Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- A Garden Of Joy (Rozina)
What a lovely surprise this post is my friend -- a garden personified by...
February 14th, 2022 06:31 - Need I? (Garth Rakumakoe)
Such force in your words of reminders to \"hug the clock\" and further to...
February 12th, 2022 08:32 - Untold (Spilleronsheet)
A heart-touching piece of written grief dear Spills and so well captured...
February 11th, 2022 07:05 - LIMERICK 81 (Michael Edwards)
A first chuckle of my day Mike due to your limerick as I gaze at your...
February 11th, 2022 03:56 - Thinking Old. (Goldfinch60)
With you all the way in your view of thinking old my friend - - our minds...
February 11th, 2022 03:51 - Help Is At Hand (Orchidee)
A lovely verse of praise.
February 10th, 2022 17:22 - LIMERICK 80 (Michael Edwards)
Haha - - just as I expected you have such a wit with your limericks my...
February 10th, 2022 17:21 - Sol (Dusk arising)
Perfectly expressed the oncoming of dawn my dear friend - - your pen...
February 10th, 2022 11:00 - Pause (Spilleronsheet)
Such a vivid and heart-moving read dear spills on the pace of life - -...
February 10th, 2022 03:39 - Making Space (Draven)
You pen that escape from the cage of stress so well dear Draven and your...
February 8th, 2022 16:51 - peace (Dusk arising)
Step by step your lines lead to peace and love - a beautiful place to be...
February 3rd, 2022 13:17 - Mont St Michel (Keith)
Beautifully poemed this compellingly worded tribute of prose to a late...
February 2nd, 2022 08:10 - Ode to Dead Bird (Sylviasearcher)
And your words dear Sylvia weave care around the sad scene with this...
February 2nd, 2022 04:27 - Oh Summer – Tra La La (Doggerel Dave)
I love your whinges and this piece of rhymed sweating through extra heat...
February 1st, 2022 16:07 - A PERSON POOR (Keith)
A poetic lament that sears the heart when what is longed for is not...
February 1st, 2022 15:57 - You Crossed My Mind (Draven)
A message of sadness but of remembering the positive times spent together...
February 1st, 2022 14:11 - Yankee Jack (Neville)
Well I confess I didn\'t know Jack before your first class information and...
February 1st, 2022 06:40 - Songs (Draven)
A sound and well written piece of advice to end your two stanza posting...
January 31st, 2022 11:28 - LOVE IS NOT RED ROSES (Keith)
The flow of your loving expressions warms this reader\'s heart - that\'s...
January 31st, 2022 07:08 - To Fade Without Warning (Neville)
The sudden end of what was once seen and felt comes over so aptly in these...
January 31st, 2022 05:52 - Judgement And Justice (Orchidee)
A lovely read dear Orchi.
January 30th, 2022 05:01 - Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’ (Neville)
What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the...
January 30th, 2022 04:34 - Online (Rozina)
I can relate to your message Rozina and using birds on wires as an is...
January 29th, 2022 06:46 - SLEEP (Keith)
I love this superb assessment of urges to fight sleep with those \"worms...
January 28th, 2022 05:24 - What it All Boils Down To (Neville)
Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty...
January 28th, 2022 05:15 - Thoughts 8 (MendedFences27)
Sad but such romantic and poetic reflections on what love can put us...
January 28th, 2022 03:14 - Hot Air. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - a ride through the clouds the result of hot air - your words ...
January 28th, 2022 03:09 - SHORT MEASURES (5) (Michael Edwards)
Hhhmmm - a smelly read Mike but what fantastic artwork.
January 27th, 2022 16:31 - Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce (AuburnScribbler)
Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve...
January 27th, 2022 16:29 - She Danced (Buzz Bray)
Am so glad to have caught you dancing with angels Buzz - a reminder that...
January 27th, 2022 09:20 - The wooden plank (Spilleronsheet)
What an inspiring personlising you made of that wooden plank spills - my...
January 27th, 2022 09:16 - Vow (Keith)
A love affair with ancient buildings - we have that in common to a degree...
January 27th, 2022 09:10 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some...
January 27th, 2022 05:12 - The Jazz Quartet. (Goldfinch60)
What a performance straight from each musician\'s heart - - I love good...
January 27th, 2022 02:31 - Until the Rain Turns Red (Keith)
Yes -- when carnival\'s over reality can hurt - - an intriguing read...
