Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• What it All Boils Down To (Neville) Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty...
  January 28th, 2022 05:15
• Hot Air. (Goldfinch60) Ha ha - - a ride through the clouds the result of hot air - your words ...
  January 28th, 2022 03:09
• SHORT MEASURES (5) (Michael Edwards) Hhhmmm - a smelly read Mike but what fantastic artwork.
  January 27th, 2022 16:31
• Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce (AuburnScribbler) Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve...
  January 27th, 2022 16:29
• She Danced (Buzz Bray) Am so glad to have caught you dancing with angels Buzz - a reminder that...
  January 27th, 2022 09:20
• The wooden plank (Spilleronsheet) What an inspiring personlising you made of that wooden plank spills - my...
  January 27th, 2022 09:16
• Vow (Keith) A love affair with ancient buildings - we have that in common to a degree...
  January 27th, 2022 09:10
• Double Jeopardy (Neville) Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some...
  January 27th, 2022 05:12
• The Jazz Quartet. (Goldfinch60) What a performance straight from each musician\'s heart - - I love good...
  January 27th, 2022 02:31
• Until the Rain Turns Red (Keith) Yes -- when carnival\'s over reality can hurt - - an intriguing read...
  January 26th, 2022 17:15
• War Dance (Jerry Reynolds) A poetic statement which hits where it hurts - what a sad old world when...
  January 26th, 2022 17:01
• Conveniently Forgot (Neville) Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated...
  January 26th, 2022 06:21
• Dimples - Acrostic (Dove) Love the clever quadruple acrostics on gentle erotica - -=- am sure they...
  January 25th, 2022 12:25
• My village (Hakikur Rahman) A calming and well written write of your beautiful village dear...
  January 24th, 2022 06:41
• A HART STOPPED (Keith) The pain of causing any harm to a creature of indescribable beauty must...
  January 23rd, 2022 16:41
• within the depths of beyond (Dusk arising) Brilliant writing again my friend, - -- must have this one in my list for...
  January 22nd, 2022 14:42
• My Island of Peace (Goldfinch60) I am on my way to join your wondrous island my friend. What could be...
  January 22nd, 2022 14:40
• PLAZA DE LA LUNA (Keith) A once in a lifetime experience and you pen the occasion so memorably...
  January 22nd, 2022 10:45
• SHORT MEASURES (1) (Michael Edwards) Short indeed but telling a truth we all need to heed my friend. A super...
  January 22nd, 2022 07:01
• Someone Else’s Religion Maybe (Neville) Reading between exposes bigotry and is vital when lines are mainly...
  January 21st, 2022 06:46
• Sing on, Sting (Keith) Thanks Keith for sharing what once was a lady and for touching the core of...
  January 21st, 2022 04:47
• Is Anybody There? (Goldfinch60) Those starry spaces must mean something for us earthling dear Andy and one...
  January 20th, 2022 16:16
• She (Charles Edward York) So sensuously written - I truly enjoyed the read Charles.
  January 20th, 2022 10:29
• Within These Walls.... (Keith) A perfectly worded tribute which slowly unwinds the secrets that poet left...
  January 20th, 2022 09:38
• bird of love (Dusk arising) Such imagery will leap into every heart as its message drives home dear...
  January 20th, 2022 03:28
• Wolf Moon (haiku) (GypsyLady) These few lines really enhance the picture you chose - first rate haiku
  January 19th, 2022 14:23
• Blithe (Draven) A stunningly good end to your poetry challenge Draven - - how true that...
  January 19th, 2022 12:30
• halls of otherness (Dusk arising) Wow - you excel yourself again with this little gem Dusk - - a dream of a...
  January 19th, 2022 12:22
• THE CROW (Keith) The gentle flow in this nature poem draws such a picture that I felt I was...
  January 19th, 2022 08:56
• Grace Gloryings (Orchidee) An engaging write my friend.
  January 19th, 2022 05:59
• Like a Lark on the Rise (Neville) Endings could never be sweeter that this - - yu\'ve dun it agen for me...
  January 19th, 2022 04:50
• sands fell slow (Dusk arising) Late in the day age-wise brings its own music of promise and you spelled...
  January 18th, 2022 17:01
• Empty Can. (Goldfinch60) You use the right word for this kind of behaviour my friend - -...
  January 18th, 2022 16:57
• \'Keeping Up\' With The Joneses (Rozina) Am giggling at your portrayal of people who live for luxury and being...
  January 18th, 2022 05:46
• Checking the Night Sky (Neville) Faced with endurance those ridges seen with poetic vision glow like jewels...
