Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- My Speech to the Genie (MaddieJ)
Been there, done that, the wish for a gene dies and you\'re left all alone...
August 20th, 2020 02:05 - Pretty as a Pin (Neville)
All at sea over this little matelot\'s dream.... another mermaid? no...
August 20th, 2020 01:58 - Driving in the Rain. (Goldfinch60)
I guess you are tongue in cheek but hey... meet the real thing because my...
August 20th, 2020 01:51 - NO CAT FOR ME (Michael Edwards)
A waspish grin to start my day, thank you.
no cat for me
a faithful...
August 20th, 2020 00:14 - grey area (Madyson)
grey, opposites blend to a peaceful shade where both are discernable and...
August 19th, 2020 15:35 - Rapture (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed, love is heavenly.
And I sat thinking about love after...
August 18th, 2020 12:28 - A Mermaids Tale (Neville)
We all fly in our dreams and see the jewelry of our minds imagination -...
August 18th, 2020 12:23 - One Heart. (Goldfinch60)
Life comes with no promises of fairness and we must make our own...
August 18th, 2020 11:09 - Wake up (Smileeshellyy)
Dark, sad and mysterious with a lot of depth. Easy to relate to. Good...
August 17th, 2020 14:25 - I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 2 (Orchidee)
Beats me how you christians get away with making up words and placing then...
August 17th, 2020 11:15 - Young Cancer (BoxMyHeart)
You have to be there to feel it.
August 17th, 2020 06:55 - Wax Butterflies (Neville)
A beautiful story told as if through a mist of mystery itself, memories,...
August 17th, 2020 06:43 - Sleep\'s Acres. (Fay Slimm.)
Dreamyhead\'s delight before our eyes. Truly capturing the early waking to...
August 17th, 2020 06:38 - No Edgeways. (Goldfinch60)
Really good news to read. Big smile here, very pleased for you.
August 17th, 2020 06:31 - Merry............. (Orchidee)
Leave it out Fido.... I\'ve seen ya cock ya leg up and rattle the...
August 10th, 2020 09:53 - MSM (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t get me started ..... is it ignorance or laziness... shall i go...
August 10th, 2020 09:50 - Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville)
As will we all be once our day is passed and no longer out on a limb......
August 10th, 2020 08:32 - I Spied. (Fay Slimm.)
Amazing love poem. I wish i had written this.... definitely into my...
August 10th, 2020 08:26 - Fountain of Hope (Opefolorunsho)
The fountain of hope is within you and it doesn\'t matter whether you are...
August 10th, 2020 08:19 - Salvation Sharings (Orchidee)
\"By his mercies i shall live\" well lucky you Orchidee, tell that to the...
August 10th, 2020 06:06 - Fare ye well (L. B. Mek)
Encompassing a life of heroic duty, heartfelt care, disappointment and...
August 10th, 2020 05:27 - Freckles (Neville)
There is something light hearted and youthful about frekkles regardless of...
August 10th, 2020 05:20 - Contrivance. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh my, it\'s as if you had sourced the truth of why mother-in-law hated...
August 10th, 2020 05:12 - Is History Right? (Goldfinch60)
Such a shame so many are afraid to look at that historic book in the way...
August 10th, 2020 05:01 - LIMERICK 67 (Michael Edwards)
A porky young man from Tobago
wrote poetry to make the day go
but when...
August 8th, 2020 06:56 - Poem, Time for a Christ Change (AwHec8)
Great, another one in your tooth fairy series.
August 6th, 2020 08:58 - Poem, Yes He Rides (AwHec8)
Not sure whether this is about the tooth fairy or father christmas?
Are...
August 5th, 2020 02:58 - Smile For All. (Goldfinch60)
We are the positive kind Goldfinch, happy with where we fit into the...
August 4th, 2020 01:38 - Catzzzzzzz. (Fay Slimm.)
Superior beings every last one of them. Some people hate them for that. I...
July 30th, 2020 03:54 - Watchful Waiting (Orchidee)
I can see Fido\'s paws all over this one.
July 30th, 2020 02:21 - Imagination and Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
In the great scheme of things, this life may be a dream.
Reality is but...
July 30th, 2020 00:57 - dear diary (Scarlet poet)
Poetry will do more for you than your diary..... any day.
July 30th, 2020 00:16 - The Descendence (Lutalican)
Great piece, reminiscent of those famous fairy stories of old..... or...
July 30th, 2020 00:13 - The Greatest Love Of All (Morgen Joy)
There comes a time when you realise there is a light of love within you if...
