Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Coded Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
decode this:-
July 14th, 2020 01:36 - A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards)
LOL if your piece were placed before him i doubt he could make sense of...
July 14th, 2020 01:33 - CONFUCIUS SAYS: (Michael Edwards)
Well that\'s a load off my mind.
July 13th, 2020 12:25 - The Chosen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Chosen?.. maybe... Cursed... probably, for i could not lay my pen...
July 13th, 2020 05:55 - Ego\'s Down (Neville)
Well, written into the constitution is the defence that a tyrant buffoon...
July 13th, 2020 05:29 - IN ETERNITY\'S FACE : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos)
Beautiful words and I wish I could wholeheartedly agree but the greed of...
July 13th, 2020 05:23 - Providence Praise (Orchidee)
If i translate your praise here to praise of the god i describe in my post...
July 13th, 2020 05:17 - See Success. (Fay Slimm.)
What finer calling could there be than to assist nature. The natural...
July 13th, 2020 05:12 - Got That. (Goldfinch60)
I notice young Joan (M.E.) has picked up her camera today.
You must...
July 13th, 2020 05:01 - WE FALL : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos)
Indeed, we are the immeasurable soul of the creation. God itself.
July 11th, 2020 15:46 - It\'s Your Road. (Goldfinch60)
Comfortably we walk among friends and feel the strength of their being....
July 11th, 2020 02:32 - Autism. (A passing lyric)
I missed this one.
Your words strike home to me for their truth, depth...
July 10th, 2020 09:44 - Untitled no.1 (Benevolentbluebabe)
Enduring a similar existence here. One wonders if we are returning to the...
July 10th, 2020 08:31 - Falling Through Wonderland (PoeticBiscuit)
Excellent!
July 10th, 2020 05:43 - Light Limitless (Orchidee)
Tut @ you wishing harm to others in your last verse and use of the word...
July 10th, 2020 05:42 - Poet\'s Day. (Goldfinch60)
Being self employed soon knocks that out of your system but it doesn\'t...
July 10th, 2020 05:37 - AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Have you seen those stains on goldfinch\'s t-shirt?
These two liners of...
July 10th, 2020 05:35 - Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.)
Wickedness in poetic heat.
July 10th, 2020 05:21 - Human (JoshLohr)
Life\'s quagmire of reason shows through your words here. Pulled this way...
July 8th, 2020 09:45 - Treasured. (Fay Slimm.)
Even more treasured now i could easily believe.
I must say your words...
July 8th, 2020 09:41 - Ripples (PoeticBiscuit)
Makes a lot of sense to me.
July 8th, 2020 09:34 - All I Need (Orchidee)
A fine piece today Orchidee. the feeling i get when i am in a place which...
July 8th, 2020 09:26 - Not a Bad House. (Goldfinch60)
For about 18 months i had an apartment on the first floor of the stately...
July 8th, 2020 09:21 - AGEING COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Two lines which encapsulate my appearance.
You pic today has an uncanny...
July 8th, 2020 09:12 - Our Little Wing... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
These are words to inherit and gaze upon as ones own children grow into...
July 7th, 2020 17:48 - Poor Git (Neville)
The sadness of life\'s endings. Life must be a physical symphony for all...
July 7th, 2020 12:46 - What we lost (JoshLohr)
As was wisely said \"Each action has an equal and opposite reaction\"....
July 7th, 2020 12:42 - Untenable. (Fay Slimm.)
What you have written is fine and true. Love and lust are associated very...
July 7th, 2020 12:34 - Eye with no sight (Poetic Dan)
You have every right to your opinions and to voice them. \"For you are a...
July 7th, 2020 12:26 - Ennio Morricone. (Goldfinch60)
Nicely written Goldfinch. A master of his art.
July 7th, 2020 12:19 - Just Thinking (PoeticBiscuit)
Where do we go though? There\'s got to be more. But i am biased being a...
July 7th, 2020 12:17 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Don\'t waste any time starving yourself of apples... that doctor is not...
July 7th, 2020 12:14 - Paul Harvey – A letter from God (Accidental Poet)
According to the bible which says he created man in his own image. He\'d...
July 6th, 2020 09:47 - Mid Summer Meadow (Neville)
Absolutely delightful. I write with a broad grin upon my face and a...
July 6th, 2020 08:02 - Bewildering. (Fay Slimm.)
You portray this situation of inner grief so well here.I hope it was not...