  January 18th, 2022 03:41
• for living (Dusk arising) I know how this feels Dusk and yet we must keep going despite life\'s...
  January 17th, 2022 13:45
• The one percent that matters (Spilleronsheet) What an inspiring read and thanking you more than you know for this...
  January 17th, 2022 06:25
• Song to Seville - La Esperanza (Keith) Filled with gentle erotic the mood bites deep as your pen roves Seville\'s...
  January 17th, 2022 05:46
• Cafe Solo (Keith) You paint aloneness so engaging and needed in finding ways home Keith - ...
  January 17th, 2022 04:26
• Respect For All. (Goldfinch60) Sadly agreed with your every word here dear Andy - - with no respect the...
  January 17th, 2022 04:13
• Who’s for Tennis? (Doggerel Dave) Ah - so clever this poetic rhyming of reasons for gripe - - we certainly...
  January 17th, 2022 04:10
• Now Pinned to the Sky (Neville) Waste indeed Nev the abuse of child labour for indifferent war and writ...
  January 17th, 2022 03:23
• More Than Just barely a Flutter (Neville) The risk of losing all by uncertainty is brought to mind here by your...
  January 15th, 2022 05:23
• Narrow mind, silent heart (Saxon Crow) Oh how true your few words Sax.
  January 7th, 2022 03:08
• LIMERICK 76 (Michael Edwards) Hi again Mike - so glad to see the posting of your wonderful artwork again...
  January 7th, 2022 03:08
• Looking Forward. (Goldfinch60) One of the best of our senses is joy and you are a fine example of its...
  January 7th, 2022 03:04
• soulmate (Dusk arising) Appropriate and so well scripted questions on this tricky subject dear...
  January 6th, 2022 03:26
• So Beautiful (Charles Edward York) What a beautiful tribute and picture of a lady well loved, Thank you for...
  January 5th, 2022 05:47
• Twelfth Night (Goldfinch60) Yes how true Andy - - - that is what\'s called \"retail initiative\" and...
  January 5th, 2022 04:04
• The cycle of life (Spilleronsheet) Yes dear spills - You cornered the truth about us all being fated and...
  January 4th, 2022 16:51
• Fast lane thoughts (Poetic Dan) Cheering loudly for this inspiring piece of wise knowledge on how to walk...
  January 4th, 2022 16:43
• Waiting For The Snow (Jerry Reynolds) Ah yes - I remember it well and those snowmen eyes just had to be...
  January 4th, 2022 16:23
• Watch out for and look out for (Spilleronsheet) I love your use of metaphor in this little warning of what might arise -...
  January 3rd, 2022 13:47
• Mermaid- Acrostic (Dove) Your mermaid has much appeal Dove and a deal of pity as well - a super...
  January 3rd, 2022 11:32
• Barely Semi Touched (Neville) Ah the unquenchable miss of those who loved are now barely available...
  January 3rd, 2022 11:29
• pain (Dusk arising) Heart-tugging these words from the depths of honesty - - \"learning to...
  January 3rd, 2022 10:43
• CLAUS THE BUILDERS - COMPLAINT (Michael Edwards) Ha - - Loud applause for your wicked wit Mike - -- am more than...
  January 3rd, 2022 02:39
• their world (Dusk arising) I second that and muchly dear Dusk - - saving the planet is for more...
  January 2nd, 2022 10:51
• Yore (Draven) Of course we can start again any old time but how many of us as your piece...
  January 2nd, 2022 10:48
• Winter Fog (Jerry Reynolds) Three lines that say it all Jerry - -and leaving the clever imagery to...
  January 2nd, 2022 10:46
• today, and the rest of 2022 (SureshG) We certainly could do with that kind of booster Suresh - -- a shot of...
  January 1st, 2022 13:08
• Wish all my dear friends Happy New Year (Spilleronsheet) A beautiful bouquet of New Year wishes for which I say a very big thank...
  December 31st, 2021 17:57
• Lessons from the Beach II (Eugene S.) Classic to its engaging end is this well-crafted tribute to lessons we...
  December 31st, 2021 13:13
• UNDER THE MILK-SOFT CLOUDS (T. Boston) The words flow with ease in this ballad to moon-glow and what went before...
  December 31st, 2021 13:09
• Untitled - LV (SureshG) Methinks too that It has to be that way to get to the truth Suresh. Your...
  December 31st, 2021 12:08
• destiny (Dusk arising) Excellent advice to read over again and digest - -thanks dear Dusk for...
  December 31st, 2021 06:19
• Sated (Neville) Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that\'s a most novel way to put it - -- the...
