Tomorrows Garden. (Goldfinch60) I love the metaphor used in this piece of reflection dear Andy - -Your...
  December 2nd, 2022 04:54
• The Chair. (Doggerel Dave) Ah - - Yes I relate to your rant my friend - - this read brought my...
  December 2nd, 2022 03:43
• Life (Bella Shepard) Ah - I hasten to say we can do naught else but laugh at what life does to...
  December 1st, 2022 11:05
• Just Another Shot in The Dark (Neville) It meets very well Nev and the two verse repetition adds to its pitiful...
  December 1st, 2022 06:54
• Just Another Shot in The Dark (Neville) Pathos issues from every line here - and from the title too -- the ...
  December 1st, 2022 05:29
• glimpse (Dusk arising) You with experience describe what the treatment does to the mind and you...
  November 30th, 2022 08:22
• with the lights on (JoyJoy) A beautifully written and very relatable love poem. Thank you for sharing...
  November 30th, 2022 05:42
• inimitable contrivances (Arqios) Too true Rik and so succinctly put. This addiction to war will inflict...
  November 30th, 2022 05:28
• All Praise! (Orchidee) Good write and full of hope .
  November 30th, 2022 05:22
• Ten Years After (Neville) Love \'s memory is timeless and its fire never alters. A comforting read...
  November 30th, 2022 05:22
• That Last Time Look (Neville) Ah -is it a boat or a woman I wonder -- the sadness of love\'s final...
  November 29th, 2022 03:36
• Just Another Zen Thing (Neville) You describe the after-effects of making two into one most invitingly mi...
  November 27th, 2022 10:09
• granny\'s steinway (Arqios) That special piano could if it talked tell some awful tales Rik - your...
  November 27th, 2022 03:54
• Song for Gene Malloy (Neville) A tribute that introduces so well a poet who is new to me Nev. -your...
  November 26th, 2022 12:40
• Walking To School. (Goldfinch60) Oh yes - -- those were the best days when we walked in the streets and...
  November 26th, 2022 03:53
• Gladding (Neville) Thanks for a new word and its meaning - - I like the sound gladding makes...
  November 25th, 2022 11:45
• Poem on a Plate (Neville) What a deeelishuss taste of simple dishes when love\'s on the menu my...
  November 24th, 2022 15:30
• And It Rains. (Goldfinch60) Thank you Andy for your refreshing outlook to rain. - - a journey worth...
  November 23rd, 2022 02:50
• as if (Dusk arising) The way to beat fear is often through trying to walk like a newborn - - ...
  November 22nd, 2022 07:26
• For an Old Man We Met on a Mountain (Neville) Those who don\'t fit into society\'s expectations are pushed aside to its...
  November 22nd, 2022 02:52
• negotiable leave (Arqios) The chosen music leads into the lament so well Rik - the superb imagery...
  November 21st, 2022 11:44
• Simon And Garfunkel. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful duo -- the song you chose has ever been a favourite of those...
  November 21st, 2022 07:20
• Three Summers (Neville) How weird that we both posted verses today on summers ago - - loving ...
  November 21st, 2022 04:29
• May we all find that purpose (Poetic Dan) I am dancing there with you in spirit dear Dan - - - holding on to that...
  November 20th, 2022 05:55
• Between Courses (Neville) Who wouldn\'t remember that delectable eating and drinking and what...
  November 20th, 2022 05:50
• Olivetti Moments (Neville) Paint has never dried more clearly than on this poignant canvas of Box...
  November 19th, 2022 02:39
• capricious recollections (Arqios) Poems evoke so much more than words dear Rik - - memory can be kept alive...
  November 18th, 2022 14:21
• Big Foot (Orchidee) We all need a watchdog at times dear Orchi - - I love the video you chose...
  November 18th, 2022 14:17
• Algarvia (Neville) Loving the way your lines took this reader to where time must stand still...
  November 18th, 2022 11:14
• Happy House (Orchidee) The best house is built on a happy rock - - thanks for the needed...
  November 18th, 2022 09:04
• Peace And Love. (Goldfinch60) A lovely dream Andy -- we can but imagine the result if Music ruled the...
