Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Gooder than Good Even (Neville) Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds...
  April 12th, 2022 03:15
• Gethsemane Gathering (Orchidee) Thanks Orchi for an apt reminder of this special time of the year to many...
  April 12th, 2022 02:42
• raft of reeds (Dusk arising) The opening lines say it all to me Dusk - - - - I relate to that never...
  April 12th, 2022 02:40
• Endless (Saxon Crow) Great read of inner-sight when holding a pebble - -- you have such a good...
  April 12th, 2022 02:32
• The Maze. (Chris Duffy) Life can appear like that maze to some on the edge of ending it all - -...
  April 12th, 2022 01:02
• Weird Family (Chris Duffy) Love your humour and rhyming ability in this chuckle-a-minute tale of a...
  April 12th, 2022 00:54
• Strange Friend. (Goldfinch60) Such wise words Andy - friends are but strangers we have met and now know....
  April 12th, 2022 00:40
• Even Sadder than That Even (Neville) The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words...
  April 11th, 2022 10:44
• Shining Love. (Goldfinch60) Love shines with many faces and you have found again a wonderful joy of...
  April 11th, 2022 01:38
• now ready to depart (Dusk arising) Hesitation lifting her veil is such a sheer dream of a line to read aloud...
  April 10th, 2022 11:35
• Free (Draven) Oh Draven - endings are always that bit sad - I know how it feels to sit...
  April 10th, 2022 09:03
• Can\'t Sit Still! (Christina8) A h - wishing you the bestest of times on your exciting trip dear...
  April 10th, 2022 09:00
• LIMERICKS 103 104 & 105 (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - you crease me up with every line of these clever limericks - - I...
  April 10th, 2022 06:57
• The Jolly Little Cafe Where A Chestnut Tree Once Grew (Monologue) (Alan .S. Jeeves) A wonderful piece of rhymed tale in this monologue Alan and so good to see...
  April 10th, 2022 06:27
• Why (Neville) The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your...
  April 10th, 2022 03:47
• Zen Tree (Neville) Thank you dear N. for showing by poetic talent how much power emptiness...
  March 28th, 2022 02:44
• ONCE (Michael Edwards) Times change and city gents retired to let in the \"young thrusters\" as...
  March 28th, 2022 01:39
• Little Birdie (Bella Shepard) A symphony of bird-song and penned so sweetly I felt I was there with you...
  March 27th, 2022 10:38
• On the Cusp of a Sneeze .. (Neville) Musing on what once was brings a bouquet of intimate memories and so well...
  March 27th, 2022 05:08
• Never Going Nowhere Maybe (Neville) Once love is exchanged no matter the time a couple remembers the highs of...
  March 26th, 2022 08:01
• War Veterans (Doggerel Dave) War\'s devastation penned with linguistic excellence - - a most...
  March 26th, 2022 03:41
• i will comfort you (Dusk arising) So utterly moving and what more can a friend offer than help to another...
  March 25th, 2022 07:13
• Back Together. (Goldfinch60) What a celebration when you two can meet up again - a most romantic...
  March 24th, 2022 15:26
• Tick Tock Bang (Jerry Reynolds) You penned the present chaos so well in this short verse Jerry and the...
  March 24th, 2022 13:32
• Taking it Slow (Neville) Slow is the way to go when you\'re wooing with netsukes - - saves all the...
  March 24th, 2022 05:34
• Lines (Spilleronsheet) Love this take on palmistry with its lines leading to fate etc. An...
  March 23rd, 2022 07:29
• A FINE TO-DO (Michael Edwards) You are the star at thinking outside the box so you are Mike - another...
  March 23rd, 2022 07:19
• Boldness Beseeching (Orchidee) A good write Orchi as a reminder that boldness often works best.
  March 23rd, 2022 07:14
• -Whisper of a Poet- (Dean langmuir) A wonderfully laid verse that shows the force of poetry Dean and so well...
  March 23rd, 2022 07:05
• Blush (Neville) Spring-filled imagery to sigh for in this little gem - I love the...
  March 23rd, 2022 06:11
• Not Just An Old Fella Passing (Neville) Poemed to perfection this caring tribute to a friend with a chest full of...
  March 22nd, 2022 08:10
• Bend and blend (Spilleronsheet) Without that bend we would be immune to the euphoric should it favour our...
  March 18th, 2022 13:48
• Peace Like My River. (Goldfinch60) May the peace of the river flow into our chaotic world soon my friend - ...
  March 18th, 2022 10:45
• Even When it’s All Over It’s Not Necessarily Over (Neville) This read of intimate happenings is filled with poignant remembrance of...
