Comments on community poems by dusk arising at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by dusk arising

Bewildering. (Fay Slimm.) You portray this situation of inner grief so well here.I hope it was not...
July 6th, 2020 07:57
Presence Perceived (Orchidee) Well I guess psalm-body had to write this sooner or later.
July 6th, 2020 07:24
Art Where No Men Tread (Goldfinch60) Reflecting upon this, together with the comments so far and the picture...
July 6th, 2020 07:21
My Dad is My Hero (PoeticBiscuit) You are a lucky man to have such a fine example of fatherhood shown. A...
July 5th, 2020 15:26
White Violets (Neville) She drew breath the violets beckoned your heart fluttered memories were...
July 5th, 2020 15:22
Grow (Poetic Dan) I guess that\'s what they call \"feeling the vibes man\".
July 5th, 2020 06:55
Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) I don\'t know why but reading this i perceived you as a Lark. The bird....
July 5th, 2020 06:52
Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee) In several ways i wish i were able to stand and joyfully sing together as...
July 5th, 2020 06:46
Whose Round Is It? (Goldfinch60) ha ha ha Last of the summer wine comes to mind or should the be last of...
July 5th, 2020 06:43
Special Sheep (Orchidee) And not a mention of a sheepdog anywhere....... come by shep.
July 4th, 2020 02:49
Stoicism Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Well chosen words. ..and here i reproduce \"It would be hard to find a...
July 4th, 2020 02:06
Little fish in the sea (PoeticBiscuit) A quite lovely poem of encouragement. Deserving of a frame and hanging in...
July 4th, 2020 00:25
Mi Amor (Benevolentbluebabe) Indeed love conquers all and teaches us more and more about love...
July 4th, 2020 00:22
\"Free\" (Moozpace) A nice love poem it is too. But i cringed at the word \'belong\' though...
July 3rd, 2020 23:48
Poetry, My Friend. (PoeticBiscuit) Here here! How blessed we are to be gifted with our poetic trumpet.
July 3rd, 2020 23:44
Heartache (Benevolentbluebabe) Lies are so awful. They cheat you, abuse you and place you somewhere...
July 3rd, 2020 09:42
Absorbing. (Fay Slimm.) eeeh bah gum lass, if thee \'avvent \'it nail smack on\'t \'ed wi...
July 3rd, 2020 08:31
The Logic of Fools (Neville) I know where this is coming from of course. Not so long ago there were...
July 3rd, 2020 08:26
Leading Light (Orchidee) Erm... what is it you are thanking the \'lord\' for here?
July 3rd, 2020 08:20
untitled no.6 (Moyu Aoki) And had it shipped to timbuktu, now the hills and valleys look so much...
July 3rd, 2020 08:19
Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60) I am so with you in this. Much of my scrawlings are generated late at...
July 3rd, 2020 08:17
WHERE NO MEN TREAD (Michael Edwards) What? .. no slugs and creepy crawlies, no snot hanging from trees? I...
July 3rd, 2020 08:14
Sleepless Nights (SheWasTheSun) The sunrise is, in my personal estimation, the finest of gifts for it...
July 3rd, 2020 08:08
Missing (Arazimus) There is so much condensed into this piece. It is so well composed and a...
July 3rd, 2020 08:03
Grieving... Again (Edward Charles McDevitt) I have never lost someone i am really close to. I can empathise with the...
July 2nd, 2020 05:54
Unmistakable (Fay Slimm.) I think you voice a fear within the longing. So much easier to turn away...
July 2nd, 2020 05:41
But we Pray (AiR - Atman in Ravi) Whereas i detatch from words like lord and god i only do so to detatch...
July 2nd, 2020 05:37
Reconciled Reminder (Orchidee) Blind faith. Keep your eyes shut and believe in the divine fear placed in...
July 2nd, 2020 05:29
Being Bilingual. (Goldfinch60) ha ha yes i learned fluent bullshit too.
July 2nd, 2020 05:25
Your Country Say\'s it Needs You (Neville) We shall be saying this till we fade away and the glory of war will...
July 2nd, 2020 05:15
Simplicity (Suresh) Simplicity wins.
July 2nd, 2020 05:08
You are the sacrifice 𓆗 (CaitEva) It seems the christian churches are demanding of one sacrifice. That you...
July 2nd, 2020 05:06
Cancer, Why? (PoeticBiscuit) Cancer will inspire you to write much more now that it has entered your...