  November 18th, 2022 08:56
• What is To Be Done? (Doggerel Dave) You nail the situation that is affecting the whole governmental...
  November 14th, 2022 17:32
• My Heart Beats to the Sounds of Your Whisper (Dove) I love the lilt to this triolet Dove - - so artfully romantic - - thank...
  November 14th, 2022 17:29
• ode to Phillis Wheatley (Arqios) Your beautiful tribute brought my attention to the video of Phyllis...
  November 14th, 2022 17:21
• Christ Is Preeminent in Creation - Series (1) (Orchidee) How important the Firstborn of all Creation we cannot begin to imagine -...
  November 14th, 2022 17:05
• Lessons In Life. (Goldfinch60) Mistakes can become great lessons for us Andy - am listening so intensely...
  November 14th, 2022 17:03
• Universal Truth (Dr. Soma) The coming and going of life is captured so well in your tribute to the...
  November 14th, 2022 16:59
• Heavenly Help (Orchidee) A fine read as a reminder dear Orchi.
  November 11th, 2022 13:59
• For Remembrance Day. (Goldfinch60) Agree the wording is unforgettable and very meaningful. The choice of...
  November 11th, 2022 13:09
• Lest we Forget (Stephanie Irvine) Hello Stephanie - A warm welcome to MPS and such a moving write of what...
  November 11th, 2022 13:06
• Clouds of Love (MendedFences27) An exhilarating picture of love re-kindled and an absolute pleasure to...
  November 11th, 2022 12:50
• Two Minutes (A Poem on Armistice) (AuburnScribbler) This tribute to those many lives given for peace and freedom certainly...
  November 11th, 2022 11:48
• seasons passing (Jerry Reynolds) Oooops - my apology - made a typo with your name - Jerry.
  November 11th, 2022 09:46
• seasons passing (Jerry Reynolds) A cleverly penned haiku which pens the change so well - thanks for...
  November 11th, 2022 09:39
• To Walk By Moonlight (Bella Shepard) How liberating this read when drawn into the scene of stillness when dawn...
  November 10th, 2022 16:35
• fallen (Arqios) The feel of autumnal essence oozes from these expressive lines - - I...
  November 10th, 2022 05:40
• “meaning of it all” (SureshG) The capture the questioning nature of all humanity existing alongside life...
  November 9th, 2022 16:06
• POOL (Dusk arising) Ah - your honest appraisal of what illness can steal from those loving...
  November 9th, 2022 12:38
• The Premiere (Draven) Your words made the show iive as that curtain rose and what a thrill for...
  November 8th, 2022 12:20
• Wedding Blessing (SureshG) This is a beautifully written piece of wisdom and blessing given at any...
  November 7th, 2022 16:35
• The Future (Bella Shepard) Thinking ahead before action is the wisest move Bella - a haiku with much...
  November 7th, 2022 16:26
• Storms Of Clearance. (Goldfinch60) Something usually turns up to clear the way forward -- thank you Andy for...
  November 4th, 2022 04:58
• Searching for Light (Neville) Wow - 800 eh ? - Rest up well dear Nev. while you have no internet - -...
  November 2nd, 2022 08:54
• Love song (Ninkasi) A gem of a write - such passion gently portrayed - thank you for sharing...
  November 2nd, 2022 07:31
• Laccaria Amethystina (Neville) Ooooh Laccaria Amethystina -- take care if you meet her - she\'s an ...
  October 31st, 2022 08:05
• Turtle On A Brick (Bella Shepard) Smiling big here Bella at your lightly perceptive poem so beautifully...
  October 30th, 2022 16:10
• MOONLIGHT LOVERS (Reese) So well penned this drift of fine metaphor on moonlight on lovers. Welcome...
  October 30th, 2022 11:31
• Primroses and Kites (Neville) Play-days are ever remembered when kites dance the blue in my daily...
  October 30th, 2022 06:12
• Caught (Fay Slimm.) Thanking you nudely - no I meant truly - - oh yes Nev- - fire out of...
  October 29th, 2022 09:36
• Looking Forward to Change (Neville) A child eventually grows into self-knowing and often surprises onlookers...
