Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• That Annoying Drop. (Goldfinch60) Snot what i was expecting to read. I expect that henceforth I shall...
  September 6th, 2020 01:43
• raindrops (Scarlet poet) Life could be described as one rainstorm after another but you will learn...
  September 6th, 2020 01:40
• Virus (A Boy With Roses) Poetry from the unwell soul can be from a previously untapped mindset....
  September 5th, 2020 12:46
• Sixteen turns! (Poetic Dan) I know that feeling well and it\'s wonderful to know the same is coming...
  September 5th, 2020 12:37
• Revival (Fay Slimm.) And when revived I\'ll go find you a nice warm dog **** to dine...
  September 5th, 2020 12:32
• Storm Stilled (Orchidee) Aaah, thats where the five fishes came from is it?
  September 5th, 2020 12:23
• Self Portrait (Ron parrish aka wordman) Poignant phrases
  September 5th, 2020 02:19
• Inevitability (Neville) Ha a cheap trick|! Just the sort of ploy one might expect in court with...
  September 5th, 2020 02:18
• Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60) Is ir a shame that it takes us so long to realise what beauty is, Such...
  September 5th, 2020 01:45
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards) ha ha ha you\'re re-educating us
  September 5th, 2020 01:42
• Suicide. (Renzi) Hello old pal. This poetic thing you and me do, Did u ever wonder why?...
  September 4th, 2020 23:44
• Gladness And Goodness (Orchidee) Ah yes i remember this singing duo Gladys and Goodies. They\'d still be...
  September 4th, 2020 02:27
• Undiluted (Fay Slimm.) And that is how life flows for the positive minded. Another of your well...
  September 4th, 2020 02:23
• Inspired by the best... (Poetic Dan) I guess we all get lost in the day to day humdrum and if we look too...
  September 4th, 2020 01:45
• Driving the Other Way. (Goldfinch60) Expensive dreams are best seen heading someplace we ain\'t going.
  September 4th, 2020 01:35
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (2) (Michael Edwards) I can\'t speak for what isn\'t there but my bread\'s buttered when it\'s...
  September 4th, 2020 01:33
• Consumed (Down the rabbithole) The phrasing here, your choice words display you are a fine poet indeed. I...
  September 3rd, 2020 21:45
• What It\'s Like To Be Me (Felicityjones) Most of us are a front to those around us, even to those close to us but i...
  September 3rd, 2020 21:34
• The Ladder to Heaven (AiR - Atman in Ravi) Don\'t get lost in an old book that was written when everyone believed the...
  September 3rd, 2020 12:44
• A Fragment (Jarcher54) There may be pain, regret, sadness and grief with and ending but, as you...
  September 3rd, 2020 12:39
• Abundance. (Fay Slimm.) And so to browse the brambles for fine plump dark berry fruit ignoring the...
  September 3rd, 2020 12:32
• Tree of life (Poetic Dan) Those are the words of a man who has come to terms with the way of the...
  September 3rd, 2020 12:18
• No Return. (Goldfinch60) Unable to contest the wisdom of your words here for with me they are...
  September 3rd, 2020 12:14
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards) I thought, I\'ll do it tomorrow and remembered yesterday it was...
  September 3rd, 2020 12:09
• Decisions & Choices (Neville) And the world is full of sobbing women who fell foul of the decisions and...
  September 3rd, 2020 12:01
• September\'s not blue, remember me & you (Poetic Dan) That little daughter of yours is sure growing up daddy. Happy birthday...
  September 2nd, 2020 10:23
• The onion you made me (Down the rabbithole) Excellent! So well constructed, I\'m envious. Into my favourites for...
  September 2nd, 2020 07:24
• Esperanza. Amor. Muerte. (Siranswerer) One is a definite. The other two optional.
  September 2nd, 2020 07:22
• Interchange (Fay Slimm.) Amazing isn\'t it that we are such wonderful creatures and sophisticated...
  September 2nd, 2020 07:19
• Problem (Neville) Oh you made me laugh. Any number of problems come to mind (well done...
  September 2nd, 2020 06:24
• Pictures at an Exhibition. (Goldfinch60) My ears were assaulted by that live performance of ELP. I didn\'t like it...
  September 2nd, 2020 06:19
• Gifts (Fay Slimm.) The dawn so beautiful and so inspiring. Wow were you inspired into fluid...
  September 1st, 2020 15:11
• Strength (Felicityjones) The seldom heard voice of the strong steadfast mind resounds here. Yes,...
