Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Eyeing. (Fay Slimm.) A failed trout tickling? No, Fay wouldn\'t do that.... Though yes you...
  July 23rd, 2020 05:09
• Last Self Discovery (Lutalican) Grrr \"and you are me\" is only 4 words LOL Really good introspective...
  July 23rd, 2020 05:01
• I AM The Bread Of Life - Part 2 (Orchidee) Next up you\'ll be telling us Marmite is the devil.
  July 23rd, 2020 02:17
• I Was There. (Goldfinch60) I missed that one. Never been a horror movie fan. Laughed out loud @ one...
  July 23rd, 2020 02:15
• Poison (Nanett.01) In all probability we all are somewhat shattered and harbour many doubts....
  July 23rd, 2020 02:11
• NEVER CHOOSE (Michael Edwards) Your sculpture today looks like something i would like to sit with in my...
  July 23rd, 2020 02:05
• Lovely Little Lie (MelissaJA) What a wonderful tease in your words today. The beautiful sensual ragged...
  July 22nd, 2020 15:56
• windowpane (Noah Malice) tears of raindrops on windows bring out the melancholy often it seems in...
  July 22nd, 2020 14:18
• Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) Seems to me you are describing that perfect relationship which lasts and...
  July 22nd, 2020 03:29
• Refilled. (Goldfinch60) (hic) yus m\'lord... i wonder (hic) if you could fill it to the brim this...
  July 22nd, 2020 01:15
• Time (Justagirl) You will, it will, it has.
  July 22nd, 2020 01:13
• Awake (Lutalican) Those tortures can be hell and insomnia will rule. A good book, or even a...
  July 22nd, 2020 01:12
• Letter to God (Mik@el) Well god sure aint the one that man created in christianity so don\'t...
  July 21st, 2020 17:32
• One love (Bragee) The United States would be all the stronger, all the wealthier and i dare...
  July 21st, 2020 13:19
• Awakened Side - Page Seven (Nafis Light) Keep on doing as you are doing, being as you are being. Be seen to be you.
  July 21st, 2020 12:35
• he’s safe. (Leaaa) Great expression of what love does to us.
  July 21st, 2020 12:27
• Captured. (Fay Slimm.) Your mention of slavery opened up a whole new reading of this piece for me...
  July 21st, 2020 12:25
• Undervalued (Poetic Dan) Some charge thousands.... and walking through town you see a busker with...
  July 21st, 2020 12:19
• Relationship Remedy (Orchidee) Relationships? Always add an egg... the pie is always the better for an...
  July 21st, 2020 12:09
• I Love You (Goldfinch60) I\'m sure you still hear those words Goldfinch and really know their worth...
  July 21st, 2020 12:05
• NUTS (Michael Edwards) A real cracker! Love that sculpture too.
  July 21st, 2020 12:03
• Poem, Who Will Save Your Souls? (AwHec8) Are you identifying your playpen here or the playpen for those who like to...
  July 21st, 2020 12:00
• Cold Showers (Cali Kittana) The two extremes both needing water. Lovely choice of metaphor. Stay out...
  July 21st, 2020 11:57
• A Woman in Love (MelissaJA) Aren\'t we all this fragile when love opens us up and we let another right...
  July 21st, 2020 11:54
• Song, Jesus said I’m His man! (AwHec8) Good to see how you use Jesus here to lift you out of depression....
  July 21st, 2020 11:45
• 🧿🕊D I V I N E (YoursTruly9) Love is beautiful and teaches us if we are wise enough to learn. Love...
  July 21st, 2020 11:42
• Tall Grasses (Sylviasearcher) Yay, for in what form will reincarnation be, and where, when? For it is a...
  July 20th, 2020 14:15
• Make a stand (Aa Harvey) I agree, there is enough falseness in those who turn to god in times of...
  July 20th, 2020 13:49
• Love Story (Kevin Michael Bloor) A true romance if ever there was one. Sad how our immaturity can ruin such...
  July 20th, 2020 13:39
• Undressed. (Fay Slimm.) Mysterious and quite, quite beautiful each and every one. Something my...
  July 20th, 2020 13:33
• TWENTY-SIX ASPECTS OF LOVE ~ AN ABCDarian POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Loved the X for Xylophonic! much better than the cistomary X-rated quips...
  July 20th, 2020 02:09
• Words For Walking Wisely (Orchidee) I\'m sure all your thoughts and meditations are pure enough for your...
  July 20th, 2020 02:02
• Adrift With Nature. (Goldfinch60) That\'s a lovely place you describe there Goldfinch and it seems these...
