Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Someplace Where There Are Whales (Neville)
Wow - Nev. What an example of a five-line lesson of exposing much in...
February 7th, 2023 02:43 - developmental linguistics (Willowthewisp)
Hello Willow - - Yes remaining child-like is the secret of using...
February 6th, 2023 17:22 - Bitter Beddy-Byes (Rocky Lagou)
An engaging and well composed piece of reflection which captured my full...
February 6th, 2023 11:30 - tongue in cheek (Arqios)
An intriguing question hidden in these phrases that refer yet do not...
February 6th, 2023 10:08 - Love enough to care (Poetic Dan)
Oh Dan - your words in this poem show the very hard task of saying goodbye...
February 6th, 2023 09:59 - River And Time. (Goldfinch60)
I love the imagery of time like a river passing by - - such a wise piece...
February 6th, 2023 05:22 - If you will come (Wanderer soul)
Welcome to M.P.S. and a big thank you for posting this poignant look back...
February 6th, 2023 05:15 - Pre-date-Her (Neville)
A wee peep into group excitement remembered and recounted with expert...
February 6th, 2023 04:36 - Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once (Neville)
A warm moment of weather talk before that vague smile in a lover\'s...
February 5th, 2023 11:38 - Her Thing About Blue Eyes (Neville)
An outstanding write -- your short-line technique of presenting intrigue...
February 4th, 2023 04:06 - Who Was There? (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for this needed reminder dear Andy - --You describe true friends...
February 3rd, 2023 05:00 - What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now (Neville)
Smiles and laughter win every prize for lasting relationships and no...
February 3rd, 2023 04:12 - The Library of Time (Bella Shepard)
What a perceptive metaphor you use in the phrase The Library of Time ...
February 2nd, 2023 16:57 - Candlemas Communings (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi. Clearly written the account of Simeon\'s encounter with...
February 2nd, 2023 03:30 - Chasing the Carpet (Neville)
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to...
February 2nd, 2023 03:07 - Statues - a Rhymeless Rant (Doggerel Dave)
Your idea is the best Dave - put underneath the said statues the many...
February 1st, 2023 13:46 - Alone In Grief (Dove)
A haunt of a read and so clearly expressed --- a moving write Dove and...
February 1st, 2023 13:37 - Hello Again Marianne (Neville)
What an album to echo within your worthy words Nev. Cohen knew how to...
February 1st, 2023 09:41 - Possibilities. (Goldfinch60)
Possibilities are what makes life such an exciting challenge - - lovely...
January 31st, 2023 05:42 - With Her Head Full of Feathers .. (Neville)
\"Flying\" is just the right word for making high whoopee with someone you...
January 31st, 2023 05:13 - Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities (L. B. Mek)
Loud applause LB. for this well researched and powerful outcry for more...
January 30th, 2023 13:44 - Ageless Hippie. (Goldfinch60)
Those were the days my friend - and for folks like us Andy they have ...
January 29th, 2023 16:54 - Rainbows And Stars. (Goldfinch60)
A delight to see colour through dark events that sometimes overwhelm us - ...
January 29th, 2023 16:48 - Asking Assurances (Orchidee)
An inspiring read dear Orci
January 29th, 2023 16:45 - Making Out On a Loop (Neville)
Oh what an incorrigible romantic you are mon ami - who would not want to...
January 29th, 2023 16:42 - Sad Little Puppy (Bella Shepard)
Oh a wonderful story and with a good moral too - - thank you dear Bella...
January 28th, 2023 11:41 - Flawed #2 (Neville)
Obvious appears only to those who want to see - - some food for thought in...
January 28th, 2023 04:43 - The Confession (Neville)
Sensational write Nev. - The turquoise umbrella did it for me - -...
January 26th, 2023 09:08 - Laughter Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A truly unique pair that could bring on a smile whatever they did - - a...
January 25th, 2023 14:06 - Blessed is the advent of darkness! (Zain Khalid)
A powerful write Zain and fine reasons given for embracing \"fleeting...
January 25th, 2023 05:40 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
A summary of inner sadness never outed hence fabrication and changeable...
January 24th, 2023 10:18 - Cannot Get Back. (Goldfinch60)
How true your wise words Andy. Thank you for sharing and for the wonderful...
January 22nd, 2023 05:04 - A Single Truth For all Things Being Unequal (Neville)
Yes wholly agree mon ami that exciting adventures of finding both seen and...
January 22nd, 2023 05:02 - She Smelt Like 24 Carat Gold (Neville)
Strangely I can relate to the smell of reputedly odourless minerals...