  September 1st, 2020 13:16
• Still in Love. (Goldfinch60) You are a remarkable person. Where many would despair you air the love...
  September 1st, 2020 12:47
• HORSES AND CARTS (Michael Edwards) Super picture made me laugh. Making sense out of nonsense and in an...
  September 1st, 2020 12:34
• Simple as That (Neville) The indisputable truth of it ! How many times have i been there at the...
  August 31st, 2020 02:58
• Some of my thoughts as an African American teenage girl in America (Xlayla55x) You\'ve every right to be angry and express it wherever and whenever you...
  August 31st, 2020 01:59
• I Walk Onto the Lawn. (Goldfinch60) Long may you continue to bash your balls in such wonderful surroundings.
  August 31st, 2020 01:54
• Lovescape (Fay Slimm.) As leaves repent to leave upon turn of autumnal breeze so doth reticence...
  August 31st, 2020 01:51
• Golden Years (DesertWords) Ha ha, good fun writing.
  August 31st, 2020 00:25
• Awakened Side – Page 15 (Nafis Light) Too right, too many demands side track us away from the simple desires we...
  August 30th, 2020 22:13
• Poem, US Citizenship or Not! (AwHec8) Trump is the new deity of USA. Ye shall give him due ignorance and follow...
  August 30th, 2020 21:35
• Endsong (Neville) It\'s all there Neville. Superb! I aspire to write such apposite...
  August 30th, 2020 15:47
• The Lonely Moon (Mazen.safadi) Great theme, most creative.
  August 30th, 2020 11:02
• Who Dares. (Fay Slimm.) Ferocious rarity now, the otter is something to marvel over. Superb...
  August 30th, 2020 09:38
• Hiss Undone. (Goldfinch60) We all have strange dreams now and again. Our friend Unsub has a panchant...
  August 30th, 2020 09:25
• Offensive to be Bipolar (MelissaJA) And fat people don\'t complain about being called fatty? Bald people about...
  August 29th, 2020 15:38
• March with Me (MLHnow) Do not destroy the symbols of your oppression - the slavers statues etc -...
  August 29th, 2020 12:36
• Mine to Enjoy. (Goldfinch60) I\'m thinking that the comment i made to your piece yesterday is just as...
  August 29th, 2020 07:35
• Beach-Combing (Fay Slimm.) Oh for gently windswept hair, sandy toes and feet and the distant roar of...
  August 28th, 2020 05:55
• Twice Taken. (Goldfinch60) You are learning about love in al it\'s reality as you experience it and...
  August 28th, 2020 05:49
• LIMERICK 68 (Michael Edwards) A creative artist called mike would cycle to work on his bike the air it...
  August 28th, 2020 05:37
• Poem, America WTF!? (AwHec8) All in all, humanity is not ready for true democracy because the human...
  August 27th, 2020 18:42
• New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.) A story of regret, repair, revitalisation and readiness. Life\'s rich...
  August 27th, 2020 04:44
• Modern Love (Neville) I have decided that i am better looking behind a full face plastic visor...
  August 27th, 2020 04:34
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards) I\'ve run out. Fair play to you.
  August 27th, 2020 04:19
• Behind Their Peers! (Goldfinch60) Americanisation of english language useage and unless it\'s slang i hate...
  August 27th, 2020 04:14
• Treasure Trove (Orchidee) That opening line put me straight into cornish pirate mode..... ooh ar...
  August 26th, 2020 04:07
• Invasion. (Fay Slimm.) Taking on the challenge to poetically describe the most beautiful...
  August 26th, 2020 04:03
• Stop Washing. (Goldfinch60) Ahhh one of my all time favs \'So what\' by Miles davis even though i used...
  August 26th, 2020 03:46
• Summer’s End (Neville) When your heart is closing down and feeling like turning in on itself,...
  August 26th, 2020 03:37
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (5-8) (Michael Edwards) Oh no! I was dreading this for,... yesterday i did not put off till...
  August 26th, 2020 03:29
• ABC (TWENTY3) Dastardly defiant delivery desrves due dutiful deference denying dogmas,...
  August 25th, 2020 10:55
• New Jerusalem (Orchidee) I rekkon theys gonna have set a second sitting for the last supper when...
  August 25th, 2020 03:22
• If. (Fay Slimm.) By \'eck chuck, there\'s a lorra luv-n-devotion in that there, there...
  August 25th, 2020 03:19
• Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville) OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE. into my favs
  August 25th, 2020 03:13
• Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60) Scarramooche scarramouche can you do the fandango? I dunno why but i...