  July 20th, 2020 02:00
• nerves (Kalanigarcia) Being on the survivior side of oesophagal cancer i can assure you there\'s...
  July 20th, 2020 00:38
• Carved in Stone (MelissaJA) One day, your name may be carved in stone and you could today choose the...
  July 19th, 2020 13:07
• Crushed by your Hate (DianeKey6) So sad to read this. I have witnessed some of the shameful bullying...
  July 19th, 2020 12:58
• Convenient truth (Jeremy Leach) I like your post today. Food for thought for an open mind, provokative....
  July 19th, 2020 12:44
• For Cindy (Tayama) Nice one. Any reader of my posts will see how i share the reminiscing...
  July 19th, 2020 12:38
• I AM The Bread Of Life - Part 1 (Orchidee) You\'re some crusty bread for sure Orchidee. Watch out, the devil\'s got...
  July 19th, 2020 12:07
• Steaming Entitlement. (Goldfinch60) Tell me about it. I had a steamy eye test on saturday morning. Also I...
  July 19th, 2020 12:05
• beach (Caroline-o) I find the power of the ocean to be a great leveller. Akin to sitting amid...
  July 18th, 2020 19:27
• Once Love (MelissaJA) It changes. it changes us, teaches us and sometimes deserts us, only to...
  July 18th, 2020 19:12
• The Sweetest Thing (Kevin Michael Bloor) She looks lovely. Grandchildren are such a delight aren\'t they. I didn\'t...
  July 18th, 2020 14:46
• I See Ghosts (Lutalican) Well structured and enjoyable reading.
  July 18th, 2020 14:41
• No Separation. (Goldfinch60) Yes i agree. Some people become a part of our lives, part of the rock upon...
  July 18th, 2020 06:58
• You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3) A man - eater. Got hurt as a teenager by a man and swore to take revenge...
  July 17th, 2020 07:43
• Kindred. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful sentiments based upon realisation of respect for all and love of...
  July 17th, 2020 03:20
• In My Long Life. (Goldfinch60) Good for you. I only wish it were so for everyone. I\'m blessed with the...
  July 17th, 2020 01:34
• On the Hunt for Bliss (Narcisa) Or does happiness arrive as a result of a lot of different happenings,...
  July 16th, 2020 14:32
• Longing (Wbj) Lets hope that does not turn into an addiction. Hoping that one day, when...
  July 16th, 2020 14:16
• Dream-Encrusted. (Fay Slimm.) All ahead is pure wholesome and rewarding, a young soul who is enthralled...
  July 16th, 2020 09:33
• IS OUR FATE : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) It would embarrass me to tell you here how much i like this...
  July 16th, 2020 09:19
• In These Strange Times. (Goldfinch60) Before reading your words i listen to the music. Superb. Quality and...
  July 16th, 2020 09:11
• ON READING A LETTER (Michael Edwards) Such romance of this letter received has painted a whole scene for your...
  July 16th, 2020 08:59
• LORD (DianeKey6) Refreshing to read you have found a worthwhile spiritual essence which is...
  July 15th, 2020 16:02
• F*ck You (Benevolentbluebabe) It is good to release frustration rather than bottle it up in the british...
  July 15th, 2020 12:27
• Mullins Yard (Neville) It were all we could do when i were a lad see, that there turf surfin....
  July 15th, 2020 10:22
• Towards My Lover. Senryu. (Plus answer to coded Haiku) (Goldfinch60) Stick to the path. Those bathing trunks no longer do you any favours.
  July 15th, 2020 02:00
• AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards) I\'m obviously keeping abreast of the times then. Armed with her new...
  July 15th, 2020 01:57
• Still I Stand (HangingbyaHalo) A wounded animal exhibits many characteristics and behaviors which once...
  July 14th, 2020 18:04
• The army needs you! (Aa Harvey) Well if you survive with your life you\'ll know how it feels to be treated...
  July 14th, 2020 18:00
• The Magic of Marjorie (Leisa Niamh) A wonderful piece. Of rare inspiration. Those of us who are fortunate...
  July 14th, 2020 17:58
• Lockdown Diary (FineB) Tis a great idea and a shame the idea came late in this Covid time. In the...
  July 14th, 2020 17:52
• Altering. (Fay Slimm.) And each time i read the result of your poetic pens journey across the...
  July 14th, 2020 03:39
• Profitable Praising (Orchidee) Yes, tread down our enemies god. As in WW2 god trod down enemies for UK,...
