Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• beach (Caroline-o) I find the power of the ocean to be a great leveller. Akin to sitting amid...
  July 18th, 2020 19:27
• Once Love (MelissaJA) It changes. it changes us, teaches us and sometimes deserts us, only to...
  July 18th, 2020 19:12
• The Sweetest Thing (Kevin Michael Bloor) She looks lovely. Grandchildren are such a delight aren\'t they. I didn\'t...
  July 18th, 2020 14:46
• I See Ghosts (Lutalican) Well structured and enjoyable reading.
  July 18th, 2020 14:41
• No Separation. (Goldfinch60) Yes i agree. Some people become a part of our lives, part of the rock upon...
  July 18th, 2020 06:58
• You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3) A man - eater. Got hurt as a teenager by a man and swore to take revenge...
  July 17th, 2020 07:43
• Kindred. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful sentiments based upon realisation of respect for all and love of...
  July 17th, 2020 03:20
• In My Long Life. (Goldfinch60) Good for you. I only wish it were so for everyone. I\'m blessed with the...
  July 17th, 2020 01:34
• On the Hunt for Bliss (Narcisa) Or does happiness arrive as a result of a lot of different happenings,...
  July 16th, 2020 14:32
• Longing (Wbj) Lets hope that does not turn into an addiction. Hoping that one day, when...
  July 16th, 2020 14:16
• Dream-Encrusted. (Fay Slimm.) All ahead is pure wholesome and rewarding, a young soul who is enthralled...
  July 16th, 2020 09:33
• IS OUR FATE : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) It would embarrass me to tell you here how much i like this...
  July 16th, 2020 09:19
• In These Strange Times. (Goldfinch60) Before reading your words i listen to the music. Superb. Quality and...
  July 16th, 2020 09:11
• ON READING A LETTER (Michael Edwards) Such romance of this letter received has painted a whole scene for your...
  July 16th, 2020 08:59
• LORD (DianeKey6) Refreshing to read you have found a worthwhile spiritual essence which is...
  July 15th, 2020 16:02
• F*ck You (Benevolentbluebabe) It is good to release frustration rather than bottle it up in the british...
  July 15th, 2020 12:27
• Mullins Yard (Neville) It were all we could do when i were a lad see, that there turf surfin....
  July 15th, 2020 10:22
• Towards My Lover. Senryu. (Plus answer to coded Haiku) (Goldfinch60) Stick to the path. Those bathing trunks no longer do you any favours.
  July 15th, 2020 02:00
• AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards) I\'m obviously keeping abreast of the times then. Armed with her new...
  July 15th, 2020 01:57
• Still I Stand (HangingbyaHalo) A wounded animal exhibits many characteristics and behaviors which once...
  July 14th, 2020 18:04
• The army needs you! (Aa Harvey) Well if you survive with your life you\'ll know how it feels to be treated...
  July 14th, 2020 18:00
• The Magic of Marjorie (Leisa Niamh) A wonderful piece. Of rare inspiration. Those of us who are fortunate...
  July 14th, 2020 17:58
• Lockdown Diary (FineB) Tis a great idea and a shame the idea came late in this Covid time. In the...
  July 14th, 2020 17:52
• Altering. (Fay Slimm.) And each time i read the result of your poetic pens journey across the...
  July 14th, 2020 03:39
• Profitable Praising (Orchidee) Yes, tread down our enemies god. As in WW2 god trod down enemies for UK,...
  July 14th, 2020 02:35
• LAST LAUGH (Joe Marcello) I can\'t agree to be rid of comedians or their comedy. But i can see a...
  July 14th, 2020 01:54
• Pessimistic Curse (PoeticBiscuit) Or is it being realistic perhaps. When cancer came my way i...
  July 14th, 2020 01:50
• Coded Haiku. (Goldfinch60) decode this:-
  July 14th, 2020 01:36
• A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards) LOL if your piece were placed before him i doubt he could make sense of...
  July 14th, 2020 01:33
• CONFUCIUS SAYS: (Michael Edwards) Well that\'s a load off my mind.
  July 13th, 2020 12:25
• The Chosen (Kevin Michael Bloor) Chosen?.. maybe... Cursed... probably, for i could not lay my pen...
  July 13th, 2020 05:55
• Ego\'s Down (Neville) Well, written into the constitution is the defence that a tyrant buffoon...
  July 13th, 2020 05:29
• IN ETERNITY\'S FACE : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) Beautiful words and I wish I could wholeheartedly agree but the greed of...