  October 29th, 2022 06:03
• forgive me, pater (Arqios) I admire your metaphors on where truth hides to expose itself.
  October 29th, 2022 05:58
• Flowing Around Your Life. (Goldfinch60) A delicate and perceptive write on the behaviour of wind - it comes and...
  October 29th, 2022 04:04
• Not Today, Thank You! (Orchidee) A wonder to behold would be Orchi in full song.
  October 29th, 2022 04:01
• Premature Evacuation (Neville) How often angry words uttered leave seeds of regret - - your spirited...
  October 28th, 2022 11:17
• BLINK (Ninkasi) A stunningly good use of metaphor - I love those drunken curtains in the...
  October 28th, 2022 11:03
• SHADOWS (Ninkasi) The essence of shadows that meander in memories is so expertly penned in...
  October 28th, 2022 07:27
• Ciao (Neville) Oooh Nev - - - this reads like the saddest of final farewells and in...
  October 27th, 2022 15:14
• Magic In Music. (Goldfinch60) I saw Tony Jacobs around 15 years back in Falmouth and so pleased to know...
  October 27th, 2022 11:45
• What have we done (Eugene) Yes Eugene - love is and always was and ever will be the way to express...
  October 25th, 2022 10:47
• Internally Yours (Neville) Sounds like some sort of pickling or stuffing a chicken - but whatever or...
  October 25th, 2022 05:32
• Together In Jazz. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful write on the evening\'s entertainment at your memorable hotel...
  October 25th, 2022 04:49
• Words Of The Wise. (Goldfinch60) Wisdom has to be allowed a hearing with quiet attention which sadly is...
  October 24th, 2022 16:12
• Dirty Linen (Neville) Thanking you truly mon ami for this gusty warning to whosoever when old...
  October 24th, 2022 04:58
• Narrow Margins (Neville) Regret for ever giving true love makes its telling so needed to those who...
  October 23rd, 2022 09:33
• elle était unique (Neville) Bespoke indeed is the one who has been and still is unique - - a poem to...
  October 22nd, 2022 10:10
• Nelson Went to Battle 2 (Goldfinch60) P.S. - -- oh wow - that jazz is just what I needed this morning - -...
  October 21st, 2022 05:30
• Nelson Went to Battle 2 (Goldfinch60) One of our much loved heroes is Nelson - a write that pays lighter...
  October 21st, 2022 05:22
• No Matter What Time it Is (Neville) Thanks for a write to think on a bit deeper Nev. - - Music ignores time...
  October 21st, 2022 03:44
• Wondrous Works (Orchidee) The heavens do truly declare glory if we but gaze upward - thanks for a...
  October 21st, 2022 02:29
• A Single Thought (Bella Shepard) Yeshow true Bella one single thought is so very powerful - --...
  October 20th, 2022 13:20
• Concern.... (Doggerel Dave) \"Who holds sway\" is the question more than many are asking here Dave - -...
  October 20th, 2022 10:31
• How on Earth Did She do That (Neville) Ah Nev. - - that She left her mark on someone methinks. An age-old talent...
  October 20th, 2022 07:01
• Finding Paradise. (Goldfinch60) Those three steps are vital to stay on that good road of Paradise. A fine...
  October 20th, 2022 01:36
• Peace Possible (Orchidee) I agree with Ric that faith seems so absent today from most people\'s...
  October 19th, 2022 04:34
• Beneath Putin’s Thumb (Neville) We may have grown accustomed to history repeating but not accepted that we...
  October 19th, 2022 04:27
• Grandma Wears Denim (Neville) Whew - - what a gal -- Who wouldn\'t be proud of a Granny like...
  October 18th, 2022 05:59
• Natures Orchestra. (Goldfinch60) I could hear in my mind those wonderful sounds of Nature\'s own music...
  October 18th, 2022 02:30
• With All My Fondest Regards (Neville) No more respectful approach to end an acid affair than contained in these...
  October 17th, 2022 12:38
• When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest (Neville) Sweeter than honey those long-ago days Nev. - -- remembering when love...
  October 16th, 2022 10:49
• Upon Testing Positive (Neville) You are too manly-strong to be under for long Nev. - - give that...
  October 15th, 2022 12:11