  July 14th, 2020 02:35
• LAST LAUGH (Joe Marcello) I can\'t agree to be rid of comedians or their comedy. But i can see a...
  July 14th, 2020 01:54
• Pessimistic Curse (PoeticBiscuit) Or is it being realistic perhaps. When cancer came my way i...
  July 14th, 2020 01:50
• Coded Haiku. (Goldfinch60) decode this:-
  July 14th, 2020 01:36
• A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards) LOL if your piece were placed before him i doubt he could make sense of...
  July 14th, 2020 01:33
• CONFUCIUS SAYS: (Michael Edwards) Well that\'s a load off my mind.
  July 13th, 2020 12:25
• The Chosen (Kevin Michael Bloor) Chosen?.. maybe... Cursed... probably, for i could not lay my pen...
  July 13th, 2020 05:55
• Ego\'s Down (Neville) Well, written into the constitution is the defence that a tyrant buffoon...
  July 13th, 2020 05:29
• IN ETERNITY\'S FACE : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) Beautiful words and I wish I could wholeheartedly agree but the greed of...
  July 13th, 2020 05:23
• Providence Praise (Orchidee) If i translate your praise here to praise of the god i describe in my post...
  July 13th, 2020 05:17
• See Success. (Fay Slimm.) What finer calling could there be than to assist nature. The natural...
  July 13th, 2020 05:12
• Got That. (Goldfinch60) I notice young Joan (M.E.) has picked up her camera today. You must...
  July 13th, 2020 05:01
• WE FALL : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) Indeed, we are the immeasurable soul of the creation. God itself.
  July 11th, 2020 15:46
• It\'s Your Road. (Goldfinch60) Comfortably we walk among friends and feel the strength of their being....
  July 11th, 2020 02:32
• Autism. (A passing lyric) I missed this one. Your words strike home to me for their truth, depth...
  July 10th, 2020 09:44
• Untitled no.1 (Benevolentbluebabe) Enduring a similar existence here. One wonders if we are returning to the...
  July 10th, 2020 08:31
• Falling Through Wonderland (PoeticBiscuit) Excellent!
  July 10th, 2020 05:43
• Light Limitless (Orchidee) Tut @ you wishing harm to others in your last verse and use of the word...
  July 10th, 2020 05:42
• Poet\'s Day. (Goldfinch60) Being self employed soon knocks that out of your system but it doesn\'t...
  July 10th, 2020 05:37
• AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) Have you seen those stains on goldfinch\'s t-shirt? These two liners of...
  July 10th, 2020 05:35
• Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) Wickedness in poetic heat.
  July 10th, 2020 05:21
• Human (JoshLohr) Life\'s quagmire of reason shows through your words here. Pulled this way...
  July 8th, 2020 09:45
• Treasured. (Fay Slimm.) Even more treasured now i could easily believe. I must say your words...
  July 8th, 2020 09:41
• Ripples (PoeticBiscuit) Makes a lot of sense to me.
  July 8th, 2020 09:34
• All I Need (Orchidee) A fine piece today Orchidee. the feeling i get when i am in a place which...
  July 8th, 2020 09:26
• Not a Bad House. (Goldfinch60) For about 18 months i had an apartment on the first floor of the stately...
  July 8th, 2020 09:21
• AGEING COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Two lines which encapsulate my appearance. You pic today has an uncanny...
  July 8th, 2020 09:12
• Our Little Wing... (Andrew Charles Forrest) These are words to inherit and gaze upon as ones own children grow into...
  July 7th, 2020 17:48
• Poor Git (Neville) The sadness of life\'s endings. Life must be a physical symphony for all...
  July 7th, 2020 12:46
• What we lost (JoshLohr) As was wisely said \"Each action has an equal and opposite reaction\"....
  July 7th, 2020 12:42
• Untenable. (Fay Slimm.) What you have written is fine and true. Love and lust are associated very...
  July 7th, 2020 12:34
• Eye with no sight (Poetic Dan) You have every right to your opinions and to voice them. \"For you are a...
  July 7th, 2020 12:26
• Ennio Morricone. (Goldfinch60) Nicely written Goldfinch. A master of his art.
  July 7th, 2020 12:19
• Just Thinking (PoeticBiscuit) Where do we go though? There\'s got to be more. But i am biased being a...
  July 7th, 2020 12:17
• AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Don\'t waste any time starving yourself of apples... that doctor is not...
  July 7th, 2020 12:14
• Mid Summer Meadow (Neville) Absolutely delightful. I write with a broad grin upon my face and a...
  July 6th, 2020 08:02