July 2nd, 2020 04:50
Richness (Morgen Joy) I am totally at one with the comments made by jarcher54 here. Beautifully...
July 2nd, 2020 04:37
A Lot About Nothing At All (DesertWords) Thank you so much for this piece of pure entertainment. Written in a style...
July 2nd, 2020 04:34
Cuts (Peto) Here is hoping that you both find you are the right person to belong in...
July 1st, 2020 11:27
Ages Past (Benevolentbluebabe) On sunshiney days when the gameball is in your hands the past is nothing...
July 1st, 2020 09:43
Remembering a Poet (Laura🌻) Kevin was an extraordinary poet beyond doubt. He painted pictures with...
July 1st, 2020 08:04
Questions. (Fay Slimm.) Let there be no regrets as time takes us and plays the game of life upon...
July 1st, 2020 06:51
Aftertaste (Neville) Ah yes, Maltesers... I remember her well. Attracted by her curves...
July 1st, 2020 06:46
Waiting at the Tip. (Goldfinch60) I\'m dreading that trip.
July 1st, 2020 06:42
Breath (Suresh) Not to be sniffed at. This piece has a certain air about it.
July 1st, 2020 06:39
untitled no.5 (Moyu Aoki) I hope there were no slugs involved in those memories.
July 1st, 2020 06:38
untitled no.4 (Moyu Aoki) Icarus dickerous dock, the poet flew round the clock.
June 30th, 2020 06:23
Waiting for the Big E (Neville) Enlightenment is only so far as one can see. When i can smell as a dog...
June 30th, 2020 06:05
Is She a Bad Mother. (Goldfinch60) Nature will have it\'s way and for many of us that involves spreading the...
June 30th, 2020 06:03
ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR (Michael Edwards) I now have a full head of skin. But the choices of off the shelf polishes...
June 30th, 2020 06:00
God at creation (Arobot) Did your god carefully create the spider which injects its eggs into a...
June 29th, 2020 11:46
Dimittere (Roselyn) A relationship which is not comfortable can be traumatic and when it ends...
June 29th, 2020 11:39
Mascara Daze (Neville) to hang permanently in the halls of memory where the light of passing...
June 29th, 2020 07:37
untitled no.3 (Moyu Aoki) many look, few see.
June 29th, 2020 07:30
Twin-Flamed (Fay Slimm.) Like the night time silence in the desert, it is what it is and needs not...
June 29th, 2020 07:28
Just For Me. (Goldfinch60) Long may you walk with her hand in your heart.
June 29th, 2020 07:26
Pickup Truck (StrayBray Jaramillo)
June 28th, 2020 20:24
Self-Hatred (MissileOfUncertainty) You\'ve got it sussed!
June 28th, 2020 17:06
Young and Famous (Aa Harvey) Yeah..... I was there!!!!..... then someone else was famous instead and...
June 28th, 2020 13:31
One Day (Ady123) Sometimes life deals us such a smack that staying alive is almost...
June 28th, 2020 11:57
Flush (Neville) Beauty glows! From behind a tissue of year beaten experiences a rejoicing...
June 28th, 2020 05:03
Raft (Brimelow) Having read you 2nd poem on MPS and thoroughly enjoyed it i delved...
June 28th, 2020 04:32
Bee (Brimelow) The liveliness of this piece is enthralling. There is joy of love and life...
June 28th, 2020 04:28
Would I (Fay Slimm.) Long may our reward of fine memories enrich or later years. How powerful...
June 28th, 2020 04:21
...and then it rained (Andrew Charles Forrest) Rain.The bringer of hope \"I hope this bloody rainfall stops soon\".... ...
June 28th, 2020 04:13
Memento Mori (MojoFreewrite) I can\'t tell you how much i like this piece. Especially today after...
June 28th, 2020 04:07
Acrostic for Helena. (Goldfinch60) There ARE fairy tales brought to us upon feathered dreams. The reality of...
June 28th, 2020 03:59
untitled no.2 (Moyu Aoki) and in the trees my tomorrows slept.
June 28th, 2020 03:54
As born..... (Suresh) Another man made myth for which there is no proof only belief induced by...
June 28th, 2020 03:27
The Value of Tears (Neville) Oh I\'m sick with jealousy! I\'m sat shivvering with heat stroke in a shed...