July 6th, 2020 07:57 - Presence Perceived (Orchidee)
Well I guess psalm-body had to write this sooner or later.
July 6th, 2020 07:24 - Art Where No Men Tread (Goldfinch60)
Reflecting upon this, together with the comments so far and the picture...
July 6th, 2020 07:21 - My Dad is My Hero (PoeticBiscuit)
You are a lucky man to have such a fine example of fatherhood shown. A...
July 5th, 2020 15:26 - White Violets (Neville)
She drew breath
the violets beckoned
your heart fluttered
memories were...
July 5th, 2020 15:22 - Wisdom of the Stars (Accidental Poet)
A certain stillness descends upon us on a starlit night I agree. And here...
July 5th, 2020 15:18 - Grow (Poetic Dan)
I guess that\'s what they call \"feeling the vibes man\".
July 5th, 2020 06:55 - Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t know why but reading this i perceived you as a Lark. The bird....
July 5th, 2020 06:52 - Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee)
In several ways i wish i were able to stand and joyfully sing together as...
July 5th, 2020 06:46 - Whose Round Is It? (Goldfinch60)
ha ha ha Last of the summer wine comes to mind or should the be last of...
July 5th, 2020 06:43 - Special Sheep (Orchidee)
And not a mention of a sheepdog anywhere....... come by shep.
July 4th, 2020 02:49 - Stoicism Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Well chosen words.
..and here i reproduce \"It would be hard to find a...
July 4th, 2020 02:06 - Little fish in the sea (PoeticBiscuit)
A quite lovely poem of encouragement. Deserving of a frame and hanging in...
July 4th, 2020 00:25 - Mi Amor (Benevolentbluebabe)
Indeed love conquers all and teaches us more and more about love...
July 4th, 2020 00:22 - \"Free\" (Moozpace)
A nice love poem it is too. But i cringed at the word \'belong\' though...
July 3rd, 2020 23:48 - Poetry, My Friend. (PoeticBiscuit)
Here here! How blessed we are to be gifted with our poetic trumpet.
July 3rd, 2020 23:44 - Heartache (Benevolentbluebabe)
Lies are so awful. They cheat you, abuse you and place you somewhere...
July 3rd, 2020 09:42 - Hypnotized (Accidental Poet)
This is quite lovely. Inside most of us are similar wonders.
Yes i\'m...
July 3rd, 2020 08:35 - Absorbing. (Fay Slimm.)
eeeh bah gum lass, if thee \'avvent \'it nail smack on\'t \'ed wi...
July 3rd, 2020 08:31 - The Logic of Fools (Neville)
I know where this is coming from of course. Not so long ago there were...
July 3rd, 2020 08:26 - Leading Light (Orchidee)
Erm... what is it you are thanking the \'lord\' for here?
July 3rd, 2020 08:20 - untitled no.6 (Moyu Aoki)
And had it shipped to timbuktu, now the hills and valleys look so much...
July 3rd, 2020 08:19 - Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60)
I am so with you in this. Much of my scrawlings are generated late at...
July 3rd, 2020 08:17 - WHERE NO MEN TREAD (Michael Edwards)
What? .. no slugs and creepy crawlies, no snot hanging from trees?
I...
July 3rd, 2020 08:14 - Sleepless Nights (SheWasTheSun)
The sunrise is, in my personal estimation, the finest of gifts for it...
July 3rd, 2020 08:08 - Missing (Arazimus)
There is so much condensed into this piece. It is so well composed and a...
July 3rd, 2020 08:03 - Grieving... Again (Edward Charles McDevitt)
I have never lost someone i am really close to. I can empathise with the...
July 2nd, 2020 05:54 - Unmistakable (Fay Slimm.)
I think you voice a fear within the longing. So much easier to turn away...
July 2nd, 2020 05:41 - But we Pray (Airatmaninravi)
Whereas i detatch from words like lord and god i only do so to detatch...
July 2nd, 2020 05:37 - Reconciled Reminder (Orchidee)
Blind faith. Keep your eyes shut and believe in the divine fear placed in...
July 2nd, 2020 05:29 - Being Bilingual. (Goldfinch60)
ha ha yes i learned fluent bullshit too.
July 2nd, 2020 05:25 - Your Country Say\'s it Needs You (Neville)
We shall be saying this till we fade away and the glory of war will...
July 2nd, 2020 05:15 - Simplicity (Suresh)
Simplicity wins.