  March 17th, 2022 21:03
• Moon Love. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful and uplifting read dear Andy and showing where appreciation...
  March 17th, 2022 04:14
• What Might Once Have Been (Neville) Retrospection can be fraught with regrets and when so aptly penned it...
  March 16th, 2022 17:28
• Taunting Muse. (Goldfinch60) Ha - - I buy pens that can write upside down for when the Muse wakes me...
  March 15th, 2022 07:10
• LIMERICK 91 (Michael Edwards) Ha - - - good one again Mike - - Super image that adds its points to your...
  March 15th, 2022 04:36
• The Decline of Recollection (Neville) Tragic that saddest of all declines and so clearly penned by a writer who...
  March 13th, 2022 06:46
• Something Else Entirely (Neville) Well asked in your verse Nev but not to be answered is what flashes before...
  March 12th, 2022 04:21
• A Bowl Full of Nothing (Neville) Ah your pen sets the scene well Nev. - - when love affairs fall to an...
  March 11th, 2022 06:03
• The Colour of Rain (Daniel McDonagh) Hello Daniel - - with a late but friendly welcome to M.P.S. How...
  March 10th, 2022 16:39
• Schubert Starts The Day (Goldfinch60) What could be better than music with breakfast - - may it play you a most...
  March 10th, 2022 13:46
• how transient (Dusk arising) You poem the dire situation so well Dusk - -- we are the worst of...
  March 10th, 2022 11:26
• Oedipus (Neville) Oedipus would never prosper by taking up that odious offer - at least in...
  March 10th, 2022 09:52
• Once more with feeling…. (Doggerel Dave) The key Dave methinks has to be Greed which is exposed so often in \"deep...
  March 9th, 2022 13:37
• That MPS Glow (Christina8) Tis our pleasure to assist and you are one of our specials dear Christina...
  March 9th, 2022 13:16
• That Book. (Goldfinch60) Ah - that happens to me too dear friend - - a book can take us to other...
  March 9th, 2022 06:43
• Fore and Aft (Neville) Naught like those spicey ups and downs to keep life afloat - that\'s what...
  March 9th, 2022 06:35
• Same Old Blue Jeans (Neville) Once in those jeans time becomes ageless life becomes high again and hair...
  March 8th, 2022 11:30
• Chewing Gum Doggerel (Doggerel Dave) Nothing altered here re. the doggie poo but have not noticed chewing gum...
  March 7th, 2022 13:35
• accolade (Dusk arising) Let me be first then -- my dear dear Dusky - from me HAPPY BIRTHDAY ...
  March 7th, 2022 06:55
• How Well Will You Remember Me (Neville) An understandable plea from one whose warm heart needs that bit of...
  March 7th, 2022 05:50
• my muse went meowsy (Dusk arising) Muses are inclined to disappear if not given our whole attention and yours...
  March 6th, 2022 16:33
• Second Gift. (Goldfinch60) Dear Andy - -- having been off line for a while with damage to wrist I...
  March 6th, 2022 16:24
• No Ordinary Woman (Neville) Ah - - truly agreed Nev. - the word ordinary can never be applied to the...
  March 6th, 2022 05:32
• Being Here With You (Christina8) A letter of love which will no doubt steal his heart all over again dear...
  March 5th, 2022 14:16
• A Good Day On The Road (Goldfinch60) I waved from my Bentley but you never saw me - - you were busy noting...
  March 5th, 2022 11:28
• Burning light (Poetic Dan) Found these words very inspiring Dan - - just what I needed and thanks...
  March 5th, 2022 04:57
• SNIPPETS (1 & 2) (Michael Edwards) Love the back-handed truth in the second snippet Mike - - ouch if your...
  March 5th, 2022 04:55
• Professing People (Orchidee) Comforting thoughts dear Orchi.
  March 5th, 2022 04:48
• Not Wanting to be Famous (Neville) Fame can be dangerous to talented souls who need no glory - - there are...
  March 5th, 2022 04:47
• LIMERICKS 94 95 & 96 (Michael Edwards) ha ha Love em all.......... that young lady has a lot to answer for - -...
  March 4th, 2022 07:08
• The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue (Neville) So seriously sensual I could sip and savour each line - - so smoothly...
  March 4th, 2022 04:51
• the light we see we dont see (Dusk arising) Superb - - top class writing dear D. -- this one should be read worldwide...
  March 4th, 2022 01:58
• BLOOD (Rozina) Dear Rozina - such a true statement on blood and a very significant...
