Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Summer’s End (Neville) When your heart is closing down and feeling like turning in on itself,...
  August 26th, 2020 03:37
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (5-8) (Michael Edwards) Oh no! I was dreading this for,... yesterday i did not put off till...
  August 26th, 2020 03:29
• ABC (TWENTY3) Dastardly defiant delivery desrves due dutiful deference denying dogmas,...
  August 25th, 2020 10:55
• New Jerusalem (Orchidee) I rekkon theys gonna have set a second sitting for the last supper when...
  August 25th, 2020 03:22
• If. (Fay Slimm.) By \'eck chuck, there\'s a lorra luv-n-devotion in that there, there...
  August 25th, 2020 03:19
• Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville) OH BRILL! short and sweet... hits the spot BULLSEYE. into my favs
  August 25th, 2020 03:13
• Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60) Scarramooche scarramouche can you do the fandango? I dunno why but i...
  August 25th, 2020 03:12
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards) A brush with the law - a sweeping statement? Too big for yer boots - they...
  August 25th, 2020 00:41
• damned alarm (Siranswerer) Yep, all too often my alarm clock has ruined some of the best things that...
  August 24th, 2020 15:52
• I\'m Still Human (PanAngel16) We are all failures. But just like you said in your poem today we put on...
  August 24th, 2020 15:50
• unreciprocated (Brycycle) That\'s a heartfelt piece if ever i read one. It\'s so good to be able to...
  August 24th, 2020 09:55
• Poem, Fool or Wise in the USA? (AwHec8) Sadly we are ruled by human nature Don. Those of us near the bottom of the...
  August 24th, 2020 09:47
• Vindicated Victor (Orchidee) I can just hear fido howling along to this as he chews a choirboys ankle...
  August 24th, 2020 07:46
• Battle of the Somme (Gavin) Lest we forget those who will not age. We all should be reminded of the...
  August 24th, 2020 07:44
• Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.) Oh Fay, what a beauty you have penned here. All in their later years will...
  August 24th, 2020 07:18
• Dream (Rose~) I love to read of dreams and often write of mine. Dreams are unwritten...
  August 24th, 2020 06:51
• Sun Shy (Neville) Must have been drunk to tickle her **** in a matter of a moment. Nicely...
  August 24th, 2020 06:48
• Tosca Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Hmmm opera. Few and far between are the operas my ears will tolerate. As a...
  August 24th, 2020 06:45
• On duty (Arobot) You may pull the wool over my eyes but the dawg has the supernatural in...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:28
• Poem, Questions? (AwHec8) We already DO have a relationship with our creator.... or have you missed...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:25
• Watching. (Fay Slimm.) Awww pictures, pictures, pictures.... I\'m writing the play in my...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:23
• That Smile. (Goldfinch60) What better gift could anyone give to the world than a natural...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:20
• Bridges (Neville) A bridge - a way to overcome a problem/where two purposes meet. Life and...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:17
• IDIOMS REMODELED (9-12) (Michael Edwards) A burger in the hand is worth two weeks sick pay Never put off until...
  August 23rd, 2020 13:11
• Observations #53 (Andrew Charles Forrest) Truly great piece today from you. Heartfelt by us older poets. This is...
  August 23rd, 2020 11:01
• VINCENT PRICE - Grandmaster of Horror A Tribute (FineB) Fine tribute to a celebrated man of the horrors. Having seen him...
  August 23rd, 2020 10:58
• Beautiful Contradictions (Neville) Over the last coupe of days the mere mention of a cat/kitten has brought a...
  August 22nd, 2020 06:09
• Lush (Fay Slimm.) Reading you today brings forth the lust in me for red wine. I haven\'t had...
  August 22nd, 2020 06:03
• IDIOMS REMODELED (5-8) (Michael Edwards) In for a penny, in for a pee Two swallows dont make a full stomache Many...
  August 22nd, 2020 05:57
• Carol\'s Autumn. (Goldfinch60) Lucky man to have such a gift from such a talented daughter. And it...
  August 22nd, 2020 05:52
• an argument in support of foolishness in all matters of love (Queer-with-a-pen) There was a time in another life when my wife and i bought two identical...
  August 21st, 2020 02:58
• Jerusalem Joyful And Just (Orchidee) And this is a posting on the othe piece.... two posts today.... ...
  August 21st, 2020 02:36
• Jerusalem Joyful And Just (Orchidee) Is it a miracle..... my list shows two posts from you today..... are...
  August 21st, 2020 02:35
• Betweeness (Fay Slimm.) That\'s me that is! After reading goldfinches piece today and...