January 26th, 2022 17:15 - War Dance (Jerry Reynolds)
A poetic statement which hits where it hurts - what a sad old world when...
January 26th, 2022 17:01 - Conveniently Forgot (Neville)
Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated...
January 26th, 2022 06:21 - Dimples - Acrostic (Dove)
Love the clever quadruple acrostics on gentle erotica - -=- am sure they...
January 25th, 2022 12:25 - My village (Hakikur Rahman)
A calming and well written write of your beautiful village dear...
January 24th, 2022 06:41 - A HART STOPPED (Keith)
The pain of causing any harm to a creature of indescribable beauty must...
January 23rd, 2022 16:41 - within the depths of beyond (Dusk arising)
Brilliant writing again my friend, - -- must have this one in my list for...
January 22nd, 2022 14:42 - My Island of Peace (Goldfinch60)
I am on my way to join your wondrous island my friend. What could be...
January 22nd, 2022 14:40 - PLAZA DE LA LUNA (Keith)
A once in a lifetime experience and you pen the occasion so memorably...
January 22nd, 2022 10:45 - SHORT MEASURES (1) (Michael Edwards)
Short indeed but telling a truth we all need to heed my friend. A super...
January 22nd, 2022 07:01 - Someone Else’s Religion Maybe (Neville)
Reading between exposes bigotry and is vital when lines are mainly...
January 21st, 2022 06:46 - Sing on, Sting (Keith)
Thanks Keith for sharing what once was a lady and for touching the core of...
January 21st, 2022 04:47 - Is Anybody There? (Goldfinch60)
Those starry spaces must mean something for us earthling dear Andy and one...
January 20th, 2022 16:16 - She (Charles Edward York)
So sensuously written - I truly enjoyed the read Charles.
January 20th, 2022 10:29 - Within These Walls.... (Keith)
A perfectly worded tribute which slowly unwinds the secrets that poet left...
January 20th, 2022 09:38 - bird of love (Dusk arising)
Such imagery will leap into every heart as its message drives home dear...
January 20th, 2022 03:28 - Divorced (Paul Bell)
Ha - laughed my socks off at this divorce story - am wondering if Julie...
January 19th, 2022 16:19 - Wolf Moon (haiku) (GypsyLady)
These few lines really enhance the picture you chose - first rate haiku
January 19th, 2022 14:23 - Blithe (Draven)
A stunningly good end to your poetry challenge Draven - - how true that...
January 19th, 2022 12:30 - halls of otherness (Dusk arising)
Wow - you excel yourself again with this little gem Dusk - - a dream of a...
January 19th, 2022 12:22 - THE CROW (Keith)
The gentle flow in this nature poem draws such a picture that I felt I was...
January 19th, 2022 08:56 - Grace Gloryings (Orchidee)
An engaging write my friend.
January 19th, 2022 05:59 - Like a Lark on the Rise (Neville)
Endings could never be sweeter that this - - yu\'ve dun it agen for me...
January 19th, 2022 04:50 - sands fell slow (Dusk arising)
Late in the day age-wise brings its own music of promise and you spelled...
January 18th, 2022 17:01 - Empty Can. (Goldfinch60)
You use the right word for this kind of behaviour my friend - -...
January 18th, 2022 16:57 - \'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses (Rozina)
Am giggling at your portrayal of people who live for luxury and being...
January 18th, 2022 05:46 - Checking the Night Sky (Neville)
Faced with endurance those ridges seen with poetic vision glow like jewels...
January 18th, 2022 03:41 - for living (Dusk arising)
I know how this feels Dusk and yet we must keep going despite life\'s...
January 17th, 2022 13:45 - The one percent that matters (Spilleronsheet)
What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this...
January 17th, 2022 06:25 - Song to Seville - La Esperanza (Keith)
Filled with gentle erotic the mood bites deep as your pen roves Seville\'s...
January 17th, 2022 05:46 - Cafe Solo (Keith)
You paint aloneness so engaging and needed in finding ways home Keith - ...
January 17th, 2022 04:26 - Respect For All. (Goldfinch60)
Sadly agreed with your every word here dear Andy - - with no respect the...
January 17th, 2022 04:13 - Who’s for Tennis? (Doggerel Dave)
Ah - so clever this poetic rhyming of reasons for gripe - - we certainly...
January 17th, 2022 04:10 - Now Pinned to the Sky (Neville)
Waste indeed Nev the abuse of child labour for indifferent war and writ...
