Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Dream to Where. (Goldfinch60)
A mystical dream indeed. So frustrating too as on awakening the shape of...
April 11th, 2020 06:44 - NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards)
I can\'t picture you as a lycra cycler either ...... but hiding from...
April 11th, 2020 06:28 - The Eleventh Hour (Neville)
Now look here Noah, I told you that bloody boat would get stuck in the...
April 10th, 2020 07:28 - Enchanted. (Fay Slimm.)
This is just such pleasure, so pleasing to read and i\'ll bet it gave you...
April 10th, 2020 07:22 - Back to the Seventies. (Goldfinch60)
Blimey, look at you back then. During the 70\'s i was in several...
April 10th, 2020 04:44 - Confused By Love, Enlightened By Life. (Aa Harvey)
Really sensitively written love dilemma. Such sentiments we conceal...
April 10th, 2020 01:37 - Yoke (John Prophet)
So very true. This why religion captures the mind of the young naive...
April 9th, 2020 13:47 - Birdsong (Neville)
And then she bit me!
For me the blackbirds evening song takes some...
April 9th, 2020 13:43 - Gold Vision. (Fay Slimm.)
Painted vivvidly as ever with sophistication of your unique brush...
April 9th, 2020 13:40 - As in Life #15 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Short and punchy with a big big message.
Let us hope we all grow taller...
April 9th, 2020 13:35 - Lamenting The Light (Orchidee)
Just for the record like, does it say in the bible that Jesus was...
April 9th, 2020 02:17 - Good People. (Goldfinch60)
This is so true. I don\'t have much social contact, i don\'t seem to need...
April 9th, 2020 00:57 - NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
That\'s me peeing in the bushes...drat! i thought i\'d got away with...
April 9th, 2020 00:53 - Dont Kid Yourself (Neville)
Most definitely agree. Dear Josef Stalin killed more than Adolf Hitler and...
April 8th, 2020 11:55 - Chance. (Fay Slimm.)
Age brings knowledge, so when certain feelings are aroused, we know...
April 8th, 2020 07:57 - Black and Brown (Hoopie)
If this is about coronavirus you should be mindful that it is no respecter...
April 8th, 2020 07:50 - Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
Such glorious memories you hold of a true love which fulfilled you many...
April 8th, 2020 01:26 - Butterfly Wings (Ron parrish aka wordman)
There are a lot of beautiful lines written into this piece.
April 7th, 2020 18:30 - Amen (Aa Harvey)
Whatever you believe our god to be this is a precious piece of work....
April 7th, 2020 13:08 - Is There Anyone There (Neville)
So many out there paying lip-service in so many ways. A feature of...
April 7th, 2020 13:00 - prettier on paper (Queer-with-a-pen)
This shouts \"I dunno what i want but i sure don\'t want what i\'ve...
April 7th, 2020 11:41 - Royalty (Hoopie)
Your words seem to be having a go at everybody without stating why. There...
April 7th, 2020 11:29 - “new exhibit, broken heart on display” (Jakesevern)
It will never be the same, but it will be mended by you and time. Many...
April 7th, 2020 11:15 - Hunger. (Fay Slimm.)
Within these words i can feel the longing of one looking out to sea. The...
April 7th, 2020 09:09 - IN LOCKDOWN (Michael Edwards)
He he he, or a \"room crawl\"... best of it is, who cares if u actually...
April 7th, 2020 09:04 - Frustrated Calendar. (Goldfinch60)
You still find time for those river walks though I bet. Stay at home...
April 7th, 2020 09:02 - Things That Cats Taught Me (Sanjana Varma)
A really delightful read from you today. I have also learned about both...
April 6th, 2020 10:51 - Ache (SerenWise)
A very mindful write. Loneliness can take us to the most interesting of...
April 6th, 2020 06:23 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
Times certainly change when u become able to attach an index to her...
April 6th, 2020 06:19 - Take Me. (Fay Slimm.)
There is tragedy in the air and your first verse here took me straight to...
April 6th, 2020 06:15 - Hello! (Goldfinch60)
A pal called his young alsation \'Elgar\', he wasnt able to train it at...
April 6th, 2020 06:11 - STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards)
There\'s a sexual junction
lubricates well with unction
but have the...
April 6th, 2020 06:07 - Love\'s Effect. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s what breathings for surely? Careful with that breathlessness at the...
April 5th, 2020 08:42 - Fear of Haiku (Neville)
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they...
