Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- of irish spring soap and absent fathers (Queer-with-a-pen)
Between the lines i read the melancholy of regret. Regret that whilst you...
September 15th, 2020 00:58 - “Terzanelle” A Million Stars (Dove)
So many unanswered questions when we lose someone dear to us, so we look...
September 14th, 2020 12:31 - Given. (Fay Slimm.)
Can\'t help but be drawn into the character of dear Rosie here for I too...
September 14th, 2020 06:25 - Opening and Shutting Doors. (Goldfinch60)
No no no. In closing doors we are acknowledging the wisdom our experiences...
September 14th, 2020 06:15 - Big Mistake (DesertWords)
Excellent! Really enjoyed this. Pathos throughout. Great slant upon which...
September 14th, 2020 06:10 - The Cabin Floor (Evergreen)
Couldn\'t stop reading this. Longer pieces generally bore me but here you...
September 14th, 2020 06:07 - BEAUTY ~ PURPOS\\E ~ ORDER & DESIGN ~ LIFE ON PLANET EARTH ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Maybe he would see the agony of the recipient when a mother insect lays...
September 13th, 2020 05:08 - Oxtail Stew. (Goldfinch60)
And may there be excellence of waiter service and afterwards the kitchen...
September 13th, 2020 04:02 - Poem, LOVE? (AwHec8)
Methinks there is much about love to learn for you. Love will teach you...
September 12th, 2020 10:39 - PROVERBS FOR POETS ~ AN ANTHOLOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Most enjoyable post from you today.
September 12th, 2020 05:11 - Weird Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60)
I enjoy ironing about twice a year.... mostly i wear un-ironed clothes...
September 12th, 2020 05:07 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Love the way you lead us into darkness to deliver that final punchline,
September 12th, 2020 05:03 - How Are You? Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Some things about growing older are quite saddening. During adolescence Ms...
September 11th, 2020 15:21 - DOWNTOWN GIRL (Laura🌻)
Moving words for the memory of your lost friend and all the other...
September 11th, 2020 08:49 - Show Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Now there\'s a prayer and a half. But i reckon the solution is granted to...
September 11th, 2020 05:09 - Between Worlds. (Fay Slimm.)
I have to admit to being sidetracked by the geometry of this presentations...
September 11th, 2020 00:54 - FOR SUCH A TIME AS THIS ! ~ BRIAN ~ A KYRIELLE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nice bit of poetry there Brian. Of course, with Angela as inspiration the...
September 10th, 2020 03:49 - Diverse Paths. (Goldfinch60)
Hmmmm walking, I wish it were easier but Osteoarthritis in my knees,...
September 10th, 2020 03:24 - Poem, Day by Day (AwHec8)
Good words of wisdom there. You have a lot to give in your poetic output...
September 9th, 2020 12:29 - Full.. (Poetic Dan)
Dunno why but today none of the videos on here are giving me audio so i...
September 9th, 2020 12:25 - Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower (Dove)
Super construction in classic style verse.
I particularly like (and...
September 9th, 2020 12:07 - Unnoticed (MrNobody40)
Story of my life mate.
But upon reflection i read your piece again and...
September 9th, 2020 12:02 - THE BIG STORM (Trenz Pruca)
@They say\' is only man trying to gainsay nature. But nature will have its...
September 9th, 2020 11:51 - Waking. (Fay Slimm.)
Well you \'bright-eyed doer\' you\'ve been and gone and done it again...
September 9th, 2020 11:48 - Clarity and Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
As Orchi would say - a fine write.
It\'s amazing, all that clutter we...
September 9th, 2020 11:39 - TWO FOR ONE THOUSAND (Michael Edwards)
There was a fine chap called M.E.
Who\'d been on a grand writing spree
i...
September 9th, 2020 11:31 - Death Is Nothing At All (MalharPatel190)
An outstanding first write in MPS.
Nice to see this appreciation of...
September 9th, 2020 11:14 - Lamplight (Trenz Pruca)
Great suspenseful writing. What horrors await us in your further writings....
September 8th, 2020 20:39 - Smooth Like Honey (Faitholajuyigbe)
Nice words. But mankind was hearing voices telling good things, the inner...
September 8th, 2020 14:23 - Open heart surgery (Poetic Dan)
Hi Dan. When my son was a toddler he was afraid of me. It wasn\'t a nice...
September 8th, 2020 11:07 - Balls. (Goldfinch60)
Trust you to come up with a load of balls like this.
September 8th, 2020 10:57 - autumn (Ron parrish aka wordman)
And squirrels make love all winter long
September 8th, 2020 10:01 - Family Gathering. (Dsouzcry)
Every one of us is an individual and it\'s not surprising for people to...
