Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Waiting at the Tip. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m dreading that trip.
July 1st, 2020 06:42 - Breath (Suresh)
Not to be sniffed at. This piece has a certain air about it.
July 1st, 2020 06:39 - untitled no.5 (Moyu Aoki)
I hope there were no slugs involved in those memories.
July 1st, 2020 06:38 - untitled no.4 (Moyu Aoki)
Icarus dickerous dock, the poet flew round the clock.
June 30th, 2020 06:23 - Waiting for the Big E (Neville)
Enlightenment is only so far as one can see.
When i can smell as a dog...
June 30th, 2020 06:05 - Is She a Bad Mother. (Goldfinch60)
Nature will have it\'s way and for many of us that involves spreading the...
June 30th, 2020 06:03 - ANTI SOCIAL HAIR BEHAVIOUR (Michael Edwards)
I now have a full head of skin. But the choices of off the shelf polishes...
June 30th, 2020 06:00 - God at creation (Arobot)
Did your god carefully create the spider which injects its eggs into a...
June 29th, 2020 11:46 - Dimittere (Roselyn)
A relationship which is not comfortable can be traumatic and when it ends...
June 29th, 2020 11:39 - Mascara Daze (Neville)
to hang permanently in the halls of memory where the light of passing...
June 29th, 2020 07:37 - untitled no.3 (Moyu Aoki)
many look, few see.
June 29th, 2020 07:30 - Twin-Flamed (Fay Slimm.)
Like the night time silence in the desert, it is what it is and needs not...
June 29th, 2020 07:28 - Just For Me. (Goldfinch60)
Long may you walk with her hand in your heart.
June 29th, 2020 07:26 - Pickup Truck (StrayBray Jaramillo)
June 28th, 2020 20:24 - Self-Hatred (MissileOfUncertainty)
You\'ve got it sussed!
June 28th, 2020 17:06 - Young and Famous (Aa Harvey)
Yeah..... I was there!!!!..... then someone else was famous instead and...
June 28th, 2020 13:31 - One Day (Ady123)
Sometimes life deals us such a smack that staying alive is almost...
June 28th, 2020 11:57 - Flush (Neville)
Beauty glows! From behind a tissue of year beaten experiences a rejoicing...
June 28th, 2020 05:03 - Raft (Brimelow)
Having read you 2nd poem on MPS and thoroughly enjoyed it i delved...
June 28th, 2020 04:32 - Bee (Brimelow)
The liveliness of this piece is enthralling. There is joy of love and life...
June 28th, 2020 04:28 - Would I (Fay Slimm.)
Long may our reward of fine memories enrich or later years. How powerful...
June 28th, 2020 04:21 - ...and then it rained (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Rain.The bringer of hope \"I hope this bloody rainfall stops soon\".... ...
June 28th, 2020 04:13 - Memento Mori (MojoFreewrite)
I can\'t tell you how much i like this piece. Especially today after...
June 28th, 2020 04:07 - Acrostic for Helena. (Goldfinch60)
There ARE fairy tales brought to us upon feathered dreams. The reality of...
June 28th, 2020 03:59 - untitled no.2 (Moyu Aoki)
and in the trees my tomorrows slept.
June 28th, 2020 03:54 - As born..... (Suresh)
Another man made myth for which there is no proof only belief induced by...
June 28th, 2020 03:27 - The Value of Tears (Neville)
Oh I\'m sick with jealousy! I\'m sat shivvering with heat stroke in a shed...
June 27th, 2020 10:48 - Untitled - XXVII (Suresh)
Fills me with awe to think of myself as one of those written about in such...
June 27th, 2020 05:01 - In Answer To Your Question #9 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I am with you all the way in this. I really like you choice of plainspeak...
June 27th, 2020 04:58 - Made-Over. (Fay Slimm.)
I saw your new pic for he first time ths morning. It is a well known...
June 27th, 2020 04:54 - untitled no.1 (Moyu Aoki)
Have the op. and fire them too!
June 27th, 2020 04:45 - Practical People (Orchidee)
There must be an awful lot of people who died waiting for the lord who...
June 27th, 2020 04:44 - Day Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s no other way
to greet each new day
be they warm days or...
June 27th, 2020 04:42 - YET SLEEP ALONE (Michael Edwards)
He he he your ruminating belly rumbles beneath the duvet. Have those...
June 27th, 2020 03:03 - Death (Jeffrey Roy)
Oh so true and who would be foolish enough to argue with you.