July 30th, 2020 00:10 - SMOKEY *18* ADJUDICATOR ~ FIDOS DEPUTY CAT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
As i commented to Orchidee two days ago having realised who actually...
July 29th, 2020 12:08 - String (M.E.M.)
Oh i read into this that thing which so many have injected into their...
July 29th, 2020 12:02 - English Weather (Aa Harvey)
Aye, England becoming greater Manchester... famous for it\'s rain
July 29th, 2020 06:40 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
I was tempted to congratulate you on such a wonderful testament to the...
July 29th, 2020 04:04 - HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards)
Thats arse about face.
Madam, may i top your bottom up?
Gladys, he...
July 29th, 2020 02:38 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
Always struck me as a weird game.... when the flag isn\'t flying it\'s ok...
July 29th, 2020 02:35 - LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards)
Sunlight breaks over the cottage upon driftwood shore......
That...
July 28th, 2020 13:48 - Delightful Desire (Orchidee)
another fido composition. I can tell because of the paws (pause) between...
July 28th, 2020 05:06 - Beyond Giving (Neville)
No, you cannot gift life\'s experiences and the school of hard knocks....
July 28th, 2020 04:37 - In Error. (Fay Slimm.)
Great insight into the predicament of one of the lesser known, lesser...
July 28th, 2020 04:24 - High Priest Petitioning (Orchidee)
he knew the chances were slim
he thought about it down at the gym
but he...
July 27th, 2020 15:57 - The Final Ending (M.E.M.)
ooh the world\'s going to end this year. Just like it was supposed to end...
July 27th, 2020 15:33 - Two Weeks in July (Neville)
There is so much in here and plain to see it contains references which are...
July 27th, 2020 08:44 - If Only. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh but your words do all this upon entering my head. I asssure you birds...
July 27th, 2020 05:27 - For You (Lutalican)
A simple poem of love. Keep the words flowing under her eyes.
July 27th, 2020 05:23 - Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60)
I think it\'s a question of coming to terms with our stage of life....
July 27th, 2020 05:11 - Greatful to all here... (Poetic Dan)
That\'s speaking straight out of your soul without contrivance.
July 26th, 2020 16:59 - Dewdrop (A Boy With Roses)
I\'m not going to pretend i understand this piece other than i can see its...
July 26th, 2020 16:55 - A Happier Place. (Goldfinch60)
Always amazes me the amount of people who walk around with a permanent...
July 26th, 2020 02:04 - Patrol. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh that we had such disciplined dog owners hereabouts for the unattended...
July 25th, 2020 12:55 - HE\'S NOT DUMB (Michael Edwards)
Trouble is, you always get wind of what he\'s about to say.
Another of...
July 25th, 2020 12:49 - a hair technology (Lucifer very very very 1st)
OOOOOH technology, a word from the middle ages. I never, never, never,...
July 24th, 2020 13:34 - A bit of glue but don\'t lose you (Poetic Dan)
Probably the most profound piece you have ever published on mps here Dan....
July 24th, 2020 09:47 - A Moment in Nature. (Goldfinch60)
I had a moment of, something i had never seen before, in my bathroom...
July 24th, 2020 09:36 - WHEN BREEZES BLOW (Michael Edwards)
Can you do another sculpture please entitled \'on the way home from...
July 24th, 2020 09:33 - Awakened Side - Page Eight (Nafis Light)
relationships have to be a two way thing
..... or they go away
July 23rd, 2020 11:50 - Eyeing. (Fay Slimm.)
A failed trout tickling? No, Fay wouldn\'t do that....
Though yes you...
July 23rd, 2020 05:09 - Last Self Discovery (Lutalican)
Grrr \"and you are me\" is only 4 words LOL
Really good introspective...
July 23rd, 2020 05:01 - I AM The Bread Of Life - Part 2 (Orchidee)
Next up you\'ll be telling us Marmite is the devil.
July 23rd, 2020 02:17 - I Was There. (Goldfinch60)
I missed that one. Never been a horror movie fan.
Laughed out loud @ one...
July 23rd, 2020 02:15 - Poison (Nanett.01)
In all probability we all are somewhat shattered and harbour many doubts....
July 23rd, 2020 02:11 - NEVER CHOOSE (Michael Edwards)
Your sculpture today looks like something i would like to sit with in my...
July 23rd, 2020 02:05 - Lovely Little Lie (MelissaJA)
What a wonderful tease in your words today. The beautiful sensual ragged...