July 2nd, 2020 05:08 - You are the sacrifice 𓆗 (CaitEva)
It seems the christian churches are demanding of one sacrifice. That you...
July 2nd, 2020 05:06 - REST IN PEACE KEVIN BROWNE (Accidental Poet)
Whatever your faith or belief i\'m sure you\'d agree that a person with...
July 2nd, 2020 04:58 - Cancer, Why? (PoeticBiscuit)
Cancer will inspire you to write much more now that it has entered your...
July 2nd, 2020 04:50 - Richness (Morgen Joy)
I am totally at one with the comments made by jarcher54 here. Beautifully...
July 2nd, 2020 04:37 - A Lot About Nothing At All (DesertWords)
Thank you so much for this piece of pure entertainment. Written in a style...
July 2nd, 2020 04:34 - Cuts (Peto)
Here is hoping that you both find you are the right person to belong in...
July 1st, 2020 11:27 - Ages Past (Benevolentbluebabe)
On sunshiney days when the gameball is in your hands the past is nothing...
July 1st, 2020 09:43 - Remembering a Poet (Laura🌻)
Kevin was an extraordinary poet beyond doubt. He painted pictures with...
July 1st, 2020 08:04 - Questions. (Fay Slimm.)
Let there be no regrets as time takes us and plays the game of life upon...
July 1st, 2020 06:51 - Aftertaste (Neville)
Ah yes, Maltesers... I remember her well. Attracted by her curves...
July 1st, 2020 06:46 - Waiting at the Tip. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m dreading that trip.
July 1st, 2020 06:42 - Breath (Suresh)
Not to be sniffed at. This piece has a certain air about it.
July 1st, 2020 06:39 - untitled no.5 (Moyu Aoki)
I hope there were no slugs involved in those memories.
July 1st, 2020 06:38 - untitled no.4 (Moyu Aoki)
Icarus dickerous dock, the poet flew round the clock.
June 30th, 2020 06:23 - Waiting for the Big E (Neville)
Enlightenment is only so far as one can see.
When i can smell as a dog...
June 30th, 2020 06:05 - Is She a Bad Mother. (Goldfinch60)
Nature will have it\'s way and for many of us that involves spreading the...
June 30th, 2020 06:03 - ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR (Michael Edwards)
I now have a full head of skin. But the choices of off the shelf polishes...
June 30th, 2020 06:00 - God at creation (Arobot)
Did your god carefully create the spider which injects its eggs into a...
June 29th, 2020 11:46 - Dimittere (Roselyn)
A relationship which is not comfortable can be traumatic and when it ends...
June 29th, 2020 11:39 - Mascara Daze (Neville)
to hang permanently in the halls of memory where the light of passing...
June 29th, 2020 07:37 - untitled no.3 (Moyu Aoki)
many look, few see.
June 29th, 2020 07:30 - Twin-Flamed (Fay Slimm.)
Like the night time silence in the desert, it is what it is and needs not...
June 29th, 2020 07:28 - Just For Me. (Goldfinch60)
Long may you walk with her hand in your heart.
June 29th, 2020 07:26 - Pickup Truck (StrayBray Jaramillo)
June 28th, 2020 20:24 - Self-Hatred (MissileOfUncertainty)
You\'ve got it sussed!
June 28th, 2020 17:06 - Young and Famous (Aa Harvey)
Yeah..... I was there!!!!..... then someone else was famous instead and...
June 28th, 2020 13:31 - One Day (Ady123)
Sometimes life deals us such a smack that staying alive is almost...
June 28th, 2020 11:57 - Flush (Neville)
Beauty glows! From behind a tissue of year beaten experiences a rejoicing...
June 28th, 2020 05:03 - Raft (Brimelow)
Having read you 2nd poem on MPS and thoroughly enjoyed it i delved...
June 28th, 2020 04:32 - Bee (Brimelow)
The liveliness of this piece is enthralling. There is joy of love and life...
June 28th, 2020 04:28 - Would I (Fay Slimm.)
Long may our reward of fine memories enrich or later years. How powerful...
June 28th, 2020 04:21 - ...and then it rained (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Rain.The bringer of hope \"I hope this bloody rainfall stops soon\".... ...
June 28th, 2020 04:13 - Memento Mori (MojoFreewrite)
I can\'t tell you how much i like this piece. Especially today after...
June 28th, 2020 04:07
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