Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Errant. (Fay Slimm.)
It always ends in tears. I\'ll stick to memories of the good times i had...
June 8th, 2020 12:46 - The New Day - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
And croquet beckons.... winter has passed and the summer lies ahead with...
June 8th, 2020 12:43 - Way To Walk (Orchidee)
Go tell those last three verses to black people in philadelpia.
Real...
June 7th, 2020 06:05 - Depression made me (Little_Write)
I think you\'ve got to have lived it and come out of it to see it for what...
June 7th, 2020 04:43 - I will do my part (Poetic Dan)
Having been savagely bitten by my ex I\'m wondering if there\'s a petition...
June 7th, 2020 04:09 - Foremost. (Fay Slimm.)
It takes us a while to learn what love is. Romantic love with all it\'s...
June 7th, 2020 04:05 - Kanreki (Neville)
ohayou gozaimasu
And the crowd wandered off looking for McDonalds.
June 7th, 2020 03:54 - Extended Life. (Goldfinch60)
Keep on keeping on.
June 7th, 2020 03:45 - EQUALITY (Michael Edwards)
A point well made and I wholeheartedly agree with. Whilst being in...
June 7th, 2020 03:42 - MLK, the world still not live up to your dream (Arobot)
We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce...
June 6th, 2020 13:56 - Falling for Icarus (Neville)
Like the racing driver who swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed i...
June 6th, 2020 04:09 - Listening to Ella. (Goldfinch60)
Never been a fan of the much acclaimed lady myself. Sarah vaughan, now...
June 6th, 2020 03:02 - THE FOLK WHO EAT NUTS (Michael Edwards)
Remember the two castaways kidnapped by the local tribe, they were told...
June 6th, 2020 02:57 - Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s been a hard year for my neighbourly blackbird. In the evenings i...
June 5th, 2020 12:21 - Each New Day. (Goldfinch60)
It is so very good that you take your good and positive feelings into the...
June 5th, 2020 11:23 - SO FAR SO GOOD (Michael Edwards)
Keep it up!
June 5th, 2020 11:01 - Duet. (Fay Slimm.)
Again those silken threads woven to delifght.. but wait.... what other...
June 4th, 2020 04:44 - Safety or entrapment (Poetic Dan)
Hypothetically, how many animals would you sacrifice to drug tests to save...
June 4th, 2020 03:59 - Wandering in the Wood. (Goldfinch60)
There is something about trees, especially in woodland, they have a...
June 4th, 2020 03:52 - Remote (Neville)
Life is so awkward and those television controls so distant and clumsy...
June 3rd, 2020 13:44 - Heaven made (Saxon Crow)
The love of life itself shouts from each verse.
June 3rd, 2020 13:27 - Approach. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a riddle..oopps... talking of which, back in a minute...
Ah,...
June 3rd, 2020 13:19 - The Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
Hmm okay, i\'ve caught you out. The words were different yesterday......
June 3rd, 2020 01:44 - Just Another Murmeration (Neville)
I wasn\'t sure what to make of your piece today so i decided i would...
June 2nd, 2020 06:26 - Selfish - and don\'t care! (Orchidee)
I can\'t imagine you being shellfish. Do you picture yourself as a hermit...
June 2nd, 2020 06:15 - Untied.. (Fay Slimm.)
Ahhh you secrets are exposed! Well maybe a couple of them...... poets...
June 2nd, 2020 06:09 - If Only. (Goldfinch60)
i want to start all over again (but with the knowledge i have gained in...
June 2nd, 2020 06:00 - Unrest and The END (Sylviasearcher)
And we all shall return to the soil.
June 1st, 2020 09:18 - On your heart (Ron parrish aka wordman)
You tell of a wondering within us all here i think. Whereas we know how we...
June 1st, 2020 06:47 - Hello Gorgeous. (Goldfinch60)
Brought to mind that little ditty \"Happy days are here again\". Lets hope...
June 1st, 2020 06:26 - Nob Hill Hotel Ca (Neville)
Memories of standing room only on a street car named disgusting. Drawn...
June 1st, 2020 06:23 - Past Passion. (Fay Slimm.)
Mentally the passion to relive is as strong as ever. The desire stronger....
June 1st, 2020 06:11 - isnt it about time? (Dusk arising)
There you go again, stating the bleedin obvious...as if i wasn\'t aware of...
May 31st, 2020 16:58 - Elsewhere. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh you brought such joy to me with these words. I\'m so pleased i led the...
May 31st, 2020 05:42 - Pentecost Promise (Orchidee)
Do you think they would let me into a church these days Orchidee? LOL Yes...
