Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Miss you 2020 (Poetic Dan)
Just remember these words Dan \"love will find a way\". Those kids love...
April 18th, 2020 11:47 - 🧡 RED WINE 🧡 ELIXIR OF LIFE 🧡 A 5 5 4 SONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Do you invent \'facts\' on the fly? Red wine prevents cancer and...
April 18th, 2020 01:44 - Wonderful Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Some singers are in tune with our tear ducts. The one i chose today gets...
April 18th, 2020 01:38 - THE BABY SHOW (Michael Edwards)
Betcha looked a real lil cutie. But mum got the prize for bravery. Love...
April 18th, 2020 01:36 - Fluff it! (Poetic Dan)
I do wish Orchdee would stop calling me his teddy bear!
April 16th, 2020 11:50 - Lost and Found (M.E.M.)
Some of us conceal life\'s scars more effectively than others do. Some...
April 16th, 2020 11:47 - A rose in bloom (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful words for a beautiful time in the lives of you and your family....
April 16th, 2020 08:10 - Just my M24 and Me (Neville)
Before i commented
yesterday was green
eaten through the bottom
rust...
April 16th, 2020 05:31 - Thoughts. (Fay Slimm.)
Once tasted, the richest flavour remains in our souls to drain our...
April 16th, 2020 04:24 - 💛 DEATH OF HUMANITY 💛 A 6 6 2 BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOL when did you last witness planet earth as being paradise for...
April 16th, 2020 04:12 - Tree-Trust (Orchidee)
You\'re an exotic one you are Orchidee... an olive tree no less... why...
April 16th, 2020 03:56 - At the Turning Point (Goldfinch60)
Initially, I imagine, there\'s a reassuring comfort in meeting a fellow...
April 16th, 2020 01:40 - HEAL OUR LAND OH LORD (WE ARE SORRY) (Hamrids)
And you think your god is going to listen this time and let you off? Just...
April 16th, 2020 01:30 - Stamping License Plates (FredPeyer)
I sit here impressed, in my cell the sewing of tea-bags cannot compare...
April 16th, 2020 00:26 - what love will do (Dusk arising)
Those 105e anglias were something... the doors were so heavy that they...
April 15th, 2020 07:39 - Revealed. (Fay Slimm.)
Do I read betrayal of the most sacred trust revealed here.
A hurt so...
April 15th, 2020 05:37 - Talking to Yourself. (Goldfinch60)
Fun stuff.
I\'ve been happy to be alone for quite some time and talking...
April 15th, 2020 02:01 - COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
Blue Mountain as and when... there\'s nothing else quite like it...... ...
April 15th, 2020 01:58 - Strawberries (Thewayiwrite)
Lately the early strawberries here in UK come from a place where they...
April 14th, 2020 18:49 - balance (Siranswerer)
Gosh, and you look so human too.
April 14th, 2020 18:46 - Lawless (Poetic Dan)
We all have to respect the law, otherwise society will collapse. It\'s a...
April 14th, 2020 18:22 - I wanto to be remembered as... (Rrodriguez)
Looks like some people will remember you for saying god spoke to you. I...
April 14th, 2020 07:55 - Redefining. (Fay Slimm.)
So do you reckon i should go for a paddle?
I was of course thinking of...
April 14th, 2020 05:27 - That Empty Chair. (Goldfinch60)
Life can be so bloody cruel! At a time when your positive nature had you...
April 14th, 2020 03:32 - Rage (Jenny.g)
I think i might understand your rage. I found rage when prayer became...
April 13th, 2020 18:11 - Strategic Goodbyes (Neville)
Not only do i hear that chill wind blowing through your words but i can...
April 13th, 2020 13:36 - Over 10,000 (Sue.evans)
The worldwide figures are of course higher and affect all in just the same...
April 13th, 2020 07:11 - History Repeats Itself (Aa Harvey)
Unite ! become a virus.... for ye shall have the world.
April 13th, 2020 07:05 - Nearest. (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed the dandelion is a beautiful creation though scorned by me and most...
April 13th, 2020 07:02 - EMBERS TURN TO ASH (Michael Edwards)
Oh so moody a piece. I don\'t know why but it says so much.
A must for...
April 13th, 2020 06:51 - Natural Neighbours (Orchidee)
Sing along with me Orchi
Denari ... Denari...
spendin it can drive ya...
April 13th, 2020 06:46 - darling bardling (Queer-with-a-pen)
You are among people tarred with a similar brush for we all love to write...