  March 3rd, 2022 07:19
• The Tale of Brulee (Neville) Your pen paints her beauty so well Nev - -- a lovely read.............x
  March 3rd, 2022 06:58
• A Scatter of Moments (Neville) beautifully put this tribute to a special someone dear nev --- glad to...
  March 2nd, 2022 05:01
• careless dusting (Dusk arising) very moving walk down memory lane dear friend
  March 2nd, 2022 03:32
• Space And Time. (Goldfinch60) love the thought andy and thanks for sharing it
  March 2nd, 2022 03:30
• LET NOT OUR SKIN DIVIDE (Michael Edwards) excellent summary with such a telling title mike -- -- saved this poetic...
  March 2nd, 2022 03:28
• Between Squalls (Neville) Ignore they squalls Nev and get yaself home, warm an better agen...
  March 1st, 2022 04:26
• A Heavy Load (Doggerel Dave) Love the rhyme and the pace of this trundle down memory lane - as I take...
  February 24th, 2022 08:59
• Another South West Coastal Path Miracle (Neville) A captivating few moments with scenic setting for the male character to...
  February 24th, 2022 04:53
• Against All Odds (Christina8) Wonderful example of abiding love Christina and just right for an...
  February 23rd, 2022 12:13
• A Sonnet Attempt (Rozina) Loud applause for this rose-scented sonnet attempt - top marks
  February 23rd, 2022 09:01
• Healing Wholeness (Orchidee) Good thoughts on healing and thank you for sharing them dear Orchi.
  February 23rd, 2022 07:00
• Haiku #1 Maybe (Neville) Over or not that way to go sounds real good to me - - so let\'s start a...
  February 23rd, 2022 04:49
• Craving My Lover (Jane Clemons) Worded with undiluted expression of addiction experience this read really...
  February 23rd, 2022 03:55
• In The Northwoods (Jane Clemons) Ah such apt imagery that will linger long in readers\' minds Jane and...
  February 23rd, 2022 03:29
• Yellow (Jane Clemons) Delighted to have caught your verse of all things yellow and poemed with...
  February 23rd, 2022 03:18
• Confrontation (Spilleronsheet) Yes the hidden inner has much to teach dear spills - your lead up to...
  February 22nd, 2022 16:54
• LIMERICK 87 (Michael Edwards) He he - - hope you never tried that in the recent wind my delightfully...
  February 22nd, 2022 16:51
• Persevering Purpose (Orchidee) I enjoyed the read of how to find peace - thank you Orchi.
  February 22nd, 2022 09:06
• Just a Series of Thoughts (Neville) Two views from observing luna appearance and thinking in metaphor - - I...
  February 22nd, 2022 05:58
• At One With Nature Once More. (Goldfinch60) You describe so well the way to see nature and its gifts dear Andy - - to...
  February 22nd, 2022 02:25
• Eternally Yours (Christina8) So pleased I caught this little gem of honest confession with a very...
  February 21st, 2022 17:15
• True Love (Christina8) Such beautiful words. A heart-warming verse of romantic endearments - it...
  February 21st, 2022 17:11
• I Fell in Love : Rondelet (Dove) Great and impressive style dear Dove - I love reading bold repetition.
  February 21st, 2022 08:52
• Five Beatles and a Groupie (Neville) Grinning at this bit of bringing back \"those-were-the-days\" Nev - I...
  February 21st, 2022 03:39
• Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle (Dove) A very good style of telling and showing by Villanelle spacing a scene...
  February 20th, 2022 07:41
• A Long Pretence (Neville) Sad thought but time to call it a day when there is not even a trace of...
  February 20th, 2022 06:26
• but unbeaten (Dusk arising) A heart that beats with unbeatable courage and hope comes out tops in this...
  February 19th, 2022 17:11
• OUT OF THE BLUE! (FallenAngel1🕊) A verse full of happy smiles when love comes out of the blue. Thanks fo...
  February 19th, 2022 10:25
• A Single X   (Neville) So good to have you back today Nev. and to read your welcome intriguingly...
  February 19th, 2022 07:42
• Love To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Simply wonderful this love you have with your chosen lady is immortal and...
  February 14th, 2022 09:37
• You know Val? (Orchidee) Toast at the ready with glass filled with wine - - happy Valentine dear...
  February 14th, 2022 09:31
• Valentine Day (Jerry Reynolds) Good lesson to learn in this three liner dear Jerry - - Love has many...
  February 14th, 2022 09:23
• Love (SureshG) Thanks for this reminder of truth dear Suresh when love puts hearts under...
  February 14th, 2022 09:20
• Love: Connate (L. B. Mek) A pleasure to read the classic approach to this special day of reviewing...
  February 14th, 2022 06:38