Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Love enough to care (Poetic Dan)
Oh Dan - your words in this poem show the very hard task of saying goodbye...
February 6th, 2023 09:59 - River And Time. (Goldfinch60)
I love the imagery of time like a river passing by - - such a wise piece...
February 6th, 2023 05:22 - If you will come (Wanderer soul)
Welcome to M.P.S. and a big thank you for posting this poignant look back...
February 6th, 2023 05:15 - Pre-date-Her (Neville)
A wee peep into group excitement remembered and recounted with expert...
February 6th, 2023 04:36 - Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once (Neville)
A warm moment of weather talk before that vague smile in a lover\'s...
February 5th, 2023 11:38 - Her Thing About Blue Eyes (Neville)
An outstanding write -- your short-line technique of presenting intrigue...
February 4th, 2023 04:06 - Who Was There? (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for this needed reminder dear Andy - --You describe true friends...
February 3rd, 2023 05:00 - What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now (Neville)
Smiles and laughter win every prize for lasting relationships and no...
February 3rd, 2023 04:12 - The Library of Time (Bella Shepard)
What a perceptive metaphor you use in the phrase The Library of Time ...
February 2nd, 2023 16:57 - Candlemas Communings (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi. Clearly written the account of Simeon\'s encounter with...
February 2nd, 2023 03:30 - Chasing the Carpet (Neville)
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to...
February 2nd, 2023 03:07 - Statues - a Rhymeless Rant (Doggerel Dave)
Your idea is the best Dave - put underneath the said statues the many...
February 1st, 2023 13:46 - Alone In Grief (Dove)
A haunt of a read and so clearly expressed --- a moving write Dove and...
February 1st, 2023 13:37 - Hello Again Marianne (Neville)
What an album to echo within your worthy words Nev. Cohen knew how to...
February 1st, 2023 09:41 - Possibilities. (Goldfinch60)
Possibilities are what makes life such an exciting challenge - - lovely...
January 31st, 2023 05:42
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