May 31st, 2020 03:12 - Kathleen. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s good to indulge in a well chosen pleasure now and again. I envy you...
May 31st, 2020 03:05 - MORE MONOSUCHS 5 (Michael Edwards)
And here\'s mud in yer eye mate!
Yesterday i gave my lovers...
May 31st, 2020 03:00 - Skien (Neville)
They shall come again and winter descend upon these lands.
But a...
May 30th, 2020 14:39 - GOD IS OUR HELPER ~ AMEN ~ PSALM 121 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tell it to the families of the good christians who died, betrayed by your...
May 30th, 2020 14:28 - Do Not Look Back. (Goldfinch60)
So true!
That gal in the video has the essence of swing flowing in her...
May 30th, 2020 01:57 - MORE MONOSUCHS 4 (Michael Edwards)
Those people who begin a sentence with \'i\'m sorry but\' ... damned...
May 30th, 2020 01:55 - It\'s a journey of the soul (Poetic Dan)
Listen to your heartbeat and experience the natural things around you. Let...
May 30th, 2020 01:52 - Predator (Poetic Dan)
Yeah ok for the big critters to get support but..... what about house...
May 26th, 2020 07:11 - Arguing with Myself. (Goldfinch60)
At least you won the argument!
May 26th, 2020 07:07 - Wildlife Rescue (Poetic Dan)
There\'s plenty out there with an \"I don\'t know what i\'m doing but...
May 26th, 2020 07:06 - Deliverance Dealings (Orchidee)
And when one of god\'s wonderful creations pecks the eyes out of another...
May 26th, 2020 07:00 - Starlight Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
\"Catch a falling star and put it in your pocket, save it for a rainy...
May 26th, 2020 06:57 - MORE MONOSUCHS 2 (Michael Edwards)
Next time that i put my foot in it i shall think of you.
May 26th, 2020 06:54 - Art of the mutt (Poetic Dan)
It\'s great to see you with the dogs in your vids. I really get the...
May 14th, 2020 05:24 - THE MERRY MERRY MONTH OF MAY 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great to see back to basics rhyming with three and four letter words. Like...
May 14th, 2020 02:17 - Beauty. (Goldfinch60)
The windows of the soul. Indeed. I have met this lady. She has many forms....
May 14th, 2020 01:45 - Brooding. (Fay Slimm.)
Evening,
sweet evening.
You rich
red blooded
time of...
May 14th, 2020 01:37 - LISTEN TO WORDS 1 (Michael Edwards)
My ex was most displeased.
I\'d bought her a real animal skin coat
I...
May 14th, 2020 01:24 - DO YOU HAVE ANY REGRETS ? TEN QUOTES OF CELEBBRTIES ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a poet you are. Such lyrical flow to your posts.
He laboured at...
May 13th, 2020 04:40 - GOD (KUNIKA_RANA)
It always makes me smile to see how easily believers like you put words...
May 13th, 2020 04:36 - Release. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes.. in a word!... and then NO! For, as you well know, love is too...
May 13th, 2020 04:32 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
Waiter.... there\'s a fry in my soup..... Really sir?..... yes and...
May 13th, 2020 02:36 - Stop waiting to be fed (Poetic Dan)
Oh i wish everyone was born with your perception. But they are not. Nor...
May 13th, 2020 02:30 - Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Your writing at it\'s best again here Goldfinch.
An amazing angle you...
May 13th, 2020 02:22 - * I JUST CAN\'T * (Flamingo)
The irreplaceable love for mum cries sad tears from your words today....
May 13th, 2020 01:15 - END OF THE LOCKDOWN ? 💛 BRIAN 💛 A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good fun stuff. Don\'t get me started on politics. We\'ll fall out.
May 12th, 2020 10:40 - Where There Is Empty Space (A Boy With Roses)
Told like it is! This is a man\'s world if he gets up off his ass and...
May 12th, 2020 08:17 - Fading (Neville)
I know the feelings you have so well expressed here Neville. It certainly...
May 12th, 2020 06:46 - Wings expanded, so did my heart (Poetic Dan)
There are two much loved adolescents who will grow in the knowledge that...
May 12th, 2020 03:55 - Brief, (Fay Slimm.)
I mirror the words of Goldfinch. Beautiful words Fay.
Love lost leaves...
May 12th, 2020 03:45 - Unique Nature. (Goldfinch60)
So true. It has been a while since i have visited some of the places i...
May 12th, 2020 03:41 - THE STRANGER (Michael Edwards)
This reads as one might describe my mentality whilst playing monopoly....