September 7th, 2020 17:50 - A room that echoes (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Sadness as if one were reaching for the last ever human touch, a...
September 7th, 2020 17:33 - Disguised. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes such lovely creation upon the plant and here upon my screen.
Then...
September 7th, 2020 17:28 - Miracle For A Multitude (Orchidee)
Should have gone to Lidl.
September 7th, 2020 02:24 - Tame Your Unquiet Minds. (Goldfinch60)
Sadly it is a great human failing. History shows our inability to live in...
September 7th, 2020 01:59 - WOVEN IDIOMS (Michael Edwards)
I laughed like a drain at your daft picture today, great fun.
Mow the...
September 7th, 2020 01:28 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A soul mate from a previous life maybe. Dreams take our minds to a...
September 7th, 2020 00:30 - Chimerical (Fay Slimm.)
Ha! Honorable tinklings upon breeze announce back door left open. Maybe...
September 6th, 2020 03:56 - That Annoying Drop. (Goldfinch60)
Snot what i was expecting to read.
I expect that henceforth I shall...
September 6th, 2020 01:43 - raindrops (Scarlet poet)
Life could be described as one rainstorm after another but you will learn...
September 6th, 2020 01:40 - Virus (A Boy With Roses)
Poetry from the unwell soul can be from a previously untapped mindset....
September 5th, 2020 12:46 - Sixteen turns! (Poetic Dan)
I know that feeling well and it\'s wonderful to know the same is coming...
September 5th, 2020 12:37 - Revival (Fay Slimm.)
And when revived I\'ll go find you a nice warm dog **** to dine...
September 5th, 2020 12:32 - Storm Stilled (Orchidee)
Aaah, thats where the five fishes came from is it?
September 5th, 2020 12:23 - Self Portrait (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Poignant phrases
September 5th, 2020 02:19 - Inevitability (Neville)
Ha a cheap trick|! Just the sort of ploy one might expect in court with...
September 5th, 2020 02:18 - Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60)
Is ir a shame that it takes us so long to realise what beauty is, Such...
September 5th, 2020 01:45 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards)
ha ha ha you\'re re-educating us
September 5th, 2020 01:42 - Suicide. (Renzi)
Hello old pal.
This poetic thing you and me do, Did u ever wonder why?...
September 4th, 2020 23:44 - Gladness And Goodness (Orchidee)
Ah yes i remember this singing duo Gladys and Goodies. They\'d still be...
September 4th, 2020 02:27 - Undiluted (Fay Slimm.)
And that is how life flows for the positive minded.
Another of your well...
September 4th, 2020 02:23 - Inspired by the best... (Poetic Dan)
I guess we all get lost in the day to day humdrum and if we look too...
September 4th, 2020 01:45 - Driving the Other Way. (Goldfinch60)
Expensive dreams are best seen heading someplace we ain\'t going.
September 4th, 2020 01:35 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (2) (Michael Edwards)
I can\'t speak for what isn\'t there but my bread\'s buttered when it\'s...
September 4th, 2020 01:33 - Consumed (Down the rabbithole)
The phrasing here, your choice words display you are a fine poet indeed. I...
September 3rd, 2020 21:45 - What It\'s Like To Be Me (Felicityjones)
Most of us are a front to those around us, even to those close to us but i...
September 3rd, 2020 21:34 - The Ladder to Heaven (AiR - Atman in Ravi)
Don\'t get lost in an old book that was written when everyone believed the...
September 3rd, 2020 12:44 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
There may be pain, regret, sadness and grief with and ending but, as you...
September 3rd, 2020 12:39 - Abundance. (Fay Slimm.)
And so to browse the brambles for fine plump dark berry fruit ignoring the...
September 3rd, 2020 12:32 - Tree of life (Poetic Dan)
Those are the words of a man who has come to terms with the way of the...
September 3rd, 2020 12:18 - No Return. (Goldfinch60)
Unable to contest the wisdom of your words here for with me they are...
September 3rd, 2020 12:14 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards)
I thought, I\'ll do it tomorrow
and remembered yesterday it was...
September 3rd, 2020 12:09 - Decisions & Choices (Neville)
And the world is full of sobbing women who fell foul of the decisions and...
September 3rd, 2020 12:01 - September\'s not blue, remember me & you (Poetic Dan)
That little daughter of yours is sure growing up daddy. Happy birthday...
September 2nd, 2020 10:23 - The onion you made me (Down the rabbithole)
Excellent! So well constructed, I\'m envious.