January 21st, 2023 05:07 - The Day Before the Day Before Today (Neville)
Your penchant for telling intimate incidents ought to make any todays more...
January 20th, 2023 13:30 - Heartsure .. (Neville)
So clear the points caught here re.the heart Nev. - - listen to it and...
January 19th, 2023 07:46 - Where Were You? (Goldfinch60)
I agree that Sleep needs to be questioned when lying awake after midnight...
January 19th, 2023 04:00 - once (Arqios)
Oh those once experienced moments we thought would last forever and so...
January 18th, 2023 06:25 - A Handful of Random Thoughts and a Sunflower (Neville)
Ah those were the days eh ? Place and time brought beguilingly back with...
January 17th, 2023 07:10 - Presence, Power, Peace (Orchidee)
Interesting verses dear friend.
January 17th, 2023 05:52 - Cause and Affect (Neville)
A deep and thoughtful few lines amigo - -- Searching for differences...
January 16th, 2023 06:07 - More Than Nearly Dearly Departed (Neville)
A shudder of a read knowing how familiar this scene is in many countries -...
January 15th, 2023 05:12 - ODDS AND SAUSAGES (1 & 2) (Michael Edwards)
Haha - -- simply great to have you back posting again Mike - - and to see...
January 15th, 2023 04:25 - How Very Agincourt (Neville)
Loving the double usage of the word Bow here Nev. Inspired another angle...
January 14th, 2023 10:01 - Grace Given (Orchidee)
Much more from His grace than we ever imagine - - fine thoughts here Orhi.
January 13th, 2023 13:21 - Philosophy And Reason. (Goldfinch60)
Each to their own methinks on the subject of healing - -- mind no doubt...
January 13th, 2023 13:19 - An Uncertain Certainty (Neville)
Ah - I see a breakthrough to self confidence peeping from doubt in this...
January 13th, 2023 04:52 - Rape of the Sabine Women (Neville)
Outrageously kidnaped and then often raped these women raised the hackles...
January 12th, 2023 06:07 - Heed (Neville)
Am listening avidly to these few wise words mon ami and agree...
January 11th, 2023 05:10 - Pentecost Preaching (Orchidee)
A spirit-filled verse when prophesy fulfilled people saw visions and...
January 10th, 2023 12:25 - A Sure Sign of His Passing (Neville)
To have passed and no body cared or grieved must surely be the result of...
January 10th, 2023 04:40 - Cruising Past the Billboard That Declares: “It’s Ok to Say Gay” (Rocky Lagou)
Who indeed are we to be judge of anything Rocky - your outcry is heard by...
January 10th, 2023 03:49 - Atarashī Kodō ga Hajimaru Shunken (Neville)
Nothing like the first flutter felt inside of a new life forming and once...
January 9th, 2023 07:02 - The Violin Wept (Bella Shepard)
The power of your words flooded my heart too as the violin brought with...
January 8th, 2023 17:16 - My Biggest Fear (Rhmn_7)
Your words make a good case for being awake to who we are. and enjoying...
January 8th, 2023 08:54 - Something More Than Just Skin Deep (Neville)
The senses of love used by a romantic and told with such energy in line...
January 8th, 2023 06:22 - When I am Forgot (Neville)
A slice of regret comes over from this sad reflection on life and...
January 7th, 2023 06:14 - Believe In Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Dreams are a mystery and some of their themes can help us see the course...
January 7th, 2023 02:37 - Marina Girls (Neville)
Ah those scents of the sea bring back the most seductive memories Nev. -...
January 6th, 2023 11:44 - ENGLISH GARDENS (Danieloptera)
I understand so well tje points your verse makes on gardens and their care...
January 5th, 2023 10:01 - New Wine From Old Vines (Neville)
An intoxicating read and no doubt that if old vines can grow new shoots...
January 4th, 2023 13:40 - Amelie (Neville)
Courage shines from Amelie\'s sweet smile and wishes for her healthy...
January 2nd, 2023 16:54 - Forest of Ashes (Thinkerbell)
The ravage of fire is captured wo well in this lament for the innocent...
January 1st, 2023 12:34 - Distractions (Bella Shepard)
Yes lots I believe react badly to silence and solitude in these...
January 1st, 2023 11:31 - The Most Perfect Love (Neville)
The perfection of loving relationships so expertly here captured brings me...
January 1st, 2023 06:23 - When We Were Hot (Neville)
Ah those were the days mon ami eh ? - - - nothing like love to keep...
December 31st, 2022 01:10 - What Wasted Words They Proved Themselves to Be (Neville)
Your verse says it plainly to scribes who steal words or lines. Words...