  July 13th, 2020 05:23
• Providence Praise (Orchidee) If i translate your praise here to praise of the god i describe in my post...
  July 13th, 2020 05:17
• See Success. (Fay Slimm.) What finer calling could there be than to assist nature. The natural...
  July 13th, 2020 05:12
• Got That. (Goldfinch60) I notice young Joan (M.E.) has picked up her camera today. You must...
  July 13th, 2020 05:01
• WE FALL : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) Indeed, we are the immeasurable soul of the creation. God itself.
  July 11th, 2020 15:46
• It\'s Your Road. (Goldfinch60) Comfortably we walk among friends and feel the strength of their being....
  July 11th, 2020 02:32
• Autism. (A passing lyric) I missed this one. Your words strike home to me for their truth, depth...
  July 10th, 2020 09:44
• Untitled no.1 (Benevolentbluebabe) Enduring a similar existence here. One wonders if we are returning to the...
  July 10th, 2020 08:31
• Falling Through Wonderland (PoeticBiscuit) Excellent!
  July 10th, 2020 05:43
• Light Limitless (Orchidee) Tut @ you wishing harm to others in your last verse and use of the word...
  July 10th, 2020 05:42
• Poet\'s Day. (Goldfinch60) Being self employed soon knocks that out of your system but it doesn\'t...
  July 10th, 2020 05:37
• AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) Have you seen those stains on goldfinch\'s t-shirt? These two liners of...
  July 10th, 2020 05:35
• Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) Wickedness in poetic heat.
  July 10th, 2020 05:21
• Human (JoshLohr) Life\'s quagmire of reason shows through your words here. Pulled this way...
  July 8th, 2020 09:45
• Treasured. (Fay Slimm.) Even more treasured now i could easily believe. I must say your words...
  July 8th, 2020 09:41
• Ripples (PoeticBiscuit) Makes a lot of sense to me.
  July 8th, 2020 09:34
• All I Need (Orchidee) A fine piece today Orchidee. the feeling i get when i am in a place which...
  July 8th, 2020 09:26
• Not a Bad House. (Goldfinch60) For about 18 months i had an apartment on the first floor of the stately...
  July 8th, 2020 09:21
• AGEING COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Two lines which encapsulate my appearance. You pic today has an uncanny...
  July 8th, 2020 09:12
• Our Little Wing... (Andrew Charles Forrest) These are words to inherit and gaze upon as ones own children grow into...
  July 7th, 2020 17:48
• Poor Git (Neville) The sadness of life\'s endings. Life must be a physical symphony for all...
  July 7th, 2020 12:46
• What we lost (JoshLohr) As was wisely said \"Each action has an equal and opposite reaction\"....
  July 7th, 2020 12:42
• Untenable. (Fay Slimm.) What you have written is fine and true. Love and lust are associated very...
  July 7th, 2020 12:34
• Eye with no sight (Poetic Dan) You have every right to your opinions and to voice them. \"For you are a...
  July 7th, 2020 12:26
• Ennio Morricone. (Goldfinch60) Nicely written Goldfinch. A master of his art.
  July 7th, 2020 12:19
• Just Thinking (PoeticBiscuit) Where do we go though? There\'s got to be more. But i am biased being a...
  July 7th, 2020 12:17
• AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Don\'t waste any time starving yourself of apples... that doctor is not...
  July 7th, 2020 12:14
• Mid Summer Meadow (Neville) Absolutely delightful. I write with a broad grin upon my face and a...
  July 6th, 2020 08:02
• Bewildering. (Fay Slimm.) You portray this situation of inner grief so well here.I hope it was not...
  July 6th, 2020 07:57
• Presence Perceived (Orchidee) Well I guess psalm-body had to write this sooner or later.
  July 6th, 2020 07:24
• Art Where No Men Tread (Goldfinch60) Reflecting upon this, together with the comments so far and the picture...
  July 6th, 2020 07:21
• My Dad is My Hero (PoeticBiscuit) You are a lucky man to have such a fine example of fatherhood shown. A...
  July 5th, 2020 15:26
• White Violets (Neville) She drew breath the violets beckoned your heart fluttered memories were...
  July 5th, 2020 15:22
• Grow (Poetic Dan) I guess that\'s what they call \"feeling the vibes man\".
  July 5th, 2020 06:55
• Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) I don\'t know why but reading this i perceived you as a Lark. The bird....
  July 5th, 2020 06:52
• Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee) In several ways i wish i were able to stand and joyfully sing together as...
