Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Legacy (Suresh)
Cute! But a legacy only if your death gets noticed. Depends where u fit...
June 17th, 2020 22:05 - Bankers collapse (Gavin)
When i read your title \'bankers collapse\' i wondered if it was a new...
June 17th, 2020 05:53 - Bring it on (Poetic Dan)
The principles passed to us in your vid today apply to many...
June 17th, 2020 03:42 - Delightful Dwelling (Orchidee)
So why don\'t westerners follow the jewish faith? The actual faith of the...
June 17th, 2020 02:54 - Poem, If Jesus is the standard bearer! (AwHec8)
Yep, what a standard bearer indeed. For whilst he was the standard bearer...
June 17th, 2020 02:52 - Nature\'s Glory for Me. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t you hear what those birds are saying to you in their song?...
June 17th, 2020 02:42 - Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.)
Is this a sly poke in the eye for those who churn out \'poetry\' in their...
June 17th, 2020 02:35 - DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards)
Such an atmospheric write sir! A reminder of what outlasts our human...
June 17th, 2020 02:24 - * A DIRTY MIND-Position×1 * (Flamingo)
Whats dirty about it. Using our bodies to do the pleasureable stuff bits...
June 16th, 2020 04:11 - Crossed Wires. (Fay Slimm.)
A short circuit to a power outtage. When sparks fly, and theres so much...
June 16th, 2020 04:08 - My Valentine. (Goldfinch60)
To contemplate the depth of love you shared for so long together which...
June 16th, 2020 01:14 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
Can\'t help but love bubbles can you. I have bought a bubble machine and...
June 16th, 2020 00:31 - Solace of Time. (Goldfinch60)
Does anybody really know what time it is if we throw away our clocks and...
June 16th, 2020 00:17 - State of Affairs (Gavin)
For a moment there i thought this was a piss take of the roman cathoilic...
June 14th, 2020 04:50 - Nature Nurturings (Orchidee)
He even got down and created the moss
i guess you could say that makes...
June 14th, 2020 04:47 - Such a Wonderful Day. (Goldfinch60)
What an amazing day to be whacking someone elses balls with a mallet!
I...
June 14th, 2020 04:38 - earlier last year... (Obstructempo)
An extremely well concealed meaning must be in there somewhere.... or is...
June 13th, 2020 04:51 - Rural Rambles (Orchidee)
Nice to read your appreciation of the beauty of our world as seen at first...
June 13th, 2020 03:56 - Human Wrath (Suresh)
Such negativity.
The planet is changing not dying. Maybe mankind is...
June 13th, 2020 03:54 - Hothouse Plant. (Goldfinch60)
Life is there to be lived for those who appreciate the beauty that is in...
June 13th, 2020 03:49 - A smiling embrace (Poetic Dan)
You are a lucky man to be mature enough to slow down and realise the...
June 13th, 2020 02:15 - Interaction (Suresh)
An evolution of diction in realisation.
June 13th, 2020 02:10 - Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s been so long since i goosed! lol
A lovely reminder of something i...
June 12th, 2020 05:15 - Old And New (Orchidee)
I wondered where the communion wine was going!
June 12th, 2020 04:22 - Dreamer In the Wind (MaddieJ)
A masterful write. Each line is poetry itself. Beguiling, you held me as I...
June 11th, 2020 23:13 - Lost (DesertWords)
Be mindful of where you tread for one day you just may happen upon such a...
June 11th, 2020 10:46 - * YOU THOUGHT WRONG * (Flamingo)
A dramatic write without doubt. At age sixteen a crisis lands all the...
June 11th, 2020 10:40 - Poem, Share my Life if You dare! (AwHec8)
But will she bring her baggage to assault you with? Will you find your...
June 11th, 2020 10:32 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
Hmmm always was a bit of a dilemma for me, these speechless...
June 11th, 2020 05:53 - Out Beyond the Ideas. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderous words Goldfinch. The Rumi piece you quote has been one of my...
June 11th, 2020 01:29 - Poem, God’s True Nature (AwHec8)
Yep, you can hear those lies being told in many a church to this day. If...
June 11th, 2020 01:25 - Never worth it (Peculiarly Lauren)
Telling a story of life\'s effect on us can be beneficial to those...
June 11th, 2020 01:20 - How do I....... (Suresh)
Ah but there\'s a fire within you. Just waiting for the right breeze to...