April 13th, 2020 06:36 - Days in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Coincidentally i took up ukelele last year. A £9.99 purchase in Aldi. The...
April 13th, 2020 06:27 - Falling for him (Primrose)
That\'s the way iy happens. Such a magical time is falling in love and...
April 13th, 2020 06:15 - My song (Thewayiwrite)
Sad. But if this is a reflection of whats happening in your life, then...
April 12th, 2020 13:20 - Ma Hal Khe Te (Neville)
May you find purpose anew in the time left/allotted to you before that...
April 12th, 2020 11:21 - Walk On. (Goldfinch60)
HEEL !
Ha ha, now am i calling out an instruction to a dog or calling...
April 12th, 2020 07:51 - Beliefs (John Prophet)
Whilst they were believing the world was flat some guys got together and...
April 11th, 2020 19:25 - Not Quite Out of the Blue (Neville)
Strangely Dean Koontz in a 1980/90 novel predicted a virus eminating from...
April 11th, 2020 13:07 - Ready to rave (Poetic Dan)
Simple words Dan which contain wisdom of the ages.
April 11th, 2020 06:49 - Dream to Where. (Goldfinch60)
A mystical dream indeed. So frustrating too as on awakening the shape of...
April 11th, 2020 06:44 - NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards)
I can\'t picture you as a lycra cycler either ...... but hiding from...
April 11th, 2020 06:28 - The Eleventh Hour (Neville)
Now look here Noah, I told you that bloody boat would get stuck in the...
April 10th, 2020 07:28 - Enchanted. (Fay Slimm.)
This is just such pleasure, so pleasing to read and i\'ll bet it gave you...
April 10th, 2020 07:22 - Back to the Seventies. (Goldfinch60)
Blimey, look at you back then. During the 70\'s i was in several...
April 10th, 2020 04:44 - Confused By Love, Enlightened By Life. (Aa Harvey)
Really sensitively written love dilemma. Such sentiments we conceal...
April 10th, 2020 01:37 - Yoke (John Prophet)
So very true. This why religion captures the mind of the young naive...
April 9th, 2020 13:47 - Birdsong (Neville)
And then she bit me!
For me the blackbirds evening song takes some...
April 9th, 2020 13:43 - Gold Vision. (Fay Slimm.)
Painted vivvidly as ever with sophistication of your unique brush...
April 9th, 2020 13:40 - As in Life #15 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Short and punchy with a big big message.
Let us hope we all grow taller...
April 9th, 2020 13:35 - Lamenting The Light (Orchidee)
Just for the record like, does it say in the bible that Jesus was...
April 9th, 2020 02:17 - Good People. (Goldfinch60)
This is so true. I don\'t have much social contact, i don\'t seem to need...
April 9th, 2020 00:57 - NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
That\'s me peeing in the bushes...drat! i thought i\'d got away with...
April 9th, 2020 00:53 - Dont Kid Yourself (Neville)
Most definitely agree. Dear Josef Stalin killed more than Adolf Hitler and...
April 8th, 2020 11:55 - Chance. (Fay Slimm.)
Age brings knowledge, so when certain feelings are aroused, we know...
April 8th, 2020 07:57 - Black and Brown (Hoopie)
If this is about coronavirus you should be mindful that it is no respecter...
April 8th, 2020 07:50 - Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
Such glorious memories you hold of a true love which fulfilled you many...
April 8th, 2020 01:26 - Butterfly Wings (Ron parrish aka wordman)
There are a lot of beautiful lines written into this piece.
April 7th, 2020 18:30 - Amen (Aa Harvey)
Whatever you believe our god to be this is a precious piece of work....
April 7th, 2020 13:08 - Is There Anyone There (Neville)
So many out there paying lip-service in so many ways. A feature of...
April 7th, 2020 13:00 - prettier on paper (Queer-with-a-pen)
This shouts \"I dunno what i want but i sure don\'t want what i\'ve...
April 7th, 2020 11:41 - Royalty (Hoopie)
Your words seem to be having a go at everybody without stating why. There...
April 7th, 2020 11:29 - “new exhibit, broken heart on display” (Jakesevern)
It will never be the same, but it will be mended by you and time. Many...
April 7th, 2020 11:15 - Hunger. (Fay Slimm.)
Within these words i can feel the longing of one looking out to sea. The...
April 7th, 2020 09:09 - IN LOCKDOWN (Michael Edwards)
He he he, or a \"room crawl\"... best of it is, who cares if u actually...
April 7th, 2020 09:04 - Frustrated Calendar. (Goldfinch60)
You still find time for those river walks though I bet. Stay at home...