  August 21st, 2020 02:32
• Experiences Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60) Same here tough some will wonder w.hy. This morning the beautiful giver of...
  August 21st, 2020 02:12
• Sky Hungry (Neville) Speaks of out admiration for the birds and the desire to fly.... fly free...
  August 21st, 2020 02:06
• IDIOMS REMODELED (1 - 4) (Michael Edwards) Aha, good to see you are prepared for power cuts and storing firewood in...
  August 21st, 2020 02:02
• Changed. (Fay Slimm.) Romance refreshes the parts other kinds of rowing just cannot touch and...
  August 20th, 2020 09:38
• Stormy Scene (Orchidee) The wind doth howl and tempest blow from your wrath so all should...
  August 20th, 2020 02:11
• Birds (Ethan Daniel) There is so much truth in your lines. Hurt teaches empathy and caring. But...
  August 20th, 2020 02:08
• My Speech to the Genie (MaddieJ) Been there, done that, the wish for a gene dies and you\'re left all alone...
  August 20th, 2020 02:05
• Pretty as a Pin (Neville) All at sea over this little matelot\'s dream.... another mermaid? no...
  August 20th, 2020 01:58
• Driving in the Rain. (Goldfinch60) I guess you are tongue in cheek but hey... meet the real thing because my...
  August 20th, 2020 01:51
• NO CAT FOR ME (Michael Edwards) A waspish grin to start my day, thank you. no cat for me a faithful...
  August 20th, 2020 00:14
• grey area (Madyson) grey, opposites blend to a peaceful shade where both are discernable and...
  August 19th, 2020 15:35
• Rapture (Fay Slimm.) Yes indeed, love is heavenly. And I sat thinking about love after...
  August 18th, 2020 12:28
• A Mermaids Tale (Neville) We all fly in our dreams and see the jewelry of our minds imagination -...
  August 18th, 2020 12:23
• One Heart. (Goldfinch60) Life comes with no promises of fairness and we must make our own...
  August 18th, 2020 11:09
• Wake up (Smileeshellyy) Dark, sad and mysterious with a lot of depth. Easy to relate to. Good...
  August 17th, 2020 14:25
• I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 2 (Orchidee) Beats me how you christians get away with making up words and placing then...
  August 17th, 2020 11:15
• Young Cancer (BoxMyHeart) You have to be there to feel it.
  August 17th, 2020 06:55
• Wax Butterflies (Neville) A beautiful story told as if through a mist of mystery itself, memories,...
  August 17th, 2020 06:43
• Sleep\'s Acres. (Fay Slimm.) Dreamyhead\'s delight before our eyes. Truly capturing the early waking to...
  August 17th, 2020 06:38
• No Edgeways. (Goldfinch60) Really good news to read. Big smile here, very pleased for you.
  August 17th, 2020 06:31
• Merry............. (Orchidee) Leave it out Fido.... I\'ve seen ya cock ya leg up and rattle the...
  August 10th, 2020 09:53
• MSM (Goldfinch60) Don\'t get me started ..... is it ignorance or laziness... shall i go...
  August 10th, 2020 09:50
• Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville) As will we all be once our day is passed and no longer out on a limb......
  August 10th, 2020 08:32
• I Spied. (Fay Slimm.) Amazing love poem. I wish i had written this.... definitely into my...
  August 10th, 2020 08:26
• Fountain of Hope (Opefolorunsho) The fountain of hope is within you and it doesn\'t matter whether you are...
  August 10th, 2020 08:19
• Salvation Sharings (Orchidee) \"By his mercies i shall live\" well lucky you Orchidee, tell that to the...
  August 10th, 2020 06:06
• Fare ye well (L. B. Mek) Encompassing a life of heroic duty, heartfelt care, disappointment and...
  August 10th, 2020 05:27
• Freckles (Neville) There is something light hearted and youthful about frekkles regardless of...
  August 10th, 2020 05:20
• Contrivance. (Fay Slimm.) Oh my, it\'s as if you had sourced the truth of why mother-in-law hated...
  August 10th, 2020 05:12
• Is History Right? (Goldfinch60) Such a shame so many are afraid to look at that historic book in the way...
  August 10th, 2020 05:01
• LIMERICK 67 (Michael Edwards) A porky young man from Tobago wrote poetry to make the day go but when...
  August 8th, 2020 06:56
• Poem, Time for a Christ Change (AwHec8) Great, another one in your tooth fairy series.