June 10th, 2020 17:51 - Destined. (Fay Slimm.)
We are left with questions and a deep longing to find meaningful...
June 10th, 2020 17:44 - Shown the Way. (Goldfinch60)
Like love. It comes and gets you when you\'re not looking..... and look...
June 10th, 2020 17:10 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh that bloody alarm clock!
Got to say this reminded me so much of my...
June 9th, 2020 09:31 - Star Spangled Soul. (Goldfinch60)
You lucky man having such a perfect love in your life. Unsurpassable !
June 9th, 2020 09:24 - Black lives matter (A passing lyric)
What\'s taken so long?
June 8th, 2020 23:55 - Climax (Neville)
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s...
June 8th, 2020 15:19 - Song, The Rapture (AwHec8)
And what, so far, has jesus or god done for you?
Or on the other side of...
June 8th, 2020 13:12 - Errant. (Fay Slimm.)
It always ends in tears. I\'ll stick to memories of the good times i had...
June 8th, 2020 12:46 - The New Day - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
And croquet beckons.... winter has passed and the summer lies ahead with...
June 8th, 2020 12:43 - Way To Walk (Orchidee)
Go tell those last three verses to black people in philadelpia.
Real...
June 7th, 2020 06:05 - Depression made me (Little_Write)
I think you\'ve got to have lived it and come out of it to see it for what...
June 7th, 2020 04:43 - I will do my part (Poetic Dan)
Having been savagely bitten by my ex I\'m wondering if there\'s a petition...
June 7th, 2020 04:09 - Foremost. (Fay Slimm.)
It takes us a while to learn what love is. Romantic love with all it\'s...
June 7th, 2020 04:05 - Kanreki (Neville)
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54 - Extended Life. (Goldfinch60)
Keep on keeping on.
June 7th, 2020 03:45 - EQUALITY (Michael Edwards)
A point well made and I wholeheartedly agree with. Whilst being in...
June 7th, 2020 03:42 - MLK, the world still not live up to your dream (Arobot)
We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce...
June 6th, 2020 13:56 - Falling for Icarus (Neville)
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i...
June 6th, 2020 04:09 - Listening to Ella. (Goldfinch60)
Never been a fan of the much acclaimed lady myself. Sarah vaughan, now...
June 6th, 2020 03:02 - THE FOLK WHO EAT NUTS (Michael Edwards)
Remember the two castaways kidnapped by the local tribe, they were told...
June 6th, 2020 02:57 - Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s been a hard year for my neighbourly blackbird. In the evenings i...
June 5th, 2020 12:21 - Each New Day. (Goldfinch60)
It is so very good that you take your good and positive feelings into the...
June 5th, 2020 11:23 - SO FAR SO GOOD (Michael Edwards)
Keep it up!
June 5th, 2020 11:01 - Duet. (Fay Slimm.)
Again those silken threads woven to delifght.. but wait.... what other...
June 4th, 2020 04:44 - Safety or entrapment (Poetic Dan)
Hypothetically, how many animals would you sacrifice to drug tests to save...
June 4th, 2020 03:59 - Wandering in the Wood. (Goldfinch60)
There is something about trees, especially in woodland, they have a...
June 4th, 2020 03:52 - Remote (Neville)
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy...
June 3rd, 2020 13:44 - Heaven made (Saxon Crow)
The love of life itself shouts from each verse.
June 3rd, 2020 13:27 - Approach. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a riddle..oopps... talking of which, back in a minute...
Ah,...
June 3rd, 2020 13:19 - The Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
Hmm okay, i\'ve caught you out. The words were different yesterday......
June 3rd, 2020 01:44 - Just Another Murmeration (Neville)
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would...
June 2nd, 2020 06:26 - Selfish - and don\'t care! (Orchidee)
I can\'t imagine you being shellfish. Do you picture yourself as a hermit...
June 2nd, 2020 06:15 - Untied.. (Fay Slimm.)
Ahhh you secrets are exposed! Well maybe a couple of them...... poets...
June 2nd, 2020 06:09 - If Only. (Goldfinch60)
i want to start all over again (but with the knowledge i have gained in...
June 2nd, 2020 06:00 - Unrest and The END (Sylviasearcher)
And we all shall return to the soil.
June 1st, 2020 09:18 - On your heart (Ron parrish aka wordman)
You tell of a wondering within us all here i think. Whereas we know how we...