July 22nd, 2020 15:56 - windowpane (Noah Malice)
tears of raindrops on windows bring out the melancholy often it seems in...
July 22nd, 2020 14:18 - Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
Seems to me you are describing that perfect relationship which lasts and...
July 22nd, 2020 03:29 - Refilled. (Goldfinch60)
(hic) yus m\'lord... i wonder (hic) if you could fill it to the brim this...
July 22nd, 2020 01:15 - Time (Justagirl)
You will, it will, it has.
July 22nd, 2020 01:13 - Awake (Lutalican)
Those tortures can be hell and insomnia will rule.
A good book, or even a...
July 22nd, 2020 01:12 - Letter to God (Mik@el)
Well god sure aint the one that man created in christianity so don\'t...
July 21st, 2020 17:32 - One love (Bragee)
The United States would be all the stronger, all the wealthier and i dare...
July 21st, 2020 13:19 - Awakened Side - Page Seven (Nafis Light)
Keep on doing as you are doing, being as you are being. Be seen to be you.
July 21st, 2020 12:35 - he’s safe. (Leaaa)
Great expression of what love does to us.
July 21st, 2020 12:27 - Captured. (Fay Slimm.)
Your mention of slavery opened up a whole new reading of this piece for me...
July 21st, 2020 12:25 - Undervalued (Poetic Dan)
Some charge thousands.... and walking through town you see a busker with...
July 21st, 2020 12:19 - Relationship Remedy (Orchidee)
Relationships? Always add an egg... the pie is always the better for an...
July 21st, 2020 12:09 - I Love You (Goldfinch60)
I\'m sure you still hear those words Goldfinch and really know their worth...
July 21st, 2020 12:05 - NUTS (Michael Edwards)
A real cracker!
Love that sculpture too.
July 21st, 2020 12:03 - Poem, Who Will Save Your Souls? (AwHec8)
Are you identifying your playpen here or the playpen for those who like to...
July 21st, 2020 12:00 - Cold Showers (Cali Kittana)
The two extremes both needing water. Lovely choice of metaphor. Stay out...
July 21st, 2020 11:57 - A Woman in Love (MelissaJA)
Aren\'t we all this fragile when love opens us up and we let another right...
July 21st, 2020 11:54 - Song, Jesus said I’m His man! (AwHec8)
Good to see how you use Jesus here to lift you out of depression....
July 21st, 2020 11:45 - 🧿🕊D I V I N E (YoursTruly9)
Love is beautiful and teaches us if we are wise enough to learn. Love...
July 21st, 2020 11:42 - Tall Grasses (Sylviasearcher)
Yay, for in what form will reincarnation be, and where, when? For it is a...
July 20th, 2020 14:15 - Make a stand (Aa Harvey)
I agree, there is enough falseness in those who turn to god in times of...
July 20th, 2020 13:49 - Love Story (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A true romance if ever there was one. Sad how our immaturity can ruin such...
July 20th, 2020 13:39 - Undressed. (Fay Slimm.)
Mysterious and quite, quite beautiful each and every one. Something my...
July 20th, 2020 13:33 - TWENTY-SIX ASPECTS OF LOVE ~ AN ABCDarian POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loved the X for Xylophonic! much better than the cistomary X-rated quips...
July 20th, 2020 02:09 - Words For Walking Wisely (Orchidee)
I\'m sure all your thoughts and meditations are pure enough for your...
July 20th, 2020 02:02 - Adrift With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s a lovely place you describe there Goldfinch and it seems these...
July 20th, 2020 02:00 - nerves (Kalanigarcia)
Being on the survivior side of oesophagal cancer i can assure you there\'s...
July 20th, 2020 00:38 - Carved in Stone (MelissaJA)
One day, your name may be carved in stone and you could today choose the...
July 19th, 2020 13:07 - Crushed by your Hate (DianeKey6)
So sad to read this. I have witnessed some of the shameful bullying...
July 19th, 2020 12:58 - Convenient truth (Jeremy Leach)
I like your post today. Food for thought for an open mind, provokative....
July 19th, 2020 12:44 - For Cindy (Tayama)
Nice one. Any reader of my posts will see how i share the reminiscing...
July 19th, 2020 12:38 - I AM The Bread Of Life - Part 1 (Orchidee)
You\'re some crusty bread for sure Orchidee. Watch out, the devil\'s got...
July 19th, 2020 12:07 - Steaming Entitlement. (Goldfinch60)
Tell me about it. I had a steamy eye test on saturday morning.
Also I...
July 19th, 2020 12:05
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