December 30th, 2022 17:34 - View from an airplane window (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
You capture so well the thrill of flight over mountains and valleys and...
December 29th, 2022 17:27 - What a Bloody Waste (Neville)
Ah - what a shocking and tragic account of growing numbers who attempt...
December 29th, 2022 10:53 - Imagine A Time Like This. (Goldfinch60)
I am still dreaming of that wonderful world and hoping one day all this...
December 29th, 2022 04:43 - Whispering leaves (Alan b)
I love this perfect penning os three-line tribute to whispering leaves -...
December 28th, 2022 12:52 - From the Cradle to a Grave (Neville)
Quite understandable questions Nev. when life offers so little time to so...
December 28th, 2022 10:53 - Each Day I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
Oh yes - every day is indeed special and thank you for reminding us that...
December 28th, 2022 04:08 - SHORELINE (Michael Edwards)
A double pleasure dear Michael to read your word-picture post along with...
December 28th, 2022 02:37 - So What Does Your Father Do (Neville)
My father was a radio boffin who owned a few shops but we never saw much...
December 27th, 2022 13:31 - Taken From the Diary of a Contented Man (Neville)
A lovely read. - -- Truth is no fluke and contentment is shown to mean a...
December 26th, 2022 08:36 - Dayspring Dawning - Carol Series (13) (Orchidee)
Best of seasonal wished to you dear Orhi. -- Good write for tis special
December 25th, 2022 06:55 - For Mary. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful poem dear Andy to celebrate finding love with Mary.. Special...
December 25th, 2022 03:17 - Self Evaluation (Dr. Soma)
Wise words in this well penned verse of suggestions for Self Evaluation...
December 24th, 2022 10:37 - Somewhere Else Maybe (Neville)
Somewhere in this read it occurred to me clearly - romantic and gently ...
December 24th, 2022 10:29 - Love Letters (Neville)
What a tenderly penned story your words conjour today of the sad wait for...
December 23rd, 2022 06:52 - Mr. Bean (Bella Shepard)
What a delightful picture to head your excellent rhyme dear Bella which...
December 23rd, 2022 03:54 - Keep Each Seed Safe (Neville)
Such a tender reminder Nev. - - the miracle of combined reproduction so...
December 22nd, 2022 06:42 - Fear of Flying Solo (Neville)
Love\'s effect shines deeply in this sensitive write on how to guide...
December 21st, 2022 05:27 - As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact (Neville)
Ha -- Well that is so true when you put it like that - - and here was I...
December 20th, 2022 04:44 - Why Can’t We Always be Like This. (Goldfinch60)
Yes a sad state of affairs that our connections with others have to meet ...
December 19th, 2022 12:32 - The Things One Remembers (Neville)
Well they say sweat of infection releases strange dreams Nev.. You well ...
December 18th, 2022 07:14 - Concerning Some ‘C’ Words. (Doggerel Dave)
Your write so cleverly composed on the subject of matings is full of...
December 18th, 2022 03:27 - On the Verge of Another New Year (Neville)
Your well rhymed lines strike the right chords better than any media...
December 17th, 2022 07:55 - For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There (Neville)
A few lines of care and empathy mean so much to any forgotten ones...
December 16th, 2022 04:31 - Easy Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Wow - - what a thrill despite the cold hear to hear Apache again - takes...
December 16th, 2022 03:39 - Lullaby Dreams (Saxon Crow)
What an attractive title. Thanks for posting this tender write dear Sax...
December 16th, 2022 03:31 - A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing (Neville)
Just a thought after reading these few grieving lines Nev. - down...
December 15th, 2022 10:50 - The Gardeness (Neville)
Wow mi amigo - - methinks -your well penned lady sounds very close...
December 14th, 2022 05:44 - Another Fine DAy. (Goldfinch60)
Reading your words makes each day with a loved one a treasure whether...
December 13th, 2022 10:33 - Ukraine in Winter (Neville)
Too easy indeed my friend to not only imagine but strive to seek further...
December 13th, 2022 08:39 - Winter (Jerry Reynolds)
Loving this short but concise personification of winter\'s method of...
December 12th, 2022 14:45 - From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors (Neville)
A stanza of maybe confession of blame before naming those broken promises...
December 12th, 2022 10:55 - Songbirds Reprise (Saxon Crow)
Filled with care and pathos at what is lost when age takes over - your...
December 11th, 2022 10:36 - Mr Perpendicular (Neville)
Meaningful though this this three-liner be Nev. I must confess Mr. P. ...
December 11th, 2022 09:42
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