June 1st, 2020 06:47 - Hello Gorgeous. (Goldfinch60)
Brought to mind that little ditty \"Happy days are here again\". Lets hope...
June 1st, 2020 06:26 - Nob Hill Hotel Ca (Neville)
Memories of standing room only on a street car named disgusting. Drawn...
June 1st, 2020 06:23 - Past Passion. (Fay Slimm.)
Mentally the passion to relive is as strong as ever. The desire stronger....
June 1st, 2020 06:11 - isnt it about time? (Dusk arising)
There you go again, stating the bleedin obvious...as if i wasn\'t aware of...
May 31st, 2020 16:58 - Elsewhere. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh you brought such joy to me with these words. I\'m so pleased i led the...
May 31st, 2020 05:42 - Pentecost Promise (Orchidee)
Do you think they would let me into a church these days Orchidee? LOL Yes...
May 31st, 2020 03:12 - Kathleen. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s good to indulge in a well chosen pleasure now and again. I envy you...
May 31st, 2020 03:05 - MORE MONOSUCHS 5 (Michael Edwards)
And here\'s mud in yer eye mate!
Yesterday i gave my lovers...
May 31st, 2020 03:00 - Skien (Neville)
They shall come again and winter descend upon these lands.
But a...
May 30th, 2020 14:39 - GOD IS OUR HELPER ~ AMEN ~ PSALM 121 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tell it to the families of the good christians who died, betrayed by your...
May 30th, 2020 14:28 - Do Not Look Back. (Goldfinch60)
So true!
That gal in the video has the essence of swing flowing in her...
May 30th, 2020 01:57 - MORE MONOSUCHS 4 (Michael Edwards)
Those people who begin a sentence with \'i\'m sorry but\' ... damned...
May 30th, 2020 01:55 - It\'s a journey of the soul (Poetic Dan)
Listen to your heartbeat and experience the natural things around you. Let...
May 30th, 2020 01:52 - Predator (Poetic Dan)
Yeah ok for the big critters to get support but..... what about house...
May 26th, 2020 07:11 - Arguing with Myself. (Goldfinch60)
At least you won the argument!
May 26th, 2020 07:07 - Wildlife Rescue (Poetic Dan)
There\'s plenty out there with an \"I don\'t know what i\'m doing but...
May 26th, 2020 07:06 - Deliverance Dealings (Orchidee)
And when one of god\'s wonderful creations pecks the eyes out of another...
May 26th, 2020 07:00 - Starlight Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
\"Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket, save it for a rainy...
May 26th, 2020 06:57 - MORE MONOSUCHS 2 (Michael Edwards)
Next time that i put my foot in it i shall think of you.
May 26th, 2020 06:54 - Art of the mutt (Poetic Dan)
It\'s great to see you with the dogs in your vids. I really get the...
May 14th, 2020 05:24 - THE MERRY MERRY MONTH OF MAY 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great to see back to basics rhyming with three and four letter words. Like...
May 14th, 2020 02:17 - Beauty. (Goldfinch60)
The windows of the soul. Indeed. I have met this lady. She has many forms....
May 14th, 2020 01:45 - Brooding. (Fay Slimm.)
Evening,
sweet evening.
You rich
red blooded
time of...
May 14th, 2020 01:37 - LISTEN TO WORDS 1 (Michael Edwards)
My ex was most displeased.
I\'d bought her a real animal skin coat
I...
May 14th, 2020 01:24 - DO YOU HAVE ANY REGRETS ? TEN QUOTES OF CELEBBRTIES ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a poet you are. Such lyrical flow to your posts.
He laboured at...
May 13th, 2020 04:40 - GOD (KUNIKA_RANA)
It always makes me smile to see how easily believers like you put words...
May 13th, 2020 04:36 - Release. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes.. in a word!... and then NO! For, as you well know, love is too...
May 13th, 2020 04:32 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
Waiter.... there\'s a fry in my soup..... Really sir?..... yes and...
May 13th, 2020 02:36 - Stop waiting to be fed (Poetic Dan)
Oh i wish everyone was born with your perception. But they are not. Nor...
May 13th, 2020 02:30 - Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Your writing at it\'s best again here Goldfinch.
An amazing angle you...
May 13th, 2020 02:22 - * I JUST CAN\'T * (Flamingo)
The irreplaceable love for mum cries sad tears from your words today....
May 13th, 2020 01:15
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