May 12th, 2020 01:20 - Birdy Talk (Arobot)
One of my biggest regrets was my inability to mimic parts of a blackbirds...
May 11th, 2020 11:40 - More! More! More! (Sylviasearcher)
It\'s like being forced to watch daytime television.
May 11th, 2020 11:14 - Tree Song (Neville)
I was listening to the wallpaper in my hallway slowly coming unstuck and...
May 11th, 2020 11:09 - Birthright. (Fay Slimm.)
Yahoo (throws cap up into air - hoping to get it back one day) couldn\'t...
May 11th, 2020 11:07 - Reigning Ruler (Orchidee)
Well what kind of a ruler is that god if he lets a virus like covid 19...
May 11th, 2020 11:04 - The Good Life Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Message understood.... its a tune i whistle regularly.
May 11th, 2020 11:01 - Restoring Request (Orchidee)
Have you tried hair restorer? I haven\'t but i wondered if it\'s as...
May 9th, 2020 02:10 - The corona catastrophe (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
What do you say to the relatives and loved ones of those who fervently...
May 8th, 2020 06:02 - Chasms.. (Fay Slimm.)
I was brought-up old fashioned. Using money as a key to class...
May 8th, 2020 04:33 - Released From Despair. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like you are being the proverbial friend.
May 8th, 2020 02:50 - \"Friends\" (Moozpace)
Friendship is based upon two people enjoying one anothers company and a...
May 8th, 2020 01:09 - 1 (Justaverse)
Cryptic, terse... and short. I like all three qualities in poetry.
If...
May 7th, 2020 22:05 - Comical Couplets (7) (Michael Edwards)
He he he... at least that person has a tangible \'someone\' to be. There...
May 7th, 2020 18:22 - No Regrets. (Goldfinch60)
What point in having regret? Placed similarly again with the character of...
May 7th, 2020 18:16 - Cream-Plied. (Fay Slimm.)
Such is life that the frustrations of the day to day are oft vented upon...
May 7th, 2020 18:11 - The Millers Daughter (Neville)
Am I here for the wholemeal or just the crumpet?
The baker\'s daughter...
May 7th, 2020 18:07 - Lost Happy Returns (Poeticpayne)
But those words came from your heart and the deed is done. More important...
May 7th, 2020 18:00 - How I wish (Myself and me)
Initially reading this had me confused but on reflection, spot on theres...
May 7th, 2020 17:54 - Today (Myself and me)
This rings a bell.Nice play on words and delghtfully short. Short pieces...
May 7th, 2020 17:11 - Severed. (Fay Slimm.)
Touched in the right places and the poetic beauty in you is fired to...
May 7th, 2020 05:21 - Bluebell Beauties (Orchidee)
A lovely walk into the bluebell woods today. Thank you.
May 7th, 2020 05:12 - What Happened to Yesterday? (Goldfinch60)
Yesterday is gone leaving what it will. Whilst we are in yesterdays shadow...
May 7th, 2020 05:10 - I LOVE ANGELA BECAUSE 🧡 BRIAN 🤍 LOVE SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Crammed with deep emotion and the zest of the joys love draws.
May 7th, 2020 05:08 - Salvation Sureties (Orchidee)
I was listening to the news last night and Dublin Police declared a state...
May 2nd, 2020 02:32 - Status Quo. (Goldfinch60)
Sixties soul music does the same for me.
May 2nd, 2020 02:30 - Twice Stirred. (Fay Slimm.)
Now you\'ve got my grey matter pulsing with thoughts of \"is that what i...
May 1st, 2020 06:30 - ANGELA ~ VISION OF LOVELINESS ~ BRIAN ~ AN APPRECIATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
There you go! Ya red blooded stud! Gret to read some passion in your post....
May 1st, 2020 04:25 - Normality never left! (Poetic Dan)
You are right to poinr out there is a lot of thoughtlessness around mostly...
May 1st, 2020 04:18 - A Little Happiness (Kevin Michael Bloor)
We are all deserving of some happiness to light the evening of our time on...
May 1st, 2020 01:42 - The Glory of Life Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
A love of life itself!
May 1st, 2020 01:29 - THINGS WE HAVE FAITH IN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Aww i\'m disappointed but 10/10 to you for sticking to yer guns. I wasn\'t...
April 30th, 2020 09:28 - THINGS WE HAVE FAITH IN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Brian in the nicest possible way i\'m laughing at you....why?... yes i...
April 30th, 2020 07:50 - How Many. (Fay Slimm.)
How many dusks indeed.... i knew i would creep into your verse one...
April 30th, 2020 04:16
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