April 5th, 2020 08:39 - Flying Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Carried on the gentle breeze of love flying to all the places of you know...
April 5th, 2020 05:23 - THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards)
That\'s all i can stand! I can\'t stand no more! (falls over).
Each...
April 4th, 2020 06:30 - Hooligans. (Goldfinch60)
Whereas i agree with you, it appears we are out of step with society. Now...
April 4th, 2020 06:25 - Stop (Vanessa wallace)
You will only hear crap if you mix with people who talk crap. If you are...
April 4th, 2020 06:17 - Perfection. (Fay Slimm.)
Aren\'t we all. by and large, envious of our aerial friends. I have often...
April 3rd, 2020 03:50 - Annie\'s Smile. (Goldfinch60)
A luxury i don\'t have. Not missed until something goes wrong.
April 3rd, 2020 03:41 - Once upon a time (J. J.)
That\'s my kind of poem. Short and with bags of punch!
Good one!
April 2nd, 2020 17:30 - Unprecedented (Heather Harrisson)
On your profile page it shows that you have never ever bothered to read...
April 2nd, 2020 12:11 - To be is not to forget (Poetic Dan)
Moments end.. thats natural. Surely taking the mental spirit of those...
April 2nd, 2020 10:32 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful drama in this Fay as you once again own the dawning day and...
April 2nd, 2020 03:55 - Ascend (Into Madness) (Sanjana Varma)
Ascent? Love the mental pic of crows with teeth.
April 2nd, 2020 03:21 - I\'VE NEVER SEEN (Michael Edwards)
That kind of stuff is not easy to write... do you save up these gems ?...
April 2nd, 2020 03:19 - Blimey! (Goldfinch60)
Yes, so much more fun than playstation/nintendo and any kid passing by...
April 2nd, 2020 01:41 - Revived. (Fay Slimm.)
Each love is different isn\'t it. Maybe more learned as we realise how...
April 1st, 2020 11:51 - Coronavirus song (Renzi)
Ello, good to see you on here again. I love the sincerity of your demeanor...
April 1st, 2020 11:45 - Sheep Selected (Orchidee)
I dunno Orchi, you christians are a questionable lot. In the bible thers...
April 1st, 2020 11:40 - Came the Day. (Goldfinch60)
You write with feeling and empathy for this lady today G. One can\'t but...
April 1st, 2020 11:35 - Treasure. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Shall i compare thee to an alcoholic ... one who doth constantly drink...
March 31st, 2020 05:31 - Discerning Distancing (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchidee.... I have started to imagine u playing that old...
March 31st, 2020 05:25 - They belong to me (Arturo Fernandez Ferre)
The closing part of your piece today is a path i have mentally strolled...
March 31st, 2020 02:38 - I FOUND A QUIZ (Michael Edwards)
\'Arc at you, ... Joan.
In an argument a long long time ago i said to...
March 31st, 2020 01:48 - River Journey. (Goldfinch60)
Whilst asking nothing, taking nothing and exposing everything it seems...
March 31st, 2020 01:42 - me (The Lesser Being)
well. I\'d like to see quite a lot more poetry from you. By doing that you...
March 31st, 2020 01:38 - Holy Sonnet Of The Two Destinies (Richard Paulson)
He he he so you\'ve seen what eyes look like in heaven and in hell have...
March 31st, 2020 00:19 - Sistership. (Fay Slimm.)
Glorious and sad. Very touching to me because I was so close to my older...
March 30th, 2020 08:22 - Battle with Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Such an inportant message youve conveyed today in plain words.
We didn\'t...
March 30th, 2020 03:14 - Corona Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
For a poetic old timer
there\'s really nowt finer
than to rhyme
what...
March 29th, 2020 04:15 - Living Side - Poet’s Note 4 (Nafis Light)
Unwind relax and let it flow as it will.
March 28th, 2020 11:44 - Aurora. (Fay Slimm.)
You led me through a woodland with freshened senses as i read and re-read...
March 28th, 2020 11:41 - Victim of Loneliness? (Goldfinch60)
With age comes a myriad of blessings and trials but one rare quality is...
March 28th, 2020 04:13 - THE GLASS (Michael Edwards)
Is this about my toilet bowl?
Careful what you wish for! LOL
March 28th, 2020 04:07 - Frustration. (Fay Slimm.)
LOL sometimes its not easy to read the other genders needs and that works...