  August 6th, 2020 08:58
• Poem, Yes He Rides (AwHec8) Not sure whether this is about the tooth fairy or father christmas? Are...
  August 5th, 2020 02:58
• Smile For All. (Goldfinch60) We are the positive kind Goldfinch, happy with where we fit into the...
  August 4th, 2020 01:38
• Catzzzzzzz. (Fay Slimm.) Superior beings every last one of them. Some people hate them for that. I...
  July 30th, 2020 03:54
• Watchful Waiting (Orchidee) I can see Fido\'s paws all over this one.
  July 30th, 2020 02:21
• Imagination and Dreams. (Goldfinch60) In the great scheme of things, this life may be a dream. Reality is but...
  July 30th, 2020 00:57
• dear diary (Scarlet poet) Poetry will do more for you than your diary..... any day.
  July 30th, 2020 00:16
• The Descendence (Lutalican) Great piece, reminiscent of those famous fairy stories of old..... or...
  July 30th, 2020 00:13
• The Greatest Love Of All (Morgen Joy) There comes a time when you realise there is a light of love within you if...
  July 30th, 2020 00:10
• SMOKEY *18* ADJUDICATOR ~ FIDOS DEPUTY CAT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) As i commented to Orchidee two days ago having realised who actually...
  July 29th, 2020 12:08
• String (M.E.M.) Oh i read into this that thing which so many have injected into their...
  July 29th, 2020 12:02
• English Weather (Aa Harvey) Aye, England becoming greater Manchester... famous for it\'s rain
  July 29th, 2020 06:40
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) I was tempted to congratulate you on such a wonderful testament to the...
  July 29th, 2020 04:04
• HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards) Thats arse about face. Madam, may i top your bottom up? Gladys, he...
  July 29th, 2020 02:38
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) Always struck me as a weird game.... when the flag isn\'t flying it\'s ok...
  July 29th, 2020 02:35
• LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards) Sunlight breaks over the cottage upon driftwood shore...... That...
  July 28th, 2020 13:48
• Delightful Desire (Orchidee) another fido composition. I can tell because of the paws (pause) between...
  July 28th, 2020 05:06
• Beyond Giving (Neville) No, you cannot gift life\'s experiences and the school of hard knocks....
  July 28th, 2020 04:37
• In Error. (Fay Slimm.) Great insight into the predicament of one of the lesser known, lesser...
  July 28th, 2020 04:24
• High Priest Petitioning (Orchidee) he knew the chances were slim he thought about it down at the gym but he...
  July 27th, 2020 15:57
• The Final Ending (M.E.M.) ooh the world\'s going to end this year. Just like it was supposed to end...
  July 27th, 2020 15:33
• Two Weeks in July (Neville) There is so much in here and plain to see it contains references which are...
  July 27th, 2020 08:44
• If Only. (Fay Slimm.) Oh but your words do all this upon entering my head. I asssure you birds...
  July 27th, 2020 05:27
• For You (Lutalican) A simple poem of love. Keep the words flowing under her eyes.
  July 27th, 2020 05:23
• Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60) I think it\'s a question of coming to terms with our stage of life....
  July 27th, 2020 05:11
• Greatful to all here... (Poetic Dan) That\'s speaking straight out of your soul without contrivance.
  July 26th, 2020 16:59
• Dewdrop (A Boy With Roses) I\'m not going to pretend i understand this piece other than i can see its...
  July 26th, 2020 16:55
• A Happier Place. (Goldfinch60) Always amazes me the amount of people who walk around with a permanent...
  July 26th, 2020 02:04
• Patrol. (Fay Slimm.) Oh that we had such disciplined dog owners hereabouts for the unattended...
  July 25th, 2020 12:55
• HE\'S NOT DUMB (Michael Edwards) Trouble is, you always get wind of what he\'s about to say. Another of...
  July 25th, 2020 12:49
• a hair technology (Lucifer very very very 1st) OOOOOH technology, a word from the middle ages. I never, never, never,...
  July 24th, 2020 13:34
• A bit of glue but don\'t lose you (Poetic Dan) Probably the most profound piece you have ever published on mps here Dan....
  July 24th, 2020 09:47
• A Moment in Nature. (Goldfinch60) I had a moment of, something i had never seen before, in my bathroom...
  July 24th, 2020 09:36
• WHEN BREEZES BLOW (Michael Edwards) Can you do another sculpture please entitled \'on the way home from...
  July 24th, 2020 09:33
• Awakened Side - Page Eight (Nafis Light) relationships have to be a two way thing ..... or they go away
  July 23rd, 2020 11:50