I think...
June 26th, 2020 14:06 - Still Time (Neville)
OK I\'m game, lets build a still. I\'m not doing anything for a few days...
June 26th, 2020 14:02 - Beauty Within. (Goldfinch60)
She looked into my eyes saying \'Now i know you are beautiful through and...
June 26th, 2020 13:33 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Such wishes expressed in words on screen or paper are desires of the heart...
June 26th, 2020 13:30 - O in my flow (Poetic Dan)
Keep those \'O\'zone levels healthy.
June 26th, 2020 13:23 - Strong To Save (Orchidee)
I hope he has a better delivery service than we are getting from royal...
June 26th, 2020 09:32 - Where Music Takes Me (Goldfinch60)
Some music has the ability to light the paths to places we have forgotten...
June 26th, 2020 09:30 - Tabitha Tootle (Neville)
aha dear young Tabitha Tootle whack, the stalwart from Bootle.
No fear...
June 26th, 2020 09:28 - Taking in Water (Neville)
Well i\'ll be a drowning weevil in a ships biscuit if i didn\'t enjoy this...
June 26th, 2020 09:25 - ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards)
Today i wandered with your words and journeyed along the tracks lit...
June 26th, 2020 09:21 - In The Depths Of My Haze (Roselyn)
Such an awakening. Striking at the myths we are given to believe as...
June 26th, 2020 09:17 - Selflessness (LaurađŸŒ»)
I really am such a big fan of the power of short pieces. Today you have...
June 26th, 2020 09:13 - Authentic. (Fay Slimm.)
Fine words upon which the hunger of a romantics heart may taste an...
June 26th, 2020 07:44 - Sixty Nine Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
What it is to grow into old age eh? But compensation rests in knowing...
June 22nd, 2020 00:24 - Poem, My Job (AwHec8)
Glory be to the wealth of the lord and all who follow the path to heaven...
June 21st, 2020 11:09 - Do You Tread the New Path? (Goldfinch60)
I hope you are away enjoying a change of scenery.
Yes, we should take...
June 21st, 2020 04:38 - IT\'S (Michael Edwards)
Naughty naughty.... hope u have your waders on... watch out for the frogs...
June 20th, 2020 01:45 - Covid-19 the monster within (Mimi74)
We know where this came from. It came from a laboratory in wuhan china...
June 19th, 2020 11:57 - Wonder. (Fay Slimm.)
And what is it that we each perceive? Well to each one of us a different...
June 19th, 2020 11:47 - Riding The Waves (Orchidee)
All those who go down to the waves in ships ..... said the vicar...... ...
June 19th, 2020 11:40 - Another 575 (Michael Edwards)
Hmm for me arithmetic and poetry should be kept a long way away from each...
June 19th, 2020 11:36 - Poem, America’s Shame! (AwHec8)
Awww America please don\'t get rid of him, he\'s the funniest man on...
June 19th, 2020 11:30 - No, There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
I remember it well. And every rogue trader that ever was was up and about...
June 19th, 2020 11:25 - Poem, My Inspiration (AwHec8)
LOL yes of course, there wasn\'t any such thing as \'good\' until some...
June 18th, 2020 00:41 - Your life matters (A passing lyric)
You\'d have to be mentally unwell to say anything else surely?
What\'s...
June 17th, 2020 22:22 - Your life matters (A passing lyric)
You\'d have to be mentally unwell to say anything else surely?
What\'s...
June 17th, 2020 22:11 - Legacy (Suresh)
Cute! But a legacy only if your death gets noticed. Depends where u fit...
June 17th, 2020 22:05 - Bankers collapse (Gavin)
When i read your title \'bankers collapse\' i wondered if it was a new...
June 17th, 2020 05:53 - Bring it on (Poetic Dan)
The principles passed to us in your vid today apply to many...
June 17th, 2020 03:42 - Delightful Dwelling (Orchidee)
So why don\'t westerners follow the jewish faith? The actual faith of the...
June 17th, 2020 02:54 - Poem, If Jesus is the standard bearer! (AwHec8)
Yep, what a standard bearer indeed. For whilst he was the standard bearer...
June 17th, 2020 02:52 - Nature\'s Glory for Me. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t you hear what those birds are saying to you in their song?...
June 17th, 2020 02:42 - Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.)
Is this a sly poke in the eye for those who churn out \'poetry\' in their...