  August 25th, 2020 03:12
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards) A brush with the law - a sweeping statement? Too big for yer boots - they...
  August 25th, 2020 00:41
• damned alarm (Siranswerer) Yep, all too often my alarm clock has ruined some of the best things that...
  August 24th, 2020 15:52
• I\'m Still Human (PanAngel16) We are all failures. But just like you said in your poem today we put on...
  August 24th, 2020 15:50
• unreciprocated (Brycycle) That\'s a heartfelt piece if ever i read one. It\'s so good to be able to...
  August 24th, 2020 09:55
• Poem, Fool or Wise in the USA? (AwHec8) Sadly we are ruled by human nature Don. Those of us near the bottom of the...
  August 24th, 2020 09:47
• Vindicated Victor (Orchidee) I can just hear fido howling along to this as he chews a choirboys ankle...
  August 24th, 2020 07:46
• Battle of the Somme (Gavin) Lest we forget those who will not age. We all should be reminded of the...
  August 24th, 2020 07:44
• Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.) Oh Fay, what a beauty you have penned here. All in their later years will...
  August 24th, 2020 07:18
• Dream (Rose~) I love to read of dreams and often write of mine. Dreams are unwritten...
  August 24th, 2020 06:51
• Sun Shy (Neville) Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment. Nicely...
  August 24th, 2020 06:48
• Tosca Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Hmmm opera. Few and far between are the operas my ears will tolerate. As a...
  August 24th, 2020 06:45
• On duty (Arobot) You may pull the wool over my eyes but the dawg has the supernatural in...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:28
• Poem, Questions? (AwHec8) We already DO have a relationship with our creator.... or have you missed...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:25
• Watching. (Fay Slimm.) Awww pictures, pictures, pictures.... I\'m writing the play in my...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:23
• That Smile. (Goldfinch60) What better gift could anyone give to the world than a natural...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:20
• Bridges (Neville) A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet. Life and...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:17
• IDIOMS REMODELED (9-12) (Michael Edwards) A burger in the hand is worth two weeks sick pay Never put off until...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:11
• Observations #53 (Andrew Charles Forrest) Truly great piece today from you. Heartfelt by us older poets. This is...
  August 23rd, 2020 11:01
• VINCENT PRICE - Grandmaster of Horror A Tribute (FineB) Fine tribute to a celebrated man of the horrors. Having seen him...
  August 23rd, 2020 10:58
• Beautiful Contradictions (Neville) Over the last coupe of days the mere mention of a cat/kitten has brought a...
  August 22nd, 2020 06:09
• Lush (Fay Slimm.) Reading you today brings forth the lust in me for red wine. I haven\'t had...
  August 22nd, 2020 06:03
• IDIOMS REMODELED (5-8) (Michael Edwards) In for a penny, in for a pee Two swallows dont make a full stomache Many...
  August 22nd, 2020 05:57
• Carol\'s Autumn. (Goldfinch60) Lucky man to have such a gift from such a talented daughter. And it...
  August 22nd, 2020 05:52
• an argument in support of foolishness in all matters of love (Queer-with-a-pen) There was a time in another life when my wife and i bought two identical...
  August 21st, 2020 02:58
• Jerusalem Joyful And Just (Orchidee) And this is a posting on the othe piece.... two posts today.... ...
  August 21st, 2020 02:36
• Jerusalem Joyful And Just (Orchidee) Is it a miracle..... my list shows two posts from you today..... are...
  August 21st, 2020 02:35
• Betweeness (Fay Slimm.) That\'s me that is! After reading goldfinches piece today and...
  August 21st, 2020 02:32
• Experiences Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60) Same here tough some will wonder w.hy. This morning the beautiful giver of...
  August 21st, 2020 02:12
• Sky Hungry (Neville) Speaks of out admiration for the birds and the desire to fly.... fly free...
  August 21st, 2020 02:06
• IDIOMS REMODELED (1 - 4) (Michael Edwards) Aha, good to see you are prepared for power cuts and storing firewood in...
  August 21st, 2020 02:02
• Changed. (Fay Slimm.) Romance refreshes the parts other kinds of rowing just cannot touch and...
  August 20th, 2020 09:38
• Stormy Scene (Orchidee) The wind doth howl and tempest blow from your wrath so all should...
  August 20th, 2020 02:11
• Birds (Ethan Daniel) There is so much truth in your lines. Hurt teaches empathy and caring. But...
  August 20th, 2020 02:08