June 27th, 2020 10:48
Untitled - XXVII (Suresh) Fills me with awe to think of myself as one of those written about in such...
June 27th, 2020 05:01
In Answer To Your Question #9 (Andrew Charles Forrest) I am with you all the way in this. I really like you choice of plainspeak...
June 27th, 2020 04:58
Made-Over. (Fay Slimm.) I saw your new pic for he first time ths morning. It is a well known...
June 27th, 2020 04:54
untitled no.1 (Moyu Aoki) Have the op. and fire them too!
June 27th, 2020 04:45
Practical People (Orchidee) There must be an awful lot of people who died waiting for the lord who...
June 27th, 2020 04:44
Day Wonder. (Goldfinch60) There\'s no other way to greet each new day be they warm days or...
June 27th, 2020 04:42
YET SLEEP ALONE (Michael Edwards) He he he your ruminating belly rumbles beneath the duvet. Have those...
June 27th, 2020 03:03
Death (Jeffrey Roy) Oh so true and who would be foolish enough to argue with you. I think...
June 26th, 2020 14:06
Still Time (Neville) OK I\'m game, lets build a still. I\'m not doing anything for a few days...
June 26th, 2020 14:02
Beauty Within. (Goldfinch60) She looked into my eyes saying \'Now i know you are beautiful through and...
June 26th, 2020 13:33
Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.) Such wishes expressed in words on screen or paper are desires of the heart...
June 26th, 2020 13:30
O in my flow (Poetic Dan) Keep those \'O\'zone levels healthy.
June 26th, 2020 13:23
Strong To Save (Orchidee) I hope he has a better delivery service than we are getting from royal...
June 26th, 2020 09:32
Where Music Takes Me (Goldfinch60) Some music has the ability to light the paths to places we have forgotten...
June 26th, 2020 09:30
Tabitha Tootle (Neville) aha dear young Tabitha Tootle whack, the stalwart from Bootle. No fear...
June 26th, 2020 09:28
Taking in Water (Neville) Well i\'ll be a drowning weevil in a ships biscuit if i didn\'t enjoy this...
June 26th, 2020 09:25
ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards) Today i wandered with your words and journeyed along the tracks lit...
June 26th, 2020 09:21
In The Depths Of My Haze (Roselyn) Such an awakening. Striking at the myths we are given to believe as...
June 26th, 2020 09:17
Selflessness (Laura🌻) I really am such a big fan of the power of short pieces. Today you have...
June 26th, 2020 09:13
Authentic. (Fay Slimm.) Fine words upon which the hunger of a romantics heart may taste an...
June 26th, 2020 07:44
Sixty Nine Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) What it is to grow into old age eh? But compensation rests in knowing...
June 22nd, 2020 00:24
Poem, My Job (AwHec8) Glory be to the wealth of the lord and all who follow the path to heaven...
June 21st, 2020 11:09
Do You Tread the New Path? (Goldfinch60) I hope you are away enjoying a change of scenery. Yes, we should take...
June 21st, 2020 04:38
IT\'S (Michael Edwards) Naughty naughty.... hope u have your waders on... watch out for the frogs...
June 20th, 2020 01:45
Covid-19 the monster within (Mimi74) We know where this came from. It came from a laboratory in wuhan china...
June 19th, 2020 11:57
Wonder. (Fay Slimm.) And what is it that we each perceive? Well to each one of us a different...
June 19th, 2020 11:47
Riding The Waves (Orchidee) All those who go down to the waves in ships ..... said the vicar...... ...
June 19th, 2020 11:40
Another 575 (Michael Edwards) Hmm for me arithmetic and poetry should be kept a long way away from each...
June 19th, 2020 11:36
Poem, America’s Shame! (AwHec8) Awww America please don\'t get rid of him, he\'s the funniest man on...
June 19th, 2020 11:30
No, There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60) I remember it well. And every rogue trader that ever was was up and about...
June 19th, 2020 11:25
Poem, My Inspiration (AwHec8) LOL yes of course, there wasn\'t any such thing as \'good\' until some...
June 18th, 2020 00:41
Your life matters (A passing lyric) You\'d have to be mentally unwell to say anything else surely? What\'s...
June 17th, 2020 22:22
Your life matters (A passing lyric) You\'d have to be mentally unwell to say anything else surely? What\'s...
June 17th, 2020 22:11

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