Into my favourites for...
September 2nd, 2020 07:24 - Esperanza. Amor. Muerte. (Siranswerer)
One is a definite. The other two optional.
September 2nd, 2020 07:22 - Interchange (Fay Slimm.)
Amazing isn\'t it that we are such wonderful creatures and sophisticated...
September 2nd, 2020 07:19 - Problem (Neville)
Oh you made me laugh. Any number of problems come to mind (well done...
September 2nd, 2020 06:24 - Pictures at an Exhibition. (Goldfinch60)
My ears were assaulted by that live performance of ELP. I didn\'t like it...
September 2nd, 2020 06:19 - Gifts (Fay Slimm.)
The dawn so beautiful and so inspiring. Wow were you inspired into fluid...
September 1st, 2020 15:11 - Strength (Felicityjones)
The seldom heard voice of the strong steadfast mind resounds here. Yes,...
September 1st, 2020 13:16 - Still in Love. (Goldfinch60)
You are a remarkable person. Where many would despair you air the love...
September 1st, 2020 12:47 - HORSES AND CARTS (Michael Edwards)
Super picture made me laugh.
Making sense out of nonsense and in an...
September 1st, 2020 12:34 - Simple as That (Neville)
The indisputable truth of it ! How many times have i been there at the...
August 31st, 2020 02:58 - Some of my thoughts as an African American teenage girl in America (Xlayla55x)
You\'ve every right to be angry and express it wherever and whenever you...
August 31st, 2020 01:59 - I Walk Onto the Lawn. (Goldfinch60)
Long may you continue to bash your balls in such wonderful surroundings.
August 31st, 2020 01:54 - Lovescape (Fay Slimm.)
As leaves repent to leave upon turn of autumnal breeze so doth reticence...
August 31st, 2020 01:51 - Golden Years (DesertWords)
Ha ha, good fun writing.
August 31st, 2020 00:25 - Awakened Side – Page 15 (Nafis Light)
Too right, too many demands side track us away from the simple desires we...
August 30th, 2020 22:13 - Poem, US Citizenship or Not! (AwHec8)
Trump is the new deity of USA. Ye shall give him due ignorance and follow...
August 30th, 2020 21:35 - Endsong (Neville)
It\'s all there Neville. Superb! I aspire to write such apposite...
August 30th, 2020 15:47 - The Lonely Moon (Mazen.safadi)
Great theme, most creative.
August 30th, 2020 11:02 - Who Dares. (Fay Slimm.)
Ferocious rarity now, the otter is something to marvel over. Superb...
August 30th, 2020 09:38 - Hiss Undone. (Goldfinch60)
We all have strange dreams now and again. Our friend Unsub has a panchant...
August 30th, 2020 09:25 - Offensive to be Bipolar (MelissaJA)
And fat people don\'t complain about being called fatty? Bald people about...
August 29th, 2020 15:38 - March with Me (MLHnow)
Do not destroy the symbols of your oppression - the slavers statues etc -...
August 29th, 2020 12:36 - Mine to Enjoy. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m thinking that the comment i made to your piece yesterday is just as...
August 29th, 2020 07:35 - Beach-Combing (Fay Slimm.)
Oh for gently windswept hair, sandy toes and feet and the distant roar of...
August 28th, 2020 05:55 - Twice Taken. (Goldfinch60)
You are learning about love in al it\'s reality as you experience it and...
August 28th, 2020 05:49 - LIMERICK 68 (Michael Edwards)
A creative artist called mike
would cycle to work on his bike
the air it...
August 28th, 2020 05:37 - Poem, America WTF!? (AwHec8)
All in all, humanity is not ready for true democracy because the human...
August 27th, 2020 18:42 - New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.)
A story of regret, repair, revitalisation and readiness. Life\'s rich...
August 27th, 2020 04:44 - Modern Love (Neville)
I have decided that i am better looking behind a full face plastic visor...
August 27th, 2020 04:34 - IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards)
I\'ve run out. Fair play to you.
August 27th, 2020 04:19 - Behind Their Peers! (Goldfinch60)
Americanisation of english language useage and unless it\'s slang i hate...
August 27th, 2020 04:14 - Treasure Trove (Orchidee)
That opening line put me straight into cornish pirate mode..... ooh ar...
August 26th, 2020 04:07 - Invasion. (Fay Slimm.)
Taking on the challenge to poetically describe the most beautiful...
August 26th, 2020 04:03 - Stop Washing. (Goldfinch60)
Ahhh one of my all time favs \'So what\' by Miles davis even though i used...
August 26th, 2020 03:46
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