April 7th, 2020 09:02 - Things That Cats Taught Me (Sanjana Varma)
A really delightful read from you today. I have also learned about both...
April 6th, 2020 10:51 - Ache (SerenWise)
A very mindful write. Loneliness can take us to the most interesting of...
April 6th, 2020 06:23 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
Times certainly change when u become able to attach an index to her...
April 6th, 2020 06:19 - Take Me. (Fay Slimm.)
There is tragedy in the air and your first verse here took me straight to...
April 6th, 2020 06:15 - Hello! (Goldfinch60)
A pal called his young alsation \'Elgar\', he wasnt able to train it at...
April 6th, 2020 06:11 - STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards)
There\'s a sexual junction
lubricates well with unction
but have the...
April 6th, 2020 06:07 - Love\'s Effect. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s what breathings for surely? Careful with that breathlessness at the...
April 5th, 2020 08:42 - Fear of Haiku (Neville)
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they...
April 5th, 2020 08:39 - Flying Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Carried on the gentle breeze of love flying to all the places of you know...
April 5th, 2020 05:23 - THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards)
That\'s all i can stand! I can\'t stand no more! (falls over).
Each...
April 4th, 2020 06:30 - Hooligans. (Goldfinch60)
Whereas i agree with you, it appears we are out of step with society. Now...
April 4th, 2020 06:25 - Stop (Vanessa wallace)
You will only hear crap if you mix with people who talk crap. If you are...
April 4th, 2020 06:17 - Perfection. (Fay Slimm.)
Aren\'t we all. by and large, envious of our aerial friends. I have often...
April 3rd, 2020 03:50 - Annie\'s Smile. (Goldfinch60)
A luxury i don\'t have. Not missed until something goes wrong.
April 3rd, 2020 03:41 - Once upon a time (J. J.)
That\'s my kind of poem. Short and with bags of punch!
Good one!
April 2nd, 2020 17:30 - Unprecedented (Heather Harrisson)
On your profile page it shows that you have never ever bothered to read...
April 2nd, 2020 12:11 - To be is not to forget (Poetic Dan)
Moments end.. thats natural. Surely taking the mental spirit of those...
April 2nd, 2020 10:32 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful drama in this Fay as you once again own the dawning day and...
April 2nd, 2020 03:55 - Ascend (Into Madness) (Sanjana Varma)
Ascent? Love the mental pic of crows with teeth.
April 2nd, 2020 03:21 - I\'VE NEVER SEEN (Michael Edwards)
That kind of stuff is not easy to write... do you save up these gems ?...
April 2nd, 2020 03:19 - Blimey! (Goldfinch60)
Yes, so much more fun than playstation/nintendo and any kid passing by...
April 2nd, 2020 01:41 - Revived. (Fay Slimm.)
Each love is different isn\'t it. Maybe more learned as we realise how...
April 1st, 2020 11:51 - Coronavirus song (Renzi)
Ello, good to see you on here again. I love the sincerity of your demeanor...
April 1st, 2020 11:45 - Sheep Selected (Orchidee)
I dunno Orchi, you christians are a questionable lot. In the bible thers...
April 1st, 2020 11:40 - Came the Day. (Goldfinch60)
You write with feeling and empathy for this lady today G. One can\'t but...
April 1st, 2020 11:35 - Treasure. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Shall i compare thee to an alcoholic ... one who doth constantly drink...
March 31st, 2020 05:31 - Discerning Distancing (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchidee.... I have started to imagine u playing that old...
March 31st, 2020 05:25 - They belong to me (Arturo Fernandez Ferre)
The closing part of your piece today is a path i have mentally strolled...
March 31st, 2020 02:38 - I FOUND A QUIZ (Michael Edwards)
\'Arc at you, ... Joan.
In an argument a long long time ago i said to...
March 31st, 2020 01:48 - River Journey. (Goldfinch60)
Whilst asking nothing, taking nothing and exposing everything it seems...
March 31st, 2020 01:42 - me (The Lesser Being)
well. I\'d like to see quite a lot more poetry from you. By doing that you...
March 31st, 2020 01:38 - Holy Sonnet Of The Two Destinies (Richard Paulson)
He he he so you\'ve seen what eyes look like in heaven and in hell have...
March 31st, 2020 00:19 - Sistership. (Fay Slimm.)
Glorious and sad. Very touching to me because I was so close to my older...
March 30th, 2020 08:22 - Battle with Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Such an inportant message youve conveyed today in plain words.
We didn\'t...
March 30th, 2020 03:14
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