January 17th, 2022 03:23 - More Than Just barely a Flutter (Neville)
The risk of losing all by uncertainty is brought to mind here by your...
January 15th, 2022 05:23 - Narrow mind, silent heart (Saxon Crow)
Oh how true your few words Sax.
January 7th, 2022 03:08 - LIMERICK 76 (Michael Edwards)
Hi again Mike - so glad to see the posting of your wonderful artwork again...
January 7th, 2022 03:08 - Looking Forward. (Goldfinch60)
One of the best of our senses is joy and you are a fine example of its...
January 7th, 2022 03:04 - soulmate (Dusk arising)
Appropriate and so well scripted questions on this tricky subject dear...
January 6th, 2022 03:26 - So Beautiful (Charles Edward York)
What a beautiful tribute and picture of a lady well loved, Thank you for...
January 5th, 2022 05:47 - Twelfth Night (Goldfinch60)
Yes how true Andy - - - that is what\'s called \"retail initiative\" and...
January 5th, 2022 04:04 - The cycle of life (Spilleronsheet)
Yes dear spills - You cornered the truth about us all being fated and...
January 4th, 2022 16:51 - Fast lane thoughts (Poetic Dan)
Cheering loudly for this inspiring piece of wise knowledge on how to walk...
January 4th, 2022 16:43 - Waiting For The Snow (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah yes - I remember it well and those snowmen eyes just had to be...
January 4th, 2022 16:23 - Watch out for and look out for (Spilleronsheet)
I love your use of metaphor in this little warning of what might arise -...
January 3rd, 2022 13:47 - Mermaid- Acrostic (Dove)
Your mermaid has much appeal Dove and a deal of pity as well - a super...
January 3rd, 2022 11:32 - Barely Semi Touched (Neville)
Ah the unquenchable miss of those who loved are now barely available...
January 3rd, 2022 11:29 - pain (Dusk arising)
Heart-tugging these words from the depths of honesty - - \"learning to...
January 3rd, 2022 10:43 - CLAUS THE BUILDERS - COMPLAINT (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - Loud applause for your wicked wit Mike - -- am more than...
January 3rd, 2022 02:39 - their world (Dusk arising)
I second that and muchly dear Dusk - - saving the planet is for more...
January 2nd, 2022 10:51 - Yore (Draven)
Of course we can start again any old time but how many of us as your piece...
January 2nd, 2022 10:48 - Winter Fog (Jerry Reynolds)
Three lines that say it all Jerry - -and leaving the clever imagery to...
January 2nd, 2022 10:46 - today, and the rest of 2022 (SureshG)
We certainly could do with that kind of booster Suresh - -- a shot of...
January 1st, 2022 13:08 - Wish all my dear friends Happy New Year (Spilleronsheet)
A beautiful bouquet of New Year wishes for which I say a very big thank...
December 31st, 2021 17:57 - Lessons from the Beach II (Eugene S.)
Classic to its engaging end is this well-crafted tribute to lessons we...
December 31st, 2021 13:13 - UNDER THE MILK-SOFT CLOUDS (T. Boston)
The words flow with ease in this ballad to moon-glow and what went before...
December 31st, 2021 13:09 - Untitled - LV (SureshG)
Methinks too that It has to be that way to get to the truth Suresh. Your...
December 31st, 2021 12:08 - destiny (Dusk arising)
Excellent advice to read over again and digest - -thanks dear Dusk for...
December 31st, 2021 06:19 - Sated (Neville)
Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that\'s a most novel way to put it - -- the...
December 31st, 2021 06:09 - It Don’t Help to Forget None (Neville)
Words mean a lot to a lady when they come from a purely romantic heart -...
December 30th, 2021 11:26 - Chasing Light (Neville)
Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and...
December 30th, 2021 01:41 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (19-21) (Michael Edwards)
You have done it again Mike - - - left me smilingly speechless - - your...
December 29th, 2021 07:01 - Crystalline (Draven)
Less can be more in poetry -well done with this little gem Draven
December 29th, 2021 06:58 - Singing In The Bar. (Goldfinch60)
Those were the days my friend - - and they never end in the memories they...
December 29th, 2021 04:02 - Missing Moonlight (Dove)
Thanks for this bouquet of \"what ifs\" that remind us of gifts like the...
December 28th, 2021 08:56 - On Being But a Poet (Neville)
As suitable a place as any methinks Nev. for a dreamer to rest covered...
December 28th, 2021 08:53
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