June 17th, 2020 02:35 - DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards)
Such an atmospheric write sir! A reminder of what outlasts our human...
June 17th, 2020 02:24 - * A DIRTY MIND-PositionĂ—1 * (Flamingo)
Whats dirty about it. Using our bodies to do the pleasureable stuff bits...
June 16th, 2020 04:11 - Crossed Wires. (Fay Slimm.)
A short circuit to a power outtage. When sparks fly, and theres so much...
June 16th, 2020 04:08 - My Valentine. (Goldfinch60)
To contemplate the depth of love you shared for so long together which...
June 16th, 2020 01:14 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
Can\'t help but love bubbles can you. I have bought a bubble machine and...
June 16th, 2020 00:31 - Solace of Time. (Goldfinch60)
Does anybody really know what time it is if we throw away our clocks and...
June 16th, 2020 00:17 - State of Affairs (Gavin)
For a moment there i thought this was a piss take of the roman cathoilic...
June 14th, 2020 04:50 - Nature Nurturings (Orchidee)
He even got down and created the moss
i guess you could say that makes...
June 14th, 2020 04:47 - Such a Wonderful Day. (Goldfinch60)
What an amazing day to be whacking someone elses balls with a mallet!
I...
June 14th, 2020 04:38 - earlier last year... (Obstructempo)
An extremely well concealed meaning must be in there somewhere.... or is...
June 13th, 2020 04:51 - Rural Rambles (Orchidee)
Nice to read your appreciation of the beauty of our world as seen at first...
June 13th, 2020 03:56 - Human Wrath (Suresh)
Such negativity.
The planet is changing not dying. Maybe mankind is...
June 13th, 2020 03:54 - Hothouse Plant. (Goldfinch60)
Life is there to be lived for those who appreciate the beauty that is in...
June 13th, 2020 03:49 - A smiling embrace (Poetic Dan)
You are a lucky man to be mature enough to slow down and realise the...
June 13th, 2020 02:15 - Interaction (Suresh)
An evolution of diction in realisation.
June 13th, 2020 02:10 - Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s been so long since i goosed! lol
A lovely reminder of something i...
June 12th, 2020 05:15 - Old And New (Orchidee)
I wondered where the communion wine was going!
June 12th, 2020 04:22 - Dreamer In the Wind (MaddieJ)
A masterful write. Each line is poetry itself. Beguiling, you held me as I...
June 11th, 2020 23:13 - Lost (DesertWords)
Be mindful of where you tread for one day you just may happen upon such a...
June 11th, 2020 10:46 - * YOU THOUGHT WRONG * (Flamingo)
A dramatic write without doubt. At age sixteen a crisis lands all the...
June 11th, 2020 10:40 - Poem, Share my Life if You dare! (AwHec8)
But will she bring her baggage to assault you with? Will you find your...
June 11th, 2020 10:32 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
Hmmm always was a bit of a dilemma for me, these speechless...
June 11th, 2020 05:53 - Out Beyond the Ideas. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderous words Goldfinch. The Rumi piece you quote has been one of my...
June 11th, 2020 01:29 - Poem, God’s True Nature (AwHec8)
Yep, you can hear those lies being told in many a church to this day. If...
June 11th, 2020 01:25 - Never worth it (Peculiarly Lauren)
Telling a story of life\'s effect on us can be beneficial to those...
June 11th, 2020 01:20 - How do I....... (Suresh)
Ah but there\'s a fire within you. Just waiting for the right breeze to...
June 10th, 2020 17:51 - Destined. (Fay Slimm.)
We are left with questions and a deep longing to find meaningful...
June 10th, 2020 17:44 - Shown the Way. (Goldfinch60)
Like love. It comes and gets you when you\'re not looking..... and look...
June 10th, 2020 17:10 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh that bloody alarm clock!
Got to say this reminded me so much of my...
June 9th, 2020 09:31 - Star Spangled Soul. (Goldfinch60)
You lucky man having such a perfect love in your life. Unsurpassable !
June 9th, 2020 09:24 - Black lives matter (A passing lyric)
What\'s taken so long?
June 8th, 2020 23:55 - Climax (Neville)
A wonderful description of striking a match on a well worn matchbox\'s...
June 8th, 2020 15:19 - Song, The Rapture (AwHec8)
And what, so far, has jesus or god done for you?
Or on the other side of...
June 8th, 2020 13:12
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