  July 5th, 2020 06:46
• Whose Round Is It? (Goldfinch60) ha ha ha Last of the summer wine comes to mind or should the be last of...
  July 5th, 2020 06:43
• Special Sheep (Orchidee) And not a mention of a sheepdog anywhere....... come by shep.
  July 4th, 2020 02:49
• Stoicism Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Well chosen words. ..and here i reproduce \"It would be hard to find a...
  July 4th, 2020 02:06
• Little fish in the sea (PoeticBiscuit) A quite lovely poem of encouragement. Deserving of a frame and hanging in...
  July 4th, 2020 00:25
• Mi Amor (Benevolentbluebabe) Indeed love conquers all and teaches us more and more about love...
  July 4th, 2020 00:22
• \"Free\" (Moozpace) A nice love poem it is too. But i cringed at the word \'belong\' though...
  July 3rd, 2020 23:48
• Poetry, My Friend. (PoeticBiscuit) Here here! How blessed we are to be gifted with our poetic trumpet.
  July 3rd, 2020 23:44
• Heartache (Benevolentbluebabe) Lies are so awful. They cheat you, abuse you and place you somewhere...
  July 3rd, 2020 09:42
• Absorbing. (Fay Slimm.) eeeh bah gum lass, if thee \'avvent \'it nail smack on\'t \'ed wi...
  July 3rd, 2020 08:31
• The Logic of Fools (Neville) I know where this is coming from of course. Not so long ago there were...
  July 3rd, 2020 08:26
• Leading Light (Orchidee) Erm... what is it you are thanking the \'lord\' for here?
  July 3rd, 2020 08:20
• untitled no.6 (Moyu Aoki) And had it shipped to timbuktu, now the hills and valleys look so much...
  July 3rd, 2020 08:19
• Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60) I am so with you in this. Much of my scrawlings are generated late at...
  July 3rd, 2020 08:17
• WHERE NO MEN TREAD (Michael Edwards) What? .. no slugs and creepy crawlies, no snot hanging from trees? I...
  July 3rd, 2020 08:14
• Sleepless Nights (SheWasTheSun) The sunrise is, in my personal estimation, the finest of gifts for it...
  July 3rd, 2020 08:08
• Missing (Arazimus) There is so much condensed into this piece. It is so well composed and a...
  July 3rd, 2020 08:03
• Grieving... Again (Edward Charles McDevitt) I have never lost someone i am really close to. I can empathise with the...
  July 2nd, 2020 05:54
• Unmistakable (Fay Slimm.) I think you voice a fear within the longing. So much easier to turn away...
  July 2nd, 2020 05:41
• But we Pray (AiR - Atman in Ravi) Whereas i detatch from words like lord and god i only do so to detatch...
  July 2nd, 2020 05:37
• Reconciled Reminder (Orchidee) Blind faith. Keep your eyes shut and believe in the divine fear placed in...
  July 2nd, 2020 05:29
• Being Bilingual. (Goldfinch60) ha ha yes i learned fluent bullshit too.
  July 2nd, 2020 05:25
• Your Country Say\'s it Needs You (Neville) We shall be saying this till we fade away and the glory of war will...
  July 2nd, 2020 05:15
• Simplicity (Suresh) Simplicity wins.
  July 2nd, 2020 05:08
• You are the sacrifice 𓆗 (CaitEva) It seems the christian churches are demanding of one sacrifice. That you...
  July 2nd, 2020 05:06
• Cancer, Why? (PoeticBiscuit) Cancer will inspire you to write much more now that it has entered your...
  July 2nd, 2020 04:50
• Richness (Morgen Joy) I am totally at one with the comments made by jarcher54 here. Beautifully...
  July 2nd, 2020 04:37
• A Lot About Nothing At All (DesertWords) Thank you so much for this piece of pure entertainment. Written in a style...
  July 2nd, 2020 04:34
• Cuts (Peto) Here is hoping that you both find you are the right person to belong in...
  July 1st, 2020 11:27
• Ages Past (Benevolentbluebabe) On sunshiney days when the gameball is in your hands the past is nothing...
  July 1st, 2020 09:43
• Remembering a Poet (Laura🌻) Kevin was an extraordinary poet beyond doubt. He painted pictures with...
  July 1st, 2020 08:04
• Questions. (Fay Slimm.) Let there be no regrets as time takes us and plays the game of life upon...
  July 1st, 2020 06:51
• Aftertaste (Neville) Ah yes, Maltesers... I remember her well. Attracted by her curves...
  July 1st, 2020 06:46