  December 31st, 2021 06:09
• It Don’t Help to Forget None (Neville) Words mean a lot to a lady when they come from a purely romantic heart -...
  December 30th, 2021 11:26
• Chasing Light (Neville) Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and...
  December 30th, 2021 01:41
• A COUPLET COLLECTION (19-21) (Michael Edwards) You have done it again Mike - - - left me smilingly speechless - - your...
  December 29th, 2021 07:01
• Crystalline (Draven) Less can be more in poetry -well done with this little gem Draven
  December 29th, 2021 06:58
• Singing In The Bar. (Goldfinch60) Those were the days my friend - - and they never end in the memories they...
  December 29th, 2021 04:02
• Missing Moonlight (Dove) Thanks for this bouquet of \"what ifs\" that remind us of gifts like the...
  December 28th, 2021 08:56
• On Being But a Poet (Neville) As suitable a place as any methinks Nev. for a dreamer to rest covered...
  December 28th, 2021 08:53
• This Fleeting Day (A.H. Browning) Ah - an inspiring first read of my day dear poet and thank you for...
  December 28th, 2021 02:56
• Such A Lucky Man. (Goldfinch60) You phrase your life in such grateful words Andy and we can all follow...
  December 28th, 2021 02:46
• though tears (Dusk arising) Ah - -Dusk how I relate to your words today. Tears are a gift for calming...
  December 27th, 2021 03:42
• A Life Lived Sadly (Neville) Certainly a variant Nev. - -- even within the title an important ...
  December 26th, 2021 13:32
• Dance The Day. (Goldfinch60) Just listened to the number by Rick Wakeman and Wow - - what a great...
  December 25th, 2021 03:35
• Dance The Day. (Goldfinch60) Ah - - such a grand set of wishes for good things to come - - thanks for...
  December 25th, 2021 03:29
• Solstice (Draven) The cold always suits me better too - thanks for the solstice verse...
  December 24th, 2021 09:08
• Flames (Draven) Oh Draven a spark can indeed fire a whole forest - -what a haunt of a...
  December 23rd, 2021 16:50
• HAPPY HOLIDAYS (Laura🌻) And may your kind wishes bring the same happiness back to your own door...
  December 23rd, 2021 11:38
• A Life Sadly Lived (Neville) The title alone of this sensitive verse brought a lump to my throat -...
  December 23rd, 2021 07:24
• Happy Birthday Again Chet. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for this great sound of Chet dear Andy -- Brilliant artist and so...
  December 23rd, 2021 03:11
• A MERRY CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards) A lovely cartoon to illustrate your kind wishes dear Michael - - sending...
  December 23rd, 2021 03:08
• velvet (Dusk arising) Simply brilliant these poetic expressions of dawn\'s entrance. One for my...
  December 22nd, 2021 16:32
• The Taking of Innocence (Neville) Rape would make a saint angry - this write needs reading by a far larger...
  December 22nd, 2021 05:50
• Examples Elicited (Orchidee) Time spent trying to better the spirit is never wasted as love, peace and...
  December 22nd, 2021 03:36
• What A Wonderful Day I Had Had. (Goldfinch60) Your day sounds so well spent and rewarding in all ways dear Andy and...
  December 22nd, 2021 03:30
• Touch A Leaf, Hug A Tree (Garth Rakumakoe) This write goes straight to my favourites Garth - a piece of sound wisdom...
  December 21st, 2021 16:42
• The Sea (Coyote) One of my favourite subjects about which to write is the gloriously...
  December 21st, 2021 16:34
• Midwinter (Draven) Can feel for you in that low temp. dear Draven - your words paint so...
  December 21st, 2021 13:19
• Quarry (Neville) Can see you know the inns and the out of the poaching game Nev. - - shall...
  December 21st, 2021 09:15
• Signing Out (Neville) How could a muse forsake thee who weaves words so endearingly wrapped for...
  December 20th, 2021 15:54
• gently now withdrawn (Dusk arising) Such a heart-moving read Dusk.The power of metaphor in this poetic gem is...
  December 20th, 2021 12:19
• turn back the clock (Dusk arising) A question well put to know who would do much different if clocks were...
  December 17th, 2021 15:01
• The Realisation of Probability (Neville) Ha - - Who says we\'re all out of they pheromones mon ami ? - - - - ...
  December 16th, 2021 11:46
• No Longer in The Making (Neville) Perfumed as such no wonder their memory could not be forgotten - you...
  December 15th, 2021 09:13
• what are we? (Dusk arising) No tragedy worse my friend than the murder of innocents - like yourself I...
  December 14th, 2021 11:30