March 27th, 2020 04:50 - I can\'t write them a letter so I\'ll start with you! (Poetic Dan)
Seeing your videos which are always so enjoyable and reading you on your...
March 27th, 2020 04:42 - Day 4 - Arthur\'s lament (Saxon Crow)
Excellent writing Crow. Loved the Arthurian context and the message was...
March 27th, 2020 04:35 - A Walk to My Willow. (Goldfinch60)
That river of yours does you a power of good. But you are supposed to be...
March 27th, 2020 04:31 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Excellent nonsense! More of this kind of stuff please. Great pic too.
March 27th, 2020 04:28 - MASKING THE TRUTH (Joe Marcello)
Think about it...if god created this planet.... yeah that saviour bloke...
March 26th, 2020 16:02 - End of Times? (PoeticBiscuit)
He he he SNAP! I wrote on the same theme today...please have a look at my...
March 26th, 2020 15:58 - What the Hell am I supposed to do? (Cresposaccent)
Wisdom arrives after a lot of suffering and suffering is written all...
March 26th, 2020 15:52 - Darkness (Rrodriguez)
Wasting your time praying, it doesn\'t work.... checkout those who prayed...
March 26th, 2020 13:14 - Day 3 (Saxon Crow)
One might say there are more questions than answers. But when a blackbird...
March 26th, 2020 11:30 - Corona Virus ~ Mother E (Angel~Wings)
Whereas i totally agree i do think this could have been several poems...
March 26th, 2020 06:31 - My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions (Neville)
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is...
March 26th, 2020 04:23 - Friday May 5th 2017 (Elsiewarrenswords)
Nice one! But lets see what life has done for your expression in the...
March 26th, 2020 03:52 - LSD (CharlieFanning)
Why? unsure! Justification - I walked away from it with a mind expanded.
March 26th, 2020 03:44 - here and now (Siranswerer)
A woman or a cat? They\'re so damned similar.
Thank you for getting the...
March 26th, 2020 03:42 - you won\'t read my poems (Hazel Kaye)
That\'s the real poetry of love and desire. Excellent!
March 26th, 2020 03:39 - That\'s Tuesday (Afternoontea)
And that\'s one delightful poem. You lucky person having such a wonderful...
March 26th, 2020 03:35 - Tell Me (Mary73223)
Beautiful love poem which reads like watching a bud turn into a wonderful...
March 26th, 2020 03:32 - Realism. Short n simple (A)
Feelings into words are the equasion which is the making of a poet. It...
March 26th, 2020 03:29 - Together for Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
And so, to so many questions we cannot find answers for. Many avenues our...
March 26th, 2020 03:20 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Been there, done that.... I wish I could still fit into that T-shirt.
March 26th, 2020 03:15 - Agony XoX (Charlotte ♡︎)
Wow! this reads like a prelude to exodus.
Often who we are perceived to...
March 25th, 2020 18:17 - Past Memory (PoeticBiscuit)
Ha! the bitter sweet of the one that got away, or was cast aside. But are...
March 25th, 2020 12:13 - Day 2 (Saxon Crow)
Lovely happy words and fun to read. I hope you can look back on these...
March 25th, 2020 12:11 - Tasting. (Fay Slimm.)
As described by you and Goldfinch today it is indeed a wonderful,...
March 25th, 2020 12:09 - What a Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
The \'church\' of god is all around you in this piece Mr G. What better...
March 25th, 2020 04:18 - Job Lot of Biro’s (Neville)
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video...
March 24th, 2020 13:17 - Still trying Mr Lee (Poetic Dan)
I reckon that if you can give 100% of yourself to a task then you must...
March 24th, 2020 13:12 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the second part especially Fay. Reminds us all who still have the...
March 24th, 2020 13:07 - Strange Times Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Well i was planning to do some DIY whilst at home but it looks like there...
March 24th, 2020 03:05 - Day 1 (Saxon Crow)
Yes i got my text from NHS at teatime monday telling my i am vulnerable...
March 24th, 2020 02:59 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Now that made me laugh out loud and i\'m still smiling. Top marks.
March 24th, 2020 02:57 - Living Side - Penguins Go Out While People Stay In (Nafis Light)
The penguins shall inherit the toilet tissue.
March 22nd, 2020 18:43 - Mother-Fed. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow Fay Wow! I loved every word of this.... i pictured so vividly...
March 22nd, 2020 18:16 - My Road to Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Then along came Bird, Dizzy and Presley handing reins to Zawinul, Brecker...
March 22nd, 2020 18:04
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